Kei wrote:
General
* I can baaaaaarely hear the claps. Consider rising up the volume a tad.
[notice]Hard
• 00:12:241 (3) - To emphasize the vocals I suggest you to add a hitfinish here and also at the start of 00:13:137 (5).
• 00:12:689 (4) - This overlap looks very ugly. Please make this more clean and pretty. Move this slider farther away and avoid overlaps like this one.
• 00:36:420 (1,2) - Uhmm... what's the purpose of this jump? It's a hard difficulty. You don't need to make such a jump so needlessly. Well, you don't need to do that when mapping a Insane neither, but you get my point. What I'm trying to say is that the melody doesn't change in anything yet you make a random jump. In my opinion, you should consider removing it, and re-think this over.
• 00:41:794 (1,2) - ^ And I'm not reffering to JUMPS in particular. It's just that it doesn't fit with anything! You can keep it if you want, I'm just giving my opinion. It would be much more appropiate to make small jumps between 00:41:570 (5,1) for example.
• 00:45:376 (1) - Since the vocals sound like emphasized here, I suggest you to add a hitfinish at the start of this slider.
• 00:46:271 (2) - ^
• 00:48:062 (2) - ^
• 00:59:704 (1) - ^
• 01:00:600 (2) - ^
• 01:02:391 (2) - ^
• 01:14:928 (3) - ^
• 01:15:823 (1) - ^
• 01:26:570 (1) - ^
• 01:30:823 (2) - This stack plays bad imo. Like I've explained to the Guest Mapper of [Normal] the most important thing is the flow. This stack feels like forced to be here, it doesn't fit with the music imo. Try to make patterns more comfortable to play aka with good flow. Here it feels like everything is spread out but suddenly, a stacked note at the end of a slider. It doesn't feel right when playing.
• 01:31:047 (3) - Hitfinish...? and at 01:31:943 (1) and 01:32:838 (2) start? I'll stop suggesting finishes. How about at 01:33:734 (1)'s start and repeat?
If you like them add them consistently in the rest of the map. :>
• 01:37:316 (1,2,3) - This pattern has a similar problem about flow mentioned already. It feels bad. Here, this is what I've said to the mapper of [Normal]. I'll copy-paste it here because both difficulties have the exact same problems: The curved shape of the triplet fits the curved shape of the previous slider. This is important so try to keep it in mind. If a slider is going to X way, try to place the next note over that X way. That's the key to make comfortable patterns with good playability. Don't get me wrong. Changing of direction suddenly like in Insane difficulties when making a jump can be intuitive as long as it fits the music.
• 01:40:002 (3) - This is another example about odd jumps o3o it's so small that it can be misleading. You may make the player think that this slider starts at a blue tick or something. Instead of making such small jumps, try snapping this with Distance Snap. It would be more logical in my opinion. Just a suggestion! as always.
• 01:53:435 (1,2,3) - ;___; Uncomfortable patterns. I suggest you to try this instead to improve it:
• 02:01:495 (3,4) - What happened here? o.o this looks bad. Please make a blanket with these. It looks ugly and odd like this. Making them a bit more curvy should be enough.
Well I end this here. The rest of the difficulty has the same problems repeated over. Try to improve blankets, but remember: blankets aren't everything. Most of blankets derail the flow of the map. You should improve them at least to make the map look better, so you can try to compensate this. Also, there are plenty of missing Hitfinishes. Take a look at that too.InsaneResuming everything, normal and hard have the same problems so check 'em out. Insane is good. Some jumps are a biiit too much at some parts imo, but I'm not a dedicated player tbh, so it may be just me. Overall, the mapset needs more work.
• 00:52:540 (1,2) - I suggest you to ctrl+g these two notes. Plays much better imo, and the stack of 00:52:764 (2,3) when you do this fits quite good with the vocals.
• 00:54:331 (1,2) - ^
• 01:30:488 (2) - Why is this sldier placed like this? It should be more like this with distance snap to avoid confusion:
Well this difficulty is quite interesting. I like it. This is very very short because I didn't mention hitfinish suggestions since they're alllllllllll the same suggested for your Hard difficulty so if you like them I suggest you to add them on this difficulty aswell.
Good luck!
Thank you modding
