[General/All diffs]
I notice that the MP3 is a little broken in the end.maybe try to find a new one
why not use 16:9 video?...
add 飛蘭 to artist?
[Normal]
00:02:649 (1,3) - overlap looks really bad
00:04:495 (4,1) - ^
00:23:572 (2) - I think a slider with 2 repeats isn't good to catch for beginners
00:42:341 (1) - I'll delete this if I were you
00:54:341 (4,5,6,7) - try something like this?
01:22:649 (3) - silent these ticks sound better for me
Maybe make kiai time a little more exciting?the stars is 2.77,It still have a gap to 3.And the most important is that the notes in other parts are more enjoyable than those in kiai time..
[Hard]
AR+1 is better for a hard diff imo
00:07:572 change this line to normal is better
00:10:033 add a note here and move the spinner 1/4 after?
00:14:341 (2,3) - 2 is snare drum and 3 is finish sound.listen carefully
00:22:341 (1,2,3) - I really dislike how stack works here..I mean the sliders
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59005000:28:649 (4) - clap sould be in the tail not in the head
00:35:264 add note here to follow the exciting music..I think you don't need to make so easy since it's a hard diff
00:37:726 ^
00:39:880 (1,2,3,1,2) - looks a liitle disorderly
01:01:418 (5) - add whistle in the head?
01:11:264 (5) - add finish in the end like you did in the first kiai time
01:18:649 (3) - remove whislte is better imo,so do the notes behind
[Pokie]
The creator's hitsound set is better imo..especially default clap in kiai time sounds really...
Stack Leniency 3 looks neater because you use many 1/1 stacks
00:00:187 (3,4) - add whistle
00:34:649 I'll add normal-hitnormal on each white line If I were you
00:41:418 (2) - here requires a biggter jump..try this? also I think speed up this slider must be fun to play.
www Kiai time is pretty good
[Insane]
00:02:341 (7,8,9,10) - I can't hear these in music..
00:05:110 (1) - stop at 00:05:418 is enough imo.
00:12:341 00:12:418 add notes here to follow the drums
00:17:418 hmm.. the slow downs here are hard to read imo...maybe ask more modders for opinions
00:54:341 (1) - add clap in the end..also I think only one slider for such stream is a little boring
01:21:264 (1) - add finish in the end
01:23:264 add a line with soft hitsound is better
nice mapset.take my star