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Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Sun Rainbow
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年5月26日星期日 at 11:29:08

Artist: Tamura Yukari
Title: W:Wonder tale (TV Size)
Source: Ore no Kanojo to Osananajimi ga Shuraba Sugiru
BPM: 158.5
Filesize: 17050kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.93 stars, 56 notes)
  2. Flask's Normal (4.23 stars, 144 notes)
  3. Hard (4.99 stars, 237 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 284 notes)
  5. Mamo's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 516 notes)
  6. Rainbow (5 stars, 288 notes)
  7. Taiko Muzukashii (4.53 stars, 239 notes)
Download: Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale (TV Size)
Download: Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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MP3 From KPY.
Video Will Change．
MapSet:
·Easy: Done
·Normal:By Flask Done
·Hard: Done
·Insane: Done
·Taiko:Done
Last edited by Sun Rainbow , edited 8 times in total.
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
來

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]
  1. Tags記得上
  2. Title加TV Size kpy只是忘記了 沒有明文規定不能上TV Size
[ Easy]
  • 從幾個方向講好了 spacing太大 SV太快 記住Easy難度是給新手玩的 不是3星以下就能叫做E/N 質量要出來
    也不是setting全部調到最低就叫Easy 排版至少要再近一點
[ Hard]
  1. 00:04:184 (2) - 變速要NC
  2. 00:24:344 (4) - 紅線沒有明顯的音 反而是重音有 所以節尾在重音 (縮短1/2)
  3. 00:29:590 (1) - 沒必要NC 兩個鼓點在一起就不用特別強調
  4. 00:46:803 (2,3) - 往前挪1/2 (3)的結尾不變 比較對vocal
  5. 00:48:115 (1) - 去掉finish 在音樂裡沒聽到finish的聲音 反而在重音才有 這個是停在紅線的所以就不用fin了
  6. 00:51:230 (2,3,4) - 沒必要做連啊 反而是你前面那麼平靜才轉個轉盤就突然來個三連啊違和啊
  7. 00:52:705 (6,1) - 這anti-jump你也擺的下去? 疊在一起才不會誤導別人以為那是1/2啊
  8. 00:54:016 - / 00:54:672 - 空著不好打 可以塞note不然就跟前面那個合成slider
  9. 00:55:656 (5,1) - 最好平行
  10. 01:00:574 (3) - 往前1/4然後藍線塞note 連打是從白線開始有音的
  11. 01:17:131 (1) - 尾巴finish有什麼意義呢 很吵
  12. 01:24:836 (4) - NC 因為你在01:25:656 (1) - 有下
  13. 01:26:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - 與其你前面要擺四顆note後面接這麼長的slider 不如就把那四顆刪了直接從一開始就slider到尾 這樣會比四顆note製造緊張感後啥恐怖的part都沒有跑出來還舒服一點
[ Insane]
  1. 00:04:184 (2) - 變速就NC
  2. 00:11:394 (4) - 這裡好奇怪啊 明明音樂是從重音開始的 確要在紅線就開始slider 真心覺得違和 所以就把這個換成一顆note+1/2 slider會比較好一點
  3. 00:16:639 (1,2,3) - 還是疊起來的好 前面都是1/2這裡突然1/4就夠奇怪了 還拆的這麼開
  4. 00:19:754 - 沒聽到finish的音 去掉
  5. 00:20:574 (5,6) - 先slider再note會對vocal一點
  6. 00:36:475 (1,2) - (1)加折返然後去掉(2)? 因為前面滿急促的這裡突然慢了下來就很違和 可能還有人認為是1/2點下去。。。
  8. 00:40:410 - 前面那一段用default clap什麼心態
  9. 00:54:672 (5,6,7) - 其實我覺得就算是故意的別人還是讀不出來 應該會被認為是兩個部份 前面是兩連 後面是跟前面慢1/2的slider 還是疊起來安全
  10. 01:09:426 (7,8,1) - ^
  11. 01:04:508 - 前面節奏這麼緊 突然就變成1/1很怪 至少下個note在這裡
  12. 01:06:312 (1) - 沒必要NC
  13. 01:16:148 (6) - clap
  14. 01:22:869 - / 01:23:525 - 基本上跟vocal是不錯 但這樣就有種空空的空虛感 打到一半突然要停下來會很不爽...就在這兩個點下個note在打擊上會比較有節奏感一點
    Hard跟Insane總體不錯 一些小地方注意一下會更好
[ Flask's Normal]
  1. remap pls
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Sun Rainbow

Flask wrote:

來

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]
  1. Tags記得上 k
  2. Title加TV Size kpy只是忘記了 沒有明文規定不能上TV SizeO Ok
[ Easy]
  • 從幾個方向講好了 spacing太大 SV太快 記住Easy難度是給新手玩的 不是3星以下就能叫做E/N 質量要出來
    也不是setting全部調到最低就叫Easy 排版至少要再近一點 Remap Finish. 因为好久没有做EASY了
[ Hard]
  1. 00:04:184 (2) - 變速要NC k
  2. 00:24:344 (4) - 紅線沒有明顯的音 反而是重音有 所以節尾在重音 (縮短1/2) 仔细听
  3. 00:29:590 (1) - 沒必要NC 兩個鼓點在一起就不用特別強調 k
  4. 00:46:803 (2,3) - 往前挪1/2 (3)的結尾不變 比較對vocal k
  5. 00:48:115 (1) - 去掉finish 在音樂裡沒聽到finish的聲音 反而在重音才有 這個是停在紅線的所以就不用fin了 k
  6. 00:51:230 (2,3,4) - 沒必要做連啊 反而是你前面那麼平靜才轉個轉盤就突然來個三連啊違和啊 k
  7. 00:52:705 (6,1) - 這anti-jump你也擺的下去? 疊在一起才不會誤導別人以為那是1/2啊 k
  8. 00:54:016 - / 00:54:672 - 空著不好打 可以塞note不然就跟前面那個合成slider k/No same as your mod
  9. 00:55:656 (5,1) - 最好平行 k
  10. 01:00:574 (3) - 往前1/4然後藍線塞note 連打是從白線開始有音的 k
  11. 01:17:131 (1) - 尾巴finish有什麼意義呢 很吵 k
  12. 01:24:836 (4) - NC 因為你在01:25:656 (1) - 有下 k
  13. 01:26:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - 與其你前面要擺四顆note後面接這麼長的slider 不如就把那四顆刪了直接從一開始就slider到尾 這樣會比四顆note製造緊張感後啥恐怖的part都沒有跑出來還舒服一點 k/No same as your mod
[ Insane]
  1. 00:04:184 (2) - 變速就NC k
  2. 00:11:394 (4) - 這裡好奇怪啊 明明音樂是從重音開始的 確要在紅線就開始slider 真心覺得違和 所以就把這個換成一顆note+1/2 slider會比較好一點 k
  3. 00:16:639 (1,2,3) - 還是疊起來的好 前面都是1/2這裡突然1/4就夠奇怪了 還拆的這麼開 不觉得
  4. 00:19:754 - 沒聽到finish的音 去掉 k
  5. 00:20:574 (5,6) - 先slider再note會對vocal一點 rhythm
  6. 00:36:475 (1,2) - (1)加折返然後去掉(2)? 因為前面滿急促的這裡突然慢了下來就很違和 可能還有人認為是1/2點下去。。。 O OX
  8. 00:40:410 - 前面那一段用default clap什麼心態 >>?
  9. 00:54:672 (5,6,7) - 其實我覺得就算是故意的別人還是讀不出來 應該會被認為是兩個部份 前面是兩連 後面是跟前面慢1/2的slider 還是疊起來安全 不会。。。。
  10. 01:09:426 (7,8,1) - ^ ^
  11. 01:04:508 - 前面節奏這麼緊 突然就變成1/1很怪 至少下個note在這裡 k
  12. 01:06:312 (1) - 沒必要NC k
  13. 01:16:148 (6) - clap k
  14. 01:22:869 - / 01:23:525 - 基本上跟vocal是不錯 但這樣就有種空空的空虛感 打到一半突然要停下來會很不爽...就在這兩個點下個note在打擊上會比較有節奏感一點 k
    Hard跟Insane總體不錯 一些小地方注意一下會更好 谢谢你的评价
[ Flask's Normal]
  1. remap pls
    Why I must Remap it ;w; :o :( :? :x :cry: :?: :arrow: :shock:
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SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
Important stuff中的意见是强烈建议修改的，有可能包括unrankable的事项。
Map designing部分、Rhythm/Placing部分和Hitsounds部分的意见是我的个人见解，如果你觉得不好可以随时忽略。

[General]

Flask wrote:

  1. Tags記得上
  2. Title加TV Size kpy只是忘記了 沒有明文規定不能上TV Size
[Easy]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. 00:40:574 to 00:50:902 - Break? 才0.77星的Easy这么省节奏密度啊...而且一分多钟的歌放break很容易被找渣...
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 有一些1/1的折返节奏如果有能力的话换掉比较好，因为听起来比较生硬，例如00:20:082 (1,2,3), 00:52:213 (2,3,4), 01:06:639 (2,3)
    2. 00:10:246 (1,2,3) - 感觉这样的节奏会好点?(无视排版)如果改的话tick音要留意一下 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610809
    3. 00:16:803 (4) - 延长到00:17:787? 太长可以稍微摆下形状?
    4. 00:35:164 (5) - 换成3/2*2的折返？
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 01:01:394 (1) - normal-whistle感觉还是有一套方法的时候才用好，这里建议用回finish吧
    2. 01:27:623 (3) - 同样建议finish...
[Flask's Normal]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. None.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:07:212 (1) - 虽然(3)消失了之后(1)看起来就丑了不过还是喜欢！（不过感觉尾部来个弯比较好
    2. 01:01:230 - 虽然用音箱听没什么感觉，用耳机听到很大声的clap音后感觉这里是不是要有个note比较好
    3. 01:24:672 - noteeeeeeeeeee?
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 00:30:574 (3) - whistle?
    2. 00:53:033 (7,8) - (7)头跟(8)whistle?
    3. 00:58:771 (1,2) - 头finish?
goooood

[Hard]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. 00:33:689 (6) - new combo?
    2. 00:50:902 (1) - 这里离spinner时间...虽然是hard不过我还是觉得略难
    3. 01:11:557 (1) - remove new combo?
    4. 01:16:803 (1) - remove new combo?或者可以换成在01:16:312加
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:24:344 (4) - 不能切成1/1+circle吗？主要看你跟的是琴音
    2. 00:28:607 - 加note?
    3. 00:41:394 - 这里的节奏略疏...对比前面的(1)(2)的紧密还是这里也加点note好，例如00:41:394与00:41:557加note，或者00:40:410 (1)再缩段点之类的
    4. 00:53:033 (1) - 确定这里要离00:50:705 (6)那么近吗
    5. 00:55:164 (2) - 连着(1)一起移得离(3)远点会好看点？例如 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610766
    6. 01:01:639 (1,2,3) - 这样会好看点？个人习惯不用担心超边.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610767
    7. 01:26:967 (6) - 这里的spacing确定要拉开？
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 00:06:076 (2) - same as insaneeeee
    2. 00:21:885 (1) - whistle移到尾部比较好？
[Insane]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. 00:10:246 (1) and 00:54:836 (7) and 01:09:590 (1) and 01:14:180 (1) - 感觉这种梗还是要规范点用好，这张图stream这么多却随机分布在4个地方坑人感觉实在 :o
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 感觉这张图的部分DS保持1.2x会比较好，比如像00:10:902 (3,4,5)这里的距离看得比较舒服，而00:11:557 (5,6,7,8,9)或者00:16:148 (4,5,6,7)这种地方1.0x的spacing就摆起来显得好像有点不好看
    2. 00:28:443 (5) - 感觉跟上后面的音乐在00:28:525跟00:28:607加note比较好
    3. 00:31:066 (4) - 感觉可以放开点在左上角随意摆造型会好看点?(http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/608218 这是比较保守的摆法之一)还有Ctrl+G一下打起来应该顺手点
    4. 00:50:738 - 感觉这里可以加3连到前面，如果加的话可以考虑让前面的2次折返改成两个任意元件让活动范围大点
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 00:04:562 (1) - Remove whistle?或者把00:04:941 (2)头上的whistle换到尾上
    2. 00:06:076 (3) - ..意义不明的80%?如果故意做大音量的话幅度应该小点比较好？
    3. 00:15:328 (7) - whistle?
    4. 00:42:049 (4) - Remove clap?
    5. 00:45:328 (6,7,1) - (6)soft whistle only, (7)remove all hitsound, (1)Sampleset Drum + Normal或Soft的finish这样如何？
    6. 00:49:590 (6?) - 这个点还是whistle吧？
    7. 01:06:312 (6) - 如果前面(01:05:820)是红线whistle加法的话这里感觉可以加whistle（尽管撞clap了
    8. 01:20:246 (2) - whistle?
    9. 01:27:295 (1) - 感觉这里用whistle表达效果比较好?
:) 加油
CivelMamosora
98 posts
Joined December 2010
CivelMamosora
雖然您暫時不做圖 但還是請問一下
可以讓我做個太鼓的GD嗎? Oni或Muzu都可以:3/
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
@Sami: 00:53:033 (7,8) - (7)头跟(8)whistle? 下(8)有點吵 果斷下(7)頭

其他都fix !

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: WWonder tale.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 61394
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.3
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:W:Wonder tale
TitleUnicode:W:Wonder tale
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:Sun Rainbow
Version:Flask's Normal
Source:Ore no Kanojo to Osananajimi ga Shuraba Sugiru
Tags:
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BeatmapSetID:76344

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228,156,11557,2,0,P|276:132|336:156,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,228,12213,2,0,L|484:204,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,324,12869,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,344,13197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,308,13525,2,0,L|96:272,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,208,14180,6,0,L|161:148,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,240,14672,2,0,P|296:264|352:244,1,120
384,208,15164,2,0,L|414:148,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,104,15492,6,0,P|448:40|496:24,2,120,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,120,16475,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,104,16803,2,0,P|184:40|136:24,2,120,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,204,17787,2,0,L|252:268,1,60,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,312,18115,6,0,B|320:320|348:304|348:304|336:360|336:360|392:340|392:340|420:380|420:380|488:376|504:288,1,360.000013732911,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,212,19754,5,2,0:0:0:0:
460,136,20082,2,0,L|480:92,2,45.0000017166138
424,164,20574,2,0,P|384:184|324:168,1,90.0000034332277,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,104,21230,2,0,P|328:84|388:100,1,90.0000034332277,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,36,21885,6,0,P|348:0|232:40,1,225.000008583069,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,112,23033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,148,23361,2,0,B|116:196|176:208|176:208|176:288,1,180.000006866455
264,264,24344,2,0,L|264:164,2,90.0000034332277,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,320,25328,6,0,L|328:376,2,45.0000017166138
360,280,25820,2,0,P|400:256|448:272,1,90.0000034332277
460,88,26803,2,0,L|432:36,1,45.0000017166138
392,52,27131,6,0,P|292:104|208:36,1,225.000008583069
172,20,28115,2,0,L|124:32,1,45.0000017166138
96,48,28443,6,0,B|56:116|96:124|72:200,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,228,29426,2,0,L|72:268,1,30,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,332,29918,5,4,0:0:0:0:
196,368,30246,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,276,30574,2,0,L|292:224,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,172,30902,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,136,31066,2,0,P|396:112|456:140,2,120
396,228,32049,2,0,L|396:352,1,120
356,384,32541,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,344,32869,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,344,33033,2,0,P|216:308|148:316,1,120
56,356,33689,2,0,P|0:312|24:212,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,184,34344,2,0,P|108:136|104:80,1,120
92,32,34836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,48,35164,6,0,P|256:68|316:52,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,40,35656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,64,35984,2,0,L|468:128,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,180,36312,2,0,B|468:264|468:264|472:328|408:352,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,260,37131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,260,37459,2,0,L|288:260,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,256,37787,6,0,B|196:208|128:232|128:232|96:168|32:176,2,240,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,39262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,308,39590,2,0,P|304:344|372:336,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,300,40082,2,0,P|456:296|501:333,1,120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,376,40738,5,0,0:0:0:0:
396,300,41066,1,8,0:1:0:0:
436,228,41394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,228,41557,2,0,P|456:188|444:136,1,90
388,88,42377,2,0,P|372:116|368:152,1,60,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,176,43033,6,0,P|288:116|312:56,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
144,28,44344,2,0,P|148:88|124:148,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
60,192,45328,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,248,45656,5,4,0:0:0:0:
188,196,45984,2,0,P|216:184|256:184,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
328,192,46639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,46803,2,0,P|376:208|416:200,1,90
436,120,47623,1,8,0:1:0:0:
496,176,47951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,256,48279,6,0,B|460:304|448:348|448:348|404:336|364:376,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,372,49590,2,0,B|254:338|210:350|210:350|198:306|182:258,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,226,50902,5,4,0:0:0:0:
287,118,51229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,84,51557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,172,51885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,172,52049,2,0,P|54:202|32:306,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,284,52869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,284,53033,2,0,L|191:323,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,339,53361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,329,53525,6,0,L|393:254,1,120
366,152,54180,2,0,L|262:227,1,120
191,145,54836,2,0,P|156:205|203:308,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,56,56148,5,4,0:0:0:0:
360,37,56475,2,0,L|420:24,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
415,132,56967,2,0,L|444:184,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,276,57459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,359,57787,1,8,0:0:0:0:
195,359,58115,1,0,0:0:0:0:
126,276,58443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,176,58771,6,0,P|196:101|136:24,2,180,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,107,60082,2,0,L|282:107,2,180,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,148,61230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,200,61394,6,0,P|18:265|51:319,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,312,62049,2,0,P|174:265|164:200,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,156,62705,2,0,B|301:273|253:351|253:351|302:371,1,240
394,365,63689,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,296,64016,6,0,P|489:231|474:173,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,107,64672,2,0,P|345:73|336:11,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,14,65328,2,0,P|339:79|233:43,1,240
131,10,66312,1,8,0:0:0:0:
58,89,66639,6,0,L|18:216,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,253,67295,2,0,L|158:126,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,59,67951,5,0,0:0:0:0:
324,103,68279,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,211,68606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,233,68934,1,8,0:0:0:0:
154,138,69262,6,0,P|107:93|49:81,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,189,69918,2,0,P|45:252|64:308,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,338,70574,5,8,0:0:0:0:
163,338,70738,2,0,L|231:358,1,60,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,356,71230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,356,71394,2,0,L|396:339,1,60,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,260,71885,6,0,P|476:197|459:143,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,80,72541,2,0,P|355:143|372:197,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,256,73197,2,0,B|228:156|263:70|263:70|201:65,1,240
109,53,74180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
14,104,74508,6,0,P|-14:154|1:213,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,265,75164,2,8,P|108:323|80:373,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,302,75820,2,0,P|125:337|237:367,1,240
334,330,76803,1,8,0:0:0:0:
431,284,77131,6,0,L|491:169,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,118,77787,2,0,L|335:233,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,260,78443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,198,78771,1,8,0:0:0:0:
94,291,79098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,351,79426,1,8,0:0:0:0:
237,260,79754,6,0,P|254:201|315:178,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,280,80410,2,0,P|384:311|443:296,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
495,201,81066,2,0,L|514:137,2,60,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,135,81721,2,0,L|392:70,2,60,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,112,82377,6,0,P|252:36|132:92,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,160,83361,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,212,83689,2,0,P|168:288|288:232,1,240,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,148,84672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,84,85000,6,0,B|436:184|436:184|516:216|504:308,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,288,85984,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,292,86312,2,0,B|277:214|357:182|357:182|357:82,2,240,8|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87787,12,0,90082,0:0:0:0:
Sweet Yume
17 posts
Joined February 2013
Sweet Yume
OAO加油！
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Sun Rainbow

Mamosora wrote:

雖然您暫時不做圖 但還是請問一下
可以讓我做個太鼓的GD嗎? Oni或Muzu都可以:3/
可以啊O Oowo做个ONI吧
CivelMamosora
98 posts
Joined December 2010
CivelMamosora
http://puu.sh/2BIOe
這裡是太鼓Oni圖
還有一點需要微調就麻煩您了
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Sun Rainbow

SamiPale wrote:

Important stuff中的意见是强烈建议修改的，有可能包括unrankable的事项。
Map designing部分、Rhythm/Placing部分和Hitsounds部分的意见是我的个人见解，如果你觉得不好可以随时忽略。

[General]

Flask wrote:

  1. Tags記得上
  2. Title加TV Size kpy只是忘記了 沒有明文規定不能上TV Size
[Easy]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. 00:40:574 to 00:50:902 - Break? 才0.77星的Easy这么省节奏密度啊...而且一分多钟的歌放break很容易被找渣...
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 有一些1/1的折返节奏如果有能力的话换掉比较好，因为听起来比较生硬，例如00:20:082 (1,2,3), 00:52:213 (2,3,4), 01:06:639 (2,3)
    2. 00:10:246 (1,2,3) - 感觉这样的节奏会好点?(无视排版)如果改的话tick音要留意一下 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610809
    3. 00:16:803 (4) - 延长到00:17:787? 太长可以稍微摆下形状?
    4. 00:35:164 (5) - 换成3/2*2的折返？
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 01:01:394 (1) - normal-whistle感觉还是有一套方法的时候才用好，这里建议用回finish吧
    2. 01:27:623 (3) - 同样建议finish...
[Flask's Normal]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. None.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:07:212 (1) - 虽然(3)消失了之后(1)看起来就丑了不过还是喜欢！（不过感觉尾部来个弯比较好
    2. 01:01:230 - 虽然用音箱听没什么感觉，用耳机听到很大声的clap音后感觉这里是不是要有个note比较好
    3. 01:24:672 - noteeeeeeeeeee?
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 00:30:574 (3) - whistle?
    2. 00:53:033 (7,8) - (7)头跟(8)whistle?
    3. 00:58:771 (1,2) - 头finish?
goooood

[Hard]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. 00:33:689 (6) - new combo?
    2. 00:50:902 (1) - 这里离spinner时间...虽然是hard不过我还是觉得略难
    3. 01:11:557 (1) - remove new combo?
    4. 01:16:803 (1) - remove new combo?或者可以换成在01:16:312加
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:24:344 (4) - 不能切成1/1+circle吗？主要看你跟的是琴音
    2. 00:28:607 - 加note?
    3. 00:41:394 - 这里的节奏略疏...对比前面的(1)(2)的紧密还是这里也加点note好，例如00:41:394与00:41:557加note，或者00:40:410 (1)再缩段点之类的
    4. 00:53:033 (1) - 确定这里要离00:50:705 (6)那么近吗
    5. 00:55:164 (2) - 连着(1)一起移得离(3)远点会好看点？例如 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610766
    6. 01:01:639 (1,2,3) - 这样会好看点？个人习惯不用担心超边.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610767
    7. 01:26:967 (6) - 这里的spacing确定要拉开？
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 00:06:076 (2) - same as insaneeeee
    2. 00:21:885 (1) - whistle移到尾部比较好？
[Insane]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. 00:10:246 (1) and 00:54:836 (7) and 01:09:590 (1) and 01:14:180 (1) - 感觉这种梗还是要规范点用好，这张图stream这么多却随机分布在4个地方坑人感觉实在 :o
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 感觉这张图的部分DS保持1.2x会比较好，比如像00:10:902 (3,4,5)这里的距离看得比较舒服，而00:11:557 (5,6,7,8,9)或者00:16:148 (4,5,6,7)这种地方1.0x的spacing就摆起来显得好像有点不好看
    2. 00:28:443 (5) - 感觉跟上后面的音乐在00:28:525跟00:28:607加note比较好
    3. 00:31:066 (4) - 感觉可以放开点在左上角随意摆造型会好看点?(http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/608218 这是比较保守的摆法之一)还有Ctrl+G一下打起来应该顺手点
    4. 00:50:738 - 感觉这里可以加3连到前面，如果加的话可以考虑让前面的2次折返改成两个任意元件让活动范围大点
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 00:04:562 (1) - Remove whistle?或者把00:04:941 (2)头上的whistle换到尾上
    2. 00:06:076 (3) - ..意义不明的80%?如果故意做大音量的话幅度应该小点比较好？
    3. 00:15:328 (7) - whistle?
    4. 00:42:049 (4) - Remove clap?
    5. 00:45:328 (6,7,1) - (6)soft whistle only, (7)remove all hitsound, (1)Sampleset Drum + Normal或Soft的finish这样如何？
    6. 00:49:590 (6?) - 这个点还是whistle吧？
    7. 01:06:312 (6) - 如果前面(01:05:820)是红线whistle加法的话这里感觉可以加whistle（尽管撞clap了
    8. 01:20:246 (2) - whistle?
    9. 01:27:295 (1) - 感觉这里用whistle表达效果比较好?
:) 加油
抱歉现在才回你。
全改正~
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
Taiko Mod as req

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[Taiko Oni]

00:04:941 (6,7) - k? because it's just like 00:02:671 (1,2) - .

umm...some unrankable stuff here... because you didn't put a break time aka 间隔 at some place just like 00:50:902 - => 00:58:443 - or 01:01:394 - => 01:21:394 - , 总之这是unrankable的建议删除些note.

[Taiko Muzu]

Taiko Muzukashii (√)
Taiko muzukashii (×)

00:13:853 (16) - k, because it have drum sound here.

我mod不出啊因为你们都follow vocal
no kd please and GL
mingmichael
1,720 posts
Joined May 2012
mingmichael
heyy Sun OwO/ here mods come~
i hope these mods help you >,<//

Muzukashii
00:03:805 (4) - d
00:08:348 (17) - k
00:08:726 (18) - K
00:14:180 (17,18) - d k
00:14:836 (19,20,21) - ddk or kdk. both are good >w<
00:18:115 (31) - D
00:22:869 (42,43,44) - kdd
00:25:656 (48,49,50) - dk d
00:26:803 (51) - k
00:26:967 (51) - d
00:28:115 (54,55,56,57) - kkdD
00:30:738 (63) - d
00:45:328 (109) - k
00:49:590 (119,120,121,122,123) - dk k dk
00:56:148 (138) - K
01:01:394 (150) - D
01:02:705 (154) - d
01:03:689 (156) - d
01:05:328 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166) - ddkdd k D
01:07:295 (168,169,170) - k d d
01:10:574 (174,175,176,177,178) - k d k d K
01:11:885 (179) - D
01:13:197 (181) - d
01:14:180 (184) - d
01:16:803 (191) - d
01:19:754 (196,197,198,199,200) - d d k d d
01:22:377 (202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220) - D k d k d k ddk D k d k d k kdk d


Oni
00:05:698 (8) - d
00:14:184 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - d d k d kdk kkk d
00:27:954 (109) - d
00:28:282 (111) - k
00:28:856 (114) - k
00:29:266 (118,119,120) - k d K
00:35:168 (147,148,149,150,151) - kkd k d
00:36:479 (156) - d
00:39:594 (172) - k
00:40:086 (174) - K
00:42:053 (182) - k
00:42:381 (183) - k
00:42:709 (184,185,186) - k k d
00:45:331 (196) - k
00:58:774 (274,275,276,277,278) - ddddk
00:59:266 (279) - d
00:59:430 (280,281,282,283,284) - ddddk
00:59:922 (285) - d
01:00:086 (286,287,288,289,290) - ddddk
01:00:577 (291) - d
01:00:741 (292,293,294,295,296) - kkddk
01:05:331 (333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340) - d d k d d d k d
01:07:627 (350,351,352) - ddd
01:07:954 (353,354,355) - kdd
01:08:282 (356,357,358) - kkk
01:08:610 (359,360,361) - ddd
01:08:938 (362,363,364) - kkk
01:09:266 (365,366,367) - ddd
01:09:594 (368,369,370) - kdk
01:09:922 (371,372,373) - ddd
01:10:249 (374,375,376) - kdk
01:15:659 (420) - d
01:15:823 (421) - d
01:15:987 (422,423,424) - kkd
01:17:135 (432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468) - change to be 01:06:643 (341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377) -
01:22:381 (478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490,491,492,493) - d d k d d d k d d d k d d k k d
01:25:004 (494,495,496,497,498) - ddddk
01:25:659 (500,501,502,503,504) - ddddk
01:26:643 (510) - k
01:26:971 (512,513,514,515,516) - kdddk
01:27:627 (518) - d or D. same i think XD
01:27:627 (518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526) - d d k d d d k d k
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Sun Rainbow

mingmichael wrote:

heyy Sun OwO/ here mods come~
i hope these mods help you >,<//

Muzukashii
00:03:805 (4) - d
00:08:348 (17) - k
00:08:726 (18) - K
00:14:180 (17,18) - d k
00:14:836 (19,20,21) - ddk or kdk. both are good >w<
00:18:115 (31) - D
00:22:869 (42,43,44) - kdd
00:25:656 (48,49,50) - dk d
00:26:803 (51) - k
00:26:967 (51) - d
00:28:115 (54,55,56,57) - kkdD
00:30:738 (63) - d
00:45:328 (109) - k
00:49:590 (119,120,121,122,123) - dk k dk
00:56:148 (138) - K
01:01:394 (150) - D
01:02:705 (154) - d
01:03:689 (156) - d
01:05:328 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166) - ddkdd k D
01:07:295 (168,169,170) - k d d
01:10:574 (174,175,176,177,178) - k d k d K
01:11:885 (179) - D
01:13:197 (181) - d
01:14:180 (184) - d
01:16:803 (191) - d
01:19:754 (196,197,198,199,200) - d d k d d
01:22:377 (202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220) - D k d k d k ddk D k d k d k kdk d


Oni
00:05:698 (8) - d
00:14:184 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - d d k d kdk kkk d
00:27:954 (109) - d
00:28:282 (111) - k
00:28:856 (114) - k
00:29:266 (118,119,120) - k d K
00:35:168 (147,148,149,150,151) - kkd k d
00:36:479 (156) - d
00:39:594 (172) - k
00:40:086 (174) - K
00:42:053 (182) - k
00:42:381 (183) - k
00:42:709 (184,185,186) - k k d
00:45:331 (196) - k
00:58:774 (274,275,276,277,278) - ddddk
00:59:266 (279) - d
00:59:430 (280,281,282,283,284) - ddddk
00:59:922 (285) - d
01:00:086 (286,287,288,289,290) - ddddk
01:00:577 (291) - d
01:00:741 (292,293,294,295,296) - kkddk
01:05:331 (333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340) - d d k d d d k d
01:07:627 (350,351,352) - ddd
01:07:954 (353,354,355) - kdd
01:08:282 (356,357,358) - kkk
01:08:610 (359,360,361) - ddd
01:08:938 (362,363,364) - kkk
01:09:266 (365,366,367) - ddd
01:09:594 (368,369,370) - kdk
01:09:922 (371,372,373) - ddd
01:10:249 (374,375,376) - kdk
01:15:659 (420) - d
01:15:823 (421) - d
01:15:987 (422,423,424) - kkd
01:17:135 (432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468) - change to be 01:06:643 (341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377) -
01:22:381 (478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490,491,492,493) - d d k d d d k d d d k d d k k d
01:25:004 (494,495,496,497,498) - ddddk
01:25:659 (500,501,502,503,504) - ddddk
01:26:643 (510) - k
01:26:971 (512,513,514,515,516) - kdddk
01:27:627 (518) - d or D. same i think XD
01:27:627 (518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526) - d d k d d d k d k
Some Fixed~THX>W<
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:048 (1,1) - 不必要的NC
  2. 00:06:076 - 大聲的很莫名
  3. 00:16:148 (1,2) - 方向都ctrl+G 對照00:15:492 (1,2,1,2) - 會更flow
  4. 00:19:754 (2) - 去finish 太吵了啊而且沒必要加
  5. 00:29:426 (1,1) - 這個太跳了 如果是我我就直接疊起來
  6. 00:39:098 (1,1) - ^
  7. 00:45:000 - / 00:47:623 - / 00:50:246 - clap
    flow跟音效上面還需加強
[Muzukashii]
  1. 太鼓diff只能用Normal Sampleset 而且不能用自定音效 這是unrankable的 我錯了
  2. 01:11:803 - 好像也不能噴泉
  3. 00:08:537 - 塞個k
  4. 00:17:951 - d
  5. 00:18:115 (31) - remove
  6. 00:25:820 - k
  7. 00:28:607 (55) - D
  8. 00:29:426 (56,57) - 音樂是鼓聲所以是d d才對
  9. 00:35:328 (77) - d
  10. 00:36:475 (81) - 移到00:36:312 - 換k
  11. 01:04:016 (156) - k
  12. 01:05:328 (160) - k
  13. 01:23:033 (204) - d就好
[Mamo's Oni]
  1. 太鼓難度只能用Normal Sampleset 也不能用自定音效 這是unrankable的 我錯了[2]
  2. 00:04:941 (6) - d
  3. 00:05:319 (7) - k
  4. 00:14:676 (48) - k
  5. 00:15:331 (54) - k
  6. 00:18:036 (69,70) - 都刪掉
  7. 00:28:774 (113,114,115,116,117,118) - 這一串可以都刪掉...基本上音樂比較少的地方空多一點效果會更好 而不是一昧的下note
  8. 00:29:430 (119) - d
  9. 00:29:922 (121) - D
  10. 00:40:410 (175) - D
  11. 00:35:168 (147,148,149) - kdd
  12. 00:35:495 (150) - k
  13. 00:44:020 (189,190,191,192,193) - d d k k d
  14. 00:51:069 (221,222,223,224,225,226,227) - 這裡好好聽vocal啊 d k d k d k k
  15. 00:59:430 (278) - k
    kiai段的連不是很喜歡
~
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Sun Rainbow

Flask wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:048 (1,1) - 不必要的NC
  2. 00:06:076 - 大聲的很莫名
  3. 00:16:148 (1,2) - 方向都ctrl+G 對照00:15:492 (1,2,1,2) - 會更flow
  4. 00:19:754 (2) - 去finish 太吵了啊而且沒必要加
  5. 00:29:426 (1,1) - 這個太跳了 如果是我我就直接疊起來
  6. 00:39:098 (1,1) - ^
  7. 00:45:000 - / 00:47:623 - / 00:50:246 - clap
    flow跟音效上面還需加強
[Muzukashii]
  1. 太鼓diff只能用Normal Sampleset 而且不能用自定音效 這是unrankable的 我錯了
  2. 01:11:803 - 好像也不能噴泉
  3. 00:08:537 - 塞個k
  4. 00:17:951 - d
  5. 00:18:115 (31) - remove
  6. 00:25:820 - k
  7. 00:28:607 (55) - D
  8. 00:29:426 (56,57) - 音樂是鼓聲所以是d d才對
  9. 00:35:328 (77) - d
  10. 00:36:475 (81) - 移到00:36:312 - 換k
  11. 01:04:016 (156) - k
  12. 01:05:328 (160) - k
  13. 01:23:033 (204) - d就好
[Mamo's Oni]
  1. 太鼓難度只能用Normal Sampleset 也不能用自定音效 這是unrankable的 我錯了[2]
  2. 00:04:941 (6) - d
  3. 00:05:319 (7) - k
  4. 00:14:676 (48) - k
  5. 00:15:331 (54) - k
  6. 00:18:036 (69,70) - 都刪掉
  7. 00:28:774 (113,114,115,116,117,118) - 這一串可以都刪掉...基本上音樂比較少的地方空多一點效果會更好 而不是一昧的下note
  8. 00:29:430 (119) - d
  9. 00:29:922 (121) - D
  10. 00:40:410 (175) - D
  11. 00:35:168 (147,148,149) - kdd
  12. 00:35:495 (150) - k
  13. 00:44:020 (189,190,191,192,193) - d d k k d
  14. 00:51:069 (221,222,223,224,225,226,227) - 這裡好好聽vocal啊 d k d k d k k
  15. 00:59:430 (278) - k
    kiai段的連不是很喜歡
~
改正~~~
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
[general]
没什么大问题
01:30:246 - 可以加一个转盘持续到这里?
[Rainbow]
01:16:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 是不是可以整体向上移一些
[Insane]
00:06:455 (2) - 可以在上一个红线结束?

应该没什么问题了吧于是我来低骗 :?
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Sun Rainbow

ZZHBOY wrote:

[general]
没什么大问题
01:30:246 - 可以加一个转盘持续到这里?
[Rainbow]
01:16:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 是不是可以整体向上移一些
[Insane]
00:06:455 (2) - 可以在上一个红线结束?

应该没什么问题了吧于是我来低骗 :?
虽然没改到什么但还是给你KDば~
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
Hi~
Request from In-game.


  • "re" is means "remove"
    Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[general]

  1. add "Flask" and "Mamosora" to tags
  2. Inconsistency in preview time
    preview time
    [Easy] : 61394
    [Flask's Normal] : 61394
    [Hard] : 61394
    [Insane] : 61394
    [Mamo's Taiko Oni] : 61348
    [Rainbow] : 61394
    [Taiko Muzukashii] : 61394

[Easy]

  1. Useless green line:
    green line
    00:02:260 -
    00:19:426 -
    00:19:672 -
    00:27:951 -
    00:28:443 -
    00:29:344 -
    00:31:394 -
    00:36:721 -
  2. 00:05:698 (4,1) - try to swap NC, would make newbie easier to read 00:05:698 (4) -
  3. 00:10:246 (1,2) - the 2nd slidertick sound make me feel weird, why don't you use green line (S:N) like 00:12:869 (3) - ? if you change this, try to 00:10:246 (1,2,3) - add clap at end
  4. 00:14:180 (1) - add clap at end to follow music
  5. 00:35:164 (5) - NC, I think the combo of time is too long
  6. 01:05:000 - I feel weird that there is empty, try to add a note in there,
  7. 01:13:853 (2,3) - Don't you feel weird in beat? try to this rhythm
Sorry, I don't like the Easy ...OTZ

[Normal]

  1. 00:09:590 (1,2) - the slider's length is a bit like 00:06:455 (3) - , I suggest use 2 circles to replace the sliders because .. speed change is very hard for newbie
  2. 00:28:443 (1) - try to reduce length like because I think newbie would be hard to read the slider with 00:29:426 (2) -
  3. 01:18:443 (3,3) - NC, like 01:07:951 (1,1) -
  4. 01:27:787 (1) - I think this should start at 01:27:787
this is Normal .. this is Normal ... this is N... (dead)

[Mamo's Taiko oni]

  1. what the Unsnaped note!
    you would regret if you open this
    00:09:595 (21) - Unsnapped circle.
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[Hard]

  1. 00:15:164 (1) - re NC, I don't think there need it
  2. 00:16:803 (3,1) - swap NC would be better
  3. 00:37:131 (4) - let it far from 00:36:803 (3) - or NC it, would be eaiser to read
  4. 00:40:410 - ~ 00:50:574 - some of 1/1 distance is too small so that 00:41:394 (2,3,4) - hard to read, try to increase distance or NC 00:41:394 (2) -
  5. 01:26:639 (5,6) - I don't suggest you use 1/4 jump in this diff, try to get it same as 01:26:967 (6,7) -
~

[Insane]

  1. 00:03:048 (1,1) - re NC, I can't find any reason
  2. 00:33:197 (3,4) - ctrl+G, flow would be smooth
  3. 01:13:525 (6,1) - ...what the flask! 這句咱不知道怎麼翻譯了, 你是想要坑死一堆人嘛 www 想辦法加大距離或小部分重疊01:13:525 (6) -
  4. 01:15:164 (3,1) - same as ^ (咱再想你是不是擠到沒位子就這樣放了>_>, 如果是這樣 請一定要想辦法改~)
  5. 01:25:656 (3) - try to increase distance would be easier to read
~

[Rainbow]

  1. 00:10:082 (7,8) - hard to read, try to use the distance(00:09:590 (1,2,3,4) - ) or let 00:09:918 (5,6,7) - distance same as there
  2. 01:09:426 (7,8) - I don't like this, hard to read ...
~

that's all ~
good luck ~
Sun Rainbow
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Erina
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Joined August 2012
Erina
I love this song :D

要是你不懂英语，我可以用中文跟你说话，但是我的中文不好 D:

Easy:
The difficulty is supposed to be Easy right? Decrease your overall distance snap and slider velocity...seems a little too fast for Easy.

00:27:951 (3,1) - Feels awkward to have such a large gap. Consider adding a hitcircle on 00:28:607
01:04:016 (5) - New combo - easy difficulties should not have combos that go on for too long.
01:06:312 - Add a note there to keep the flow of the song going. Without it, there seems to be an awkward pause
01:07:623 (3) - ^

Flask's Normal:
Can't find anything wrong. This difficulty is great :3

Hard:
00:02:669 (1,1) - Why is there such a sudden difference in slider speed? Make them equal.
00:29:426 (1) - Remove new combo? Seems kind of unnecessary for there to just be two stray notes...
01:27:623 (8) - Change into a spinner

Insane:
00:16:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Try to organize that stream into a more linear pattern to be read with more ease
00:19:426 (1) - Remove new combo, there's no need for it because this phrase joins in well with the next one
00:47:623 (4,5) - Check distance snap for these two notes, they seem to be placed too far apart
01:27:623 (1) - Make it a spinner.

Rainbow:
00:12:869 (1) - This note should be with the previous stream because the distance spacing is the same
01:27:623 (2) - Change it into a spinner.

Nothing much to say, the whole map is pretty good! Good luck for rank :D
Fia
Fia
疯狂掉线 只ircRainbow吧 testplay连上了就弄

[Easy]

00:06:834 (5) - delete
00:47:295 (3) - 去掉一个reverse spinner长白线开始
01:08:279 (5) - blanket没做好叠上了
01:25:000 (2,1) - 其实我觉得新手打不好这个转盘 Normal那样好一点

[Normal]

啥都没找到 :3

[Hard]

好难 :( 诶HP7OD8？ :o

00:14:180 (1) - 没必要吧 缩短一下到红线结束
00:17:131 (1) - nc移到后面的slider上
00:34:180 (2) - 叠下一个slider的头？
00:39:918 (2) - 和后一个slider太近了……spacing因为变速才显示1.04
00:41:557 (2) - 间距略大
01:11:885 (1) - 这个感觉也不太必要蓝线结束
01:16:803 (9) - ^
01:19:098 (5) - 不做个blanket么

[Insane]

00:02:669 (1) - 全是whistle?
00:22:869 (6,7,8) - 这里不适合放跳吧
00:29:590 (1) - 去掉nc
00:39:262 (1) - ^
00:52:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五角星弄正点
01:06:803 (4) - 压上了 不好
01:13:525 (6) - 容易读不出空一拍

[Rainbow]
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Quilt
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Joined May 2010
Quilt
Easy
SPOILER
i think you should add NC more but sorry i cant do good NC modding. plz ask other people orz

Normal
SPOILER
looks good

Hard
SPOILER
00:36:639 (2) - remove note?

00:53:361 (3,4) - unify these spacing

01:26:394 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think this stream is overmap on hard diff

Insane
SPOILER
i think this map should make more easly bcz this map already have extra Insane diff

00:15:492 (1,2,1,2) - try this rhythm and placement http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/789213

00:23:361 (1,2,1,2) - reduce the spacing a little? i feel widly a little

00:41:557 (3,4) - stretch 1/4 (3) and 00:42:705 add note?

00:44:508 (2) - 00:44:508~00:44:836:add notes

00:46:803 (3) - stratch 1/2

00:47:623 (1) - add NC if you changed 00:46:803 (3)

00:58:115 (4) - add NC or more widely spacing

01:13:853 (1) - move to x168 y324

Rainbow
SPOILER
00:44:180~00:45:492 : i heard piano sound. notes said plz use us on hereヽ(`Д´)ﾉ

that's all~

ganbare!
bokito
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bokito
from 彩虹老爷 虽然我想摸 但你没改好< < 改好可以PM让我来摸
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