R a r e wrote:

作るの難しい。tag触ってないので追加しといてください。
http://puu.sh/1W5JR

Melophobia wrote:

Mod待機

MiLu wrote:

[Rare's Hard]
ARとOD逆にしたほうがよくない？ODはいいとしてもnormalと1しか違わないからARはあげたほうがいいと思う AR7,OD6に変更した
00:42:863 (3) - ここらへんの音取りと配置の提案。見た目重視でスペーシング気にしてないけど 僕自身しっくりきてなかったのでスペーシング通りに置いてみました。それと(4)の終始点を入れ替えました。

SPOILER

00:53:550 (6) - 若干分かりづらいしこの単発削除してもいいんじゃないかなぁ ここの音は一番音の低いタムの音をフォローしてるんだけど微妙かなあ。また指摘されるようなら考えます。それと(7)の始点をフィニッシュからクラップに変更しました。
01:04:613 (4) - 始点にfinishとか フィニッシュはドラムカバーでしか使わないのでこのままで;-;
01:09:488 (2,3,4) - ちょっと配置が詰まってるように感じた。and音取りこんなのとかにしてみてはどうです？ スペーシングがうまく調整できてなかったみたいで、直してみると結構余裕持って配置できました。nice pointing out.

MiLu wrote:

おはようございま~す　こんば～んわ～

[General]
・1024x768のBGにしたら? itadakima~~su

SPOILER

・難易度によってSlider Tick Rate違うよぅ....2で揃えよう ok!
・Rareの名前のスペース消えたからtagsのR_a_r_eって消してもいいんじゃないかなあ
-HowLiNgに相談中ーー

[normal]
00:21:675 (2) - 折り返しにclapとか clapだと大きいからカスタムfinish追加した
00:27:113 (1) - 始点になんもないの寂しいなぁ soft1にしてfinishとか fixed~
00:41:363 (5) - ここのclapをremoveして次の1の始点に付けてみるとか
そこ消しちゃうと少し寂しい気もしたから、(1)の始点に追加したあと(5)の方は10%音量下げました
00:43:425 (4) - こんな音取りどうです？4の終点にclapつけたら幸せになれると思うんだけど

多分(4)の終点二違和感を感じたと思うんだけど、そっちはカスタムfinish入れると自然に聴こえたからそのままにした
ただ、00:44:550 (6) はこの提案の通り返しいれた方が綺麗だったから若干無理矢理気味だけど修正 ty
01:00:113 (1) - さすがに画面外って怒Rareる。初期スキンじゃなくてスマンヤデ

SPOILER

たしかにこれは怒-HowLiNgる 可能な範囲で修正
01:08:738 (7) - ギリギリ画面内だけどこれも怪しい
上に同じく

[Insane]
00:39:675 (2,3) - 音取り的な意味で逆にしてみるとか fax
00:46:988 (3) - 終点のfinish消してもいいと思うなあ fix
00:49:238 (7,1) - 大差ないけどこの位置いれかえたほうが流れいいかなぁとか

SPOILER

たしかに fux
00:58:050 (4,5,6) - ちょっと離してジャンプさせたほうが楽しい

SPOILER

good fex
01:22:425 (1) - ..... なんとなく遊びたかってん！ やめたほうがいい言われたら直す予定ではある・・
01:23:550 (4,5,6) - noteはハミ出てないけどアプローチサークルは画面外だしアウトかなぁ
前の配置動かしたりして頑張って上に上げたー fox!
good luck ty!!

Satellite wrote:

がんばってください

1. Uhm, is the countdown needed? Disable it, I guess.

1. 00:09:113 - This place is jarringly empty, IMO. Add a whistle?
2. 00:41:738 (4) - I don't recommend to have a slider's path placed on a new stanza, because it feels really weird like that.

1. 00:12:675 - Map this? The cymbal sound can be confusing if let unmapped, IMO.

1. 00:08:738 (7) - I don't think people will expect the second repeat on first play. Making this a short 4-circle stream should be fine, IMO. Alternatively, split them into two 1/4 sliders?
2. 00:12:675 (3) - Stack this above 00:12:863 (4)'s head? Having a circle with a finish sound stacked below another circle is awkward. It would be even better to Ctrl+G 00:12:675 (3,4), though, actually; goes well with the rhythm of the song.
3. 00:20:738 (6,1) - The anti-jump is... unexpected, at least for me. It also makes hitting 00:21:113 (1,2) feel weird. Stacking (6) above (1)'s head should do.
4. 00:38:925 (1,2) - ...I think this is badly overmapped. Remove them?
5. 00:52:988 (5,6,7) - ...Don't think players will expect that (5) has three repeats and that there is a small jump between (5) and (6), and the flow here is weird because of that. I think you should do something about this.

1. 00:06:488 - Remove the finish? I don't think it's necessary there and only made the spot needlessly loud.

1. 00:08:738 (5,6,7,8,1) - ...Maybe you're trying to make an innovative pattern, but I don't think this one's gonna work. This goes better for me.

MiLu wrote:

おはようございま~す

[General]
・1024x768のBGにしたら?

SPOILER

・難易度によってSlider Tick Rate違うよぅ....2で揃えよう
・Rareの名前のスペース消えたからtagsのR_a_r_eって消してもいいんじゃないかなあ

[Easy]
前奏のところhitsound少なくて物足りなく感じました
whistleがfitsするとIはfeelするんだけど付けてみてはどうです？
00:40:050 (2) - 始点は歌詞にあってるのに終点は曲に合わせててなんか違和感ある。同じく00:41:738 (4) - ここも
この直後の部分も歌詞にあわせておいてるし、ここも歌詞で音取ったらどうです？

00:47:925 (1) - ここからの音取りこういうのはドウっすか

00:50:925 (1) - このスピンのあととKIAI始まるまでのところに置きたくないですか？ないですか...

01:00:113 (1) - なんでここはtickでclap音つけてないん？
01:25:425 (2) - 終点に音つけたい whistleかclap

[normal]
00:21:675 (2) - 折り返しにclapとか
00:27:113 (1) - 始点になんもないの寂しいなぁ soft1にしてfinishとか
00:41:363 (5) - ここのclapをremoveして次の1の始点に付けてみるとか
00:43:425 (4) - こんな音取りどうです？4の終点にclapつけたら幸せになれると思うんだけど

01:00:113 (1) - さすがに画面外って怒Rareる。初期スキンじゃなくてスマンヤデ

SPOILER

01:08:738 (7) - ギリギリ画面内だけどこれも怪しい

[Rare's Hard]
ARとOD逆にしたほうがよくない？ODはいいとしてもnormalと1しか違わないからARはあげたほうがいいと思う
00:42:863 (3) - ここらへんの音取りと配置の提案。見た目重視でスペーシング気にしてないけど

SPOILER

00:53:550 (6) - 若干分かりづらいしこの単発削除してもいいんじゃないかなぁ
01:04:613 (4) - 始点にfinishとか
01:09:488 (2,3,4) - ちょっと配置が詰まってるように感じた。and音取りこんなのとかにしてみてはどうです？


[Cilvery]
この曲AR8のほうが合ってると思うんだけどどうかな　:なおした！！
InsaneがAR9だしHardがAR低いのもあるしで8にしてみては？
00:06:488 (2) - 全部のhitsoundつけてるのはうるさい。finishいらないとおもう　
00:26:175 (5,6,1) - この辺のnewcomboのパターン的にもややこしい。スペーシング揃えるか00:32:925 (5) - にあわせてNCはずすか　
00:28:988 (1) - RNC こっからNCのパターンがズレてる　:ここらへんちょっとなおした
00:30:113 (4) - NC
00:31:613 (1) - RNC
00:43:425 (4) - 形が汚い....　:これわざとでう
00:47:925 (4) - NC?
01:02:925 (6) - ここか01:03:113 (7) - のどっちかにNCで01:04:425 (1) - はRNCしたほうが良いと思う
01:04:800 (3) - このへんclapうるさすぎるように思うからここだけclap消してもいいかも
01:10:425 (6) - ここから急にNCのパターン変わってる？今までのだとここにNC　:うみゅ
01:14:925 (7) - ここも上と同じ
01:15:113 (1,2,3,4) - もうちょっと配置工夫したほうが面白くなるとおもう
01:17:175 (7) - 上のにゅーこんぼのやつ
01:23:363 (4) - ^
01:25:988 (1) - ここじゃなくて01:25:425 (7) - こっちにNCのほうが良い　:ぽｋ


[Insane]
00:39:675 (2,3) - 音取り的な意味で逆にしてみるとか
00:46:988 (3) - 終点のfinish消してもいいと思うなあ
00:49:238 (7,1) - 大差ないけどこの位置いれかえたほうが流れいいかなぁとか

SPOILER

00:58:050 (4,5,6) - ちょっと離してジャンプさせたほうが楽しい

SPOILER

01:22:425 (1) - .....
01:23:550 (4,5,6) - noteはハミ出てないけどアプローチサークルは画面外だしアウトかなぁ

good luck

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi~ m4m from your mod queue

General

Uncheck letterbox during breaks in Easy, Normal, Rare's Hard, Insane

I don't see you need countdown, so uncheck them

Inconsistency in Tags. There's 'R_a_r_e' tags in Insane diff while others don't

Insane

00:08:738 (5,6,7,8,1) - feel weird because you don't stack them. Or you can make these 00:08:738 (5,6,7,8) - a stream, i think it matches the song
00:11:737 (6,7) - prefer unstack
00:46:050 (3,4) - ^
00:52:987 (1) - remove nc
01:05:550 (1) - ^
01:26:925 (1) - it fits better if this slider ends here 01:27:675 - imo

Cilvery

AR-1? So it'll be different with Insane diff　:fixed

00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - the flow is kinda uncomfortable, i think
00:04:800 (1,2,3) - i prefer if you stack here, since you also stack here 00:11:175 (1,2,3) -
00:11:175 (1) - nc is unnecessary here　:removed nc 00:12:113 (5) -
01:00:113 - how about nc? and then remove nc 00:59:925 (1) -
01:02:175 (3,4,5) - prefer stacking
01:06:113 (3) - how about nc? then remove nc 01:05:925 (1) -
01:12:113 (3) - how about nc? then remove nc 01:11:925 (1) -

Rare's Hard

HD+1?

00:11:175 (6,7,8) - for the position, how about like this?

00:32:925 (1) - remove nc
00:33:113 (2) - add nc (big white line)
00:35:925 (1) - remove nc
00:36:113 (2) - add nc (big white line)

Normal

00:10:238 (2) - the slider's tail point should be 256|120 for better flow
00:36:113 (1,2) - how about moving them up the a little?
00:37:425 (3) - how about nc to give emphasis

Ryafuka's Easy

fine

Nice mapsets

My map : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/77115
i hope you're okay with the song

Good luck~

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding for M4M here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General

1. Uhm, is the countdown needed? Disable it, I guess.

>Ryafuka's Easy

1. 00:09:113 - This place is jarringly empty, IMO. Add a whistle?
2. 00:41:738 (4) - I don't recommend to have a slider's path placed on a new stanza, because it feels really weird like that.

>Normal

1. 00:12:675 - Map this? The cymbal sound can be confusing if let unmapped, IMO.

>Rare's Hard

1. 00:08:738 (7) - I don't think people will expect the second repeat on first play. Making this a short 4-circle stream should be fine, IMO. Alternatively, split them into two 1/4 sliders?
2. 00:12:675 (3) - Stack this above 00:12:863 (4)'s head? Having a circle with a finish sound stacked below another circle is awkward. It would be even better to Ctrl+G 00:12:675 (3,4), though, actually; goes well with the rhythm of the song.
3. 00:20:738 (6,1) - The anti-jump is... unexpected, at least for me. It also makes hitting 00:21:113 (1,2) feel weird. Stacking (6) above (1)'s head should do.
4. 00:38:925 (1,2) - ...I think this is badly overmapped. Remove them?
5. 00:52:988 (5,6,7) - ...Don't think players will expect that (5) has three repeats and that there is a small jump between (5) and (6), and the flow here is weird because of that. I think you should do something about this.

>Cilvery

1. 00:06:488 - Remove the finish? I don't think it's necessary there and only made the spot needlessly loud.

　:removed

>Insane

1. 00:08:738 (5,6,7,8,1) - ...Maybe you're trying to make an innovative pattern, but I don't think this one's gonna work. This goes better for me.

...Just it, I guess.

Good luck on the way

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Rare's Hard

HD+1? it doesn't matter i think.

00:11:175 (6,7,8) - for the position, how about like this? no, I want keep my pattern.

00:32:925 (1) - remove nc
00:33:113 (2) - add nc (big white line)
00:35:925 (1) - remove nc
00:36:113 (2) - add nc (big white line)
all fixed at new combo suggestion.

Hinsvar wrote:

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>Rare's Hard

1. 00:08:738 (7) - I don't think people will expect the second repeat on first play. Making this a short 4-circle stream should be fine, IMO. Alternatively, split them into two 1/4 sliders? it doesn't matter.
2. 00:12:675 (3) - Stack this above 00:12:863 (4)'s head? Having a circle with a finish sound stacked below another circle is awkward. It would be even better to Ctrl+G 00:12:675 (3,4), though, actually; goes well with the rhythm of the song. I don't think so.
3. 00:20:738 (6,1) - The anti-jump is... unexpected, at least for me. It also makes hitting 00:21:113 (1,2) feel weird. Stacking (6) above (1)'s head should do. fixed.
4. 00:38:925 (1,2) - ...I think this is badly overmapped. Remove them? changed by myself
5. 00:52:988 (5,6,7) - ...Don't think players will expect that (5) has three repeats and that there is a small jump between (5) and (6), and the flow here is weird because of that. I think you should do something about this. I want to keep my pattern

HabiHolic wrote:

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[Rare's Hard]

• mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:16:425 - Add Note no change. I'm following the bass drum.
2. 00:17:363 - ^ ^
3. 00:20:738 (6) - 00:21:113 (1) - Would overlap with the slider. fixed
   
   Hitsound
   (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
   None~ Good Map~

thanks for modding guys~.
http://puu.sh/2EeNf.osu

CakiP wrote:

お墓から戻してください。おねがいします。なんでもしますから。

Frostmourne wrote:

I suggest you find some more mods for overall quality again to ensure it will be closer to perfect!

1. 00:02:738 (5,6,1) - Considering that you got 2 stacked note here that work better for emphasizing jump, i'd expect bigger jump here like you did at 00:04:238 (5,1) - . You could try arranging them like this or something similiar.
2. 00:05:363 (5,6) - Maybe add whistle on the sliders start to match the next violin section ?
3. 00:49:425 (1) - It's pretty weird for me to let the end of this slider covering the downbeat compared to the how strong the sound is. I'd consider changing this into 2 note or so to match your previous 1/2 pattern.
4. 01:12:488 (4) - I still can hear the snare drum here to be honest, skipping it seems unnecessary. Try adding it with lower volume if you want.
5. 01:08:738 (4) - Move this a bit up leftside could make smoother flow here, current flow seems too edgy compared to the angle if you ask me.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:09:113 (3,7) - Have my random pattern suggestion here XD i just feel it could be neater.
7. 01:15:488 (4,5) - Swap this rhytm, you're breaking consistency with 01:13:613 (3,5) - which emphasizing the high beat vocal and instrument with the slider start, having (4) to cover the vocal would be more fit imo instead of a single note that make the start of (4) having less sense

1. 00:09:488 (3) - I'd place this a bit far from 00:09:300 (2) - , it's kind of nonsense that you placed high jump to (2) but a normal DS to (3) when the instrument is exactly playing a same pitch
2. 00:50:925 (1) - Increase the volume pls, i barely can't notice if you placed a finish here due to how strong the cymbal on the BGM
3. 00:45:675 (2) - Clap on the reverse as you did on your previous rhytm ?
4. 00:54:113 (1) - Um.. are you sure leaving this without hitsound ?
5. 01:22:425 (1) - I'd remove the whistle here.. it doesn't sounds really good along with the finish
6. 01:25:237 (6) - It would be better if you could give a clickable action on the cymbal crash on the end of the song.. It would be much more fun !
   

• I'd consider AR+ 1 here. Some triplet pattern was a bit messy and confusing because they all appeared on the same time because of the low AR

1. 00:01:988 (2) - Plays pretty awkward here, i'd recommend changing this into a note then start a 1/2 to cover the instrument. It's rather weird to emphasize the snare hold with a slider's end that make an awkward 1/1 gap at 00:02:363 - due to the instrument ><
   
2. 00:27:113 (1) - Maybe you can try blanketing it instead of a slightly overlap ? it looks more neater imo !
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:00:113 (1) - Add finish or whistle on slider head maybe to cover the vocal ?
4. 01:16:613 (7) - I'd place a NC here.. it feels too long imo ><
5. 01:26:363 (1,2,3,4) - They would give more sense if you arrange them like this

• Why this diff didn't have any whistles on the intro ? you'd better add it too since Easy also have one >< It's pretty unfair imo

1. 00:12:488 (1,2) - Considering that the cymbal crush at 00:12:675 - is pretty more noticeable instead of the other. Newbies could get confused and they may click (2) way too early. Emphasizing it would be a better choice here.
   
2. 00:25:425 (3) - This slider is slightly offscreen on my skin, i'd move this a bit upside. Just to be on the safe tide.

1. 00:08:738 (3) - I think you missed clap here according to the 2/4 rhytm >.>
2. 00:15:488 (2,4) - This slightly overlap doesnt look really pleased to me, it's kind of ugly. I'd bend (2) more slightly to avoid it.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:28:988 (3) - Just aesthetical feeling here, maybe you could try arranging it like this to create neater transition between them ?
4. 01:01:050 (2) - I'd remove the whistle on the repeat since it's pretty weird. Also You didn't have on on similiar part like 01:10:613 (4) -