thanks baka ~
Hinsvar wrote:Re-mod for this.
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*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.
- Eh wait, just realized that the BG's size is 724 KB... Reduce it to ~150-200 KB plz; the difference of a half MBs is quite significant, you know... resize in ~
- 00:23:217 (3) - ...Make it softly curved? (If you don't know what I mean, don't use the red node, just the normal one for the middle of the slider). oke
- 00:39:651 (3,1) - Make them look like [url=osu.ppy.sh/ss/631613]this[/url]? done120,112,39651,2,0,B|84:144|80:212,1,105,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
- 00:51:498 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631789 ? no .3.148,108,51498,2,0,P|88:120|36:180,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
- 01:06:211 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631820 ? no .3.128,124,66211,2,0,P|96:132|48:116,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
- 01:18:823 (4) - http://puu.sh/29aIl (Stuff happened with the in-game screenshot uploader, so I switched to puush)? no .3.328,272,78823,2,2,P|360:252|400:244,1,70
- 01:26:084 (1) - Begin from 01:25:893 instead? done
- 00:01:434 (2,3,4) - Make them look like [url]this[/url]? lel baka
- 00:09:459 (1) - Move to (324,88)? It looks better since the curve is linked with 00:08:313 (5)'s shape. done
- 00:12:517 (4,5) - Place (5) on the left side of (4) instead? I recommend (84,204). fix with mine .3.
- 00:17:103 (3) - Move to (48,120)? Looks better if it's placed in the left of 00:16:721 (2) instead of right. done
- 00:22:453 (1) - The curve looks weird... Move the red node to (312,296)? k
- 00:29:332 (1,2) - ...Won't this be confusing? Make them look like this? done
- 00:39:459 (4) - Move this two tiny (level 4) grids up so the blanket-ish pattern of 00:38:504 (3,4) will look better? If you did this, move 00:40:606 (1) to (128,160) to avoid touching between the two objects. done
- 00:41:561 (2) - I don't think this slider needs to have any red nodes... It just looks weird. just one
- 00:44:619 (1,2) - Combine them into a 3/2 slider instead? no
- 00:46:721 (1) - Make it curved down instead of up like this? nope
- 01:14:810 (2,3,4) - Make them look like this? no
- 01:26:084 (3,4,1,2) - The rhythm is really weird here... This, maybe? fix with mine pattern244,248,85893,2,0,P|192:240|136:256,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
- 00:17:867 - Remove finish? Feels too loud wa
- 00:19:396 (6,1) - Swap NC plz.
- 00:22:453 (6,1) - ^
- 00:46:530 (6) - How about if you move this to 00:46:721 and add a circle at 00:46:530, stacked above (6)'s head? Fits the vocal, IMO, and it's far better for you to follow that here.
- 00:50:733 (3,4) - Ctrl+G for the rhythm? Remember to rearrange the pattern. Follows the vocal better, IMO.
- 00:12:708 (5,6,7) - Remove (5,6), move (7) to (5)'s place, and then make it repeat once? no nyaan
- 01:24:173 (4,5) - Make this a circle and a 1/2 slider that repeats once, instead? no nya nyanyan~
- 01:26:657 (3,1) - Ctrl+G for the rhythm? fix ~
That's it I guess~
Good luck on the way