gyuwife wrote:

Good luck

Kin wrote:

Hi ~

MAX :

00:44:095 - 00:44:738 - it's just me but for this part I prefer follow electro sound
00:58:023 (7) - blanket on 5 like this ? http://puu.sh/2NjB4.jpg
02:00:380 (1,2,3) - blanket 1 and 2 on 3 like this ? http://puu.sh/2NjLE.jpg
02:20:952 (1,2) - adjust blanket ?
02:23:738 (7) - blanket on 5 ? http://puu.sh/2Nk3I.jpg

Hard :

00:51:809 (1) - use new shape slider to make it better will reconsider, i kinda like the current shape
00:53:523 (2) - ^ ^
01:26:095 (1) - arrow is kinda hidden
02:23:738 (7) - adjust blanket
03:30:381 (3) - use new shape slider to make it better, and blanket i think it has already blanket this slider 03:29:523 (1) - but i will reconsider about the shape

Normal :

01:08:952 (1,3) - lil overlap

that all ~
Good luck

OEvil wrote:

[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[Normal]

My Edits:
01:00:595 - Add a slider from here until 01:01:666, with a NC. nope, it starts too sudden after the spinner

SPOILER

[spoilerbox]

[/spoilerbox]
01:02:095 (1) - Move to {x:272 y:96}. the current pattern seems fine to me, but i will reconsider
01:32:952 (1) - Make it like this gonna keep the current pattern

SPOILER

[MAX]

My Edits:
Remove the Stream here 02:34:881 - To 02:35:952 -
Add 1/4 Stream 02:34:881 - To 02:35:952 -
Remove the stream here 02:36:595 - to 02:37:881 -
Add 1/4 Stream 02:36:595 - to 02:37:881 -

i'm using the streams to follow the vocal, since it's more dominant than the accompanying music. I'm trying to find a way to replace the streams with something else because it's too hardcore for me :< so i will reconsider your suggestion

Behonkiss wrote:

From my M4M queue

General:

Claps and whistle volume seem really low.

Normal:

00:38:095 (1) - Move forward half a beat. prefer the current one

01:34:881 (2) - Consider changing this to a circle, with another one stacked on top half a beat after. nope, slider make the rhythm flow better

01:37:238 (3) - Move this to the right a little so it's directly under the 2 circle.

Hard:

00:51:809 (1) - Having the end point where it is at 00:52:452 sounds weird. Try getting rid of the repear and extend the end to 00:52:666.

03:12:381 (1) - Similar problem here. Get rid of the repeat and end it at 03:13:238. fix them in my own way

MAX seems fine, but keep in mind that I don't know much about Insane-type diffs.

1. 00:17:523 (1) - try to add whistle to slider body?
2. 00:34:238 - add a note here for consistent beat?
3. 00:38:952 (5) - bad shape... try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:26:095 (1,2,3) - heard weird a bit... try this beat & placement?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:55:238 (1) - Adjust the shape to avoid out of screen and make it more smooth? also 00:56:952 (3) -
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:07:238 (5) - change to a 3/4 reverse? heard better~
   
3. 01:20:952 (1) - suggest two 1/2 sliders but not a 3/4 reverse due to vocal
   

1. 01:07:238 (4) - how about to split it into two sliders like this:
   
2. 01:29:960 - perhaps the break is unnecessary
3. 02:34:666 (1,2) - compared with current beat, i may choose 2/1 + note like this
   

Kiiwa wrote:

maxstep :3

[MAX]

1. 00:09:809 - Add clap.
2. 00:13:238 (6) - Add clap.
3. 00:16:666 - Add clap.
4. 00:17:523 - Better if you have whistle here too.
5. 00:32:095 (2) - Add clap.
6. 00:33:809 (2) - Add clap.
7. 00:44:095 - Add clap.
8. 00:58:881 (1) - Add finish.
9. 01:39:273 (10) - Move 1/4 later.fix with my own way
10. 01:44:738 (1) - Start this at 01:44:952 - and add a note at 01:44:738 -
11. 03:05:523 (1) - Add a clap.
12. 03:08:952 - Add finish.
13. 03:22:666 - Add finish.

good luck~

Scorpiour wrote:

Recheck~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[MAX]

1. 00:17:523 (1) - try to add whistle to slider body?
2. 00:34:238 - add a note here for consistent beat?
3. 00:38:952 (5) - bad shape... try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:26:095 (1,2,3) - heard weird a bit... try this beat & placement?
   
   SPOILER

   i use another placement, this one is too difficult imo

well... the placement is still.. .mess a bit.... (considering) if you would point out which one is still a mess i will fix it ;w;

[Hard]

1. 00:55:238 (1) - Adjust the shape to avoid out of screen and make it more smooth? also 00:56:952 (3) -
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:07:238 (5) - change to a 3/4 reverse? heard better~
   
3. 01:20:952 (1) - suggest two 1/2 sliders but not a 3/4 reverse due to vocal
   

[Normal]

1. 01:07:238 (4) - how about to split it into two sliders like this:
   
2. 01:29:960 - perhaps the break is unnecessary that's a long gap, so i prefer break
3. 02:34:666 (1,2) - compared with current beat, i may choose 2/1 + note like this
   

tetsutaro wrote:

From the people who brought you

comes this mod.
Advertisement: New season (6) available!

[General]
<Tags> "Album" don't really do much good here. Remove.
<Tags> "Younique" already in artist. Remove.
<Tags> No commas please. Spaces are the separators for the searching algorithm. If you put commas in it will be taken as part of a tag and stuff might go bonkers.
<Combo Color> Grey and white blends too much into the background image. will reconsider
Whenever possible, reshape sliders with sharp turns so that the sharp turn(s) is/are on a tick. Enhances playability, especially in lower diffs.

[Normal]
One of the better quality Easy/Normal without sticking crudely to some stock uniform rhythm, and actually following the music's rhythm
00:51:809 (1,2,3,4) - Could fix symmetry. Try moving (2), (3)
01:30:595 - Too short of a break. Try adding lone circles at the vocal's "STEP" fix with my own way
01:36:380 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Could fix symmetry.
02:33:809 (4) - Suddenly crooked slider? to make the flow slightly better
<Combo Color> 03:00:166 (2,3) - Just over them guy's silver/grey pants, approach circle almost obscured.

[Hard]
Too many circles under sliders. Separate whenever possible.

yanlu wrote:

Hi~ M4M from my queue >_</

[MAX]

1. 00:09:809 (4) - this 1/6 repeat suddenly for me..i know it's fit with the music.but it's hard to catch with the next 2 note. maybe 00:10:238 (5,6) - don't stack ?
2. 00:16:809 (6,7) - ^same as above
3. 00:17:523 (1) - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766044 more pertty imo~ the current one fits the song more, i think
4. 00:24:381 (1,2,3,4) - i feel this 4 can be far snap..maybe do some jumpy is good~ intentional, i want to keep it like that, but i will reconsider
5. 00:38:095 (1) - the new partten start. try place x256/y80 :3?
6. 00:39:595 (6,7) - i don't like how you stack this...why don't keep snap 1.0x with (5)?
7. 00:42:273 (4) - this can be dele. no vocal here..i think you just want to stream it ._." i want the follow the instrument
8. 00:44:095 (3) - nooooo this..keep 1/4(1/2) slider or nc it! nc
9. 00:50:095 (7) - nc here? i prefer long combo in this diff
10. 00:53:523 (3) - ^ ^
11. 00:56:952 (5) - ^ ^
12. 00:58:023 (3,4) - dele (4) and let(3)start 00:58:238 - more fit you do in 00:48:381 - to00:56:952 - part. this one is intentional, to accent the part before the spinner
13. 01:08:095 (3,4) - no stack? will reconsider
14. 01:14:095 (1) - dele nc and nc in 01:14:523 (2) - ,(cuz you make the partten 01:13:880 (10,1) - and 01:14:523 (2,3,4) - together)
15. 01:17:523 (6) - nc
16. 01:20:952 (5) - nc
17. 01:22:238 (1) - too sudden -__ -" i want to don't why?
18. 01:25:238 (3) - just repeat once and note? i'd like to keep it
19. 01:38:095 (9) - nc
20. 02:02:095 (4) - nc
21. 02:05:523 (4) - nc
22. 02:05:738 (2,3) - twitch this more fit the vocal imo
23. (02:05:523 (1) - to 02:07:238 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766061 ?)
24. 02:07:238 (9) - miss nc? intentional
25. 02:11:416 (2) - dele this..
26. 02:23:738 (7) - same 00:58:023 (3,4) - .
27. 02:34:881 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ,02:36:595 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - hmm.i have nothing to say- _- but you are too crazy i also think about that x.x but i can't find any other replacement except spinner
28. 02:40:666 (5) - miss nc
29. 03:10:666 (4) - 03:14:095 (3) - 03:17:523 (5) - 03:20:952 (4) - 03:27:595 (4) - 03:31:238 (5) - miss nc here.
    
30. you should keep nc every 1~2 long white line.but no limit it..NC can notice people in some new partten/changed.my combo pattern maybe vary, ex: i don't nc 03:10:666 (4) - because it's still a part of these 03:08:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - in some pattern i nc every 2 big white tick, but in other pattern i nc every 3 big white tick

[Hard]

1. hmm no big problem in this diff i think.
   just need to consistent your newcombo length.(i won't comment more like nc proplem~)
   
2. 00:39:809 (5) - no...you should keep 1/2(1/4)slider, or NC it o_o
   (i perfer you do same like 00:43:238 (5) - ) will reconsider, though i prefer the current one
3. 00:51:381 - add a note?
4. 01:41:523 (5) - nc...
5. 02:17:309 (6) - maybe stack with next (1)'s head better

[Normal]

1. lazy to mod Normal diff sorry_(:3」∠)_

GL!

happy623 wrote:

testplay request
Younique Unit - MAXSTEP [MAX]

1PC~

(sorry for playing bad XD those streams I hit 100 is mine bad, not the map problem

nice diff I suppose, good luck

no kd

1. personally i don't like the quality of the mp3 ;_;

1. 00:03:809 (1) - remove the clap it fits not really well
2. 00:20:095 (3) - add clap for consistency with (1)
3. 00:50:095 (3,4) - the flow between this sliders is very bad why don't you try to make something like:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:58:666 (1) - add a finish
5. 01:19:238 (1,2) - try something like:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:21:809 (2,3) - try to don't stack cicles in the easier diff of the mapset
7. 01:25:238 (2,3) - same^
8. 01:27:381 (2,1,2,3,4) - why don't you try to make a star here like:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:20:952 (1) - i think to sliders like this one you can give a softer form like:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:31:238 (1) - add a clap
3. 00:35:309 (2,3) - the flow is not the best here, why don't you try something like:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:38:095 (1,2,3) - since this pattern is like this ^ one make the same here too
5. 00:58:881 (1) - finish
6. 01:19:023 (6) - new combo here

1. 00:03:809 (1) - remove clap
2. 00:13:881 (11) - i think the new combo is better here

Lally wrote:

Hi req from : Lally's Modding Queue (๑╹ω╹๑) ~

o3o = comments/suggestions
o3o = normal things

[General]

1. personally i don't like the quality of the mp3 ;_;

[Normal]

1. 00:03:809 (1) - remove the clap it fits not really well
2. 00:20:095 (3) - add clap for consistency with (1)
3. 00:50:095 (3,4) - the flow between this sliders is very bad why don't you try to make something like:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:58:666 (1) - add a finish
5. 01:19:238 (1,2) - try something like:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:21:809 (2,3) - try to don't stack cicles in the easier diff of the mapset
7. 01:25:238 (2,3) - same^
8. 01:27:381 (2,1,2,3,4) - why don't you try to make a star here like:
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:20:952 (1) - i think to sliders like this one you can give a softer form like:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:31:238 (1) - add a clap
3. 00:35:309 (2,3) - the flow is not the best here, why don't you try something like: this one is intentional jumps, but i will reconsider
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:38:095 (1,2,3) - since this pattern is like this ^ one make the same here too ^
5. 00:58:881 (1) - finish
6. 01:19:023 (6) - new combo here

[MAX]

1. 00:03:809 (1) - remove clap
2. 00:13:881 (11) - i think the new combo is better here

good luck o3o/

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

hello, my dear.

[General]

02:31:238 (1) - is not needed Kiai i think it has the emphasis, so i added only a kiai burst

[Normal]

00:07:666 (2,3) - on 1 grid down, 00:09:381 (2) - on 3 grid up and on 2 grid left, 00:09:809 (3) - on 3 grid up and on 3 grid left. done
00:18:381 (1,2,3) - on 2 grid up
01:27:809 (1,2,3,4) - its play better http://puu.sh/34yrr.jpg
01:39:809 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I advise to center .... 01:40:452 (2) - the end of the slider to raise a little like this http://puu.sh/34yAx.jpg .
01:41:523 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - align them so http://puu.sh/34yBd.jpg
01:44:523 (1,2,3,4) - align them so http://puu.sh/34yDZ.jpg (and 01:46:666 (4) - on 1 grid up, he is a little lower than the 3 )

[Hard]

01:27:381 (2,3) - spacing
01:40:666 (3) - finish slider here 01:40:913 and 01:41:095 (x) - add cirle
03:33:166 (1) - move here 03:33:809 (1) - finish here 03:36:381 ----- 03:33:166 (6) - add slider (start 03:33:166 - finish 03:33:381 ) 03:33:595 (1) - add circle
00:58:666 (1) - remove note. start here spinner. i'd like to keep it

[MAX]

00:58:666 (8) - start here spinner

I wish you luck. map and song is very good

bye my dear

384059043 wrote:

hi :>
from CLANNED MODDING QUEUE

[Normal]
-Setting-
okay
-Mapping-
* 01:08:952 (1) - This slider head doesn't stack with 01:06:809 (3) - . Consider it should be moved to x=291,y=250.

* 01:24:381 (1,3) - blanket them.

* 01:27:381 (2,1,2,3,4) - The pentagon is not good-looking. You can make a regular one.

* 02:33:809 (4) - This slider overlap 02:32:095 (2) - . Although it is not unrankable due to 02:32:952 (3) - ,I still recommend that you should separate them from each other in order to be readable for Normal player.

* 02:35:952 (2) - Consider moving to x=353,y=226

* 03:22:666 (1,3) - imo these two sliders are not good-looking too. At least it is better to let the red controling point cover the sliderpoint. will consider

---------


[Hard]
-Setting-
okay.
-Mapping-
* 00:17:309 - consider adding a note.

* 00:36:381 (5) - The middle red point is not necessary. You can remove it.

* 00:47:095 (6) - delete the red point. It seems better to make parallel lines.

* 01:46:452 (3,4,5) - move them to x=320,y=216. It looks better.

* 02:17:309 (6,1) - move them to x=300,y=320 due to the stack.

* 02:24:488 (1) - Why not mapping this part?

* (not a mod) 03:12:381 (1,2,3) - the pattern is really good! thank you :>

---------


[MAX]
-Setting-

-Mapping-
* 00:25:238 (3) - Check spacing plz. intentional, to emphasis the loud noise at 00:25:238 -

* imo some sliders or streams doesn't have a good symmetry. Here are some patterns I don't like:

list

* 02:01:238 (3) - fixed this one, i think
* 02:58:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
* 03:00:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

You can choose some of them to fix.

---------


The map is good as a new mapper's. However, the mapset still need improvements!

Good luck! :3

Elva Anjani Uchiha wrote:

Aru why this is still not ranked.
WHY

Elva Anjani Uchiha wrote:

Aru why this is still not ranked.
WHY

neonat wrote:

MAX

00:40:988 - add a note i want to keep the current pattern
00:51:166 - ^
00:58:666 (1) - shift this to start at 01:00:381 and end at 01:01:881 and map more from 00:58:666 to 01:00:166 - something like this:

01:42:916 - add a note nope, to follow the vocal
02:07:452 - ^ intentional
02:23:738 (7) - slider end at 02:23:952 and repeat till 02:24:166
03:30:595 - add a note

Hika wrote:

OMG DID YOU REALLY MAP THIS
automatic rank plz

Nicola12 wrote:

So this is my first mod.

MAX

00:09:809 (1,2,3) - Why are those three notes differently spaced? It looks kinda wierd in my Opinion and doesn't make any sense. idk, i use distance snap and this is what i got because i use 1/3 in this one
00:25:238 (2,3) - I don't think the jump there is necessary.
01:13:880 (10,11) - ^
02:28:666 (1,2,3,4) - It feels kinda wrong to me that those don't have the same slider velocity as those at 02:32:952 (5,6,7,8) even if they're the same i don't think so, the previous one follow the music, and the second one follow the vocal
02:34:666 (1) - It would be a nice effect if you made this slider be slower because it would fit the music - just a suggestion though.you are genius

Zweib wrote:

Hi~ from my M4M queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Some patterns may differ from my understanding for "good-looking" but the way you arrange the objects and sound effect is really careful lol.
   Failed to give any valuable advice.orz
   Star~

Normal

1. 00:37:238 (3) - move to(288,376)
2. 01:08:095 (5) - this arc may need further fixing

Hard

1. 01:42:809 (6,7,2,4) - positions of (6)(7)(2)(4) are not regular

intentional

Max

1. 00:29:523 (1) - um...I think it's hard to form a good shape for long slider. How about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   intentional, the shape kinda resemble the Younique Unit logo, but i may reconsider about this
2. 00:48:166 (1,2,3) - remove NC of (1) and add NC to (3)?

Good luck~

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Helloo ~
You requested via forums ~


[Normal]
00:22:238 (3) - Blanket (1) ?

00:26:095 (3) - ^
00:31:666 (2) - Move one grid right.
00:32:523 (3) - Two grids up.
00:33:380 (4) - Three grids left.
00:43:238 (4) - Stack properly. i think i already did
00:57:381 (2) - New combo.
01:44:523 (1) - Move to x:284 y:240 and move (2) to x:164 y:120. It should form a triangle.

02:23:523 (3) - Line with (1) nope, i don't want the formations to be too linear
03:27:809 (3) - x:212 y:220
03:28:666 (4) - Move this about 2 grids down if you did the above.


[Hard]
- What happened to distance snap? You should still keep your spacing consistent,
- Approach rate -2 It's currently too high. the rhythm itself isn't really hard, the position also, so i prefer higher AR, since less than AR 7 make it hard to read because the circles appears slowly
00:35:309 (2) - Place at x:300 y:220 intentional jump
00:35:523 (3) - Copy (1) and ctrl + J and ctrl + G and move to x:212 y:264
It should look something like this ~

00:38:095 (1,2,3) - Do the same as above. i will reconsider, but nice suggestion :3
01:24:381 (5) - New combo.
02:16:666 (5) - Blanket the slider end of (4)

02:17:523 (1,2,3) - What about something like this?

02:20:523 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:20:952 (6) - New Combo.


[MAX]
- Approach Rate -1 will consider, since AR 8 make it no fun
00:09:809 (1) - Remove this combo to match 00:08:095 (4) or place a new combo on 00:08:095 (4) this one is intentional, because it change to following the electronic music, i think
00:16:809 (1) - Place where 00:14:952 (5) was.
00:26:095 (1) - Remove new combo or place a new combo on 00:22:666 (5)
00:44:095 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:47:523 (9) - One grid left.
00:48:166 (10,11,1) - Place where (7) was placed.
02:07:452 - Add a circle.
02:12:380 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:35:523 (1) - ^ no, because the slider velocity change
03:24:381 (1) - ^


Good luck with your map ~

HabiHolic wrote:

From My queue~

[Normal]

00:08:952 (1) - Remove Finish ok
00:10:666 (1) - ^ ok
00:12:381 (1) - ^ ok
00:20:952 (1) - Finish ok
00:24:381 (1) - Clap no, doesn't fit
01:15:809 (1) - Remove Nc no, it's downbeat
02:32:095 (2,3) - Hmm Try This? i don't want to make it too linear



02:36:381 (3) - Ctrl + G? ok

[Hard]
00:08:952 (5) - NC? ok
01:39:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - nononono!! Photo Check fix with my own style, the distance is quite far with that



Ok
No Pick Good Map~
For Ranked go go~!

• 
  00:12:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be distance snapped properly
  00:13:238 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
  00:17:523 (1) - feels like too many repeats, not sure about this SV change
  00:21:809 (4) - maybe ctrl g to reverse this slider?
  00:24:166 (4,1) - these circles might be confusing, since you've stacked streams before - try to keep consistency with your patterns
  00:29:523 (1) - really don't like this SV change, also the slider shape is kind of ugly too - maybe you can do something more symmetrical?
  00:34:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - long section of sliders, but maybe there's something more unique you could do here?
  00:45:809 (4,5) - symmetry with 00:44:952 (1,2,3) - maybe?
  00:49:666 (3,4,5) - again, stacking 1/2 notes when JUST BEFORE you had stacked 1/4. for lower level players this could be very confusing, try not to do it
  00:56:523 (3,4,5) - ditto
  01:17:095 (4,5) - more distance spacing issues, move these notes a bit further away
  01:20:952 (1) - why the weird timing on this slider, there's no beat on the repeat?
  01:34:559 (2,3) - unstack these circles
  01:43:023 (4) - ditto
  01:44:738 (4) - ditto
  02:14:952 (2,3) - spacing issue
  02:17:523 (1,2) - please time these sliders differently, the repeat does not land on a beat
  03:03:595 (10,11,12) - perhaps center these
  03:12:381 (1,3) - yet again weird slider repeat times!
  03:28:881 (13,14,15) - this shape looks a bit ugly, use distance space to fix it (http://puu.sh/3nep7.jpg)
  00:08:095 (1) - NC
  00:11:523 (4) - ^
  00:11:523 (4) - ^
  00:14:952 (5) - ^
  00:45:809 (4) - ^
  00:46:666 (7) - ^
  00:49:666 (3) - ^
  00:53:523 (4) - ^
  00:56:523 (3) - ^
  01:25:238 (3) - ^
  01:27:595 (5) - ^
  01:28:238 (1) - no NC
  02:02:738 (5) - NC
  02:03:166 (8) - ^
  02:06:381 (6) - ^
  02:07:238 (11) - ^
  02:07:666 (1) - no NC
  02:08:845 (6) - NC
  02:09:166 (8) - ^
  02:09:595 (11) - ^
  02:13:238 (4) - ^
  02:15:380 (3) - ^
  02:22:238 (3) - ^
  02:29:523 (3) - ^
  02:32:952 (5) - ^
  03:17:095 (3) - ^
  03:20:952 (4) - ^
  03:24:381 (4) - ^
  03:27:595 (4) - ^
  03:27:595 (4,7,10) - all NC
  03:31:238 (6) - NC

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

[Normal]

00:12:381 (1) - In the opposite way it ruin the symmetry, so no

03:02:095 (5) - Opposite way. If so, move 03:03:595 (1,2,3,4) on the right ok fix a bit

[Hard]

00:50:095 (3) - Line with 00:48:381 (1) fixed

[MAX]

00:10:238 (2) - Distance it already is

01:28:238 (1) - Stack with 01:26:952 (4) fix

Good Luck and Star!

Bites wrote:

MAX


u pro monster

• 
  00:12:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be distance snapped properly fix
  00:13:238 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^ fix
  00:17:523 (1) - feels like too many repeats, not sure about this SV change
  00:21:809 (4) - maybe ctrl g to reverse this slider? fix
  00:24:166 (4,1) - these circles might be confusing, since you've stacked streams before - try to keep consistency with your patterns
  00:29:523 (1) - really don't like this SV change, also the slider shape is kind of ugly too - maybe you can do something more symmetrical? ok change the shape, but keep the SV change to emphasize the scream
  00:34:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - long section of sliders, but maybe there's something more unique you could do here? ok i will think about it
  00:45:809 (4,5) - symmetry with 00:44:952 (1,2,3) - maybe? fix
  00:49:666 (3,4,5) - again, stacking 1/2 notes when JUST BEFORE you had stacked 1/4. for lower level players this could be very confusing, try not to do it fix
  00:56:523 (3,4,5) - ditto fix
  01:17:095 (4,5) - more distance spacing issues, move these notes a bit further away fix
  01:20:952 (1) - why the weird timing on this slider, there's no beat on the repeat? hmm i'll reconsider. i'm trying to improvise the beat actually. if more people point this out i will change it
  01:34:559 (2,3) - unstack these circles fix
  01:43:023 (4) - ditto fix
  01:44:738 (4) - ditto fix
  02:14:952 (2,3) - spacing issue intentional
  02:17:523 (1,2) - please time these sliders differently, the repeat does not land on a beat fix
  03:03:595 (10,11,12) - perhaps center these fix
  03:12:381 (1,3) - yet again weird slider repeat times! fix
  03:28:881 (13,14,15) - this shape looks a bit ugly, use distance space to fix it (http://puu.sh/3nep7.jpg) fix
  00:08:095 (1) - NC
  00:11:523 (4) - ^
  00:11:523 (4) - ^
  00:14:952 (5) - ^
  00:45:809 (4) - ^
  00:46:666 (7) - ^
  00:49:666 (3) - ^
  00:53:523 (4) - ^
  00:56:523 (3) - ^
  01:25:238 (3) - ^
  01:27:595 (5) - ^
  01:28:238 (1) - no NC
  02:02:738 (5) - NC
  02:03:166 (8) - ^
  02:06:381 (6) - ^
  02:07:238 (11) - ^
  02:07:666 (1) - no NC
  02:08:845 (6) - NC
  02:09:166 (8) - ^
  02:09:595 (11) - ^
  02:13:238 (4) - ^
  02:15:380 (3) - ^
  02:22:238 (3) - ^
  02:29:523 (3) - ^
  02:32:952 (5) - ^
  03:17:095 (3) - ^
  03:20:952 (4) - ^
  03:24:381 (4) - ^
  03:27:595 (4) - ^
  03:27:595 (4,7,10) - all NC
  03:31:238 (6) - NC
  
  for the NC i only follow some because it ruin my consistency (mostly i nc every two downbeat in this diff) and to warn the player that some rhythm change from 1/4 to 1/3

Cobra wrote:

This needs to be ranked ;D
I'll race you muahahah

CDFA wrote:

HANZ UP IN DE EERR

Insane:
00:14:952 (5) - Add clap on beginning of slider fix
00:17:523 (1) - HRRNNGGHH AHH THIS SLOWDOWN lool
00:46:238 (3) - This note is placed weirdly fix
00:48:380 (1) - This slider looks weird like this o-o. It's not really parallel nor does it seem to be part of a notable pattern fix
00:50:095 (5) - ^ Like I see the M shape but like the distance is too far for me to really note it as such ok will reconsider
01:34:880 (1) - Remove claps nuuu i want to keep that clap pattern
01:44:095 (3) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835089 fix
02:01:238 (3) - Not symmetrical. Make sure that when you CTRL + H it, the points are equal as if no movement is done. i'm not really good at sliders, but i will try to fix >w<
02:14:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What's with the random difficulty jump? It was all streamy before and now it's like one of my "insanes" owo. i don't even realize it lol. but yeah, now i realize it was weird that the previous part was streamy then the next part is not. ok i will try to fix this
02:34:666 (1) - EEEEP! loool
03:08:952 (1) - Lower the first sliderpoint and the endpoint fix
03:10:666 (4) - ^ fix

Hard:
00:26:095 (3) - Lower the second sliderpoint fix
00:39:809 (5) - This might just be better as a curve will consider
01:02:095 (1,2,3) - Put this on the Y axis fix
01:07:238 (5) - Lower the first sliderpoint

Easy:
It's ok uguu

unyuu.