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Touyama Nao - Magical Mah-jongg World

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Fycho
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yf_bmp wrote:

hi~
mod音效为主，排列为辅 :P
SPOILER
[Insane]
00:01:222 (3) - clap ①
00:01:972 (5) - 尾whistle ②
00:02:160 (1) - 头finish ③
00:02:722 (3) - 同①
00:03:472 (5) - ②
00:03:660 (1) - ③
00:04:972 (3) - whistle
00:05:160 (1) - ③
00:05:722 (2) - 尾clap
00:06:285 (4) - whistle
00:07:035 (4) - 头shift+w, ctrl+e (0)
00:07:035 (4) - 同上,clap (0)
00:07:972 (6) - whistle
00:08:160 (1) - finish
00:08:347 (2) - 去掉clap
00:08:535 (3,4) - 同(0)
00:09:285 (6) - clap
00:09:472 (7) - whistle
00:10:035 (2,3) - 同(0)
00:11:160 (1) - 头finish+whistle
00:11:535 (2) - 同(0),头加finish,尾clap
00:11:910 (3) - 非转折部分都加上finish
-----------------------------------------------------
00:13:222 (2) - 加上clap，以及以后的每一整拍的第二个红线都加上(一直到00:48:660 (10) 之前)
00:19:785 (8) - NC
-----------------------------------------------------
00:29:160 (3) - finish
00:35:160 (4) - 头whistle
00:36:285 (8) - 同上
00:37:691 (2) - 改clap为whistle
00:39:191 (2) - 同上
00:41:160 (8) - 头finish
00:48:285 (10) - 头whistle
-----------------------------------------------------
00:50:910 (2) - 同上
00:51:191 (3) - 同上
00:51:660 (4) - 同上
00:53:160 (4) - 同上
00:57:285 (7) - 头finish
00:57:660 (1) - finish
00:58:785 (6) - finish
00:59:910 (9) - finish
01:05:160 (1) - NC+whistle(不用finish),尾也whistle
01:05:910 (3) - 头whistle(不用finish)
01:24:660 (3) - 头加上whistle，之后每个白线都加(一直到01:29:160 (5)
01:42:097 (5) - 头clap
01:47:160 (7) - finish
----------------------------------------
01:54:660 (7) - finish
02:29:160 (3) - 这里开始五个白线五个finish
---------------------------------------------
02:52:410 (4) - 这里开始有一段比较安静,把clap转为whistle


其他难度以及中间一些需要改的地方上面可以参考下，太长了orz :o
Thx for modding~ :)
Fycho
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Fycho

EmingK wrote:

Hi Fycho神麻婆
说好的mod

unrankable的东西没发现，下面都是非建设性意见，东西比较多忘了哪个是建议哪个是乱写的了。。嗯觉得不对不改就是了

[General]
建议把网格开到最细再拽滑条锚点，或者按Shift。。大网格拽出来的滑条真是不堪入墓
米桶的难度名建议比较有爱，附上对应罗马音（来自维基百科）
满贯 - mangan
倍满 - baiman
三倍满 - sanbaiman
役满 - yakuman

[Easy]
同样建议调细网格。。。已经影响到note间距了
~节奏~
00:35:160 (5,6) - 中间空拍可以填一下的样子。。
00:48:285 (2,1,2) - ^ 节奏太难找了
01:54:285 (4,1) - ^
02:43:035 (1) - 头向左延长至红线
~摆放~
01:05:160 (2) - 上移一些
01:14:160 (2) - 右移一些吧。。flow坑
01:17:535 (6) - 滑条头上翘一些
01:45:285 (4) - 下移一些
01:59:910 (4) - 右移一些
03:16:410 (3) - 逆时针稍微转一些
03:25:410 (3) - 滑条头上翘一些
02:05:910 (5,1,2) - flow坑
00:26:535 (4) - 修一下 把(3)包好
00:52:785 (2) - ^
00:56:910 (3) - ^
01:19:035 (2) - ^
01:25:410 (2) - ^
01:27:660 (1) - ^
01:56:910 (3) - ^
03:11:160 (3) - ^
03:32:910 (1) - ^
02:47:910 (1,2) - y坐标不一样。。虽然关掉网格调间距不错，但是开着网格要比眼睛看对得齐。。。
~音效~
01:12:660 (1) - 头Finish
02:48:285 (2) - finish
~combo~
00:58:035 (4) - NC
01:15:660 (3) - NC
01:58:410 (1,2) - 交换NC
02:02:160 (6,1) - ^
02:38:910 (1,2) - ^
03:01:410 (3) - NC
03:02:910 (1) - 去掉NC
03:25:410 (3,1) - 交换NC

[Normal]
~节奏~
00:34:410 (2) - 头上的白线上没东西。。音在红线上
01:55:035 (1) - 向前延长至红线
~摆放~
00:35:160 (3) - 稍微上移
01:05:910 (5) - 下移
02:23:160 (3,4,1) - 这间距怎么想的。。
03:43:410 (3,4) - 这间距大丈夫？Normal啊亲。。
00:40:035 (1,2) - 没包好
00:48:097 (3,1,2) - ^
01:02:160 (3,4) - ^
01:05:160 (3,4) - ^
01:11:535 (4,5) - ^
01:22:035 (2,3) - ^
01:25:785 (3,1) - ^
02:10:410 (1,2) - ^ 不如不要红点
02:13:785 (2,3) - ^
03:08:535 (5,1) - ^
02:43:035 (2) - 这样的滑条要红点干嘛。。还不好看（有几个不找了
~音效~
00:40:785 (2) - 尾Finish
02:42:285 (1) - 尾Finish
02:48:285 (6) - Finish
~Combo~
00:46:035 (6,1) - 交换NC
03:31:410 (5) - NC

[Hard]
不分了。。
02:08:347 (4) - 稍微逆时针转一些
02:57:472 (8) - 叠歪了
00:12:285 (8) - ^
00:33:660 (1) - ^
01:07:222 (3) - ^
01:17:535 (7,8) - ^
02:26:910 (3) - ^
02:58:410 (2) - ^
滑条没包好系列。。。好多好多好多。。
00:36:285 (10) - 尾Finish
02:06:285 (8) - ^
01:41:160 (7) - NC
03:02:910 (6,1) - 交换NC
03:32:160 (1) - 这个NC是闹哪样

[Insane]
00:37:410 (1) - 叠歪了
01:28:410 (3) - ^
02:02:910 (8) - ^
03:02:910 (1) - ^
02:19:410 (1) - Finish
02:20:160 (1) - ^
02:20:910 (1) - ^
00:12:378 (1) - 去掉NC
00:17:160 (7) - NC
00:18:097 (1) - 去掉NC
00:18:660 (4) - NC
00:34:222 (1,4) - 交换NC
01:17:160 (9) - NC
01:18:566 (1,2) - 交换NC
01:39:660 (7) - NC
01:54:660 (7,1) - 交换NC
02:33:660 (6) - NC
03:16:222 (6,1) - 交换NC

吐血了。。
谢谢E喵~ :D
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
Joined October 2012
- Miomio Chii -
Hi, MmC's mod. Form smallboat PM in-game.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-

del " Touyama Nao " form Tags.
Artist have.

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
-Easy-

00:06:660 (1,2,3,4) - 2跟4位置換一下, 在Easy難度裡盡量別重疊.

00:11:910 (4) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
x 208 y 32
00:25:035 (2) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶方法 (?)
snap開著然後移到兩邊對齊距離形成等腰三角形
00:27:660 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
2(slider) - x 324 y 328, x 300 y 224, x 220 y 232
3(note) - x 160 y 180
4(slider) - x 232 y 128, x 296 y 112, x 328 y 120
記得後面的也要跟著換一下位子, 不然會黏在一起w"
00:38:910 (4,1,2) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
1(slider) - x 216 y 316, x 144 y 316
2(note) - x 256 y 236
00:42:660 - 這裡空著不太好, 用個slider延長或是加個note
00:46:035 (1) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
Rotate by 20
1(slider) - x 192 y 108, x 135 y 172, x 142 y 269
00:48:285 (2) - 這樣放?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
x 324 y 228

00:48:660 - 空著節奏不太好吧" 建議可以放個slider折返, 這樣後面的節奏也可以連接上

00:53:910 (3) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
x 300 y 344
00:55:035 (1,2,3) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
1(note) - x 356 y 204
2(slider) - x 332 y 116
3(slider) - Ratate by -13, x 420 y 144
01:23:160 (3) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
x 212 y 260

01:54:660 - 盡量大白線別空著的好

02:08:535 (3) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
x 316 y 160
03:07:785 (2) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
x 332 y 232
03:25:035 (2,3) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
2(note) - x 204 y 224
3(slider) - x 288 y 280
03:46:035 (2) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
x 296 y 120

01:51:847 (1) - 這也許對新手來說會有點難讀, 建議白線.
02:21:847 (1) - ^

NC :
00:35:160 (5) - add
01:11:160 (4) - add
03:04:410 (5) - add
03:09:660 (1) - remove
03:10:410 (2) - add

spinner :
03:50:160 - end here

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
先暫時mod到此
如果對於我的mod還可以的話我再補個irc mod其他diff
(irc所占的篇幅可以小一點)(對了要在線上哦!)
祝你好運 ! :)
Fycho
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2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, MmC's mod. Form smallboat PM in-game.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-

del " Touyama Nao " form Tags.
Artist have.

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
-Easy-

00:06:660 (1,2,3,4) - 2跟4位置換一下, 在Easy難度裡盡量別重疊.

00:11:910 (4) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
x 208 y 32
00:25:035 (2) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶方法 (?)
snap開著然後移到兩邊對齊距離形成等腰三角形
00:27:660 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
2(slider) - x 324 y 328, x 300 y 224, x 220 y 232
3(note) - x 160 y 180
4(slider) - x 232 y 128, x 296 y 112, x 328 y 120
記得後面的也要跟著換一下位子, 不然會黏在一起w"
00:38:910 (4,1,2) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
1(slider) - x 216 y 316, x 144 y 316
2(note) - x 256 y 236
00:42:660 - 這裡空著不太好, 用個slider延長或是加個note
00:46:035 (1) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
Rotate by 20
1(slider) - x 192 y 108, x 135 y 172, x 142 y 269
00:48:285 (2) - 這樣放?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
x 324 y 228

00:48:660 - 空著節奏不太好吧" 建議可以放個slider折返, 這樣後面的節奏也可以連接上

00:53:910 (3) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
x 300 y 344
00:55:035 (1,2,3) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
1(note) - x 356 y 204
2(slider) - x 332 y 116
3(slider) - Ratate by -13, x 420 y 144
01:23:160 (3) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
x 212 y 260

01:54:660 - 盡量大白線別空著的好

02:08:535 (3) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
x 316 y 160
03:07:785 (2) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
x 332 y 232
03:25:035 (2,3) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
2(note) - x 204 y 224
3(slider) - x 288 y 280
03:46:035 (2) - 這樣擺?
SPOILER
自帶xy座標 (?)
x 296 y 120

01:51:847 (1) - 這也許對新手來說會有點難讀, 建議白線.
02:21:847 (1) - ^

NC :
00:35:160 (5) - add
01:11:160 (4) - add
03:04:410 (5) - add
03:09:660 (1) - remove
03:10:410 (2) - add

spinner :
03:50:160 - end here

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
先暫時mod到此
如果對於我的mod還可以的話我再補個irc mod其他diff
(irc所占的篇幅可以小一點)(對了要在線上哦!)
祝你好運 ! :)
Thanks for modding
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
Joined October 2012
- Miomio Chii -
irc mod
17:30 Fycho: ;w;
17:30 *- Miomio Chii - is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/229855 Touyama Nao - Magical Mah-jongg World [Normal]]
17:30 Fycho: ==
17:31 Fycho: 等一下
17:31 - Miomio Chii -: 好
17:31 Fycho: 我上传下 我的本地版本和云端不一样
17:31 - Miomio Chii -: OAO
17:31 - Miomio Chii -: 好
17:31 Fycho: OK uodated
17:32 Fycho: 可以开始了喔
17:32 - Miomio Chii -: ok
17:32 - Miomio Chii -: 難度不變
17:32 - Miomio Chii -: 然後 我先看 排位?
17:33 Fycho: 恩
17:33 Fycho: 主要是排列和节奏
17:33 - Miomio Chii -: hao
17:34 - Miomio Chii -: 00:29:160 (3) -
17:34 - Miomio Chii -: 這個這樣放如何
17:34 - Miomio Chii -: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/804874
17:35 - Miomio Chii -: x 240 y 168
17:35 Fycho: 也就是滑条要包住对吧
17:35 - Miomio Chii -: 是的
17:35 - Miomio Chii -: 00:30:097 (4) - 這個也要跟著包住
17:36 Fycho: 收缩圈 正好在滑条圆心吧
17:36 - Miomio Chii -: 算是吧w"
17:37 Fycho: 但是有些是为了Flow的话呢
17:37 - Miomio Chii -: 吶個沒關係OAO
17:37 Fycho: 0.0
17:37 - Miomio Chii -: 00:30:660 (1,2) - 像是這個 就 看你了 (?
17:38 - Miomio Chii -: 如果你不是要讓他包住個就可以這樣放
17:38 Fycho: 这个是半分拍的诶
17:38 - Miomio Chii -: wwww
17:38 - Miomio Chii -: 舉個例子嘛 (?
17:38 Fycho: 包的话DS会变掉了...
17:38 Fycho: 恩
17:38 Fycho: 对
17:39 - Miomio Chii -: ww"
17:39 Fycho: 00:37:410 (2) - 我摆错了WW
17:39 - Miomio Chii -: 00:33:660 (1,2) - 這段的節奏 別變吧
17:39 - Miomio Chii -: 0.0
17:41 - Miomio Chii -: 00:37:410 (2) - 要不要換成 尾端對藍線然後折返一次
17:41 - Miomio Chii -: 對了藍線是白線以前的藍線
17:41 Fycho: 恩 听着音呢
17:42 - Miomio Chii -: 00:38:160 (3) - 然後這裡的節奏 可以從紅線開始
17:42 Fycho: 是不是低难度跟vocal多
17:42 - Miomio Chii -: 00:38:910 (4) - 這個也可以 試著尾端對藍線折返一次
17:42 - Miomio Chii -: 不一定OAO
17:42 - Miomio Chii -: 看個人 (?)
17:43 - Miomio Chii -: 只是 對起來會比較順 (?
17:45 - Miomio Chii -: 大多數是對vocal也跟著對節奏 (?)
17:45 - Miomio Chii -: 00:40:035 (1,2) - 這裡的節奏
17:46 - Miomio Chii -: 從 00:39:847 - 開始放
17:46 Fycho: 应该怎么改
17:46 - Miomio Chii -: OAO
17:46 - Miomio Chii -: 你是指
17:46 - Miomio Chii -: ?
17:46 Fycho: 但是红线开始不是不好吗
17:46 - Miomio Chii -: 節奏有對到啊 (?)
17:46 - Miomio Chii -: 不然就是
17:47 - Miomio Chii -: 不然 有些節奏結束紅線 在接白線會變半拍
17:48 Fycho: 哦~
17:48 Fycho: 懂了
17:49 - Miomio Chii -: O w O
17:49 - Miomio Chii -: 吶你要 remap嘛 (?
17:50 Fycho: 只有Normal考虑过
17:50 Fycho: 因为四个难度我觉得Normal做的最差
17:51 - Miomio Chii -: OAO
17:51 - Miomio Chii -: 吶要 GD嘛 (?
17:51 - Miomio Chii -: 通常這種長歌曲我都會盡量讓別人GD (逃
17:51 Fycho: 你帮我做GD吗？
17:52 - Miomio Chii -: OAO
17:52 - Miomio Chii -: 可以啊 (逃
17:52 Fycho: GD我还不是很清楚~
17:52 - Miomio Chii -: 吶我先 幫你mod其他難度好了
17:53 *- Miomio Chii - is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/211939 Touyama Nao - Magical Mah-jongg World [Hard]]
17:53 - Miomio Chii -: GD就是 別人做guest diff (?
17:53 Fycho: 恩
17:53 Fycho: 是关于GD修改的事情
17:53 Fycho: GD有mod后修改了，怎么更新
17:54 - Miomio Chii -: 等待吶個GD人 給osu檔案
17:54 - Miomio Chii -: +回覆mod
17:54 - Miomio Chii -: ex: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/136385/start=15
17:54 - Miomio Chii -: www
17:54 - Miomio Chii -: 雖然目前還沒有ranked的經驗就是了 (逃
17:55 Fycho: 你有GDranked了吗
17:55 - Miomio Chii -: 沒 ; w ; "
17:55 - Miomio Chii -: 因為目前GD 只有做過一個
17:55 Fycho: ;w;
17:55 - Miomio Chii -: MmC's Bad End
17:55 - Miomio Chii -: ; w ;
17:56 - Miomio Chii -: 我自己的圖的話 是 沒半張ranked過 (?)
17:56 - Miomio Chii -: 嘛不過如果不放心也沒關係可以另找的w"
17:56 Fycho: 我也没...
17:57 Fycho: Hard的话整体如何?
17:57 - Miomio Chii -: 節奏還不錯w
17:57 Fycho: 那么排列音效呢
17:58 - Miomio Chii -: 跟前幾個比好太多了! (Y)
17:59 Fycho: 0.0
18:00 - Miomio Chii -: 02:10:222 (4,5,6) - 這裡的三角形 歪了 (?
18:01 - Miomio Chii -: 02:30:660 (1,2,3) - 這裡的三角也歪了
18:02 - Miomio Chii -: 02:36:660 - 到 02:45:660 - 建議別break
18:03 - Miomio Chii -: 要beak的話 01:33:285 - 到 01:42:660 - 試試
18:03 Fycho: 那个休息时间 不加的话一直打到底太累了
18:03 - Miomio Chii -: 吶就前面break吧 OAO
18:04 - Miomio Chii -: 這裡有唱歌 也許你可以 做個 小跳躍 (?)
18:04 Fycho: 小跳跃??像I那样的?
18:04 - Miomio Chii -: 或是跟vocal
18:04 - Miomio Chii -: OAO 就 我感覺這裡可以做成比較活潑點
18:04 - Miomio Chii -: 空著太可惜了
18:05 Fycho: 我原来做的时候是放了的 后来都删掉了 = -=
18:06 - Miomio Chii -: OAO
18:06 - Miomio Chii -: 吶就前面那段 音樂solo的 可以break ?
18:07 Fycho: 我觉得可以吧 不过四个难度都一样会不会太单调了
18:07 Fycho: 都是在那里break的话
18:07 - Miomio Chii -: 不會啊
18:07 - Miomio Chii -: ˊ w ˋ
18:07 - Miomio Chii -: 如果說IN 你可以不要break (?)
18:07 - Miomio Chii -: 因為是最高難度
18:07 - Miomio Chii -: 如果說休息的話你可以 就是節奏放慢然後放滑條
18:08 Fycho: I的话没Break更累了 我第一次的时候 H和I都没
18:08 - Miomio Chii -: 放心吧觸手禁的起的 (逃
18:09 - Miomio Chii -: 這麼可愛的曲子 最高難度可以這樣的 (?
18:09 Fycho: 要照顾不是触手的~
18:10 Fycho: I的休息时间已经可以了 很少很少了
18:10 Fycho: H的那段我再想想办法吧 看看有没有上面梗
18:11 - Miomio Chii -: 030
18:11 - Miomio Chii -: 嘛
18:11 - Miomio Chii -: 建議NC在大白線
18:12 - Miomio Chii -: 大多數都是NC在大白線
18:12 Fycho: 我NC是一句话一句话的NC的
18:12 - Miomio Chii -: 嘛 好吧
18:13 Fycho: 看了下 好多NC本身就在白线:3
18:13 - Miomio Chii -: 不 有分白線跟大白線
18:13 - Miomio Chii -: 大白線比較長
18:13 Fycho: 恩
18:13 - Miomio Chii -: ww"
18:14 - Miomio Chii -: 03:18:660 (3,5,6) - 這裡的三角歪了
18:14 - Miomio Chii -: 03:20:910 (1,2,3,4) - 四角歪了
18:15 Fycho: 其实那些本来不是四角 只是个flow
18:15 - Miomio Chii -: hao
18:15 - Miomio Chii -: 00:22:222 (2,3) -
18:16 - Miomio Chii -: 沒包好
18:17 - Miomio Chii -: 00:52:972 (3,4) - 這個也沒包好
18:20 - Miomio Chii -: 03:18:660 (3,4) - 這個也是
18:21 - Miomio Chii -: 03:20:910 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡還是建議形狀弄好ww" (?)
18:22 - Miomio Chii -: 吶我接下來看音效了哦
18:23 Fycho: 音效稍微看看就行
18:23 - Miomio Chii -: hao
18:23 - Miomio Chii -: 00:03:847 (1) - 尾端加clap
18:24 - Miomio Chii -: 00:19:972 (5,6) - (剛好發現沒包好 (?
18:26 - Miomio Chii -: 01:26:722 (2,3) - (這個也沒包好 (? (逃
18:26 Fycho: 0.0
18:26 - Miomio Chii -: 不知道為什麼會漏掉 (?
18:26 Fycho: 01:28:410 (3) - 这个好吗
18:27 - Miomio Chii -: 嘛 這裡我不太曉得你是要包還是 ?
18:27 - Miomio Chii -: 看你囉O.O 如果你要包吶就包 不過如果你要引下一個note也形
18:27 - Miomio Chii -: *行
18:28 Fycho: 嘛...继续音效吧
18:28 - Miomio Chii -: hao (?
18:30 - Miomio Chii -: 02:29:160 (7) - 尾端加S:C3的clap
18:30 - Miomio Chii -: 02:29:722 (8) - 這個也是
18:31 - Miomio Chii -: 02:29:910 (9) - 這個尾端也加
18:31 - Miomio Chii -: 怎抹樣
18:32 Fycho: 居然漏了...
18:32 - Miomio Chii -: OAO
18:33 Fycho: 第三段也漏了好多
18:34 - Miomio Chii -: 恩啊
18:34 Fycho: 修改的时候忘记加了...
18:35 - Miomio Chii -: 建議也許最後一段kiai S:C3的calp跟S:C1的calp可以放成S:C4 也許可以 熱鬧點 (?
18:36 - Miomio Chii -: 也許這樣你就不會忘記了OAO (?
18:36 Fycho: O.O
18:36 - Miomio Chii -: 這樣就 hard完成了
18:37 Fycho: 我一般开mute music来听有没有忘记.
18:37 - Miomio Chii -: 你音效有點 偏小聲
18:37 Fycho: 音效没什么其他问题的话能看insane吗
18:37 - Miomio Chii -: 我mod是全部都調100%來看
18:37 - Miomio Chii -: 恩
18:37 Fycho: KIAI已经90了 还小吗
18:37 - Miomio Chii -: 不是 是全部啦ww"
18:38 Fycho: 我觉得歌曲自身音效比较明显 然后就没加大了
18:39 - Miomio Chii -: 00:21:285 (6,1) - 這個感覺 有點歪了 note的點對但是 - 這條slider似乎沒穿好
18:39 - Miomio Chii -: 恩w" 所以 mod才 開大點
18:39 - Miomio Chii -: 不然可能會遺漏
18:41 - Miomio Chii -: 00:37:691 (3) - 也許可以用2連擊 我怕藍線可能 acc頗吃 (?
18:41 Fycho: +
18:41 - Miomio Chii -: O.O?
18:42 Fycho: 什么意思?
18:42 - Miomio Chii -: 就是
18:42 - Miomio Chii -: 紅線在放個note
18:42 - Miomio Chii -: 形成二連擊
18:43 - Miomio Chii -: 01:04:785 (7,1) - 歪了 ; w ;
18:43 Fycho: 放在后面白线上比较好吧
18:43 - Miomio Chii -: 個人覺得紅線會比較好
18:44 - Miomio Chii -: 因為如果起始藍線怕有些人 節奏趕不好反應不過來 (?) 然後就會按了100或50
18:45 Fycho: 中间放3连如何
18:45 Fycho: 单点，三连，单点 这样的
18:45 - Miomio Chii -: 也可以OAO
18:46 Fycho: 能打insane的节奏有几个是不好的嘛
18:47 - Miomio Chii -: 02:03:472 (9,1) - 這裡不太適合這樣用
18:47 - Miomio Chii -: 02:02:910 (8,9) - 試試這兩個這樣用如何
18:48 Fycho: 那里只是单纯为了鬼畜WWW
18:48 - Miomio Chii -: 只是感覺節奏不太符合www"
18:48 Fycho: 是在8和9的时候那样用吧
18:49 - Miomio Chii -: 恩
18:49 - Miomio Chii -: 02:08:722 - 這裡還是 換成note或是slider折返吧
18:51 - Miomio Chii -: 02:19:410 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這裡使用2連擊如何
18:52 - Miomio Chii -: 02:38:160 (5) - 這種slider建議用1/6可能會比較好一點
18:54 - Miomio Chii -: 03:19:410 (7) - NC
18:55 - Miomio Chii -: 03:31:597 (2) - 這個可以考慮看看要不del
18:56 Fycho: 那里有音诶
18:56 Fycho: 四方跳也是为了鬼畜点...
18:56 - Miomio Chii -: 好 吶不remove
18:56 - Miomio Chii -: 03:46:222 (4) - 要不要這樣擺
18:57 - Miomio Chii -: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/804995
18:57 - Miomio Chii -: 這樣改完後就沒了
18:58 - Miomio Chii -: 至於normal 就看你了@@"
18:58 Fycho: 0.0
18:58 - Miomio Chii -: 看你是要remap 還是 想丟給GD (?
18:58 Fycho: 看有没有时间吧
18:59 - Miomio Chii -: hao
18:59 Fycho: Thanks for irc modding~
18:59 - Miomio Chii -: 吶我savelog了哦

阿阿話說我發現我好像打錯字了, " From " 才對 >.<!
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- Miomio Chii - wrote:

irc mod
17:30 Fycho: ;w;
17:30 *- Miomio Chii - is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/229855 Touyama Nao - Magical Mah-jongg World [Normal]]
17:30 Fycho: ==
17:31 Fycho: 等一下
17:31 - Miomio Chii -: 好
17:31 Fycho: 我上传下 我的本地版本和云端不一样
17:31 - Miomio Chii -: OAO
17:31 - Miomio Chii -: 好
17:31 Fycho: OK uodated
17:32 Fycho: 可以开始了喔
17:32 - Miomio Chii -: ok
17:32 - Miomio Chii -: 難度不變
17:32 - Miomio Chii -: 然後 我先看 排位?
17:33 Fycho: 恩
17:33 Fycho: 主要是排列和节奏
17:33 - Miomio Chii -: hao
17:34 - Miomio Chii -: 00:29:160 (3) -
17:34 - Miomio Chii -: 這個這樣放如何
17:34 - Miomio Chii -: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/804874
17:35 - Miomio Chii -: x 240 y 168
17:35 Fycho: 也就是滑条要包住对吧
17:35 - Miomio Chii -: 是的
17:35 - Miomio Chii -: 00:30:097 (4) - 這個也要跟著包住
17:36 Fycho: 收缩圈 正好在滑条圆心吧
17:36 - Miomio Chii -: 算是吧w"
17:37 Fycho: 但是有些是为了Flow的话呢
17:37 - Miomio Chii -: 吶個沒關係OAO
17:37 Fycho: 0.0
17:37 - Miomio Chii -: 00:30:660 (1,2) - 像是這個 就 看你了 (?
17:38 - Miomio Chii -: 如果你不是要讓他包住個就可以這樣放
17:38 Fycho: 这个是半分拍的诶
17:38 - Miomio Chii -: wwww
17:38 - Miomio Chii -: 舉個例子嘛 (?
17:38 Fycho: 包的话DS会变掉了...
17:38 Fycho: 恩
17:38 Fycho: 对
17:39 - Miomio Chii -: ww"
17:39 Fycho: 00:37:410 (2) - 我摆错了WW
17:39 - Miomio Chii -: 00:33:660 (1,2) - 這段的節奏 別變吧
17:39 - Miomio Chii -: 0.0
17:41 - Miomio Chii -: 00:37:410 (2) - 要不要換成 尾端對藍線然後折返一次
17:41 - Miomio Chii -: 對了藍線是白線以前的藍線
17:41 Fycho: 恩 听着音呢
17:42 - Miomio Chii -: 00:38:160 (3) - 然後這裡的節奏 可以從紅線開始
17:42 Fycho: 是不是低难度跟vocal多
17:42 - Miomio Chii -: 00:38:910 (4) - 這個也可以 試著尾端對藍線折返一次
17:42 - Miomio Chii -: 不一定OAO
17:42 - Miomio Chii -: 看個人 (?)
17:43 - Miomio Chii -: 只是 對起來會比較順 (?
17:45 - Miomio Chii -: 大多數是對vocal也跟著對節奏 (?)
17:45 - Miomio Chii -: 00:40:035 (1,2) - 這裡的節奏
17:46 - Miomio Chii -: 從 00:39:847 - 開始放
17:46 Fycho: 应该怎么改
17:46 - Miomio Chii -: OAO
17:46 - Miomio Chii -: 你是指
17:46 - Miomio Chii -: ?
17:46 Fycho: 但是红线开始不是不好吗
17:46 - Miomio Chii -: 節奏有對到啊 (?)
17:46 - Miomio Chii -: 不然就是
17:47 - Miomio Chii -: 不然 有些節奏結束紅線 在接白線會變半拍
17:48 Fycho: 哦~
17:48 Fycho: 懂了
17:49 - Miomio Chii -: O w O
17:49 - Miomio Chii -: 吶你要 remap嘛 (?
17:50 Fycho: 只有Normal考虑过
17:50 Fycho: 因为四个难度我觉得Normal做的最差
17:51 - Miomio Chii -: OAO
17:51 - Miomio Chii -: 吶要 GD嘛 (?
17:51 - Miomio Chii -: 通常這種長歌曲我都會盡量讓別人GD (逃
17:51 Fycho: 你帮我做GD吗？
17:52 - Miomio Chii -: OAO
17:52 - Miomio Chii -: 可以啊 (逃
17:52 Fycho: GD我还不是很清楚~
17:52 - Miomio Chii -: 吶我先 幫你mod其他難度好了
17:53 *- Miomio Chii - is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/211939 Touyama Nao - Magical Mah-jongg World [Hard]]
17:53 - Miomio Chii -: GD就是 別人做guest diff (?
17:53 Fycho: 恩
17:53 Fycho: 是关于GD修改的事情
17:53 Fycho: GD有mod后修改了，怎么更新
17:54 - Miomio Chii -: 等待吶個GD人 給osu檔案
17:54 - Miomio Chii -: +回覆mod
17:54 - Miomio Chii -: ex: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/136385/start=15
17:54 - Miomio Chii -: www
17:54 - Miomio Chii -: 雖然目前還沒有ranked的經驗就是了 (逃
17:55 Fycho: 你有GDranked了吗
17:55 - Miomio Chii -: 沒 ; w ; "
17:55 - Miomio Chii -: 因為目前GD 只有做過一個
17:55 Fycho: ;w;
17:55 - Miomio Chii -: MmC's Bad End
17:55 - Miomio Chii -: ; w ;
17:56 - Miomio Chii -: 我自己的圖的話 是 沒半張ranked過 (?)
17:56 - Miomio Chii -: 嘛不過如果不放心也沒關係可以另找的w"
17:56 Fycho: 我也没...
17:57 Fycho: Hard的话整体如何?
17:57 - Miomio Chii -: 節奏還不錯w
17:57 Fycho: 那么排列音效呢
17:58 - Miomio Chii -: 跟前幾個比好太多了! (Y)
17:59 Fycho: 0.0
18:00 - Miomio Chii -: 02:10:222 (4,5,6) - 這裡的三角形 歪了 (?
18:01 - Miomio Chii -: 02:30:660 (1,2,3) - 這裡的三角也歪了
18:02 - Miomio Chii -: 02:36:660 - 到 02:45:660 - 建議別break
18:03 - Miomio Chii -: 要beak的話 01:33:285 - 到 01:42:660 - 試試
18:03 Fycho: 那个休息时间 不加的话一直打到底太累了
18:03 - Miomio Chii -: 吶就前面break吧 OAO
18:04 - Miomio Chii -: 這裡有唱歌 也許你可以 做個 小跳躍 (?)
18:04 Fycho: 小跳跃??像I那样的?
18:04 - Miomio Chii -: 或是跟vocal
18:04 - Miomio Chii -: OAO 就 我感覺這裡可以做成比較活潑點
18:04 - Miomio Chii -: 空著太可惜了
18:05 Fycho: 我原来做的时候是放了的 后来都删掉了 = -=
18:06 - Miomio Chii -: OAO
18:06 - Miomio Chii -: 吶就前面那段 音樂solo的 可以break ?
18:07 Fycho: 我觉得可以吧 不过四个难度都一样会不会太单调了
18:07 Fycho: 都是在那里break的话
18:07 - Miomio Chii -: 不會啊
18:07 - Miomio Chii -: ˊ w ˋ
18:07 - Miomio Chii -: 如果說IN 你可以不要break (?)
18:07 - Miomio Chii -: 因為是最高難度
18:07 - Miomio Chii -: 如果說休息的話你可以 就是節奏放慢然後放滑條
18:08 Fycho: I的话没Break更累了 我第一次的时候 H和I都没
18:08 - Miomio Chii -: 放心吧觸手禁的起的 (逃
18:09 - Miomio Chii -: 這麼可愛的曲子 最高難度可以這樣的 (?
18:09 Fycho: 要照顾不是触手的~
18:10 Fycho: I的休息时间已经可以了 很少很少了
18:10 Fycho: H的那段我再想想办法吧 看看有没有上面梗
18:11 - Miomio Chii -: 030
18:11 - Miomio Chii -: 嘛
18:11 - Miomio Chii -: 建議NC在大白線
18:12 - Miomio Chii -: 大多數都是NC在大白線
18:12 Fycho: 我NC是一句话一句话的NC的
18:12 - Miomio Chii -: 嘛 好吧
18:13 Fycho: 看了下 好多NC本身就在白线:3
18:13 - Miomio Chii -: 不 有分白線跟大白線
18:13 - Miomio Chii -: 大白線比較長
18:13 Fycho: 恩
18:13 - Miomio Chii -: ww"
18:14 - Miomio Chii -: 03:18:660 (3,5,6) - 這裡的三角歪了
18:14 - Miomio Chii -: 03:20:910 (1,2,3,4) - 四角歪了
18:15 Fycho: 其实那些本来不是四角 只是个flow
18:15 - Miomio Chii -: hao
18:15 - Miomio Chii -: 00:22:222 (2,3) -
18:16 - Miomio Chii -: 沒包好
18:17 - Miomio Chii -: 00:52:972 (3,4) - 這個也沒包好
18:20 - Miomio Chii -: 03:18:660 (3,4) - 這個也是
18:21 - Miomio Chii -: 03:20:910 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡還是建議形狀弄好ww" (?)
18:22 - Miomio Chii -: 吶我接下來看音效了哦
18:23 Fycho: 音效稍微看看就行
18:23 - Miomio Chii -: hao
18:23 - Miomio Chii -: 00:03:847 (1) - 尾端加clap
18:24 - Miomio Chii -: 00:19:972 (5,6) - (剛好發現沒包好 (?
18:26 - Miomio Chii -: 01:26:722 (2,3) - (這個也沒包好 (? (逃
18:26 Fycho: 0.0
18:26 - Miomio Chii -: 不知道為什麼會漏掉 (?
18:26 Fycho: 01:28:410 (3) - 这个好吗
18:27 - Miomio Chii -: 嘛 這裡我不太曉得你是要包還是 ?
18:27 - Miomio Chii -: 看你囉O.O 如果你要包吶就包 不過如果你要引下一個note也形
18:27 - Miomio Chii -: *行
18:28 Fycho: 嘛...继续音效吧
18:28 - Miomio Chii -: hao (?
18:30 - Miomio Chii -: 02:29:160 (7) - 尾端加S:C3的clap
18:30 - Miomio Chii -: 02:29:722 (8) - 這個也是
18:31 - Miomio Chii -: 02:29:910 (9) - 這個尾端也加
18:31 - Miomio Chii -: 怎抹樣
18:32 Fycho: 居然漏了...
18:32 - Miomio Chii -: OAO
18:33 Fycho: 第三段也漏了好多
18:34 - Miomio Chii -: 恩啊
18:34 Fycho: 修改的时候忘记加了...
18:35 - Miomio Chii -: 建議也許最後一段kiai S:C3的calp跟S:C1的calp可以放成S:C4 也許可以 熱鬧點 (?
18:36 - Miomio Chii -: 也許這樣你就不會忘記了OAO (?
18:36 Fycho: O.O
18:36 - Miomio Chii -: 這樣就 hard完成了
18:37 Fycho: 我一般开mute music来听有没有忘记.
18:37 - Miomio Chii -: 你音效有點 偏小聲
18:37 Fycho: 音效没什么其他问题的话能看insane吗
18:37 - Miomio Chii -: 我mod是全部都調100%來看
18:37 - Miomio Chii -: 恩
18:37 Fycho: KIAI已经90了 还小吗
18:37 - Miomio Chii -: 不是 是全部啦ww"
18:38 Fycho: 我觉得歌曲自身音效比较明显 然后就没加大了
18:39 - Miomio Chii -: 00:21:285 (6,1) - 這個感覺 有點歪了 note的點對但是 - 這條slider似乎沒穿好
18:39 - Miomio Chii -: 恩w" 所以 mod才 開大點
18:39 - Miomio Chii -: 不然可能會遺漏
18:41 - Miomio Chii -: 00:37:691 (3) - 也許可以用2連擊 我怕藍線可能 acc頗吃 (?
18:41 Fycho: +
18:41 - Miomio Chii -: O.O?
18:42 Fycho: 什么意思?
18:42 - Miomio Chii -: 就是
18:42 - Miomio Chii -: 紅線在放個note
18:42 - Miomio Chii -: 形成二連擊
18:43 - Miomio Chii -: 01:04:785 (7,1) - 歪了 ; w ;
18:43 Fycho: 放在后面白线上比较好吧
18:43 - Miomio Chii -: 個人覺得紅線會比較好
18:44 - Miomio Chii -: 因為如果起始藍線怕有些人 節奏趕不好反應不過來 (?) 然後就會按了100或50
18:45 Fycho: 中间放3连如何
18:45 Fycho: 单点，三连，单点 这样的
18:45 - Miomio Chii -: 也可以OAO
18:46 Fycho: 能打insane的节奏有几个是不好的嘛
18:47 - Miomio Chii -: 02:03:472 (9,1) - 這裡不太適合這樣用
18:47 - Miomio Chii -: 02:02:910 (8,9) - 試試這兩個這樣用如何
18:48 Fycho: 那里只是单纯为了鬼畜WWW
18:48 - Miomio Chii -: 只是感覺節奏不太符合www"
18:48 Fycho: 是在8和9的时候那样用吧
18:49 - Miomio Chii -: 恩
18:49 - Miomio Chii -: 02:08:722 - 這裡還是 換成note或是slider折返吧
18:51 - Miomio Chii -: 02:19:410 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這裡使用2連擊如何
18:52 - Miomio Chii -: 02:38:160 (5) - 這種slider建議用1/6可能會比較好一點
18:54 - Miomio Chii -: 03:19:410 (7) - NC
18:55 - Miomio Chii -: 03:31:597 (2) - 這個可以考慮看看要不del
18:56 Fycho: 那里有音诶
18:56 Fycho: 四方跳也是为了鬼畜点...
18:56 - Miomio Chii -: 好 吶不remove
18:56 - Miomio Chii -: 03:46:222 (4) - 要不要這樣擺
18:57 - Miomio Chii -: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/804995
18:57 - Miomio Chii -: 這樣改完後就沒了
18:58 - Miomio Chii -: 至於normal 就看你了@@"
18:58 Fycho: 0.0
18:58 - Miomio Chii -: 看你是要remap 還是 想丟給GD (?
18:58 Fycho: 看有没有时间吧
18:59 - Miomio Chii -: hao
18:59 Fycho: Thanks for irc modding~
18:59 - Miomio Chii -: 吶我savelog了哦

阿阿話說我發現我好像打錯字了, " From " 才對 >.<!
:3
Mei_coN
372 posts
Joined March 2009
Mei_coN
写点对Insane的建议好了,个人建议,仅供参考
01:15:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 建议加点NC,太长
02:15:847 (2) - 这里的串个人觉得不太适合,建议可以用这种节奏
02:21:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 加NC,太长
02:40:410 (3) - 这种slider会不会太快?感觉跟后面统一下比较好....
02:55:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - NC,太长...
02:57:660 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉这连打没啥必要,直接从5开始好了

BG换成憧单人的图就更好了

总体也做得挺好了,star一个 ;)
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

Mei_coN wrote:

写点对Insane的建议好了,个人建议,仅供参考
01:15:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 建议加点NC,太长
02:15:847 (2) - 这里的串个人觉得不太适合,建议可以用这种节奏
02:21:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 加NC,太长
02:40:410 (3) - 这种slider会不会太快?感觉跟后面统一下比较好....
02:55:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - NC,太长...
02:57:660 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉这连打没啥必要,直接从5开始好了

BG换成憧单人的图就更好了

总体也做得挺好了,star一个 ;)

Thx~BG找了好久的说，找不到单人的
Chloe
1,160 posts
Joined April 2011
Chloe
Hello~

As m4m req :>
And just mod as suggestions, not necessary. : )


[General]
  1. 00:48:660 (1) - 这边声音太轻了 50%吧
  2. 最后那段break不太好 推荐全diff都做
  3. 排列有点乱
[Easy]
  1. 00:12:285 (1) - 从 00:12:660 (5) - 开始
  2. 00:30:660 (1) - DS?
  3. 00:47:910 (2) - add
  4. 00:48:660 (1,2,3) - 这段与 00:54:285 (4,1,2) - 这边节奏不符 建议统一用后者那样的
  5. 01:29:160 (3) - 开头clap结尾whistle?
  6. 01:30:660 (1) - 我觉得这边转盘不太好吧
  7. 01:43:410 (2) - add
  8. 01:55:410 (1) - 不要和3碰到一起比较好
  9. 02:30:660 (1) - ^
  10. 03:31:410 (3,4) - clap
  11. 03:34:410 (3) - 尾巴whistle
[Normal]
  1. 我觉得开头能开很多soft-whistle
  2. 00:11:160 (3) - finish
  3. 00:41:160 (3) - ^
  4. 00:51:660 (1) - 删了
  5. 00:51:847 (6) - 加这个
  6. 01:10:785 (3) - 尾巴finish
  7. 01:18:660 (1,2,3,4,1) - 和前面统一
  8. 01:24:660 (1) - 从这边开始到01:29:160 (3) - 这段13finish比较好
  9. 03:29:910 (1) - ^
  10. 01:47:160 (1) - finish
  11. 01:48:660 (5) - 去掉finish
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:660 (9) - add
  2. 00:14:535 (6) - 用直的吧
  3. 00:16:785 (5) - 弯一点
  4. 00:17:535 (7,8) - finish不合适
  5. 00:32:535 (6) - 用弯的
  6. 01:38:160 (5) - 弯一点
  7. 01:42:847 (2,3) - ctrl g
  8. 01:50:160 (1) - delete 然后后面重新摆一下
  9. 02:00:097 (8) - 和7stack
  10. 03:04:035 (3) - ctrl g
  11. 03:04:410 (4) - ^
  12. 03:12:378 (3) - delete
  13. 03:20:347 (9) - ^
  14. 03:20:441 (9) - add
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:160 (1,2,3,4,5) - 摆个五角吧 00:08:910 (11) - stack with 00:07:972 (6) -
  2. 00:36:097 (3,4) - 有点间距比较好 这边stack的话 那2不就没啥意义了
  3. 00:51:941 (1) - 意义不明 蓝线没音吧
  4. 00:59:535 (9) -
  5. 01:19:785 (6,7) - 这2个间距太小了
  6. 02:27:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不太好
  7. 02:36:285 (1) - 这边间距大点
  8. 02:38:160 (5) - 换成2连
  9. 02:40:410 (3) - ^
  10. 02:40:785 (4) - ^
  11. 02:39:285 (3) - 蓝线停
  12. 02:42:285 (1) - 3连
  13. 后面几个你看着办吧;_;
  14. 02:57:941 (4) - delete
  15. 02:58:035 (4) - 移开
  16. 03:11:160 (3,4) - 这边用的很好啊 为啥后面不接着用这种
  17. 03:23:535 (1,2,3,4,5) - 03:05:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这种连打不太美观太直 多扭一点
  18. 最后有点乱
Good luck <3.
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

Chloe wrote:

SPOILER
Hello~

As m4m req :>
And just mod as suggestions, not necessary. : )


[General]
  1. 00:48:660 (1) - 这边声音太轻了 50%吧fixed
  2. 最后那段break不太好 推荐全diff都做那样Hard就没breaktime了会不会太累
  3. 排列有点乱
[Easy]
  1. 00:12:285 (1) - 从 00:12:660 (5) - 开始fixed
  2. 00:30:660 (1) - DS?fixed
  3. 00:47:910 (2) - addfixed
  4. 00:48:660 (1,2,3) - 这段与 00:54:285 (4,1,2) - 这边节奏不符 建议统一用后者那样的节奏已改
  5. 01:29:160 (3) - 开头clap结尾whistle?fixed
  6. 01:30:660 (1) - 我觉得这边转盘不太好吧为什么会不好？开头那部分也这样了
  7. 01:43:410 (2) - addfixed
  8. 01:55:410 (1) - 不要和3碰到一起比较好fixed
  9. 02:30:660 (1) - ^fixed
  10. 03:31:410 (3,4) - clapfixed音效
  11. 03:34:410 (3) - 尾巴whistlefixed音效有些re了就忘加了已经全部检查了
[Normal]
  1. 我觉得开头能开很多soft-whistlefixed
  2. 00:11:160 (3) - finishfixed
  3. 00:41:160 (3) - ^fixed
  4. 00:51:660 (1) - 删了fixed
  5. 00:51:847 (6) - 加这个
  6. 01:10:785 (3) - 尾巴finishfixed
  7. 01:18:660 (1,2,3,4,1) - 和前面统一和前面一样有点单调
  8. 01:24:660 (1) - 从这边开始到01:29:160 (3) - 这段13finish比较好fixed，其他难度也fixed
  9. 03:29:910 (1) - ^
  10. 01:47:160 (1) - finishfixed
  11. 01:48:660 (5) - 去掉finishfixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:660 (9) - addfixed
  2. 00:14:535 (6) - 用直的吧还是弯的好看，直的话本身不对称感觉略别扭
  3. 00:16:785 (5) - 弯一点fixed
  4. 00:17:535 (7,8) - finish不合适重音的话用了感觉很合适的
  5. 00:32:535 (6) - 用弯的fixed
  6. 01:38:160 (5) - 弯一点fixed
  7. 01:42:847 (2,3) - ctrl gwhy？1PC就OK
  8. 01:50:160 (1) - delete 然后后面重新摆一下删了感觉节奏怪怪的
  9. 02:00:097 (8) - 和7stack不能理解为什么和7重合
  10. 03:04:035 (3) - ctrl gfixed
  11. 03:04:410 (4) - ^
  12. 03:12:378 (3) - deletefixed
  13. 03:20:347 (9) - ^这边节奏改成其他的了
  14. 03:20:441 (9) - add
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:160 (1,2,3,4,5) - 摆个五角吧 00:08:910 (11) - stack with 00:07:972 (6) - 已修改
  2. 00:36:097 (3,4) - 有点间距比较好 这边stack的话 那2不就没啥意义了意义不明，Ar3说这样科学我也不明白为什么
  3. 00:51:941 (1) - 意义不明 蓝线没音吧fixed
  4. 00:59:535 (9) - nani？
  5. 01:19:785 (6,7) - 这2个间距太小了fixed
  6. 02:27:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不太好是形状轨迹不好还是本身连打不好
  7. 02:36:285 (1) - 这边间距大点fixed
  8. 02:38:160 (5) - 换成2连抱歉没有改
  9. 02:40:410 (3) - ^
  10. 02:40:785 (4) - ^
  11. 02:39:285 (3) - 蓝线停fixd
  12. 02:42:285 (1) - 3连0.0
  13. 后面几个你看着办吧;_;
  14. 02:57:941 (4) - delete感觉没必要
  15. 02:58:035 (4) - 移开
  16. 03:11:160 (3,4) - 这边用的很好啊 为啥后面不接着用这种后面是什么
  17. 03:23:535 (1,2,3,4,5) - 03:05:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这种连打不太美观太直 多扭一点fixed
  18. 最后有点乱
Good luck <3.
Thank you for modding~~ Fix a lot :D
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
mod req via in-game PM ww :D

[General]
  1. nothing :D
[Easy]
  1. OD-1? 一般來說都是OD比AR低
  2. 開首加點claps在2,4白線怎樣w
  3. 00:26:535 (4) - 尾部漏了clap
  4. 00:41:160 (3,4) - 中間分開一點較好, 像這樣 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/809962
  5. 00:48:660 (1) - 這段開始每2,4白線用whistle怎樣? 有了音效比較不會單調w, 採取的話最好其他的diff都同樣做
  6. 00:54:285 (5) - 尾部finish
  7. 00:57:660 - 這樣開始用normal sampleset如何?
  8. 00:58:410 (2) - 尾部finish
  9. 01:08:535 (4) - 感覺Easy來說放得有點太高w http://puu.sh/3eyGU.jpg
  10. 01:04:035 (1) - claps?
  11. 01:12:660 (1) - remove clap
  12. 01:16:785 (2) - clap
  13. 01:21:660 (1) - 頭部finish?
  14. 01:23:160 (3,4) - 這2個換成1個Slider怎樣? 對人聲的話
  15. 01:30:285 (4) - clap
  16. 01:46:035 (1) - unsnapped
  17. 01:50:160 (3) - ^
  18. 01:54:660 - 這段每第3白線放whistle怎樣, 同樣採取的話其他的diff都同樣這樣做 :)
  19. 01:53:160 (3) - 開首whistle?
  20. 01:54:660 (5) - NC +finish, 01:55:410 (1) - remove NC, remove finish
  21. 01:59:910 (3) - unsnapped
  22. 02:12:660 (1) - ^
  23. 02:52:410 - 沒用的綠線, 可以去掉
  24. 02:52:410 - 每第3格白線whistle
  25. 03:04:410 (1) - finish?
  26. 03:09:660 (1) - unsnapped
  27. 03:18:660 (3,5) - 不要overlap較好
  28. 03:33:660 (2) - unsnapped
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:785 (2) - 開首clap
  2. 00:28:035 (2) - whistle改成clap?
  3. 00:29:160 (3) - 放在x:216 y:148可以做個nice blanket :)
  4. 00:30:097 (4) - 尾部whistle+clap?
  5. 01:07:035 (2) - 開首clap
  6. 01:18:285 (5) - clap
  7. 01:19:410 (2) - 尾巴clap
  8. 01:33:660 (1) - 沒用的綠線
  9. 01:47:535 (2) - clap, remove finish
  10. 01:54:660 - 這裡放個note較好?
  11. 02:42:285 (1) - 尾巴finish
  12. 03:16:410 (1) - remove NC
  13. 03:23:535 (5) - clap
  14. 03:24:660 (1) - remove NC, 新手來說會容易混亂的
  15. 03:34:410 (3) - 中間clap
  16. 03:35:535 (4) - clap
  17. 03:44:535 (4) - 開首跟尾部加clap?
[Hard]
  1. 這個不多看音效了( 艸), 最好開這個來聽一下自己哪裡漏了便可以了w
  2. 00:02:160 (5) - NC
  3. 00:06:660 (1) - 這個放遠點/跟DS會較好讀
  4. 00:05:535 (6) - 開首clap
  5. 00:05:910 (7) - 尾部clap
  6. 00:23:160 (1) - 同上原因w 放遠點
  7. 01:53:347 (6) - NC?
  8. 02:15:660 (1) - 中間的錨點放到x:136 y:200, 尾巴的錨點放到x:208 y:188 可以與02:15:472 (5) 做個nice blanket :D
  9. 02:28:785 (5,6) - 這2個unstack感覺好點, 例如這樣 http://puu.sh/3ezUH.jpg
  10. 02:35:160 (7) - 跟ds
  11. 02:42:285 (1) - ^, 採納的話02:42:285 (1,2,3) 一起搬就好w
  12. 03:05:347 (7) - 放在x:428 y:56如何? 這樣不會跟03:04:785 (5) overlap
  13. 03:12:285 (2,3) - unstack? 因為03:13:035 (5,6) 的旋律都相似卻沒stack ;w;
  14. 03:23:535 (8) - 放在x:264 y:168 與slider (7) 成直線怎樣w
[Insane]
  1. 00:44:160 (5) - NC?
  2. 01:05:160 (1) - 這樣放如何? http://puu.sh/3eAbL.jpg
  3. 01:16:410 (5) - NC
  4. 01:17:160 (9) - NC
  5. 01:39:660 (7) - NC?
  6. 02:15:847 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這裡沒有1/4鼓聲, 加了連打便overmap了, 建議刪掉
  7. 02:23:160 (8) - NC
  8. 02:27:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同上, 沒有1/4鼓聲
  9. 02:48:285 (3,4) - 這2個放成這樣? http://puu.sh/3eAnW.jpg
  10. 02:55:035 (1) - remove NC, 02:55:410 (3) - NC
  11. 02:56:160 (8) - NC
  12. 02:57:660 (1,2,3,4) - 同上;w; 把note(1)或(5)放遠點?
  13. 03:07:410 (5) - NC?
:? 大概這樣ww
Insane不太懂mod( 艸), 主要是音效漏放了
加油 :)
Kinomi
1,221 posts
Joined August 2012
Kinomi
Hi~Hi~
reply to m4m req

easy

步兵
00:07:410 (2) - 间距

00:41:910 (4) - 和3挤得太紧了

01:11:722这边可以看到，最好吧01:12:660 (1)的箭头往上移一点

01:19:035 (2) - 没包好

01:21:660 (1) - 间距

01:46:035 (1) - 间距

01:48:660 (1) - 间距

01:50:160 (3) - 间距

02:04:410 (2) - 超边界太多了

02:11:910 (5) - 间距，下一个也不对

02:16:035 (1) - 间距，艾玛，后面几个都不对

02:52:410 (1) - 间距，后面两个都不对

03:01:410 (1) - 间距

03:02:910 (3) - 间距

03:09:660 (1) - 不对，都是1.1

03:13:410 (2) - 间距

03:14:910 (1) - ^

03:32:535 (4) - 间距

03:32:910 (1) - 间距

不要改间距，你也没变速，为什么改间距，一点都不能改，还有按格子摆要有误差的，看着右上方的prev，误差不要太大
我建议你从头到尾检查一遍，有的我可能没检查到，如果modder看到你低难度很多地方间距不对会懒得mod

normal也请把间距检查一遍，一上来我就看到00:01:785 (3) - 不对

手撕

00:28:035 (2,3) - blanket

01:17:160 (3) - 太扭了吧！

01:24:285 (6,1) - blanket 你需要关掉grip snap修

01:13:410 (2) - 没包好

02:27:660 (1) - 这个超的有点多

有点懒看了。。

hard

02:39:285 这边感觉节奏不太对，考虑3/4滑条，可以滑条滑条，也可以滑条note滑条这样

只是参考

00:12:660 这个音，我觉得明显不该是滑条尾端，而是滑条头
至于怎么改你可以自己想一下，类似的地方也是
比如01:50:347
02:03:472
01:57:285滑条最后压尾音紧接着放note没有vocal的
02:52:878还有这一段这种

02:30:660 (1,2,3) - 比较理想的是这样的节奏
03:11:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 还有这种

节奏方面的问题我自己也经常出，无脑摆的话很可能让人打不顺蛋疼。

思路，比如01:46:597 (4,5) - 先滑条再note
或者用四分拍
当然如果你后面有空拍的话也可以压尾音

hard就是一些节奏方面的建议，音效什么的我比较蠢。。

Insane

比hard节奏好

01:19:222 (3,4,5,6,7,2,3,4,5,6) - 艾玛你可以用ctrl shift d 画多边形ctrl shift d调间距 ctrl G换位

02:39:660 (1,2) - 奇械，只是觉得比较稀罕0.0

我感觉insane里有些处理方法完全可以用到hard里啊，改简单点

不怎么会mod in就不多写了，注意一下hitbrust的整齐吧

感觉写不动了就这样吧

good luck

啊忘记放我map的链接了https://osu.ppy.sh/s/98096
先谢谢啦！
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

happy623 wrote:

mod req via in-game PM ww :D
SPOILER
[General]
  1. nothing :D
[Easy]
  1. OD-1? 一般來說都是OD比AR低 这个OD正好，也不一定要比AR低
  2. 開首加點claps在2,4白線怎樣w fixed
  3. 00:26:535 (4) - 尾部漏了clap 漏音效的均Fixed
  4. 00:41:160 (3,4) - 中間分開一點較好, 像這樣 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/809962fixed
  5. 00:48:660 (1) - 這段開始每2,4白線用whistle怎樣? 有了音效比較不會單調w, 採取的話最好其他的diff都同樣做fixed
  6. 00:54:285 (5) - 尾部finish
  7. 00:57:660 - 這樣開始用normal sampleset如何?觉得不好
  8. 00:58:410 (2) - 尾部finish
  9. 01:08:535 (4) - 感覺Easy來說放得有點太高w http://puu.sh/3eyGU.jpgfixed
  10. 01:04:035 (1) - claps?
  11. 01:12:660 (1) - remove clap
  12. 01:16:785 (2) - clap
  13. 01:21:660 (1) - 頭部finish?
  14. 01:23:160 (3,4) - 這2個換成1個Slider怎樣? 對人聲的話感谢提醒，原来一直想改却忘了
  15. 01:30:285 (4) - clap
  16. 01:46:035 (1) - unsnapped fixed
  17. 01:50:160 (3) - ^ fixed
  18. 01:54:660 - 這段每第3白線放whistle怎樣, 同樣採取的話其他的diff都同樣這樣做 :) fixed
  19. 01:53:160 (3) - 開首whistle?
  20. 01:54:660 (5) - NC +finish, 01:55:410 (1) - remove NC, remove finish fixed
  21. 01:59:910 (3) - unsnapped fixed
  22. 02:12:660 (1) - ^ fixed
  23. 02:52:410 - 沒用的綠線, 可以去掉 fixed
  24. 02:52:410 - 每第3格白線whistle fixed
  25. 03:04:410 (1) - finish? fixed
  26. 03:09:660 (1) - unsnapped fixed
  27. 03:18:660 (3,5) - 不要overlap較好 fixed
  28. 03:33:660 (2) - unsnapped
fixed

[Normal]
  1. 00:04:785 (2) - 開首clap
  2. 00:28:035 (2) - whistle改成clap?
  3. 00:29:160 (3) - 放在x:216 y:148可以做個nice blanket :) NM还是不要blanket好点
  4. 00:30:097 (4) - 尾部whistle+clap? 不要whistle了
  5. 01:07:035 (2) - 開首clap
  6. 01:18:285 (5) - clap
  7. 01:19:410 (2) - 尾巴clap
  8. 01:33:660 (1) - 沒用的綠線 fixed
  9. 01:47:535 (2) - clap, remove finish 这边桑拿个重音没必要clap，finish挺好的
  10. 01:54:660 - 這裡放個note較好? fixed
  11. 02:42:285 (1) - 尾巴finish
  12. 03:16:410 (1) - remove NC fixed
  13. 03:23:535 (5) - clap
  14. 03:24:660 (1) - remove NC, 新手來說會容易混亂的 fixed
  15. 03:34:410 (3) - 中間clap
  16. 03:35:535 (4) - clap
  17. 03:44:535 (4) - 開首跟尾部加clap? 没必要了，歌曲本身已经没有音效了加了反而别扭
[Hard]
  1. 這個不多看音效了( 艸), 最好開這個來聽一下自己哪裡漏了便可以了w
  2. 00:02:160 (5) - NC fixed
  3. 00:06:660 (1) - 這個放遠點/跟DS會較好讀 fixed
  4. 00:05:535 (6) - 開首clap
  5. 00:05:910 (7) - 尾部clap
  6. 00:23:160 (1) - 同上原因w 放遠點 fixed
  7. 01:53:347 (6) - NC? fixed
  8. 02:15:660 (1) - 中間的錨點放到x:136 y:200, 尾巴的錨點放到x:208 y:188 可以與02:15:472 (5) 做個nice blanket :D 不错啊
  9. 02:28:785 (5,6) - 這2個unstack感覺好點, 例如這樣 http://puu.sh/3ezUH.jpg OK
  10. 02:35:160 (7) - 跟ds DS没问题啊
  11. 02:42:285 (1) - ^, 採納的話02:42:285 (1,2,3) 一起搬就好w
  12. 03:05:347 (7) - 放在x:428 y:56如何? 這樣不會跟03:04:785 (5) overlap fixed
  13. 03:12:285 (2,3) - unstack? 因為03:13:035 (5,6) 的旋律都相似卻沒stack ;w; 没必要;w;
  14. 03:23:535 (8) - 放在x:264 y:168 與slider (7) 成直線怎樣w 不好
[Insane]
  1. 00:44:160 (5) - NC? fixed
  2. 01:05:160 (1) - 這樣放如何? http://puu.sh/3eAbL.jpg
  3. 01:16:410 (5) - NC fixed
  4. 01:17:160 (9) - NC
  5. 01:39:660 (7) - NC?
  6. 02:15:847 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這裡沒有1/4鼓聲, 加了連打便overmap了, 建議刪掉 稍微overmap也没问题的吧
  7. 02:23:160 (8) - NC
  8. 02:27:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同上, 沒有1/4鼓聲 这个fixed了
  9. 02:48:285 (3,4) - 這2個放成這樣? http://puu.sh/3eAnW.jpg 改成其他排列了
  10. 02:55:035 (1) - remove NC, 02:55:410 (3) - NC
  11. 02:56:160 (8) - NC
  12. 02:57:660 (1,2,3,4) - 同上;w; 把note(1)或(5)放遠點? fixed
  13. 03:07:410 (5) - NC?
:? 大概這樣ww :o
Insane不太懂mod( 艸), 主要是音效漏放了
加油 :)
Thank you for modding~
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baldrace wrote:

Hi~Hi~
reply to m4m req
SPOILER
easy

步兵
00:07:410 (2) - 间距

00:41:910 (4) - 和3挤得太紧了

01:11:722这边可以看到，最好吧01:12:660 (1)的箭头往上移一点

01:19:035 (2) - 没包好

01:21:660 (1) - 间距

01:46:035 (1) - 间距

01:48:660 (1) - 间距

01:50:160 (3) - 间距

02:04:410 (2) - 超边界太多了

02:11:910 (5) - 间距，下一个也不对

02:16:035 (1) - 间距，艾玛，后面几个都不对

02:52:410 (1) - 间距，后面两个都不对

03:01:410 (1) - 间距

03:02:910 (3) - 间距

03:09:660 (1) - 不对，都是1.1

03:13:410 (2) - 间距

03:14:910 (1) - ^

03:32:535 (4) - 间距

03:32:910 (1) - 间距

不要改间距，你也没变速，为什么改间距，一点都不能改，还有按格子摆要有误差的，看着右上方的prev，误差不要太大
我建议你从头到尾检查一遍，有的我可能没检查到，如果modder看到你低难度很多地方间距不对会懒得mod

normal也请把间距检查一遍，一上来我就看到00:01:785 (3) - 不对

手撕

00:28:035 (2,3) - blanket

01:17:160 (3) - 太扭了吧！

01:24:285 (6,1) - blanket 你需要关掉grip snap修

01:13:410 (2) - 没包好

02:27:660 (1) - 这个超的有点多

有点懒看了。。

hard

02:39:285 这边感觉节奏不太对，考虑3/4滑条，可以滑条滑条，也可以滑条note滑条这样这样好别扭

只是参考

00:12:660 这个音，我觉得明显不该是滑条尾端，而是滑条头
至于怎么改你可以自己想一下，类似的地方也是
比如01:50:347
02:03:472
01:57:285滑条最后压尾音紧接着放note没有vocal的我是觉得滑条压尾，note空拍没问题的
02:52:878还有这一段这种

02:30:660 (1,2,3) - 比较理想的是这样的节奏
03:11:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 还有这种

节奏方面的问题我自己也经常出，无脑摆的话很可能让人打不顺蛋疼。

思路，比如01:46:597 (4,5) - 先滑条再note感觉没什么不同
或者用四分拍
当然如果你后面有空拍的话也可以压尾音

hard就是一些节奏方面的建议，音效什么的我比较蠢。。

Insane

比hard节奏好

01:19:222 (3,4,5,6,7,2,3,4,5,6) - 艾玛你可以用ctrl shift d 画多边形ctrl shift d调间距 ctrl G换位

02:39:660 (1,2) - 奇械，只是觉得比较稀罕0.0;w;

我感觉insane里有些处理方法完全可以用到hard里啊，改简单点

不怎么会mod in就不多写了，注意一下hitbrust的整齐吧

感觉写不动了就这样吧

good luck

啊忘记放我map的链接了https://osu.ppy.sh/s/98096
先谢谢啦！
Thank you for modding~ Fixed a lot :)
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[General]
- Audio-lead in is a bit short, do you mind change it to 2000 instead?

[Easy]
01:12:660 (1,2) - Clap in the middle is a bit off here, I'd suggest you to remove it.

[Normal]
02:55:785 (2) - Clap is a bit off herr nor is it too loud, I'd suggest you to remove it.
02:56:910 (5) - ^ (at the end of slider)

[Hard]
- Maybe you forgot to end Kiai time here 01:24:660
01:43:035 (3,4) - This seem fine, but I'd like go ask you to not make them under the slider a bit, just for the player to be easier to reach.
01:58:410 (2) - This slider is a bit short which made it hard to read it as a slider right after (1). move it a bit please.
02:03:285 (7) - Suggestion, Like 01:58:410 (2) - but it's just not that short or 'right' after (5), but it's just that (5) slider is almost ate all the (7).

I'm just trying not to let Hard diff be too hard to read, that's all. hope you understand~

[Insane]
00:36:097 (3,4,5) - I tried playing it but I'm still not really sure if it's a bit hard to tell that it's 1/2 beat away before triple. just a suggestion if you don't mind moving them a little bit closer to (2)
01:13:410 (3,4,5) - Clap is a bit off herr nor is it too loud, I'd suggest you to remove it.



Good job.
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orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- Audio-lead in is a bit short, do you mind change it to 2000 instead?

[Easy]
01:12:660 (1,2) - Clap in the middle is a bit off here, I'd suggest you to remove it.

[Normal]
02:55:785 (2) - Clap is a bit off herr nor is it too loud, I'd suggest you to remove it.
02:56:910 (5) - ^ (at the end of slider)

[Hard]
- Maybe you forgot to end Kiai time here 01:24:660
01:43:035 (3,4) - This seem fine, but I'd like go ask you to not make them under the slider a bit, just for the player to be easier to reach.
01:58:410 (2) - This slider is a bit short which made it hard to read it as a slider right after (1). move it a bit please.
02:03:285 (7) - Suggestion, Like 01:58:410 (2) - but it's just not that short or 'right' after (5), but it's just that (5) slider is almost ate all the (7).

I'm just trying not to let Hard diff be too hard to read, that's all. hope you understand~

[Insane]
00:36:097 (3,4,5) - I tried playing it but I'm still not really sure if it's a bit hard to tell that it's 1/2 beat away before triple. just a suggestion if you don't mind moving them a little bit closer to (2)
01:13:410 (3,4,5) - Clap is a bit off herr nor is it too loud, I'd suggest you to remove it.



Good job.
Thank you very much,all fixed
Shohei Ohtani
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Requested by zero___wind

This just made me realize how cool of an idea it would be to hit on people with asking people to mod their map.

Just like

"Hey mod this person's map"

and then you're just like

"hey baby I got some people to mod your map, why don't you go out on a nice dinner with me"

Ima try that sometime later

Overall:
00:06:660 - Why are there no normalwhistles for this part? This is one of the few songs that legitimately use whistles! Put it in! If the issue is that it'll turn on the hitnormal, then take the normal-hitwhistle.wmv file, put it into the folder as soft-hitwhistle1.wmv, and use custom hitsounds when you wanna whistle. It'll be kawaii.

Insane:
Tick rate 2.
00:04:222 (1) - AAAH! For upbeats, it's a lot better for players to have a better sense of readability, since it's already a struggle for them to play the rhythm.
00:15:191 (8) - If this wasn't stacked it'd be kind of cool. Stacking it stops the flow of the map, while having it just in the pattern at a decreased spacing makes it continue the flow.
00:26:722 (4,5,1) - Make this into a slider? Idunno, right now, it seems kind of weird to just stop the flow of maps like that.
00:54:660 (4) - What are you doing the song doesn't speed up yet.
00:57:660 (1) - This is where it speeds up
01:02:347 (5,6,7,8) - If you're ok with making a bit of a jump, this could look kind of cool (Or a curved slider, I just used a straight one to keep it as true to the original as possible. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818655 )
01:07:222 (5) - Even this out between (4) and (6)
01:43:035 (3) - Even this out between (2) and (4)
01:49:597 (4,5,6) - ! ! Like I don't know what this is supposed to make, and the spacing is all jacked up and stuff.
02:00:847 (1) - Same as before
02:11:535 (2) - Add clap on beginning of slider
03:31:410 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ! ! ! This is so unexpected like there's a difference between the map being challenging and the map just doing things that are unreadable
03:35:628 (1) - Why. Like there's no extended vocal. You're literally mapping a cymbal crash. There's much better stuff to map than a cymbal crash.
03:46:222 (4) - Make this a note

Hard:
00:48:660 - Add a note here, to follow the finish.
01:18:660 (1) - Curve this so it doesn't overlap
01:26:160 (1) - Curve this the other way so it looks nicer >w<~
01:29:160 (5) - Make this into a pattern with (1) rather than just having it randomly there.
02:00:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Like why the style changes here for no reason
02:37:597 (3) - Overlaps with the beginning of sliders look really bad D:
02:48:285 (2) - Make this a pattern with (1). Right now they just look like two isolated sliders.
03:08:722 (7) - Remove the clap from here.
03:16:785 (7) - Raise the red point so there's no overlap (Alternatively, make it a butt slider (Curved V slider, whatever you wanna call it) so it curves twice and blankets (6))
03:35:160 (1) - Make this a 1/1 slider with a repeat, so it ends at the large white tick instead of randomly in the middle of a measure
03:46:222 (4) - Make this just a note

Normal:
Tick Rate 2. This will make the quater note triplet patterns much more readable (The parts with the repeats on the blue ticks)
00:33:660 (1,2) - This would be much better like this: http://puu.sh/3i33j.jpg
02:04:035 (2) - This can be blanketed a bit better
02:08:160 (4) - Sliders curving like this rarely look good. I'd suggest changing to a different shape. Also, flipping (3) and making it a pattern with it would be super cool
02:18:660 (1,2,3) - When I see (1) and (3), I can also see the previous (4). These don't look the same, and my eye is kind of bothered by that.
02:46:035 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of having two curves, it might be better to bring (2) and (3) more outward so it can be one big curve leading to (4)
03:21:660 (2) - This is just begging to be parallel to the previous (4)
03:43:410 (3,4) - Right now these sliders look like some ratchet booty gurl like I'm not entirely certain of what the bumps should be.
03:46:222 (7) - Make this a note

Easy:
00:00:660 (1) - Symmetrical sliders are cool.
00:02:160 (2) - ^
01:07:035 (2,3,4) - These can be made so much better with just 1 point instead of 2.
03:12:660 (1,2,3) - well this isn't very fun at all :(

kawaii as shit song.
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SPOILER

CDFA wrote:

Requested by zero___wind

This just made me realize how cool of an idea it would be to hit on people with asking people to mod their map.

Just like

"Hey mod this person's map"

and then you're just like

"hey baby I got some people to mod your map, why don't you go out on a nice dinner with me";w;

Ima try that sometime later

Overall:
00:06:660 - Why are there no normalwhistles for this part? This is one of the few songs that legitimately use whistles! Put it in! If the issue is that it'll turn on the hitnormal, then take the normal-hitwhistle.wmv file, put it into the folder as soft-hitwhistle1.wmv, and use custom hitsounds when you wanna whistle. It'll be kawaii.I use it in the early time but it is not good enough,so I didn't use

Insane:
Tick rate 2.I believeSTR=1 is good
00:04:222 (1) - AAAH! For upbeats, it's a lot better for players to have a better sense of readability, since it's already a struggle for them to play the rhythm.
00:15:191 (8) - If this wasn't stacked it'd be kind of cool. Stacking it stops the flow of the map, while having it just in the pattern at a decreased spacing makes it continue the flow.Fixed
00:26:722 (4,5,1) - Make this into a slider? Idunno, right now, it seems kind of weird to just stop the flow of maps like that.Sorry id follow drum or vocal it can be seen notes are better
00:54:660 (4) - What are you doing the song doesn't speed up yet.because it just speed up a little
00:57:660 (1) - This is where it speeds up
01:02:347 (5,6,7,8) - If you're ok with making a bit of a jump, this could look kind of cool (Or a curved slider, I just used a straight one to keep it as true to the original as possible. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818655 )stack sees not good
01:07:222 (5) - Even this out between (4) and (6)fixed
01:43:035 (3) - Even this out between (2) and (4)fixed
01:49:597 (4,5,6) - ! ! Like I don't know what this is supposed to make, and the spacing is all jacked up and stuff.just little skip
02:00:847 (1) - Same as before
02:11:535 (2) - Add clap on beginning of sliderfixed
03:31:410 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ! ! ! This is so unexpected like there's a difference between the map being challenging and the map just doing things that are unreadableI think this is not necessary to be fixed,it can be readable
03:35:628 (1) - Why. Like there's no extended vocal. You're literally mapping a cymbal crash. There's much better stuff to map than a cymbal crash.fixed
03:46:222 (4) - Make this a notefixed

Hard:
00:48:660 - Add a note here, to follow the finish.If follow the vocal...
01:18:660 (1) - Curve this so it doesn't overlapfixed
01:26:160 (1) - Curve this the other way so it looks nicer >w<~fixed
01:29:160 (5) - Make this into a pattern with (1) rather than just having it randomly there.fixed
02:00:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Like why the style changes here for no reasonStyle change?
02:37:597 (3) - Overlaps with the beginning of sliders look really bad D:fixed:D
02:48:285 (2) - Make this a pattern with (1). Right now they just look like two isolated sliders.fixed
03:08:722 (7) - Remove the clap from here.This is drum point
03:16:785 (7) - Raise the red point so there's no overlap (Alternatively, make it a butt slider (Curved V slider, whatever you wanna call it) so it curves twice and blankets (6))fixed
03:35:160 (1) - Make this a 1/1 slider with a repeat, so it ends at the large white tick instead of randomly in the middle of a measurefixed
03:46:222 (4) - Make this just a notefixed

Normal:
Tick Rate 2. This will make the quater note triplet patterns much more readable (The parts with the repeats on the blue ticks)as the same,All diff's STR=1 is better
00:33:660 (1,2) - This would be much better like this: http://puu.sh/3i33j.jpgfixed
02:04:035 (2) - This can be blanketed a bit betterfixed
02:08:160 (4) - Sliders curving like this rarely look good. I'd suggest changing to a different shape. Also, flipping (3) and making it a pattern with it would be super coolfixed
02:18:660 (1,2,3) - When I see (1) and (3), I can also see the previous (4). These don't look the same, and my eye is kind of bothered by that.fixed
02:46:035 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of having two curves, it might be better to bring (2) and (3) more outward so it can be one big curve leading to (4)
03:21:660 (2) - This is just begging to be parallel to the previous (4)fixed
03:43:410 (3,4) - Right now these sliders look like some ratchet booty gurl like I'm not entirely certain of what the bumps should be.I couldn't understand how it would be,but I think this is good enough
03:46:222 (7) - Make this a notefixed

Easy:all fixed
00:00:660 (1) - Symmetrical sliders are cool.
00:02:160 (2) - ^
01:07:035 (2,3,4) - These can be made so much better with just 1 point instead of 2.
03:12:660 (1,2,3) - well this isn't very fun at all :(

kawaii as shit song.
Thank you very much mor modding~ :)
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1 thing before bubble comes, what's "moe ako" in tag for?
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orioncomet wrote:

1 thing before bubble comes, what's "moe ako" in tag for?
Thanks "moe ako" has been deleted. :)
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Good luck on your first map, bubbled.
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orioncomet wrote:

Good luck on your first map, bubbled.
Thank you~
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Mapper didn't know that a bubbled map can not be updated/edited post, else bubble'd be popped , so.. rebubbled :P
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麻將麻將 明天來看...

來曬一個 .____< (雖然是三麻
http://puu.sh/3jrrG
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kanpakyin wrote:

麻將麻將 明天來看...

來曬一個 .____< (雖然是三麻
http://puu.sh/3jrrG
^^Epic tile never got it.
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哇泡了233

kanpakyin wrote:

麻將麻將 明天來看...

來曬一個 .____< (雖然是三麻
http://puu.sh/3jrrG
思考
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KPY看那我就歇了zz~
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grats ._.
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Fycho

EmingK wrote:

grats ._.
早了www
mintong89
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mintong89
晒差评

SPOILER
http://puu.sh/3jVAN.jpg
Fycho
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Fycho

mintong89 wrote:

晒差评

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http://puu.sh/3jVAN.jpg
恶俗
Banana
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Banana

mintong89 wrote:

晒差评
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/3kFB8.PNG
lkx_Shore
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lkx_Shore
我刚想说02:48:097 (2,3) - ctrl+g会不会好点然后我就看到了一个泡的图标

伤感
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
按照約定來了

[General]
  1. Offset覺得有點late了 -5左右比較好
  2. Inconsistent combo colour and kiai. It is not a must but better to do it.
  3. 02:50:910 - 這條紅線應該是要移去02:52:410 - 因為重音在這邊才出現 否則前面NC mod的話重音位就要錯了
  4. 多查一次歌名有沒有錯? 剛才sco說可能是 Magical Mah-jong'g' World

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:847 (2,1,2,3) - 我覺得這堆可以做成小spacing 1/1 像是這樣的 (這邊我用了0.2x的spacing)
    .
  2. 00:06:660 (3) - 移除finish之後 加個whistle在slider head? 然後把'Additions' (左上角) 那裡換成normal
  3. 00:07:410 (5) - ^
  4. 00:08:160 (1) - ^
  5. 00:08:910 (5) - ^
  6. 00:12:660 (1) - 尾巴加上clap, 00:13:222 (2) - remove clap here
  7. 00:36:285 (4) - slider的尾巴可以與00:36:097 (3) - 重疊
  8. 00:59:160 (1) - 我覺得這邊可以加一個new combo
  9. 01:22:035 (2) - 漏了一個clap?
  10. 01:29:535 (6) - 這個clap就有點多餘了 可以remove掉
  11. 01:54:753 (8) - 5連節奏有點怪 建議3連 + 1/2 這個 (8)- 可以考慮remove
  12. 02:31:785 (4) - slider head漏了一個clap
  13. 02:35:160 (7) - 尾巴可以去掉clap 有點不合音樂
  14. 02:57:660 (3,4,5,6,7) - 至少我是覺得沒必要在這裡下5連
  15. 03:07:410 (5) - 可以考慮在這邊加一個new combo
  16. 03:34:410 (7) - slider end可以去掉clap
  17. 03:35:722 (1) - spinner加clap
  18. flow不錯

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:660 (1) - remove whistle and add a whistle at the beginning of 00:03:847 (2) -
  2. 00:05:535 (2) - 尾巴也加上clap?
  3. 00:07:035 (2) - ^
  4. 00:08:535 (2) - 折返加clap
  5. 00:10:222 (3) - clap?
  6. 00:13:785 (4) - 尾巴whistle?
  7. 00:14:910 (7) - whistle?
  8. 00:18:285 (1) - slider的尾端可以考慮whistle
  9. 00:19:972 (5) - ^
  10. 00:20:910 (3) - ^頭加
  11. 01:00:660 (1,2,3) - 不相等間距, 強烈建議修改
  12. 01:29:160 (5) - 尾巴去掉clap?
  13. 02:35:160 (1) - 尾巴去掉clap?
  14. 02:48:285 (2) - 突然來個大跳 flow不太舒服
  15. 03:34:410 (5) - 尾巴去掉clap
  16. 03:35:722 (1) - 這個spinner感覺停在03:37:972 - 會比較合適 因為instrument也是在那邊拉長的

[Normal]
  1. 00:49:222 (2) - I guess yoiu can lengthen this to blue tick (00:49:691 - ) so that it can fit the vocal.
  2. 02:35:535 (4) - Remove the clap here because it doesn't fit the music
  3. 02:35:910 (1) - Consider a whistle here to fit the 'yeah' sound?
  4. 02:44:910 (5) - This slider is quite ugly imo. I would rather change it like this:
    suggestion
  5. 02:52:410 (2) - , 02:53:910 (2) - Remove the clap there please, it isn't that necessary and doesn;t fit the music at all
  6. 03:34:410 (3) - Remove the clap at reverse arrow please.

[Easy]
  1. 00:29:160 (3) - Add a finish here to fit the strong downbeat?
Fycho
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Topic Starter
Fycho

kanpakyin wrote:

按照約定來了
SPOILER
[General]
  1. Offset覺得有點late了 -5左右比較好
  2. Inconsistent combo colour and kiai. It is not a must but better to do it.
  3. 02:50:910 - 這條紅線應該是要移去02:52:410 - 因為重音在這邊才出現 否則前面NC mod的話重音位就要錯了
  4. 多查一次歌名有沒有錯? 剛才sco說可能是 Magical Mah-jong'g' World

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:847 (2,1,2,3) - 我覺得這堆可以做成小spacing 1/1 像是這樣的 (這邊我用了0.2x的spacing)
    .
  2. 00:06:660 (3) - 移除finish之後 加個whistle在slider head? 然後把'Additions' (左上角) 那裡換成normal
  3. 00:07:410 (5) - ^
  4. 00:08:160 (1) - ^
  5. 00:08:910 (5) - ^
  6. 00:12:660 (1) - 尾巴加上clap, 00:13:222 (2) - remove clap here
  7. 00:36:285 (4) - slider的尾巴可以與00:36:097 (3) - 重疊
  8. 00:59:160 (1) - 我覺得這邊可以加一個new combo
  9. 01:22:035 (2) - 漏了一個clap?
  10. 01:29:535 (6) - 這個clap就有點多餘了 可以remove掉
  11. 01:54:753 (8) - 5連節奏有點怪 建議3連 + 1/2 這個 (8)- 可以考慮remove
  12. 02:31:785 (4) - slider head漏了一個clap
  13. 02:35:160 (7) - 尾巴可以去掉clap 有點不合音樂
  14. 02:57:660 (3,4,5,6,7) - 至少我是覺得沒必要在這裡下5連
  15. 03:07:410 (5) - 可以考慮在這邊加一個new combo
  16. 03:34:410 (7) - slider end可以去掉clap
  17. 03:35:722 (1) - spinner加clap
  18. flow不錯

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:660 (1) - remove whistle and add a whistle at the beginning of 00:03:847 (2) -
  2. 00:05:535 (2) - 尾巴也加上clap?
  3. 00:07:035 (2) - ^
  4. 00:08:535 (2) - 折返加clap
  5. 00:10:222 (3) - clap?
  6. 00:13:785 (4) - 尾巴whistle?
  7. 00:14:910 (7) - whistle?
  8. 00:18:285 (1) - slider的尾端可以考慮whistle
  9. 00:19:972 (5) - ^
  10. 00:20:910 (3) - ^頭加
  11. 01:00:660 (1,2,3) - 不相等間距, 強烈建議修改
  12. 01:29:160 (5) - 尾巴去掉clap?
  13. 02:35:160 (1) - 尾巴去掉clap?
  14. 02:48:285 (2) - 突然來個大跳 flow不太舒服
  15. 03:34:410 (5) - 尾巴去掉clap
  16. 03:35:722 (1) - 這個spinner感覺停在03:37:972 - 會比較合適 因為instrument也是在那邊拉長的

[Normal]
  1. 00:49:222 (2) - I guess yoiu can lengthen this to blue tick (00:49:691 - ) so that it can fit the vocal.
  2. 02:35:535 (4) - Remove the clap here because it doesn't fit the music
  3. 02:35:910 (1) - Consider a whistle here to fit the 'yeah' sound?
  4. 02:44:910 (5) - This slider is quite ugly imo. I would rather change it like this:
    suggestion
  5. 02:52:410 (2) - , 02:53:910 (2) - Remove the clap there please, it isn't that necessary and doesn;t fit the music at all
  6. 03:34:410 (3) - Remove the clap at reverse arrow please.

[Easy]
  1. 00:29:160 (3) - Add a finish here to fit the strong downbeat?
All have been fixed except the title and offsetThank you very much~ :)
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
Sorry I will just restore the bubble.

Rebubbled.

(ノ・ω・)ノ

edit: Repaired
Fycho
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Fycho

kanpakyin wrote:

Sorry I will just restore the bubble.

Rebubbled.

(ノ・ω・)ノ
Thanks~
Nymph
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Nymph
[General]
Delete the space between 东山 奈央 in the artist.

Is it on purpose to make the combo colour in normal diff different with other diffs?


call me when you have reply.
Fycho
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Fycho

Nymph wrote:

[General]
Delete the space between 东山 奈央 in the artist.

Is it on purpose to make the combo colour in normal diff different with other diffs?


call me when you have reply.
Fixed :)
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