KingsAL2 wrote:

訓前 ~
By AL2 modding queue

==Lagomorph==
-- Combo Problem --
00:04:800 (5) - Suggestion NC fixed
00:42:900 (4) - NC but remove 00:43:200 (1) fixed
01:29:400 (5) - NC remove 01:30:000 (1) And 01:30:600 (3) - NC fixed
---01:29:400 (5,6,1,2) - Make it to be a patten fixed
01:42:000 (1) - Remove NC but 01:42:150 (2) NC fixed
01:42:900 (7) - NC remove 01:43:200 (1) fixed
01:46:800 (1) - Remove but 01:46:950 (2) - NC fixed
-- Sound --
00:52:200 (4) - Remove clap? Or somewhere more?
02:16:875 (1) - Silence ?
-- Spacing --
01:25:350 (2) - Spacing remapped until 01:27:300
01:27:900 (2) - ^
01:59:250 (4) - ^ (The problem of 5) fixed
-- Other(S) --

==OVERALL==
UNLIKE : Adding the sound eff on Ends plz ~ It will be amaze if you put it. OK w

On_WanWan wrote:

Lagomorph
00:17:100 (3) - 同(1)唔對稱 fixed
00:37:500 (1,3) - 移右一格對稱返? fixed
00:38:400 (1,2,3,4) - 可以置中0,0? remapped
01:01:800 (3,4) - (3) x248 y256 (4) x304 y336? fixed
01:26:700 (3) - (3) x192 y184 remapped
01:26:825 (4,5) - (4,5) x144 y96? remapped
01:56:550 (2) - x240 y132 同(1,3)三角型? fixed
02:20:475 - spinner應該係e個位完先岩? 02:20:400就好w

第一次mod 可能我有少少不自量力

KingsAL2 wrote:

==Ends' Hard==
-- Combo Problem --
01:17:400 (7) - NC FIXED
01:49:800 (1) - remove NC but 01:50:400 (3) - NC FIXED
02:02:400 (1) - Remove nC but 02:03:000 (2) NC FIXED
-- Sound --
-- Spacing --
00:15:900 (2,3) - Really confuse, Maybe some change here. FIXED
01:01:500 (4,5) - I dont mine if 4 is covering 5 FIXED
01:40:800 (1,2,3) - ... Um, move the 3 a bit far. Coz they are the same distance. FIXED
-- Other(S) --
Im wonder the spacing is acceptable
00:13:050 (7) - Right 1 grid FIXED
01:57:600 (1) - Try ctrl+h And make it inflect to 01:58:200 (2). FIXED

Why English sosad

1. change Hitsound Normal to Soft
2. add clap properly

1. 00:10:800 (1) - Finish
2. 02:02:400 (5) - finish
3. 02:05:400 (2) - second point (192,264)
4. 02:07:200 (1) - finish
5. 02:12:000 (1) - ^

1. 00:10:800 (1) - finish
2. 00:21:600 (1) - finish
3. 00:31:200 (1) - ^
4. 00:31:800 (2) - move to (381,157)
5. 00:36:900 (3) - move to (194,92)
6. 00:38:100 (1) - move to (93,214)
7. 00:40:800 (6) - finish
8. 01:09:300 (4) - finish second slider
9. 01:24:900 (4) - move to (299,239)

1. 00:16:650 (3) - close to 00:15:900 (2)
2. 00:39:450 (4) - second point (460,240)
3. 00:49:200 (3) - move to (500,180)
4. 01:09:600 (1) - finish
5. 01:28:200 (5) - finish on 01:28:800
6. 02:11:700 (4) - expend repeat slider to 02:12:000 and add finish 02:12:000

[Pisces] wrote:

m4m~
[General(only your diff)]

1. change Hitsound Normal to Soft fixed
2. add clap properly fixed, added claps in Easy

[Easy]

1. 00:10:800 (1) - Finish fixed
2. 02:02:400 (5) - finish fixed
3. 02:05:400 (2) - second point (192,264) fixed
4. 02:07:200 (1) - finish fixed
5. 02:12:000 (1) - ^ fixed

it's my poor mod
Go Rank!

kajiyatta wrote:

from PM
General
almost suggestions
Easy
Placement
00:26:400(1,2,3) make beautiful? fixed

SPOILER

01:22:800(4) make nice blanket? fixed

SPOILER

01:30:600(2) not overlapped with (1) & (3) better fixed
01:43:800(2,3,4,1) like this? fixed

SPOILER

01:54:600(2) x:316 y:164 seems more beautiful fixed

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[General]

1. in my opinion, red line should start at 00:01:200 cause at there the song is start fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:33:600 (3)- : to make a better symmetrical, move 2nd slider point to x316 y260 and last slider point to x304 y152 of course you have to adjust next slider ><; fixed
2. 01:09:600 (7)- : to avoid long combos at easy diff, I suggest to add new combo at here fixed
3. 01:42:000 (1)- : cause of same rhythm, I suggest to move new combo here to 01:43:800 (2) fixed
4. 01:57:600 (1)- : finish at the head? fixed
5. 02:02:400 (5)- : nc here, if you do so then remove nc at here 02:03:600 fixed

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

offset should be 1275?

happy623 wrote:

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

offset should be 1275?

tried, seems not Q_Q

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

offset should be 1275?

[Pisces] wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:10:800 (1) - finish fixed
2. 00:21:600 (1) - finish fixed
3. 00:31:200 (1) - ^ fixed
4. 00:31:800 (2) - move to (381,157) sorry, can't move it to (381,157). i moved it to(384,152)
5. 00:36:900 (3) - move to (194,92) can't move again D: now it's (192,96)
6. 00:38:100 (1) - move to (93,214) can't move again D: now it's (96,216)
7. 00:40:800 (6) - finish fixed
8. 01:09:300 (4) - finish second slider fixed
9. 01:24:900 (4) - move to (299,239)

can't move again D: now it's (296,232)

kajiyatta wrote:

Karmal
please use distant snap more positively, it's too hard for normal. you should remake this diff if you aim to Ranked.
you can see many Ranked maps, it's helpful for your mapset and Please know the basics of mapping.
Placement
00:18:300(2) sudden jump? you should use distant snap, it's unexpectable. fixed
00:27:300(3) not overlapped better, it's a bit dirty. it maybe fixed (?) lol
...giving up sorry for my poor mapping ;_;

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[Karmal]

1. 00:12:600 (4)- : clap here? fixed
2. 00:14:400 (2) until 00:20:100 (5)- : why the claps are missing? fixed
3. 00:40:800 (6)- : nc also add finish? fixed
4. 01:29:400 (2)- : ctrl+j it and adjust it will make the flow more nice fixed and thx for telling me ctrl+j ;w;
5. 02:02:400 (1)- : Please fix the distance

fixed

• 00:52:800(3)复制1然后ctrl+h g
  01:07:200(4)nc
  01:31:200(3)复制1然后ctrl+h g
  01:42:000(4)个人觉得这歌造型没弄好 不如试试直接摆一个下弧的slider
  01:45:000(3,2)叠好吧o.o

• 00:24:000(5)nc 为了跟后面保持一致
  00:29:100(6)^
  00:33:300 - 00:40:500 这一段的nc感觉都往后挪一个note比较合音乐
  01:24:000(1,2,3,4)稍微挪一下4摆成正方形吧
  01:40:500(5)试试这个节奏呢
  SPOILER

  
  01:50:100(2,3)还是拉开点吧

• 00:09:600(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)这么多note拿来做一个造型完全够了，原地单点有偷懒的嫌疑
  00:22:800(1)和前面的00:21:750(2)放一起
  00:26:700(3,4,5)放平行比较好
  00:42:000(3)x:37 y:218
  00:49:800(3,4)为什么不弄对称呢orz
  01:31:500(2,4)有点歪了

• OD+1
  00:09:000(4)感觉做一个下弧会更好
  00:18:000(2)nc换到这里来
  00:20:100(9)unsnap
  00:21:600(1,2,3)感觉弄成这样会比较好
  SPOILER

  
  00:44:400(3)尾巴往上抬一点
  01:38:400(1)这里一个直的总感觉不好看 做一个弧吧

Melt wrote:

Hi,Mod as request

[Easy]

• 00:52:800(3)复制1然后ctrl+h g fixed
  01:07:200(4)nc fixed
  01:31:200(3)复制1然后ctrl+h g fixed
  01:42:000(4)个人觉得这歌造型没弄好 不如试试直接摆一个下弧的slider fixed
  01:45:000(3,2)叠好吧o.o fixed

[Lagomorph]

• 00:09:600(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)这么多note拿来做一个造型完全够了，原地单点有偷懒的嫌疑 Edit : 感覺疊住比較配合音樂;w;
  00:22:800(1)和前面的00:21:750(2)放一起 fixed
  00:26:700(3,4,5)放平行比较好 個人覺得打斜好看點_(:3 」∠)_
  00:42:000(3)x:37 y:218 fixed
  00:49:800(3,4)为什么不弄对称呢orz fixed
  01:31:500(2,4)有点歪了 fixed

大概就这么多 加油 :3

Melt wrote:

[Karmal]

• 00:24:000(5)nc 为了跟后面保持一致 fixed
  00:29:100(6)^ fixed
  00:33:300 - 00:40:500 这一段的nc感觉都往后挪一个note比较合音乐 fixed
  01:24:000(1,2,3,4)稍微挪一下4摆成正方形吧 fixed
  01:40:500(5)试试这个节奏呢 fixed
  SPOILER

  
  01:50:100(2,3)还是拉开点吧 fixed

Melt wrote:

Hi,Mod as request
[Ends' Hard]

• OD+1
  00:09:000(4)感觉做一个下弧会更好 Fixed
  00:18:000(2)nc换到这里来 Fixed
  00:20:100(9)unsnap Fixed
  00:21:600(1,2,3)感觉弄成这样会比较好
  SPOILER

  
  Fixed
  00:44:400(3)尾巴往上抬一点 Fixed
  01:38:400(1)这里一个直的总感觉不好看 做一个弧吧 Fixed

MerryGate wrote:

Hi~

[General]
-AudioLeadIn+500 in all diffs. fixed


[Lagomorph]
00:07:650 (2,3) - Symmetrical with respect to the Y-axis is better. fixed
00:09:600 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:10:200 (1,2,3,4) - I think these stacks are desirable to be consistent. fixed
for example, 00:09:600 (1) - is unstack. fixed
00:28:500 (6,3,3,3) - Well, many people wouldn't changed this, but I argue these have problem of visibility. for the visibility, I have tried to make them unstack ;w; I hope its work
00:49:200 (1,2) - , 00:49:800 (3,4) - symmetry? Use inverted (3,4). fixed
01:57:600 (1,2) - I'm concerned about whether the player can read the reverse of the second. fixed
02:02:100 (3,4,5) - , 02:02:400 (1) - Hmm. Unstack these? Hard to read, I think. fixed

[Easy]
00:50:400 (1) - ~ 00:59:400 (6) - Volume +10~15%. fixed

Good luck~.

MerryGate wrote:

Hi~

[Ends'Hard]
Offset of TimingPoint should be 1200. Fixed
Add "Erik McClure" to the Tags. Fixed

Unsnapped object

00:11:850 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). Fixed
00:11:850 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed
00:14:250 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). Fixed
00:14:250 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed
00:15:600 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed
00:16:650 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). Fixed
00:16:650 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed
00:19:800 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed
00:20:100 (8) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). Fixed
00:20:100 (8) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). Fixed
00:20:100 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed
00:22:500 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed
00:23:700 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed
00:26:100 (6) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). Fixed
00:26:100 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed
00:26:400 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).

00:01:200 (1) - ~ 00:10:650 (4) - Volume -10~15%? 30% maybe more better I think :3
00:36:900 (4) - To my mind, this jump isn't necessary. Fixed
00:53:700 - Adding a object? I think isn't necessary xP
00:56:100 - ^ ^
02:06:000 (1) - remove clap Fixed
02:06:900 (4) - add clap to start and remove it from end. Fixed
02:09:900 (3) - remove clap Fixed
02:10:050 (4) - add clap to start Fixed
02:11:250 (3) - remove clap from end Fixed

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Blackhole - Lagomorphic.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 996
PreviewTime: 108000
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 1281,69681,79281,88881,93681,132081,136881
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Lagomorphic
TitleUnicode:Lagomorphic
Artist:Blackhole
ArtistUnicode:Blackhole
Creator:happy623
Version:Ends' Hard
Source:Newgrounds
Tags:Erik McClure dinka0403 Foreverends Black Sphere Studios techno
BeatmapID:216196
BeatmapSetID:74664

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,89000,97650
2,132200,136050
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1200,300,4,2,0,30,1,0
10800,-100,4,1,0,55,0,0
21600,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
21675,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
50400,-100,4,1,0,45,0,0
60000,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0
60900,-100,4,1,0,55,0,0
79200,-200,4,1,0,45,0,0
88800,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
98400,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
108000,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
108075,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
127200,-100,4,1,0,55,0,0
140400,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,117,117
Combo2 : 100,135,155
Combo3 : 157,157,157
Combo4 : 158,104,232

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240,280,124800,6,0,L|364:304,1,80
412,308,125100,2,0,P|428:268|408:200,1,80
332,212,125400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,148,125550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,52,125700,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,28,125850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,84,126000,6,0,P|436:128|364:184,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,140,126300,2,0,B|244:112|244:112|160:120,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,180,126750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,268,126900,2,0,L|248:252,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,240,127200,6,0,L|424:220,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,200,127500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,144,127650,2,0,P|324:132|284:40,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,144,128400,6,0,L|88:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,184,128700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,240,128850,2,0,P|188:252|228:344,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,348,129300,2,0,L|340:232,1,80
348,176,129600,5,8,0:0:0:0:
348,80,129750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,129900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,130050,2,0,P|202:217|284:200,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,316,130800,6,0,L|108:296,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,284,131100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,188,131250,2,0,P|108:140|84:8,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,80,131700,2,0,L|252:132,4,40,0|0|0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136800,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136875,12,0,140400,0:0:0:0:

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hi! Timing Check :33

BPM: 200,00
Offset: 1,218 (+18+)

Good Luck :3

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Lagomorph]
00:59:718 (1) - move to x256 y88? fixed

nokd

感觉啥也mod不出来...

Goodluck

MerryGate wrote:

[Karmal]
00:09:900 (3,4,1) - Beginners may be confused because 3 and 1 are close. fixed
00:50:400 (1) - ~ 00:59:400 (6) - Volume +10~15%. fixed i increased the volume to 70% :3
01:51:900 (6) - x:312 y:248, 01:52:200 (7) - x:200 y:248, 01:52:500 (8) - x:88 y:248 fixed
02:09:300 (1) - Since only this is reversed twice, beginners might mistake. fixed

• [General]
  Fine.

• [Easy]

1. 00:24:018 (3) - slider的finish拿掉吧. 00:33:618 (3) - 您這裡也沒加finish,把它們統一吧.
2. 00:50:418 - Useless inherited point.
3. 01:03:618 (1) - NC. 如果接受的話,01:07:218 (1) - 這個把NC拿掉.
4. 01:03:618 (1,2,3) - 試試把它們包的好看一點?
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:28:818 (1,3) - 這兩個slider頭尾都上whistle?
6. 01:45:618 (1) - NC拿掉?
7. 01:51:618 (3,1) - 試試把(3)包進去.可往上移1-2格.
8. 02:16:818 (1) - 建議加幾條綠線讓後面慢慢消音到5%.

• [Karmal]

1. 00:01:218 (1) - 建議把這個circle移到x:128 y:176. 不然太平行了,因為這SV有點快,對新手來講一開始會不好抓.
2. 00:03:336 (5) - NC.
3. 00:03:336 (5,6,7) - 這幾個距離非常亂,把它們弄整齊一點吧.
4. 00:18:318 (1) - 距離不好.
5. 00:21:618 (1) - 為何這裡到00:26:418 (1) - 這段距離變成1.0x了 o.o? 如果是Normal的話建議都不要改間距比較好.
6. 00:36:318 (1) - 當初打的時候就覺得這slider特別不一樣XD (上面有突出來一點...)
   SPOILER

   
   是故意的還是不小心多點了一個point上去?
7. 00:38:718 (5) - NC.
8. 00:53:118 (6) - NC.如果這有NC的話,00:54:918 (1) - 拿掉NC.00:55:518 (2) - NC.00:56:418 (1) - 拿掉NC.00:57:918 (4) - NC. (NC最好還是跟著節奏放比較好)
9. 00:59:718 (1) - 消音有點奇怪,開頭上whistle如何?
10. 01:07:518 (6) - NC.01:08:118 (1) - 拿掉NC.
11. 01:28:818 (1,2,3) - 既然後面那一小段也沒有的話,不如這邊就不要放note了,有點奇怪.這三個拿掉然後01:28:818 - 只用一個circle音效上whistle或finish代替感覺比較好,
12. 01:33:918 (2) - 距離.
13. 01:38:418 (1) - ^.
14. 01:47:418 (2) - clap.
15. 01:49:218 (1) - 拿掉NC.01:50:418 (3) - NC.
16. 02:08:399 (4) - 距離.
17. 02:16:818 (1) - 同Easy,可做消音.

• [Ends' Hard]

1. 00:03:618 (3) - 開頭上whistle?
2. 00:06:018 (2) - ^
3. 00:08:418 (2) - ^
4. 00:09:618 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 第1PC玩的時候直覺真的會以為是連打 QAQ.我覺得應該能用更好的梗o.o
5. 00:24:768 (1) - 我覺得00:24:618 - 這裡重音比(1)更為明顯. 建議把(1)移到前面.如果接受的話後面也是一樣.
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:18:468 - 這裡不加個circle嘛 o.o?
7. 02:08:118 - Add circle?
8. 02:10:518 - ^
9. 02:12:168 - 嗯..後面不做類似01:09:618 - 這段的part嗎? 雖然不影響整體,但只等最後02:16:818 (1) - 這一個circle有點可惜.
10. 02:16:893 (1) - 同Easy,可試試做消音.

• [Lagomorph]

1. 00:19:668 (1,2) - 兩個選起來移到x:192 y:336? 比較好判讀.
2. 00:19:818 (2) - 沒對稱到,右移一格.
3. 00:31:218 (3) - NC.
4. 00:41:418 (4) - 右移一格我覺得比較好.
5. 00:56:118 (3) - 開頭加個Soft clap吧.
6. 01:38:718 (7) - NC?
7. 01:39:318 (9,10,11) - 三連下錯地方了,01:39:468 - 這邊下比較順,通常也都是紅線下三連比較好.
8. 01:43:068 (2) - 是想要包在01:42:318 (2,3,4,5) - 這四個裡面? 如果是的話有點沒包好.
   SPOILER

   

   448,248,102768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   432,80,102918,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   352,232,103068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   240,104,103218,1,4,0:0:0:0:

9. 01:42:468 (3,4,5,1) - 可以的話讓(3)(4)、(5)(1)兩者間距一樣會更好 o.o
10. 02:16:893 (1) - 同Easy.
    
    Nice diff.
    1PC owo

    

jesse7419 wrote:

Hi from m4m~?

• [Easy]

1. 00:24:018 (3) - slider的finish拿掉吧. 00:33:618 (3) - 您這裡也沒加finish,把它們統一吧. fixed
2. 00:50:418 - Useless inherited point. deleted
3. 01:03:618 (1) - NC. 如果接受的話,01:07:218 (1) - 這個把NC拿掉. fixed
4. 01:03:618 (1,2,3) - 試試把它們包的好看一點? fixed
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:28:818 (1,3) - 這兩個slider頭尾都上whistle? fixed
6. 01:45:618 (1) - NC拿掉? fixed
7. 01:51:618 (3,1) - 試試把(3)包進去.可往上移1-2格. fixed
8. 02:16:818 (1) - 建議加幾條綠線讓後面慢慢消音到5%. fixed

• [Lagomorph]

1. 00:19:668 (1,2) - 兩個選起來移到x:192 y:336? 比較好判讀. fixed
2. 00:19:818 (2) - 沒對稱到,右移一格. fixed
3. 00:31:218 (3) - NC. fixed
4. 00:41:418 (4) - 右移一格我覺得比較好. fixed
5. 00:56:118 (3) - 開頭加個Soft clap吧. fixed, 看漏了qwq
6. 01:38:718 (7) - NC? fixed
7. 01:39:318 (9,10,11) - 三連下錯地方了,01:39:468 - 這邊下比較順,通常也都是紅線下三連比較好. fixed, 順道換了NC~
8. 01:43:068 (2) - 是想要包在01:42:318 (2,3,4,5) - 這四個裡面? 如果是的話有點沒包好. 換了Code~
   SPOILER

   

   448,248,102768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   432,80,102918,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   352,232,103068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   240,104,103218,1,4,0:0:0:0:

9. 01:42:468 (3,4,5,1) - 可以的話讓(3)(4)、(5)(1)兩者間距一樣會更好 o.o fixed(改了01:43:068 (2)的跳)
10. 02:16:893 (1) - 同Easy. fixed
    
    Nice diff.
    1PC owo

    
    瞎了( 艸)

• GENERAL

1. No kiai? the song maybe lack on 'peak point', but i reccomend to use kiai on 01:48:018 - and on. You've already put it here, but only for star fountain. Is okay, but I do reccomend it, long songs feels kinda off without kiai orz

• EASY

1. 01:01:218 (2) - Make this an also curvy slider and make it symmetrical with 01:00:018 (1) -
2. 01:06:018 (3) - NC here instead of 01:07:218 (1) - , the combos will be short, but the new rhythm is started here

• KARMAL

1. 00:01:518 (2,3) - Beats on here sounds really faint. I reccomend you to align these two together to avoid confusion for beginners
2. 00:12:918 - Add note here to keep the flow going and to signal the change of rhythm on 00:14:418 (2,3) -. KKinda unexpected there
3. 00:25:218 (3) - Why not symmetrical? The other ones are symmetri and looked better. 1 grid down on this
4. 00:50:418 (1,2) - These aren't exactly on normal (1/2 slider aligned with another slider). Is okay, but I reccomend to change the 00:50:418 (1) - to a circle only
5. 00:50:718 (1) - All in 1.1 Distance from here. Intentional?
6. 01:01:218 (1) - A bit too close with 01:01:818 (2) - actually, doesn't lookked really good
7. 00:53:118 (5) - NC
8. 01:05:718 (3,4,5) - Doesn't look really good. Tweak them a bit
9. 01:08:418 (2,4) - ^
10. 02:11:718 (5) - Make it symmetrical

• END'S

1. When I first saw this, I realized you use many overlaps that many is as good as a nice blanket while a few is a bit out of place. I'll point out which
2. 00:01:218 - For starters, I think this part have a too fast SV. Is okay, but i reccomend to change it to 0.75 from this point to 00:10:818 -, fit with the music too
3. 00:03:815 - A bit overlapped with 00:04:218 (5) -, raise the end note 1 grid
4. 00:08:418 (2) - Overlapped, doesn't look nice. move it down?
5. 00:25:818 (4) - Remove this note, doesn't follow the rhythm before and a bit confusing to play
6. 00:30:618 (1) - Remove NC. same rhythm
7. 00:30:618 (1) - Make this symmetrical with 00:30:018 (1) - too, this one doesn't look too good
8. 00:32:718 (6) - NC
9. 00:34:668 (6) - ^
10. 00:37:068 (5) - Overlap here doesn't look good, raise this a bit
11. 00:39:468 (4) - Overlap a bit, move 1 grid right
12. 01:16:818 (7) - NC here instead of 01:17:418 (1) -
13. 01:58:668 (3) - Overlap doesn't good, move it a bit left and down for better and safe spacing

• LAGOMORPH

1. 00:07:668 (2,3) - 2 Overlap with the slider, make the slider's turn cleaner to get rid of overlap
2. 00:19:668 (1,2) - These have a different rhythm than these 00:20:118 (1,2,3) -, add note at 00:19:518 -
3. 00:26:568 (2) - Move 1 grid left, overlap
4. 00:44:418 (1,2) - Different spacings for this 2? Is okay but it can be better if the spacing is same. If you want to keep it insane, use a big one orz
5. 00:57:918 (1,2) - Try not to hidethe reverse arrow too much, can be unrankable
6. 01:04:518 (5,6,7) - Short slider stream? quite too sudden in my opinion. Is okay, but I prefer this to be stacked instead
7. 01:09:468 (4) - Why up direction? the music goes down at this point. Move the direction to down here
8. 01:21:018 (2) - 3.5 jump? a bit too sudden too. Reduce the distance to 2.5-3.0 to make it easier to notice
9. 01:28:518 (4) - -1 repeat here. Doesn't too fit with the music
10. 01:32:118 (4) - Same as before, the slider end is confusing here, hidden by 01:31:518 (2) -. It doesn't stacked and 100% hidden, but it still really confusing to play
11. 01:35:118 (2) - Make it symmetry with 01:34:818 (1) - or make a pattern with 01:33:918 (2,3) - to make it look nicer
12. 01:36:318 (2,3,5,6) - Increase the spacing here. Different spacing here can make people hit the notes early orz
13. 01:38:718 (7) - NC
14. 01:39:918 (2) - Starting from this point, i saw many circles that can be used to make a nice pattern. Right now it seemed only scattered and doesn't look good. Make patterns to better your map

AnreFM wrote:

SORRY FOR BEING SO LATE
Hope this helps
I've done the mod 2 days ago but only have chance to post it now, sorry for the delay>< Its okay, I am not really care about it ><

• GENERAL

1. No kiai? the song maybe lack on 'peak point', but i reccomend to use kiai on 01:48:018 - and on. You've already put it here, but only for star fountain. Is okay, but I do reccomend it, long songs feels kinda off without kiai orz ok, I changed it ;w;

• EASY

1. 01:01:218 (2) - Make this an also curvy slider and make it symmetrical with 01:00:018 (1) - fixed
2. 01:06:018 (3) - NC here instead of 01:07:218 (1) - , the combos will be short, but the new rhythm is started here deleted the note in 01:07:218, seems better

• LAGOMORPH

1. 00:07:668 (2,3) - 2 Overlap with the slider, make the slider's turn cleaner to get rid of overlap fixed
2. 00:19:668 (1,2) - These have a different rhythm than these 00:20:118 (1,2,3) -, add note at 00:19:518 - ( 艸) imo, 00:19:668 (1,2) are fit with the rhythm of the music
3. 00:26:568 (2) - Move 1 grid left, overlap fixed
4. 00:44:418 (1,2) - Different spacings for this 2? Is okay but it can be better if the spacing is same. If you want to keep it insane, use a big one orz ;w; I think its already good enough
5. 00:57:918 (1,2) - Try not to hidethe reverse arrow too much, can be unrankable they are visable while test play, also, I found several players to request test-playings and there is no problem in reading them
6. 01:04:518 (5,6,7) - Short slider stream? quite too sudden in my opinion. Is okay, but I prefer this to be stacked instead I think the flow quite weird if they stacked QwQ
7. 01:09:468 (4) - Why up direction? the music goes down at this point. Move the direction to down here fixed
8. 01:21:018 (2) - 3.5 jump? a bit too sudden too. Reduce the distance to 2.5-3.0 to make it easier to notice fixed
9. 01:28:518 (4) - -1 repeat here. Doesn't too fit with the music fixed, changed to a new placement
10. 01:32:118 (4) - Same as before, the slider end is confusing here, hidden by 01:31:518 (2) -. It doesn't stacked and 100% hidden, but it still really confusing to play fixed, changed the placement as well
11. 01:35:118 (2) - Make it symmetry with 01:34:818 (1) - or make a pattern with 01:33:918 (2,3) - to make it look nicer fixed
12. 01:36:318 (2,3,5,6) - Increase the spacing here. Different spacing here can make people hit the notes early orz fixed
13. 01:38:718 (7) - NC fixed
14. 01:39:918 (2) - Starting from this point, i saw many circles that can be used to make a nice pattern. Right now it seemed only scattered and doesn't look good. Make patterns to better your map fixed, changed some placement

...
Uh yeah that's all, SORRY FOR SHORTNESS
Nice Map and Good Luck

Megurine Luka wrote:

I like the cat

Mod from my Queue

[G]

目测木有
不过可以考虑加个静音的sliderslide 不打算了, 感覺不靜音也舒服(´ω`)w

[E]

00:19:818 (6) - ctrl+g 感覺本來的就好了
00:23:418 (2,3) - 试试看 fixed

00:28:218 (2,3) - fixed

01:07:818 (5) - x=352 y-48 fixed
01:28:818 (1) - 形状不好看呢0.0 fixed

[L]

00:05:268 (2) - 和1分开 fixed
00:28:068 (2) - x=280 y=272 fixed
01:04:518 (5,6,7) - 我觉得因为你是在做跳图，所以不如这里放0.4 distance spacing的紧凑三连 fixed
02:00:168 (x) - add a circle fixed
02:15:318 (5) - NC fixed

蛮不错的图，加油