Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue.
Easy
00:10:130 (3,4) - The way this flows and is shaped is distracting. Turn the 4 slider into the other direction so it is mirrored?
00:29:381 (2,1) - The placement and flow is weird here. The circle is too far up to actually play good. Move it lower and to the sider so its a curved movement.
00:45:882 (1,2) - The slight overlap is not fitting and also looks weird. Move it more lower to fix this.
00:54:591 (3,1) - You should make this spacing larger. This is no break between 3 and 1 so it should have normal spacing.
00:55:966 - Your comboing is messed up a little at the kiai part. Recombo it.
00:59:633 (1,3) - If you would move 3, 1 grid up and 1, 1 grid down it would make a better shape. Currently it looks a little off.
01:00:244 (3,4) - Make the 3 slider curved so it goes better with the next element.
01:02:689 (4,1) - Spacing mistake here, too big.
01:09:717 (3,1) - Spacing issue here as well. You need to fix this.
00:38:548 (2,3) - This is too far (0,2x) from your previous slider. Move it closer to avoid spacing changes. Same with this 00:47:257 (2,3) -
Hard
- You could really make more curved sliders and other shapes. There are so many straight ones, which gets bored after a little.
00:04:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - What to say... This song does not have any kind of rythm relating to streams, so you shouldnt use them. These songs are ok for big spacing but no streams. That's too much of overmapping. Remap this.
00:10:130 (7,8,1) - Spacing changes here, why?
00:17:234 (6,7) - Slight spacing difference is not needed, so make normal spacing please.
00:38:548 (1) - Shape this better. This can be prettier.
00:55:966 (6,1) - Make normal spacing here, this can be played as part of the stream so it gets confusing. Make same spacing as 00:56:272 (1,2) -
01:06:967 (1,2) - That's the only jump in the stream and looks weird. Why dont you make normal spacing or add another jump somewhere so it doesnt feel so cut.
Good luck o/
Easy
00:10:130 (3,4) - The way this flows and is shaped is distracting. Turn the 4 slider into the other direction so it is mirrored?
00:29:381 (2,1) - The placement and flow is weird here. The circle is too far up to actually play good. Move it lower and to the sider so its a curved movement.
00:45:882 (1,2) - The slight overlap is not fitting and also looks weird. Move it more lower to fix this.
00:54:591 (3,1) - You should make this spacing larger. This is no break between 3 and 1 so it should have normal spacing.
00:55:966 - Your comboing is messed up a little at the kiai part. Recombo it.
00:59:633 (1,3) - If you would move 3, 1 grid up and 1, 1 grid down it would make a better shape. Currently it looks a little off.
01:00:244 (3,4) - Make the 3 slider curved so it goes better with the next element.
01:02:689 (4,1) - Spacing mistake here, too big.
01:09:717 (3,1) - Spacing issue here as well. You need to fix this.
00:38:548 (2,3) - This is too far (0,2x) from your previous slider. Move it closer to avoid spacing changes. Same with this 00:47:257 (2,3) -
Hard
- You could really make more curved sliders and other shapes. There are so many straight ones, which gets bored after a little.
00:04:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - What to say... This song does not have any kind of rythm relating to streams, so you shouldnt use them. These songs are ok for big spacing but no streams. That's too much of overmapping. Remap this.
00:10:130 (7,8,1) - Spacing changes here, why?
00:17:234 (6,7) - Slight spacing difference is not needed, so make normal spacing please.
00:38:548 (1) - Shape this better. This can be prettier.
00:55:966 (6,1) - Make normal spacing here, this can be played as part of the stream so it gets confusing. Make same spacing as 00:56:272 (1,2) -
01:06:967 (1,2) - That's the only jump in the stream and looks weird. Why dont you make normal spacing or add another jump somewhere so it doesnt feel so cut.
Good luck o/