Hello, sorry for little delay
[General]
- Kiiwa diff have unsnapped stuff
- Resize background? Current one looks not so good :\
- I found in folder soft-hitclap-old1.wav, is it plain to be used?
- Can you put at least at creators wors who did what part in confession diff? :\
[Confession]
*Honestly i think AR 9 will fits more here and makes a lot of patterns and spaced parts like 00:07:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - more readable.
*If you will aplly my AR suggestion raise OD to 8 to keep settings balanced. If not, set 7 at least please, it really feels too easy for now.
- 00:07:231 (4) - IMO this note looks a bit confusing, i suggest you move it to 00:07:004 - and add note at 00:07:345 - instead for better rhytm:
- 00:02:117 (1,2) - I'd suggest make perfect blanket here
- 00:12:117 (6) - new combo follow pattern?
- 00:18:708 (1) - this slider should be 1/6, not 1/8
- 00:34:845 (1) - add finish?
- 00:49:390 (2) - add finish to beginning of slider
- 01:16:663 (1) - add finish
- 01:34:845 (1) - ^
- 01:49:390 (1) - (to beginning of slider)
- 02:07:117 (4) - nazi: move last anchor point to x120 y300 to prevent self-overlapping on slider
- 02:12:913 (7) - finish to the end of slider
- 02:29:390 (1) - why you suddenly breaks your whistle-pattern here? add clap instead whistle?
- 02:29:845 (1,1) - - Both new combos totally unnesessary. If you set them to emphazire velocity changes remove them; intuition should be enough here, and those sliders already too short to make combobreak on them in any case.
- 02:46:057 (1,1) - Honestly bugged me. This 1/3 rhytm is really very hard to notice in first try (especially with AR 8), i personally recommend stack them to make this more readable.
- 03:14:390 (1) - nazi: move last anchor point to x320 y100 to prevent self-overlapping on slider
- 03:15:526 (5) - new combo follow pattern?
[Kiiwa]
*Rename to Kiiwa's Hard maybe? I thought it was insane due to diff name
*I really dont see any point to have tickrate 2 here. 1 fits much better for me
*Your patterns really hard to read with AR 7, and you used very short spinners in some parts. Try to use AR 8, it will make your diff much more readable
*OD 5 is really too easy for a Hard diff, raise to 7 instead.
- 00:01:663 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really dont like your rhytm here, try something like this instead?
- 00:04:617 (1) - New combo here totally unnesessary
- 00:07:572 (1,2) - Same, why good 1/3 rhytm completely ignored? Try this:
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note: change (6) to 1/8 if you want, it will fit music more. i used 1/4 because it not supposed to be hardest diff here
- 00:09:390 (1) - nazi: move first anchor point to x:200 y:184 to make perfect blanket here
- 00:11:436 (2) - +1 repeat on slider will fit music better
- 00:18:708 (4) - ^
- 00:27:572 (1,3,4) - this "circle" doned by sliders can be done more perfect
- 00:34:390 (6) - finish to the end of slider
- 00:41:208 (1) - i never was fan of ugly self-overlapping sliders like this >_>
- 00:47:345 - add note here?
- 01:16:663 - You can add here spinner instead of note following vocal, what will more fit the song here imo.
- 01:34:845 (1) - add finish here
- 01:45:754 (1) - ugly slider >_>
- 01:49:163 - add note here?
- 02:16:663 (5) - ;___;
- 02:48:481 (2) - delete reverse, end this slider at 02:48:936 - and add note at 02:49:163 - to follow music more
- 03:07:117 (3,1,2) - spacing. also pretty ugly overlap
- 03:20:526 (4) - +1 repeat on slider will fit music better
- 03:25:754 (1) - change form of slider please >_>
- 03:27:799 (2) - +1 repeat on slider will fit music better
- 03:33:026 (1) - There is no any point to spin at all, but if you want to keep this you should start spinner at 03:33:026 (1) - to follow music more
[Normal]
*Suddenly AR 6. Feels a bit fast for me, maybe reduse to 5?
*
lol same SV as Kiiwa- 00:23:254 (4,5) - Uh, maybe change to 1/2 slider here? Feels a bit too challeging for a normal diff
- 00:26:890 (4) - add whistle to the end of slider?
- 00:29:390 (5) - ^
- 00:34:845 (1) - finish to the beginning of slider
- 00:49:390 (1) - add finish
- 00:58:708 (1) - uhh imo a bit too confusing slider for a normal diff, make it less self-overlapping please
- 01:43:026 (3) - add finish to beginning of slider for consistency?
- 01:49:390 (6) - add finish
[Easy]
- 00:01:663 (2) - add whistle maybe?
- 00:03:481 (1) - (to the beginning of slider)
- 00:25:754 (3) - ^ (to the end of slider)
- 00:29:390 (1) - ^ (to reverse)
- 00:34:845 (1) - add finish
- 01:34:845 (1) - ^
- 01:49:390 (1) - finish instead of whistle
- 01:50:299 (2) - add whistle?
- 02:23:936 (1) - ^ (to the end of slider)
- 02:51:208 (4) - ^ (to reverse)
Awesome map, starred. Good luck :3
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