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Sako Tomohisa - Bokutachi no Uta (TV Size)

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Frostmourne
M4M please :o

General
fine

Easy
00:29:611 (1) - maybe, you can try ending this slider at 00:30:702 (shorten 1/2 beat and it will end at the voice "NI") and then move 00:31:248 (2) - back 1/2 beat either
(it will start at 00:30:975) and add a note at 00:32:066
I think it will follow vocal more precisely and correspond with 00:32:338 (4,5) - really well
It's not too hard for the Easy diff here , rhythm is quite understandable imo
01:18:975 (5) - left 1 grid , I think I won't care the spacing but how it looks in play mode (overlapping will be punished)

Normal
01:20:611 (2) - maybe finish at the head? (01:20:611)
01:21:429 (3) - ^
it's like a climax of the song I would say , as the keyboard sound on 01:19:793 also appears at 01:20:611,01:21:429 and 01:21:975
so I think finishes might work for this well ! for these 4 points together

Hard
eh.. HP drain is quite unbalance , maybe try reducing by 1 or 2 would be nice~
00:12:157 (1) - I think this slider head doesn't need the whistle , it doubles itself with 00:11:611 (4) - and doesn't sound good imo
but ehh... I think you better remove whistle on 00:11:611 (4) - . as I see from further notes, and the 00:12:157 (1) - has piano sound so it will be better to remove whistle on 00:11:611 (4) - 's tail only
00:14:202 (6) - remove whistle and add whistle at 00:14:338 (1) - instead , similar piano sounds here 00:16:248 (6) - , 00:17:066 (2) - ,00:20:884 (1) -,00:23:066 (1) - and so on
01:20:611 (3,5) - maybe finishes ? same ideas as Normal diff please do if you choose to do in Normal

Good Luck !
Topic Starter
No_Gu
fixed some q.q
update and thanks
Flask
球不S

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]
  1. Title Unicode: 僕たちの歌 (TV Size) 記得補上啊
  2. Tag上 ending 你怎麼漏掉了.. 還有上 Blast of Tempest 好像是英譯
  3. BG換jpg如何 自己轉
  4. 把letterbox during break取消掉 沒break啊
[ Easy]
  1. 00:00:765 (1) - 我覺得還是一顆note代替掉好了 diffname掛Easy卻用1/2這樣對嗎
  2. 00:05:066 - 你漏whistle 不用辯解了自己去看其他diff
  3. 00:32:338 (3) - 沒必要到紅線吧 沒聽出什麼音在紅線上啊 一眼就是1/1的節奏
  4. 00:36:702 (3) - ^ 我才發現上面那條紅線點有vocal...這裡就沒了吧hehe
  5. 00:56:611 - 音量可以小點 突然來softfinish好吵 如果改就alldiff吧
  6. 01:06:157 - 應該也可以clap的 做個那啥 層次感
  7. 01:18:157 (4,5) - 平行一點?
[ Normal]
  1. 00:15:157 (2) - 重疊醜 就偏一下嘛
  2. 00:42:157 (6) - NC 反正換句了
  3. 01:12:975 - 還是補note好
[ Hard]
  1. 00:06:702 (2) - *nazi*往下一兩格包好看一點 我才不管你要不要作包
  2. 00:14:066 (5,6,1) - 可以下移一點 (x:380,y:252) 跳很好 但是有點太大跳了 感覺再繞回去(3,4)的跳就沒意義
  3. 01:05:611 (5) - 用1.7x擺 更有層次感的跳
騙kd 再見
tutuhaha
[Easy]
AR-1看看
00:01:248 (2) - 为了凸显一下我觉得还是从这边NC比较好
00:07:248 (X) - 这个whistle我个人希望降下音
00:07:793 (1,1) - 距离有点远,我一般讨厌被人说这个的话会把spinner拉到长白线那里然后把1删掉
00:27:429 (1) - 这个spinner在easy显得有点难然后怎么听都觉得不是在红线结尾啊,与其非要跟着尾音拉还不如把这个spinner删掉然后拉个slider加折返什么的
00:38:884 (1,2,3,4) - 好遮,看起来不好看而且还一定会被人说00:34:520 (1) - 从这里往右边移一点然后腾出位置就好摆了
00:59:884 (3) - 有点超太多了...

[Normal]
01:19:248 (7,8) - 太突兀了这个
我觉得你把全部note框起来后往右边移一格会比较好...这个难度玩起来有一种很明显的左边很挤右边好空的感觉...而且挤得还都是左下一点..

[Hard]
00:11:611 (4) - 往上移一格
00:20:338 (4) - 虽然重音较低但是这边也稍微强调一下比较好,拉开点
00:32:066 (1,2,3) - 3个距离一样玩起来比较好,而且是2-3统一到1-2距离
00:33:157 (4,5,6) - 然后这三个统一到^这个原来的2-3距离
00:33:975 (1,2,3) - 接着这三个变为小间距然后1和6来个跳
00:38:202 (4) - 3连的表现力在这里没有跳好,建议这个去掉然后做个小跳
00:58:793 (3,4) - 这个拖拍有点没必要还是改成3连?
01:06:157 (6) - 放到上面一点然后和接下来的1拉开间距玩起来比较好

没了,我好饿
Haya
From your modding queue

[Easy]
There are many unnecessary inherited points:
SPOILER
00:01:793 -
00:02:338 -
00:03:975 -
00:04:520 -
00:06:157 -
00:06:702 -
00:40:111 -
00:40:384 -
00:41:338 -
00:41:611 -
01:22:520 -
00:27:429 (1) - This spinner COULD be too short for a newbie
00:29:611 (1) - Shorten it by 2 ticks
00:32:338 (3) - ^
00:36:702 (3) - ^
00:48:429 (1) - Make a kickslider
00:57:975 (1,2,3,4) - Might be confusing
01:09:702 (5) - This overlap doesn't look good + might be confusing

[Normal]
Same as Easy - there are many unnecessary inherited points
00:15:157 (2) - Ugly overlap
00:35:884 - Add a note
00:39:975 (3) - Change this one to this: http://puu.sh/1ZMl6
00:42:157 (6) - NC
00:49:793 (2) - Make a kickslider
00:52:793 (8) - NC
00:53:611 (1) - Remove NC
00:57:157 (6) - NC
01:09:157 (4) - Make this one straight

[Hard]
00:01:248 (1) - Remove NC
00:20:884 (1) - Stack it or do it like this: http://puu.sh/1ZMqx
00:34:520 (3,4,5) - Put the Circle properly between the (3) and (5)
00:40:520 (1) - Remove NC
00:40:793 (2) - NC
00:48:429 (5) - NC
00:52:657 (4) - Move it between the two sliders
00:57:838 (5) - ^
00:59:338 (4) - Distance snap
01:13:247 (1) - Remove NC
01:14:066 (3) - NC
01:21:975 (1) - Make the slider ends even

That's it!
Good luck at ranking it ~ :3
Topic Starter
No_Gu
thanks for mod.fixed some
update
Pokie
Request from 魔法少年めい★ぴぐ

契約したくないです(笑

 Easy

  • 00:27:429 (1) - IMO, replacing this spinner by a long slider will be the best choice. Or just extend this to 1/2 forward? ( 00:29:066 )
    01:19:793 (1) - (slider's reverse) idk if it count as 'missing' or not (you've added it on both N/H), but how about adding a whistle here?

 Normal

  • 00:33:975 (1) - (slider's head) Probably needs a whistle,

 Hard

  1. Overall Difficulty -1, it's equal to AR now....if possible, reduce HP Drain Rate by 1 as well.
    00:02:884 (2,1) - Dagea...You didn't add any stack here but 00:03:429 (1,2) - did... But it matches my taste.
    00:35:611 (6,7) - This spacing kengdiene. Personally it's not recommend when you did a 1/4 before ( 00:34:520 (3,4) ) but using a lower spacing for 1/2.


    00:58:793 (3,4,5) - ^, DT dang are crying.


    01:00:429 (1,2,3) - Then fix these notes with this pattern?

That's all. ;)
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Pokie wrote:

Request from 魔法少年めい★ぴぐぴぴぴぴぐじゃない!死ね!このぽゲイ

契約したくないです(笑なぜ?

 Easy

  • 00:27:429 (1) - IMO, replacing this spinner by a long slider will be the best choice. Or just extend this to 1/2 forward? ( 00:29:066 ) ahh changed in another way
    01:19:793 (1) - (slider's reverse) idk if it count as 'missing' or not (you've added it on both N/H), but how about adding a whistle here?ok

 Normal

  • 00:33:975 (1) - (slider's head) Probably needs a whistle, ok

 Hard

  1. Overall Difficulty -1, it's equal to AR now....if possible, reduce HP Drain Rate by 1 as well.OK
    00:02:884 (2,1) - Dagea...You didn't add any stack here but 00:03:429 (1,2) - did... But it matches my taste. hhh
    00:35:611 (6,7) - This spacing kengdiene. Personally it's not recommend when you did a 1/4 before ( 00:34:520 (3,4) ) but using a lower spacing for 1/2.kkk

    00:58:793 (3,4,5) - ^, DT dang are crying.kkk

    01:00:429 (1,2,3) - Then fix these notes with this pattern?kkk

That's all. ;)
ありがとう
Pokie
Rechecked, looks fine now ;)

Have your bubble!
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Pokie wrote:

Rechecked, looks fine now ;)

Have your bubble!
www thanks
Ulysses
處女泡!?
Pokie

nold_1702 wrote:

處女泡!?
p/2120527 =o= 係呢到…, haha
eveless
I no clothes我还是去做东方吧
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ No_Gu ~ :)

No kds pls ~

[General]


  1. Remove unneeded Letterbox during.

[Easy]


  1. AR-1 for better diff spread.

OK ~ Relax map nothing to say ~

Call me back ~
;)
Topic Starter
No_Gu
All fixed.Thank you
Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Nice job ~

Here you go <3


Skystar
我的泡呢 我的GD呢
Fumika
Oh god Pro Gu, I'm gonna finish my ver. after my exam soon.
Yocake
大爱这首~ :3
Topic Starter
No_Gu
ohhh..thanks very much
Pokie
還想說rank去哪了原來又8張了…共洗你呀
B2IN
good
S h i o n
gu快出柜
Flask
又rank
mintong89

Flask wrote:

又rank
Topic Starter
No_Gu

S h i o n wrote:

gu快出柜
拣好你的节操出门左转。。
kanpakyin
果然是少年T....
DxD NEW Akeno
愛花<3
K i A i
I love you :)
564944103
It good song~ ;)
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