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- Miomio Chii -
Hi, here is my mod ! :D From Queues.
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-General-
- proposal -
Skin isn't integral. For example : :arrow: wiki
Miko's background is 1228*767 :arrow: please change like 1024*768 or 800*600.

-Peace-

New Combo :
00:11:785 - remove NC
00:19:082 - ^
00:21:515 - NC
00:23:947 - remove NC
00:26:785 - NC
00:28:812 (3) - remove NC
00:33:677 - ^
01:01:650 - ^

Audio :
00:28:812 (3) - whistle
00:29:623 (4) - remove whistle
01:06:109 (2) - add finish
01:07:123 (3) - ^
01:25:569 (3) - ^
01:25:569 (3) - ^
01:26:582 (4) - ^

Others :
00:33:576 - i think the two slider's notes are too near.



-finish-
-Serenity-
Audio :
01:25:569 (1) - add finish
01:26:177 (2) - ^
01:26:988 (3) - ^

-finish-
-Solitude-
Audio :
01:25:569 (1) - add finish
01:26:177 (2) - ^

-finish-
-Miko-
Audio :
00:59:825 (7) - add clap
01:26:176 (6) - add finish
01:26:581 (7) - add clap
01:26:987 (8) - add finish

-finish-
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End of this mod.
:D Good luck to you! ♥
Topic Starter
Lanturn
Kert

Kert wrote:

[General]
Timing configuration is inconsistent between diffs
Miko uses additional 2 uninherited sections Guest difficulty, and they don't seem to change anything in the song anyways, I'll leave this up to thoseto fix.

[Solitude]
00:07:731 (2,3) - Tail of slider 2 and head of slider 3 slightly overlap each other. This doesn't happen for any circles/slider. pic - http://puu.sh/2gTFH
You may want to fix this in order to make the map look more clean Slightly moved it around
01:01:143 (6,7) - How about stacking them on the tail of the previous slider? I suggest this because there was similar spacing change right before 00:59:623 (1,2,3) - but with a different frequency of beats I personally don't like stacked notes under tail ends of sliders, and the 1/4 uses the same length as the anti jump earlier. (0.54 and 0.51)
Same problems with the last part as in Miko diff: Just start the spinner from 01:27:596 and end at 01:30:434 The audio from this song is cut from a full version to fit the appropriate TV size length. Unless more start to complain about the spinner being too short then I don't believe it needs a change. The spinner ends at the time the audio begins to fade out and I've personally never thought of extending this. (The reason I did this is because all of the TV Sizes I could find have horrible quality. Try downloading any of the ones in the graveyard)

[Serenity]
01:02:866 - Add a circle here! Because this slightly longer pause between objects is kind of bad I liked this circle, Added
01:11:177 - Same as above Nice as well, Made the slider ahead of it connect.
The same stuff about the last part of the map. See Solitude mod ^

[Peace]
00:52:731 - Add a circle I made a few changes around here to get a slider to end on it, plays much better now.
00:55:772 - ^ Added
01:07:123 (3,1) - The pause between these is pretty awkward.
Use this instead? Brilliant. Loved this!

And the last spinner part again. See above ^

Good job!
Thanks for the mod! I'll keep an eye out for more mods about the spinner issue
Miomio Chii

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, here is my mod ! :D From Queues.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
- proposal -
Skin isn't integral. For example : :arrow: wiki
Miko's background is 1228*767 :arrow: please change like 1024*768 or 800*600.

-Peace-

New Combo :
00:11:785 - remove NC Done. Was originally used to seperate the slower slider speed, but the vocals also start here.
00:19:082 - ^ Going with Moway's mod last night, I decided to leave this as is.
00:21:515 - NC ^
00:23:947 - remove NC I believe removing the NC here would be horrible. The next verse on riya's singing starts here.
00:26:785 - NC ^ still part of this verse
00:28:812 (3) - remove NC
00:33:677 - ^ This NC is important because it starts following a slightly different part of the song.
01:01:650 - ^ Removed.

Audio :
00:28:812 (3) - whistle Not sure how I missed this..
00:29:623 (4) - remove whistle Agreed
01:06:109 (2) - add finish There is one
01:07:123 (3) - ^ Added whistle. A finish is too loud. :o
01:25:569 (3) - ^ There isn't any finish in the background music and I believe it would be a little chaotic in the song to have that many finishes so close together.
01:25:569 (3) - ^ ^
01:26:582 (4) - ^ ^

Others :
00:33:576 - i think the two slider's notes are too near. I follow a different part in this song and I'd like to follow both the vocals and piano for this. If more people take notice to this, then I'll do something about it, but I believe its fine for now.



-finish-
-Serenity-
Audio :
01:25:569 (1) - add finish Same as Peace
01:26:177 (2) - ^
01:26:988 (3) - ^

-finish-
-Solitude-
Audio :
01:25:569 (1) - add finish Same as Peace
01:26:177 (2) - ^

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End of this mod.
:D Good luck to you! ♥
Thanks


Thanks for both the mods :)
those
Please use the red lines I have in my diff; it properly accounts for counting measures and will be evident when you use Nightcore mod.
Topic Starter
Lanturn

those wrote:

Please use the red lines I have in my diff; it properly accounts for counting measures and will be evident when you use Nightcore mod.
Done. I had to reduce all my timing by 1ms after the 2nd timing point. It should be correct now
japan0413
nice song :)

Loooctav
Hi! M4M! (M4M With those)

[Peace]
00:25:568 (3) Because it shapes it to make it better like this? http://puu.sh/2hdTS
00:26:784 (4) Overlap? No easy tiered overlay recommend :3
01:14:014 (3) Why not use this slider to surround the (5) and thus does not touch?

[Serenity]
00:12:392 (3) Ovelap?
00:13:203 (5) ^
00:15:433 (3) ^
00:18:879 (4) ^
01:00:635 (2) It is a relaxed song, I would use a slider without red dots
01:03:879 (2,3,4) Many Overlaps x3

[Solitude]
00:07:731 (2) Finish slider in 00:08:947 sounds better than what I had previously
00:09:150 (3) I'm sure I will find reason :)
  1. Only there one specific thing that I like is that there jumps differently and not even waiting for the New combo
[Miko]
00:37:528 (4,5,6) This is an indefinite break spaces?!

Good Luck :)
Star Psychologic x3
Topic Starter
Lanturn
ThoomyyxD

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hi! M4M! (M4M With those)

[Peace]
00:25:568 (3) Because it shapes it to make it better like this? http://puu.sh/2hdTS I straightened this out a bit. Thanks for noticing how ugly it looked.
00:26:784 (4) Overlap? No easy tiered overlay recommend :3 no where else to place this note, and I believe with the last slider there is enough room to know this note is coming. (tested with default skin and the 300 fades before you have to hit this)
01:14:014 (3) Why not use this slider to surround the (5) and thus does not touch? I changed this around a bit with your idea. thanks.

[Serenity]
00:12:392 (3) Ovelap? I don't believe there is anything wrong with stacked notes in this difficulty. Leaving these as is.
00:13:203 (5) ^
00:15:433 (3) ^
00:18:879 (4) ^
01:00:635 (2) It is a relaxed song, I would use a slider without red dots Good eye. Changed this to a curved slider.
01:03:879 (2,3,4) Many Overlaps x3 As I mentioned with the first ones, I'm going to leave the stacked notes in because I think they're acceptable for this difficulty.

[Solitude]
00:07:731 (2) Finish slider in 00:08:947 sounds better than what I had previously I like hitting the note on each time the violin plays. Leaving as is for now. and same with the next slider.
00:09:150 (3) I'm sure I will find reason :)
  1. Only there one specific thing that I like is that there jumps differently and not even waiting for the New combo

Good Luck :)
Star Psychologic x3

Thanks for the mod :)
moonlightleaf
Hi , from my queue , just my opinion ,
Peace

00:02:258(2) move to 00:02:663

00:03:474(3) move to 00:02:258

00:28:811(1)(2) too close , move to 00:28:609

00:31:852(2)(1) this is hard for new player to play , maybe like : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/654652
Serenity

00:03:880(5) make shape better ,just pefer

00:35:703(2)(3) http://puu.sh/2hYlC

00:43:203(1) end at 00:43:811

00:44:217(2) move to 00:44:014
Solitude

No problem

HP-1

keep the kika the same to other diffs
Miko

HP-1 OD-2
00:36:109(7) end at 00:36:311

keep kika the same to other diffs
i like this music , hope ranked sonn~ :)
Topic Starter
Lanturn
moonlightleaf

moonlightleaf wrote:

Hi , from my queue , just my opinion ,
Peace

00:02:258(2) move to 00:02:663 I liked this. Done

00:03:474(3) move to 00:02:258 ^

00:28:811(1)(2) too close , move to 00:28:609 Moved the (2) back to the suggested spot. Plays a lot better now Thanks!

00:31:852(2)(1) this is hard for new player to play , maybe like : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/654652 I didn't like how this played. Doesn't match up with the music. Thanks for the suggestion though!
Serenity

00:03:880(5) make shape better ,just pefer Looks nice, Tried to make this similar.

00:35:703(2)(3) http://puu.sh/2hYlC I like how you managed to catch the vocals in there as well. Nice :)

00:43:203(1) end at 00:43:811 I didn't like this. The reverse catches the vocals and it ends on a finish so I'm going to leave as is.

00:44:217(2) move to 00:44:014 ^
Solitude

No problem

HP-1 I believe the HP Drain is fine as it matches the Miko difficulty

keep the kika the same to other diffs Will look into this later thanks!

i like this music , hope ranked sonn~ :)

Thanks for the helpful mod and your nice suggestions on the Peace/Serenity difficulties!
ShiauKe
Hi~from my queue

[Serenity]
  1. 00:12:392 (3,4) - clap
  2. 00:15:636 (4) - ^
  3. 00:23:338 (6) - first whistle removed
  4. 00:34:690 (5) - whistle
[Solitude]
  1. 00:59:622 (1,2,3) - try this
  2. 01:23:946 (2) - try this
  3. 00:47:460 (1,3) - whistle front
  4. 00:50:500 (8) - whistle removed
  5. 00:55:365 (6) - ^
  6. 00:58:608 (3) - ^
  7. 01:03:473 (8) - ^
  8. 01:19:689 (10) - ^
[Miko]

  • i very like this diff ,awesome!!
good luck!!
Topic Starter
Lanturn
Shiauke

ShiauKe wrote:

Hi~from my queue

[Serenity]
  1. 00:12:392 (3,4) - clap Good eye
  2. 00:15:636 (4) - ^ Missed this as well somehow oops.
  3. 00:23:338 (6) - first whistle removed Liked
  4. 00:34:690 (5) - whistle
Added
[Solitude]
  1. 00:59:622 (1,2,3) - try this I love my anti jump here, so I'm leaving as is. Thanks for the suggestion though
  2. 01:23:946 (2) - try this I thought I did a decent enough job on this. I'll play around with it some more, but I believe its fine
  3. 00:47:460 (1,3) - whistle front Whistles don't really sound good here. Its still a lead in to when the music starts and I think they sound better left blank.
  4. 00:50:500 (8) - whistle removed I like this whistle. It gives more life to this section
  5. 00:55:365 (6) - ^ ^
  6. 00:58:608 (3) - ^ ^
  7. 01:03:473 (8) - ^ ^
  8. 01:19:689 (10) - ^ I like this whistle as well. trying to remove them from anywhere that isn't a 2/4 really makes the song bland in my opinion
good luck!!

Ty for the mod
DakeDekaane
Hi, M4M :3

[General]
Dem combobursts o3o
Nice mapset, the flow in all diffs is good, just some aesthetics stuff, and some rhythm that I felt wrong (in Solitude)

[Peace]
00:03:880 (1) - Use whistle instead finish
00:11:784 (2) - Put NC for change in speed.
00:36:919 (1) - Try to soften a bit the curve of this, a smooth flow would be good looking.
00:54:554 (4) - Put a whistle in the end of this.
00:55:771 (5) - And remove it here.
00:57:798 (3) - This would look better if it changes of direction every 1/2 beat.
01:03:676 - Maybe a circle here~
01:17:460 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it could sound better if you only put whistles in 2nd and 4th beat.
01:23:946 (1) - Finish, the emphasis here is more strong~
01:25:568 (3) - Finish in the start, as above~

Next are somehow nazi stuff, I think your intention was make blankets, feel free to ignore if I guessed wrong.
00:27:190 (5) - 2nd node: x:44 y:152 | 3rd node: x:84 y:136 | 4th node: x:128 y:152
01:04:487 (1) - Move around x:260 y:200
01:12:595 (1) - Move the middle node a bit to the left for better blanket

[Serenity]
Maybe it's just me, but I felt the Circle Size a bit small, try CS 3 and keep what you like.
00:10:974 - Try something like this, fits better imo and helps to make the speed change a bit easier to play.

00:31:852 - Put a circle and begin (4) in 00:32:055
00:36:514 (4,1,2) - Maybe make this a bit more symmetrical, making (1) totally horizontal.
00:53:135 (5,6) - Make the curves softer, more appealing imo.
01:17:054 (1,2,3) - This looks a bit squeezed imo, maybe use a bit more spacing to avoid this.
01:20:298 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:25:568 (1) - Finish in the end instead the whistle, as I suggested for Peace.

[Solitude]
00:05:907 (1,2,3) - Remove the whistles in the end of the sliders.
00:32:055 (4) - Whistle here and remove it from (5)
00:39:960 - A circle is definitely missing here :c
01:23:946 (2) - Finish in the start
01:25:568 (1) - ^
00:40:973 (4) - Delete (5) and move this to 00:41:176, fitting with vocals.
01:00:230 (4) - Use a circle instead of a slider here, as above, fits very nice for vocals

Nazi stuff below
00:25:568 (1) - Improve the blanket moving the 2nd node to x:312 y:240 and the last to x:252 y:220, don't forget stack 00:26:379 (3), and the correspondent spacing for next objects.

[Miko]
Put some whistles in the beginning of the song,
00:01:245 (1) - In the start
00:02:663 (3) - In the start and end.
00:03:880 (4) - In the end
00:05:096 (3) - In the start
00:05:907 (5) - ^
^Those fits very nice imo.
00:59:419 (6) - Remove the whistle in the reverse.
01:13:203 (2) - Remove the whistle in the reverse.
01:13:608 (3) - Remove the Normal sampleset in the reverse.

That's all from my part, good luck /o/

P.S.: Can I try to make something around 3 stars :3?
Topic Starter
Lanturn
DakeDekaane

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, M4M :3

[General]
Dem combobursts o3o
Nice mapset, the flow in all diffs is good, just some aesthetics stuff, and some rhythm that I felt wrong (in Solitude)

[Peace]
00:03:880 (1) - Use whistle instead finish Sounds nice
00:11:784 (2) - Put NC for change in speed. Had it like that before, then I changed for the vocals, Guess I'll change it back lol
00:36:919 (1) - Try to soften a bit the curve of this, a smooth flow would be good looking. Fiddled around with it. Good stuff
00:54:554 (4) - Put a whistle in the end of this. Lots of my whistles catch the vocals and its pretty silent here. Gonna leave it without the whistle
00:55:771 (5) - And remove it here. Vocals hit here and I believe it sounds good.
00:57:798 (3) - This would look better if it changes of direction every 1/2 beat. Ends up the wrong direction if I do this, but I changed it to match what you said except near the end.
01:03:676 - Maybe a circle here~ There is a lot of 1/1 distances before and after this, so a breather is nice.
01:17:460 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it could sound better if you only put whistles in 2nd and 4th beat.Sounds better yeah.
01:23:946 (1) - Finish, the emphasis here is more strong~ I don't really believe so. the held wo is pretty soft and there isn't any big background noise.
01:25:568 (3) - Finish in the start, as above~ Vocals don't really call for a finish here either

Next are somehow nazi stuff, I think your intention was make blankets, feel free to ignore if I guessed wrong.
00:27:190 (5) - 2nd node: x:44 y:152 | 3rd node: x:84 y:136 | 4th node: x:128 y:152 Very nice thanks. My sliders are horrible
01:04:487 (1) - Move around x:260 y:200 Again, very nice.
01:12:595 (1) - Move the middle node a bit to the left for better blanket I like the current shape of this one as I think the blanket in it is already good. Leaving as is.

[Serenity]
Maybe it's just me, but I felt the Circle Size a bit small, try CS 3 and keep what you like. some notes get really cluttered with the big note size. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/655991 Looks ugly
00:10:974 - Try something like this, fits better imo and helps to make the speed change a bit easier to play. Good idea, sounds better too.

00:31:852 - Put a circle and begin (4) in 00:32:055 This part matches with 00:33:473 (3) so I think I'm going to leave this as is.
00:36:514 (4,1,2) - Maybe make this a bit more symmetrical, making (1) totally horizontal. Fiddled with this so I didn't have to lose my symmetrical part coming up next.
00:53:135 (5,6) - Make the curves softer, more appealing imo. I actually like how they play. It seems like the sharpness is just perfect how it is.
01:17:054 (1,2,3) - This looks a bit squeezed imo, maybe use a bit more spacing to avoid this. I like the way it looks with the current circle size and such. Especially the 2nd set of sliders.
01:20:298 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:25:568 (1) - Finish in the end instead the whistle, as I suggested for Peace. Leaving out as I mentioned earlier.

[Solitude]
00:05:907 (1,2,3) - Remove the whistles in the end of the sliders. Kills the life out of them I believe. Left as is.
00:32:055 (4) - Whistle here and remove it from (5) I'm still following a basic 2/4 set here so I can't really change anything.
00:39:960 - A circle is definitely missing here :c I really like how it plays empty. Adding the note doesn't really appeal to me since I would of done the same if there wasn't a sudden vocal change at 00:43:203
01:23:946 (2) - Finish in the start I don't like the finish at the wo part here. so no change
01:25:568 (1) - ^ I like the whistle here, finish seems a bit too strong
00:40:973 (4) - Delete (5) and move this to 00:41:176, fitting with vocals. liked
01:00:230 (4) - Use a circle instead of a slider here, as above, fits very nice for vocals I'm going to leave this one as is.

Nazi stuff below
00:25:568 (1) - Improve the blanket moving the 2nd node to x:312 y:240 and the last to x:252 y:220, don't forget stack 00:26:379 (3), and the correspondent spacing for next objects. Done

That's all from my part, good luck /o/

P.S.: Can I try to make something around 3 stars :3?


Thanks for the helpful mod!

You can try to make something if you like, but I don't feel there could be anything that would really fit between my Peace and Serenity difficulties. If you find something though then sure. Lemme know
those
Have an update
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: hiyoku no hane tv size.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 755
PreviewTime: 47611
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.05
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 64

[Metadata]
Title:Hiyoku no Hane (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:比翼の羽根 (TV Size)
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Lanturn
Version:Miko
Source:Yosuga no Sora
Tags:riya Visual Novel Eroge Opening those
BeatmapID:229283
BeatmapSetID:74504

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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326,176,14825,2,0,B|401:172|401:172|474:200,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,351,15433,2,0,P|478:317|476:277,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,368,15838,2,0,P|349:376|322:374,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,331,16244,1,2,0:0:0:0:
190,374,16446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
142,311,16649,2,0,P|134:272|135:237,1,75
207,155,17055,2,0,P|215:194|214:229,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,237,17460,6,0,P|47:222|9:179,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,74,18068,2,0,P|84:115|82:149,1,75
159,88,18473,2,0,P|157:47|159:13,2,75,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,167,19082,2,0,B|200:160|200:160|276:175|312:160,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,238,19690,2,0,B|281:252|211:243|211:243|189:275,1,150
113,252,20298,1,2,0:0:0:0:
90,327,20501,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,351,20703,6,0,B|239:361|239:361|297:343|335:352,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,348,21311,2,0,P|392:311|392:273,1,75
469,347,21717,2,0,P|466:310|467:263,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,200,22122,1,8,0:0:0:0:
434,155,22325,2,0,P|368:197|295:194,1,150,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
296,273,22933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,287,23136,2,0,B|182:296|144:296,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,215,23541,2,0,B|148:206|110:206,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,303,23946,6,0,P|25:230|45:161,1,150,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,206,24554,2,0,B|143:223|143:223|195:209|263:213,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,287,25162,2,0,P|335:251|334:213,1,75,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,283,25567,2,0,B|446:262|446:262|473:208|451:149,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,77,26175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,130,26378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,52,26581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
303,106,26783,2,0,L|228:109,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,46,27189,6,0,L|186:42,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,108,27594,1,2,0:0:0:0:
186,176,27797,2,0,B|111:172|111:172|38:200,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,351,28405,2,0,P|34:317|36:277,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,368,28811,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,303,29014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,366,29217,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,308,29419,2,0,B|299:313|299:313|367:295|428:299,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,319,30028,2,0,L|498:238,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
445,79,30433,6,0,P|415:156|421:222,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,239,31041,2,0,P|304:246|268:244,1,75
195,218,31446,2,0,L|115:212,2,75,8|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,296,32055,2,0,B|188:320|145:335|145:335|98:326|56:335,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
2,291,32663,2,0,B|24:260|24:260|5:174|27:145,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,74,33271,1,0,1:0:0:0:
101,129,33473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,53,33676,6,0,P|184:38|274:48,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,73,34284,2,0,L|350:35,2,37.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,132,34690,1,0,1:0:0:0:
368,150,34892,2,0,L|442:138,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,227,35298,2,0,L|276:215,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,281,35703,2,0,P|192:256|198:208,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,145,36109,2,0,P|206:124|136:133,1,112.5
129,142,36514,2,0,P|92:143|54:141,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,211,36919,5,8,0:0:0:0:
94,223,37122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
46,286,37325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
114,324,37528,2,0,P|219:313|284:322,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,293,38136,1,0,1:0:0:0:
341,318,38339,2,0,P|327:237|343:172,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,96,38946,2,0,P|426:123|421:171,1,75,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
357,54,39352,2,0,P|304:50|282:53,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,123,39757,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,122,39960,1,0,1:0:0:0:
89,131,40163,6,0,P|92:90|92:53,2,75,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
36,190,40771,2,0,B|60:220|60:220|53:275|64:336,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,219,41379,1,0,1:0:0:0:
137,358,41582,2,0,B|211:367|211:367|269:355|299:357,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,279,42190,2,0,P|366:326|364:354,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,277,42595,2,0,P|277:230|279:202,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
203,268,43203,6,0,B|166:256|166:256|55:274,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,184,43811,2,0,L|39:196,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,123,44217,2,0,L|237:135,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,149,44622,1,0,1:0:0:0:
367,247,44825,2,0,P|394:202|382:109,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,149,45433,1,0,1:0:0:0:
286,222,45636,2,0,B|273:258|273:258|305:365,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,352,46244,2,0,P|181:349|140:354,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,351,47460,5,2,0:0:0:0:
78,323,47663,2,0,L|44:341,2,37.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
104,248,48068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
178,275,48271,6,0,B|252:308|331:275,1,150,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
401,291,48879,2,0,L|407:211,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,183,49284,1,10,0:0:0:0:
414,135,49487,1,0,1:0:0:0:
344,171,49689,2,0,B|310:151|310:151|304:83|339:48,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,231,50298,1,0,1:0:0:0:
229,182,50500,2,0,P|157:158|79:169,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,302,51108,2,0,P|35:275|35:228,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,246,51514,6,0,B|144:265|144:265|240:258|275:275,1,150,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
183,347,52122,2,0,P|217:349|258:347,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,345,52527,1,10,0:0:0:0:
366,272,52730,1,0,1:0:0:0:
412,332,52933,1,2,0:0:0:0:
442,259,53135,2,0,P|444:218|444:168,2,75,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
366,272,53743,2,0,P|289:277|207:269,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,265,54352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
66,140,54554,6,0,P|42:208|60:282,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,350,55162,1,0,1:0:0:0:
99,355,55365,2,0,B|137:347|137:347|265:363,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,316,55973,1,0,1:0:0:0:
242,278,56176,6,0,L|154:267,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,184,56581,2,0,L|141:194,1,75,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
219,200,56987,2,0,P|298:156|359:171,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,203,57595,1,0,1:0:0:0:
421,124,57798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,86,58000,2,0,B|294:72|241:91|241:91|203:83,1,150,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
127,67,58608,1,2,0:0:0:0:
46,155,58811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,145,59014,1,10,0:0:0:0:
205,233,59216,1,0,1:0:0:0:
126,223,59419,6,0,L|89:230,2,37.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,317,59825,2,0,L|133:301,1,75,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
208,322,60230,2,2,B|281:339|281:339|331:309|364:313,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,323,60838,2,0,P|439:283|433:245,1,75,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
495,200,61243,6,0,B|432:160|432:160|337:163,1,150,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
309,226,61852,2,0,L|232:228,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,229,62257,2,0,P|102:230|69:227,1,75,10|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
57,152,62662,2,0,B|90:138|90:138|150:154|209:145,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,68,63270,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,139,63473,2,0,P|284:223|327:278,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,233,64081,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,285,64284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,355,64487,6,0,B|373:369|373:369|306:345|256:368,1,150,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
186,363,65095,2,0,B|153:352|131:311,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,344,65500,1,10,0:0:0:0:
1,289,65703,1,0,1:0:0:0:
70,251,65906,1,2,0:0:0:0:
19,190,66108,2,0,P|17:139|21:109,2,75,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
97,178,66716,2,0,P|201:168|270:171,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,170,67325,1,0,1:0:0:0:
406,282,67527,6,0,P|421:227|397:140,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,263,68135,2,0,L|286:268,3,37.5,0|0|2|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,269,68541,2,0,P|234:268|199:263,1,75,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,292,68946,2,0,P|112:251|115:203,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,39,69352,6,0,P|174:113|184:187,1,150,12|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
199,263,69960,2,0,P|268:288|343:272,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,331,70568,1,0,1:0:0:0:
443,270,70770,2,0,B|452:234|452:234|432:131|452:108,1,150,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,48,71379,2,0,L|365:123,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,191,71784,2,0,L|358:213,2,37.5,0|0|10,1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,156,72189,2,0,P|216:147|154:149,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,232,72595,6,0,P|101:249|188:224,1,150,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
223,314,73203,2,0,L|211:350,2,37.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,335,73608,2,0,L|316:372,2,37.5,2|0|0,1:2|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
401,282,74014,6,0,P|423:211|401:128,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,63,74622,2,0,P|392:56|352:52,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,117,75027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,62,75230,1,10,0:0:0:0:
199,117,75433,2,0,L|118:108,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,222,75838,2,0,P|49:183|56:148,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,216,76243,2,0,P|125:255|118:290,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,353,76649,1,0,1:0:0:0:
209,287,76852,2,0,L|211:250,2,37.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
252,352,77257,1,0,1:0:0:0:
330,353,77460,6,0,P|372:356|404:354,2,75,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
483,352,78068,2,0,B|491:314|473:243|473:243|488:194,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,247,78676,2,0,P|394:216|410:177,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,226,79081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,152,79284,1,2,0:0:0:0:
235,214,79487,1,0,1:0:0:0:
207,140,79689,2,0,P|124:117|56:124,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,228,80298,2,0,P|56:208|85:198,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,290,80703,6,0,P|162:270|133:260,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,316,81108,1,0,1:0:0:0:
120,382,81311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
198,372,81514,2,0,P|243:364|290:374,1,75,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,376,81919,2,0,P|356:327|350:291,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,214,82325,2,0,P|270:263|274:289,2,75,12|2|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
194,283,82933,2,0,P|124:293|44:280,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
7,211,83541,1,0,1:0:0:0:
62,155,83743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,185,83946,6,0,P|218:197|280:182,1,150,12|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
357,165,84554,2,0,B|394:154|432:151|432:151|434:113|448:80,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
503,178,85162,1,0,1:0:0:0:
443,229,85365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
465,304,85568,2,0,P|418:342|323:338,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,262,86176,2,0,P|251:299|252:338,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,264,86581,2,0,P|174:300|173:339,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,222,86987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87189,12,0,88811,0:0:0:0:

Done. I noticed 00:26:783 (8,2) - wasn't stacked properly. Not sure if this is intentional or not


Also: Added Dekaane's difficulty, so make sure to add his name to your tags when you get the chance. I did it already but I'm not sure if you've made any changes since then.
Kuria
lol i dunno why i'm here, but well

found this from AiBAT

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

[General]
Background
akira.jpg is 1228x767, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

i still dunno if there's rule is said that the max size is that 1024 x 768 or not, imo just make it 1024x768 or lower just in case if that's wd background actually probihited

[All .osu Files]
Combo Colours
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Miko] :
Combo1 : 206,83,114
Combo2 : 160,148,235
Combo3 : 240,206,225

- [Peace] :
Combo1 : 52,177,58
Combo2 : 0,232,232
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 179,64,64

- [Serenity] :
Combo1 : 52,177,58
Combo2 : 0,232,232
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 179,64,64

- [Solitude] :
Combo1 : 52,177,58
Combo2 : 0,232,232
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 179,64,64

The miko diff seems have a different combo color than the others, is it intentional?
imo just make it same to make them consistent is better^^

General and Metadata

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Miko] : 755
- [Peace] : 3000
- [Serenity] : 3000
- [Solitude] : 3000

i guess it's better to make the leadin same for all diff :)

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Miko] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:271, ends on 01:17:460

- [Peace] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:271, ends on 01:01:218
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:01:242, ends on 01:12:569
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:594, ends on 01:17:459

- [Serenity] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:271, ends on 01:01:218
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:01:243, ends on 01:12:570
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:595, ends on 01:17:460

- [Solitude] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:271, ends on 01:01:218
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:01:243, ends on 01:12:570
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:595, ends on 01:17:460

same here, well, i don't really mind it though since it was a GD but i think it's better to make the general settings same for each diff ^^

[Peace]
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:01:218 - snap to 01:01:243
01:12:569 - snap to 01:12:595

[Serenity]
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:01:218 - snap to 01:01:193
01:12:570 - snap to 01:12:595

[Solitude]
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:01:218 - snap to 01:01:243
01:12:570 - snap to 01:12:595

and this is from myself:

General:
  1. raise the volume a bit? around 10-20%, i feel some parts of the mapset (especially the intro - verse) have a bit low volume there, plus, you're not using any loud hitsound on that part
Peace:
  1. 00:16:649 (1,2) - make the NC start from 00:17:460 (2) - instead? to make it plays according to downbeat
  2. 00:28:406 (6,1) - make them blanked? seems a bit weird imo since it's kinda blanked but it was not lol
  3. 00:40:163 (1) - rotate this clockwise a bit? i feel like the flow between 00:38:338 (3,1) - are kinda cutted that way
  4. 00:53:135 (2) - add finish here both on the slider's top and end? imo it's really good thing to add it there to make some emphasize to the vocal's voice there
  5. 00:54:554 (4) - same as above, but only on the topslider
  6. 00:59:622 (1,2,3) - add the finish sound too here, with the same soundpattern that i suggest above :3
  7. 01:06:108 (2,3,4) - same as above
  8. 01:22:325 (5,1) - make their position to be like this instead? i feel that the flow is kinda cutted if you make that (6) on top after 01:21:919 (4) - ,with that slider's direction
    don't forget to readjust the lattern pattern if you agree with me
  9. 01:25:568 (3) - finish on slidertop?
  10. 01:26:581 (4) - same as above, since you make the finish sound on the slidertop with a lower volume, i think it can form a great "splash" finish soundpattern lol
Serenity:
  1. use CS3 here? imo using the smaller CS than 3 for a normal-easier diff is a bit hard for a player to play, even if the beatpattern itself is so easy, because imo people get more struggle with reading the circle than following the beat
  2. 00:16:649 (1) - make it like this instead? imo the flow between 00:16:244 (5,1) - is a bit cutted if you make it that way
  3. 00:18:473 (3,4) - seems not blanked neatly here imo? is it intentional? just make this pattern perfectly blanked if you not intend it xD
  4. 00:19:892 (5,6) - i prefer to make this beatpattern to be like this instead, because imo it's follows the instrument more consistently and easy to read too :3
  5. 00:53:135 (5,6,7,8) - same as my suggestion on easiest diff about adding the finish sound here, imo it plays greatly with that the vocal's voice here, finish on 00:53:135 (5) - topslider, 00:53:541 (6) - endslider, and 00:54:554 (8) - topslider
  6. 00:59:622 (1) - finish too on the endslider?
  7. 01:05:500 (1,2,3) - same suggestion as above, with the same soundpattern
  8. 01:25:568 (1,3) - same as above? with (1) on the topslider
Solitude:
seems this one is the hardest diff lol
  1. 00:09:353 (3) - instead of making it symmetry with 00:07:731 (2) - , why you not make this with custom pattern like 00:05:907 (1) - instead? imo make this symmetry after that custom pattern on 00:05:907 (1,2) - is a bit off
  2. 00:35:095 (5,1) - this spacing here seems a bit longer than before, why not make it consistent with the previous pattern spacing here? 00:34:284 (2,3,4,5) - (seems you wanna form a jump spacing here, but imo this is a bit ambiguous since the spacing is not far enough for jump spacing), you can make the spacing on 00:34:690 (3,4) - the same as that (5,1) too if you want :D
  3. 00:52:933 (1,2,3,4) - same suggestion about adding finish here :D
  4. 00:59:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as above
  5. 01:03:271 (7,8) - seems not blanked perfectly yet imo, just move the slider up left a bit to fix it
  6. 01:05:703 (6) - make this middlepoin goes to left instead right? better flow from 01:05:095 (3,4,5,6,1) - if you make it like that imo
  7. 01:06:108 (1,2,3,4) - same seggestion about finish sound, just make it like 01:09:352 (1,2,4) - xD
  8. 01:25:568 (1) - finish on the topslider
  9. 01:26:176 (2) - same as above, but on the endslider
Miko:
wow this pattern structure
  1. HP/OD 6 for this diff, since i think this is supposed to be the hard diff i think OD8 is a bit too hard for this diff (yeah, the solitude already using high HP/OD, so i guess one of them should have the lower HP/OD)
    i still can't figured which one between this diff and solitude is the hardest one, so just take this into your consideration
  2. 00:41:582 (4) - move this into right a bit? i feel that the flow between 00:41:379 (3,4) - is a bit cutted since you put the (5) slider with that direction, moving it to the right can form a bit more flow imo, something like this
    you can try to rotate that slider clockwise a bit though instead moving it (well if you still have more space on the lower part xD)
  3. 00:53:135 (6,7,8,1) - same suggestion for this part about the finish sound, imo put it on 00:53:135 (6,7) - topslider can form a better soundpattern since it makes some emphasize to vocal
  4. 00:59:419 (1,3) - same as above, 00:59:419 (1) - endslider and 01:00:230 (3) - topslider
  5. 01:06:108 (6,7) - same as above
  6. 01:09:960 (2) - ^
  7. 01:13:203 (2) - ^
  8. 01:26:987 (8) - ^
well, i think just that, sorry if it was a bit messy >_<
good luck!

edit: here's a star for you /o__o/
Topic Starter
Lanturn

Kuria wrote:

lol i dunno why i'm here, but well

found this from AiBAT

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

[General]
Background
akira.jpg is 1228x767, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768. I'm not 100% sure if the size is accepted, but both guest difficulties use the same size now.

i still dunno if there's rule is said that the max size is that 1024 x 768 or not, imo just make it 1024x768 or lower just in case if that's wd background actually probihited

[All .osu Files]
Combo Colours
Inconsistency in combo colours: Both guest difficulties use the different combo colors as well. Not sure if this isn't allowed either X_X

- [Miko] :
Combo1 : 206,83,114
Combo2 : 160,148,235
Combo3 : 240,206,225

- [Peace] :
Combo1 : 52,177,58
Combo2 : 0,232,232
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 179,64,64

- [Serenity] :
Combo1 : 52,177,58
Combo2 : 0,232,232
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 179,64,64

- [Solitude] :
Combo1 : 52,177,58
Combo2 : 0,232,232
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 179,64,64

The miko diff seems have a different combo color than the others, is it intentional?
imo just make it same to make them consistent is better^^

General and Metadata

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn: Fixed this a little bit ago. I adjusted my difficulties to match Miko
- [Miko] : 755
- [Peace] : 3000
- [Serenity] : 3000
- [Solitude] : 3000

i guess it's better to make the leadin same for all diff :)

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Miko] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:271, ends on 01:17:460 Guest diff, so it should be fine.

- [Peace] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:271, ends on 01:01:218
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:01:242, ends on 01:12:569 Good eye, thanks
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:594, ends on 01:17:459 ^

- [Serenity] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:271, ends on 01:01:218
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:01:243, ends on 01:12:570
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:595, ends on 01:17:460

- [Solitude] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:271, ends on 01:01:218
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:01:243, ends on 01:12:570
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:595, ends on 01:17:460

same here, well, i don't really mind it though since it was a GD but i think it's better to make the general settings same for each diff ^^

[Peace]
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:01:218 - snap to 01:01:243 Kiai is snapped to 1/16th and the same goes with the below. Me just abusing fountains.
01:12:569 - snap to 01:12:595

[Serenity]
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:01:218 - snap to 01:01:193
01:12:570 - snap to 01:12:595

[Solitude]
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:01:218 - snap to 01:01:243
01:12:570 - snap to 01:12:595

and this is from myself:

General:
  1. raise the volume a bit? around 10-20%, i feel some parts of the mapset (especially the intro - verse) have a bit low volume there, plus, you're not using any loud hitsound on that part Yeah, I'll raise the volume of everything a bit. thanks :)
Peace:
  1. 00:16:649 (1,2) - make the NC start from 00:17:460 (2) - instead? to make it plays according to downbeat I keep swapping back and forth between these.. so I'm just going to leave as is.
  2. 00:28:406 (6,1) - make them blanked? seems a bit weird imo since it's kinda blanked but it was not lol Done, good eye!
  3. 00:40:163 (1) - rotate this clockwise a bit? i feel like the flow between 00:38:338 (3,1) - are kinda cutted that way Looks better thanks!
  4. 00:53:135 (2) - add finish here both on the slider's top and end? imo it's really good thing to add it there to make some emphasize to the vocal's voice there Its a good idea, but I really don't like having finishes until after 01:01:243
  5. 00:54:554 (4) - same as above, but only on the topslider ^
  6. 00:59:622 (1,2,3) - add the finish sound too here, with the same soundpattern that i suggest above :3 ^
  7. 01:06:108 (2,3,4) - same as above I think its a bit to early to start the finishes here.
  8. 01:22:325 (5,1) - make their position to be like this instead? i feel that the flow is kinda cutted if you make that (6) on top after 01:21:919 (4) - ,with that slider's direction
    don't forget to readjust the lattern pattern if you agree with me
  9. 01:25:568 (3) - finish on slidertop? I think its a bit much to add anymore finishes at this point. The one finish I added at 01:26:581 can be heard well in the background so I added it, there really isn't anything else suggesting I should use them though in the music.
  10. 01:26:581 (4) - same as above, since you make the finish sound on the slidertop with a lower volume, i think it can form a great "splash" finish soundpattern lol ^
Serenity:
  1. use CS3 here? imo using the smaller CS than 3 for a normal-easier diff is a bit hard for a player to play, even if the beatpattern itself is so easy, because imo people get more struggle with reading the circle than following the beat With the new difficulty I just added. I don't believe this is neccesary anymore. CS3 also makes my sliders near the end very ugly.
  2. 00:16:649 (1) - make it like this instead? imo the flow between 00:16:244 (5,1) - is a bit cutted if you make it that way Loved this. Very nice!
  3. 00:18:473 (3,4) - seems not blanked neatly here imo? is it intentional? just make this pattern perfectly blanked if you not intend it xD No.. Just being sloppy. Thanks for catching this. Should be better now hopefully!
  4. 00:19:892 (5,6) - i prefer to make this beatpattern to be like this instead, because imo it's follows the instrument more consistently and easy to read too :3 00:20:095 is an empty note so the 6 really wouldn't sound good there. I think its fine how it is.
  5. 00:53:135 (5,6,7,8) - same as my suggestion on easiest diff about adding the finish sound here, imo it plays greatly with that the vocal's voice here, finish on 00:53:135 (5) - topslider, 00:53:541 (6) - endslider, and 00:54:554 (8) - topslider
  6. 00:59:622 (1) - finish too on the endslider?
  7. 01:05:500 (1,2,3) - same suggestion as above, with the same soundpattern
  8. 01:25:568 (1,3) - same as above? with (1) on the topslider Didn't like the extra finishes as with my Peace difficulty. Thanks for the suggestions though.
Solitude:
seems this one is the hardest diff lol This diff just has some bigger jumps, its overall the same difficulty though.
  1. 00:09:353 (3) - instead of making it symmetry with 00:07:731 (2) - , why you not make this with custom pattern like 00:05:907 (1) - instead? imo make this symmetry after that custom pattern on 00:05:907 (1,2) - is a bit off I agree, someone suggested awhile ago to use symmetry here but I do agree the custom pattern works better.
  2. 00:35:095 (5,1) - this spacing here seems a bit longer than before, why not make it consistent with the previous pattern spacing here? 00:34:284 (2,3,4,5) - (seems you wanna form a jump spacing here, but imo this is a bit ambiguous since the spacing is not far enough for jump spacing), you can make the spacing on 00:34:690 (3,4) - the same as that (5,1) too if you want :D The next section uses 1.5 and I was trying to stack notes 00:35:095 (5,3,3) -
  3. 00:52:933 (1,2,3,4) - same suggestion about adding finish here :D Didn't add, reason is in the Peace/Serenity diffs
  4. 00:59:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as above ^
  5. 01:03:271 (7,8) - seems not blanked perfectly yet imo, just move the slider up left a bit to fix it Done
  6. 01:05:703 (6) - make this middlepoin goes to left instead right? better flow from 01:05:095 (3,4,5,6,1) - if you make it like that imo Sure, looks nice
  7. 01:06:108 (1,2,3,4) - same seggestion about finish sound, just make it like 01:09:352 (1,2,4) - xD
  8. 01:25:568 (1) - finish on the topslider
  9. 01:26:176 (2) - same as above, but on the endslider For the reasons stated in my other diffs.. I didn't add.
well, i think just that, sorry if it was a bit messy >_<
good luck!
Thanks for the helpful mod!
Andrea
~General~
  1. The files akira.jpg and sorabg.jpg are 1228x767, please make sure to resize them correctly.
  2. Increase the Audio Lead-In to 2 seconds, it's much better.
  3. Disable the Letterbox during breaks since you're not actually using it right now.
~Peace~
  1. 00:27:190 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
  2. 00:28:811 (1) - Remove this new combo afterwards, since you won't need it.
  3. 00:45:028 (1) - I can hear loud song on this spinner end, please make sure to fix your green line to silence it like you wish.
  4. 01:04:081 (5,1) - New combo should go on (5) and not on (1), since the new section actually begins there.
~Loneliness~
  1. Reduce AR by 1 tick, it feels too high right now for this kind of difficulty.
  1. 00:05:501 (3) - Add a whistle at the begin of this slider to emphasize with the music background.
  2. 00:45:636 (5) - The end of this slider sounds a bit too loud to me, try to reduce the volume a bit.
  3. 01:26:581 (2,3) - These circles feels too loud at the end of the song, try to reduce the volume a bit.
~Serenity~
  1. 00:03:880 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
  2. 00:53:135 (5,6) - Try to avoid overlapping these two sliders together, it doesn't look so good to me.
  3. 01:05:500 (1) - The finish hitsound on this slider repeat feels too powerful for this part of the song, even if you reduce the volume, I suggest you to add a whistle instead with the same volume of before.
  4. 01:18:068 (2,3) - This blanket could be improved much more, I'm sure of it.
~Solitude~
  1. 00:05:907 (1,2,3) - These sliders looks really ugly to me, why don't you try a different shape? I'm sure you can make them much better than this.
  2. 00:43:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This sudden change of spacing might be hard to read at first sight for players. Why don't you just space it normally like the rest of the difficulty? I'm pretty sure it would play and be much better.
  3. 00:59:622 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, another sudden spacing change that doesn't really make much sense and it's also hard to read, change it please to make it similiar to the rest of the difficulty.
  4. 01:02:460 (3,4,5,6) - I know you spaced them like this for symmetry, but it looks really bad. Move them near to the center so they are all of them spaced equally, looks and play much better.
  5. 01:06:108 (1,2) - This sudden spacing change doesn't play so good imo, space it normally please.
  6. 01:13:203 (2,3) - Same as above, they look like forced jumps and they don't play really good.
  7. 01:19:689 (10,1) - New combo should go on (10) and not on (1), since the new stanza and music changes there.
~Miko~
  1. Reduce OD by 1 tick at least, it feels too high compared to the rest of the other settings for this difficulty and doesn't play so good in this difficulty.
  1. 00:01:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part feels really empty without hitsounds, what about adding some whistles there? They would fit perfectly.
  2. 00:04:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same here as above, for the same reason.
  3. 00:26:783 (8) - Slider end is unsnapped, please make sure to resnap it correctly.
  4. 00:28:405 (4) - Same as above, please be careful with this.
  5. 00:40:771 (2,3,4) - This jump doesn't really flow well, try to make it this way instead, it's much better.
  6. 00:58:000 (6,7,8,9,10) - The spacing of this pattern feels really random and doesn't make much sense to me, try to place them like this.
  7. 01:20:703 (1) - Add a whistle on slider begin, it feels like you're missing it here.
Topic Starter
Lanturn
Andrea

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. The files akira.jpg and sorabg.jpg are 1228x767, please make sure to resize them correctly. I'll let the guests know.
  2. Increase the Audio Lead-In to 2 seconds, it's much better. The reason why its 755 is so the first note hits 2 seconds exactly after the map loads. I believe this is fine.
  3. Disable the Letterbox during breaks since you're not actually using it right now. Sure, done.
~Peace~
  1. 00:27:190 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change. Sure, it doesn't quite fit with the vocals, but I understand.
  2. 00:28:811 (1) - Remove this new combo afterwards, since you won't need it.
  3. 00:45:028 (1) - I can hear loud song on this spinner end, please make sure to fix your green line to silence it like you wish. Thanks, there was some issues when I added the timing points. Must of missed this somehow.
  4. 01:04:081 (5,1) - New combo should go on (5) and not on (1), since the new section actually begins there. Done
~Serenity~
  1. 00:03:880 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change. Done
  2. 00:53:135 (5,6) - Try to avoid overlapping these two sliders together, it doesn't look so good to me. Changed around a bit, 2nd person to say something about this.
  3. 01:05:500 (1) - The finish hitsound on this slider repeat feels too powerful for this part of the song, even if you reduce the volume, I suggest you to add a whistle instead with the same volume of before. Lowered it by 10, I must of added an extra 10 in somewhere because my easy uses 45 instead of 55.
  4. 01:18:068 (2,3) - This blanket could be improved much more, I'm sure of it. Played around with it. Should be better.
~Solitude~
  1. 00:05:907 (1,2,3) - These sliders looks really ugly to me, why don't you try a different shape? I'm sure you can make them much better than this. The only one I really don't like is the (3) which I've been playing around with. Made some slight changes to this
  2. 00:43:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This sudden change of spacing might be hard to read at first sight for players. Why don't you just space it normally like the rest of the difficulty? I'm pretty sure it would play and be much better. Done. I didn't even think of this
  3. 00:59:622 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, another sudden spacing change that doesn't really make much sense and it's also hard to read, change it please to make it similiar to the rest of the difficulty. These anti-jumps are intentional and I really like them. I personally don't think its hard to read so I won't make any changes for now. You are the 3rd or 4th person to comment on these though :(
  4. 01:02:460 (3,4,5,6) - I know you spaced them like this for symmetry, but it looks really bad. Move them near to the center so they are all of them spaced equally, looks and play much better. Edited this around. Didn't realize 4,5 were so spaced so wide from each other.
  5. 01:06:108 (1,2) - This sudden spacing change doesn't play so good imo, space it normally please. I changed this a bit to match your suggestion.
  6. 01:13:203 (2,3) - Same as above, they look like forced jumps and they don't play really good. I personally like this jump and I don't believe it feels too forced since it follows the vocals. It also sets up for 01:13:811 (3) which doesn't follow the vocals but the same pattern so its easier to read. I'll keep my eye out for more complaints on this though.
  7. 01:19:689 (10,1) - New combo should go on (10) and not on (1), since the new stanza and music changes there. I'm following the vocals for this section on NC and I think its fine how it is. It matches up with the next combo this way and looks nicer.

Thanks for the mod!

To DakeDekaane / those: Check your BG images if possible to resize them to 16:9 (1366x768) and the small updates I put on your maps was just to disable the letterboxing.
DakeDekaane

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. The files akira.jpg and sorabg.jpg are 1228x767, please make sure to resize them correctly. /*If I resize to 4:3 it would look cropped in widescreen resolutions (and obviously ugly) and for 16:9, Sora in my BG will be cut in standard resolutions x( (Can't find a large collection of decent backgrounds for Yosuga no Sora, I think you may know why)
~Loneliness~
  1. Reduce AR by 1 tick, it feels too high right now for this kind of difficulty. /*Lanturn already mentioned me this, but I really like how it plays with AR5, if more people keeps saying to reduce the AR here, I'll do it then.
  1. 00:05:501 (3) - Add a whistle at the begin of this slider to emphasize with the music background. /*Ok
  2. 00:45:636 (5) - The end of this slider sounds a bit too loud to me, try to reduce the volume a bit. /*I think the volume is fine as there's a soft hitnormal already lowered in volume.
  3. 01:26:581 (2,3) - These circles feels too loud at the end of the song, try to reduce the volume a bit. /*Reduced for these.
Thanks~

Update here /o/ http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=CgrMFXBE
Mikkuri
~random from #modreqs~ :D
*hitsound mod only, you can ignore this mod if useless*

[General]
change combo color to same as all diff
In [Miko] diff change kiai time as same as other diff please

[Peace]
why not try to add normal-sampleset like [Loneliness] as clap?
  1. 00:30:433 (1) - remove whistle head
  2. 00:59:622 (1) - change whistle to finish at tail
[Loneliness]
  1. 00:20:501 (1) - add clap
  2. 00:21:311 (3) - add clap tail
  3. 00:22:325 (1) - add clap head
  4. 00:35:703 (1) - add normal-sampleset head
  5. 00:59:622 (1) - add finish head & tail
  6. 01:05:906 (1) - remove whistle
  7. 01:09:352 (2) - add normal-sampleset tail
  8. 01:15:635 (5) - remove normal-sampleset tail
[Serenity]
change whistle to normal-sampleset as clap as same as other diff Example: 00:37:325 (2) - change whistle to normal-sampleset at head
  1. 00:05:501 (2) - change finish to whistle at tail
  2. 00:11:582 (2) - remove whistle head
  3. 00:26:987 (1) - remove whistle at reverse
  4. 00:28:406 (3) - add whistle tail
  5. 00:31:041 (2) - remove whistle head & tail
  6. 00:33:473 (3) - remove whistle head
  7. 00:35:298 (1) - remove whistle
  8. 00:50:906 (1) - add whistle tail
  9. 00:51:514 (2) - remove whistle head
  10. 00:52:122 (3) - ^
  11. 00:52:933 (4) - remove whistle
  12. 00:53:541 (6) - add whistle head
  13. 00:54:149 (7) - remove whistle
  14. 00:54:554 (8) - remove whistle head
  15. 00:57:798 (5) - remove whistle tail
  16. 00:59:622 (1) - change whistle to finish at tail
  17. 01:04:284 (4) - remove whistle tail
  18. 01:14:014 (3) - ^
  19. 01:15:433 (4) - add whistle
  20. 01:15:635 (5) - remove whistle head
  21. 01:25:162 (3) - add whistle
[Solitude]
same as [Serenity] change whistle to normal-sampleset as clap
  1. 00:09:353 (3) - add clap tail
  2. 00:10:974 (1) - add clap
  3. 00:36:919 (1) - add whistle or finish at head
  4. 00:39:149 (7) - remove whistle head & tail
  5. 00:41:176 (4) - remove whistle head
  6. 00:42:392 (3) - remove whistle head & tail
  7. 00:43:203 (1) - add finish head
  8. 00:50:500 (8) - remove whistle tail
  9. 00:52:933 (1) - remove whistle head
  10. 00:53:338 (2) - remove whistle
  11. 00:55:771 (1) - ^
  12. 00:57:392 (6) - add whistle tail
  13. 01:02:662 (4) - remove whistle
  14. 01:03:068 (6) - ^
  15. 01:04:284 (10) - ^
  16. 01:09:352 (1) - add whistle tail
  17. 01:17:054 (1) - add whistle head
  18. 01:20:703 (2) - remove whistle
  19. 01:21:514 (5) - remove whistle head
  20. 01:23:946 (2) - ^
[Miko]
  1. 00:37:325 (3) - change whistle to normal-sampleset
  2. 00:38:339 (6) - remove clap tail
  3. 00:38:946 (7) - change whistle to normal-sampleset at head & remove normal-sampleset tail
  4. 00:43:811 (2) - change whistle to finish at head
  5. 00:43:203 (1) - remove clap tail
  6. 00:47:460 (1) - change whistle to normal-sampleset sound better, fit the song
  7. 00:48:271 (1) - add clap head
  8. 00:51:108 (8) - add whistle tail
  9. 00:54:554 (1) - ^
  10. 00:57:798 (5) - add whistle
  11. 00:59:419 (1) - add clap tail
  12. 01:00:230 (3) - remove wihstle-sliderslide
  13. 01:00:838 (4) - change clap to whistle at tail
  14. 01:01:243 (1) - add clap head
  15. 01:04:284 (8) - add whistle
  16. 01:07:527 (1) - add whistle tail
  17. 01:08:946 (4) - ^
  18. 01:12:595 (1) - add clap head
  19. 01:13:608 (3) - add clap head
  20. 01:16:852 (9) - add normal-sampleset at reverse, fit the song imo
  21. 01:17:460 (1) - add whistle at reverse
  22. 01:20:298 (8) - add whistle tail
  23. 01:20:703 (1) - ^
  24. 01:23:743 (9) - add whistle
  25. 01:25:365 (4) - ^
  26. 01:25:568 (5) - add clap head & normal-sampleset at tail
  27. 01:26:581 (7) - ^
That's all :D
Topic Starter
Lanturn
0OoMickeyoO0

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

~random from #modreqs~ :D
*hitsound mod only, you can ignore this mod if useless*

[General]
change combo color to same as all diff Guests wanted to use different combo colors. Should be alright
In [Miko] diff change kiai time as same as other diff please Guest difficulty, so its fine.

[Peace]
why not try to add normal-sampleset like [Loneliness] as clap? Because there isn't enough hits to add the clap and it sounds strange. I'm actually probably going to remove the claps from both of the later difficulties as they sound strange in my map that follows the vocals a bit too much.
  1. 00:30:433 (1) - remove whistle head Done. Sounds better thanks!
  2. 00:59:622 (1) - change whistle to finish at tail Bit too sudden and doesn't give off enough power like 01:00:635 (2) - does
[Serenity]
change whistle to normal-sampleset as clap as same as other diff Example: 00:37:325 (2) - change whistle to normal-sampleset at head I've tried this before and all it does it end up sounding ugly because its missing a lot of places where the clap should be. the whistle is to follow vocals mostly and hit a few clap spots.
  1. 00:05:501 (2) - change finish to whistle at tail Lowered volume of the finish
  2. 00:11:582 (2) - remove whistle head Pretty sure I did this. :P
  3. 00:26:987 (1) - remove whistle at reverse Done
  4. 00:28:406 (3) - add whistle tail done
  5. 00:31:041 (2) - remove whistle head & tail removed only the tail
  6. 00:33:473 (3) - remove whistle head Yeah, done
  7. 00:35:298 (1) - remove whistle done
  8. 00:50:906 (1) - add whistle tail [/color]
  9. 00:51:514 (2) - remove whistle head From this point on in the chorus, I try to add as many whistles to vocal notes, and less trying to worry about a basic clap pattern. This way it adds a bit of uniqueness. I left this in
  10. 00:52:122 (3) - ^ ^
  11. 00:52:933 (4) - remove whistle This is part of the vocal trail I've been following so no change
  12. 00:53:541 (6) - add whistle head I missed this, after last update, thanks!
  13. 00:54:149 (7) - remove whistle same as 52
  14. 00:54:554 (8) - remove whistle head ^
  15. 00:57:798 (5) - remove whistle tail^
  16. 00:59:622 (1) - change whistle to finish at tail The finish at the head shouldn't of even been there, removing the finish at the end, leaving the tail the same.
  17. 01:04:284 (4) - remove whistle tail Sounds better without it, changed.
  18. 01:14:014 (3) - ^ Done, and added a whistle to the(4).
  19. 01:15:433 (4) - add whistle
  20. 01:15:635 (5) - remove whistle head Sounds better with it, leaving as is.
  21. 01:25:162 (3) - add whistle Sure, done.
[Solitude]
same as [Serenity] change whistle to normal-sampleset as clap
  1. 00:09:353 (3) - add clap tail Removed all of the claps for the samplesound set. I don't like them anymore.
  2. 00:10:974 (1) - add clap ^
  3. 00:36:919 (1) - add whistle or finish at head Liked, added
  4. 00:39:149 (7) - remove whistle head & tail I personally like the double whistles in these areas so leaving alone.
  5. 00:41:176 (4) - remove whistle head Song feels empty without it, no change
  6. 00:42:392 (3) - remove whistle head & tail ^
  7. 00:43:203 (1) - add finish head Thanks for noticing this. surprised I forgot to add it in this difficulty
  8. 00:50:500 (8) - remove whistle tail Whistle is for the 'ki' sound, and with it feels empty with my current whistle flow.
  9. 00:52:933 (1) - remove whistle head Vocals
  10. 00:53:338 (2) - remove whistle ^
  11. 00:55:771 (1) - ^ ^
  12. 00:57:392 (6) - add whistle tail Nice!
  13. 01:02:662 (4) - remove whistle I like this whistle because of the heavy vocals here
  14. 01:03:068 (6) - ^ Sure, sounds better with 2 whistle hits than 3 anyways.
  15. 01:04:284 (10) - ^ Turning down the volume a bit on this whistle. I still like it but I understand why you asked for it to be removed.
  16. 01:09:352 (1) - add whistle tail Sure, I did it in the next spot similar to this. Thanks for noticing this as well.
  17. 01:17:054 (1) - add whistle head Done
  18. 01:20:703 (2) - remove whistle Done
  19. 01:21:514 (5) - remove whistle head ^
  20. 01:23:946 (2) - ^ Left this whistle in, need it for the upcoming finish part
That's all :D

Ty for the mod, sorry I didn't get to it last night. I kind of fell asleep XD
DakeDekaane

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

~random from #modreqs~ :D
*hitsound mod only, you can ignore this mod if useless*

[Loneliness]
  1. 00:20:501 (1) - add clap /*Ok
  2. 00:21:311 (3) - add clap tail /*Ok
  3. 00:22:325 (1) - add clap head /*Ok
  4. 00:35:703 (1) - add normal-sampleset head /*Ok
  5. 00:59:622 (1) - add finish head & tail /*Added only in the start, in the end I put a whistle instead, a finish would be too loud.
  6. 01:05:906 (1) - remove whistle /*Ok
  7. 01:09:352 (2) - add normal-sampleset tail /*Ok
  8. 01:15:635 (5) - remove normal-sampleset tail /*The normal sampleset is ok as it fits with the drums
That's all :D
Thanks /o/ Update here: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=CgrMFXBE
those
http://puu.sh/2ou77

Will look into SB later
captin1
Hey! M4M from my queue~

just a couple suggestions

Peace

00:18:676 (3) - super nazi, this is on y:237, probably should be on 238 to stack
00:59:622 (1,2) - make these the same, they don't blanket each other perfectly cause they're two different sizes

Loneliness

Can't think of anything, nice diff!

Serenity

00:38:744 (4) - curve this slider like you did (3)
00:51:514 (3) - x:452 y:228 for symmetry
00:56:987 (4) - same angle as (3)
01:25:568 (1,2) - (1) at x:316 y:96, (2) at x:436 y:180, bit better symmetry

Solitude

00:18:676 (3,4,5) - perfect triangle these
00:20:703 (3,4) - make these symmetrical
00:26:582 (4,5) - move (4) a bit farther away from (6) so (5) ends up about the same height or a bit higher
00:40:163 (1,2,3,4) - perfect triangle these
00:43:811 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - these are a bit odd to read, why don't you do a jump pattern with these beats? would fit with the build to chorus
00:53:135 (1) - soft finish on the end of this slider
00:54:554 (4) - soft finish on the very end of this slider
00:59:622 (1) - soft finish
01:00:230 (4) - soft finish on the start of this slider
01:07:527 (4) - ^

Miko

00:37:528 (4) - move to x:124 y:300

All I got. Good luck!
Topic Starter
Lanturn
captin1

captin1 wrote:

Hey! M4M from my queue~

just a couple suggestions

Peace

00:18:676 (3) - super nazi, this is on y:237, probably should be on 238 to stack Good eye!
00:59:622 (1,2) - make these the same, they don't blanket each other perfectly cause they're two different sizes Fixed this up a bit.

Serenity

00:38:744 (4) - curve this slider like you did (3) Curved this a bit then and matched up with the later one which is what I was copying before
00:51:514 (3) - x:452 y:228 for symmetry done
00:56:987 (4) - same angle as (3) I personally like how it is right now. so no change.
01:25:568 (1,2) - (1) at x:316 y:96, (2) at x:436 y:180, bit better symmetry very nice, thanks.

Solitude

00:18:676 (3,4,5) - perfect triangle these I like this set up how it is. no change.
00:20:703 (3,4) - make these symmetrical Fixed up this whole section a bit.
00:26:582 (4,5) - move (4) a bit farther away from (6) so (5) ends up about the same height or a bit higher I like this climb as it is.
00:40:163 (1,2,3,4) - perfect triangle these (3) stacks on (7) 's end so no change here. perfect triangles really are just 'meh' to me anyways.
00:43:811 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - these are a bit odd to read, why don't you do a jump pattern with these beats? would fit with the build to chorus You are the first person to say this. I believe its fine how it is and I personally like these. Fits very well with the vocals. no change.
00:53:135 (1) - soft finish on the end of this slider nothing in the music to imply a finish here, no change.
00:54:554 (4) - soft finish on the very end of this slider Music still isn't built up enough here for one.
00:59:622 (1) - soft finish Too early, and not powerful enough to use one.
01:00:230 (4) - soft finish on the start of this slider too early for what I've been doing.
01:07:527 (4) - ^ ^

All I got. Good luck!

Thanks for the mod!
luxoDeh
Hi! from my queue :)

PEACE

00:30:433 (1,2) - what do you think of making something like this, for me it sounds better (just a suggestion)
LONELINESS

Firt of all I think you should use grid level 3 or 4
00:14:015 (3) - make this slider end at 00:14:622 -
00:27:798 - maybe add a note here
00:30:434 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think in this point you should follow more the soud and not the lyrics, if you want to try this change, maybe make something like this: 01:23:946 (2) - maybe just move it one grid left whti grid level 3

SERENITY

00:49:892 - add a note or make the previous slider longer here
00:57:595 - also here add a note

SOLITUDE

00:05:907 (1,2,3) - maybe you should fix spacing here
00:26:379 (7) - maybe this stacked in this way can be confusing, I always fail it, but you can keep it as it is if you want.
00:35:298 (6) - fix spacing here, there is no jump in the music

MIKO

not much to say in this diff, just, why there isn't the video? just a question u.u

that's all, very good map! GL! ^.^
DakeDekaane

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! from my queue :)

LONELINESS

Firt of all I think you should use grid level 3 or 4 /*Not really, I feel more comfy using a larger grid as I rarely use grid snap
00:14:015 (3) - make this slider end at 00:14:622 - /*I'm following vocals for this combo, it would sound weird if I do that.
00:27:798 - maybe add a note here /*It would break a bit the rhythm and be a bit difficult to follow
00:30:434 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think in this point you should follow more the soud and not the lyrics, if you want to try this change, maybe make something like this: /*I'm mapping for vocals almost all the song, but I couldn't ignore the downbeat in 00:33:676 when I tried, added a circle there and made something interesting :3 01:23:946 (2) - maybe just move it one grid left whti grid level 3 /*I don't think so, spacing is consistent.

that's all, very good map! GL! ^.^
Thanks for the mod, my update is here: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=CgrMFXBE
Topic Starter
Lanturn
luxoDeh

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! from my queue :)

PEACE

00:30:433 (1,2) - what do you think of making something like this, for me it sounds better (just a suggestion) I changed this whole section a bit thanks to your idea, gets rid of the ugly 1/2 I had just past this as well. Thanks ;)



SERENITY

00:49:892 - add a note or make the previous slider longer here Moved the (6) to the spot you suggested, plays better
00:57:595 - also here add a note This part heavily follows the vocals, so no change.

SOLITUDE

00:05:907 (1,2,3) - maybe you should fix spacing here Adjusted a tiny bit
00:26:379 (7) - maybe this stacked in this way can be confusing, I always fail it, but you can keep it as it is if you want. I personally like it, hidden notes usually aren't something I like to do but it adds a little extra flavour into the difficulty since I have hidden notes in a few other places around this isn't that bad imo. no change, thanks for the feedback though!
00:35:298 (6) - fix spacing here, there is no jump in the music Changed the notes before to match the spacing a bit. should be a lot better.

MIKO

not much to say in this diff, just, why there isn't the video? just a question u.u those didn't want the video in on his difficulty which is fine.

that's all, very good map! GL! ^.^

Thanks for the mod!
Lapis-
Modding cause Yosuga No Sora wins

Peace
00:38:338 (3) - This is what you've got right now:
I suggest changing it to this to straighten it out and make it look nicer, and bring it a bit away from the very edge as it goes very slightly off screen.

00:16:649 (1) - This silder is kinda off screen, raise it up like this:
You hit the key beats here in this diff, which is good ^^

Loneliness

OD + 1 ?

00:18:879 (4) - Goes off the grid, I suggest using this:00:20:501 (1) - Again this pattern goes off the grid, suggesting you do this:

(so at this point of the mod I realized those patterns don't go off screen in testing so you can use them if you wish)

Serenity

Really good diff, I couldn't really think of a way to improve it so I had no suggestions here.

Solitude

00:43:811 (2) There is no point to this pattern being stacked so close together, I suggest just using normal spacing here.
00:59:622 (1) Again, I suggest normal spacing. You can do a nice triangle pattern here instead of what you currently have.
01:05:500: (4) I don't understand the 1/4's here, Is it mapped to the vocals?

Miko
HP Drain -1 ?

This diff doesn't use many loud hitsounds to emphaize the strong parts of the song like the chorus, I suggest adding some normal vol finishes here and there to put strong emphasis on key parts of the song, like at the the end of vocal sections.

Still looking like a great diff though, couldn't think of much else to put here for this.





Hope it gets ranked. I <3 Yosuga No Sora!
Topic Starter
Lanturn
PortalLife

PortalLife wrote:

Modding cause Yosuga No Sora wins You stole my blue :o

Peace
00:38:338 (3) - I suggest changing it to this to straighten it out and make it look nicer, and bring it a bit away from the very edge as it goes very slightly off screen. I personally like this slider as it catches riya's vocals a bit near the end, also the slider is meant to indicate the next note is going to be up from it so it shoots it off. No change here.


00:16:649 (1) - This silder is kinda off screen, raise it up like this: I moved this around, and surprisingly, I didn't have to do much.

You hit the key beats here in this diff, which is good ^^ Yeah, I wanted to map more to the song itself rather than a simple 1/1 steady beat throughout the whole thing to make it a bit more unique, but still easy enough for newer players. thanks.

Serenity

Really good diff, I couldn't really think of a way to improve it so I had no suggestions here. Thanks :)

Solitude

00:43:811 (2) There is no point to this pattern being stacked so close together, I suggest just using normal spacing here. The Anti-jumps here are something I think works great for this map. Since there is a lot of big spacing already, this part shouldn't be confusing really because its mapped 100% in tune to the vocals, and I like how it just plays here.
00:59:622 (1) Again, I suggest normal spacing. You can do a nice triangle pattern here instead of what you currently have. Another anti-jump I like as it matches the vocals again so people wouldn't consider it to be 1/4 notes.
01:05:500: (4) I don't understand the 1/4's here, Is it mapped to the vocals? Definitely not the vocals here. I assumed a drum was here, but you can at least hear something indicating a raise in volume on that 1/4 | I also believe it matches up with the upcoming 01:11:176 (5,6,7,8,9) - as it follows the same pattern.


Hope it gets ranked. I <3 Yosuga No Sora!

Thanks for the mod
DakeDekaane
PortalLife

PortalLife wrote:

Modding cause Yosuga No Sora wins /*yay /o/


Loneliness

OD + 1 ?
/*I don't really think so, this diff is meant to be quite easy.

00:18:879 (4) - Goes off the grid, I suggest using this:
00:20:501 (1) - Again this pattern goes off the grid, suggesting you do this:
(so at this point of the mod I realized those patterns don't go off screen in testing so you can use them if you wish) /*^Hehe :3

Hope it gets ranked. I <3 Yosuga No Sora!

Thanks for taking a look at it /o/ but sorry, no changes, though replied explaining my reasons :3
tutuhaha
BG lager than 1024*768

[Miko]
00:23:541 (8) - maybe ctrl+g
00:39:757 (9,10) - ^
00:44:825 (5,6) - maybe use the same space with 00:54:352 (8,1) -
01:00:838 (4) - ctrl+g maybe make a small jump
01:10:568 (3,4) - if is me I will make a jump on there
only this diff no video?

[Solitude]
00:07:731 (2) - try to make a space looks same like 00:05:704 (5,1) - will look better
00:07:731 (2,3) - ^same
00:11:379 (2) - move to x160 y64 will looks better
00:13:406 (8) - move to x312 y220
00:17:460 (1) - not good place to add strong finish
00:26:987 (10) - nc begin here
00:43:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - .......not agree to use this design
I will do this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691814

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691816

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691817
well...same like this ╮(╯▽╰)╭............
00:49:689 (5) - ctrl+g will play more fun
00:54:757 (5) - space,move to x424 y308
00:59:622 (1,2,3) - I think there need make a jump
01:04:487 (1) - not good place to add finish

[Serenity]
00:03:880 (1) - add whistle at the end
00:16:649 (1) - delete finish
00:18:473 (3) - whistle
00:22:122 (4) - finish at the end
00:31:041 (2) - add whistle at the end
00:31:649 (3) - ^Then delete this whistle
00:31:852 (4) - ^Then add whistle here
00:48:271 (3) - nc

then GL
Topic Starter
Lanturn
tutuhaha

tutuhaha wrote:

BG lager than 1024*768 Widescreen BGs are allowed now.

[Solitude]
00:07:731 (2) - try to make a space looks same like 00:05:704 (5,1) - will look better
00:07:731 (2,3) - ^same Sure, Makes sense.
00:11:379 (2) - move to x160 y64 will looks better
00:13:406 (8) - move to x312 y220 This is a bit odd, Going to leave as is.
00:17:460 (1) - not good place to add strong finish Lowered the volume
00:26:987 (10) - nc begin here I like the current NC setup for this. I'd rather NC after the whole note instead of before.
00:43:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - .......not agree to use this design
I will do this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691814

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691816

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691817
well...same like this ╮(╯▽╰)╭............ Interesting idea but I've already set my mind on keeping this as an anti-jump. I personally like it better.
00:49:689 (5) - ctrl+g will play more fun Nice, swapped a few notes around to make it even better.
00:54:757 (5) - space,move to x424 y308 Ah, didn't notice my spacing was a bit off there, thanks.
00:59:622 (1,2,3) - I think there need make a jump Sticking with the anti-jump here. I personally think it plays better
01:04:487 (1) - not good place to add finish Lowered volume.

[Serenity]
00:03:880 (1) - add whistle at the end Sure
00:16:649 (1) - delete finish lowered volume
00:18:473 (3) - whistle added
00:22:122 (4) - finish at the end added with lower volume
00:31:041 (2) - add whistle at the end Added, sounds better than I thought it would be.
00:31:649 (3) - ^Then delete this whistle
00:31:852 (4) - ^Then add whistle here Worked out good, follows the vocals nicely.
00:48:271 (3) - nc Been mentioned lots before, might as well now. lol

then GL

Thanks for the mod
787B
Hi.
From my Modding Queue.

General
Looking Good!

Peace
00:30:028 (4,1) - You could have made the same blanket here, like in 00:26:784 (4,1) - for symmetry: http://puu.sh/2vKFY.
00:40:163 (1,2,3) - Flow isn't good, consider making (1,2) a blanket: http://puu.sh/2vKQm

Loneliness
00:47:461 (1,2,3) - Try a variation here like this to improve flow consistency: http://puu.sh/2vLfm
01:26:987 (3) - I'd move this circle more to the center because of the upcoming spin.http://puu.sh/2vLoU

Serenity
00:26:987 (1,2) - Make a blanket here? http://puu.sh/2vLD9
00:30:433 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/2vLE5
00:32:663 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/2vLG2
00:48:271 (1) - Place under 00:48:068 (2) - to improve flow: http://puu.sh/2vLIS
00:57:798 (5) - Consider re-working on the shape of this slider, it's not smooth.

Solitude
Couldn't find anything wrong here, good work.

Miko
00:05:096 (3) - Remake this slider for a blanket with 00:04:893 (2) - ? It's just me though, but the current slider is not nice. http://puu.sh/2vM2q
Nothing much to add here.

Quite good work on this map so far, so I'll drop my star here:
Good luck!
Totoro
Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Looks very good. but I'm not so sure about third fountain in the kiai time. I think it does not suit that well. Other than that, very good mapset. Good luck!

Peace

00:01:245 (1,2,3) - i suggest a perfect triangle rather than scattered triangle

00:17:460 (2,3,1) - ^

01:06:108 (3,5) - blanket these

01:20:703 (1,2,3,4) - i think this pattern is bit too hard on easy. consider making at least a slider

Loneliness

Why is this difficulty using different CS? make it consistent

Other than that, its fine

Serenity

00:09:353 (1,1) - make these two closer therefore players wouldn't get confused. since it has the same distance with others eventhough it has slower SV

00:51:311 - i think there should be a note here because it matches with the vocal

00:54:554 (8) - NC

00:55:771 (1) - remove NC

Solitude

00:25:568 (5) - ctrl + g would look better

00:43:811 (2,3,4,5,6) - this looks like stream... maybe you should fix it

00:52:933 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you make it to a perfect square

Miko

00:26:784 (8,2) - not perfectly stacked
Topic Starter
Lanturn
Wolf

Wolf wrote:

Hi.
From my Modding Queue.

Peace
00:30:028 (4,1) - You could have made the same blanket here, like in 00:26:784 (4,1) - for symmetry: http://puu.sh/2vKFY. Good idea actually. I never even thought about reusing the slider from before. Changed
00:40:163 (1,2,3) - Flow isn't good, consider making (1,2) a blanket: http://puu.sh/2vKQm Made a huge change to this part. Hopefully it looks good.

Serenity
00:26:987 (1,2) - Make a blanket here? http://puu.sh/2vLD9
00:30:433 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/2vLE5
00:32:663 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/2vLG2 When I did the first one, these next two came naturally after, nice idea!
00:48:271 (1) - Place under 00:48:068 (2) - to improve flow: http://puu.sh/2vLIS I personally like how this one goes, but I adjusted the (1,2) before the kiai time starts a little bit to make a bit better.
00:57:798 (5) - Consider re-working on the shape of this slider, it's not smooth. Changed it to somewhat match a slider later on in the song so it isn't so plain. Thanks!

Solitude
Couldn't find anything wrong here, good work. Thanks :)

Quite good work on this map so far, so I'll drop my star here: Thanks!
Good luck!

Thanks for the mod! My Easy/Normal+ diffs look a lot cleaner now!
those
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 755
PreviewTime: 47611
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.05
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 64

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Title:Hiyoku no Hane (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:比翼の羽根 (TV Size)
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Lanturn
Version:Miko
Source:Yosuga no Sora
Tags:riya Visual Novel Eroge Opening those DakeDekaane
BeatmapID:229283
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HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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Thanks for all the fish
Topic Starter
Lanturn
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Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Looks very good. but I'm not so sure about third fountain in the kiai time. I think it does not suit that well. Other than that, very good mapset. Good luck! I was unsure of this myself, but I agree that it might be a bit over the top.

Peace

00:01:245 (1,2,3) - i suggest a perfect triangle rather than scattered triangle Moved around a bit

00:17:460 (2,3,1) - ^ Moved the previous (1) and the (2) mentioned slightly.

01:06:108 (3,5) - blanket these made slight changes.

01:20:703 (1,2,3,4) - i think this pattern is bit too hard on easy. consider making at least a slider I personally like how it works. Leaving as is. It works well with the 4 sliders I did before. If more say something about this though I might make 2 slider 2 circle patterns maybe

Loneliness

Why is this difficulty using different CS? make it consistent Guest difficulty, I'll let him decide

Other than that, its fine

Serenity

00:09:353 (1,1) - make these two closer therefore players wouldn't get confused. since it has the same distance with others eventhough it has slower SV I definitely understand what you mean here. The only thing is that anything I do unless I stack it directly underneath the end, will look really really ugly. If another person says something about this, I'll definitely try to work something out. As for now though, I think its perfectly fine.

00:51:311 - i think there should be a note here because it matches with the vocal It would have to be an extended slider, but I think the hold on the 'no' doesn't need to be mapped as its not very strong, left as is for now.

00:54:554 (8) - NC v

00:55:771 (1) - remove NC NC follows the vocals here, and it starts a new part after the (8). Left alone for now. I personally don't like starting NCs before the big white lines either.

Solitude

00:25:568 (5) - ctrl + g would look better Actually it does, changed.

00:43:811 (2,3,4,5,6) - this looks like stream... maybe you should fix it I still personally like these anti's, it matches well with the vocals but again, you are probably like the 10th person to comment on them now. Didn't realize people were against them so much XD (Not saying they, or you are, but this seems to be the most pointed out thing on my map)

00:52:933 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you make it to a perfect square Was never intended to be a square, I'll move these around slightly, but I'm not aiming for a square :P

Thanks for the mod!
DakeDekaane
Peace (Lanturn's) has the same CS than Loneliness (mine) so it's not an odd one, about the kiai, Lanturn, can you remove the two green lines for the third kiai? x3 I think it fits but well, it's good to mantain a bit of consistency c:
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