what i'm not reply is fixedStrawberry wrote:
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- um such clean. :3
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- Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
- None!
- Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )changed but my own
- i have no idea about STR 2 on this diff.. it make the effect that always appear three or more slider ticks on one slider, it looks really wired and also about heard. idk.. persenally i suggest that decreasing the STR to 1 and it is totally enough imo. :3
---- 00:11:370 (2) - i'd like to move it onto x.144 y.284 so that the start circle of this slider would be put on the same line with the previous slider's tail~ looks much better for me~ yea and don't forget to make adjustment about spacing of the following repeat slider~
---- 00:12:708 (1) - yea after the spacing changed (x.294 y.106 is prefer).. i feel the rotation angle of that slider seems a bit forced and not very suitalbe.. try move the anchor on that tail to x.344 y.112?~
---- 00:13:281 (1) - the spinner should be start at the downbeat 00:13:281 and also don't forget to extend it 1/2 for the same ending point as present~
---- 00:20:160 (1,2) - the rhythm here should be~
- 00:29:905 (3) - i'd prefer to make the slider like that~
- 00:38:122 (1) - um why not just move it onto x.336 y.132 so that the circle would be on the same line with the previous straight slider~ and looks much neater.
---- 00:51:498 (2) - looks forced for me. maybe you can try to make that like this (adjusting the following notes spacing also, and remove the whistle on that tail either.
---- 01:00:287 (3) - rhythm issue. it's okay imo
- 01:09:077 (3,4) - i feel that you can just merge these notes to one 3/2 slider~ anyhow the beat on 01:09:459 is needless but has been expressed out by that slider's end..
- Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
- 00:01:816 (2) - useless whistle on that head~ you know it is also a bit loud for that quiet intro part, maybe it would be nice idea if you decreasing the volume to 30% on that whistle.~ or just remove that whistle. :3 (also at 00:04:491 (2)~
---- 00:32:007 (1,2) - yea the whistles on that slider's heads sound also needless. i recommend to remove them~
---- 00:40:606 (1) - also remove the whislte on that tail. (same thing at 00:46:721 (1)'s tail and 00:54:555 (2)'s head.
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- Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
- None!
- Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
- 00:08:313 (5) - split that slider to circle+slider? (same at 00:17:485 (4) no
- 00:19:396 (2,3) - ummm~ no
- 00:38:504 (3) - make a curve here would be a much better effection imo~ whether up or downward. :3 (notice the position since it might be overlapped if you make upward that slider, anyway the downward is better imo~.
---- 00:45:001 (2,3,4) - make adjustment about that arrange here.. looks so randomly at least make them (1,2,3) on the same line... orz it's okay imo
- Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
- 00:23:982 (3) - the whistle on that tail sounds really wired.. maybe you can just try to remove it?~~
---- 01:07:549 (1) - finish with whistle sounds really noisy.. just remove that whistle plz?~
---- 01:16:147 (5) - um also here.. i'd prefer to remove the whistle on that tail..
0gre: i can't open that link, please give me again D: