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Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommendedRed is unrankable[General]
you offset is a bit early compared to the song, i'm going to say about +4ms on the current will make it much better
commas are not necessary to separate the tags, they might break in game search so remove them[Easy]
00:19:052 - unsnapped green line, snap to 00:19:031 00:31:790 (4) - you can probably blanket this better by tilting the end up a bit
00:50:805 (4) - i think the finish should be on the end of this slider instead of 00:49:804 (3) judging from the music
01:34:838 (4) - forgot a clap here
01:44:595 (1) - makes more sense to end the spinner at 01:47:347 since thats where the strong end of the music is. Apply to all diffs if you agree
02:05:861 (3) - this might confuse some novice players as they will probably not expect multiple repeats, try to break this up into repeat slider + note
03:05:406 (3) - clap on end
03:25:170 (1) - remove NC here and add it at 03:27:422 (3) instead, makes more sense music wise
03:31:425 (1) - add finish?
[Normal]
00:19:052 - unsnapped green line, snap to 00:19:031 00:31:790 (1) - forgot a clap here
00:32:541 (3) - ^ on end
00:52:306 (2,4) - do a ctrl+r on this will make this pattern look alot cleaner and flow better
01:26:081 (6,7,8) - i'd put the flow of this at an angle, its much easier to play than a straight line:
01:35:338 (5) - clap on end
01:43:344 (8) - clap on repeat
02:13:867 (1,2,3) - you should try to adjust this off grid snap, 02:14:117 (2,3) are almost in contact
02:21:373 (4) - clap on end
02:26:376 (6) - ^
03:13:161 (3) - the partial overlap here might confuse some players, i'd suggest you reposition 03:11:410 (1) to make this visible
03:19:416 (7) - clap end
03:20:167 (1) - clap
03:27:172 (4) - though this looks really cool, it doesnt follow the music very well; try something like this here:
03:28:173 (1) - clap
03:38:931 - sounds like there should be a note here, you can stack it on 03:36:929 (2)
03:50:189 (7) - having multiple repeats on a short slider may be a bit hard to react to, break it up into repeat slider + circle
[Hard]
00:25:931 - unsnapped green line, snap to 00:25:91101:03:377 (1) - its advised that you dont start a spinner on the 1/8, it really screws around with other game mode conversions such as mania01:26:331 (7) - clap on end
01:27:332 (1) - ^
02:19:130 - unsnapped green line, snap to 02:19:12102:41:888 (7) - this flows alot better if you flip it vertically and place it at the location of 02:40:387 (2)
02:47:455 (1) - same as 01:03:377 (1)
03:33:427 (1,2,3,4,1) - fixing the spacing here, also you can probably center 03:33:427 (1,3) on the y-axis and adjust 03:35:428 (1) along with it
03:41:433 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
04:01:760 (1) - same as 01:03:377 (1)
diffs are nice and comfortable to play, just need to pay attention to some hitsounding inconsistencies. Call me back when you think you are ready~
Easy・01:32:336 (2) - move to x:196, y:180 (03:16:414 (2) - similarly) ► Done.... in a slightly different way (my slider got became almost straight line, then I adjusted it to look as the other sliders (1) and (3).).