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Topic Starter
jyu

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

hello, my dear.

[General]

02:31:238 (1) - is not needed Kiai i think it has the emphasis, so i added only a kiai burst

[Normal]

00:07:666 (2,3) - on 1 grid down, 00:09:381 (2) - on 3 grid up and on 2 grid left, 00:09:809 (3) - on 3 grid up and on 3 grid left. done
00:18:381 (1,2,3) - on 2 grid up
01:27:809 (1,2,3,4) - its play better http://puu.sh/34yrr.jpg
01:39:809 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I advise to center .... 01:40:452 (2) - the end of the slider to raise a little like this http://puu.sh/34yAx.jpg .
01:41:523 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - align them so http://puu.sh/34yBd.jpg
01:44:523 (1,2,3,4) - align them so http://puu.sh/34yDZ.jpg (and 01:46:666 (4) - on 1 grid up, he is a little lower than the 3 )

[Hard]

01:27:381 (2,3) - spacing
01:40:666 (3) - finish slider here 01:40:913 and 01:41:095 (x) - add cirle
03:33:166 (1) - move here 03:33:809 (1) - finish here 03:36:381 ----- 03:33:166 (6) - add slider (start 03:33:166 - finish 03:33:381 ) 03:33:595 (1) - add circle
00:58:666 (1) - remove note. start here spinner. i'd like to keep it

[MAX]

00:58:666 (8) - start here spinner

I wish you luck. map and song is very good :)

bye my dear
No comment means fixed. Thank you :)
pw384
hi :>
from CLANNED MODDING QUEUE

[Normal]
-Setting-
okay
-Mapping-
* 01:08:952 (1) - This slider head doesn't stack with 01:06:809 (3) - . Consider it should be moved to x=291,y=250.

* 01:24:381 (1,3) - blanket them.

* 01:27:381 (2,1,2,3,4) - The pentagon is not good-looking. You can make a regular one.

* 02:33:809 (4) - This slider overlap 02:32:095 (2) - . Although it is not unrankable due to 02:32:952 (3) - ,I still recommend that you should separate them from each other in order to be readable for Normal player.

* 02:35:952 (2) - Consider moving to x=353,y=226

* 03:22:666 (1,3) - imo these two sliders are not good-looking too. At least it is better to let the red controling point cover the sliderpoint.

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[Hard]
-Setting-
okay.
-Mapping-
* 00:17:309 - consider adding a note.

* 00:36:381 (5) - The middle red point is not necessary. You can remove it.

* 00:47:095 (6) - delete the red point. It seems better to make parallel lines.

* 01:46:452 (3,4,5) - move them to x=320,y=216. It looks better.

* 02:17:309 (6,1) - move them to x=300,y=320 due to the stack.

* 02:24:488 (1) - Why not mapping this part?

* (not a mod) 03:12:381 (1,2,3) - the pattern is really good!

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[MAX]
-Setting-

-Mapping-
* 00:25:238 (3) - Check spacing plz.

* imo some sliders or streams doesn't have a good symmetry. Here are some patterns I don't like:
list
* 02:01:238 (3) -
* 02:58:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
* 03:00:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
You can choose some of them to fix.

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The map is good as a new mapper's. However, the mapset still need improvements! :)

Good luck! :3
Topic Starter
jyu

384059043 wrote:

hi :>
from CLANNED MODDING QUEUE

[Normal]
-Setting-
okay
-Mapping-
* 01:08:952 (1) - This slider head doesn't stack with 01:06:809 (3) - . Consider it should be moved to x=291,y=250.

* 01:24:381 (1,3) - blanket them.

* 01:27:381 (2,1,2,3,4) - The pentagon is not good-looking. You can make a regular one.

* 02:33:809 (4) - This slider overlap 02:32:095 (2) - . Although it is not unrankable due to 02:32:952 (3) - ,I still recommend that you should separate them from each other in order to be readable for Normal player.

* 02:35:952 (2) - Consider moving to x=353,y=226

* 03:22:666 (1,3) - imo these two sliders are not good-looking too. At least it is better to let the red controling point cover the sliderpoint. will consider

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[Hard]
-Setting-
okay.
-Mapping-
* 00:17:309 - consider adding a note.

* 00:36:381 (5) - The middle red point is not necessary. You can remove it.

* 00:47:095 (6) - delete the red point. It seems better to make parallel lines.

* 01:46:452 (3,4,5) - move them to x=320,y=216. It looks better.

* 02:17:309 (6,1) - move them to x=300,y=320 due to the stack.

* 02:24:488 (1) - Why not mapping this part?

* (not a mod) 03:12:381 (1,2,3) - the pattern is really good! thank you :>

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[MAX]
-Setting-

-Mapping-
* 00:25:238 (3) - Check spacing plz. intentional, to emphasis the loud noise at 00:25:238 -

* imo some sliders or streams doesn't have a good symmetry. Here are some patterns I don't like:
list
* 02:01:238 (3) - fixed this one, i think
* 02:58:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
* 03:00:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
You can choose some of them to fix.

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The map is good as a new mapper's. However, the mapset still need improvements! :)

Good luck! :3
No comment means fixed, thank you :)
Elva Anjani Uchiha
Aru why this is still not ranked.
WHY
Topic Starter
jyu

Elva Anjani Uchiha wrote:

Aru why this is still not ranked.
WHY
Tanyakan pada rumput yang bergoyang ~(•w•~)
gyuwife

Elva Anjani Uchiha wrote:

Aru why this is still not ranked.
WHY
well this
neonat
MAX

00:40:988 - add a note
00:51:166 - ^
00:58:666 (1) - shift this to start at 01:00:381 and end at 01:01:881 and map more from 00:58:666 to 01:00:166 - something like this:
01:42:916 - add a note
02:07:452 - ^
02:23:738 (7) - slider end at 02:23:952 and repeat till 02:24:166
03:30:595 - add a note
Hika
OMG DID YOU REALLY MAP THIS
automatic rank plz
Topic Starter
jyu

neonat wrote:

MAX

00:40:988 - add a note i want to keep the current pattern
00:51:166 - ^
00:58:666 (1) - shift this to start at 01:00:381 and end at 01:01:881 and map more from 00:58:666 to 01:00:166 - something like this:
01:42:916 - add a note nope, to follow the vocal
02:07:452 - ^ intentional
02:23:738 (7) - slider end at 02:23:952 and repeat till 02:24:166
03:30:595 - add a note
Thank you :)

Hika wrote:

OMG DID YOU REALLY MAP THIS
automatic rank plz
BATs i hope you see this OwO
Nicola12_old
So this is my first mod.

MAX

00:09:809 (1,2,3) - Why are those three notes differently spaced? It looks kinda wierd in my Opinion and doesn't make any sense.
00:25:238 (2,3) - I don't think the jump there is necessary.
01:13:880 (10,11) - ^
02:28:666 (1,2,3,4) - It feels kinda wrong to me that those don't have the same slider velocity as those at 02:32:952 (5,6,7,8) even if they're the same
02:34:666 (1) - It would be a nice effect if you made this slider be slower because it would fit the music - just a suggestion though.
Zweib
Hi~ from my M4M queue
Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Some patterns may differ from my understanding for "good-looking" but the way you arrange the objects and sound effect is really careful lol.
    Failed to give any valuable advice.orz
    Star~

Normal

  1. 00:37:238 (3) - move to(288,376)
  2. 01:08:095 (5) - this arc may need further fixing

Hard

  1. 01:42:809 (6,7,2,4) - positions of (6)(7)(2)(4) are not regular

Max

  1. 00:29:523 (1) - um...I think it's hard to form a good shape for long slider. How about this?
  2. 00:48:166 (1,2,3) - remove NC of (1) and add NC to (3)?


Good luck~
Topic Starter
jyu

Nicola12 wrote:

So this is my first mod.

MAX

00:09:809 (1,2,3) - Why are those three notes differently spaced? It looks kinda wierd in my Opinion and doesn't make any sense. idk, i use distance snap and this is what i got because i use 1/3 in this one
00:25:238 (2,3) - I don't think the jump there is necessary.
01:13:880 (10,11) - ^
02:28:666 (1,2,3,4) - It feels kinda wrong to me that those don't have the same slider velocity as those at 02:32:952 (5,6,7,8) even if they're the same i don't think so, the previous one follow the music, and the second one follow the vocal
02:34:666 (1) - It would be a nice effect if you made this slider be slower because it would fit the music - just a suggestion though.you are genius
Fixed the jump and follow your suggestion, thank you :)

edit : reply for Zweib's mod

Zweib wrote:

Hi~ from my M4M queue
Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Some patterns may differ from my understanding for "good-looking" but the way you arrange the objects and sound effect is really careful lol.
    Failed to give any valuable advice.orz
    Star~

Normal

  1. 00:37:238 (3) - move to(288,376)
  2. 01:08:095 (5) - this arc may need further fixing

Hard

  1. 01:42:809 (6,7,2,4) - positions of (6)(7)(2)(4) are not regular
intentional

Max

  1. 00:29:523 (1) - um...I think it's hard to form a good shape for long slider. How about this?
    intentional, the shape kinda resemble the Younique Unit logo, but i may reconsider about this
  2. 00:48:166 (1,2,3) - remove NC of (1) and add NC to (3)?


Good luck~
Everything else is fixed, thank you :)
@Zweib : if you haven't got my mod after June 13 you can kick my ass and alert me with PM or in-game. Thank you :>
Topic Starter
jyu
update with new AR

idk what i'm doing
Kanari



Helloo ~
You requested via forums ~


[Normal]
00:22:238 (3) - Blanket (1) ?
00:26:095 (3) - ^
00:31:666 (2) - Move one grid right.
00:32:523 (3) - Two grids up.
00:33:380 (4) - Three grids left.
00:43:238 (4) - Stack properly.
00:57:381 (2) - New combo.
01:44:523 (1) - Move to x:284 y:240 and move (2) to x:164 y:120. It should form a triangle.
02:23:523 (3) - Line with (1)
03:27:809 (3) - x:212 y:220
03:28:666 (4) - Move this about 2 grids down if you did the above.


[Hard]
- What happened to distance snap? You should still keep your spacing consistent,
- Approach rate -2 It's currently too high.
00:35:309 (2) - Place at x:300 y:220
00:35:523 (3) - Copy (1) and ctrl + J and ctrl + G and move to x:212 y:264
It should look something like this ~
00:38:095 (1,2,3) - Do the same as above.
01:24:381 (5) - New combo.
02:16:666 (5) - Blanket the slider end of (4)
02:17:523 (1,2,3) - What about something like this?
02:20:523 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:20:952 (6) - New Combo.


[MAX]
- Approach Rate -1
00:09:809 (1) - Remove this combo to match 00:08:095 (4) or place a new combo on 00:08:095 (4)
00:16:809 (1) - Place where 00:14:952 (5) was.
00:26:095 (1) - Remove new combo or place a new combo on 00:22:666 (5)
00:44:095 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:47:523 (9) - One grid left.
00:48:166 (10,11,1) - Place where (7) was placed.
02:07:452 - Add a circle.
02:12:380 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:35:523 (1) - ^
03:24:381 (1) - ^


Good luck with your map ~
Topic Starter
jyu

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:




Helloo ~
You requested via forums ~


[Normal]
00:22:238 (3) - Blanket (1) ?
00:26:095 (3) - ^
00:31:666 (2) - Move one grid right.
00:32:523 (3) - Two grids up.
00:33:380 (4) - Three grids left.
00:43:238 (4) - Stack properly. i think i already did
00:57:381 (2) - New combo.
01:44:523 (1) - Move to x:284 y:240 and move (2) to x:164 y:120. It should form a triangle.
02:23:523 (3) - Line with (1) nope, i don't want the formations to be too linear
03:27:809 (3) - x:212 y:220
03:28:666 (4) - Move this about 2 grids down if you did the above.


[Hard]
- What happened to distance snap? You should still keep your spacing consistent,
- Approach rate -2 It's currently too high. the rhythm itself isn't really hard, the position also, so i prefer higher AR, since less than AR 7 make it hard to read because the circles appears slowly
00:35:309 (2) - Place at x:300 y:220 intentional jump
00:35:523 (3) - Copy (1) and ctrl + J and ctrl + G and move to x:212 y:264
It should look something like this ~
00:38:095 (1,2,3) - Do the same as above. i will reconsider, but nice suggestion :3
01:24:381 (5) - New combo.
02:16:666 (5) - Blanket the slider end of (4)
02:17:523 (1,2,3) - What about something like this?
02:20:523 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:20:952 (6) - New Combo.


[MAX]
- Approach Rate -1 will consider, since AR 8 make it no fun
00:09:809 (1) - Remove this combo to match 00:08:095 (4) or place a new combo on 00:08:095 (4) this one is intentional, because it change to following the electronic music, i think
00:16:809 (1) - Place where 00:14:952 (5) was.
00:26:095 (1) - Remove new combo or place a new combo on 00:22:666 (5)
00:44:095 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:47:523 (9) - One grid left.
00:48:166 (10,11,1) - Place where (7) was placed.
02:07:452 - Add a circle.
02:12:380 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:35:523 (1) - ^ no, because the slider velocity change
03:24:381 (1) - ^


Good luck with your map ~
Everything else is fixed. Thank you :)
update
HabiHolic
From My queue~

[Normal]

00:08:952 (1) - Remove Finish
00:10:666 (1) - ^
00:12:381 (1) - ^
00:20:952 (1) - Finish
00:24:381 (1) - Clap
01:15:809 (1) - Remove Nc
02:32:095 (2,3) - Hmm Try This?



02:36:381 (3) - Ctrl + G?

[Hard]
00:08:952 (5) - NC?
01:39:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - nononono!! Photo Check



Ok
No Pick Good Map~
For Ranked go go~!
Topic Starter
jyu

HabiHolic wrote:

From My queue~

[Normal]

00:08:952 (1) - Remove Finish ok
00:10:666 (1) - ^ ok
00:12:381 (1) - ^ ok
00:20:952 (1) - Finish ok
00:24:381 (1) - Clap no, doesn't fit
01:15:809 (1) - Remove Nc no, it's downbeat
02:32:095 (2,3) - Hmm Try This? i don't want to make it too linear



02:36:381 (3) - Ctrl + G? ok

[Hard]
00:08:952 (5) - NC? ok
01:39:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - nononono!! Photo Check fix with my own style, the distance is quite far with that



Ok
No Pick Good Map~
For Ranked go go~!
Thank you :)

updated
sheela
Hi! From my queue~

[Normal]

00:12:381 (1) - In the opposite way

03:02:095 (5) - Opposite way. If so, move 03:03:595 (1,2,3,4) on the right

[Hard]

00:50:095 (3) - Line with 00:48:381 (1)

[MAX]

00:10:238 (2) - Distance

01:28:238 (1) - Stack with 01:26:952 (4)

Good Luck and Star!
Bites
MAX




  • 00:12:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be distance snapped properly
    00:13:238 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
    00:17:523 (1) - feels like too many repeats, not sure about this SV change
    00:21:809 (4) - maybe ctrl g to reverse this slider?
    00:24:166 (4,1) - these circles might be confusing, since you've stacked streams before - try to keep consistency with your patterns
    00:29:523 (1) - really don't like this SV change, also the slider shape is kind of ugly too - maybe you can do something more symmetrical?
    00:34:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - long section of sliders, but maybe there's something more unique you could do here?
    00:45:809 (4,5) - symmetry with 00:44:952 (1,2,3) - maybe?
    00:49:666 (3,4,5) - again, stacking 1/2 notes when JUST BEFORE you had stacked 1/4. for lower level players this could be very confusing, try not to do it
    00:56:523 (3,4,5) - ditto
    01:17:095 (4,5) - more distance spacing issues, move these notes a bit further away
    01:20:952 (1) - why the weird timing on this slider, there's no beat on the repeat?
    01:34:559 (2,3) - unstack these circles
    01:43:023 (4) - ditto
    01:44:738 (4) - ditto
    02:14:952 (2,3) - spacing issue
    02:17:523 (1,2) - please time these sliders differently, the repeat does not land on a beat
    03:03:595 (10,11,12) - perhaps center these
    03:12:381 (1,3) - yet again weird slider repeat times!
    03:28:881 (13,14,15) - this shape looks a bit ugly, use distance space to fix it (http://puu.sh/3nep7.jpg)
    00:08:095 (1) - NC
    00:11:523 (4) - ^
    00:11:523 (4) - ^
    00:14:952 (5) - ^
    00:45:809 (4) - ^
    00:46:666 (7) - ^
    00:49:666 (3) - ^
    00:53:523 (4) - ^
    00:56:523 (3) - ^
    01:25:238 (3) - ^
    01:27:595 (5) - ^
    01:28:238 (1) - no NC
    02:02:738 (5) - NC
    02:03:166 (8) - ^
    02:06:381 (6) - ^
    02:07:238 (11) - ^
    02:07:666 (1) - no NC
    02:08:845 (6) - NC
    02:09:166 (8) - ^
    02:09:595 (11) - ^
    02:13:238 (4) - ^
    02:15:380 (3) - ^
    02:22:238 (3) - ^
    02:29:523 (3) - ^
    02:32:952 (5) - ^
    03:17:095 (3) - ^
    03:20:952 (4) - ^
    03:24:381 (4) - ^
    03:27:595 (4) - ^
    03:27:595 (4,7,10) - all NC
    03:31:238 (6) - NC
Topic Starter
jyu

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

[Normal]

00:12:381 (1) - In the opposite way it ruin the symmetry, so no

03:02:095 (5) - Opposite way. If so, move 03:03:595 (1,2,3,4) on the right ok fix a bit

[Hard]

00:50:095 (3) - Line with 00:48:381 (1) fixed

[MAX]

00:10:238 (2) - Distance it already is

01:28:238 (1) - Stack with 01:26:952 (4) fix

Good Luck and Star!
Thank you for mod and star! :)

Bites wrote:

MAX


u pro monster

  • 00:12:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be distance snapped properly fix
    00:13:238 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^ fix
    00:17:523 (1) - feels like too many repeats, not sure about this SV change
    00:21:809 (4) - maybe ctrl g to reverse this slider? fix
    00:24:166 (4,1) - these circles might be confusing, since you've stacked streams before - try to keep consistency with your patterns
    00:29:523 (1) - really don't like this SV change, also the slider shape is kind of ugly too - maybe you can do something more symmetrical? ok change the shape, but keep the SV change to emphasize the scream
    00:34:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - long section of sliders, but maybe there's something more unique you could do here? ok i will think about it
    00:45:809 (4,5) - symmetry with 00:44:952 (1,2,3) - maybe? fix
    00:49:666 (3,4,5) - again, stacking 1/2 notes when JUST BEFORE you had stacked 1/4. for lower level players this could be very confusing, try not to do it fix
    00:56:523 (3,4,5) - ditto fix
    01:17:095 (4,5) - more distance spacing issues, move these notes a bit further away fix
    01:20:952 (1) - why the weird timing on this slider, there's no beat on the repeat? hmm i'll reconsider. i'm trying to improvise the beat actually. if more people point this out i will change it
    01:34:559 (2,3) - unstack these circles fix
    01:43:023 (4) - ditto fix
    01:44:738 (4) - ditto fix
    02:14:952 (2,3) - spacing issue intentional
    02:17:523 (1,2) - please time these sliders differently, the repeat does not land on a beat fix
    03:03:595 (10,11,12) - perhaps center these fix
    03:12:381 (1,3) - yet again weird slider repeat times! fix
    03:28:881 (13,14,15) - this shape looks a bit ugly, use distance space to fix it (http://puu.sh/3nep7.jpg) fix
    00:08:095 (1) - NC
    00:11:523 (4) - ^
    00:11:523 (4) - ^
    00:14:952 (5) - ^
    00:45:809 (4) - ^
    00:46:666 (7) - ^
    00:49:666 (3) - ^
    00:53:523 (4) - ^
    00:56:523 (3) - ^
    01:25:238 (3) - ^
    01:27:595 (5) - ^
    01:28:238 (1) - no NC
    02:02:738 (5) - NC
    02:03:166 (8) - ^
    02:06:381 (6) - ^
    02:07:238 (11) - ^
    02:07:666 (1) - no NC
    02:08:845 (6) - NC
    02:09:166 (8) - ^
    02:09:595 (11) - ^
    02:13:238 (4) - ^
    02:15:380 (3) - ^
    02:22:238 (3) - ^
    02:29:523 (3) - ^
    02:32:952 (5) - ^
    03:17:095 (3) - ^
    03:20:952 (4) - ^
    03:24:381 (4) - ^
    03:27:595 (4) - ^
    03:27:595 (4,7,10) - all NC
    03:31:238 (6) - NC

    for the NC i only follow some because it ruin my consistency (mostly i nc every two downbeat in this diff) and to warn the player that some rhythm change from 1/4 to 1/3
Thank you for mod :)
Cobra
This needs to be ranked ;D
I'll race you muahahah
Shohei Ohtani
HANZ UP IN DE EERR

Insane:
00:14:952 (5) - Add clap on beginning of slider
00:17:523 (1) - HRRNNGGHH AHH THIS SLOWDOWN
00:46:238 (3) - This note is placed weirdly
00:48:380 (1) - This slider looks weird like this o-o. It's not really parallel nor does it seem to be part of a notable pattern
00:50:095 (5) - ^ Like I see the M shape but like the distance is too far for me to really note it as such
01:34:880 (1) - Remove claps
01:44:095 (3) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835089
02:01:238 (3) - Not symmetrical. Make sure that when you CTRL + H it, the points are equal as if no movement is done.
02:14:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What's with the random difficulty jump? It was all streamy before and now it's like one of my "insanes" owo.
02:34:666 (1) - EEEEP!
03:08:952 (1) - Lower the first sliderpoint and the endpoint
03:10:666 (4) - ^

Hard:
00:26:095 (3) - Lower the second sliderpoint
00:39:809 (5) - This might just be better as a curve
01:02:095 (1,2,3) - Put this on the Y axis
01:07:238 (5) - Lower the first sliderpoint

Easy:
It's ok uguu

unyuu.
Topic Starter
jyu

Cobra wrote:

This needs to be ranked ;D
I'll race you muahahah
looool XD

CDFA wrote:

HANZ UP IN DE EERR

Insane:
00:14:952 (5) - Add clap on beginning of slider fix
00:17:523 (1) - HRRNNGGHH AHH THIS SLOWDOWN lool
00:46:238 (3) - This note is placed weirdly fix
00:48:380 (1) - This slider looks weird like this o-o. It's not really parallel nor does it seem to be part of a notable pattern fix
00:50:095 (5) - ^ Like I see the M shape but like the distance is too far for me to really note it as such ok will reconsider
01:34:880 (1) - Remove claps nuuu i want to keep that clap pattern
01:44:095 (3) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835089 fix
02:01:238 (3) - Not symmetrical. Make sure that when you CTRL + H it, the points are equal as if no movement is done. i'm not really good at sliders, but i will try to fix >w<
02:14:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What's with the random difficulty jump? It was all streamy before and now it's like one of my "insanes" owo. i don't even realize it lol. but yeah, now i realize it was weird that the previous part was streamy then the next part is not. ok i will try to fix this
02:34:666 (1) - EEEEP! loool
03:08:952 (1) - Lower the first sliderpoint and the endpoint fix
03:10:666 (4) - ^ fix

Hard:
00:26:095 (3) - Lower the second sliderpoint fix
00:39:809 (5) - This might just be better as a curve will consider
01:02:095 (1,2,3) - Put this on the Y axis fix
01:07:238 (5) - Lower the first sliderpoint

Easy:
It's ok uguu

unyuu.
Thank you for mod!! >w<
chaee
Uguu my mod is not needed ;__;
Great map, can't wait to see it ranked :)
Topic Starter
jyu

Shinchaechae wrote:

Uguu my mod is not needed ;__;
Great map, can't wait to see it ranked :)
thank you!!and thank you for the stars >w< though i'm not entirely sure this will get ranked lol
LunarSakuya
General
- Change Artist Unicode to 유니크 유닛 probably according to this but the hangul wasn't in the youtube vid title so uhh... xD
and "Younique Unit" is supposed to be "YOUNIQUE UNIT"

- I'm getting offset around 365-367. It'd be cool to double-check with someone


Normal
01:08:952 (1) - Delete Finish on tail, it's a really subtle beat here imo; If you really wanted a Finish around this part, I see it on (2) better
01:10:666 (3,5) - ^
01:15:809 (1) - Finish on head
01:22:666 (1) - ^, im hearing lots of cymbals
01:34:880 (2) - i don't really hear this following anything & also since you seem to be following the flow of the vocals more, a single note on the white tick would work fine~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/846974
01:41:523 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - if possible, it'd be neat to center this whole pattern =v= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/846982 (you'll have to adjust the notes before and after ofc)
02:27:809 (1) - Clap
02:32:095 (2,3) - you could angle these downwards so the pattern isn't so "clustered" http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/846988 Here's the code if you like:
SPOILER
32,188,152095,2,0,L|164:242,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,366,152952,2,0,L|24:316,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,188,153809,2,0,B|100:141|100:141|148:133,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:58:666 (1) - Finish on head (or maybe soft finish) would sound cool
03:22:666 (1,3) - not really feeling the 90 degree angles here...a bit strong-looking after all the curved sliders

Hard
00:39:809 (5) - Rhythm's a bit awkward, try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847277
00:56:738 (2) - this antijump may cause confusion since there was a 1/4 pattern in the last combo; I'd just stack it on the head of (3)
01:35:095 (4,5,6) - try to equalize this spacing since it's in the same combo & i don't see a reason not to
01:46:666 (5) - this break seems a bit sudden and leaves a gap in the vocals. I can understand leaving this in Normal but I'd suggest you map this out
02:38:095 (1,2,3,4) - Space these out like you did the first time at 02:31:238 (1,2,3,4) -
02:58:666 (1) - Finish on head? bgm sounds strong here
03:05:523 (1) - Clap
03:26:095 (1,2) - The reverses emphasize the wrong beat imo, An option is to delete the reverses and fill in the gaps with a more sensible rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847322 something like that :P

MAX
00:09:809 (1,2,3) - linear pattern is a bit ugly, space them out like this or something https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847333 gives a bit more challenge too
00:24:381 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can make a better equilateral triangle than this :P
00:38:523 (4) - try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847346 better cursor flow to (5) imo, take advantage of good blankets i guess =v=
00:52:666 (2) - Clap on head
00:54:381 (5) - Clap
00:59:523 (5) - Clap
00:59:738 (6) - the gap after this felt a bit funny while playing, I'd make a slider from here to the next red tick to follow the held-out vocals
01:44:952 (1) - like i mentioned in Hard, I'd try mapping this out since it's a harder diff :P
02:18:381 (2) - Clap on head
02:20:095 (4) - ^
03:32:095 (2) - Clap
03:32:952 (1) - Finish
I can see lots of potential jumps and more complicated rhythm patterns. Since it's a lower bpm song, there's lots of room to spread out your notes if possible ;) Nice job anyways

I saw great improvements :D
More mods on MAX would be cool
i wouldn't mind rechecking if it's ready
Topic Starter
jyu
Mostly fix all, thanks LunarSakuya :)

i will tell you when it's ready
popner
Offset check as request:
offset -14 (367)
Topic Starter
jyu

popner wrote:

Offset check as request:
offset -14 (367)
Thank you for checking, popner :)
wendao
Easy done
http://puu.sh/3zSTz.rar

Also.. you forgot to fix the Preview Time :)
Ayesha Altugle
Can I request a guest diff too?

Recheck

[MAX]
00:17:509 (1) - make first repeat and the end of the slider a clap
00:29:509 (1) - remove NC
00:37:224 (1,2) - move 1 grid to the right to the first note and opposite direction for second note (Grid level: 4)
00:45:795 (1,1) - remove NC
01:03:581 (1,2) - swap NC
01:05:295 (1,2) - ^
01:08:724 (1) - Delete NC
01:08:938 (3) - Add NC
02:02:724 (1) - Delete NC
02:36:367 (3,4) - 1/3 -> 1/4 slider
02:41:617 (2,3,2,3) - snap to 1/3
03:13:224 (2) - add clap to the start of the slider
03:14:938 (5) - add clap
03:20:081 (3) - add clap to the start of the slider
Topic Starter
jyu

Harez wrote:

Easy done
http://puu.sh/3zSTz.rar

Also.. you forgot to fix the Preview Time :)
yaay, thank you! >w<

@vahn10 : Thank you for rechecking :3 but it's still wip, so i'll check it later. and i think the mapset already have a full diff spread, so i guess another gd isn't needed, sorry :c

edit : kudo'd Harez's post because Preview Time fix
wendao
8) you forgot to add my nickname to Tags
Topic Starter
jyu

Harez wrote:

8) you forgot to add my nickname to Tags
triple update for this, thank you for reminding me :'3
wendao

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Harez wrote:

8) you forgot to add my nickname to Tags
triple update for this, thank you for reminding me :'3
8)b
yurunneram
Har'EZ

00:38:938 (1) - Do something creative with this slider ne? ^^ Make it pretty~

00:51:367 (1) - The rhythm here is slightly wrong. I would put a hitcircle at 00:51:367 and a your slider (without repeat) at 00:51:795. it's because of phrasing

01:24:367 (3) - Move to x268 y112 (symmetry. Resnap the other notes)

03:00:367 (2) - Move to x284 y244 (symmetry. Resnap the other notes)

Omg this diff has improved by a lot since I last saw it :D It's really a lot better than the previous version! Great job I found it rather fun~

Normal

00:23:938 (4) - Move to x132 y180 (resnap the other notes)

00:27:367 (4) - Move to x288 y240 (this one is optional since moving the other notes might seem troublesome. I'm fine if you leave it)

00:46:652 (3) - If you observe, the slider does not bend at the correct timing. I've moved the points around so that it's still in a "M" shape and follows timing. See how you like it. These are the points. You can readjust if you want.
First point: x400 y188
Second point: x360 y64
Third point: x264 y152
Fourth point: x168 y64
Last point: x124 y200

Very good as well :3 I'm very satisfied with your map ^^

HARD

00:35:509 (3) - Why not at x256 y236?

00:38:938 (3) - Same here. x272 y232

01:26:081 (1) - Move the last point to x324 y296 (it's because of the distance from circle 5)

02:01:224 (3) - Extend to 02:01:867 ?

02:04:652 (3) - Same as ^. Extend by a half a beat

I loved this one :D It was really fun~

Good gracious the map has really changed @@ It's really an awesome job there, I've seen major improvements. Never enjoyed modding a korean song this much. It's been so long since I did a good mod ^^ I really hope to see this one ranked <3

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Topic Starter
jyu
holy i haven't finished this yet >.< i will check the mods as soon as i finish the some parts. Thank you for mod!! >w<
Topic Starter
jyu
gomen for double post

LunarSakuya

LunarSakuya wrote:

General
- Change Artist Unicode to 유니크 유닛 probably according to this but the hangul wasn't in the youtube vid title so uhh... xD
and "Younique Unit" is supposed to be "YOUNIQUE UNIT" fix

- I'm getting offset around 365-367. It'd be cool to double-check with someone fix 367


Normal
01:08:952 (1) - Delete Finish on tail, it's a really subtle beat here imo; If you really wanted a Finish around this part, I see it on (2) better
01:10:666 (3,5) - ^
01:15:809 (1) - Finish on head
01:22:666 (1) - ^, im hearing lots of cymbals
01:34:880 (2) - i don't really hear this following anything & also since you seem to be following the flow of the vocals more, a single note on the white tick would work fine~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/846974
01:41:523 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - if possible, it'd be neat to center this whole pattern =v= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/846982 (you'll have to adjust the notes before and after ofc)
02:27:809 (1) - Clap
02:32:095 (2,3) - you could angle these downwards so the pattern isn't so "clustered" http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/846988 Here's the code if you like:
SPOILER
32,188,152095,2,0,L|164:242,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,366,152952,2,0,L|24:316,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,188,153809,2,0,B|100:141|100:141|148:133,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:58:666 (1) - Finish on head (or maybe soft finish) would sound cool
03:22:666 (1,3) - not really feeling the 90 degree angles here...a bit strong-looking after all the curved sliders
fix all in normal

Hard
00:39:809 (5) - Rhythm's a bit awkward, try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847277 i like the current one, kinda gives the song a bit of improvisation
00:56:738 (2) - this antijump may cause confusion since there was a 1/4 pattern in the last combo; I'd just stack it on the head of (3)
01:35:095 (4,5,6) - try to equalize this spacing since it's in the same combo & i don't see a reason not to
01:46:666 (5) - this break seems a bit sudden and leaves a gap in the vocals. I can understand leaving this in Normal but I'd suggest you map this out
02:38:095 (1,2,3,4) - Space these out like you did the first time at 02:31:238 (1,2,3,4) -
02:58:666 (1) - Finish on head? bgm sounds strong here
03:05:523 (1) - Clap
03:26:095 (1,2) - The reverses emphasize the wrong beat imo, An option is to delete the reverses and fill in the gaps with a more sensible rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847322 something like that :P
the others are fixed

MAX
00:09:809 (1,2,3) - linear pattern is a bit ugly, space them out like this or something https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847333 gives a bit more challenge too
00:24:381 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can make a better equilateral triangle than this :P
00:38:523 (4) - try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847346 better cursor flow to (5) imo, take advantage of good blankets i guess =v=
fixed, but i kinda change it with my own style idk
00:52:666 (2) - Clap on head
00:54:381 (5) - Clap
00:59:523 (5) - Clap
00:59:738 (6) - the gap after this felt a bit funny while playing, I'd make a slider from here to the next red tick to follow the held-out vocals
01:44:952 (1) - like i mentioned in Hard, I'd try mapping this out since it's a harder diff :P
02:18:381 (2) - Clap on head
02:20:095 (4) - ^
03:32:095 (2) - Clap
03:32:952 (1) - Finish
others are fixed
I can see lots of potential jumps and more complicated rhythm patterns.

Since it's a lower bpm song, there's lots of room to spread out your notes

if possible ;) Nice job anyways

I saw great improvements :D
More mods on MAX would be cool
i wouldn't mind rechecking if it's ready
Thanks for mod >w<

vahn10

vahn10 wrote:

Can I request a guest diff too?

Recheck

[MAX]
00:17:509 (1) - make first repeat and the end of the slider a clap

add only at first repeat
00:29:509 (1) - remove NC nope, to warn the player about the

massive sv change

00:37:224 (1,2) - move 1 grid to the right to the first note and opposite

direction for second note (Grid level: 4) fix
00:45:795 (1,1) - remove NC nope, the current combo pattern

is fine

01:03:581 (1,2) - swap NC ^
01:05:295 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:08:724 (1) - Delete NC ^
01:08:938 (3) - Add NC ^
02:02:724 (1) - Delete NC ^
02:36:367 (3,4) - 1/3 -> 1/4 slider no, it's the same rhythm

with 02:35:509 (1,2) -

02:41:617 (2,3,2,3) - snap to 1/3 fix
03:13:224 (2) - add clap to the start of the slider fix


03:14:938 (5) - add clap fix
03:20:081 (3) - add clap to the start of the slider fix

Thanks for mod >w<

yurunneram

yurunneram wrote:

Normal

00:23:938 (4) - Move to x132 y180 (resnap the other notes)

00:27:367 (4) - Move to x288 y240 (this one is optional since moving the

other notes might seem troublesome. I'm fine if you leave it)

00:46:652 (3) - If you observe, the slider does not bend at the correct

timing. I've moved the points around so that it's still in a "M" shape and

follows timing. See how you like it. These are the points. You can readjust

if you want.
First point: x400 y188
Second point: x360 y64
Third point: x264 y152
Fourth point: x168 y64
Last point: x124 y200
fix all while i remapped some parts in this diff, except the M slider, because i changed the position before i see your mod
Very good as well :3 I'm very satisfied with your map ^^

HARD

00:35:509 (3) - Why not at x256 y236? nope, i want to make a jump between (2) and (3)

00:38:938 (3) - Same here. x272 y232 ^

01:26:081 (1) - Move the last point to x324 y296 (it's because of the distance from circle 5) fix

02:01:224 (3) - Extend to 02:01:867 ? will consider, kinda hard to readjust the pattern after that

02:04:652 (3) - Same as ^. Extend by a half a beat ^

I loved this one :D It was really fun~

Good gracious the map has really changed @@ It's really an awesome job there, I've seen major improvements. Never enjoyed modding a korean song this much. It's been so long since I did a good mod ^^ I really hope to see this one ranked <3

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Thanks for mod and star >w< i love you <3

Will update as soon as i get Harez's update. Thanks guys <3
yurunneram

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

i love you <3
Awh thx, love you too ^^
wendao

yurunneram wrote:

Har'EZ

00:38:938 (1) - Do something creative with this slider ne? ^^ Make it pretty~ okay xD

00:51:367 (1) - The rhythm here is slightly wrong. I would put a hitcircle at 00:51:367 and a your slider (without repeat) at 00:51:795. it's because of phrasing IMO it's fine so no changes :D

01:24:367 (3) - Move to x268 y112 (symmetry. Resnap the other notes) done

03:00:367 (2) - Move to x284 y244 (symmetry. Resnap the other notes) done

Omg this diff has improved by a lot since I last saw it :D It's really a lot better than the previous version! Great job I found it rather fun~ :?: improved a lot?
thanks for modding :D

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