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Misawa Sachika - Unite (TV Size)

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Froztic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 28 มีนาคม 2556 at 20:22:28

Artist: Misawa Sachika
Title: Unite (TV Size)
Source: Accel World
Tags: ending takuya chiba naoki
BPM: 188
Filesize: 25780kb
Play Time: 01:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Level 1 (3.06 stars, 104 notes)
  2. Level 4 (4.43 stars, 138 notes)
  3. Level 6 (4.95 stars, 234 notes)
  4. Level 9 (5 stars, 343 notes)
Download: Misawa Sachika - Unite (TV Size)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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- - - - Ready !

Please re-download if you have downloaded before 2013-03-11 22:10 (UTC+7)
Fix bg size. (1px fix, not really that important)

Since new skin is coming, i don't know whether should i leave the skinned hit.png or not.
Also the spinner is being darken due to new spinner style :(

Feel free to comment if you have something on your mind.

• Special Thanks •
- indyinyou ( for some hitsounds )
SuperMoutarde
Hi from in-game m4m :)

[Level 1]

00:04:079 (3) Try to make it more symetrical it doesn't look so good now

00:06:632 (3) Delete one point in the slider. For this kind of simple slider, you never want to use more than three points total for the whole slider

00:28:335 (1) try to make it look more symetrical

00:30:569 (2) I would start new combo here instead of 00:30:888 (1)


[Level 4]

You should use distance snapping oO change the slider speed if you don't like the distance but don't do your own dist snapping like this, it's hard to read because it's not very accurate

00:17:164 (4,5) it would look better if the end point of slider 4 was on the same Y position as slider 5

00:38:547 (5) not the prettiest slider I've seen

00:53:547 (3) try to make it more symetrical

00:57:377 (8) I would start new combo here instead of 00:57:696 (1)

00:58:813 (3) I'm sure this slider can look better than this :D


[Level 6]

00:06:473 (4) I would rework the shape of this slider, especially towards the end

01:01:367 (7) the placement is odd with the overlapping on 4,5, try to place this note somewhere else

[Level 9]

(tbh I can't play the map but I still took a look xD)

00:48:600 (6) not a very pretty slider

00:58:015 (2,3) try to make these two look the same, either by not curving 2 or by curving 3


That's all I found, my TLDR is to rework sliders on all diff and the distance snapping on level4. Good luck with the map!
Topic Starter
Froztic

SuperMoutarde wrote:

Hi from in-game m4m :)

[Level 1]

00:04:079 (3) Try to make it more symetrical it doesn't look so good now
Fixed
00:06:632 (3) Delete one point in the slider. For this kind of simple slider, you never want to use more than three points total for the whole slider
those ticks fit song's beats, so no change
00:28:335 (1) try to make it look more symetrical
Fixed
00:30:569 (2) I would start new combo here instead of 00:30:888 (1)
Fixed

[Level 4]

You should use distance snapping oO change the slider speed if you don't like the distance but don't do your own dist snapping like this, it's hard to read because it's not very accurate
it's 0.7x snap.
00:17:164 (4,5) it would look better if the end point of slider 4 was on the same Y position as slider 5
move slider 5 down instead (same x-axis) i usually don't overlap sliders.
00:38:547 (5) not the prettiest slider I've seen
LOL'd Fixed
00:53:547 (3) try to make it more symetrical
Fixed
00:57:377 (8) I would start new combo here instead of 00:57:696 (1)
Fixed
00:58:813 (3) I'm sure this slider can look better than this :D
Fixed

[Level 6]

00:06:473 (4) I would rework the shape of this slider, especially towards the end
Fixed
01:01:367 (7) the placement is odd with the overlapping on 4,5, try to place this note somewhere else
intended

[Level 9]

(tbh I can't play the map but I still took a look xD)
i can, with no-fail mods :P

00:48:600 (6) not a very pretty slider
this one is intended
00:58:015 (2,3) try to make these two look the same, either by not curving 2 or by curving 3
Fixed

That's all I found, my TLDR is to rework sliders on all diff and the distance snapping on level4. Good luck with the map!
i'll see if anyone will complain on 0.7x snap in lv4, leave it like that for now
all done as labelled

p.s. i spot some weird sounds from slider ticks but i don't know how to remove those ticks so... :o
CPLs
sorry late..
from queue (all suggestion)

[General]

add "ending" to the tags?
consider making the BPM same at all diff (Normal and Insane are 94-188)

[Level 1]

00:07:909 make something like this (snap to white one)



or this (different pattern)



00:11:101 insert something,it feels empty
00:12:377 ^
00:13:654 ^
(there are some empty part like this,maybe you should add something at the "empty" part (example: 00:16:207 and 00:17:484)
00:14:292 (7,8) change to slider?
00:15:090 move this to previous white tick
00:20:037 ^
01:15:409 due to the next spinner,you have to remove this one (just a half beat delay is not enough for new players)

[Level 4]
Beat snap divisor 1/2? I see you dont use 1/4
00:14:611 (8,9) change to slider (1 beat) and add circle 1 beat after



00:39:664 why half a beat delay on Normal?
00:44:931 set this as new color
00:50:037 ^
01:03:760 change: half beat slider
01:04:080 change: 1 beat slider
For the 2 above,delete everything at that point and change to the one I give
01:15:409 delete this circle and move the spinner to this point

[Level 6]

so many circles O_O
can't find anything but 1:
I don't mean to mock you,but I think the placement/spacing is kind of ugly,maybe you should remap this one

good luck then~
Topic Starter
Froztic

copolah123 wrote:

sorry late..
from queue (all suggestion)

[General]

add "ending" to the tags?
Fixed
consider making the BPM same at all diff (Normal and Insane are 94-188)
94 is a half of 188 ( slider tick reasons ) : no change

[Level 1]

00:07:909 make something like this (snap to white one)



or this (different pattern)


sounds very weird... i'll think about it
00:11:101 insert something,it feels empty
00:12:377 ^
00:13:654 ^
(there are some empty part like this,maybe you should add something at the "empty" part (example: 00:16:207 and 00:17:484)
Fixed
00:14:292 (7,8) change to slider?
Fixed
00:15:090 move this to previous white tick
Fixed
00:20:037 ^
Fixed
01:15:409 due to the next spinner,you have to remove this one (just a half beat delay is not enough for new players)
Fixed : moved spinner instead.

[Level 4]

Beat snap divisor 1/2? I see you dont use 1/4
yeah i don't... still got confused why 1/4 there
00:14:611 (8,9) change to slider (1 beat) and add circle 1 beat after

Fixed
00:39:664 why half a beat delay on Normal?
Fixed : reduce slider + move spinner
00:44:931 set this as new color
Fixed
00:50:037 ^
Fixed
01:03:760 change: half beat slider
it's already half-beat sliders...
01:04:080 change: 1 beat slider
For the 2 above,delete everything at that point and change to the one I give
sounds weird : 1/2 beat slider instead
01:15:409 delete this circle and move the spinner to this point
starting point of spinner has no sound, so no change

[Level 6]

so many circles O_O
can't find anything but 1:
I don't mean to mock you,but I think the placement/spacing is kind of ugly,maybe you should remap this one
yeah... i think so.
too much slider speed changed, decide to re-position all elements between 00:10:462 and 00:30:888

good luck then~
thanks :)
xxhckxyz
I am a beginner in modding so this is just a suggestion...if u think this is not useful, u can ignore it~~


level 1
SPOILER
00:25:781 (1,2,3,4) maybe....i suggest that the distance between 1 and 2 and the distance between 3 and 4 can be similar.

00:27:058 can add a circle or put a slider

01:13:015 (1,2) i think use a slider instead of the circle will be more better...

level 4
SPOILER
01:11:739 (3) i will put it to 01:11:579


other...i cannot find any problem...sorry

maybe i am not a success modder~~haha :(

hope the suggestion can help you improve ur map~~

also hope ur map can be ranked~~ :)
Topic Starter
Froztic

xxhckxyz wrote:

I am a beginner in modding so this is just a suggestion...if u think this is not useful, u can ignore it~~


level 1
SPOILER
00:25:781 (1,2,3,4) maybe....i suggest that the distance between 1 and 2 and the distance between 3 and 4 can be similar.
Fixed in another way
00:27:058 can add a circle or put a slider
Fixed
01:13:015 (1,2) i think use a slider instead of the circle will be more better...
Fixed w/ 00:07:909 too

level 4
SPOILER
01:11:739 (3) i will put it to 01:11:579
x

other...i cannot find any problem...sorry

maybe i am not a success modder~~haha :(

hope the suggestion can help you improve ur map~~

also hope ur map can be ranked~~ :)
these mods do helped me out, thanks :)
NewRulerNA
hi
found issues. you must fix those.

[General]
  1. "bg4.jpg"is unused. you must remove it.
  2. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels. so you must resize those.
  3. these map offset is not same between diff. You must remove the other than 00:00:250.
    and Uninherited timing sections cannot be used to manipulate slider speeds. like 00:41:579 (4) in Level 9.
    If you want to change speed, use "slider velocity mulitiplayer" in inherited timing section.
Topic Starter
Froztic

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
found issues. you must fix those.

[General]
  1. "bg4.jpg"is unused. you must remove it.
    Fine, removed
  2. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels. so you must resize those.
    UNFIX : RULES CHANGED
  3. these map offset is not same between diff. You must remove the other than 00:00:250.
    and Uninherited timing sections cannot be used to manipulate slider speeds. like 00:41:579 (4) in Level 9.
    If you want to change speed, use "slider velocity mulitiplayer" in inherited timing section.

    heh, it should be 250ms on all diffs.... ( anyway, change offset : -1026 ms )
    for Level 9 : changing speed those ways will results having a slider tick appeared
    ( i don't want that, and i can't change slider tick rate through this either )
    need confirmation on this ( or anyway to change the tick rate in an inherited timing section )
thanks :)
Ranger
From M4M

[Level 1]
distance snap is too long.how about reduce 0.8?

00:18:122 (4) - remove 1 repeat.it more easy and sounds good

[Level 4]
00:21:952 (4) - this silder looks ugly.how about make symmetry?

[Level 6]
many note not have hitsound, add like insane diff

00:42:377 (3) - add finish here?
00:52:590 (3) - ^

[Level 9]
00:00:250 (1) - Remove NC.i think it doesn`t need it
00:10:422 (6) - Plz don`t use 1/8 beat.it too hard :(
01:04:638 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is impossible! consider reduce distance.


ok,good luck~
Yuki-kun
Hi~
From my queue~

- General
+) Please note that
- Use minus timing as offset is not recommended. You might want to change. I think 250 is better.
- Ranking Criteria: Uninherited timing sections cannot be used to manipulate slider speeds. Since you use too much red timing to change your slider speed, you should fix it.
+) BG size should be 1024x768. Please resize all your BG.
+) Please end all map at same time.


- My mod

> Level 9 <
- AR+1, OD -1.
- Please fix red timing that you used for change slider speed.
00:00:250 (1) - Remove NC.
00:00:569 (3) - Change Whistle at start of slider to Clap.
00:01:367 (6) - NC here.
00:02:803 (1) - Remove NC
00:03:122 (2) - NC here.
00:10:462 (1) - Remove NC.
00:10:781 (2) - NC here.
00:20:675 (1) - Remove NC.
00:20:994 (2) - NC here.
00:24:505 (1) - Remove NC.
00:25:143 (2) - NC here.
00:46:048 (8) - NC here.
00:51:792 (12) - NC here.
00:54:824 (10) - NC here.
00:55:143 (1) - Remove NC.
00:57:377 (12) - NC here.
00:57:697 (1) - Remove NC.
00:59:292 (9) - NC here.
01:00:409 (1) - Remove NC.
01:01:526 (6) - NC here.
01:04:637 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please do not use this kind of pattern for stream. It's too hard to press.
01:14:930 (1) - Remove NC.
01:15:249 (1) - Remove NC.

> Level 6 <
00:01:686 (5,6,7,8) - These note are out of beat. Since it has no vocal here, you should put it in white tick instead of red. Back 1/4
00:46:367 (6) - End this slider at 00:46:846 is better?
00:51:154 (5) - Since osu! has new feature for helping mapper while creating curve slider, you just need to use 3 point to create nice curve slider.
Use this code and replace is file .osu
272,96,51154,2,0,P|96:176|176:352,1,420,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:03:760 (4) - NC here.
01:13:015 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - May be use clap in all note here is better? Just my opinion xD
01:15:409 (1) - Use finish instead of clap here.

> Level 4 <
00:12:696 (5) - NC here. Please don't use long combo in Normal/Easy map.
00:18:122 (5) - ^
00:23:228 (6) - ^
00:25:462 (1) - Remove NC.
00:26:101 (3) - NC here.
00:28:015 (6) - ^
00:32:643 (4) - ^
00:35:196 (9) - ^
00:35:994 (1) - Remove NC.
00:37:909 (6) - NC here.
00:53:547 (3) - Fix this slider please.
01:06:792 (4,5,6) - Out of beat.

> Level 1 <
00:48:601 (4) - fix this slider

Ok that's everything i can found.
Good luck :D
Topic Starter
Froztic

[Ranger] wrote:

From M4M

[Level 1]
distance snap is too long.how about reduce 0.8?
it's ok with this slider speed, no change at current ( i'll think about it )

00:18:122 (4) - remove 1 repeat.it more easy and sounds good
x
[Level 4]
00:21:952 (4) - this silder looks ugly.how about make symmetry?
Fixed
[Level 6]
many note not have hitsound, add like insane diff
not really insane-like, but add some

00:42:377 (3) - add finish here?
x
00:52:590 (3) - ^
x

[Level 9]
00:00:250 (1) - Remove NC.i think it doesn`t need it
Fixed
00:10:422 (6) - Plz don`t use 1/8 beat.it too hard :(
Okay x_x
01:04:638 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is impossible! consider reduce distance.
make a zigzag type instead ( old one is square type )

ok,good luck~
thanks :)

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~
From my queue~

- General
+) Please note that
- Use minus timing as offset is not recommended. You might want to change. I think 250 is better.
Fixed
- Ranking Criteria: Uninherited timing sections cannot be used to manipulate slider speeds. Since you use too much red timing to change your slider speed, you should fix it.
fine, go with those dots. :(
+) BG size should be 1024x768. Please resize all your BG.
maximum doesn't mean it has to be. i prefer 16:9 and have those black bars ( since video is 16:9) and those image won't look such weird
+) Please end all map at same time.
Okay


- My mod

> Level 9 <
- AR+1, OD -1.
AR +1 only
- Please fix red timing that you used for change slider speed.
hate those dots on slow slider, but might have to accept it :(
00:00:250 (1) - Remove NC.
already
00:00:569 (3) - Change Whistle at start of slider to Clap.
Fixed, thanks
00:01:367 (6) - NC here.
x
00:02:803 (1) - Remove NC
x
00:03:122 (2) - NC here.
x
00:10:462 (1) - Remove NC.
Fixed
00:10:781 (2) - NC here.
Fixed
00:20:675 (1) - Remove NC.
x
00:20:994 (2) - NC here.
x
00:24:505 (1) - Remove NC.
Fixed
00:25:143 (2) - NC here.
Fixed
00:46:048 (8) - NC here.
somwhere else
00:51:792 (12) - NC here.
Fixed
00:54:824 (10) - NC here.
x
00:55:143 (1) - Remove NC.
x
00:57:377 (12) - NC here.
x
00:57:697 (1) - Remove NC.
x
00:59:292 (9) - NC here.
x
01:00:409 (1) - Remove NC.
x
01:01:526 (6) - NC here.
01:04:637 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please do not use this kind of pattern for stream. It's too hard to press.
okay, already fixed from previous mod
01:14:930 (1) - Remove NC.
x
01:15:249 (1) - Remove NC.
x

> Level 6 <
00:01:686 (5,6,7,8) - These note are out of beat. Since it has no vocal here, you should put it in white tick instead of red. Back 1/4
guitar rhythm, no change
00:46:367 (6) - End this slider at 00:46:846 is better?
yeah, i think so. thanks.
00:51:154 (5) - Since osu! has new feature for helping mapper while creating curve slider, you just need to use 3 point to create nice curve slider.
Use this code and replace is file .osu
272,96,51154,2,0,P|96:176|176:352,1,420,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
thank you very much :) Fixed
01:03:760 (4) - NC here..
Fixed
01:13:015 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - May be use clap in all note here is better? Just my opinion xD
it's too much tam tam tam tam tam :o
01:15:409 (1) - Use finish instead of clap here.
x


> Level 4 <
00:12:696 (5) - NC here. Please don't use long combo in Normal/Easy map.
Fixed
00:18:122 (5) - ^
Fixed
00:23:228 (6) - ^
Fixed
00:25:462 (1) - Remove NC.
x
00:26:101 (3) - NC here.
x
00:28:015 (6) - ^
Fixed
00:32:643 (4) - ^
somewhere else
00:35:196 (9) - ^
somewhere else
00:35:994 (1) - Remove NC.
x
00:37:909 (6) - NC here.
Fixed
00:53:547 (3) - Fix this slider please.
Fixed
01:06:792 (4,5,6) - Out of beat.
guitar rhythm, no change

> Level 1 <
00:48:601 (4) - fix this slider

Ok that's everything i can found.
Good luck :D
thanks for modding :)
Kirino Kousaka
Hi~! modding from #modreqs :D

  • [General]
    1. Your spinner-background is not cleanly done :(
    2. Same with your combobursts :( if you could do something about those, please do.

    [Level 1]
  • 00:06:632 (3) - I don't like how this slider is designed. Turn it into something neat like this.
  • 00:18:122 (4) - I suggest you not to use this kind of slider. Use sliders with 2 reversals on higher diffs. Maybe turn one reversal into a circle or spread this into two.
  • 00:43:973 - This space feels empty, why not put a circle with a whistle here? Try this.
  • 00:48:601 (4) - why don't you try to redesign this slider an make it look nicer? :D
  • 00:53:547 (4) - ^
  • 01:15:090 (4,5) - Turn these circles into a slider. Beginners would read this part easier with that.
  • 01:15:569 - Make the following spinner start here and end at 01:18:122. Also, use 5% volume instead of 10% on it.
[Level 4]00:07:909 (1) - This has two reversals and the next two sliders in this combo has only 1. That would be a little hard to read for the beginners so try either: Spreading this into two sliders; remove 1 reversal and add a circle; or remove new combo here and add new combo on 00:08:707 (2).00:21:952 (4) - Blanket 00:20:994 (2) properly. Try redesigning this slider into something nice like this.00:29:930 (5) - Try to redesign this as a ave slider, maybe something like this.00:43:654 (5) - Redesign it with something nice. :301:05:994 (3) - Same issue as 00:07:909 (1). 01:14:452 (1,1,1) - Remove NC on these notes.01:15:569 (1) - Make it end on 01:18:122 and apply 5% volume.

[Level 6]00:07:909 (1) - Remove one of its reversals and put a circle on 00:08:388, so it can be easily read.01:15:409 (1) - Remove NC.01:15:569 (1) - Make it end on 01:18:122 and apply 5% volume.

[Level 9]00:10:303 - Add a circle here, and stack it together with the next to circles.00:10:462 (6) - Remove "clap" and put a "finish"00:51:792 (1,2,3) - I don't like this barrage of sliders. Turn into a stream of circles instead.01:01:526 (1,2,3) - ^01:04:638 (2) - Delete this note. It's not nice to start a stream on a blue tick.01:05:117 (7) - Delete this note.01:15:250 (1) - Remove NC.01:15:569 (1) - Make it end on 01:18:122 and apply 5% volume.
That's all that I could point out. The map's rhythm is good but it needs some help on flow and aesthetics.
Since I like this song, I'll star~ and good luck :D
Topic Starter
Froztic

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hi~! modding from #modreqs :D

  • [General]
    1. Your spinner-background is not cleanly done :(
    2. Same with your combobursts :( if you could do something about those, please do.
      i have to re-work on those to fix it (since i've cropped them off from the anime)
      might takes about a week or so but i will

    [Level 1]
  • 00:06:632 (3) - I don't like how this slider is designed. Turn it into something neat like this.
    Fixed
  • 00:18:122 (4) - I suggest you not to use this kind of slider. Use sliders with 2 reversals on higher diffs. Maybe turn one reversal into a circle or spread this into two.
    i got about 2 mods saying about this so, Fixed
  • 00:43:973 - This space feels empty, why not put a circle with a whistle here? Try this.
    Fixed but no whistle
  • 00:48:601 (4) - why don't you try to redesign this slider an make it look nicer? :D
    Fixed
  • 00:53:547 (4) - ^
    Fixed (a bit)
  • 01:15:090 (4,5) - Turn these circles into a slider. Beginners would read this part easier with that.
    Edit :Fixed
  • 01:15:569 - Make the following spinner start here and end at 01:18:122. Also, use 5% volume instead of 10% on it.
    apply 5% ( no change on spinner, it start and end where it should )
[Level 4]00:07:909 (1) - This has two reversals and the next two sliders in this combo has only 1. That would be a little hard to read for the beginners so try either: Spreading this into two sliders; remove 1 reversal and add a circle; or remove new combo here and add new combo on 00:08:707 (2).
Fixed00:21:952 (4) - Blanket 00:20:994 (2) properly. Try redesigning this slider into something nice like this.
Fixed00:29:930 (5) - Try to redesign this as a ave slider, maybe something like this.
Fixed : Normal curve sliders00:43:654 (5) - Redesign it with something nice. :3
Fixed01:05:994 (3) - Same issue as 00:07:909 (1).
Fixed01:14:452 (1,1,1) - Remove NC on these notes.
x01:15:569 (1) - Make it end on 01:18:122 and apply 5% volume.
apply 5% ( no change on spinner, it end where it should )


[Level 6]00:07:909 (1) - Remove one of its reversals and put a circle on 00:08:388, so it can be easily read.
Fixed01:15:409 (1) - Remove NC.
x01:15:569 (1) - Make it end on 01:18:122 and apply 5% volume.
apply 5% ( no change on spinner, it end where it should )

[Level 9]00:10:303 - Add a circle here, and stack it together with the next to circles.
Fixed00:10:462 (6) - Remove "clap" and put a "finish"
x00:51:792 (1,2,3) - I don't like this barrage of sliders. Turn into a stream of circles instead.01:01:526 (1,2,3) - ^
consider change one of them ( these sliders are actually easier than stream of circles )01:04:638 (2) - Delete this note. It's not nice to start a stream on a blue tick.
drum sounds start here (kinda weird, but it really is !)01:05:117 (7) - Delete this note.
drum sounds end here01:15:250 (1) - Remove NC.
x01:15:569 (1) - Make it end on 01:18:122 and apply 5% volume.
apply 5% ( no change on spinner, it end where it should )
That's all that I could point out. The map's rhythm is good but it needs some help on flow and aesthetics.
Since I like this song, I'll star~ and good luck :D
thanks :) really helpful

( p.s. creating an creative slider without any mess is really hard :o )
Kirino Kousaka

Froztic wrote:

thanks :) really helpful

( p.s. creating an creative slider without any mess is really hard :o )
no prob :D
and this might help you. ;)
Kirino Kousaka
EDIT: lol double posted
Topic Starter
Froztic

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Froztic wrote:

thanks :) really helpful

( p.s. creating an creative slider without any mess is really hard :o )
no prob :D
and this might help you. ;)
thanks for the thread
need a lot practicing though :o

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EDIT : combobursts and spinner-bg fixed ! ( can't hold on for a week, i've to study for tests )
Cancel
Hi. From my Modding Queue.

General

Maybe change offset to 260? Its only my suggestion.
TV Size is not allowed in the song title > t/89198 < I suggest you to remove it from ttitle, and put it in the beatmap description instead.
Maybe use this hitsound? It sounds good with this song: http://puu.sh/1Ux07 (When you need help with the claps/where the hitsounds should be, please message me!)

Now let's start with the mod ;P

Level 1

00:00:260 (1,2,3) - this line is so boring! :o Maybe change this beat a little bit: 00:00:898 (2) -

00:18:132 (4) - You forgot a soft hitwhistle at the beginning of this slider

00:18:132 (4) - Maybe change like this? >

01:18:770 - Maybe end spinner with a volume 5?

Level 4

01:00:170 - This timing point isn't standing on a beat! Please fix that ;)

01:15:409 (1) - Remove NC

Level 6

00:00:249 (1) - Move to

00:10:462 (1) - Add a finish.

Level 9

I can´t mod hard-insanes (Level 6 was an exeption ;) )

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Froztic

Cancel wrote:

Hi. From my Modding Queue.

General

Maybe change offset to 260? Its only my suggestion.
changed
TV Size is not allowed in the song title > t/89198 < I suggest you to remove it from ttitle, and put it in the beatmap description instead.
TV Size is an exception Reference ( it is the special version used in Anime )
Maybe use this hitsound? It sounds good with this song: http://puu.sh/1Ux07 (When you need help with the claps/where the hitsounds should be, please message me!)
edit : nah, i won't. thanks anyway

Now let's start with the mod ;P

Level 1

00:00:260 (1,2,3) - this line is so boring! :o Maybe change this beat a little bit: 00:00:898 (2) -
Fixed
00:18:132 (4) - You forgot a soft hitwhistle at the beginning of this slider
Fixed
00:18:132 (4) - Maybe change like this? >
x
01:18:770 - Maybe end spinner with a volume 5?
it's already 5% on volume (throughout spinner) , or i miss something ?
Level 4

01:00:170 - This timing point isn't standing on a beat! Please fix that ;)
Fixed
01:15:409 (1) - Remove NC
x
Level 6

00:00:249 (1) - Move to
Fixed
00:10:462 (1) - Add a finish.
Add new hit-finish sounds
Level 9

I can´t mod hard-insanes (Level 6 was an exeption ;) )

Good Luck!
Thanks :)
Alltur
From my queue :D sorry for my lateness

[General]
Artist's name is 三澤 紗千香, put this in the artist, and Misawa Sachika in the Romanised artist,
Change the name of the song title to ユナイト (TV Size) and keep the romanised title as Unite (TV Size)


[Easy]
00:13:023 (4) - New combo here :D
00:18:128 (4) - ^

[Normal]

Use distance snap through out this diff.. spacing is really weird. Because I think I am going to say whole 'spacing' issue here, I won't say.

00:21:000 (2,4) - Blanket better here. :)
01:13:808 (1,1,1) - Don't NC spam here.

-- I am stopping here because you need to use distance snap during mapping except when you are putting jumps/anti-jumps/symmetric patterns etc, and you are not using it making me unable to mod, when you have fixed and I suggest you to remap because the spacing is just won't do it. I have faced that before when I first mapped also, and it seems like restricting you from making maps because it limits you in certain spacing, but it is 'required' most of the part.. Good luck mapping and I will recheck if you request in my queue when it's open. --
Topic Starter
Froztic

Akashi_S wrote:

From my queue :D sorry for my lateness

[General]
Artist's name is 三澤 紗千香, put this in the artist, and Misawa Sachika in the Romanised artist,
Change the name of the song title to ユナイト (TV Size) and keep the romanised title as Unite (TV Size)
Fixed


[Easy]
00:13:023 (4) - New combo here :D
Fixed
00:18:128 (4) - ^
Fixed

[Normal]

Use distance snap through out this diff.. spacing is really weird. Because I think I am going to say whole 'spacing' issue here, I won't say.
DISTANCE SPACING : 0.7x
00:21:000 (2,4) - Blanket better here. :)
Fixed, should be a bit better
01:13:808 (1,1,1) - Don't NC spam here.
nc emphasize sounds in the end

-- I am stopping here because you need to use distance snap during mapping except when you are putting jumps/anti-jumps/symmetric patterns etc, and you are not using it making me unable to mod, when you have fixed and I suggest you to remap because the spacing is just won't do it. I have faced that before when I first mapped also, and it seems like restricting you from making maps because it limits you in certain spacing, but it is 'required' most of the part.. Good luck mapping and I will recheck if you request in my queue when it's open. --
DISTANCE SPACING : 0.7x
don't you curious while you're judging this, other modders didn't say about it...

tbh, i don't get what you're saying around here

when you have fixed and I suggest you to remap because the spacing is just won't do it
spacing isn't right because it isn't or you just think i'm not snapping ?
re-map is fine as long as it is reasonable to do
thanks anyway ;)
Alltur
Sorry my English is pretty bad.. I thought you are not snapping, and the spacing isn't right. Both.
Because spacing should be pretty close to 0.7x if you are using distance snap function. It WILL limit you around 0.68~0.72x


but when I saw individual spacing of it, I know it's around 0.70x, but it should be like 0.68~0.72x in easy/normal especially, not like 0.75~0.78 like here.







It looks untidy since they are not spaced evenly.






but more like this, the spacing is much even, makes pretty and also easy-to-play

Do you use tiny grid level for mapping? If not, using tiny grid will make more accurate spacing.

But I am willing to have an another look at this map in future if you would like me to (visit my queue when it's open xD)

No kds for this post

P.S) I was really curious since nobody was noticed by this spacing, this IS really important in my opinion since this was from my other modding experiences and many ranked maps having pretty nice spacing throughout especially easy and normal difficulties within 0.1~0.2 from their original distance spacing.
Topic Starter
Froztic
@Akashi_S
i always turn on distance snapping or else my map would be a mess, don't know why snapping rise to 0.75x
maybe i'm using too large grid. ( i'm working on Lv.2 Grid.)
When i turned on tiny grid the day i started mapping this one, it says not recommend for non-experienced mappers. So i choose bigger one :o

anyway, i'll re-positiion this diff (maybe other if i feel it's too ugly) thanks for informing me :)

( if i could be fast enough to post on your queue, i will ;) )

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edit : fixed all every diffs
indyinyou
ขอม๊อดเป็นภาษาไทยนะ

http://puu.sh/1VCI8

ในนี้ มีไฟล์ soft-hitclap3 คือเสียงกลอง
soft-hitfinish3 คือเสียงฉาบ
soft-hitnormal4 คือเสียงเบส

แล้วก็มีไฟล์ ชื่อ level 6 hitsound test ผมได้ใส่เสียงแบบคร่าวๆให้ดูแล้ว พยายามใส่แบบนี้ให้มันลงจังหวะ

ไม่เข้าใจถามผมในเกมล่ะกัน
Topic Starter
Froztic

indyinyou wrote:

ขอม๊อดเป็นภาษาไทยนะ

http://puu.sh/1VCI8

ในนี้ มีไฟล์ soft-hitclap3 คือเสียงกลอง
soft-hitfinish3 คือเสียงฉาบ
soft-hitnormal4 คือเสียงเบส

แล้วก็มีไฟล์ ชื่อ level 6 hitsound test ผมได้ใส่เสียงแบบคร่าวๆให้ดูแล้ว พยายามใส่แบบนี้ให้มันลงจังหวะ

ไม่เข้าใจถามผมในเกมล่ะกัน
ขอบคุณมากครับ :D
(แก้เสียงฉาบสั้นลงนิดนึง)

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CPLs

Froztic wrote:

indyinyou wrote:

ขอม๊อดเป็นภาษาไทยนะ

http://puu.sh/1VCI8

ในนี้ มีไฟล์ soft-hitclap3 คือเสียงกลอง
soft-hitfinish3 คือเสียงฉาบ
soft-hitnormal4 คือเสียงเบส

แล้วก็มีไฟล์ ชื่อ level 6 hitsound test ผมได้ใส่เสียงแบบคร่าวๆให้ดูแล้ว พยายามใส่แบบนี้ให้มันลงจังหวะ

ไม่เข้าใจถามผมในเกมล่ะกัน
ขอบคุณมากครับ :D
(แก้เสียงฉาบสั้นลงนิดนึง)

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maybe you should put ^ to your description?
EDIT: oops I didn't notice
indyinyou
เข้าใจไวดีแหะ ต่อ คงเป็นเรื่องจัดโน๊ตนะ

61

ลองดูในนี้ นะ มันมี ทำสไลแปลก ไม่ก้วิธี จัดโน๊ต

แบบในรูปนี้ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593377 จะเห็นว่าโน๊ต มันติดกันแต่ วางให้มันเป็นรูปร่าง หรือ ว่า pattern
หรือ เรียกว่าโน๊ตโดด หรือ jump

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593381 / http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593386 ถ้าคิดไม่ออกก้ นึกเป็น สามเหลี่ยม

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593395 แบบ สี่เหลี่ยม
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593399 ห้าเหลี่ยมมั๊ง lol

ที่ฮิตๆ ก้มีรูปดาว ดูเลขที่โน๊ตไป(1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593406

การโดดแบบนี่ทำได้ดิฟ ฮาด (hard) ขึ้นไป ส่วนการจัดทำได้ทุกดิฟนะ

เอาแค่นี้ก่อน ไม่ต้อง kd เด๋วไม่เข้าใจไรก้ถามแล้วกัน 8-)

เอาจริงๆผมก้ไม่ได้ทำเป็นไรมากมาย ช่วยได้เท่าที่ช่วยล่ะกัน 555
Topic Starter
Froztic

copolah123 wrote:

maybe you should put ^ to your description?
EDIT: oops I didn't notice
:D

indyinyou wrote:

เข้าใจไวดีแหะ ต่อ คงเป็นเรื่องจัดโน๊ตนะ

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/61

ลองดูในนี้ นะ มันมี ทำสไลแปลก ไม่ก้วิธี จัดโน๊ต

แบบในรูปนี้ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593377 จะเห็นว่าโน๊ต มันติดกันแต่ วางให้มันเป็นรูปร่าง หรือ ว่า pattern
หรือ เรียกว่าโน๊ตโดด หรือ jump

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593381 / http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593386 ถ้าคิดไม่ออกก้ นึกเป็น สามเหลี่ยม

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593395 แบบ สี่เหลี่ยม
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593399 ห้าเหลี่ยมมั๊ง lol

ที่ฮิตๆ ก้มีรูปดาว ดูเลขที่โน๊ตไป(1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593406

การโดดแบบนี่ทำได้ดิฟ ฮาด (hard) ขึ้นไป ส่วนการจัดทำได้ทุกดิฟนะ

เอาแค่นี้ก่อน ไม่ต้อง kd เด๋วไม่เข้าใจไรก้ถามแล้วกัน 8-)

เอาจริงๆผมก้ไม่ได้ทำเป็นไรมากมาย ช่วยได้เท่าที่ช่วยล่ะกัน 555
ขอบคุณฮะ บางอันเหมือนไม่ใช่ทริคเลย 5 5 5 (วางโน้ตก่อนสปินเนอร์งี้ -0--*)
แต่ก้อ่านเพลินดี ;)

ใส่โน้ตโดดช่วงก่อนฮุคละกัน (ตรงอื่นดูไม่น่าทำ)
แล้วก้ปรับรูปแบบการวางโน้ตนิดหน่อย ส่วนใหญ่รูปง่ายๆ 3เหลี่ยม 6เหลี่ยม ดาวบ้าง (แอบติดใจ) :P
indyinyou
เฮ้ย เพลงไม่ได้อัพเดทเลยนี่หวา ไม่มีคนม๊อดเหรอ เด๋วไปช่วยหาคนมาดูให้ หรือ เลิกทำแล้วเนี่ย 555
Topic Starter
Froztic

indyinyou wrote:

เฮ้ย เพลงไม่ได้อัพเดทเลยนี่หวา ไม่มีคนม๊อดเหรอ เด๋วไปช่วยหาคนมาดูให้ หรือ เลิกทำแล้วเนี่ย 555
ยังครับ แค่พักอ่านหนังสือสอบเฉยๆ 5 5 5
เลยไม่ได้เข้าไปหารีเควสเลย

สอบเสร็จเดี๋ยวมาลุยต่อ
Guy
timing check~

[Timing]


  •  
  1. BPM 188.000
     
  2. Offset 280

    don't forget resnap all notes.
Topic Starter
Froztic

Guy wrote:

timing check~

[Timing]


  •  
  1. BPM 188.000
     
  2. Offset 280

    don't forget resnap all notes.
Fixed :)
(need recheck on offset; i'm not sure)
Cloudchaser
Request from my modding queue

  1. Suggestions or comments.
  2. High recommend
In general this map all its ok.

Level 9

  1. 00:36:503 (1) - remove New Combo?.
  2. 00:36:822 (1,2) - ^
Level 6

  1. 01:02:354 - and 01:02:833 - i'd like add circles here o3o
Nothing else I can say, good map!
Topic Starter
Froztic

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Request from my modding queue

  1. Suggestions or comments.
  2. High recommend
In general this map all its ok.

Level 9

  • the 4th speed (0.5x) has drain less than 4 beat, it might be ok ?
  1. 00:36:503 (1) - remove New Combo?.
  2. 00:36:822 (1,2) - ^
    Add more combo instead :P (HP barely recovered in this part)
Level 6

  1. 01:02:354 - and 01:02:833 - i'd like add circles here o3o
    Added
Nothing else I can say, good map!
thanks :)
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Suggestion.
You should fix this.
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General

  • Your mp3 is 80 kbps, which is below the miniumum of 128 kbps. Please find a better mp3.
    Remove audio from video to reduce filesize.

Level 1

  • HP Drain Rate: 3
    Approach Rate: 3
    Overall Difficulty: 3
    00:07:939 (1,2,3,4) - Try this:
    00:28:365 (1) - ^
    00:38:577 (2,1) - End the slider 1/1 earlier and start the spinner 1/2 earlier.
    00:42:088 (1) - This slider is too soon after the spinner for an Easy, delete it and add a circle at 00:42:407. (also, consider moving it near the center of the screen)
    00:51:662 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 00:51:982.
    01:04:748 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 01:05:067. (or just add a circle at 01:04:748)
    01:11:131 (2) - Delete this circle. Start a slider at 01:10:811 and end it at 01:11:131.
    01:13:045 (1,2,3,4) - Try this:
    01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.

Level 4

  • HP Drain Rate: 5
    Approach Rate: 5
    Overall Difficulty: 5
    00:07:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete (2) and add 2 repeats on (1), also try this spacing:
    00:28:684 (2) - Try this spacing:
    00:30:918 ~ 00:37:141 - Used a lot of new combos here and I don't think they're really necessary, consider removing some.
    00:51:662 (x) - Add a circle.
    00:58:843 (4) - I don't like this slider, try to do something different:
    01:04:748 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 01:05:067. (or just add a circle at 01:04:748)
    01:06:822 (5,6,7) - Try this:
    01:13:843 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all these new combos.
    01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.

Level 6

  • HP Drain Rate: 6
    Approach Rate: 7
    Overall Difficulty: 6
    00:00:599 (2) - I don't understand why you used this slider here, try to do something like this to better follow the music:
    00:02:833 (1,2) - Same as before, I really don't like these long sliders.
    00:06:503 (4) - ^
    00:27:726 (x) - Add a circle.
    00:29:801 (x) - ^
    00:30:918 ~ 00:37:141 - Used a lot of new combos here and I don't think they're really necessary, consider removing some.
    00:32:354 (x) - Add a circle.
    00:34:907 (x) - ^
    00:37:460 (x) - ^
    01:13:843 (1) - Remove this new combo.
    01:15:120 (1,1) - ^
    01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.

Level 9

  • HP Drain Rate: 6
    Approach Rate: 7
    Overall Difficulty: 6
    Slider Tick Rate: 1
    00:15:439 (x) - Add a circle.
    00:27:726 (x) - ^
    00:30:918 ~ 00:37:141 - Used a lot of new combos here and I don't think they're really necessary, consider removing some.
    00:48:631 (5) - I don't like this slider, try to do something like this:
    00:51:583 (2) - This part is kinda confusing, don't hide this circle under the previous one.
    01:04:708 (3) - Delete this circle, it doesn't follow anything.
    01:04:867 (5) - ^
    01:05:027 (7) - ^
    01:06:184 (5) - Convert this slider into 3 1/2 circles.
    01:06:822 (7) - ^
    01:11:609 (6) - ^
    01:12:248 (8) - ^
    01:14:960 (1,1) - Remove these new combos.
    01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.
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