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Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hi! From my queue special round~ Sorry if I didn't mod http://osu.ppy.sh/s/61762 but congrats on your first ranked map! And sorry if it's a late mod.

Basically, it's perfect for me so I don't have anything to mod. STAR!
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Nice.

[Easy]
>.o)b

[Dekaane's Normal]
Don't space the rhythm
You didn't fully follow the play of organ either
00:09:046 - Add circle
00:10:611 - ^
00:11:916 - ^
00:13:220 - ^
00:14:785 - ^
00:16:090 - Add circle
00:35:916 - ^
00:39:829 - ^
00:41:394 - ^
00:42:176 - ^
00:48:177 (2,3) - Follow beat here, not lyric
00:52:350 - Make here to beat like:
this
00:56:524 (1,2,3) - ^
00:56:263 - Add circle
00:58:872 - ^
01:18:829 (3) - Decrease slider length by 1 tick with 1/2
01:19:872 (1) - Move 1 tick behind with 1/2
01:19:481 - Add reverse slider with 2 bounce here
01:23:003 - Add circle
01:23:133 (5) - Decrease slider length by 1 tick with 1/2

[Hard]
The DS, tapping speed, design, and maping can be insane, consider mapping it a little more harder and change to insane
00:53:394 - Make the tail silence
00:57:568 - ^

[0108]
lol >.o)b
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Considering the BPM is above 200, I consider this as a boss-like Normal, so I'm really trying to have the rhythm as catchy as possible to be friendly enough, and vocals are the best way to do this imo. If I add some of the circles you suggested they'd have to tap 230 BPM 1/2 notes, which is quite hard to hit properly to a mid-low player without making him hurry. And I really don't want to add anything in the "eins, zwei, drei" (1,2,3) part in the chorus.

Made some changes in the end though, thanks o/

My update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=avXM2z7a

Edit: Also, I'd suggest to use 00:51:829 as preview point x:
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
pkhg

DEAncientNaga wrote:

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Nice.

[Easy]
>.o)b
:3
[Hard]
The DS, tapping speed, design, and maping can be insane, consider mapping it a little more harder and change to insane.Not really fast tapping, some of the objects are sliders :P I'll see if i can make it a more easier
00:53:394 - Make the tail silence
00:57:568 - ^ Not needed :P
Updated Dake's diff.
Thanks for moding ^^
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
EASY

01:24:698 (3) - Drag the last point slightly down (1-2 squares)

NORMAL

00:28:090 (2,3) - reposition to

Can't mod further than that :/ Sorry, this was a rather shitty mod.. Don't give me kudosu if you prefer not to.

You've been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
pkhg

yurunneram wrote:

EASY

01:24:698 (3) - Drag the last point slightly down (1-2 squares)Moved 1 square.

Can't mod further than that :/ Sorry, this was a rather shitty mod.. Don't give me kudosu if you prefer not to.

You've been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram
Even if it is a little mod I appreciate it :D
Thanks
ushiromiya _maria
26 posts
Joined August 2012
ushiromiya _maria
Hi pkhg! From your mod request on Maria's modding queuee, here:

[Genreral]
The offset is out of place.

[Easy]
Offset:8,524
00:34:611 (1) - Mayb add finish at the end?
00:42:959 (1) - Whistle doesn't sound good.
In the rest too. Mayb change them for finish.
You can add a spinner al the end of th song.

[Normal]
Offset:8,524
Move this 01:19:220 (4) - to here01:19:350 -
Move this 01:19:742 - to here 01:19:611 -
01:20:655 - Add a circle.
01:23:263 (5) - Mak it finish here 01:23:524 -

[Hard]
No problems found,only some hitsounds out of place, oh and the offset.

That's all, Good Luck!
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
pkhg
Sorry, no changes :P
Waiting for Dake's reply
Cloudchaser
2,327 posts
Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser

pkhg wrote:

Waiting for Dake's reply
1 month after... *cof*
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Oops, sowwy ;_; *slaps himself*
And double sowwy because there won't be changes, I'm following the instrumental for the last part, following vocals would result in a rhythm harder to catch imo.
*kills himself*
*dies*
AruOtta
1,296 posts
Joined May 2012
AruOtta
DON'T DIE DAKE !!!

Mod =D :

[Easy]
00:51:829 (6) - This circle is so near the slider (5), it's quite ugly

[Deekane's Normal]
00:48:177 (2,3,1) - Distance snap
01:08:003 (1,2,3) - ^
01:13:220 (2) - Try this patern (and don't forget symmetry between 2,3 and 4)

01:19:220 (4) - This circle isn't needed

[Taiko Muzukashii]
It's as hard as oni diff.

[Hard]
00:26:785 (1) - Try this patern (don't forget distance snap)


[0108]
01:21:698 (1) - Try this patern


Good luck *u*
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane

Kenterz9 wrote:

DON'T DIE DAKE !!! /*I'm still alive~

[Deekane's Normal]
00:48:177 (2,3,1) - Distance snap /*Oops, fixed
01:08:003 (1,2,3) - ^ /*So many people are pointing this well, I've fixed it :c
01:13:220 (2) - Try this patern (and don't forget symmetry between 2,3 and 4) /*Made something very similar, just avoided the overlap.
01:19:220 (4) - This circle isn't needed /*It's needed for the background music.
Thanks for mod :3
My update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=avXM2z7a
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
pkhg

Kenterz9 wrote:

Mod =D :

[Easy]
00:51:829 (6) - This circle is so near the slider (5), it's quite ugly Fixed

[Taiko Muzukashii]
It's as hard as oni diff. Problem? :D

[Hard]
00:26:785 (1) - Try this patern (don't forget distance snap) Mine is better :P



Good luck *u*
Thanks for mod :D
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Ello! :) Le random mod!

[Easy]
00:11:133 (3) - NC?
00:20:003 (4,5) - Might sound better if they where default soft-whistle imo ^^'
00:24:177 (4,5) - ^
00:30:437 (1) - Add a finish on the head.
00:34:611 (1) And 00:36:698 (3) would look better if they had a similar shape (you could partially form a symmetry on the horizontal axis).
00:42:959 (1) - Add a finish on the head.
00:49:220 (5) - NC
01:24:698 (3) - Sounds better with default soft-whistle on the tail.

[Dekaane's Normal]
00:20:003 (3,4) - Might sound better if they where default soft-whistle imo^^'
00:24:177 (3,4) - ^

[Hard]
  1. This is a small suggestion, but could you try to lower the slider velocity to 1.40? BPM's already high enough as it is.
  2. Ar +1 or 2, I feel that it just doesn't add up with the same speed of those sliders x.x
00:13:611 (3,4) - Could form a bit of symmetry here if these two sliders were similar in shape.
01:15:046 (6) - NC
01:17:394 (1) - Add finish
01:21:568 (1) - ^ on the head of the slider.

[Insane]
00:51:307 (3) - There's a long pause at that part, so it looks better if it was something like this for style:

Urgh, sorry the points look really bad, I'm not quite sure exactly myself how to make it x.x But hopefully you understand what I mean?

Hope this helps~! :D
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
@10crystalmask01: I really like how the normal whistle sounds there, so no changes for now, thanks for modding though :3
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
pkhg
Revived

Welcome to 2013 c;
Arphimigon
1,650 posts
Joined December 2014
Arphimigon

pkhg wrote:

Welcome to 2013 c;
Ulqui
710 posts
Joined December 2011
Ulqui
Hi :3

Taiko Muzukashii

Delete
00:08:916
00:11:003
00:15:176

Add
00:09:046 d
00:11:133 d
00:15:307 d

Big Note
00:45:046
00:54:437
01:08:394
01:09:046


Kuro's Taiko Oni

Change To Big Notes
00:57:568
00:59:655
01:05:916
01:06:176
01:06:307
01:06:959
01:08:003
01:08:394 Big Don
01:08:785
01:13:220
It's a taiko diff, don't be afraid with the big notes n.n

01:17:394 - 01:25:742 this is just a suggestion but you could do something more difficult :33
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
pkhg

Ulquiii wrote:

Hi :3

Taiko Muzukashii

Delete
00:08:916 ok
00:11:003 ok
00:15:176

Add
00:09:046 d ok
00:11:133 d ok
00:15:307 d

Big Note
00:45:046
00:54:437
01:08:394
01:09:046
no me parecen necesarios :3
HappyRocket88
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Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
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Modeo en español porque puedo. n.n

ALGUNOS COMENTARIOS GENERALES
  1. Te debía este mod desde hace una semana, creo. Y ahora estoy aquí modeando esta versión de pkhg de 2013.
  2. En este orden de ideas, este map tiene mucho SWAG. Mucha simetría, casi todo está blanket y gg, este mapa está casi perfecto. ;w;
  3. En lo que concierne mi mod, sólo son sugerencias que presiento podrían mejorar el estilo y flujo del mapa en cada dificultad. Es importante puntualizar que me baso sólo en mi experiencia personal y [google:1337]Ranking Criteria[/google:1337]
  4. Para concluir, y como siempre, espero este mapa sea ranked aunque haya visto muchas versiones de ellas en osu. Así que no te rindas y sigue siendo ese microondas que nos calienta. o3o
✿ General ✿

COSAS GENERALES SOBRE EL MAPA

  1. IMAGEN DE FONDO No sé si esto sea un punto relevante a la hora de modear, pero considero pertinente que todas las dificultades tengan la misma imagen de fondo o que cada una tenga una diferente... Pero no le des ese privilegio a Dake please. xD
  2. INSANE DIFF NO ESTA TERMINADA Tal vez alguien se puso a trolear mientras mapeabas la insane de esta canción. Apenas tiene 00:32 segundos mapeados. xD Por favor, termínala para hacer el mod adecuado. n.n
  3. AUDIO BITRATE IN VAL0180 Esta extra dificultad presenta advertencias cuando abres el aimod ya que no es el mismo de las demás dificultades. o.o
  4. CONFLICTO EN LAS TAGS Asegúrate que las Tags sean las mismas en cada dificultad, ya que todas son las mismas menos en la Easy. :idea:
  5. KIAI ISN'T SNAPPED El kiai de algunas de las dificultades, tales como la Insane, Hard, Laturn's normal o la Easy, no tienen el stack apropiado en la línea de tiempo. Es importante arreglar esto. Creo.

✿ Dificultades disponibles ✿

0108

  1. GENERAL Muy bien mapeado. Sin embargo, considero reducir aquellos streams que podrían terminar en un sobre mapeo excesivo en el coro. Es sólo una sugerencia, pero en general, muy buen trabajo.
  2. 00:15:046 (6) NC?

Insane

  1. Lo primero que sugiero sería arreglar los kiais que no están snapeados en la línea de tiempo.
  2. A continuación, podrías terminar de mapear la insane desde aquí 00:32:785. No estaría nada mal. XD (Te puedo ayudar si quieres \(o.o)/)
  3. 00:17:916 (5) ¿Qué tal si pones este círculo encima de este slider 00:18:307 (7) para arreglar "blanket" aquí?
  4. 00:18:698 (8) ^ 00:18:959 (1)

Hard

  1. GENERAL Todo está tan blanket y simétricamente hablando, perfecto. ¡Génial!
  2. 00:14:916 (6) ¿Podrías alejar ese círculo un poco del slider 00:14:133 (4) para hacer blanket?
  3. 01:08:003 (1,2) Tal vez si escuchas está parte en 50%, notarás que ese el final de ese slider no encaja en el beat de la canción. ¿Qué tal si lo reemplazas con algo como esto
  4. 01:16:611 ¿No falta un 1/2 de slider aquí?
  5. 01:16:872 ¿Quizás un círculo encajaría aquí?

Laturn's Normal

  1. Lo primero que sugiero sería arreglar los kiais que no están snapeados en la línea de tiempo.
  2. Y ya. o.o El resto está perfecto. Para mí, claro.

Dekaane's normal

  1. Lo primero que sugiero sería arreglar los kiais que no están snapeados en la línea de tiempo.
  2. ¿Cambiar su salvaje fondo por el mismo de todas las diffs maybe? xD
  3. 00:52:350 (1) Quita este NC, ¿quizá sea mucho para una normal no?

Easy

  1. Lo primero que sugiero sería arreglar los kiais que no están snapeados en la línea de tiempo.
  2. Aquí está el problema de las Tags, please.
  3. El resto está perfecto. n.n
Kuro
836 posts
Joined July 2012
Kuro

Ulquiii wrote:

Kuro's Taiko Oni

Change To Big Notes
00:57:568
00:59:655
01:05:916
01:06:176
01:06:307
01:06:959
01:08:003
01:08:394 Big Don
01:08:785
01:13:220
It's a taiko diff, don't be afraid with the big notes n.n

01:17:394 - 01:25:742 this is just a suggestion but you could do something more difficult :33
However, the overuse of finishers is not idea for any map. No change, all rejected.
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
pkhg fix metadata pls

Acerca del NC, lo lo cambiaré por el momento, ya que es una parte diferente a la del slider. Y el kiai si está ajustado en mi diff :C
Y no le diré adios a mi fondo de Minene >:C
Tengo ganas de remapear esto, rip
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