blue drops - Heart no Kakuritsu (TV Size)

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popner
Recheck.

I was going to ignore such flaws the previous time because of the 1st map, but I change my mind now.. This may be bad for your future mapping. The flwas are about spacing, they makes the composition of your map not clear. If you lower the AR you will find them easily.

[Destiny]
00:02:389 (7,8,9) - spacing
00:19:205 (1,2,3,4,5) - the part is still not good enough. The spacing between 00:19:205 (1,2,3) seems random, so does the spacing between the parallel sliders (00:19:205 (1,4,5)).
00:22:453 (2,3,4) - similar case. This will be better:
00:47:676 (2) - similar case.
00:48:440 (4) - similar case.
00:50:924 (4,3) - try to avoid this overlap.
00:51:880 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - to flow better, you can try this: (notice the position of (1,2,3), and the movement direction)
00:54:173 (6,1,2) - similar case of spacing. (Like stack end of 00:54:555 (1) on 00:53:791 (4))
01:02:198 (1,2) - exchanging them will provide a better rhythm:
01:03:058 (4) - remove this circle? There it has no support in music. Also adjusting the spacing is needed if you apply this.
01:02:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - again about spacing, notice the red line I drew:
01:04:491 (1,2,3,4) - ^ similar case, try to adjust the spacing between the slider ends.
01:06:784 (7,1) - similar case
These are not all flaws, and I think you can find all of them now. It is your first map so I think you will put full effort on improving it. When you think your are ok, call me back again.

And 1366x768 BG:
popner
[Destiny]
Wrong metadata:
00:53:409 (2,3,4,5) - try to decrease the distance here, not fit the music imo.
Topic Starter
Xinely
fixed all ~ :3
popner
[Destiny]
Set audio leadin to 2000;
Set preview time to 61434;
Disable countdown.
Topic Starter
Xinely
careless X_X
fixed all~
mintong89
Offset should be -476 to let big white tick on downbeat~
Topic Starter
Xinely
thanks mint :oops:
Lally
ohai random from #modreqs o3o/

[General]
i'll suggest to use softer combo colours like this:
if you like they here is the code:
Combo1 : 255,155,255
Combo2 : 145,216,120
Combo3 : 73,65,226
Combo4 : 182,183,231

Inconstency in Kiai:

Destiny
#1: Starts on 00:07:167 - ends on 00:07:262
#2: Starts on 01:02:199 - ends on 01:13:664
#3: Starts on 01:14:428 - ends on 01:27:422
Easy
#1: Starts on 00:07:167 - ends on 00:07:262
#2: Starts on 01:02:198, ends on 01:13:664
#3: Starts on 01:14:428 - ends on 01:27:421
Hard
#1: Starts on 00:07:167 - ends on 00:07:262
#2: Starts on 01:02:199 - ends on 01:13:664
#3: Starts on 01:14:428 - ends on 01:27:422
Normal
#1: Starts on 00:07:167 - ends on 00:07:262
#2: Starts on 01:02:199 - ends on 01:13:664
#3: Starts on 01:14:428 - ends on 01:27:422

[Easy]
Snapping:
  1. 01:02:199 - unsnapped inherited point
  2. 01:27:421 - same about here


Spacing
  1. 00:27:995 (3,1) - thi 2 objects are to close to each other
  2. 00:48:441 (3,1) - make spacing consistent here


Hitsounds:
  1. 00:45:766 (3) - remove whistle and add a clap at slider start to kepp costency with your prev pattern since i don't see a rhythm change here
  2. 00:46:721 (1) - add a clap at slider end to kepp constency
  3. 01:06:211 (2) - add a clap or a finish at slider end because it feels really empty without any hitsound
  4. 01:18:823 (2) - remove whistle from slider body i find it useless here


[Normal]
Spacing:
  1. 00:06:402 (1,2) - are to close
  2. 00:12:517 (4,5) - same about this 2
  3. 01:13:664 (4,1) - look here too
  4. 01:19:778 (1,2) - spacing o3o
  5. 01:24:746 (2,1) - this time to far


Hitsounds:
  1. 00:25:129 (4) - add a clap on slider start
  2. 01:16:148 (5) - remove whistle from slider body
  3. 01:18:441 (3) - same about here^


[Destiny]
lol nc mod,it is better if you follow vocal for NC, atm they are really random ( i never care about nc but here are really random)
  1. 00:17:294 (8) - new combo
  2. 00:36:785 (8) - new combo
  3. 00:48:823 (6) - new combo
  4. 00:52:262 (9) - new combo
  5. 00:55:320 (6) - new combo
  6. 01:04:492 (9) - new combo here and remove it at 01:05:256 (1) -
  7. 01:07:549 (7) - new combo here and remove it at 01:08:218 (1) -
  8. 01:10:606 (9) - new combo here and remove it at 01:11:371 (1) -
  9. 01:12:899 - new combo here
  10. 01:16:721 (10) - new combo and remove from 01:17:485 (1) -
  11. 01:19:396 - new combo here
  12. 01:22:645 - new combo here and remove it from 01:23:600 (1) -



hope it help \o3o/ good luck
Hinsvar
Xinely told me to help her for the NCs in Destiny, so I'll be the one to reply to your mod there...

...but in the end I reworked every NC-related stuff, so I ended up didn't using anything from your mod.

Yeah .-.

Still, thanks for modding her map~
DJNightmare
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Blue = Suggestion
Green = Comments

[Easy] & [Normal]
I can't find anything here. So Good Job :D

[Hard]
00:10:988 (4) - How about changing this to New Combo instead of the long slider?

[Destiny]
00:01:052 (4) - Move to the Right by 1 Grid to ensure consistent distance between each note
00:56:944 (5,6,7,8) - Move Down by 1 Grid ^

Overall, It was nicely mapped, the hitsound seems alittle plain though, but i think it is okay :3

Good luck on your map :D
Topic Starter
Xinely
fix all in destiny
thanks :oops:
IntellectualBoy
Hi Xinely (:3 」_)=3

From my queue m4m :)

[General]


Letterbox during breaks remove all diff


[Easy]

00:09:078 (3,4) This is slider pattern shape is hard.. -> http://puu.sh/2lRrW
This seems appropriate for more flow

00:15:574 (1) hmm... spin and the distance is a little far, spin and closer.

00:34:109 (3) move x:208 y:96?

01:02:199 (4,1,2) A bad idea for this pattern, are the elements that are not suitable to play.
I want to change the pattern shape -> http://puu.sh/2lRvZ


[Normal]

00:01:434 (2) remove NC

00:25:129 (4) Hope this slider and 3 slider is symmetrical. http://puu.sh/2lRzn

00:33:727 (3,4) This is slider shape is.. bad shape.. The flow doesn't seem right at all.
change please -> http://puu.sh/2lRB5

00:40:415 (5,1) This is patten blanket, is blanket here pretty. -> http://puu.sh/2lRDe

00:57:613 (1) NC?


[Hard]

00:05:256 (1,2,3) hmm.. This doesn't matter greatly, But I think it would affect this player.
It can be mistaken as a stream, i recommend this pattern. -> http://puu.sh/2lRGs

00:30:670 (3,4) blanket -> http://puu.sh/2lRHV

00:43:090 (5) remove note The beat is very awkward
Is recommended to remove this note and the 4th and 5th slider street widening.

00:46:530 (7,1) Expand your distance with the slider. -> http://puu.sh/2lRLg

00:48:441 (4,5) hmm... this is pattern shape blanket? -> http://puu.sh/2lRMW is pretty pattern

01:14:045 (6,7,1) change this is pattern.. bad shape and flow.. -> http://puu.sh/2lRQ6

01:14:810 (2,3,4,5) remove (4) note and change beat -> http://puu.sh/2lRRc

01:16:721 (7,8) 01:14:045 (6,7,1) same


[Destiny]

01:15:957 (1,2,3,4,5) please this is stream shape change -> http://puu.sh/2lSOT


Good luck
luxoDeh
Hi! Mod from my modding queue.

EASY
00:03:345 (2) - NC here too (I don't really understnd why the first slider is only one combo and then the pattern change...)
00:32:007 (1) - maybe make the curve of this slider like the curve of the previous one (just a suggestion)
00:20:160 (2) - move it one grid up
01:09:077 (2,3) - maybe replace it whit a revers slider just to get it easyer, if you agree.
01:15:765 (2) - move it to x:48 - y:100 so it follow the previous slider (just a suggestion)
01:16:721 (3) - I don't really like the curve of this slider, in my opinion it could be better with a longer curve
01:13:664 - here the Kiai time stops add it also on this point. fix this also in the other diffs.

NORMAL
00:00:288 (1) - same as easy for the NC, why is only this slider whit only one combo, different from the following pattern?
00:57:612 (3) - move this x:80 - y:200 and make also this 00:58:568 (4) - slider symmetric to the previous
00:58:568 (4) - move 2 grid up and one right

HARD
00:00:288 (1) - same as normal for NC
00:17:294 - what do you think of something like this?
00:43:854 (1) - move to x:328 - y:240
01:10:033 (4) - move one grid up end one left
01:12:708 (5) - maybe make this slider end at 01:13:090 - and add a note at 01:13:281 -

I'm not very good at insane diff so I skip it, I prefer don't ruin it with stupid suggestions.
anyway good luck with this map! :)
Kiiwa
Hi~

[General]
  1. Add some more tags? (Characters' names, vocalists' names ect..)
[Insane]
  1. 00:24:938 - Add clap, 00:25:128 (6,8) - Add clap.
  2. 00:31:625 - Better as finish instead of whistle.
  3. 00:49:396 (5,6,7) - Put custom clap on all of these to follow the music.
  4. 01:01:434 (4) - New combo to help with spacing change.
  5. 01:12:135 - Whistle is unnecessary here.
[Hard]
  1. 01:26:657 - Remove whistle here, it became too noisy.
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:517 - You should try to add a note here for improved play.
  2. 00:24:364 - Replace whistle with clap.
  3. 00:49:969 (1) - Extend till 00:50:734 - or 00:50:925 - for improved rhythm.
  4. 01:14:810 (2,3,4) - Bad rhythm, better to remap this part.
[Easy]
  1. 01:24:364 (4,1) - Probably too close for an Easy.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Xinely
almost fixed in kiiwa's mod
thanks 4 mod all ~ >3<
popner
Re-re-re-recheck

[Hard]
01:15:383 (4,5) - exchange them like this to follow the vocal better?

[Destiny]
00:03:345 (3,4,5,6,1) - ctrl+h to this and move back to 304,308? The overlap with 00:02:389 (3,1,2) looks bad (and no NC between them). Also the flow between 00:04:109 (1,2) is better.
00:52:835 (10) - delete this note for rhythm consistency, because you have no note at 00:55:893 00:57:422 and 00:58:950.
01:02:198 (1) - the clap on slider end sounds weird and inconsistent.
01:07:549 (3) - make similar curve as 01:07:931 (4)? Like
00:12:708 (5) - ^ decrease the curve
00:26:657 (5) - ^ increase the curve and 00:27:039 (1) - decrease the curve:
Topic Starter
Xinely
fixed everything and updated~
scanter
argh. sorry I'm late :(
popner
Sorry my incaution. :(

[Hard]
00:38:887 - add a note here with clap, or the section is too empty.
00:48:059 - ^ If you wish
01:19:205 (6,7) - move a little to avoid the overlap?
Topic Starter
Xinely
fixed everything too and updated (:
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