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Faylan - God FATE (TV Size)

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No_Gu
[General/All diffs]
I notice that the MP3 is a little broken in the end.maybe try to find a new one
why not use 16:9 video?...
add 飛蘭 to artist?

[Normal]
00:02:649 (1,3) - overlap looks really bad
00:04:495 (4,1) - ^
00:23:572 (2) - I think a slider with 2 repeats isn't good to catch for beginners
00:42:341 (1) - I'll delete this if I were you
00:54:341 (4,5,6,7) - try something like this?
01:22:649 (3) - silent these ticks sound better for me
Maybe make kiai time a little more exciting?the stars is 2.77,It still have a gap to 3.And the most important is that the notes in other parts are more enjoyable than those in kiai time..

[Hard]
AR+1 is better for a hard diff imo
00:07:572 change this line to normal is better
00:10:033 add a note here and move the spinner 1/4 after?
00:14:341 (2,3) - 2 is snare drum and 3 is finish sound.listen carefully
00:22:341 (1,2,3) - I really dislike how stack works here..I mean the sliders http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/590050
00:28:649 (4) - clap sould be in the tail not in the head
00:35:264 add note here to follow the exciting music..I think you don't need to make so easy since it's a hard diff
00:37:726 ^
00:39:880 (1,2,3,1,2) - looks a liitle disorderly
01:01:418 (5) - add whistle in the head?
01:11:264 (5) - add finish in the end like you did in the first kiai time
01:18:649 (3) - remove whislte is better imo,so do the notes behind

[Pokie]
The creator's hitsound set is better imo..especially default clap in kiai time sounds really...
Stack Leniency 3 looks neater because you use many 1/1 stacks
00:00:187 (3,4) - add whistle
00:34:649 I'll add normal-hitnormal on each white line If I were you
00:41:418 (2) - here requires a biggter jump..try this? also I think speed up this slider must be fun to play.www Kiai time is pretty good

[Insane]
00:02:341 (7,8,9,10) - I can't hear these in music..
00:05:110 (1) - stop at 00:05:418 is enough imo.
00:12:341 00:12:418 add notes here to follow the drums
00:17:418 hmm.. the slow downs here are hard to read imo...maybe ask more modders for opinions
00:54:341 (1) - add clap in the end..also I think only one slider for such stream is a little boring
01:21:264 (1) - add finish in the end
01:23:264 add a line with soft hitsound is better

nice mapset.take my star
SamiPale
Important stuff中的意见是强烈建议修改的,有可能包括unrankable的事项。
Map designing部分、Rhythm/Placing部分和Hitsounds部分的意见是我的个人见解,如果你觉得不好可以随时忽略。

[Normal]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. ...我还以为这难度会跟Hard一样前面会空着
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:03:572 (2,3,4) - 移下点让他们不遮住(1)?
    2. 00:53:110 (3) - 这么遮可以吗
  4. Hitsounds
    1. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/590538 一看上面吓死我了
[Hard]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. None.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:34:957 (1,2) and 00:37:418 (1,2) - 略直有点不舒服?
    2. 00:39:110 (2,3,1,2) - 有点不好看?
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 这难度用音箱听声音略小?
[Pokie]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. None.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:15:880 (4) - 这个slider形状是不是有点...
    2. 00:19:110 (7) - 不觉得好看啊啊啊啊为什么我用过也会这么觉得啊
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 00:41:572 (1) - Sample Normal?
[Insane]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. None.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 01:01:572 (7) - 是不是可以拉开点?再说这slider支点...
  4. Hitsounds
    1. ..None.
据说你是新人? :?
have a star
Pokie
http://puu.sh/1Vfb4 寫上去懶的刪了
Topic Starter
bl801

No_Gu wrote:

[General/All diffs]
I notice that the MP3 is a little broken in the end.maybe try to find a new oneI guess it's np since i havent had note at there
why not use 16:9 video?...the before one is...
add 飛蘭 to artist?ok

[Normal]
00:02:649 (1,3) - overlap looks really badchanged
00:04:495 (4,1) - ^changed
00:23:572 (2) - I think a slider with 2 repeats isn't good to catch for beginnersI think it's easy enough..
00:42:341 (1) - I'll delete this if I were youthough i want to say you are not me, but anyways fixed
00:54:341 (4,5,6,7) - try something like this? you know the star system is really...f**king
01:22:649 (3) - silent these ticks sound better for medone
Maybe make kiai time a little more exciting?the stars is 2.77,It still have a gap to 3.And the most important is that the notes in other parts are more enjoyable than those in kiai time..I did it, the the star is 3.17 at least, so...

[Hard]
AR+1 is better for a hard diff imodone
00:07:572 change this line to normal is betterdone
00:10:033 add a note here and move the spinner 1/4 after?No. just a habit
00:14:341 (2,3) - 2 is snare drum and 3 is finish sound.listen carefullydone
00:22:341 (1,2,3) - I really dislike how stack works here..I mean the sliders http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/590050changed
00:28:649 (4) - clap sould be in the tail not in the headdone
00:35:264 add note here to follow the exciting music..I think you don't need to make so easy since it's a hard diffdone
00:37:726 ^^
00:39:880 (1,2,3,1,2) - looks a liitle disorderlychanged
01:01:418 (5) - add whistle in the head?fixed
01:11:264 (5) - add finish in the end like you did in the first kiai timeoh..fixed
01:18:649 (3) - remove whislte is better imo,so do the notes behinddone


[Insane]
00:02:341 (7,8,9,10) - I can't hear these in music..use 25% plz.
00:05:110 (1) - stop at 00:05:418 is enough imo.i'd like to change rhythm at the breathing
00:12:341 00:12:418 add notes here to follow the drumsdone
00:17:418 hmm.. the slow downs here are hard to read imo...maybe ask more modders for opinionsI learn it from hp30, also there have many maps use the slow down for vocal
00:54:341 (1) - add clap in the end..also I think only one slider for such stream is a little boringI think so, but to put too many stream is really too hard for me
01:21:264 (1) - add finish in the enddone
01:23:264 add a line with soft hitsound is betterI'd like normal

nice mapset.take my star
thanks for modding, i will upload it when my game connect...
Topic Starter
bl801

SamiPale wrote:

Important stuff中的意见是强烈建议修改的,有可能包括unrankable的事项。
Map designing部分、Rhythm/Placing部分和Hitsounds部分的意见是我的个人见解,如果你觉得不好可以随时忽略。

[Normal]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. ...我还以为这难度会跟Hard一样前面会空着删了
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:03:572 (2,3,4) - 移下点让他们不遮住(1)?OK
    2. 00:53:110 (3) - 这么遮可以吗好我掉个头
  4. Hitsounds
    1. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/590538 一看上面吓死我了pokie大大说小细节别在意!
[Hard]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. None.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 00:34:957 (1,2) and 00:37:418 (1,2) - 略直有点不舒服?
    2. 00:39:110 (2,3,1,2) - 有点不好看?
  4. Hitsounds
    1. 这难度用音箱听声音略小?
    我看看能不能把音效文件声音放大……

[Insane]
  1. Important stuff
    1. None.
  2. Map designing
    1. None.
  3. Rhythm/Placing
    1. 01:01:572 (7) - 是不是可以拉开点?再说这slider支点...好O.O
  4. Hitsounds
    1. ..None.
据说你是新人? :?我是呀!
have a star
谢谢mod :>,现在连不上网T-T...我等等再更新更新好了!
NewRulerNA
hi
found issues. you must fix those.

[General]
  1. video offset is not same between diff. you must change Insane.
[Pokie]
  1. 00:45:725 - slider end is not snapped
  2. 01:18:648 - ^
gl
Topic Starter
bl801

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
found issues. you must fix those.

[General]
  1. video offset is not same between diff. you must change Insane.fixed

gl
thanks
10nya

~ M4M From Queue ~


sorry for the lateness

[General]
nothing!

[Normal]
  1. I believe slider SV is too low for normal Q_Q It'll effect the placement (so current placement is too bad for me *sorry Q_Q*) so I suggest to change them into 0.80 :D
  2. 00:08:495 (1)- : nc should be 00:07:572 (5) here
  3. You followed rhythm nicely, good job :3
[Hard]
  1. Slider SV too low for hard Q_Q
  2. 00:22:341 (1,2,3)- : why the spacing tooo low? It'll be confusing :<
  3. 00:28:649 (4)- : ^
  4. 00:32:187 (1,2,3)- : ^
  5. 00:43:264 (1)- : remove nc would better :3
  6. 00:50:495 (1)- : ^
[Pokie]
  1. 00:24:803 (3)- : add normal finish sound would be nice
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:880 (6)- : nc here would good
  2. 00:14:649 - : nc here also if you do so then remove nc here 00:14:957
  3. 00:17:880 (2)- : to hear the rhythm you used at here 00:15:264 (2,3)- add clap on the slider head would be good~
  4. 00:28:187- : add note?
  5. 01:01:572 (7)- : add normal finish sound
ok good luck!
Topic Starter
bl801

- t e n n y a - wrote:


~ M4M From Queue ~


sorry for the lateness

[General]
nothing!

[Normal]
  1. I believe slider SV is too low for normal Q_Q It'll effect the placement (so current placement is too bad for me *sorry Q_Q*) so I suggest to change them into 0.80 :Dbpm is to high so i think a little slow sv is easy to catch.
  2. 00:08:495 (1)- : nc should be 00:07:572 (5) hereok
  3. You followed rhythm nicely, good job :3
[Hard]
  1. Slider SV too low for hard Q_Qin fact this is a 4.5 star normal(ry
  2. 00:22:341 (1,2,3)- : why the spacing tooo low? It'll be confusing :<they're stacking sliders in the first place, then someone said too ugly since the stack leniency so i changed.
  3. 00:28:649 (4)- : ^^
  4. 00:32:187 (1,2,3)- : ^^
  5. 00:43:264 (1)- : remove nc would better :3done
  6. 00:50:495 (1)- : ^
sorry but no :<
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:880 (6)- : nc here would gooddone
  2. 00:14:649 - : nc here also if you do so then remove nc here 00:14:957i dont know why x.x
  3. 00:17:880 (2)- : to hear the rhythm you used at here 00:15:264 (2,3)- add clap on the slider head would be good~removed the 00:15:264 (3)'s clap
  4. 00:28:187- : add note?ok
  5. 01:01:572 (7)- : add normal finish sounddone
ok good luck!thanks~
Colin Hou
pogay asked me to take a look on this x_x

[General]
  1. 01:22:649 - suggest KIAI ends here. (where the drums ends
  2. Title: God FATE (TV Size)
[Insane]
  1. 01:05:572 (2) - suggest separating this into 1/2 slider plus note
[Pokie]
  1. AR+1 can help read the 1/1 rhythm gaps better.
  2. 01:23:880 (1) - shape this better?
[Normal]
  1. 00:30:649 (2,3,4) - stacking not good with this low AR. try avoid this when use notenoteslider.
  2. 00:07:264 (4) - sounds for nothing here, you'd better remove and try rearrange the patterns, cuz a 2/1 empty stack is really confusing for beginners
  3. 01:01:726 (3,4,1) - broken spacing
  4. 01:22:649 (3) - maybe newcombo
~~~
Topic Starter
bl801

Colin Hou wrote:

pogay asked me to take a look on this x_x

[General]
  1. 01:22:649 - suggest KIAI ends here. (where the drums ends
  2. Title: God FATE (TV Size)
[Insane]
  1. 01:05:572 (2) - suggest separating this into 1/2 slider plus note
[Normal]
  1. 00:30:649 (2,3,4) - stacking not good with this low AR. try avoid this when use notenoteslider.
  2. 00:07:264 (4) - sounds for nothing here, you'd better remove and try rearrange the patterns, cuz a 2/1 empty stack is really confusing for beginners
  3. 01:01:726 (3,4,1) - broken spacing
  4. 01:22:649 (3) - maybe newcombo
~~~
all fixed! thanks~
Pokie
http://puu.sh/1WDU9

Fixed previous moddings! 8-)
tutuhaha
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/76224
ED在此,请让我们共结连理【不对】
smallboat
哈囉 來mod..
看自己斟酌要不要用:)

hard
00:45:110 (2) - 應該可+note?
00:49:726 (1) - 拉到後面紅線?
00:53:572 (4) - slider可縮短 前端00:53:726 尾端00:54:033
01:17:110 (5) - +note
01:18:495 (3) - +note
01:19:572 (2) - +note
01:20:033 (3) - +note

insane
00:10:110 (1) - spinner會不會太近? 拉到00:10:187看看?
Kayano
[General]
Audio Lead-in ->2500ms

[Normal]
00:04:495 (4,1) - 距离太远了> <

[Hard]
00:23:572 (1) - 和00:23:264 (3) - 拉近一点比较好 起始点x:376 y:312
00:26:957 (3) - 同样觉得近点好
01:23:880 (1) - 用一个单note吧 滑条的收尾已经没有rhythm了

[Pokie]
01:23:880 (1) - 同Hard

[Insane]
01:23:880 (1) - 同Hard
Insane的变速太凶残了
Topic Starter
bl801
:oops:

smallboat wrote:

哈囉 來mod..
看自己斟酌要不要用:)

hard
00:45:110 (2) - 應該可+note?
00:49:726 (1) - 拉到後面紅線?
00:53:572 (4) - slider可縮短 前端00:53:726 尾端00:54:033
01:17:110 (5) - +note
01:18:495 (3) - +note
01:19:572 (2) - +note
01:20:033 (3) - +note

insane
00:10:110 (1) - spinner會不會太近? 拉到00:10:187看看?

Blackshane wrote:

[General]
Audio Lead-in ->2500ms

[Normal]
00:04:495 (4,1) - 距离太远了> <

[Hard]
00:23:572 (1) - 和00:23:264 (3) - 拉近一点比较好 起始点x:376 y:312
00:26:957 (3) - 同样觉得近点好
01:23:880 (1) - 用一个单note吧 滑条的收尾已经没有rhythm了

[Pokie]
01:23:880 (1) - 同Hard

[Insane]
01:23:880 (1) - 同Hard
Insane的变速太凶残了
thanks for modding~ fixed of some
Colin Hou
KIAI弄成Hard/Pogay难度那样啊
Topic Starter
bl801

Colin Hou wrote:

KIAI弄成Hard/Pogay难度那样啊
没注意到...fixed
Pokie
求別在妹子面前叫我pogay啊惡俗科林
Colin Hou
bubbled
Topic Starter
bl801

Colin Hou wrote:

bubbled
thanks >.<
No_Gu
科林学习速度极快,这么快就掌握了pogay的真名
NatsumeRin
Maybe try to get your easier diffs not that crowded in the future.
Fine enough for a first map anyway.
Flask
哇~
Topic Starter
bl801

NatsumeRin wrote:

Maybe try to get your easier diffs not that crowded in the future.
Fine enough for a first map anyway.
thanks :3
Natsu
Congratz *-*/
No_Gu
hhh
Zero__wind
congratz
给神麻婆跪了
Scorpiour
congrats and enjoy your first rank~
Strawberry
congratz~ o/
smallboat
恭喜 :)
y u c a
www
omedeto(:3 )三*:・。
LunarSakuya
wow i love this map
the vid was 8Q_______
Congrats on your first rank!!
Raging Bull
That stream+jump near the end lol.

congrats still.
Espionage724
00:27:110 (3) - On Insane diff, this beat seems to blend in perfectly with the hair on the video, causing me to miss it nearly every single time (I don't even see it pretty much).

Guessing it's just me though since it wasn't mentioned before lol
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