Tshemmp wrote:

Two Steps From Hell <3

Well, first of all the BPM should be either halved or doubled (just double/halve the SV then). I found 67,995 as BPM, not sure if you want to use it (this makes 135,99 BPM is you don't want to halve them). Offset seems fine.

Secondly remove "Two Steps From Hell" from the source. Only stuff like movies or games belongs in there. Remove this from the tags aswell, it's is already the artist. I am not too sure about the tags "Trailer Movie Games" either, I mean they are nothing really related to this song. Instead you can add "Dynasty" to the tags (album name).

Royston wrote:

Hi from my queue:

Offset seems a little early to me. I had best results with an offset of 475~480, play around with it and see what works best.

mmm ok, I'll fiddle around with a different offset.

As far as the map itself goes, I really like the hitsounds you've used, it fits the song really well. My main issue is just the note placement feels a little linear to me in places. For example, in Easy you haven't used anything but a horizontal straight slider up until 00:37:498 (1), and it's a similar thing in the other difficulties. If you can, try to create a smooth, circular flow to your difficulties which will make it more enjoyable for players!

Possibly. I myself ain't too sure what's ideal for streams yet haha.

Also the difficulties seem a little harder than their names suggest: To me, Easy felt like a Normal, Normal felt like a Hard and Advanced felt like an Insane with those streams you have in there. I also recommend changing the HP drain in all difficulties - at the moment it's set to 5 in every difficulty, so I'd probably lower it in your easiest difficulty and make it 6 in advanced or something.

Yep ok, didn't realise this. Easy is easy though, but maybe not normal.

Anyway, sorry I can't offer more specific advice. But good luck with this, it's a really cool song you chose to map!

Hsiao-Chai wrote:

From my queue

Two steps from hell XD

SPOILER

[General]
bpm 204
offset 459
time signature 6/4
(↑timing in my understanding
320kbps might be fine for such short audio

changed offset

[easy]
notes didn't follow the rhythm, this rhythm could be understood but not for newbies who play easy diff,and notes but not slider make it even harder to catch
00:58:700 (2) - usually newbie don't understand slider repeat for more than one time

it just doesn't follow the finer music between them, I changed the slider repeat

[normal]
AudioLeadIn: 3000 <-you can fix it in .osu file
HPD-1
00:38:993 (3) - close GridSnap for a second to make it prefectly covered

Fixed lead in. Now perfectly covered, I think.

[advanced]
00:01:347 (4) - close GridSnap for a second to make it prefectly covered
00:15:170 (4,5) - fix the distance snaping if you not mean to do that


I think it's covered now. Yeah I think I wanted to show more of the other slider so people know it is one.

Good luck~

EDIT

you may wanna check Ranking Criteria
what i said is 1st line on timing section.

lead8964878 wrote:

Hi M4M~
I've got to say it's such a great map!Excellent Sounds.
{Above}
Humm... I remember that it must have a Diff around 3 Stars to rank?!
You could convert the Normal to Hard. And let Easy to Normal for getting harder so.
{Easy}
On the base, I thought that you could make it without jumping?(Its just my memory,dont care)
00:20:311 (1) - X:200 Y:128 not meant to be symmetrical
00:41:047 - Let 1,4 head to head ok

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{Normal}
00:17:223 -1,2,3,4 You could use ctrl+ g h j to let the two shape seem the same~ It's ok, I didn't mean it to be the same
00:42:517 (5) - X:112 Y:120 ok
{Advanced}
00:29:282 (3) - Use a circle's approach to let them have an angle I wanted the ends to be on the same x -axis lines

SPOILER

00:39:282 (1) - tail to head ok

Sorry of my poor English!=3=
EDIT:Forgot the spoilerbox.

Makyu wrote:

[General]
Use this colors http://puu.sh/25CzG I might consider this
if you are interested here they are just paste this in the "colours" par on the code in each diff

Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 162,131,38
Combo3 : 0,0,0
Combo4 : 72,112,65

I suggest you to ask an experienced BAT like Charles to see what is the real snap division of this map, I think 1/6 is wrong, but I'm not sure what's the real division.

[Insane]
I suggest you use 2.00 slider velocity for the mapset, it would be more funny. same here, I will keep this in mind, but am not sure if I really want this
AR+1
OD+1
Distance spacing 1.1 Don't want it too far apart, but I changed the difficulty somewhat

00:44:576 (3) - I think is better use a slider here, the tail in 00:44:944 - Ok I guess, would make it easier
00:45:164 (6) - if you do the previous thing, stack this notes in (8) ^
00:46:341 (1) - same here, finish it here 00:46:708 - I prefer the rhythm I have
00:48:106 (1) - Remove two repetitions of this slider, then move this 00:48:988 (1) - here 00:48:767 - and 00:49:282 (2) - here 00:48:988 - ^
00:49:282 - add a circle here if you do the previous thing ^

[Hard]
AR+1
Tick rate 2x

00:57:958 (5) - Remove whistle in the tail ok

[Normal]
This diff can be a bit hard for a newbies, specially with 1/6 divisor, be careful Can't really make this much easier, with the nature of the song. I made it easier overall
OD-1
Size -1

00:15:606 (3) - This kind of note may confuse newbies, be careful with this kind of notes Removed the circle behind
00:17:076 (3,4) - Remove one of them, I suggest you remove (3), and finish the slider there Keeping it

[Easy]
AR+1

00:15:017 (2) - Remove this note
00:16:782 (1) - Same
00:18:547 (1) - same
00:37:517 (1,2,3,4) - This may confuse the newbies, be careful
00:41:047 (1,2,3,4) - same removed notes (all suggestions)

Im sorry if my mod wasn't useful, I'm too noob for this atm, if you don't follow anything, let me know and I'll give you a ticket to use in the future when I become better at modding.
Please answer to the mod, I always see that.

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from ♥Moe Moe Russian Modding Room♥

[General]

• The bitrate for 03 Racketeers.mp3 is 320 kb/s, which is above the maximum of 192 kb/s. Change it plz Changed
• About NC~ Better put NC on every downbeat (Insane, Hard,Normal) and every second downbeat (Easy), it creates a sequence and better follow for music. Check it on all diffs~
• Slider Tick rate should be identical on all diffs, then put on Normal and Easy tick rate 2 too ok

Advanced

OD -1
AR -1 Changed

00:23:400 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:25:164 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:25:753 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:26:929 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:27:517 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:28:694 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:29:282 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:30:458 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:31:341 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:32:811 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:33:988 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:33:988 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:36:194 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). Snapped them all

00:07:223 - put note 2 on x448 y112 for better flow ok
00:10:164(6,1) - this notes better replace on slider 1/1, it's better follow for music here Ok, it should make it easier as well
00:15:164(4,5) - for better play unstack this sliders, http://puu.sh/298rv It will be more readable I made a small gap so that it can be seen, but I guess I'll just make the gap larger now
00:24:429(8) - put this note on x296 y220 for better stream form ok
00:33:106(4) - this note not visible, better remove it and make slider 3 double made a repeat slider
00:38:694(7,8,1) - wrong spacing, make identical distance between this notes adjusted? I think
00:42:811(1,2,3) - stack it better, looks ugly stacked
01:04:282(5,6,7,8) - ^ ^

[Hard]

DR +1

hm this rhythm is kinda strange. I don't think what it will be good for play,these intervals have the bit but do not have the notes and sounds empty, better add notes on 00:01:782, 00:03:547, 00:05:311, 00:07:076 e.t.c It will be more rhytmically and playable The gaps? I'll see what I can add. Added repeat sliders

[Normal]

• Plz check all spacing, you have many mistakes with it~ If you put distance spacing 0.9 then put all notes on it >.< I checked all spacings

[Easy]

• 00:48:106 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
• All diff looks veryyyy boring, make slider forms more interesting. Only straight sliders will get bored for beginners Changed some shapes, might change more in the future
• Spam NC >.< I already said about it in General, soo put nc: 00:03:988, 00:07:517, 00:11:047 e.t.con every second downbeat. No need put nc on every slider >.<
• 01:05:753 - 7 notes without sliders very hard for Easy diff, better replace on this rhythm http://puu.sh/298VG Changed

Map need more work and mods, I hope you can make it better ^^ good luck~

Kaneko wrote:

[General]

On all of the difficulties, you have hitsounds with are reaaally loud, mostly the finishes around the start of the song, these really blurs out the music more then anything else, I'd really suggest you lower them.

[Normal]
01:00:753 (2) - End on the next tick. ( 01:01:341 ) Fixed

[Hard]

01:00:459 (1,2,1,2) - Try something like this maybe.



Where the first sliders starting point is 01:00:458 and end point is 01:01:194
The hitcircle 01:01:341 (with a Clap)
Second slider starting point 01:01:488 and end point 01:02:076 Trying to use this set of sliders, so i think I'll keep it as it is now

Follows the music a bit better.

01:02:223 (1) - Same idea as above.



First Silder starting point 01:02:223 and end point 01:02:811
Hit-Circle 01:02:958 (With a clap)
Second Slider starting point 01:03:106 and end point 01:03:694
Hit-Circle 01:03:841 (With a clap) ^

[Insane]
Nazi Warning:

00:15:164 (4,5) - move 1 Grid right. (Or, 3-4 grids left) Shifted
00:31:341 (7) - Maybe make it repeat once. Nvm, it's k

00:35:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This spacing, and overlap with the previous pattern, just makes it look ugly, consider aligning it properly or redo'ing the whole pattern (see screenshot for possible placement)

Suggestion Nr1

Suggestion Nr2

Changed position

00:44:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - highlight 1->6 and press cntl+h (because overlaps will always just stay ugly, if not done right ) I'll try with the reverse I guess

Entreal wrote:

Hello. From a queue long time ago haha. Hope this can be helpful
General
Probably just me, but i have a hard time hearing the hitsounds. (ex. 00:48:988 on advance) Not sure if intentional or not.
During kiai time, should probably add some finish sounds around. This is just my opinion. It was initially too loud, but I understand you, there are parts where it seems like the song covers the hitsounds. I will just see what parts actually need the hitsounds to be heard, and just slightly increase the volume. Finish sounds do not really suit, so I just use when necessary.

Advance

00:18:988 - Should extend this slider to 00:19:208 either is fine, because the instrumental sound ends where it is now, but the sound also extends to your suggestion as well
00:23:400 - ^ to 00:23:767 extended to 00:23:694
00:40:606 - This slider sounds off. Probably shorten it to (1) 00:40:753 and 00:40:900 or (2) 00:40:826 and 00:40:973 aha yes! I had problems with this portion while mapping it lols. Couldn't decide what to go with, and I just couldn't leave it empty. I think I'll go with 2. with a little adjustment, turns out this part is really tricky and I had to look at 1/12.....
(1)
(2)

Hard

00:18:694 - Maybe shorten this slider to 00:18:841 and make a reverse arrow? I could try that out I guess
01:04:576 - Change it to a slider to 01:04:723. Fits with the orchestra ok

Normal

Nothing that i know of.

leon1341414 wrote:

From queues ~


General

Well. I am first time to see 1/6 Beat snap divisor ._.

But I feel you do good job.

Don't want to use custom color? You can set some deep color to fit this BG. I kinda like the bright colors contrasting the dark BG


Easy

00:42:811 - overlapping slider is not fit in esay diff. ok

00:56:929 - ^ ^


Normal

AR+2 ? +1


Hard

01:08:253 - How about add anote here? ok


Advanced

00:01:341 - I feel stack is not fit here. suggest to move it down. ok

00:52:517 - 4 note stack here , suggest to do like 2 stack x 2 oh yeh, ok

01:05:753 - 01:08:400 this part is so simple for Insane diff ( it's insane diff right? ) , suggest to do some special place here. ( for example : some jump ) added a bigger gap between new combos


Nice map :3

Good luck ~

Clique wrote:

m4m req on your queue

I don't like mechanic voice so I cannot mod your Ho-Ong-I track sorry.

[General]

For higher aesthetic quality, why don't you put custom combo colour? some color don't fit in this background. please consider.
If you are not making track from other rhythm games why don't you change 'Advanced' -> 'Insane'?
'Advanced' is acually used diffs kind of jubeat and it is regarded as Normal ~ Hard maybe so
Consider other diff name like your nickname or just 'insane'
Easy


instead of 01:00:458 (1) - and 00:05:753 (2) - , why don't you put finish here? 00:07:517 (1) - oh whoops, forgot my finished when I changed them

00:36:635 (2) - overlapping is not good on easy but considering your distance snap, you don't have to fix this BUT
00:36:635 (2,1) - you should fix this kind of distance. k
00:39:282 (1) - ^ should keep 0.8. 1.0 or 0.57 suddenly appears.
00:42:811 (2) - ^ I think you should find inconsistent distance by yourself cuz changing this affects your placement of difficulty
00:59:282 (2) - ^ maybe there are more that I did not poked.
keep in mind. Easy and Normal should keep distance +-0.05

00:42:811 (2) - NC if you want to follow your logic on New Combo. I found that you put NC every 1/1 after the main part of song begins. ok


Normal

Actually 1/3 on Normal is not good but considering the rhythm of this song, I'm gonna catch notes away from 1/3<- Every note was fine cool
00:17:076 (3,4) - may..be this kind of rhythm might be difficult for normal diff players. but rhythm itself is okay anyway. Keeping it I guess
00:37:517 (1) - rhythm is too lazy. half-length return-slider might give more fun to map. ok
01:02:958 (3,4) - as I mentioned before. same.

Hard
00:05:311 (5) - drastic move.. move just a bit down ok
00:33:106 (3) - can you make this more umm slender? i mean this slider need diet . lol ok
00:40:826 (1) - a bit longer it would be slightly off though

Advanced
00:04:576 (6,7) - how about this pattern for consistency? changing angle is your choice http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/639651 That angle is too close to previous circles
00:13:694 (5) - how about putting this on x:424 y:76? ok


Anyway, good map!
Hope your map ranked

1. 00:03:988 (1) - reverse this slider for better flow?
   
   Screenshot

   
2. 00:03:988 (1,2) - you should always lower the volume to 50% for these finish like you did for 00:00:459 (1,2)
3. 00:07:517 (1,1,1,1) - ^ etc.
4. 00:09:282 (1) - remove NC
5. 00:12:811 (1) - ^
6. 00:15:458 (1) - ^
7. 00:25:164 (1) - ^
8. 00:32:223 (1) - ^
9. 00:39:282 (1) - ^
10. 00:42:811 (1) - ^ etc. don't spam one-object combos all map long, even in Easy diff
11. 00:28:694 (1) - You should probably place more sliders like this, you're having a lot (too much, imo) of straight vertical and horitzontal sliders in the map
12. I find it odd that you chose to stop adding Finish in the kiai times. Usually the kiai is the strongest part, not the opposite ~ Maybe less of them in the beginning but more during kiai? Would sound better imo (and remember to always put 50% volume on them!)

1. 00:42:848 (3) - unsnapped slider. Place it at 00:42:811 and end on 00:43:694
2. Same comment as Normal Diff for the volume and placement of Finish hitsound. Try to be as consistent as possible for hitsounds between diffulties too.
3. 00:13:400 (3) - too far from previous item (1.16 DS)
4. 00:39:944 (2) - ^
5. 01:07:223 (4,5) - make a blanket like this?
   
   Screenshot

   

1. Same comment as previously about the hitsound finish
2. Add circle at 00:14:282 and 00:14:429, feels a bit empty now (or a slider if you prefer, ofc)
3. 01:00:164 and 01:00:311 - same

1. 00:29:282 (2) - Unsnapped slider's end. End it on 00:29:576
2. 00:33:694 (2) - stack with 00:32:517 (2)

SuperMoutarde wrote:

Hey, here's my mod ~

[Easy]

1. 00:03:988 (1) - reverse this slider for better flow? ok
   
   Screenshot

   
2. 00:03:988 (1,2) - you should always lower the volume to 50% for these finish like you did for 00:00:459 (1,2)
3. 00:07:517 (1,1,1,1) - ^ etc. I think it's still ok, the reason why I reduced the volume for the first few were because they were using the normal finish sound and I wanted to lower the sound of the hitsound for normal
4. 00:09:282 (1) - remove NC
5. 00:12:811 (1) - ^
6. 00:15:458 (1) - ^
7. 00:25:164 (1) - ^
8. 00:32:223 (1) - ^
9. 00:39:282 (1) - ^
10. 00:42:811 (1) - ^ etc. don't spam one-object combos all map long, even in Easy diff I changed some
11. 00:28:694 (1) - You should probably place more sliders like this, you're having a lot (too much, imo) of straight vertical and horitzontal sliders in the map not a 1 star for nothing haha :X
12. I find it odd that you chose to stop adding Finish in the kiai times. Usually the kiai is the strongest part, not the opposite ~ Maybe less of them in the beginning but more during kiai? Would sound better imo (and remember to always put 50% volume on them!) I follow the instrumentals, and the kiai times have a lack of cymbals, it's more drum-heavy

[Normal]

1. 00:42:848 (3) - unsnapped slider. Place it at 00:42:811 and end on 00:43:694 fixed
2. Same comment as Normal Diff for the volume and placement of Finish hitsound. Try to be as consistent as possible for hitsounds between diffulties too.
3. 00:13:400 (3) - too far from previous item (1.16 DS)
4. 00:39:944 (2) - ^ k
5. 01:07:223 (4,5) - make a blanket like this? I guess so
   
   Screenshot

   

[Hard]

1. Same comment as previously about the hitsound finish
2. Add circle at 00:14:282 and 00:14:429, feels a bit empty now (or a slider if you prefer, ofc)
3. 01:00:164 and 01:00:311 - same I prefer them empty

[Insane]

1. 00:29:282 (2) - Unsnapped slider's end. End it on 00:29:576 AiMod shows no error
2. 00:33:694 (2) - stack with 00:32:517 (2)

Here you go I hope it'll help ~

Zhengster wrote:

M4M!

[Normal]
00:17:076 (3,4) - replace with a slider to make it easier for normal folks?
01:02:958 (3,4) - ^? Should be fine as it is

[Hard]
01:00:459 (1,2,1,2) - they aren't perfectly lined up; make them symmetrical (unless you like the asymmetrical look) yep, asymmetrical look

[Insane]
00:36:194 (4) - move to the next tick, fits better with the music imo ok

Still a newbie modder, these are just suggestions & personal preferences ><

Verlaren wrote:

Yo~ Random/

General:
You don't storyboard, deselect letterbox during breaks
Use grod level 3



Easy:
00:03:988(1,2) - unsnapped spacing ok
00:12:811(1,1) - ^ ^
00:25:164(1-1,2,3) - ^ ^
In general, I advise to check spacing on the entire the map again.



Normal:
00:49:870(1,2,3,4) - remove 3 and 4, a note, and then move 00:50:458(2) on 00:50:753 and then add to the 00:49:870(1) and 00:50:753(2) to reverse.
Just arrange them as shown in the example below (coordinates - (1)-x:404 y:132 (2)-x:376 y:208) In my opinion it would be better to play. ok

SPOILER

Do not forget to check spacings easy and normal.



Hard:
00:33:106(3) - remake slider. This is not very nice. lols, always the focus of attention, this slider. ok



Insane:
CS -1?
00:42:517(6) - move to x:104 y:96 I shifted it somewhere
01:05:753(1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - would not it be easier to arrange all these patterns, using the tool distance snap? for example: I took the advice of another, about splitting it by combo, I thought it was something I would use

SPOILER

Let my mod and a small, but hopefully it will help you. Good luck.

• General

1. Inconsistency in BPM. Taiko diffs have a very slightly different BPM than the other difficulties. I know it's just a very very small difference but you have to fix it!
   
   SPOILER

   
2. Inconsistency in Tags.
   
   SPOILER

   

• Easy

1. 00:20:334 (2) - This note doesn't follow anything at all imo. I highly suggest you to remove it. Sounds way better like that.
2. 00:26:953 (1,2,3) - ^ Same here. The note (2) sounds redundant, it doesn't follow anything at all so it would sound much better if you remove it and then replace (1) and (3) with a slider. Try it out!~
3. 00:28:718 (1) - Consider making this slider 1/1 like your previous ones. Mixing into all of your 1/1 patterns a single 1/6 slider in a Easy difficulty is not a good idea.
4. 00:29:601 (2) - This note doesn't flow good at all imo :3 If you move the note more over the previous slider (1) end, it will flow much better! What I'm suggesting you to do is moving this note over here:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:42:839 (2) - This slider looks randomly placed Try to make pretty patterns with slider shapes. For example, you can try copying 00:41:074 (1) shape and moving this slider over here to make a visually better pattern:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:50:782 (1) - This note is a bit too far away from the spinner centre. Try moving it approximately to x360 y208. I'm telling you a specific place so you don't have to move the next notes to fix spacing.
7. 00:51:664 (1) - Kinda unnecesary NC imo. The song doesn't change in anything here, so I suggest you to remove it.
8. 00:56:960 (3) - This slider looks very unfitting, I'm reffering to its shape. Consider trying some different curve, for example this to improve the pattern:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:59:313 (2) - This is just too much for an Easy, You can't make sliders 1/6 in a easy. Try something more simple like you did at the previous kiai. A 1/1 slider with repeat should do fine!:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:00:490 (1) - To emphasize this part of the song I recommend you to add a hitfinish at the start of this slider.
11. 01:02:255 (2) - This slider placement flows very badly imo. I strongly recommend you to move this slider over here, or something with better flow than the current way if you don't like my suggested way:
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:07:109 (1) - Another redundant nc imo. :p Better remove it. It's part of the same melody. It will also emphasize more the nc of 01:08:433 (1) since it's where the song ends.
    
    Really good job with the rhythm! The map needs some polishment though. The rhythm is good, but the patterns need a bit of improvement.

• Normal

1. 00:17:098 (3) - This triplet is too much for a Normal imo. I think it's enough with those 1/3 sliders. I highly recommend you to remove this note.
2. 00:20:481 (2) - This pattern would flow better if you move this slider more like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:26:953 (1) - I suggest you to add here a soft hitfinish to emphasize more the kiai time.
4. 00:29:601 (5) - How about adding a whistle here? Sounds quite good with the music!
5. 00:30:483 (1) - Soft hitfinish here too?
6. 00:31:366 (3) - Whistle? I think you forgot to add it. :p
7. 00:32:837 (5) - Here I suggest you to move this slider a couple of grids to the left. Looks better imo since it makes a perfect blanket:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:34:013 (1) - Soft hitfinish again?
9. 00:34:896 (3) - To emphasize the end of the song I highly recommend you to add a soft hitfinish at the end of this slider and also to 00:36:661 (5).
10. 00:37:544 (1) - Here a loud hitfinish-like sound can be heard so try adding hitfinish at the start of this slider.
11. 00:39:897 (2,1,2,3) - This section lacks of hitsounds. Try adding some whistles or something to make this part sound less monotonous!
12. 00:42:250 (2) - This slider is placed a bit oddly. I think the flow of it can be improved if you rotate it like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 00:49:899 (1) - Hitfinish at the start of this slider sounds good imo. (Soft hitfinish)
14. 00:54:312 (1) - How about adding a whistle here? Like you did with the previous kiai.
15. 00:55:194 (2) - ^ at the end and start of this slider.
16. 00:56:960 (1) - Soft hitfinish like I suggested you to do at the previous kiai time?
17. 00:57:842 (2) - Whistle~? same reason as above ^
18. 00:58:725 (1,2) - Again like at the 1st kiai o3o soft hitfinish at the start of 1 and end of 2? Well add the rest of missing hitfinihes and whistles by yourself if you like my suggestion :3
19. 01:02:990 (3) - Same thing about triplets in a Normal diff.
20. 01:05:785 (1,2,3,4,5) - In my opinion, if you rearrange a little bit the placement of notes in this pattern like this, it will flow better. Try it out and see if you agree too:
    
    SPOILER

    
    
    Good. I'm against those 1/3 sliders though. I don't like them, but since it fits quite good the music it should be okay. This difficulty needs some polishment too. Ah by the way, those hitfinish suggestions also apply to your Easy difficulty. I completely forgot to write hitfinish suggestions about your easy but it's all the same stuff.

• Hard

1. 00:00:477 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Alll those hitfinishes sound too loud for a calm part like this one. I suggest you to change these normal hitfinishes with Soft ones. Sounds much better imo.
2. 00:17:318 (2) - This slider isn't correctly following the music. It is 1/2, not 1/3. Try moving it to 00:17:245. Also, why does this pattern look like this o.o it looks messy and a bit ugly to be honest. Try making something more clean like this?:
   
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3. 00:20:187 (4,5) - These notes don't flow too good imo. I personally prefer them like this:
   
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4. 00:25:188 (1) - Soft hitfinish? (again, same suggestions mentioned about Normal apply to this diff and to Easy aswell, so if you agree apply the rest :3)
5. 00:36:367 (2,3) - This pattern looks a bit odd too. Here's another suggested way by me I think they flow and look better:
   
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6. 00:51:076 (1,1,1) - All of these nc are too redundant imo. They are part of the same melody so i think it fits more with the music if you remove these three new combos.
7. 00:57:548 (3,4,5) - I know this would sound a bit "nazi" and detailist, but.. this would flow better if you move these three notes a tad down, over here imo since it would be more placed over the direction that (1) and (2) were going. Well I don't know how to say it! just try to play it like this and check if you agree!:
   
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8. 01:04:902 (3) - Another very nazi detail. Try moving this slider a grid down to align it with the previous slider end.
   
   I think you made too many square-ish/boxy patterns imo. I don't like them, but it's just my personal opinion!

• Insane

1. 00:04:888 (7) - This note is oddly placed. Try moving it more over the previous slider end to improve the flow:
   
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2. 00:08:861 (1,2,3) - Same here ^ I would rather suggest you this pattern. Try it out~
   
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3. 00:17:245 (6) - ^ And here. Instead of leaving this single note which isn't even placed correctly with distance snap I suggest you to remove it and then add a repeat to 00:16:951 (5). Much better imo.
   
   I would like to state something general about this difficulty since it has all the same problems as the other difficulties and I don't want to repeat myself (which can result boring/stressing for you too when reading my mod). This difficulty has squareish patterns too, lots of oddly placed notes and streams that don't flow good. Try to check the difficulty by yourself having in mind my previous suggestions to improve flow (written about easy normal and hard) and improve patterns as much as you can. This difficulty needs more work, and some soft hitfinishes at kiai times. :p

Kei wrote:

Hello! Sorry for this BIIIIIIIIIIIG delay! I started with school last week and I didn't have time for anything! Now I'm back again.

• General

1. Inconsistency in BPM. Taiko diffs have a very slightly different BPM than the other difficulties. I know it's just a very very small difference but you have to fix it! ok
   
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2. Inconsistency in Tags. One space extra orz whoops
   
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• Easy

1. 00:20:334 (2) - This note doesn't follow anything at all imo. I highly suggest you to remove it. Sounds way better like that. ok
2. 00:26:953 (1,2,3) - ^ Same here. The note (2) sounds redundant, it doesn't follow anything at all so it would sound much better if you remove it and then replace (1) and (3) with a slider. Try it out!~ I'll try it
3. 00:28:718 (1) - Consider making this slider 1/1 like your previous ones. Mixing into all of your 1/1 patterns a single 1/6 slider in a Easy difficulty is not a good idea. I find it dilutes the rhythm here, I kinda don't want to do that
4. 00:29:601 (2) - This note doesn't flow good at all imo :3 If you move the note more over the previous slider (1) end, it will flow much better! What I'm suggesting you to do is moving this note over here: ok
   
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5. 00:42:839 (2) - This slider looks randomly placed Try to make pretty patterns with slider shapes. For example, you can try copying 00:41:074 (1) shape and moving this slider over here to make a visually better pattern: made it less curvy
   
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6. 00:50:782 (1) - This note is a bit too far away from the spinner centre. Try moving it approximately to x360 y208. I'm telling you a specific place so you don't have to move the next notes to fix spacing. ok
7. 00:51:664 (1) - Kinda unnecesary NC imo. The song doesn't change in anything here, so I suggest you to remove it.
8. 00:56:960 (3) - This slider looks very unfitting, I'm reffering to its shape. Consider trying some different curve, for example this to improve the pattern:
   
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9. 00:59:313 (2) - This is just too much for an Easy, You can't make sliders 1/6 in a easy. Try something more simple like you did at the previous kiai. A 1/1 slider with repeat should do fine!: Just made it slider circle
   
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10. 01:00:490 (1) - To emphasize this part of the song I recommend you to add a hitfinish at the start of this slider. Following the music behind, with the drums, should be enough
11. 01:02:255 (2) - This slider placement flows very badly imo. I strongly recommend you to move this slider over here, or something with better flow than the current way if you don't like my suggested way: shifted the other notes to come after as well
    
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12. 01:07:109 (1) - Another redundant nc imo. :p Better remove it. It's part of the same melody. It will also emphasize more the nc of 01:08:433 (1) since it's where the song ends. ok
    
    Really good job with the rhythm! The map needs some polishment though. The rhythm is good, but the patterns need a bit of improvement.

• Normal

1. 00:17:098 (3) - This triplet is too much for a Normal imo. I think it's enough with those 1/3 sliders. I highly recommend you to remove this note. Ok I guess, nothing much lost
2. 00:20:481 (2) - This pattern would flow better if you move this slider more like this: ok
   
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3. 00:26:953 (1) - I suggest you to add here a soft hitfinish to emphasize more the kiai time. I do want to emphasize the kiai time, it's like the chorus, but I'm afraid the cymbal sound would cover the wonderful drums at the back :S when it's naturally just drums
4. 00:29:601 (5) - How about adding a whistle here? Sounds quite good with the music!
5. 00:30:483 (1) - Soft hitfinish here too? Same reasoning for most finish sound in kiai time
6. 00:31:366 (3) - Whistle? I think you forgot to add it. :p Do you mean the end of the slider? Since the start already has one
7. 00:32:837 (5) - Here I suggest you to move this slider a couple of grids to the left. Looks better imo since it makes a perfect blanket: ok
   
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8. 00:34:013 (1) - Soft hitfinish again?
9. 00:34:896 (3) - To emphasize the end of the song I highly recommend you to add a soft hitfinish at the end of this slider and also to 00:36:661 (5). Added on (5)
10. 00:37:544 (1) - Here a loud hitfinish-like sound can be heard so try adding hitfinish at the start of this slider. Forgot about that
11. 00:39:897 (2,1,2,3) - This section lacks of hitsounds. Try adding some whistles or something to make this part sound less monotonous! added some snares
12. 00:42:250 (2) - This slider is placed a bit oddly. I think the flow of it can be improved if you rotate it like this: (2) was a bit too long anyway, it didn't end at the right time
    
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13. 00:49:899 (1) - Hitfinish at the start of this slider sounds good imo. (Soft hitfinish) going with whistles
14. 00:54:312 (1) - How about adding a whistle here? Like you did with the previous kiai.
15. 00:55:194 (2) - ^ at the end and start of this slider.
16. 00:56:960 (1) - Soft hitfinish like I suggested you to do at the previous kiai time?
17. 00:57:842 (2) - Whistle~? same reason as above ^
18. 00:58:725 (1,2) - Again like at the 1st kiai o3o soft hitfinish at the start of 1 and end of 2? Well add the rest of missing hitfinihes and whistles by yourself if you like my suggestion :3
19. 01:02:990 (3) - Same thing about triplets in a Normal diff.
20. 01:05:785 (1,2,3,4,5) - In my opinion, if you rearrange a little bit the placement of notes in this pattern like this, it will flow better. Try it out and see if you agree too:
    
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    Good. I'm against those 1/3 sliders though. I don't like them, but since it fits quite good the music it should be okay. This difficulty needs some polishment too. Ah by the way, those hitfinish suggestions also apply to your Easy difficulty. I completely forgot to write hitfinish suggestions about your easy but it's all the same stuff.

• Hard

1. 00:00:477 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Alll those hitfinishes sound too loud for a calm part like this one. I suggest you to change these normal hitfinishes with Soft ones. Sounds much better imo.
2. 00:17:318 (2) - This slider isn't correctly following the music. It is 1/2, not 1/3. Try moving it to 00:17:245. Also, why does this pattern look like this o.o it looks messy and a bit ugly to be honest. Try making something more clean like this?: Probably accidentally moved it
   
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3. 00:20:187 (4,5) - These notes don't flow too good imo. I personally prefer them like this: ok
   
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4. 00:25:188 (1) - Soft hitfinish? (again, same suggestions mentioned about Normal apply to this diff and to Easy aswell, so if you agree apply the rest :3)
5. 00:36:367 (2,3) - This pattern looks a bit odd too. Here's another suggested way by me I think they flow and look better: ok
   
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6. 00:51:076 (1,1,1) - All of these nc are too redundant imo. They are part of the same melody so i think it fits more with the music if you remove these three new combos.
7. 00:57:548 (3,4,5) - I know this would sound a bit "nazi" and detailist, but.. this would flow better if you move these three notes a tad down, over here imo since it would be more placed over the direction that (1) and (2) were going. Well I don't know how to say it! just try to play it like this and check if you agree!:
   
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8. 01:04:902 (3) - Another very nazi detail. Try moving this slider a grid down to align it with the previous slider end.
   
   I think you made too many square-ish/boxy patterns imo. I don't like them, but it's just my personal opinion! Yes, I tend to use those, my kinda thing maybe

• Insane

1. 00:04:888 (7) - This note is oddly placed. Try moving it more over the previous slider end to improve the flow: moved it closer to the end
   
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2. 00:08:861 (1,2,3) - Same here ^ I would rather suggest you this pattern. Try it out~
   
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3. 00:17:245 (6) - ^ And here. Instead of leaving this single note which isn't even placed correctly with distance snap I suggest you to remove it and then add a repeat to 00:16:951 (5). Much better imo.
   
   I would like to state something general about this difficulty since it has all the same problems as the other difficulties and I don't want to repeat myself (which can result boring/stressing for you too when reading my mod). This difficulty has squareish patterns too, lots of oddly placed notes and streams that don't flow good. Try to check the difficulty by yourself having in mind my previous suggestions to improve flow (written about easy normal and hard) and improve patterns as much as you can. This difficulty needs more work, and some soft hitfinishes at kiai times. :p Sorry, it's my style. I tried to make it less linear, but well, tried.

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That's all I've got! Good luck! I hope I was helpful.

I really like the song, so.. enjoy my star!

1. 50% of the song is kiai time. I think it's a little too much.

1. 00:12:832 (1) - Why not a vertical one? You would have a pattern: horizontal/vertical/horizontal/vertical.
2. 00:20:775 (2) - Finish?
3. 00:37:544 (1,2,1,2) - They seems a little bit random. Why not trying to do some sort of pattern?
4. 00:59:607 (2) - Move it one grid down.
5. 01:05:785 (1,2,1) - In order to finish at the center move them two grid left.

1. 00:24:305 (3) - Finish at the end. (if you do it you'll have to do the same for 00:27:835 (3), 00:31:366 (3) etc...)
2. 00:26:953 (1) - Since you put a finish at 00:23:423 (1) why not here?
3. 00:30:483 (1) - ^
4. 00:34:013 (1) - ^
5. 00:48:134 (1) - Move it to x=224 y=280 for the blanket.
6. 00:53:429 to the end - I think it miss you some finish here. It's two step from hell so you can't possibly have a map too quiet.

1. Again i think you could add some finishes.
2. I think your DS is a little bit low for a hard.
3. 00:07:537 (1) - Move it to x=440 y=72.
4. 00:20:481 (5) - Finish at the end.
5. 00:41:809 (3) - Move it to x=200 y=288.
6. 00:41:956 (4) - Move it to x=168 y=264.
7. 00:50:193 (2) - Rotate it 90° clockwise and put it at the same spot.
8. 00:59:313 (3) - Move it one grid left.
9. 00:59:607 (4) - Move it to somewhere with the same abcissa than 00:58:725 (1). (x=164)

1. 00:20:775 (3) - Move it to x=272 y=224.
2. 00:32:248 (1,2) - It really kills the flow of your map.
3. 00:56:665 (1,3) - Not at the same high.
4. 01:01:814 (1) - Move it to x=72 y=320.

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

Here is a mod:

[General]

1. 50% of the song is kiai time. I think it's a little too much.

[Easy]

1. 00:12:832 (1) - Why not a vertical one? You would have a pattern: horizontal/vertical/horizontal/vertical. ok
2. 00:20:775 (2) - Finish? added a whistle instead
3. 00:37:544 (1,2,1,2) - They seems a little bit random. Why not trying to do some sort of pattern? not really sure of any pattern I want to use
4. 00:59:607 (2) - Move it one grid down.
5. 01:05:785 (1,2,1) - In order to finish at the center move them two grid left. ok

[Normal]

1. 00:24:305 (3) - Finish at the end. (if you do it you'll have to do the same for 00:27:835 (3), 00:31:366 (3) etc...)
2. 00:26:953 (1) - Since you put a finish at 00:23:423 (1) why not here? because of the music
3. 00:30:483 (1) - ^
4. 00:34:013 (1) - ^
5. 00:48:134 (1) - Move it to x=224 y=280 for the blanket.
6. 00:53:429 to the end - I think it miss you some finish here. It's two step from hell so you can't possibly have a map too quiet. The kiai focuses on the chorus of the song, all hitsounds follow the music, drum hitsounds emphasizes when necessary, this portion of the chorus actually becomes softer, so I tried following that

[Hard]

1. Again i think you could add some finishes.
2. I think your DS is a little bit low for a hard. adjusted
3. 00:07:537 (1) - Move it to x=440 y=72.
4. 00:20:481 (5) - Finish at the end.
5. 00:41:809 (3) - Move it to x=200 y=288.
6. 00:41:956 (4) - Move it to x=168 y=264.
7. 00:50:193 (2) - Rotate it 90° clockwise and put it at the same spot. ok
8. 00:59:313 (3) - Move it one grid left.
9. 00:59:607 (4) - Move it to somewhere with the same abcissa than 00:58:725 (1). (x=164)

[Insane]

1. 00:20:775 (3) - Move it to x=272 y=224.
2. 00:32:248 (1,2) - It really kills the flow of your map. added a note
3. 00:56:665 (1,3) - Not at the same high.
4. 01:01:814 (1) - Move it to x=72 y=320.

Your map hasn't any flow or anything but it missed some patterns. Sometimes the notes really seems randomly placed and i think you should work a little on that. Beside that it's good . I will try to shift their positions while keeping the rhythm

theramdans wrote:

Hi man~
Here is my mod u requested
Sorry for a very short mod, because the song is short as well

Easy

~ Everything is ok I guess

Normal

diff.settings : AR +1, OD +1 added OD
00:39:897 (2)~ why dont make this 1/3 slider with 1 repeat? It follows the music for the fact that this is simpler :X
00:54:018 ~ add a note?
00:56:665 ~ add a note? for both, making this difficulty quite simple, which is why I placed circles in general spots in the song
01:00:490 (1)~ delete this, and add a 1/3 slider with 1 repeat on 01:00:196 same here, simpler rhythm

Hard

00:20:922 ~ break here? Better map it I think
01:00:196 ~ add 1 1/3 slider or 2 circles (spaced 1/3)
01:06:226 ~ add a circle here (If you want to stack with the next circle, use tiny grid size)
01:07:109 ~ <^ lol added at the other 2 vacant spots 01:06:520 and 01:07:403

Insane

00:48:134 (1) ~ too many repeats, make it two sliders?? I think I'll leave it as one

Good Luck, I will shoot star If I can
Get better soon man \^o^/

ezek wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue.

Sorry, I couldn't find something, it looks fine in my opinion.
So that means... STAR!

[ Sana ] wrote:

Sana's modding from M4M MODDING

oh it's 1/3 snap!

[Insane]

00:17:686 (1,2,3,4) - smother -> http://puu.sh/2ZpLE.jpg
00:20:775 (4,5,6,1) - stack correctly I will try my best
00:24:011 (5,6,7,8) - scale it some keeping this pattern
00:40:044 (2) - change into circle
00:42:839 (1,2,3) - stack correctly same here
00:51:370 (4) - ctrl H+J+G ok

[Hard]

00:05:331 (5) - http://puu.sh/2ZpQJ.jpg moved a bit
00:30:042 (2) - NC
00:30:483 (1) - remove NC
00:38:426 (2,3) - stack it correctly k
00:40:044 (2) - 4grid up
00:45:486 (4) - 2grid up
00:57:989 (5) - 1grid up
01:08:138 - NC k

[Normal]

00:34:896 (3) - 5grid up for flow adjusted positions
01:06:962 (3) - NC

[Easy]

00:12:832 (1) - ctrl G+H
00:28:718 (1) - make round
00:53:429 (1,2) - not symmetry oh
00:58:725 (1) - Easy diff. must be distanced exactly seems find when I use snap
01:05:785 (4,5) - doesnt matches with song! make beat like this -> http://puu.sh/2Zq1G.jpg keeping for now


i hope it's helpful to you!!

nice map Nice song~~ GOOD LUCK~!!

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3 from my queue. Sorry for the delay

General
check AI mod, fix the letterbox consistency issue mentioned in it can't seem to open AI mod, it has an error
The finish hitsound is too loud to fit in the music. Consider to turn down its volume seems fine on my side though

Insane
00:25:188 (1) - why is there no finish sound from this point on ?
00:29:380 (2) - this slider is off-beat make it 1/6 beat earlier (starts at 00:29:306 - ) changed
00:30:042 (1) - maybe remove it, as you're following the melody all the way from kiai, no the drums
00:32:469 (2) - also off-beat, should be at 00:32:542 - changed, I should have noticed there were more triplets in a beat in the song
00:33:572 (1) - same opinion, remove this ?
00:39:309 (1,2) - why stack only stack these two. You didn't stack any other sliders with the same pattern
00:48:134 (1) - this is a really weird rhythm arrangement
00:53:576 - why is the volume at kiai is even lower than the former part ? I chose the recurring music portions to be kiai, it just turns out to be softer

Hard
00:07:537 (1,2) - really no good stacking
00:19:157 (3) - finish at end ? you used finish at similar points before this I purely use hitsounds to follow the music, when the music has cymbals, I use finish
00:25:188 (1) - also whistle at end sounds really nice ok
00:27:247 (2) - same opinion. whistle ^
00:28:718 (1) - same idea, whistle at the 1st reverse (won't mention other similar points)
00:33:719 - add note people tell me to remove or add this note multiple times, I think I'll temporarily add it for now
00:36:661 (3) - default soft hitsound sounds really weird don't really think so

Normal
00:39:897 (2) - plz always obey the distance snap, in Easy/Normal diffs I think I fixed it now
00:47:252 (2,1) - ^ ^

Easy
nothing wrong ~

Good luck