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Hi Xinely (:3 」_)=3

From my queue m4m :)

[General]


Letterbox during breaks remove all diff


[Easy]

00:09:078 (3,4) This is slider pattern shape is hard.. -> http://puu.sh/2lRrW
This seems appropriate for more flow

00:15:574 (1) hmm... spin and the distance is a little far, spin and closer.

00:34:109 (3) move x:208 y:96?

01:02:199 (4,1,2) A bad idea for this pattern, are the elements that are not suitable to play.
I want to change the pattern shape -> http://puu.sh/2lRvZ


[Normal]

00:01:434 (2) remove NC

00:25:129 (4) Hope this slider and 3 slider is symmetrical. http://puu.sh/2lRzn

00:33:727 (3,4) This is slider shape is.. bad shape.. The flow doesn't seem right at all.
change please -> http://puu.sh/2lRB5

00:40:415 (5,1) This is patten blanket, is blanket here pretty. -> http://puu.sh/2lRDe

00:57:613 (1) NC?


[Hard]

00:05:256 (1,2,3) hmm.. This doesn't matter greatly, But I think it would affect this player.
It can be mistaken as a stream, i recommend this pattern. -> http://puu.sh/2lRGs

00:30:670 (3,4) blanket -> http://puu.sh/2lRHV

00:43:090 (5) remove note The beat is very awkward
Is recommended to remove this note and the 4th and 5th slider street widening.

00:46:530 (7,1) Expand your distance with the slider. -> http://puu.sh/2lRLg

00:48:441 (4,5) hmm... this is pattern shape blanket? -> http://puu.sh/2lRMW is pretty pattern

01:14:045 (6,7,1) change this is pattern.. bad shape and flow.. -> http://puu.sh/2lRQ6

01:14:810 (2,3,4,5) remove (4) note and change beat -> http://puu.sh/2lRRc

01:16:721 (7,8) 01:14:045 (6,7,1) same


[Destiny]

01:15:957 (1,2,3,4,5) please this is stream shape change -> http://puu.sh/2lSOT


Good luck
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Hi! Mod from my modding queue.

EASY
00:03:345 (2) - NC here too (I don't really understnd why the first slider is only one combo and then the pattern change...)
00:32:007 (1) - maybe make the curve of this slider like the curve of the previous one (just a suggestion)
00:20:160 (2) - move it one grid up
01:09:077 (2,3) - maybe replace it whit a revers slider just to get it easyer, if you agree.
01:15:765 (2) - move it to x:48 - y:100 so it follow the previous slider (just a suggestion)
01:16:721 (3) - I don't really like the curve of this slider, in my opinion it could be better with a longer curve
01:13:664 - here the Kiai time stops add it also on this point. fix this also in the other diffs.

NORMAL
00:00:288 (1) - same as easy for the NC, why is only this slider whit only one combo, different from the following pattern?
00:57:612 (3) - move this x:80 - y:200 and make also this 00:58:568 (4) - slider symmetric to the previous
00:58:568 (4) - move 2 grid up and one right

HARD
00:00:288 (1) - same as normal for NC
00:17:294 - what do you think of something like this?

00:43:854 (1) - move to x:328 - y:240
01:10:033 (4) - move one grid up end one left
01:12:708 (5) - maybe make this slider end at 01:13:090 - and add a note at 01:13:281 -

I'm not very good at insane diff so I skip it, I prefer don't ruin it with stupid suggestions.
anyway good luck with this map! :)
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Hi~

[General]
  1. Add some more tags? (Characters' names, vocalists' names ect..)
[Insane]
  1. 00:24:938 - Add clap, 00:25:128 (6,8) - Add clap.
  2. 00:31:625 - Better as finish instead of whistle.
  3. 00:49:396 (5,6,7) - Put custom clap on all of these to follow the music.
  4. 01:01:434 (4) - New combo to help with spacing change.
  5. 01:12:135 - Whistle is unnecessary here.
[Hard]
  1. 01:26:657 - Remove whistle here, it became too noisy.
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:517 - You should try to add a note here for improved play.
  2. 00:24:364 - Replace whistle with clap.
  3. 00:49:969 (1) - Extend till 00:50:734 - or 00:50:925 - for improved rhythm.
  4. 01:14:810 (2,3,4) - Bad rhythm, better to remap this part.
[Easy]
  1. 01:24:364 (4,1) - Probably too close for an Easy.

Good luck~
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almost fixed in kiiwa's mod
thanks 4 mod all ~ >3<
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Re-re-re-recheck

[Hard]
01:15:383 (4,5) - exchange them like this to follow the vocal better?


[Destiny]
00:03:345 (3,4,5,6,1) - ctrl+h to this and move back to 304,308? The overlap with 00:02:389 (3,1,2) looks bad (and no NC between them). Also the flow between 00:04:109 (1,2) is better.
00:52:835 (10) - delete this note for rhythm consistency, because you have no note at 00:55:893 00:57:422 and 00:58:950.
01:02:198 (1) - the clap on slider end sounds weird and inconsistent.
01:07:549 (3) - make similar curve as 01:07:931 (4)? Like

00:12:708 (5) - ^ decrease the curve
00:26:657 (5) - ^ increase the curve and 00:27:039 (1) - decrease the curve:
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fixed everything and updated~
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argh. sorry I'm late :(
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Sorry my incaution. :(

[Hard]
00:38:887 - add a note here with clap, or the section is too empty.
00:48:059 - ^ If you wish
01:19:205 (6,7) - move a little to avoid the overlap?
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fixed everything too and updated (:
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Modding queue~

imo AR - 1

00:17:103 (1) - remove NC
00:15:574 (1) - remove NC
00:43:472 (3) - change to ->
and 00:44:237 (4) - add NC and 00:44:619 (1) - remove NC
00:56:084 (1) - same by 00:57:612 (3) (Slightly different..)
01:00:861 (3) - remove 2nd slider point..?
01:01:816 (5) - change by note + note
00:03:345 (6) - look so bad...
00:47:294 (2) - stack by x:442 y:72
01:20:924 (2) - more trim plz...
00:03:345 (3,4,5,6,1) - more trim plz
00:54:937 (2) - slider end -> stack by 00:53:791 (4)


GL :)
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MineC24 wrote:

Modding queue~

imo AR - 1 nope, i prefer setting like this

00:17:103 (1) - remove NC nope, since after 2 stanza
00:15:574 (1) - remove NC this is after spin lel
00:43:472 (3) - change to ->
and 00:44:237 (4) - add NC and 00:44:619 (1) - remove NC i prefer my own
00:56:084 (1) - same by 00:57:612 (3) (Slightly different..) is same imo since i copy paste
01:00:861 (3) - remove 2nd slider point..? nope, little curved is cute
01:01:816 (5) - change by note + note it's okay for me now
00:03:345 (6) - look so bad... please make me one better than that if u said bad ._.
00:47:294 (2) - stack by x:442 y:72 is stacked orz
01:20:924 (2) - more trim plz... it's okay imo
00:03:345 (3,4,5,6,1) - more trim plz :?
00:54:937 (2) - slider end -> stack by 00:53:791 (4) break normal spacing, can't do that since i'm think about that to


GL :)
Thanks 4 try modding btw (:
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Add an NC for anti-jump in [Hard].

Bubbled.
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popped because baka connection orz
aaa thanks btw even i popped that
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Bubble fix.
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thanks again popner :oops:
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Self-popped.

The wiki have a wrong information of artist, and it should be blue drops. Sorry for my mistake.

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Rebubbled.
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6x recheck o3o
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Hi ~ Xinely ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Destiny]

  1. 01:00:670 (1) - Remove circle,i think it's unnecessary.
  2. 01:27:326 (6) - ^

[Hard]

  1. HP-1 is better.
  2. 01:00:670 (5) - Same as Insane.

[Easy]

  1. 00:53:026 (1,2) - More better rhythm,like this.
  2. 01:00:287 (3) - Change a 3/2 slider on 01:00:479,like this.

OK ~ Not bad your 3rd map ~ i hope you make better map in future.

Anyway call me back ~
;)
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Fix All~
thanks Rika-san >w<
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