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Kana Asumi - Open Canvas (TV Size)

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Dolphin
1,167 posts
Joined January 2012
Dolphin
M4M from the Modding Queue!

Sorry for the delay. My old laptop's hard drive broke and I needed a new one.
Also I don't usually mod Standard. So don't expect my mod to be any good or helpful. :| M4M is an exception! :P

Bold - Should be fixed!
Dark Red - Unrankable
Normal - Suggestion
[General]
I like the custom hitsounds for this map! They fit well with the music! :D
[Easy]
Nothing much that I would change. Maybe set the OD and AR a tick higher? I am not sure. That is all.
[Normal]
Good Map. I wouldn't change anything here.
[HaHoHard]
Overall I nice map. Nothing in the Song Setup that I would change.
  • 00:26:355 (1,2) - This compressed slider stream is not fun to play. Try changing it into something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670630
    01:27:994 (1) - I would remove the Finish hitsound on this spinner.
[scanter's Insane]
Oh my god those jumps. @.@ I am not sure how to mod this properly, but I tried. Btw the jumps aren't a bad thing! :P
  • 00:16:355 (2) - Move this note somewhere else. It's too confusing with the jump.
    00:16:355 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try to decrease the space between this jump. On Auto this looks weird.
    00:31:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - Turn this into a circle stream. Compressed slider streams are not always so fun to play.
    00:34:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Either decrease the spaces or change the order you hit these notes in.
    01:00:781 (2) - Why is this note here? It doesn't follow the voice like what you have mapped elsewhere.
    01:08:322 (5) - Move this to x: 480 y: 104. It looks better with the previous slider.
Thanks for the M4M! My work is done here! I hope you all listen a little to my mod, but remember I am not a good Standard modder. Please respond with reason and don't just say "no". Explain why you disagree.

If you have any questions about my mod just PM me anytime.

Good Luck~
qkenan
134 posts
Joined October 2010
qkenan
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
Hi~M4M Here _(:з」∠)_

[General]
  1. BG has so high quality and its size is over 600KB, but no problem~
[Easy]
  1. Fine~
[Normal]
  1. 00:28:322 (5,6) - seems not parallel with previous notes
    also 00:29:634 (3) - and 00:30:289 (4,5,6) - themselves
  2. 01:12:257 (1) - try this ?
    SPOILER
    Nice diff~
[HaHoHard]
  1. Check the unsnapped inherited points !
    00:04:060 -5ms
    00:34:224 -3ms
    00:44:716 -6ms
    00:47:339 -7ms
    00:49:634 -7ms
    00:51:273 -8ms
    01:01:683 -11ms
    01:01:765 -11ms
    01:12:175 -13ms
    01:12:257 -13ms
    01:14:880 -14ms
    01:20:125 -16ms
    and 01:29:306
  2. 00:11:929 (5,6,7) - I'm very fond of the flow like 00:10:617 (1,2,3) - so how about change ⑤⑥⑦ into similar pattern with it ? if you made it players would be happy to see the notes placed closer to center
  3. 00:24:388 (3) - maybe this shape better
    SPOILER
  4. 01:09:634 (1,2,3,4) - plz adjust the curve of notes like
    SPOILER
  5. 01:21:273 (4,5) - move them a little farther from the next slider, considering the spacing you used at 01:22:421 (2,3) -
[scanter's Insane]
  1. Awesome jumps at a little high bpm, I prefer AR+1
  2. 00:12:748 (5,6) - the spacing may be error when previous notes using 1.7~2.0x. Also considering the placing,how about moving ⑤ to x260y72 and do CTRL+G to ⑥
    SPOILER
  3. 00:22:748 (4) - it seems not so suitable with ③, try move the tail point to x176y240 for better flow
    SPOILER
  4. 00:34:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - when ar is still 8, the pattern could be very difficult to read :o .If you still keep using ar8 I suggest to do CTRL+G to ③④
  5. 00:47:994 (1,2,3,4) - isnt the spacing too large ? If I were you I will choose to make a square jump like previous pattern
  6. 01:12:748 (1,2,3) - under ar8, it would also confuse the player
  7. 01:23:240 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I'd better regard them as overmapping. Since the Kiai is over, the map need a smooth end but you even mapped here harder than kiai. what's more, the rhythm here is not so powerful as before, either. you'd better remap these notes for some other patterns, or at least, reduce the spacings and do some rotations
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
M4M request from your queue
General
Inconsistence Audio Lead-In Time, it's not Unrankeble but I suppose you should set same timing. I suggest 2000 is more better.
Inconsistence Preview Time. you must fix it.
Easy
Placement
00:18:158(4) to be nice flow, a bit moved like this?
SPOILER
00:20:781(4)^
00:39:470(4,1) a bit norrow spacing imo
SPOILER
00:42:421(1,2) current is fine but you can make more beautiful. like this?
SPOILER
01:02:748(2,3,1,2) like this?
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:00:453 add clap at head and end
00:01:437(3) add clap at head and reverse
00:10:617(1) add finish at head
00:26:355(1)^
00:46:683(4) add clap at end
01:14:552(3) delete finish at head.

Normal
Placement
00:05:371(1,2,3,4) maybe you can put more symmetrically. like this?
SPOILER
00:18:158(4) x:328 y:300 to be same line at (2)
Rhythm
00:15:780 unnecessary green line
00:23:732(1,2,3,4) not bad but it's a bit difficult for Newbie. so you can put simply like this?
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:10:617(1) add finish at head
01:00:617(1,2,3) please make calm, it's loud.

HaHoHard
Placement
00:02:257(1) delete NC since 00:04:880 not added.
Rhythm
00:29:470(3) not fit imo. you can put them like this?
SPOILER
00:48:650(1) extended to 00:49:798, I fell much in playing.
Hit Sonud
00:04:060(3) add finish at head
01:07:011(1)^
00:05:371(1) add whistle or clap?

scanter's Insane
Placement
00:54:224(2,3) put a tiny jumping.
SPOILER
01:04:224(6) stack at next slider.
Rhythm
00:48:650(1) extended to 00:49:798, I fell much in playing.
01:04:388(1,2,3,4) a bit bored than other parts, so you can put notes at 01:04:880, 01:05:535, 01:06:191 on each head of slider.
SPOILER
01:13:076~ same as above. it's a example here so you can change freely,
256,192,73076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,73404,6,0,P|136:192|180:272,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,288,73896,2,0,P|376:192|332:112,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,74388,6,0,L|96:56,1,90
332,288,74716,2,0,L|416:328,1,90,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Hit Sonud

nice map. good luck with star~
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter

Dolphin wrote:

M4M from the Modding Queue!

Sorry for the delay. My old laptop's hard drive broke and I needed a new one.
Also I don't usually mod Standard. So don't expect my mod to be any good or helpful. :| M4M is an exception! :P

Bold - Should be fixed!
Dark Red - Unrankable

[scanter's Insane]
[notice]Oh my god those jumps. @.@ I am not sure how to mod this properly, but I tried. Btw the jumps aren't a bad thing! :P
  • 00:16:355 (2) - Move this note somewhere else. It's too confusing with the jump. okay ~
    00:16:355 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try to decrease the space between this jump. On Auto this looks weird. ^
    00:31:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - Turn this into a circle stream. Compressed slider streams are not always so fun to play. looks good even now. so I keep this.
    00:34:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Either decrease the spaces or change the order you hit these notes in. ^
    01:00:781 (2) - Why is this note here? It doesn't follow the voice like what you have mapped elsewhere. ? I think, follow well.
    01:08:322 (5) - Move this to x: 480 y: 104. It looks better with the previous slider. okay ~
Thanks for the M4M! My work is done here! I hope you all listen a little to my mod, but remember I am not a good Standard modder. Please respond with reason and don't just say "no". Explain why you disagree.

If you have any questions about my mod just PM me anytime.
Good Luck~

qkenan wrote:

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
Hi~M4M Here _(:з」∠)_

[General]
  1. BG has so high quality and its size is over 600KB, but no problem~
[scanter's Insane]
  1. Awesome jumps at a little high bpm, I prefer AR+1 okay ~
  2. 00:12:748 (5,6) - the spacing may be error when previous notes using 1.7~2.0x. Also considering the placing,how about moving ⑤ to x260y72 and do CTRL+G to ⑥ looks good even now.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:22:748 (4) - it seems not so suitable with ③, try move the tail point to x176y240 for better flow looks good even now.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:34:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - when ar is still 8, the pattern could be very difficult to read :o .If you still keep using ar8 I suggest to do CTRL+G to ③④ pass
  5. 00:47:994 (1,2,3,4) - isnt the spacing too large ? If I were you I will choose to make a square jump like previous pattern decrease distance
  6. 01:12:748 (1,2,3) - under ar8, it would also confuse the player pass
  7. 01:23:240 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I'd better regard them as overmapping. Since the Kiai is over, the map need a smooth end but you even mapped here harder than kiai. what's more, the rhythm here is not so powerful as before, either. you'd better remap these notes for some other patterns, or at least, reduce the spacings and do some rotations reduce distance

kajiyatta wrote:

SPOILER
M4M request from your queue
General
Inconsistence Audio Lead-In Time, it's not Unrankeble but I suppose you should set same timing. I suggest 2000 is more better.
Inconsistence Preview Time. you must fix it.

scanter's Insane
Placement
00:54:224(2,3) put a tiny jumping. yup ~
[spoilerbox]
01:04:224(6) stack at next slider. sound is different. so I keep this.
Rhythm
00:48:650(1) extended to 00:49:798, I fell much in playing. looks good even now.
01:04:388(1,2,3,4) a bit bored than other parts, so you can put notes at 01:04:880, 01:05:535, 01:06:191 on each head of slider. very nice idea :D fix my own.
SPOILER
01:13:076~ same as above. it's a example here so you can change freely,
256,192,73076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,73404,6,0,P|136:192|180:272,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,288,73896,2,0,P|376:192|332:112,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,74388,6,0,L|96:56,1,90
332,288,74716,2,0,L|416:328,1,90,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Hit Sonud

nice map. good luck with star~
Thanks all :D

And this is code
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Open Canvas.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51281
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Open Canvas (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Artist:Kana Asumi
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:-iCo-
Version:scanter's Insane
Source:Hidamari Sketch
Tags:Opening HabiHolic Scanter
BeatmapID:211153
BeatmapSetID:74210

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Hidamari Sketch x Honeycomb Opening.avi"
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
2,75079,79375
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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74880,-100,4,2,1,85,0,0
80125,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
89306,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,255,0
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 255,255,0
Combo4 : 255,128,64

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136,76,32585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,88,32748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,176,32912,6,0,L|64:280,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,288,33240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,352,33404,2,0,P|324:340|350:288,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,288,33896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,56,34224,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,232,34388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,152,34552,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,328,34716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,34880,1,4,0:0:0:0:
352,232,35044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,35207,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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160,152,36027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,244,36191,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,268,36273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,288,36355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,296,36437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,300,36519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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216,280,36683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,260,36765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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473,219,37175,2,0,L|393:261,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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164,180,39142,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,176,39306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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288,320,40125,2,0,P|377:326|440:248,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,284,41765,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,328,41929,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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446,51,43896,2,0,P|374:107|295:86,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,152,44388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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188,228,47503,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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242,154,51929,2,0,L|180:220,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,248,52257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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436,104,52912,2,0,P|464:115|496:163,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,68,53240,2,0,P|314:56|282:8,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,88,53568,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,80,53732,6,0,B|76:108|76:108|104:144|100:188|76:228|32:228,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,360,54224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,224,54388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,352,54552,2,0,L|376:312,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,199,54880,2,0,L|397:229,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,59,55207,2,0,P|388:36|476:100,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,136,55699,2,0,P|210:159|122:95,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,95,56191,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,292,56519,6,0,P|139:255|103:219,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,308,56847,2,0,P|152:292|236:348,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,352,57339,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,264,57503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,164,57666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
406,72,57830,2,0,B|352:57|308:89|308:89|260:85|245:52,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,72,58322,2,0,B|138:57|182:89|182:89|230:85|245:52,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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188,220,58978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,216,59142,6,0,L|72:320,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,340,59470,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,340,59634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,352,59798,2,0,P|384:336|424:264,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,108,60617,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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432,186,61683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,355,62093,2,0,P|281:336|264:312,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,334,62421,2,8,P|159:276|180:256,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,176,62912,6,0,L|128:88,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,40,63240,2,0,L|356:128,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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440,72,63896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,72,64060,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,252,64224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,196,64388,6,0,P|256:224|215:206,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,100,64880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
46,216,65044,2,0,P|174:188|215:206,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,107,65535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,37,65699,2,0,P|232:165|215:206,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,304,66191,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,374,66355,2,0,P|197:246|215:206,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,264,66847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,156,67011,6,0,P|54:154|108:180,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,292,67339,2,0,P|156:293|109:274,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,140,67830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,188,67994,2,0,L|408:76,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,104,68322,2,0,P|424:116|316:48,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,56,68814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,236,69142,5,8,0:0:0:0:
350,266,69306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
273,73,69470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,335,69634,6,0,P|220:300|244:252,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,48,69962,2,0,P|291:83|268:132,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,70289,6,8,P|147:156|196:180,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,223,70617,2,8,P|364:227|316:203,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70945,12,0,71929,0:0:0:0:
432,288,72257,6,0,P|388:328|256:300,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72748,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Totoro
77 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Totoro
@qkenan

Thank you for your mod! fixed some for changing notes. Thanks!
Totoro
77 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Totoro
@kajiyatta

Fixed most of it except for the flow due to the distance problem. Thanks!
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
http://puu.sh/2qrPZ

Thanks Mod All Fix~~
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
다시 수정완료!

http://puu.sh/2qrPZ
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
Rechecking Hard as requested

00:43:726 (1,4) - reverse NC, since it destroys your actual combo pattern on previous elements, you had always long and now it isnt following it
01:00:119 (1) - Remove NC here reason same as above
01:27:333 (5) - Random whistle clap at the end of the slider?
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
http://puu.sh/2qXez
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu
Hi :) m4m from your mod queue

General
Uncheck letterbox during breaks for all diff
HaHoHard and scanter's Insane have different offset

scanter's Insane
00:57:339 (1) - remove nc
00:57:830 (4) - nc (big white line)
01:01:437 (1) - remove nc
01:01:765 (5) - nc (big white line)

Audio lead-in should be the same with other diff, it should be 3

HaHoHard
00:04:874 (6,7) - how about stack
nice diff :)

Normal
fine

Easy
re-adjust the preview point, because AiMod says this diff's preview point is different from other diff's

other than that, everything is fine

Nice mapsets :)

Here's my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/77115
i hope you don't dislike the song..
oh and you don't have to mod them fully since i only gave you little mod because your mapset is great

Good luck for ranking~
Totoro
77 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Totoro
@AlpacaCokelat

Changed everything regarding letterbox during breaks, preview points, and offsets. Thank you!
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi :) m4m from your mod queue

General
Uncheck letterbox during breaks for all diff
HaHoHard and scanter's Insane have different offset
Ok~ Done

scanter's Insane
00:57:339 (1) - remove nc
00:57:830 (4) - nc (big white line)
01:01:437 (1) - remove nc
01:01:765 (5) - nc (big white line)

Audio lead-in should be the same with other diff, it should be 3

HaHoHard
00:04:874 (6,7) - how about stack No.. Bad Patten... nice diff :) Thnaks...~

Normal
fine

Easy
re-adjust the preview point, because AiMod says this diff's preview point is different from other diff's

other than that, everything is fine

Nice mapsets :)

Here's my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/77115
i hope you don't dislike the song..
oh and you don't have to mod them fully since i only gave you little mod because your mapset is great

Good luck for ranking~
나중에 푸쉬로 줄게 미안해...
TMAstraf
100 posts
Joined February 2010
TMAstraf
General:
Make Audio Lead-In 3 seconds

Easy:
00:15:535 Maybe spinner should end here
01:02:748 - 01:03:076 Maybe put this on other place because it cross on 01:01:273
01:04:716 ^ cross 01:02:748

Normal:
00:00:126 put is on same position like 00:02:257
00:15:535 Maybe spinner should end here

scanter's Insane:
00:09:634 Make same position like 00:09:306
00:09:798 Make same position like 00:09:470
01:27:994 delete circle and beginn spinner

Well thats all =)
zorefire
429 posts
Joined October 2012
zorefire
will fix this post soon hold on
zorefire
429 posts
Joined October 2012
zorefire
Well seeing how all these people helped you with your map I see nothing wrong with it now :/ so I would say it's go to go for ranking by my opinion. I have played your Easy & Normal and have gotten 100.0% so it's good to go I guess.
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
Hey there!

From ~ ★ Dake's and Irre's Modding Queue ★ ~

[scanter's Insane]

First impression: Very fun to play! good job ~

00:05:371 (1,2) - I kinda suggest something like this. http://puu.sh/2xN0e It has a better flow, although it's a bit harder to play, but I think this is ok :)
00:16:355 (2,3,4,5,6) - Isn't this meant to be a star..? If yes, it's wrong made o.o
00:29:962 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This combo kinda threw me out of the concept. I think the jump between 00:29:962 (4,5,1) - is too hard in compare with 00:30:289 (1,2) - . You should fix this, with lowering the DS.
00:56:847 (2) - Make this one a bit rounder, only a little bit. xD
01:00:289 (5) - Move this one to x:316 y:252. It will look a bit better :P

Wow! This diff was really fun to play, I hope I'll see it ranked soon :P

[HaHoHard]

First impression: looks good :P

00:02:748 (1) - Make this a bit rounder, so it looks better with 00:03:404 (2) - (which also should be a LITTLE bit more round)
00:17:175 (5,6) - They should also be a little bit rounder :x
00:20:289 (7,1) - If you play your diff, you'll see that they touch each other, what doesn't look so nice. Try to place them a bit different!
00:24:388 (3) - This bow should be on the other side I suppose.
00:29:470 (3) - This one should be a bit rounder, because it will look nicer with 00:28:978 (1) -
00:31:109 (6,7) - Move them here: http://puu.sh/2xNFy
00:32:912 (6,7,8) - Try something like this? http://puu.sh/2xNGp

The rest is okay-ish! It's ok to play, but maybe you should get some more mods! but it's on the right way :)

[Normal]

First impression: Can't find anything really bad o.o

00:44:716 (1,1) - This could be a bit confusing for newbies, try moving them.
00:54:552 (5) - There is kinda no reason for a slider like this.. just make it straight.

[Easy]

00:11:929 (2) - Try rotate this by something like -3°, because then it will fit better with 00:12:912 (3) - (it looks like one straight)
00:53:896 (1,2,3) - Let this look like a circle? It looks a bit weird now.


Well that was my mod! I hope i was helpful a bit, since there weren't many points at Easy / Normal, but this just means that it's already good enough imo :3

Good luck!
Totoro
77 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Totoro

Irreversible wrote:

Hey there!

From ~ ★ Dake's and Irre's Modding Queue ★ ~

[Normal]

First impression: Can't find anything really bad o.o

00:44:716 (1,1) - This could be a bit confusing for newbies, try moving them.
00:54:552 (5) - There is kinda no reason for a slider like this.. just make it straight.

[Easy]

00:11:929 (2) - Try rotate this by something like -3°, because then it will fit better with 00:12:912 (3) - (it looks like one straight)
00:53:896 (1,2,3) - Let this look like a circle? It looks a bit weird now.


Well that was my mod! I hope i was helpful a bit, since there weren't many points at Easy / Normal, but this just means that it's already good enough imo :3

Good luck!
Fixed everything. Thanks for the mod!
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
fix some :3

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Open Canvas.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 3000
PreviewTime: 51273
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Open Canvas (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Artist:Kana Asumi
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:-iCo-
Version:scanter's Insane
Source:Hidamari Sketch
Tags:Opening HabiHolic Scanter
BeatmapID:211153
BeatmapSetID:74210

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Hidamari Sketch x Honeycomb Opening.avi"
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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iyasine
1,135 posts
Joined January 2012
iyasine
hi~ iCo (^^)/

Easy

00:12:912 (3) - 2 grid up . 2grid left ?
SPOILER

01:14:552 - Delete finish . addclap ?

Normal

00:30:945 (6) - 1 grid down is point a dot ?
SPOILER

01:14:552 (1) - Delete finish . add clap ?

HaHoHard

00:42:093 (1) - Distance 1.1x ?

01:00:781 - add note ?

scanter's Insane

01:01:273 (1) - Distance 1.0x ?

00:31:601 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice!

good luck~ <3
Totoro
77 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Totoro
@iyasine

i fixed the points little bit.

I don't accept your hitsound suggestion because it is there to give more emphasis. Thanks for the mod!
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
hey

Easy
OD +1 (to balance ODs of each diff)

00:27:994 (4,5) - try reversing this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707107 (note placement is just an idea)
00:42:093 (3) - NC, delete NC on next note
00:44:716 (3) - Finish would sound good. i would also suggest deleting the finish on (2) or lower the volume
00:45:371 (2) - you could make a blanket around the orange (3)~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707111
00:59:142 (1) - Move this pattern up around here to lessen overlapping with 00:58:814 (4) - ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707114
01:07:339 (1,2) - Reverse these rhythms, same with (3,4) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707119 sry if it's hard to get your old pattern back orz
01:10:945 (2) - Finish on tail
01:22:748 (1) - Finish on head
01:25:371 (1) - ^
01:26:683 (3) - wrong rhythm, you can extend it like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707126

Normal
00:23:732 (1) - just a note for future maps, try to avoid multiple repeats like this in easier diffs
00:28:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - going the same direction as the combo before felt a little boring imo, try remapping these notes for a more special pattern
00:36:847 (1) - Finish on head?
00:54:224 (4) - NC, delete NC on 00:55:207 (1) -
00:59:798 (2) - Finish on tail, has the same emphasis as 01:00:617 (1,2,3) -
01:12:257 (1) - Finish on head i guess, i hear some cymbal
01:22:748 (1) - ^
01:25:371 (1) - ^
01:27:994 (1) - Silence/lower volume at the end of this spinner

HaHoHard
00:05:371 (1) - Finish on head
00:07:175 (6) - Delete clap unless it's intentional. if it's intentional, i would put a clap on 00:09:798 (6) - for consistency
00:20:289 (7) - Move/rotate to avoid the unnecessary overlap with 00:21:109 (1) - , something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707131
00:36:847 (1) - Finish to emphasize new stanza
00:41:765 (9) - Stack on the head of 00:42:093 (1) -http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707135 , i didn't really see the point of this antijump
01:06:847 (8,1) - perhaps combining these into a 1/2 slider will fit the vocals better
01:26:355 (3) - Finish on tail and Finish on head of 01:27:339 (5) - , the finish on (4) alone sounded a bit off imo?
01:27:994 (1) - Lower volume at the end of this spinner

scanter's Insane
00:05:371 (1) - Finish on head
00:10:617 (1) - ^, i hear cymbals
00:11:929 (1,2) - Ctrl + G these, i think it's better cursor flow from 00:11:601 (5) -
00:18:486 (1,2,3,4) - Love this~ :lol:
00:25:863 (1,2) - Move this down away from the spinner's comboburst
00:32:257 (5) - NC?
00:53:732 (1,2) - Reverse this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707141, also Ctrl + H on (2) to blanket (3)~
00:56:847 (2) - Curve upwards, better cursor flow imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707144
01:02:912 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + G these separately, cursor flow =v= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707147
01:10:289 (1) - Delete NC, didn't see the point
01:14:552 (1) - ^
01:22:257 (1) - i think you can move this somewhere else, so the pattern's not so clustered
01:24:880 (1) - ^

8-)
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
미안 요세 셤기간이라서 바빠서

Thanks Modder~

-Ico- Update Please~

http://puu.sh/2BbiW

Thanks~
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter

LunarSakuya wrote:

hey o/ saku-chan xD

scanter's Insane
00:05:371 (1) - Finish on head yup
00:10:617 (1) - ^, i hear cymbals ^
00:11:929 (1,2) - Ctrl + G these, i think it's better cursor flow from 00:11:601 (5) - Nice
00:18:486 (1,2,3,4) - Love this~ :lol: o.o..!
00:25:863 (1,2) - Move this down away from the spinner's comboburst you're right~
00:32:257 (5) - NC? maybe it will become a NC spam
00:53:732 (1,2) - Reverse this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707141, also Ctrl + H on (2) to blanket (3)~ yup~
00:56:847 (2) - Curve upwards, better cursor flow imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707144 \o/
01:02:912 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + G these separately, cursor flow =v= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707147 \o\
01:10:289 (1) - Delete NC, didn't see the point /o\
01:14:552 (1) - ^ T_T
01:22:257 (1) - i think you can move this somewhere else, so the pattern's not so clustered /o/
01:24:880 (1) - ^ xD

8-)
thanks your modding :)
And this is code!
SPOILER
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 3000
PreviewTime: 51273
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Artist:Kana Asumi
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:-iCo-
Version:scanter's Insane
Source:Hidamari Sketch
Tags:Opening HabiHolic Scanter
BeatmapID:211153
BeatmapSetID:74210

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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Totoro
77 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Totoro
@LunarSakuya

Thank you so much for the mod!! Fixed everything except overlap in easy due to pattern and distance problems.
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
m4m here, sorry for the delay

[General]
you need to fix the code:
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
to
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",0,0
in all your diffs(either 0,0 or 1,1 is fine, but all diffs need to be the same and I recommend 0,0)
lead-in=2000 is enough, 3000 is unnecessary
offset=132(+6) is better to me

[Easy]
I suggest AR+1, 2 is a bit slow..
00:20:781 (4) - put it 1 gird left(ctrl+1)? make it on line, looks better

kinda nice diff

[Normal]
00:23:732 (1) - I highly suggest you to change it into 1 1/2 slider and 1 1/2 repeat slider, instead of the current one. a short sliders with too much repeating times is confusing to read in a Normal diff

this diff's rhyme is a bit boring imo

[HaHoHard]
00:13:240 - how about adding a circle with finish here, and start the spinner later? will fit the song much better imo
00:22:257 (6) - how about ending this slider at 00:22:585 - , and change 00:22:585 (7) - to a circle at 00:22:748 - ? will follow vocal much better imo
00:42:585 (2) - why not change it to a circle and a slider? a 1/1 slider doesn't fit the vocal too much imo
00:47:339 - same as 00:13:240 -

a Hard diff with no jumps, maybe it's a bit to play..

[scanter's Insane]
00:13:240 - same as 00:13:240 - in Hard diff
00:17:011 (6,1) - flow is bad when jump from 6 to 1.. maybe you can change the current pattern a bit here
00:34:716 (4,5) - ctrl+g, then the flow can be much better(don't forget to fix the hitsounds, too)
00:38:158 (2,3) - how about putting 3 first and 2 later? adding a jump from 00:37:994 - to 00:38:158 - is a nice idea imo, and the flow also can be better(do ctrl+g on 00:39:142 (4,5) - if you think the later pattern is too hard to play)
01:00:945 (3,1) - this anti-jump plays bad to me, it doesn't fit the song well imo. my suggestion is to reduce the spacing of 01:00:617 (1,2,3) - a bit, and then put 01:01:273 (1) - to about x:256 y:28, pattern'll be much better imo
01:09:470 (3,1) - maybe the jump is bit large.. how about reducing the spacing of 01:09:142 (1,2,3) - a bit?

this diff's flow still can be better after this mods imo, my suggestions maybe can't help too much

in overall, the map is well done as a first map. feel free to call me back
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter

wcx19911123 wrote:

m4m here, sorry for the delay

[General]
you need to fix the code:
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
to
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",0,0
in all your diffs(either 0,0 or 1,1 is fine, but all diffs need to be the same and I recommend 0,0)
lead-in=2000 is enough, 3000 is unnecessary
offset=132(+6) is better to me

[scanter's Insane]
00:13:240 - same as 00:13:240 - in Hard diff yup
00:17:011 (6,1) - flow is bad when jump from 6 to 1.. maybe you can change the current pattern a bit here Ctrl + G number 1
00:34:716 (4,5) - ctrl+g, then the flow can be much better(don't forget to fix the hitsounds, too) kk~
00:38:158 (2,3) - how about putting 3 first and 2 later? adding a jump from 00:37:994 - to 00:38:158 - is a nice idea imo, and the flow also can be better(do ctrl+g on 00:39:142 (4,5) - if you think the later pattern is too hard to play) okay ~
01:00:945 (3,1) - this anti-jump plays bad to me, it doesn't fit the song well imo. my suggestion is to reduce the spacing of 01:00:617 (1,2,3) - a bit, and then put 01:01:273 (1) - to about x:256 y:28, pattern'll be much better imo fix like this.
01:09:470 (3,1) - maybe the jump is bit large.. how about reducing the spacing of 01:09:142 (1,2,3) - a bit? Ctrl + G each number 1,2,3,4. like this.

this diff's flow still can be better after this mods imo, my suggestions maybe can't help too much nope you're best thanks so much ヾ(*>﹏<)ﾉﾞ

in overall, the map is well done as a first map. feel free to call me back
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 3000
PreviewTime: 51273
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Open Canvas (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Artist:Kana Asumi
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:-iCo-
Version:scanter's Insane
Source:Hidamari Sketch
Tags:Opening HabiHolic Scanter
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Totoro
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Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Totoro

wcx19911123 wrote:

m4m here, sorry for the delay

[General]
you need to fix the code:
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
to
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",0,0
in all your diffs(either 0,0 or 1,1 is fine, but all diffs need to be the same and I recommend 0,0) fixed
lead-in=2000 is enough, 3000 is unnecessaryfixed :)
offset=132(+6) is better to mesure

[Easy]
I suggest AR+1, 2 is a bit slow..okay
00:20:781 (4) - put it 1 gird left(ctrl+1)? make it on line, looks betterokay

kinda nice diff Thanks :O

[Normal]
00:23:732 (1) - I highly suggest you to change it into 1 1/2 slider and 1 1/2 repeat slider, instead of the current one. a short sliders with too much repeating times is confusing to read in a Normal difffixed

this diff's rhyme is a bit boring imo:P

[HaHoHard]
00:13:240 - how about adding a circle with finish here, and start the spinner later? will fit the song much better imo
00:22:257 (6) - how about ending this slider at 00:22:585 - , and change 00:22:585 (7) - to a circle at 00:22:748 - ? will follow vocal much better imo
00:42:585 (2) - why not change it to a circle and a slider? a 1/1 slider doesn't fit the vocal too much imo
00:47:339 - same as 00:13:240 -Everything Fixed

a Hard diff with no jumps, maybe it's a bit to play..:X

this diff's flow still can be better after this mods imo, my suggestions maybe can't help too muchIt helped a lot. Thank you!

in overall, the map is well done as a first map. feel free to call me back
Thunderstorm
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Thunderstorm
Hey! You're welcomed by Thunderstorm's modding system v 220708000...2! :D

Some suggestions

[Easy]
00:28:984 (5) - swap new combo w/ 00:29:312 (1) - ?
00:59:148 (1) - that slider sounds strange. Try to decrease it 1/2 and see if it'll work

[Normal]
AR -1?
Can't really find anything

[HaHoHard]
00:15:869 (1,2) - is this overlap is really needed?
00:47:509 - I'd suggest to deal something w/ that spinner spam
Spacing feels a bit strange. But okay.

[scanter's Insane]
00:09:312 (1,2,3) stack it properly under each other
00:31:607 (1-) - I'd suggest to do not use that HUGE spacing in streams
00:48:656 - spinner spam again
I really don't see any point to map fast songs w/ that amount of spacing breaks, but okay

Rest seems fine
scanter
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