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10crystalmask01
Hello ^^ random mod!

[Easy]
00:02:305 - Add a note here for consistency (like with 00:04:020 (3) - )
01:09:162- ^
01:18:162 (1,3) - Either stack properly, or move the slider away from the previous hit circle.

Looks okay :P

[Normal]
  1. AR +2
00:04:448 (1,1) - Seems to form a pretty dull flow imo. :(
00:07:877 (5) - NC
00:15:805 (5) - ^
00:50:734 (3) - First object appearing in Kai time should always be NC
00:54:162 (5) - NC
01:07:877 (5) - ^
01:14:734 (4) - ^

Hmm also looks okay, but the flow is still questionable :S

[Hard]
00:11:091 (6) - Is badly overlapped, placing it under the tail of 00:10:448 (4) - may look better.
00:50:734 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:16:448 (1) - ^

[Shore]
00:14:734 (1,2) - Not a pretty overlap, please fix.
00:35:305 (1) - Add finish
00:50:734 (1) - ^ On the head.
Hope this helps~! ^^
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hello ^^ random mod!

[Easy]
00:02:305 - Add a note here for consistency (like with 00:04:020 (3) - ) fix
01:09:162- ^ fix
01:18:162 (1,3) - Either stack properly, or move the slider away from the previous hit circle. fix

Looks okay :P

[Normal]
  1. AR +2
fix
00:04:448 (1,1) - Seems to form a pretty dull flow imo. :( oh...but i don't think so
00:07:877 (5) - NC
00:15:805 (5) - ^
00:50:734 (3) - First object appearing in Kai time should always be NC
00:54:162 (5) - NC
01:07:877 (5) - ^
01:14:734 (4) - ^

Fix all Nc

Hmm also looks okay, but the flow is still questionable :S emmm,i will try to change it

[Hard]
00:11:091 (6) - Is badly overlapped, placing it under the tail of 00:10:448 (4) - may look better. is deliberately
00:50:734 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:16:448 (1) - ^

[Shore]
00:14:734 (1,2) - Not a pretty overlap, please fix. fix
00:35:305 (1) - Add finish fix
00:50:734 (1) - ^ On the head.
fix
Hope this helps~! ^^
Thank you
happy623
:roll:
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

happy623 wrote:

:roll:
:D
Hollow Wings
as ur req
看了那段话,涨了姿势。不过我对鬼畜不是太了解,洗脑什么的我已经过了听这种时期了orz
Shore
01:03:590 (1,2) - 完全重叠unrankble
00:07:877 (3) - nc吧
00:22:020 (2,3,4,5,6) - 其实这段感觉和全图的style稍有不同,我的建议是把3放到4水平面以上的位置,否则钝角什么的很难的啦orz
00:27:377 (5) - 这个我建议不stack,放在之前那串stack的上面,跳下来接6,改的话ds调整一下
01:14:734 (1,2,3) - 因为前后都充斥着1/4的滑条间隙,所以建议这三个滑条之间的间距再大一点

挺好的
Hard
00:08:520 (4,5,6) - 果然56的ds还要再大一点才好,否则6直接nc
00:50:091 (3) - 这个flow略蛋疼,还不如stack在1的头上
01:18:162 (1,2) - 虽然来这么一出也没啥问题啦,不过不统一么

有个长串对hard来说非常难,对稳定要求很高,即使od很低
Normal
00:16:448 (2) - 这个finish音太吵了,去掉
00:31:020 (1) - 同上

老实说finish都下在意想不到的地方。。。虽然其他地方听着也还好
Easy
00:58:448 (2,3) - 似乎blanket 差了很多

这个diff是clap感觉好乱,有些是24白线有些是13白线。。。对于低难度感觉音效不要搞得太复杂比较好
音多图也好做。。。嗯

good luck
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Hollow Wings wrote:

as ur req
看了那段话,涨了姿势。不过我对鬼畜不是太了解,洗脑什么的我已经过了听这种时期了orz
Shore
01:03:590 (1,2) - 完全重叠unrankble 不明,这里哪里叠了...
00:07:877 (3) - nc吧 改掉了那个kick滑条,不nc
00:22:020 (2,3,4,5,6) - 其实这段感觉和全图的style稍有不同,我的建议是把3放到4水平面以上的位置,否则钝角什么的很难的啦orz 改了一下
00:27:377 (5) - 这个我建议不stack,放在之前那串stack的上面,跳下来接6,改的话ds调整一下 fix
01:14:734 (1,2,3) - 因为前后都充斥着1/4的滑条间隙,所以建议这三个滑条之间的间距再大一点 fix

挺好的
Hard
00:08:520 (4,5,6) - 果然56的ds还要再大一点才好,否则6直接nc 不明,这里统一间距就好...
00:50:091 (3) - 这个flow略蛋疼,还不如stack在1的头上 改了,但没按照你说的改
01:18:162 (1,2) - 虽然来这么一出也没啥问题啦,不过不统一么 不了

有个长串对hard来说非常难,对稳定要求很高,即使od很低
Normal
00:16:448 (2) - 这个finish音太吵了,去掉 fix
00:31:020 (1) - 同上 fix

老实说finish都下在意想不到的地方。。。虽然其他地方听着也还好
Easy
00:58:448 (2,3) - 似乎blanket 差了很多 fix

这个diff是clap感觉好乱,有些是24白线有些是13白线。。。对于低难度感觉音效不要搞得太复杂比较好 修了一下
音多图也好做。。。嗯

good luck
你说的那个unrank梗我有空去问问BAT好了,Thank you
Hollow Wings

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Shore]01:03:590 (1,2) - 完全重叠unrankble 不明,这里哪里叠了... 我下载的时候发现这里一根白线上有两个note,aimod报错是error,更新后发现没了。。。所以急别在意了。。。
[Hard]00:08:520 (4,5,6) - 果然56的ds还要再大一点才好,否则6直接nc 不明,这里统一间距就好...
00:08:305 (3,4,5,6) - 345是个变ds跳,到了56ds没差多少却隔了1拍,柑橘不科学,所以还是建议改
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Hollow Wings wrote:

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Shore]01:03:590 (1,2) - 完全重叠unrankble 不明,这里哪里叠了... 我下载的时候发现这里一根白线上有两个note,aimod报错是error,更新后发现没了。。。所以急别在意了。。。 好的
[Hard]00:08:520 (4,5,6) - 果然56的ds还要再大一点才好,否则6直接nc 不明,这里统一间距就好...
00:08:305 (3,4,5,6) - 345是个变ds跳,到了56ds没差多少却隔了1拍,柑橘不科学,所以还是建议改 嗯......我打起来感觉还不错,如果还有人说的话那就改吧
thx
Awaken
莫得服软哟瑞可月斯特 拉一唔啊按了

翻译:Mod From your request 来晚了

吔屎啦 梁非凡

  • [General]
  1. 标题中with的w可以小写吧 我记得osu里面的介词开头都是小写

    [Shore]
  2. 00:09:162 (8) - 和00:07:662 (2)blanket?
  3. 00:22:662 (4,5) - 感觉ctrl+g比较爽
  4. 00:31:448 (4) - 改成三连
  5. 00:40:662 (2) 00:39:377 (1) - 这两个的滑条轨迹没弄好啊
  6. 01:04:448 (1,2) - 试试ctrl+g?
  7. 01:24:162 (4) - 我菊得这个滑条应该结束在01:24:591 重音也在这里诶;w;

    [Hard]
  8. 00:16:448 (1,5) - stack好
  9. 00:50:734 (1,2,3) - 打起来不怎么舒服啊这种梗 2和3缩小一点间距然后往右边移一点?
  10. 00:56:305 add a circle
  11. 00:57:162 ^
  12. 01:02:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我曰 这真的是hard? 后面蓝色那串改折返滑条好点
  13. 01:20:305 (2) - 这个跟前面的一样吧 ctrl+g
  14. 01:24:591 跟insane一样

    [Normal]
  15. 01:24:591 同样

    [Easy]
  16. 01:24:591 同样
Good Luck
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Awaken wrote:

莫得服软哟瑞可月斯特 拉一唔啊按了

翻译:Mod From your request 来晚了

吔屎啦 梁非凡 :o

  • [General]
  1. 标题中with的w可以小写吧 我记得osu里面的介词开头都是小写 我看看

    [Shore]
  2. 00:09:162 (8) - 和00:07:662 (2)blanket? fix
  3. 00:22:662 (4,5) - 感觉ctrl+g比较爽 no
  4. 00:31:448 (4) - 改成三连 fix
  5. 00:40:662 (2) 00:39:377 (1) - 这两个的滑条轨迹没弄好啊 怎样才算弄好..
  6. 01:04:448 (1,2) - 试试ctrl+g? fix
  7. 01:24:162 (4) - 我菊得这个滑条应该结束在01:24:591 重音也在这里诶;w; 你仔细听

    [Hard]
  8. 00:16:448 (1,5) - stack好 fix
  9. 00:50:734 (1,2,3) - 打起来不怎么舒服啊这种梗 2和3缩小一点间距然后往右边移一点? 我觉得还好
  10. 00:56:305 add a circle fix
  11. 00:57:162 ^ fix
  12. 01:02:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我曰 这真的是hard? 后面蓝色那串改折返滑条好点 看看BAT怎么说
  13. 01:20:305 (2) - 这个跟前面的一样吧 不了
  14. 01:24:591 跟insane一样 和insane答复一样,低难度也是

    [Normal]
  15. 01:24:591 同样

    [Easy]
  16. 01:24:591 同样
Good Luck
Thank you
EmingK
Hi ._.

专注蠢mod三十年

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.
Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore
[General]
Combo color #2和#3太像了,建议改一下或者不要放在一起所以各diff颜色不一样是要干啥

[Easy]
00:16:234 (2) - 柑橘不善良,白线起折返?

[Normal]
00:04:448 (1,1,1) - 太弯了看起来不好看 尤其是组合起来
00:17:520 (3,4) - (3)和(4)的开头各加一个clap怎么样
00:31:020 (1,2) - 互换NC

[Hard]
00:16:448 (1,5) - #不stack好会死星人#fixed
00:40:448 (1,2) - ^
00:49:448 (1,2,3,4) - 四边形梗歪了
01:02:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ……敢不敢更善良;w;
00:35:305 (1,2,3) - 要不要像后面几小节一样加上clap

[Shore]
柑橘这种速度的in怎么做都善良啊,怎么摆都不觉得奇怪
00:55:877 (1) - 柑橘弯得有点大,试试这个(QAQ我也不会拉)
SPOILER
392,70,55877,6,0,P|443:87|461:137,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:56:734 (1) - ^对称

最后祝你身体健康
1PSA
抱歉,迟来的mod。嘛~中午有事所以就出去了
啊啊后悔出去了,结果一回来发现这么多人mod,抢了我的mod :(
以下渣mod请随意忽略!
0.0
[Shore]
  1. 00:05:091 (3) - 我比较喜欢不让它有重叠,比如这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1019125
  2. 00:05:948 (3) - ^
  3. 00:08:305 (4) - 我比较喜欢让它和00:06:805 (3) 重合
  4. 00:10:234 (5) - 我喜欢让它和00:07:662 (2) 重合
  5. 00:09:591 (1) - 如果要改00:08:305 (4) 的话这里也要动?
  6. 00:26:734 (1,2,5) - 目测间距不等?好吧可能是我的错觉
  7. 00:43:877 (1,2,3) - 这里你是否要和00:44:520 (4,5,6,7,8,9) 一样弄成直线?还是我的错觉?好吧看到后面有许多这个样子的也许这里没问题,但是我更喜欢在这里用直线
  8. 01:09:162 (7) - 包好会更好?
  9. 01:12:805 (8,1) - 我比较喜欢它和01:11:948 (3,4) 平行?
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:162 (3) - 是不是没包好?
  2. 00:08:305 (3) - ^
  3. 00:07:020 (1,1,2,3) - 这一堆有好多遮挡虽然不是unrankble但我觉得有些不美观?
  4. 00:23:734 (4) - 没和00:23:305 (3) 在同一直线?稍微偏了一点吧
  5. 00:31:020 (2) - 其实这里也感觉没包好?
  6. 00:49:448 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里弄成这样如何?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1019163
  7. 01:00:377 (7,8,9) - 这里和00:58:877 (7) 重合如何?目测偏了一格
  8. 01:14:734 (1) - 这里包住01:13:877 (2) 的尾巴如何?
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:448 (1,1,1,2) - 感觉不太美观 我觉得normal不适合slider弯的很大?
没了。本来就不怎么会mod的说
[Easy]
  1. 00:16:234 (2) - 我觉得这个会坑到新人把?
  2. 01:11:305 (1) - 与01:09:162 (3) 包住如何?
以上~
渣渣mod只会挑这些。上面纯属个人意见,请随意忽略
Koiyuki
From your request

[General]
combo color 2和3的颜色差不多,辨识度不高,最好改一下

[Easy]
00:43:877 (4,5,1,2) - 改一下?
00:52:448 (2,3) - 听了节奏觉得还是改成这样好
00:59:305 (3,4) - ^
01:06:162 (2,3) - ^

[Normal]
00:07:020 (2) - nc?
00:33:591 (6) - 觉得还是移出去的好

[Hard]
01:02:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - wpcap这是hard?
丧心病狂的hard,小跳多,三连多,还有一长串,不过别的倒是没啥问题我觉着

[Shore]
先找细节
00:11:305 (1) - 没包好前面的9
00:32:305 (2) - 2没包好1
00:32:734 (3) - 3没包好2
00:46:448 (5) - 5没包好3
————
00:58:448 (6) - 移出来?
01:08:734 (4) - ^
01:13:877 (2) - ctrl+g?

我太弱了 所以easy mod
good luck with 鬼畜~
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

EmingK wrote:

Hi ._.

专注蠢mod三十年

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.
Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore
[General]
Combo color #2和#3太像了,建议改一下或者不要放在一起所以各diff颜色不一样是要干啥 好,我去改掉

[Easy]
00:16:234 (2) - 柑橘不善良,白线起折返? orz,这不就是点一下的事么...

[Normal]
00:04:448 (1,1,1) - 太弯了看起来不好看 尤其是组合起来 改了前两个
00:17:520 (3,4) - (3)和(4)的开头各加一个clap怎么样 有点唐突,稍微改了下
00:31:020 (1,2) - 互换NC fix

[Hard]
00:16:448 (1,5) - #不stack好会死星人#fixed
00:40:448 (1,2) - ^ fix
00:49:448 (1,2,3,4) - 四边形梗歪了 fix,因为是手动随便排的
01:02:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ……敢不敢更善良;w; 留着坑人
00:35:305 (1,2,3) - 要不要像后面几小节一样加上clap fix

[Shore]
柑橘这种速度的in怎么做都善良啊,怎么摆都不觉得奇怪
00:55:877 (1) - 柑橘弯得有点大,试试这个(QAQ我也不会拉)
SPOILER
392,70,55877,6,0,P|443:87|461:137,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:56:734 (1) - ^对称
fix

最后祝你身体健康 好好好,你也是
Thank you!
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

1PSA wrote:

抱歉,迟来的mod。嘛~中午有事所以就出去了
啊啊后悔出去了,结果一回来发现这么多人mod,抢了我的mod :(
以下渣mod请随意忽略!
0.0
[Shore]
  1. 00:05:091 (3) - 我比较喜欢不让它有重叠,比如这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1019125 fix
  2. 00:05:948 (3) - ^ fix
  3. 00:08:305 (4) - 我比较喜欢让它和00:06:805 (3) 重合 这是和后面的note重合的...
  4. 00:10:234 (5) - 我喜欢让它和00:07:662 (2) 重合 fix
  5. 00:09:591 (1) - 如果要改00:08:305 (4) 的话这里也要动? 你没发现前面说的那里是和这个重叠的ma....
  6. 00:26:734 (1,2,5) - 目测间距不等?好吧可能是我的错觉 fix,的确不等,这种梗你直接看5的间距就知道了
  7. 00:43:877 (1,2,3) - 这里你是否要和00:44:520 (4,5,6,7,8,9) 一样弄成直线?还是我的错觉?好吧看到后面有许多这个样子的也许这里没问题,但是我更喜欢在这里用直线 no,我当初是想kiaitime全直线,其他地方用弯曲
  8. 01:09:162 (7) - 包好会更好? fix
  9. 01:12:805 (8,1) - 我比较喜欢它和01:11:948 (3,4) 平行? fix
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:162 (3) - 是不是没包好? fix
  2. 00:08:305 (3) - ^ fix
  3. 00:07:020 (1,1,2,3) - 这一堆有好多遮挡虽然不是unrankble但我觉得有些不美观? 我觉得没问题
  4. 00:23:734 (4) - 没和00:23:305 (3) 在同一直线?稍微偏了一点吧 fix
  5. 00:31:020 (2) - 其实这里也感觉没包好? 这个没问题啦
  6. 00:49:448 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里弄成这样如何?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1019163 fix
  7. 01:00:377 (7,8,9) - 这里和00:58:877 (7) 重合如何?目测偏了一格 fix
  8. 01:14:734 (1) - 这里包住01:13:877 (2) 的尾巴如何?我改了点,但只包了一半
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:448 (1,1,1,2) - 感觉不太美观 我觉得normal不适合slider弯的很大?嗯我改掉了
没了。本来就不怎么会mod的说
[Easy]
  1. 00:16:234 (2) - 我觉得这个会坑到新人把? 我觉得没问题
  2. 01:11:305 (1) - 与01:09:162 (3) 包住如何? fix
以上~
渣渣mod只会挑这些。上面纯属个人意见,请随意忽略
基本都改了,Thank you
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From your request

[General]
combo color 2和3的颜色差不多,辨识度不高,最好改一下 fix

[Easy]
00:43:877 (4,5,1,2) - 改一下? 改了一半
00:52:448 (2,3) - 听了节奏觉得还是改成这样好 我这段跟的是德国boy那里,不想改,下面同理
00:59:305 (3,4) - ^
01:06:162 (2,3) - ^

[Normal]
00:07:020 (2) - nc? fix
00:33:591 (6) - 觉得还是移出去的好 暂时保留,到时候看BAT怎么说

[Hard]
01:02:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - wpcap这是hard?
丧心病狂的hard,小跳多,三连多,还有一长串,不过别的倒是没啥问题我觉着

[Shore]
先找细节
00:11:305 (1) - 没包好前面的9 这个我觉得无所谓...稍微改了点
00:32:305 (2) - 2没包好1 fix
00:32:734 (3) - 3没包好2 fix
00:46:448 (5) - 5没包好3 fix
————
00:58:448 (6) - 移出来? no
01:08:734 (4) - ^ no
01:13:877 (2) - ctrl+g? 改了感觉后面的连打接不顺,我又懒改连打所以....

我太弱了 所以easy mod
good luck with 鬼畜~
好,Thank you
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore
@sjoy 你给我的音效我觉得有点小声,而且不太懂怎么运用所以就没采用,不过还是谢谢啦
pw384
其实我觉得Artist应该是Bilibili.tv
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

384059043 wrote:

其实我觉得Artist应该是Bilibili.tv
bilibili是一家弹幕站点,大家可以在这里找到许多的欢乐.... 关于哔哩哔哩动画 资源免责申明 获取帮助 弹幕测试 | 高级弹幕 全站使用说明 常见问题(FAQ) 建议和...
嗯....我觉得还是用动画比较好
liangv587
好评
Banana
君をのせて joe hisaishi之类的加到tag里面吧 我懒得复制了(
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

S o a p wrote:

我还是不想把整首歌听完【
[insane]
00:04:390 (1,2,3,1,2) - 好像能跳一下 no
00:08:247 (4,1,6) - x324 y176 no
01:06:104 (1) - 往下放点吧,顶到天上去了 fix
01:11:890 (3,4) - 这个3放在这儿有点奇怪 no
01:21:854 (2) - ctrl+G? no
00:49:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - 听几遍会觉得有lag no
几个连打间距不一样大丈夫吗 no

[hard]
00:09:104 (6) - 有点奇怪,前后两根红线都有音诶 no,跟的是人声
00:27:962 (5,1) - 是不是离太近了 no

[normal]
01:21:533 (1,2,3) - 你既然开头这儿搞了3个NC那这里也搞个好了 fix

[easy]
00:02:247 (3) - x410 y202 no
00:04:390 (1) - 这么明显的音还是不要放转盘比较好... no
01:00:962 (1) - 往上放,这在地平线以下了吧 fix
01:06:104 (2) - 没包好还是故意的0 0 no
01:07:176 (3) - 之前都跟着音乐那个『嘘』下的节奏,所以放到01:06:962 - no
01:21:533 (1) - 这么明显的音还是不要放转盘比较好... no

草怎么EZ摸出这么多,我猜你肯定是偷懒了 :oops: nonono
好我随一改,thankyou
Fycho
Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[general]

  • 敢用个分辨率大点的背景吗?500x341越看越蛋疼啊,用PS拉到1366或者1024,或者干脆换张背景吧233
    有视频的话把letterbox去掉,不管有没有break time
    Romanised title:Jin Ke La Yu Ni Tong Zai
    Audio preview time is inconsistent

[Shore]

  • 00:04:390 (1,2) –间距突然大了打的时候坑了下
    00:06:104 (1,2,3) –放一个三角啊
    00:07:819 (3) –stack有点中止flow
    00:13:390 (2) –试试这种节奏,http://puu.sh/4Lz9K.jpg1/4比串子有趣
    00:19:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –两个圆弧曲率半斤一样?
    00:22:390 (3,4,5,6) –note走势有点单一,建议这样?http://puu.sh/4LzdC.jpg这个有点nazi
    00:24:104 (5,6) –如果上面一个改了,这两个滑条分别转向flow会顺,而且00:23:890 (3,4,5) –要往左摆点
    00:25:604 (3,4) –stack打起来不舒服
    00:30:104 (1) –我觉得这样打起来顺http://puu.sh/4LzhJ.jpg
    00:31:390 (4,5,6) –这样 http://puu.sh/4LzjN.jpg flow好
    00:37:604 (4,5) –这两个可以叠3下面去,不然我觉得难读图,而且可以用manual stack体现停顿感
    00:38:033 (5,6,7,1) –间距太小,建议和00:36:104 (2,3) –一样
    00:43:390 (6)-这个还是改成1/2好点,再在蓝线上加note
    00:48:962 (1) –这里柑橘没必要加速啊,也没什么特别的音
    00:50:247 (5) –这个倒可以加速
    00:52:176 (8,1) –stack不好
    00:58:604 (7) –NC?便于读图
    01:06:104 (1,2) –我建议使用倾向于有点变化的节奏,试试这个http://puu.sh/4LzwH.jpg和01:07:819 (1,2,3) –不一样
    01:09:533 (1,2) –前面的1/4都摆那么小,这个太大了吧
    01:14:140 –这里那个乐器的音,强烈推荐别忽略,因为你之前都跟了,而且这里这个应该主跟这个,而其他那些鼓可以忽略掉,建议http://puu.sh/4LzDN.jpg
    01:19:604 (9,1) –别stack,或者如果你想stack,可以01:19:712 –加圈做triplet
    01:23:033 (6) –Crtl+G,因为你前面flow都是过来的,这个别顺着绕,而且位置也别变,正好给01:23:247 (1) –来个跳

[Hard]

  • 00:29:462 (6) –是要保全音效跟鼓点还是跟人声,撒。。。抉择吧
    00:34:390 (5) –这个稍微水平点,例如http://puu.sh/4LzSO.jpg
    00:44:890 (6,1) –离远点,不仅overlap的不好看还容易读成1/4
    00:48:962 (1) –同insane,而且这个是hard,这样来加速略难
    00:50:247 (5) –而且,你之前那个加速,这个也加速比较好
    01:07:819 (1,2) –这个也建议别顺着,像这个一样01:06:533 (2) -,反过来放2,突出人声
    01:09:533 (1) –试试这样放http://puu.sh/4LA2A.jpg
    01:11:247 (1) –这样摆,不然hard读图难,http://puu.sh/4LA5y.jpg
    01:12:962 (1) –这个位置,http://puu.sh/4LA8Y.jpg
    01:21:533 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) –hard这样略坑,换成3/2滑条试试

[Normal]

  • 00:05:247 (1,1) –去掉nc,这里有点NC spam
    00:22:176 (1,2,3,4) –这里节奏有点复杂,对于normal,这样http://puu.sh/4LAge.jpg简单的跟音乐就行了,别去刻意跟人声(对于整个diff适用)
    00:40:390 (2,3,4,5) –这里把那个乐器全跟了,对于有点难,看起来不干净,因为你这里00:36:104 (1,2,1) –下的很稀
    01:04:819 –add note保持节奏完整,而且不会离转盘太近,因为你这00:21:962 (1) –加了
    01:18:962 (1) -1/1 slider fits the music much better
    01:22:390 (1,1) –去NC

[Easy]

  • 00:02:247 (2,3) –新手不会读stack
    00:09:533 (3,1) –有点难看,别stack,overlap可以对称下
    00:23:247 (2) –折返箭头没音,音在这里00:24:104 –建议这样,http://puu.sh/4LABH.jpg
    00:28:390 (1) -^,不想一样的节奏可以换个节奏,不过那个音要跟
    00:30:104 (2,3) –对于EASY diff这样节奏有点乱啊,而且1/2的也偏难,如果你上一条改了可以试试这个节奏, http://puu.sh/4LAF3.jpg
    00:52:390 (2) –延长到白线,然后00:53:462 (3) –改成一个在白线00:53:676 -的一个note
    00:55:819 (3,4,1) –太难
    01:05:247 (1,2) –blanket?
    01:06:962 –这里漏音
    01:11:247 (1,3) –难看,不对称,而且遮尾遮一半

你是抖M吗,居然说想被我喷,我又不是职业喷子实在喷不动
EDIT:代码修正
Sonnyc
[]
General:

-- Two "Gangnam Style" in tags.
[]
Easy:

00:02:247 (2) - lol What a massive jump. (or maybe (1) is misplaced)
00:23:247 (2) - I think this rhythm is awkward. Try something like 00:26:676 (3,4)
00:31:819 (4) - NC? It seems the combo is getting too long.
[]
Normal:

00:05:247 (1,1) - Imo, deleting NC will feel better.
00:47:247 (3) - Place at (332,340)? Current flow doesn't seems nice.
00:49:176 - Useless Timeline.
00:56:676 (2) - I think there is no reason to miss a Whistle at the start. Maybe a mistake?
01:22:390 (1,1) - SImilar here for NC.
[]
Hard:

-- OD6? Currently seems too low.

00:06:962 (1) - Well, didn't enjoyed this speed up. Maybe lowering the speed a bit would work better.
00:48:962 (1) - ^
00:50:033 (4) - Delete Whistle?
01:20:247 (2) - ctrl+G?

Felt a bit complexed as a Hard, but fine enough.
[]
Shore:

00:11:997 (4) - Deleting will feel better imo.
00:18:319 - Filling the blank would be better imo.
00:22:712 - Ehh,, unlike other patterns, why is here missing a note? A triplet will be nice on playing as other patterns.
00:31:497 (5) - Delete this, feels weird. A note rather fits at 00:31:283.
00:50:033 (4) - Delete Whistle?
01:17:783 (6,8) - Add Whistle?
01:22:390 (4) - NC?
01:23:033 (3) - Imo, this slider's flow wasn't that nice.
[]
Good luck~
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Fycho wrote:

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[general]

  • 敢用个分辨率大点的背景吗?500x341越看越蛋疼啊,用PS拉到1366或者1024,或者干脆换张背景吧233 啊我找不到更好的bg了....
    有视频的话把letterbox去掉,不管有没有break time
    Romanised title:Jin Ke La Yu Ni Tong Zai fix
    Audio preview time is inconsistent
    [/color]

[Shore]

  • 00:04:390 (1,2) –间距突然大了打的时候坑了下 不作改动
    00:06:104 (1,2,3) –放一个三角啊 我觉得这么放是为了突出停顿感,三角该怎么放...
    00:07:819 (3) –stack有点中止flow 这个不作改动
    00:13:390 (2) –试试这种节奏,http://puu.sh/4Lz9K.jpg1/4比串子有趣 我觉得这么放有点乱...
    00:19:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) –两个圆弧曲率半斤一样? 懒改
    00:22:390 (3,4,5,6) –note走势有点单一,建议这样?http://puu.sh/4LzdC.jpg这个有点nazi 改了,但没按你的改
    00:24:104 (5,6) –如果上面一个改了,这两个滑条分别转向flow会顺,而且00:23:890 (3,4,5) –要往左摆点 改了
    00:25:604 (3,4) –stack打起来不舒服 fix
    00:30:104 (1) –我觉得这样打起来顺http://puu.sh/4LzhJ.jpg fix
    00:31:390 (4,5,6) –这样 http://puu.sh/4LzjN.jpg flow好 打起来不太好,我改成别样了
    00:37:604 (4,5) –这两个可以叠3下面去,不然我觉得难读图,而且可以用manual stack体现停顿感 不做修改
    00:38:033 (5,6,7,1) –间距太小,建议和00:36:104 (2,3) –一样 ^
    00:43:390 (6)-这个还是改成1/2好点,再在蓝线上加note 我觉得现在这样没啥问题啊
    00:48:962 (1) –这里柑橘没必要加速啊,也没什么特别的音 突出Go
    00:50:247 (5) –这个倒可以加速 前面没改后面改了会唐突,所以不做修改
    00:52:176 (8,1) –stack不好 想不到怎么改,但还是改动了
    00:58:604 (7) –NC?便于读图 五颜六色我觉得才难读图
    01:06:104 (1,2) –我建议使用倾向于有点变化的节奏,试试这个http://puu.sh/4LzwH.jpg和01:07:819 (1,2,3) –不一样 不太想改成这样
    01:09:533 (1,2) –前面的1/4都摆那么小,这个太大了吧 fix
    01:14:140 –这里那个乐器的音,强烈推荐别忽略,因为你之前都跟了,而且这里这个应该主跟这个,而其他那些鼓可以忽略掉,建议http://puu.sh/4LzDN.jpg 不想这么跟...我加了一个note在01:13:712
    01:19:604 (9,1) –别stack,或者如果你想stack,可以01:19:712 –加圈做triplet 那就加
    01:23:033 (6) –Crtl+G,因为你前面flow都是过来的,这个别顺着绕,而且位置也别变,正好给01:23:247 (1) –来个跳 fix

[Hard]

  • 00:29:462 (6) –是要保全音效跟鼓点还是跟人声,撒。。。抉择吧 orz,我觉得现在挺好的
    00:34:390 (5) –这个稍微水平点,例如http://puu.sh/4LzSO.jpg fix
    00:44:890 (6,1) –离远点,不仅overlap的不好看还容易读成1/4 fix
    00:48:962 (1) –同insane,而且这个是hard,这样来加速略难 我主要想表达出那个Go.
    00:50:247 (5) –而且,你之前那个加速,这个也加速比较好 这里没Go(
    01:07:819 (1,2) –这个也建议别顺着,像这个一样01:06:533 (2) -,反过来放2,突出人声 我感觉这样挺好的
    01:09:533 (1) –试试这样放http://puu.sh/4LA2A.jpg fix
    01:11:247 (1) –这样摆,不然hard读图难,http://puu.sh/4LA5y.jpg fix
    01:12:962 (1) –这个位置,http://puu.sh/4LA8Y.jpg fix
    01:21:533 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) –hard这样略坑,换成3/2滑条试试 没问题的!

[Normal]

  • 00:05:247 (1,1) –去掉nc,这里有点NC spam fix
    00:22:176 (1,2,3,4) –这里节奏有点复杂,对于normal,这样http://puu.sh/4LAge.jpg简单的跟音乐就行了,别去刻意跟人声(对于整个diff适用) 我把后面的节奏改得和这样一样了
    00:40:390 (2,3,4,5) –这里把那个乐器全跟了,对于有点难,看起来不干净,因为你这里00:36:104 (1,2,1) –下的很稀
    01:04:819 –add note保持节奏完整,而且不会离转盘太近,因为你这00:21:962 (1) –加了 fix
    01:18:962 (1) -1/1 slider fits the music much better fix
    01:22:390 (1,1) –去NC fix

[Easy]

  • 00:02:247 (2,3) –新手不会读stack fix
    00:09:533 (3,1) –有点难看,别stack,overlap可以对称下 no
    00:23:247 (2) –折返箭头没音,音在这里00:24:104 –建议这样,http://puu.sh/4LABH.jpg fix
    00:28:390 (1) -^,不想一样的节奏可以换个节奏,不过那个音要跟 这个不改我觉得无所谓
    00:30:104 (2,3) –对于EASY diff这样节奏有点乱啊,而且1/2的也偏难,如果你上一条改了可以试试这个节奏, 上一条没改,sohttp://puu.sh/4LAF3.jpg
    00:52:390 (2) –延长到白线,然后00:53:462 (3) –改成一个在白线00:53:676 -的一个note no
    00:55:819 (3,4,1) –太难 拉远了
    01:05:247 (1,2) –blanket? no
    01:06:962 –这里漏音 保持这个节奏
    01:11:247 (1,3) –难看,不对称,而且遮尾遮一半 不改,就这样;-;

你是抖M吗,居然说想被我喷,我又不是职业喷子实在喷不动 haochangdemodaaaaaaaa
EDIT:代码修正
好长....好长....
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Sonnyc wrote:

[]
General:

-- Two "Gangnam Style" in tags. fix
[]
Easy:

00:02:247 (2) - lol What a massive jump. (or maybe (1) is misplaced) change
00:23:247 (2) - I think this rhythm is awkward. Try something like 00:26:676 (3,4) change
00:31:819 (4) - NC? It seems the combo is getting too long. ok,add
[]
Normal:

00:05:247 (1,1) - Imo, deleting NC will feel better. fix
00:47:247 (3) - Place at (332,340)? Current flow doesn't seems nice. fix
00:49:176 - Useless Timeline. delete
00:56:676 (2) - I think there is no reason to miss a Whistle at the start. Maybe a mistake? is mistake,add
01:22:390 (1,1) - SImilar here for NC. fix
[]
Hard:

-- OD6? Currently seems too low. fix

00:06:962 (1) - Well, didn't enjoyed this speed up. Maybe lowering the speed a bit would work better. i change this slider
00:48:962 (1) - ^ emm,no change
00:50:033 (4) - Delete Whistle? no change
01:20:247 (2) - ctrl+G? is not good in here :(...

Felt a bit complexed as a Hard, but fine enough. oh
[]
Shore:

00:11:997 (4) - Deleting will feel better imo. fix
00:18:319 - Filling the blank would be better imo. no change
00:22:712 - Ehh,, unlike other patterns, why is here missing a note? A triplet will be nice on playing as other patterns. fix
00:31:497 (5) - Delete this, feels weird. A note rather fits at 00:31:283. fix
00:50:033 (4) - Delete Whistle? no change
01:17:783 (6,8) - Add Whistle? i think add in 01:17:676 (5,7) - is better :3,fix
01:22:390 (4) - NC? fix
01:23:033 (3) - Imo, this slider's flow wasn't that nice. fix
[]
Good luck~
Thank you for your help :D
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

lkx_Shore wrote:

其实我翻了翻osu现在已经rank掉的国产鬼畜map,基本上都是这个up制作的。
然后我就想了想为什么这个up这么受mapper欢迎,而其他什么元首江南style一流的鬼畜视频则没有有人开坑制作。
我觉得所有的所有都可以总结到两个字上---质量
现在的鬼畜视频不迎合大众没人看,迎合大众的却质量低下。(当然也有迎合大众的质量不错的)
随便打开一个很红的鬼畜视频观看,我经常会发现up在调教过程根本没有认真把音一个个的对好/或者是把bpm算好。
这种随便的态度会让视频的质量变低,导致走音错音现象频出。
而osu做谱对音准是十分严格的,稍微有一个音不准都会让mapper觉得这不好受然后就不会开坑。
所以我希望各位做鬼畜/音MAD视频的作者不要急着发布出来,至少先把音调好,调准。
如果你急着发布出来的话,外行人看不出,内行人则会瞧不起你,我觉得这样的视频毫无意义。
所以做视频的时候细心是对自己负责,也是对他人的耳朵(?)负责。
感谢任何抽空看完这一段废话的人,并祝国产鬼畜走出低迷 2013/10/5
这位up主不去做音MAD吗
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

这位up主不去做音MAD吗
因为Lazy.
其实是下了个vegas发现手动做太麻烦,想找其他软件做但发现不知道哪搞
S o a p
怎么还没泡
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

S o a p wrote:

怎么还没泡
a
Awaken

S o a p wrote:

怎么还没泡
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Awaken wrote:

S o a p wrote:

怎么还没泡
等到任何一个BAT开始接站内信req而且不无视我的时候
happy623

S o a p wrote:

怎么还没泡
Fushimi Rio
Hi, delay request

[General]
真是脱线 不论是歌还是我耳机 于是mod不来 随便扯扯
01:18:104 - kiai到这里结束?前面摸那么多了看样子不到这里也没问题

[Easy]

00:11:247 (1,2) - 用和前面一样的节奏好一点 而且现在也压上3不好看
00:16:819 - 加note
00:31:819 (1) - slider比较舒服


[Normal]

00:06:962 (1,2) - 建议合成1个slider 毕竟是normal
01:11:247 (3) - nc


[Hard]

00:09:854 - 我觉得三连该下在这 这里也有音啊
00:24:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 5放在 x360 y144
00:42:533 (4,5) - 有点违和 只用一个slider就够了
00:49:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:53:462 (5) - x192 y264 顺便4的blanket下歪了(如果是blanket的话
01:15:962 (4) - 移开 不要叠着
01:20:247 (2,7) - 7压在2的尾巴上 顺一点
01:24:104 (1) - 用1.0,在最后扭一下?
[Shore]
真是鬼畜
00:04:390 (1,2,3,1,2) - 滑条尾巴的normalsample去掉 至少去掉第一个的
00:22:390 (3) - 就摆在2的方向上吧 反着拉一下感觉也不错
00:52:819 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏来点变化?
00:57:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 五连在后面下 这里还是用1+3舒服
01:19:604 (9,10,1) - 10去掉 9挪开 和后面一致

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video到kiai就挂了 估计要换一个吧
Irreversible


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Why do people send me weird songs? The weirdest thing tho is, I like the songs as well.

[General]

The background resolution seems really weird, suggested is 1024x768, even better would be 1366x768, so you should consider adding another one.

[Easy]

00:00:962 (1,2,3,4) - Well, one of the parts I don't like in the easy is simply the beginning, it has an odd flow to follow, if you ask me. http://puu.sh/59Gkc.jpg Why not trying something like this? I'm not sure if i'm right with that, but I guess it's easier to play for beginner player. Let me know what you think :P
00:16:819 - In my opinion, the beginner can't really tell when he has to click next, to make this a bit esaier, I suggest adding a circle here, so you have a constant rhythm.
00:30:104 (2) - http://puu.sh/59GuK.jpg Putting it like that can also help you to avoid a too complicate rhythm for an easy, and it still sounds good.
00:45:104 (5,1) - I suggest you not to use any stacks in an easy diff. They're hard to tell for a beginner, if he's really new to that game. Please try to space them properly. This goes to all your stacks.

Feedback:

Proper diff, but please get rid of those complicate patterns, they don't fit an easy that well!

[Normal]

Well, I'll just go directly to the 'feedback'-part here:

The diff seems solid as well, just as easy. The problem I see here tho is, that you've used a rather harder rhythm in the begin (00:04:390 (1) - here for example until 00:08:676 (3) - ), which doesn't fit the overall, you should try to keep it consistent, with deleting one or two circles, and unstack some. But here, you can leave some stackings as well, just not all! They should be used well, and not overused. I hope you get my point, please don't hesitate asking me if not.

[Hard]

00:06:962 (1) - I'm a bit worried about this slider, according to the new rule it might not be unrankable, yet i'd like you to use a simpler slidershape, since it's barely seenable.

00:58:390 (5,6,7) - Align them properly, to avoid an untidy look
01:02:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Mh well, since the normal didn't really use 1/4, I think it'd be better if you put 1/4 sliders instead of that stream, so you'd get a better spread, with the density etc.
01:03:533 (1,2,1) - Watch the spacing, untidy look avoidance :P
01:15:533 (3,4) - This is weird, normally you have a 1/4 pattern stacked (f.e. 01:07:819 (1,2) - ) and here not. You should keep consistency over all of those, this means either all 1/4 patterns are unstacked, or stacked, and the other one goes to the 1/2 patterns then (with slider -> slider , circle -> circle)

The diff has a really interesting flow! I like it. Please have an eye on the consistency on this map.

[Insane]

00:09:962 (4,5,6,7) - That spacing is weird, nothing in the song is calling for it, but if you want to keep the jump, you could just use the same DS, but higher, so it looks a bit better imo.
00:15:533 (3,4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/59Hg6.jpg What do you think of this spacing here? It gives the transition from 2->3 a better flow.
00:29:462 (7,8,9) - Mh, I prefer a slight curve here, as well to get a better transition between 00:29:676 (9,10) - this time. http://puu.sh/59HjA.jpg
01:05:140 (4) - Just some nazi, try 105 142, looks a bit better (I know, that's a bad reason, but I can't really explain it - just deny if you don't like it!)
01:21:533 (1,2) - I think you can improve this blanket here.
00:22:390 (3,4,5,6) - I guess this pattern is really not well readable, if you're in a rush while playing it you will just miss and you're most probably going
to be like: what just happened? You should get another place for 3, or for the triplet.
00:27:319 (5) - Same here as above
00:31:176 (3,4,5) - And same as above, they're really hidden, it doesn't feel too good, and kills the flow in some ways.
00:48:962 (1) - Mh.. I'm unsure about this sudden speedup, you should try 1.3 or somethin, 1.5 is definetly too fast and confuses people too easily.
00:06:962 (1) - Same here!

Feedback:

The insane was enjoyable, sometimes the flow seems a bit broken, and the things are too hidden. It would be really cool if you could think about it! Let me know what you think by the way.

[Overall]

The mapset was rather good, the spread can be improved (pointed up suggestions), I'm sure this is on the right way, that why I'm leaving the star icon for now. Good luck, and try to get some more mods!
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Eggache0 wrote:

Hi, delay request

[General]
真是脱线 不论是歌还是我耳机 于是mod不来 随便扯扯
01:18:104 - kiai到这里结束?前面摸那么多了看样子不到这里也没问题 ok

[Easy]

00:11:247 (1,2) - 用和前面一样的节奏好一点 而且现在也压上3不好看 我觉得还好
00:16:819 - 加note fix
00:31:819 (1) - slider比较舒服 fix


[Normal]

00:06:962 (1,2) - 建议合成1个slider 毕竟是normal fix
01:11:247 (3) - nc fix


[Hard]

00:09:854 - 我觉得三连该下在这 这里也有音啊 fix
00:24:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 5放在 x360 y144 不了
00:42:533 (4,5) - 有点违和 只用一个slider就够了 我觉得这样比较突出人声...
00:49:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - 改了,但不是按照你的改的
00:53:462 (5) - x192 y264 顺便4的blanket下歪了(如果是blanket的话 en,不是
01:15:962 (4) - 移开 不要叠着 fix
01:20:247 (2,7) - 7压在2的尾巴上 顺一点 fix
01:24:104 (1) - 用1.0,在最后扭一下? fix
[Shore]
真是鬼畜
00:04:390 (1,2,3,1,2) - 滑条尾巴的normalsample去掉 至少去掉第一个的 fix
00:22:390 (3) - 就摆在2的方向上吧 反着拉一下感觉也不错 这里我看到的时候已经改掉了..
00:52:819 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏来点变化? 不了
00:57:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 五连在后面下 这里还是用1+3舒服 5连...就好吧
01:19:604 (9,10,1) - 10去掉 9挪开 和后面一致 fix

身体健康 再见(无缝循环
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Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Irreversible wrote:



....

Why do people send me weird songs? The weirdest thing tho is, I like the songs as well. wow/_\

[General]

The background resolution seems really weird, suggested is 1024x768, even better would be 1366x768, so you should consider adding another one.

replace to 1024x768 @ @

[Easy]

00:00:962 (1,2,3,4) - Well, one of the parts I don't like in the easy is simply the beginning, it has an odd flow to follow, if you ask me. http://puu.sh/59Gkc.jpg Why not trying something like this? I'm not sure if i'm right with that, but I guess it's easier to play for beginner player. Let me know what you think :P You're right.i change it,fix
00:16:819 - In my opinion, the beginner can't really tell when he has to click next, to make this a bit esaier, I suggest adding a circle here, so you have a constant rhythm. ok,add note here
00:30:104 (2) - http://puu.sh/59GuK.jpg Putting it like that can also help you to avoid a too complicate rhythm for an easy, and it still sounds good. fix,but i think it is ok,player just only do "hold"and "click:...wow,let me take it easyily
00:45:104 (5,1) - I suggest you not to use any stacks in an easy diff. They're hard to tell for a beginner, if he's really new to that game. Please try to space them properly. This goes to all your stacks. ok,fix

Feedback:

Proper diff, but please get rid of those complicate patterns, they don't fit an easy that well!

fix,i change all stack part

[Normal]

Well, I'll just go directly to the 'feedback'-part here:

The diff seems solid as well, just as easy. The problem I see here tho is, that you've used a rather harder rhythm in the begin (00:04:390 (1) - here for example until 00:08:676 (3) - ), which doesn't fit the overall, you should try to keep it consistent, with deleting one or two circles, and unstack some. But here, you can leave some stackings as well, just not all! They should be used well, and not overused. I hope you get my point, please don't hesitate asking me if not.

take it easyily,right?

[Hard]

00:06:962 (1) - I'm a bit worried about this slider, according to the new rule it might not be unrankable, yet i'd like you to use a simpler slidershape, since it's barely seenable. ok,change

00:58:390 (5,6,7) - Align them properly, to avoid an untidy look fix
01:02:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Mh well, since the normal didn't really use 1/4, I think it'd be better if you put 1/4 sliders instead of that stream, so you'd get a better spread, with the density etc. ok,fix
01:03:533 (1,2,1) - Watch the spacing, untidy look avoidance :P allright,fix
01:15:533 (3,4) - This is weird, normally you have a 1/4 pattern stacked (f.e. 01:07:819 (1,2) - ) and here not. You should keep consistency over all of those, this means either all 1/4 patterns are unstacked, or stacked, and the other one goes to the 1/2 patterns then (with slider -> slider , circle -> circle) ok,change unstack →01:15:533 (3,4)

The diff has a really interesting flow! I like it. Please have an eye on the consistency on this map.

[Insane]

00:09:962 (4,5,6,7) - That spacing is weird, nothing in the song is calling for it, but if you want to keep the jump, you could just use the same DS, but higher, so it looks a bit better imo. emm,now i have a better idea,change :3
00:15:533 (3,4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/59Hg6.jpg What do you think of this spacing here? It gives the transition from 2->3 a better flow. Good!fix
00:29:462 (7,8,9) - Mh, I prefer a slight curve here, as well to get a better transition between 00:29:676 (9,10) - this time. http://puu.sh/59HjA.jpg ok,fix
01:05:140 (4) - Just some nazi, try 105 142, looks a bit better (I know, that's a bad reason, but I can't really explain it - just deny if you don't like it!) em,nazi is helpful for map,i think
01:21:533 (1,2) - I think you can improve this blanket here. ok,fix
00:22:390 (3,4,5,6) - I guess this pattern is really not well readable, if you're in a rush while playing it you will just miss and you're most probably going oh...change little,but some testplayer say "no problem"
to be like: what just happened? You should get another place for 3, or for the triplet. ;-;
00:27:319 (5) - Same here as above a...fix
00:31:176 (3,4,5) - And same as above, they're really hidden, it doesn't feel too good, and kills the flow in some ways. change
00:48:962 (1) - Mh.. I'm unsure about this sudden speedup, you should try 1.3 or somethin, 1.5 is definetly too fast and confuses people too easily. because of the judgment of the sliders, players won't break combos easily...sry,no change;-;
00:06:962 (1) - Same here! same ^

Feedback:

The insane was enjoyable, sometimes the flow seems a bit broken, and the things are too hidden. It would be really cool if you could think about it! Let me know what you think by the way.

emm,change some hid part and bored part

[Overall]

The mapset was rather good, the spread can be improved (pointed up suggestions), I'm sure this is on the right way, that why I'm leaving the star icon for now. Good luck, and try to get some more mods!

ok
Thanks for your help :D
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

384059043 wrote:

video到kiai就挂了 估计要换一个吧
啊...这视频怎么这么猎奇,我去重置

Video is error,i try to repair it
Atrue
Hello~
From pm


[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
好紧张,神麻婆的图而且还是已经改过多次的,提些建议~
整体感觉不错,虽然鬼畜歌我确实不是很喜欢,但是这首相性不错。
射一发
[Easy]
00:47:247 (1) - 转盘结束在00:50:246 - 这里好些,不然转盘尾压在下一段的歌词的第一个字了,这样歌词第一个字可以有一个note的打击感
00:16:176 (2) - 这里节奏自创似可商榷,不过还好,不建议这种有点自创的感觉出现在ez里面
01:11:247 (1) - 稍微往左弯一点似有利于flow?
[Normal]
00:23:247 (3) - 节奏有问题额。。中间有一个鼓声选择不跟了而来用这样一个破坏节奏的滑条么。。
00:35:676 (1) - 这个地方似乎没有鼓点而鼓点在转盘后的红线上,虽然这个节奏不推荐但是也似乎只能这样做。。
00:44:676 - 与其跟飘渺的鼓还不如这里来个note跟一跟vocal
00:57:533 (1,2) - 这个地方有点挑刺了,就是我觉得flow出现了一个垂直的地方我觉得在normal里面似乎可以把后面那个滑条弄弯一点点。。

[Hard]
挺好,有几个有点蛋疼的地方
00:27:533 (3,4,5) - 这里三连打起来不卡么。。强烈建议换节奏,而且跟整个map风格根本不适应,并且三连找不到鼓点的依据
01:24:104 (1) - 这么我巨爽的地方用原速以上吧,减慢滑条速度不合适

[Shore]
00:11:676 (2,3) - 这里的跳有些突然,而且我觉得1.0也差不多吧。。没有什么迹象说明要用跳的。。
00:14:676 (1,2) - 不明白这个1/4为何要跳一点
00:35:462 (2,1,2) - 这个地方没有跳的处理而这里00:38:676 (1,2) 跳的有点大,会不会显得很突然?
01:18:962 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这个地方节奏有点偷懒的感觉,要是我的话会考虑,五连节奏总感觉简单了些。。

That's my suggestions. 最后祝您身体健康,再见!:) .
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