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Why do people send me weird songs? The weirdest thing tho is, I like the songs as well.
[General]
The background resolution seems really weird, suggested is 1024x768, even better would be 1366x768, so you should consider adding another one.
[Easy]
00:00:962 (1,2,3,4) - Well, one of the parts I don't like in the easy is simply the beginning, it has an odd flow to follow, if you ask me.
http://puu.sh/59Gkc.jpg Why not trying something like this? I'm not sure if i'm right with that, but I guess it's easier to play for beginner player. Let me know what you think
00:16:819 - In my opinion, the beginner can't really tell when he has to click next, to make this a bit esaier, I suggest adding a circle here, so you have a constant rhythm.
00:30:104 (2) -
http://puu.sh/59GuK.jpg Putting it like that can also help you to avoid a too complicate rhythm for an easy, and it still sounds good.
00:45:104 (5,1) - I suggest you not to use any stacks in an easy diff. They're hard to tell for a beginner, if he's really new to that game. Please try to space them properly. This goes to all your stacks.
Feedback:
Proper diff, but please get rid of those complicate patterns, they don't fit an easy that well!
[Normal]
Well, I'll just go directly to the 'feedback'-part here:
The diff seems solid as well, just as easy. The problem I see here tho is, that you've used a rather harder rhythm in the begin (00:04:390 (1) - here for example until 00:08:676 (3) - ), which doesn't fit the overall, you should try to keep it consistent, with deleting one or two circles, and unstack some. But here, you can leave some stackings as well, just not all! They should be used well, and not overused. I hope you get my point, please don't hesitate asking me if not.
[Hard]
00:06:962 (1) - I'm a bit worried about this slider, according to the new rule it might not be unrankable, yet i'd like you to use a simpler slidershape, since it's barely seenable.00:58:390 (5,6,7) - Align them properly, to avoid an untidy look
01:02:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Mh well, since the normal didn't really use 1/4, I think it'd be better if you put 1/4 sliders instead of that stream, so you'd get a better spread, with the density etc.
01:03:533 (1,2,1) - Watch the spacing, untidy look avoidance
01:15:533 (3,4) - This is weird, normally you have a 1/4 pattern stacked (f.e. 01:07:819 (1,2) - ) and here not. You should keep consistency over all of those, this means either all 1/4 patterns are unstacked, or stacked, and the other one goes to the 1/2 patterns then (with slider -> slider , circle -> circle)
The diff has a really interesting flow! I like it. Please have an eye on the consistency on this map.
[Insane]
00:09:962 (4,5,6,7) - That spacing is weird, nothing in the song is calling for it, but if you want to keep the jump, you could just use the same DS, but higher, so it looks a bit better imo.
00:15:533 (3,4,5,6,7) -
http://puu.sh/59Hg6.jpg What do you think of this spacing here? It gives the transition from 2->3 a better flow.
00:29:462 (7,8,9) - Mh, I prefer a slight curve here, as well to get a better transition between 00:29:676 (9,10) - this time.
http://puu.sh/59HjA.jpg01:05:140 (4) - Just some nazi, try 105 142, looks a bit better (I know, that's a bad reason, but I can't really explain it - just deny if you don't like it!)
01:21:533 (1,2) - I think you can improve this blanket here.
00:22:390 (3,4,5,6) - I guess this pattern is really not well readable, if you're in a rush while playing it you will just miss and you're most probably going
to be like: what just happened? You should get another place for 3, or for the triplet.
00:27:319 (5) - Same here as above
00:31:176 (3,4,5) - And same as above, they're really hidden, it doesn't feel too good, and kills the flow in some ways.
00:48:962 (1) - Mh.. I'm unsure about this sudden speedup, you should try 1.3 or somethin, 1.5 is definetly too fast and confuses people too easily.
00:06:962 (1) - Same here!
Feedback:
The insane was enjoyable, sometimes the flow seems a bit broken, and the things are too hidden. It would be really cool if you could think about it! Let me know what you think by the way.
[Overall]
The mapset was rather good, the spread can be improved (pointed up suggestions), I'm sure this is on the right way, that why I'm leaving the star icon for now. Good luck, and try to get some more mods!