1. Another (5 stars, 553 notes)
2. Beginner (2.07 stars, 124 notes)
3. Extra (5 stars, 585 notes)
4. Hyper (4.98 stars, 356 notes)
5. Normal (3.69 stars, 155 notes)

RikiH_ wrote:

General

You should rename Normal in Standard because Beatmania Maps' diffs have this name
Can you add a spinner at the end of each diff? "Normal“ is fine.

Normal

01:49:514 (1) - Remove this NC, it doesn't fit imo. The following NCs fit. ok


Another

00:02:097 (2,3) - Well, I'm not sure about this. When I played the map I couldn't read it ok
00:04:764 (2,3) - The same ok
00:06:347 (5) - Ctrl+g on this. If yo do it, ctrl+g also on 00:06:680 (6) This hould improve the flow that will breaks the flow if i do it.
00:12:847 (4,5,6) - This should be 1/8
00:18:014 (5) - You have a speed-up here. You should put a NC on this to make it noticeable! Put a NC also here 00:18:264 (6)
00:22:014 (2) - This slowdown isn't readable...
00:23:597 (4) - Remove this note, it doesn't fit these triple totally playable...
00:27:264 (2) - ^
00:28:930 (4) - ^
00:31:264 (2) - ^
00:35:680 (2,4) - Unreadable, you must move these away from under the slider (My suggesion: x:256 y:160)
00:51:014 (1) - I'd replace this with a stack, something like this:

00:59:847 (6,7) - Nope, you should put the slider before the circle. I mean, make these like you did in 00:58:514 (5,6) It's hard to explain in english a varying is needful
01:06:347 (6,7) - Why don't you make these with the new algorhythm?
01:13:680 (1) - It's not readable, it's unrankable!
01:14:847 (1) - The same!
01:22:264 (2) - NC here, you have a speed-up on the previous slider
01:31:180 (1) - Why this NC?
01:49:514 (2) - NC here because of the speed-up ...? it already had?

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from my queue! Sorry for shitty english

General

You should rename Normal in Standard because Beatmania Maps' diffs have this name
Can you add a spinner at the end of each diff?

Beginner

00:01:847 (1) - Well, why did you start the map from a red line? There is a sound here 00:01:680 So you shold start the slider here
00:04:514 (1) - The same, start this 1/2 earlier
00:07:180 (1) - ^. Here you should end the previous slider 1/2 earlier for spacing
00:13:180 (2,3) - This is a bit hard for an easy. Move 00:13:180 (2) 1/2 earlier and adjust the spacing
00:18:514 (2,3) - ^
00:31:680 - Add a note?
00:32:180 (3) - Move it 1/2 later
00:54:514 (3,4) - Too hard. Replace with a slider maybe
01:05:180 (3,4) - ^
01:29:180 (1,2) - ^
01:30:680 - Start a slider here and end it in 01:30:847 (5) It sounds better
01:33:347 - The same! End it in 01:33:514 (2)
01:41:180 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier
01:43:014 (3) - This is not bad, but you can improve it a bit by doing it symmetrical
01:45:680 (1) - Move it fro under the slider, it confuses newbie players
01:46:514 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier
01:50:514 (3,4) - Replace with a slider
01:52:014 (1,2) - ^

Normal

01:49:514 (1) - Remove this NC, it doesn't fit imo. The following NCs fit.

Hyper

00:10:014 (1,1,1) - Remove these NCs. The song says "One, two, three, four" so it's better to have 1,2,3,4 and not 1,1,1,1!
00:11:347 (2) - Ctrl+g on this. If you do it, the ctrl+g also on 00:11:680 (3) This should improve the flow
00:12:847 (2,3,4) - his should be 1/8
00:19:847 (11) - Unstack this, your diff is hard enough
00:40:347 (2) - You should stack the note perfectly under the slider
00:55:680 (1,3) - I'm not sure this is readable...
01:02:180 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I disagree with this. Long streams are too hard for Hyper diffs. Replace it with 1/4 sliders
01:16:847 (2,3,4) - This should be 1/8
01:31:180 (1) - Why this nc?
01:19:847 (5) - The repeat doesn't follow the music imo, remove it and make a 1/2 slider
01:37:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Replace with 1/4 sliders
01:40:847 (2,3,4) - This should be 1/8
01:54:347 (1) - Replace whistle with finish

Another

00:02:097 (2,3) - Well, I'm not sure about this. When I played the map I couldn't read it
00:04:764 (2,3) - The same
00:06:347 (5) - Ctrl+g on this. If yo do it, ctrl+g also on 00:06:680 (6) This hould improve the flow
00:12:847 (4,5,6) - This should be 1/8 for gameplay fluence,1/4 is way better.
00:18:014 (5) - You have a speed-up here. You should put a NC on this to make it noticeable! Put a NC also here 00:18:264 (6) okay,Will move the NC before to here.
00:22:014 (2) - This slowdown isn't readable...
00:23:597 (4) - Remove this note, it doesn't fit
00:27:264 (2) - ^
00:28:930 (4) - ^
00:31:264 (2) - ^
00:35:680 (2,4) - Unreadable, you must move these away from under the slider (My suggesion: x:256 y:160) looked at many player tested it,i think it is fine.
00:51:014 (1) - I'd replace this with a stack, something like this:

00:59:847 (6,7) - Nope, you should put the slider before the circle. I mean, make these like you did in 00:58:514 (5,6) It's hard to explain in english
01:06:347 (6,7) - Why don't you make these with the new algorhythm? i didnt really catch what you mean,but i think i just followed the vocal here o.o
01:13:680 (1) - It's not readable, it's unrankable!
01:14:847 (1) - The same!
01:22:264 (2) - NC here, you have a speed-up on the previous slider
01:31:180 (1) - Why this NC?
01:49:514 (2) - NC here because of the speed-up
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Wow, this is one of the hardest maps I've ever seen. It's really good, but you have to improve the Beginner and fix some things in Another.
Take a star and good luck
If you have time can you mod my map? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/74274

MineC24 wrote:

Modding queue~

countdown

Hyper : countdown remove please. fixed.

Normal

00:29:514 (3) - move by x:120 y:296 fixed.
00:44:014 - add note here ok.

Another

imo OD - 1 No OD8 is fine.
00:07:514 (3) - .... change this pattern very confuse.. fixed.
00:34:680 (5) - move by x:392 y:216
00:56:847 (6) - stack this note (00:56:514 (5) ) No it's intentional.
01:13:681 (1) - nice slider
01:13:681 (1,1) - ^
01:23:680 (5) - closer plz intentional too, also here is totally playable and more fun.

ychao wrote:

I am confused about the vocalist (古川未鈴) here: is it Furukawa Misuzu or Furukawa Mirin?

未鈴 does romanise into Misuzu, but I seem to find only Mirin online...?

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Normal]

00:06:680 (3,4,1) This pattern is not uniform distance. http://puu.sh/2CzqH fixed
00:12:347 (1) kiai start point here add finish? k
00:23:014 (1) Spinner end add finish? i think this spin kiai time end here no
00:32:680 (3,4,5) The distance between the notes is not constant. fixed
01:01:514 (4,5) hmm.. i think this beat awkward, change this beat here -> http://puu.sh/2CzH0 no
01:16:347 (1) NC? no
01:36:180 (4,5) If you have modified this section to beat this exact fix same