hi!
General- Hmm the bg seems like just a screenshot and I think it could be more extravagant with this song xD I suggest asking for a cool Twinkle bg here:
t/71064&start=2070 (if you're in a hurry, I could ask meiikyuu personally
) This is optional ofc xD
- Change ArtistUnicode to
소녀시대-태티서- Weiren's Normal is missing the video!
Weiren's Normal01:10:741 (1) - Delete NC, NC on next note
01:11:832 (2) -
Unrankable, you can't see the hole, please make the hole bigger or redesign
01:18:377 (1) - lol something went wrong here
01:24:923 (1) - Finish on head
01:30:923 (1) - Delete NC, i didn't get the single combo
01:42:377 (3) - Finish
02:11:832 (2,3,4) - it's better if you keep them stacked imo, or at least keep distance snap x.8
02:12:923 (5) - NC
02:35:832 (3,4,5) - similar as before, keep them stacked or use distance snap
There are more triplets like above so be sure to check those out
03:33:650 (7) - NC?
03:35:832 (9) -
Unrankable, the slider path and "holes" are very unclear,
though i admit it looks cool xDI suggest to check your combos again as some were inconsistent. Try to put NCs on the start of new stanzas and stuff =v=
Hard00:50:014 (3) - Finish on head and NC
01:15:105 (4) - Move down a bit so (6) gets some space
01:23:286 - Add something here, feels more natural starting on the downbeat
01:33:650 (5) - NC
01:40:468 (1,2,3) - use Soft sample set
01:51:923 (4,5) - i understand this is for an echo effect but the overlaps felt kinda forced? this is a bit of a stretch but its an idea
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/708226 xD
02:18:105 (1) - Delete NC
02:43:468 (3) - Finish on head
02:53:832 (2,3) - funny overlap
03:02:014 (5,6) - spread these out to equalize the spacing more throughout the same combo
03:09:650 (1,3) - Try to stack the tails of these sliders
03:57:923 (8) - NC, delete NC on 03:58:741 (1) -
Awesome song!! <3
I would just double check hitsounds and flow of patterns~
I'll leave the star for now so you can get some more mods =v=