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xxhckxyz
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Joined December 2012
xxhckxyz
:) :)


YUKI
SPOILER
00:26:843 (6) - 在00:27:260 - 完比較好

00:35:802 (4) - 在00:36:010 - 會否比較好?

00:44:343 (1) - 在00:44:552 - 開始??

00:45:177 (2) - 在00:45:593 - 完比較好?

00:52:260 (3,4) - 這兩個好奇怪的感覺...就是不合群的感覺 :)

01:00:593 (2) - 這個可以考慮縮短一點啊

01:08:718 (2) - 同上吧~~

01:14:552 - 這個放NOTE會否比較好? 後面的長音繼續用SLIDER

01:15:385 (4) - 奇怪的感覺...?

01:18:093 (3) - 在01:18:510 - 完? 然後01:19:135 (4) - 移到01:18:927 - ?

之後的重覆不看了 :)



2 WEEK　GASAI YUNO

SPOILER
00:30:385 (3,4) - 連續兩個FINISH好突兀的感覺

00:36:218 (6) - 這個SLIDER中間感覺上可以放一點東西

00:46:843 (1) - 感覺這個可以做得跟00:48:510 (5,6) - 相似,...

00:50:177 (1) - 這些位置都放一個彎彎的SLIDER感覺很沒新鮮感...純粹吐糟 :)

00:52:572 (2,3) - 這兩個...

01:00:802 (5) - 這個位好靜....

01:16:427 (4,5) - 對於FINISH等聲音的用法可以請教一下leon1341414大大...看過他的圖感覺用得很不錯...他那個很高SP的圖有人曾講過怎樣用 但是那是英文 如果看不懂可以找我 我看得懂 :) 按我即到該處

下面重覆吧...



1WEEK YUNO

SPOILER
00:23:718 - 感覺這個位可以放NOTE然後00:23:718 (9) - 移到00:23:927 -

00:28:718 (4,5) - 這個應該是刻意的吧!?! 還有00:45:385 (1,2) - 不過也不要緊 這是INSANE吧...而且感覺出現了很多次這個...不過應該沒有問題...還是那句 純粹吐糟...

00:42:677 (1) - 你是想重疊上2吧...歪了

00:58:302 (6,7,8) - 感覺這三個放得很沒美感

01:05:177 (5,6,7) - 聲音方面我上面有說過...

01:06:531 (1) - 感覺有點怪...要是可以的話可在01:06:427 - 加多一個NOTE

01:29:968 (3,4,5) - 感覺地圖上用了很多種這個 感覺很突兀...但這沒有什麼問題的...純粹吐糟....可以不用理會.........真的很多....由1:50至到2:10之間都有幾個....這不是什麼問題 但感覺可以考慮多一點變化~~

01:31:322 (9) - 這個....?

02:08:927 (6,7) - 我會把這兩個的位置換一下..

02:14:656 (7) - 這個........

02:24:031 (4,5) - 同之前一樣...這樣變化雖然不太多..但有點怪...只不過之前我也曾在其他地圖看過類似的東西 所以就不說太多話了...

03:18:093 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 這個做得很帥...不用改...想說很帥而已


另一個你是否還未改好? 是的話我先不MOD了...

感覺你很愛用2note+slider....這沒什麼問題 但把同一個梗用太多次總感覺不太好...
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smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

xxhckxyz wrote:

:) :)


YUKI
SPOILER
00:26:843 (6) - 在00:27:260 - 完比較好

00:35:802 (4) - 在00:36:010 - 會否比較好?

00:44:343 (1) - 在00:44:552 - 開始??

00:45:177 (2) - 在00:45:593 - 完比較好?

00:52:260 (3,4) - 這兩個好奇怪的感覺...就是不合群的感覺 :)

01:00:593 (2) - 這個可以考慮縮短一點啊

01:08:718 (2) - 同上吧~~

01:14:552 - 這個放NOTE會否比較好? 後面的長音繼續用SLIDER

01:15:385 (4) - 奇怪的感覺...?

01:18:093 (3) - 在01:18:510 - 完? 然後01:19:135 (4) - 移到01:18:927 - ?

之後的重覆不看了 :)



2 WEEK　GASAI YUNO

SPOILER
00:30:385 (3,4) - 連續兩個FINISH好突兀的感覺

00:36:218 (6) - 這個SLIDER中間感覺上可以放一點東西

00:46:843 (1) - 感覺這個可以做得跟00:48:510 (5,6) - 相似,...

00:50:177 (1) - 這些位置都放一個彎彎的SLIDER感覺很沒新鮮感...純粹吐糟 :)

00:52:572 (2,3) - 這兩個...

01:00:802 (5) - 這個位好靜....

01:16:427 (4,5) - 對於FINISH等聲音的用法可以請教一下leon1341414大大...看過他的圖感覺用得很不錯...他那個很高SP的圖有人曾講過怎樣用 但是那是英文 如果看不懂可以找我 我看得懂 :) 按我即到該處

下面重覆吧...



1WEEK YUNO

SPOILER
00:23:718 - 感覺這個位可以放NOTE然後00:23:718 (9) - 移到00:23:927 -

00:28:718 (4,5) - 這個應該是刻意的吧!?! 還有00:45:385 (1,2) - 不過也不要緊 這是INSANE吧...而且感覺出現了很多次這個...不過應該沒有問題...還是那句 純粹吐糟...

00:42:677 (1) - 你是想重疊上2吧...歪了

00:58:302 (6,7,8) - 感覺這三個放得很沒美感

01:05:177 (5,6,7) - 聲音方面我上面有說過...

01:06:531 (1) - 感覺有點怪...要是可以的話可在01:06:427 - 加多一個NOTE

01:29:968 (3,4,5) - 感覺地圖上用了很多種這個 感覺很突兀...但這沒有什麼問題的...純粹吐糟....可以不用理會.........真的很多....由1:50至到2:10之間都有幾個....這不是什麼問題 但感覺可以考慮多一點變化~~

01:31:322 (9) - 這個....?

02:08:927 (6,7) - 我會把這兩個的位置換一下..

02:14:656 (7) - 這個........

02:24:031 (4,5) - 同之前一樣...這樣變化雖然不太多..但有點怪...只不過之前我也曾在其他地圖看過類似的東西 所以就不說太多話了...

03:18:093 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 這個做得很帥...不用改...想說很帥而已


另一個你是否還未改好? 是的話我先不MOD了...

感覺你很愛用2note+slider....這沒什麼問題 但把同一個梗用太多次總感覺不太好...

謝啦 修改很多地方 :) 呵呵 我會盡量再改進 :P
xxhckxyz
67 posts
Joined December 2012
xxhckxyz
YUKI
SPOILER
00:30:177 - 加note?
00:32:677 - ^
00:32:885 - ^
00:33:093 - ^
01:10:385 (3) - 疊位問題

TWO WEEK YUNO
SPOILER
還是聲音的問題吧...應該不用每個聲都加whistle...用法可以參考昨天所說的

YUKI AND YUNO
SPOILER
00:18:302 (3) - 未疊好??
00:35:593 - 這附近可以加note?
00:35:801 (2) 00:53:718 (2,5) - - 這個slider的尾部放歪了 不是在紅線上
00:37:543 (7) - 這個...刻意的?
01:01:010 (5,1) - 很怪...
感覺上好像還沒改完...還是先不mod了...太多不合拍的地方...不好說...


ONE WEEK YUNO
SPOILER
還是老問題吧...音聲方面啊....finish等聲音很亂....

可以去改一下像00:50:281 (1,2,3) - 的地方...真的太多了....不過不用急在一時的 :)
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

xxhckxyz wrote:

YUKI
SPOILER
00:30:177 - 加note?
00:32:677 - ^
00:32:885 - ^
00:33:093 - ^
01:10:385 (3) - 疊位問題

這個我再看看 目前已經是定案 應該沒什麼遺漏的 ;)

TWO WEEK YUNO
SPOILER
還是聲音的問題吧...應該不用每個聲都加whistle...用法可以參考昨天所說的

note都差不多了 只剩下聲音 時間線(只是把多的刪掉而已)

YUKI AND YUNO
SPOILER
00:18:302 (3) - 未疊好??
00:35:593 - 這附近可以加note?
00:35:801 (2) 00:53:718 (2,5) - - 這個slider的尾部放歪了 不是在紅線上
00:37:543 (7) - 這個...刻意的?
01:01:010 (5,1) - 很怪...
感覺上好像還沒改完...還是先不mod了...太多不合拍的地方...不好說...

恩阿還沒改完 我上面有寫先no mod 還在改中 :|

ONE WEEK YUNO
SPOILER
還是老問題吧...音聲方面啊....finish等聲音很亂....

可以去改一下像00:50:281 (1,2,3) - 的地方...真的太多了....不過不用急在一時的 :)
ok我會盡量減少一些 :)
xxhckxyz
67 posts
Joined December 2012
xxhckxyz
no mod是指不用mod還是欠缺mod...?
yuki and yuno 還是等你改好我再mod吧~~改好記緊通知我啊 :)

yuki
SPOILER
00:03:927 (3,1) - 太近?
00:27:885 (1) - 和 00:33:302 - 之間好像太空了...可以加note?
01:03:718 (1,2,3,4) - 感覺上可以用note代替某些slider?
01:10:385 (3) - 這個乾脆疊到 01:10:802 (1) - 的尾部吧...
02:00:177 (1,2,3) - 感覺好多短slider....

2week yuno
SPOILER
00:52:260 (1,2,3) - 有點奇怪 但說不出怪在哪
感覺可以在kiai時加一些clap 太靜了...

1week yuno
SPOILER
01:05:177 (5,6,7) - 這連續三個FINISH很刺耳 :o

看了一遍 基本上也找不到有什麼我認為有問題的地方 就是有些位置比較怪 例如這段 01:46:635 (7,8,9) -
真的感覺這首歌不太適合放太多東西在藍線上...

像01:48:927 (3,4,5) - 這種排法反而比上面那種好一點...

感覺比之前好多了 我也挑不出什麼大問題

明天開始我會比較忙 但會盡量抽時間給你MOD的 :D
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

xxhckxyz wrote:

no mod是指不用mod還是欠缺mod...?
yuki and yuno 還是等你改好我再mod吧~~改好記緊通知我啊 :)

yuki
SPOILER
00:03:927 (3,1) - 太近?
00:27:885 (1) - 和 00:33:302 - 之間好像太空了...可以加note?
01:03:718 (1,2,3,4) - 感覺上可以用note代替某些slider?
01:10:385 (3) - 這個乾脆疊到 01:10:802 (1) - 的尾部吧...
02:00:177 (1,2,3) - 感覺好多短slider....

2week yuno
SPOILER
00:52:260 (1,2,3) - 有點奇怪 但說不出怪在哪
感覺可以在kiai時加一些clap 太靜了...

1week yuno
SPOILER
01:05:177 (5,6,7) - 這連續三個FINISH很刺耳 :o

看了一遍 基本上也找不到有什麼我認為有問題的地方 就是有些位置比較怪 例如這段 01:46:635 (7,8,9) -
真的感覺這首歌不太適合放太多東西在藍線上...

像01:48:927 (3,4,5) - 這種排法反而比上面那種好一點...

感覺比之前好多了 我也挑不出什麼大問題

明天開始我會比較忙 但會盡量抽時間給你MOD的 :D
yuki & yuno 還沒改好 是說先不用MOD的意思 想換全新 :roll:
YUKI難度的話 要確定說是666COMBO而且是N難度喔

關於CLAP的聲音我會再考慮+看看
謝嚕 :)
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Shana Aisaka
Hi just a random mod ~ :P

Red - Must Fix !!
Purple - Suggest to fix?
Black - Feel free to ignore

[General]
All seems fine songs and picture but only the diff are really need to fix :)
Some of the timing aren't the same? fix this as well ! :3
Sounds also need to fix cause there are some notes needed and some of it please remove if not necessary :)

[Yuki]
This is easy right? You should make it easy to play :) Make it three star cause minimum is three star for easy/normal

00:01:218(2) - do like this http://puu.sh/1VfLI
00:02:885(1) - Try making it like this http://puu.sh/1VfKg so it's easy to play
00:06:635(3) - make this slider long . http://puu.sh/1VfGL
00:21:218(1) - Errmm.. Try make it 1 by 1 the beat . Please don't make it too many to click since this is easy . See this http://puu.sh/1VfPv
00:53:718 - I think you should put notes instant of spinner here
00:55:177(1) - Remove it
02:28:927 - 03:44:135 please snapped object http://puu.sh/1Vg4f
02:41:845(2) - This doesn't seems like easy/normal already .... Please remove it or fix it
There still so much for me to said but please fix this diff. Make it easy

[Two Weeks Gasai Yuno]
Please don't forget to Distance Snap

01:08:718(2) - Slider looks ugly please fix it
01:18:093(1) - Remove NC
01:31:635(7) - No beats here please remove note
02:09:968 - spinner start here (u may also can put notes here)
02:13:302(1) - Seems really confuse here make it easy to click :P
03:03:718(1) - lol this is too hard xD please fix it.
03:18:093(5) - Better do it like this cause some of it no beat http://puu.sh/1Vgyy


[Yuki & Yuno]
Please Snapped all the notes.
I think you should make Slider Velocity 1.60 or more than 1.40 and Slider Tick make it 1 only or 2
Timing no need to put x1.10

00:52:052(7) - NC
00:54:968(7) - NC
01:00:802 - Kiai Time should start here
03:47:260(9) - do like this http://puu.sh/1VglL Spinner ends also at the same time 03:50:802
03:50:802 - Put timing here same as Two Weeks Yuno Gasai diff

[One Weeks Gasai Yuno]
Please don't forget to snapped your object http://puu.sh/1VgcQ

00:05:663(1) - Put finish at the end of the slider
00:21:218(1) - DS (Distance Snap)
00:50:177 - do like this is much better http://puu.sh/1Vgbc
01:32:260 - add note
01:52:190(4) - Remove note there's no beat here
02:41:843(2) - Slider looks ugly fix it
03:28:302(8) - NC (New Combo)
03:50:802 - Timing as well

Okay that's all ~ :D
Good Luck ! :3
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
English - Chinese translation help for mapper's request, no kds

Shana Aisaka wrote:

[General]
All seems fine songs and picture but only the diff are really need to fix :)
Some of the timing aren't the same? fix this as well ! :3
Sounds also need to fix cause there are some notes needed and some of it please remove if not necessary :)

整体看起来还好，timing没有统一需要修正，另外有些note需要做一些增减的修正。

[Yuki]
This is easy right? You should make it easy to play :) Make it three star cause minimum is three star for easy/normal

这个是Easy吧，要做到3星以下

00:53:718 - I think you should put notes instant of spinner here 我认为你需要在spinner后面放个note (补充，E/N里不建议spinner后面直接放note)
00:55:177(1) - Remove it 删掉
02:41:845(2) - This doesn't seems like easy/normal already .... Please remove it or fix it 这个看起来不怎么Easy，删了

[Two Weeks Gasai Yuno]
Please don't forget to Distance Snap 别忘了DS

01:08:718(2) - Slider looks ugly please fix it - slider形状难看
01:18:093(1) - Remove NC - 去掉NC
01:31:635(7) - No beats here please remove note - 这里没有节奏，去掉note
02:09:968 - spinner start here (u may also can put notes here) - 把spinner放到这里开始
02:13:302(1) - Seems really confuse here make it easy to click :P - 读图有困难点不到
03:03:718(1) - lol this is too hard xD please fix it. - 太难了

[b][Yuki & Yuno]
[color=#FF0000]Please Snapped all the notes. - note没有对齐到时间轴
I think you should make Slider Velocity 1.60 or more than 1.40 and Slider Tick make it 1 only or 2 - 建议用1.6的sv，Slider Tick Rate用1或者2
Timing no need to put x1.10 - 时间线没必要放到1.10x

00:52:052(7) - NC
00:54:968(7) - NC
01:00:802 - Kiai Time should start here - kiai从这里开始

03:50:802 - Put timing here same as Two Weeks Yuno Gasai diff

[One Weeks Gasai Yuno]
Please don't forget to snapped your object http://puu.sh/1VgcQ

00:05:663(1) - Put finish at the end of the slider
00:21:218(1) - DS (Distance Snap)
00:50:177 - do like this is much better http://puu.sh/1Vgbc
01:32:260 - add note
01:52:190(4) - Remove note there's no beat here
02:41:843(2) - Slider looks ugly fix it
03:28:302(8) - NC (New Combo)
03:50:802 - Timing as well

Okay that's all ~ :D
Good Luck ! :3
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat
TO Shana Aisaka :)

SPOILER
Yuki & Yuno

00:52:052(7) - NC (fixed)
00:54:968(7) - NC (fixed)
01:00:802 - Kiai Time should start here (fixed)
03:47:260(9) - do like this http://puu.sh/1VglL Spinner ends also at the same time 03:50:802 (fixed)
03:50:802 - Put timing here same as Two Weeks Yuno Gasai diff (fixed)

Yuki
This is easy right? (no,it"s normal diff,i hope it ↓3.67 stars)

00:01:218(2) - do like this http://puu.sh/1VfLI (fixed)
00:02:885(1) - Try making it like this http://puu.sh/1VfKg so it's easy to play (fixed)
00:06:635(3) - make this slider long . http://puu.sh/1VfGL (fixed)
00:21:218(1) - Errmm.. Try make it 1 by 1 the beat . Please don't make it too many to click since this is easy . See this http://puu.sh/1VfPv ( Part fixed)
00:53:718 - I think you should put notes instant of spinner here
00:55:177(1) - Remove it (fixed)
02:28:927 - 03:44:135 please snapped object http://puu.sh/1Vg4f (fixed)
02:41:845(2) - This doesn't seems like easy/normal already .... Please remove it or fix it (fixed)

Two Weeks Gasai Yuno
Please don't forget to Distance Snap OK :)

01:08:718(2) - Slider looks ugly please fix it (fixed)
01:18:093(1) - Remove NC (fixed)
01:31:635(7) - No beats here please remove note (fixed)
02:09:968 - spinner start here (u may also can put notes here) (fixed)
02:13:302(1) - Seems really confuse here make it easy to click (fixed)
03:03:718(1) - lol this is too hard xD please fix it. (fixed)
03:18:093(5) - Better do it like this cause some of it no beat http://puu.sh/1Vgyy (fixed)

One Weeks Gasai Yuno
Please don't forget to snapped your object http://puu.sh/1VgcQ (fixed)

00:05:663(1) - Put finish at the end of the slider (fixed)
00:21:218(1) - DS (Distance Snap) (fixed)
00:50:177 - do like this is much better http://puu.sh/1Vgbc (fixed)
01:32:260 - add note (紫) (fixed)
01:52:190(4) - Remove note there's no beat here (fixed)
02:41:843(2) - Slider looks ugly fix it (fixed)
03:28:302(8) - NC (New Combo) (fixed)
03:50:802 - Timing as well (fixed)

Thank your mod :)
hope you mod next time ;)
Gundam
136 posts
Joined January 2011
Gundam
Hi~from M4M
红色是表示unrank的地方 必须要改正 其他的随意~
[General]
需要一个3星以下的难度才符合rank规则哦w

[Yuki]
00:05:177(1) - 不知道你为什么很喜欢在这种直线slider末端点红点0 0..没什么用啦 不过影响也不大_(:з」∠)_
02:29:343 - 把02:29:552(4) 移到这里然后给slider多加一个折返

[Two Week Gasai Yuno]
finish太多啦...我给你挑几个然后你按这个规律去消其他的哦
00:27:260(7) - remove finish
00:28:927(5) - ^
00:37:260(9) - ^
00:40:593(7) - ^
00:42:260(3) - ^
00:43:302(1) - ^
00:44:552(1) - ^

[Yuki & Yuno]
这张BG尺寸有问题edit:尺寸没问题 抱歉 :o 不过这个黑边真的好难看……如果可以的话还是换一张 记得换 finish和上一个难度一样的问题 自己check哦ww 总体来说是很不错的diff 如果能多用用长slider就好了

00:36:739(1) - 移动到00:36:635
01:21:843(1,2,3,4) - 全选 然后移动(1)到01:21:635 然后在;1:23:093 add a circle
02:22:885(2) - slider结束于02:23:302
03:01:322(4) - 移动到03:01:427
03:03:718(1) - 移动到03:03:510 然后这么拉感觉比较好w
SPOILER
03:19:135(1) - 移动到03:18:927
03:19:552 - add a circle
03:20:177 - ^
03:22:156(1) - 移动到03:22:052

[One week gasai yuno]
nice diff :D 不过finish还是有点多/w\

01:02:052 - add a circle
01:05:177(5,6,7) - 用soft
01:52:052 - add a circle 把这里的绿线移动到01:52:156
02:11:010 - add a circle
02:22:468 - ^
02:36:635 - ^
03:39:552 - ^
YuZuKi Kenny
YuZuKi Kenny
怎麼不移去pending呢
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

YuZuKi Kenny wrote:

怎麼不移去pending呢
還沒做完 能拿去pending放?
我是還剩ds間距 hitsound 綠線那些還沒放好 :lol:
Tsumetaku
732 posts
Joined May 2012
Tsumetaku
嗨 回訪 有點忙所以晚了點.x.
恩...關於Pending的話 我個人認為 節奏排好就可以了 HS那些都是MOD的 不過要不要移也隨意ˇ
General
---------
Non
1'week那張圖~ww

Normal
---------
01:32:677 (2) - 這個用成Reverse
02:28:927 - 換Slider到這裡?
02:31:218 - 縮短到02:31:427這
02:31:635 - ^如果採用就加Note

Normal+
---------
03:18:927 - 或許改成Slider到(1).

Hard
---------
好恐怖的綠線團-e- 電G那段配的不錯
01:40:385 - 縮到01:40:593
01:40:802 - ^如果採用就加Note
03:12:052 - 縮到03:12:260
03:12:468 - ^如果採用就加Note


Insane
---------
02:51:218 - Finish 有點太多了
其他都OK~


抱歉我看不出什麼大端倪 :) 就這樣吧(?
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

lead8964878 wrote:

嗨 回訪 有點忙所以晚了點.x.
恩...關於Pending的話 我個人認為 節奏排好就可以了 HS那些都是MOD的 不過要不要移也隨意ˇ
General
---------
Non
1'week那張圖~ww

Normal
---------
01:32:677 (2) - 這個用成Reverse 不用 沒關係
02:28:927 - 換Slider到這裡? 不用
02:31:218 - 縮短到02:31:427這
02:31:635 - ^如果採用就加Note 有縮短 沒+

Normal+
---------
03:18:927 - 或許改成Slider到(1). OK 修改

Hard
---------
好恐怖的綠線團-e- 電G那段配的不錯 謝誇獎XD
01:40:385 - 縮到01:40:593
01:40:802 - ^如果採用就加Note
03:12:052 - 縮到03:12:260
03:12:468 - ^如果採用就加Note


Insane
---------
02:51:218 - Finish 有點太多了
其他都OK~


抱歉我看不出什麼大端倪 :) 就這樣吧(?
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
from pm :3
Hitsound mod only .__.

[General]
• 我認為Full Ver. 可以刪除 因為ranking criteria註明 歌曲除非本身的名字有(Full Ver.) 否則不用加任何東西在後面 :3
• 歌曲有192 kbps的嗎 因為我聽到很多雜音 D:

[Normal]
• 可以說一說hitsound以外的東西嗎XD
SPOILER
• 這個normal 難度很高 combo數最高10 但normal1一般最只去到8 能弄一下嗎?
• slider形狀不太工整 flow也不太好看(個人意見..
• 至於hitsound 我好像聽不到任何hitsound lol
• 很多都是紅線開始 就我看來是跟歌詞對吧? 但我覺得mapping就是跟音樂走 作伴奏而不是vocal 所以跟白線才是我的方式 如果是我的話 我會remap ;w;
• spacing方面也有很輕微的錯誤 1.11 1.12 之類的 重新排列一下吧
• NC方面比較混亂 例如
SPOILER

• 01:55:593 (2) - 沒有音樂在那兒 delete
• 02:33:302 (1) - 這spinner的長度太嚇人 請map吧 不要浪費那裡的音樂
• 02:56:010 (3) - 這種slider的形狀我真的很討厭;w; 像蝦米一樣 不如全部轉成直線吧..
• 02:59:135 (4) - remove finish
• 03:17:468 (2) - ^
• 03:26:635 (1) - 太長了..
• 03:41:843 (3,2) - 重疊
• 03:44:552 (2) - delete 放note在 03:44:552 (2)
• 03:47:468 (1) - slider太大聲 音量可以更低

[Normal+]
• HP,CS,AR -1
• OD-2
• NC 感覺混亂
• 00:45:802 (3) - 減少一個reverse部分
• 01:04:343 (3) - 放在 01:04:552
• 01:08:093 (5) - 只是normal了吧 不要stack .__.
• 01:19:968 (1) - 太長 浪費音樂 請map t.t
• 01:36:427 (2) - 重疊在後面
• 01:36:427 (2) - 01:47:052 這裡hitsound音量太高
• 01:55:593 (3) - delete

02:06:218 (3) -

• 02:08:510 (4,5,6) - 這個三連打不應該出現在normal 就算normal+也是= =
• 我懶惰 所以mod了一半 後面只mod hitsound
• 02:33:302 (1) - 跟上面normal一樣太長
• 02:45:593 (6) - 從後面stack
• 02:50:593 (6) - remove finish
• 又是hitsound聲量太大的問題:3 這裡只是過渡性的對吧
• 02:56:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這段讓人透不過氣來
• 03:00:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
• 03:17:052 (3,4) - 兩個slider交換位置
• 03:24:343 (2) - delete
• 03:26:635 (1) - 太長 請map 不要因為歌曲長就擺放那麼多spinner 如果覺得太長 不如弄Short Ver.?
• 03:36:010 (4) - 這種slider的形狀我真的很討厭;w; 像蝦米一樣 不如全部轉成直線吧..
• 太多reverse slider善用copy and paste功能 以及用多點長slider

[Hard]
• 感覺4個map diff都是同一個style 很多蝦米slider..打得很辛苦..轉直線能嗎?
• 節奏差不多就不mod了
• 真的只mod hitsound..
• 00:47:885 這裡開始到 00:54:135 hotsound音量應減少
• 01:28:093 - 01:47:468 - ^
• 02:06:843 (1) - 這個NC是怎麼回事0.0?
• 02:13:302 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個圖案很奇怪 不是對稱 不是5邊形 是甚麼0.0?
• 02:35:072 (1,2) - 不好看..
• 02:40:385 (1,1) - 混亂NC ww (建議: 通常白色大白線開NC)
• 02:51:010 (7) - 蝦米slider...

[Insane]
• 最好的diff是這個
• 00:41:010 (1) - delete
• 01:02:676 (3,4) - lower volume
• 01:05:176 (5,6) - ^
• 01:09:135 (4) - remove whistle
• 基本上所有3連打的whistle音量都可以降低
• 01:19:031 (7) - lower volume
• 01:23:822 (2) - ^
• 01:29:968 (3,4) - ^
• 01:31:843 (1) - =_=? 音樂有這麼快嗎?
• 01:34:552 - 降低音量 基本上可以跟hard一樣的hitsound setting 兩個diff也很像
• 所以我在這裡停了:3

以上
進步空間很大 ;)
特別是pattern 擺放位置 slider形狀 (歌曲本身重複的部分很多 map完前面那些其實可以copy and paste放在後面
就這樣:3
Fycho
Global Moderator
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Fycho
未来日记~！！
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

yfvail wrote:

未来日记~！！
恩阿 好歌 :)
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
歌非常好听，我很喜欢。刚看了下，绿线好多呀
音效建议加自定义音效可以把某些滑条音去掉，另外可以把Normal的Hit声音换到Soft的clap上，省去了加绿线的麻烦
歌曲的话，可以找个192Kbps的音质更好点的
其他跟具体的周末帮你看看吧，Good luck :)
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
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- Miomio Chii -
/me bite smallboat and run away
smallboat
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Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

/me bite smallboat and run away
i kick Miomio Chii and throw her out on the road. 8-)
- Miomio Chii -
440 posts
Joined October 2012
- Miomio Chii -

smallboat wrote:

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

/me bite smallboat and run away
i kick Miomio Chii and throw her out on the road. 8-)
/me shout " Baka " and run away.
smallboat
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Topic Starter
smallboat
i applied my hands to the ears and catch up Miomio Chii :lol: 8-) (slap her face 8-)
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
MOD BG:

Please BG is 1024x768 or 800x600

or I to seek his help BG

SPOILER





THIS IS OMG!!!!!
GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!! (SORRY, IF HIS GREATNESS BG!!!!!)
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
No kudosu:

remove Happy Fate in the tags
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

gokugohan12468 wrote:

MOD BG:

Please BG is 1024x768 or 800x600

or I to seek his help BG

SPOILER





THIS IS OMG!!!!!
GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!! (SORRY, IF HIS GREATNESS BG!!!!!)
OK I will pick one picture ↑　　ＴＨＡＮＫＳ！ :) 　(POOR ENGLISH..)

your bg is good ! but size is not "1024 x 768?
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren

smallboat wrote:

gokugohan12468 wrote:

MOD BG:

Please BG is 1024x768 or 800x600

or I to seek his help BG

SPOILER





THIS IS OMG!!!!!
GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!! (SORRY, IF HIS GREATNESS BG!!!!!)
OK I will pick one picture ↑　　ＴＨＡＮＫＳ！ :) 　(POOR ENGLISH..)

your bg is good ! but size is not "1024 x 768?

I know
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
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Fycho
我来post一发
建议 仅供参考
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Mirai Nikki - Yuno's Theme 2 Happy Fate [English Subbed].mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1974
PreviewTime: 59760
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 4968,21010,34343,46635,60802,87468,107885,119447,134135,160802,200697,214343
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Happy Fate
TitleUnicode:Happy Fate
Artist:Choucho
ArtistUnicode:Choucho
Creator:smallboat
Version:说好的建议
Source:Mirai Nikki
Tags:yuno mirai nikki song
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg4.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,32251,44843
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,255,255,255

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802,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
5593,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
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53718,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0


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happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
巨遲到對不起;w;/
好吧我承認我懶了;w; 我mod最低跟最高難度吧

[General]
  1. 個人覺得bg1,bg3,bg4這3個背景圖的質素有點低, 有點朦朦的, 強烈建議更換ww''
  2. Artist 加一下日文吧0 0
  3. tags裡的song, Mirai, Nikki可以刪去
  4. 整張圖多加些音效owo, 可以讓圖的完成度高點, 可參考這個 http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory
[Normal]
  1. OD-1?
  2. 00:29:552 (1) - 消去NC (感覺沒有需要
  3. 00:31:218 (1) - ^
  4. 00:36:218 (1) - ^
  5. 00:37:885 (1) - ^
  6. 00:42:052 (2,3,4) - 個人覺得有點太難了, 換成折返slider?
  7. 00:42:885 (1) - remove NC
  8. 00:50:802 (1) - 要是前面stack的話, 這個不妨也stack一下? :D
  9. 00:55:593 (3) - 這個短的slider折返有點太多, 保持1次折返就好
  10. 00:58:718 (1) - 刪去NC
  11. 00:59:968 (1) - ^
  12. 01:00:802 (2) - 這裡NC
  13. 01:02:052 (1) - 刪走NC
  14. 01:09:552 (1) - ^
  15. 01:19:135 (3) - 這裡的slider扭成跟01:18:302 (2) 一樣會美觀一點, 可以用copy 0 0
  16. 01:29:760 (1) - remove NC
  17. 01:34:135 (4) - 這裡NC, 刪去01:34:552 (1) 的NC
  18. 01:36:010 (1) - 刪去NC, 一般來說都是白線NC
  19. 01:37:885 (1) - ^
  20. 01:47:468 (6) - NC, 消走01:47:885 (1) 的NC
  21. 01:49:552 (1) - 刪去NC (以下不看nc了,跟著大白線試試放;w;)
  22. 02:06:635 - 這個break有點突然;w; 不建議這裡起break
  23. 02:12:260 (2) - 這個slider折返位不對音;w;
  24. 02:51:635 (2,3,4) - note與slider overlap不太好, 建議把滑條拖開一點
[1 Week Yuno's Insane]
  1. 00:09:343 (5) - 放在這裡有點怪怪的;w; 可以試一下放在00:08:718 (4) 的中間把它包住, 像這樣 http://puu.sh/3wp7g.jpg
  2. 00:10:802 (1,2) - 可以把它們包好 http://puu.sh/3wp9B.jpg
  3. 00:12:468 (7) - 多了紅點在尾巴;w; , 還有NC? 感覺combo數有點多ww
  4. 00:18:510 (5) - 放在這? http://puu.sh/3wpdu.jpg 然後NC~
  5. 00:26:010 (6) - 放高一點不要跟00:26:218 (7) overlap較好0 0
  6. 00:30:385 (5) - 放後一點做nice blanket http://puu.sh/3wpkR.jpg
  7. 00:31:635 (1) - 跟前面的distance spacing(ds)一樣放較好 例如這樣 http://puu.sh/3wpmA.jpg , 改的話00:32:052 (2,3) 也要一起走~
  8. 00:33:927 (2) - http://puu.sh/3wpoC.jpg
  9. 00:56:010 (10) - 跟ds?
  10. 01:14:135 (1) - copy 01:13:510 (6) ?
  11. 01:47:468 (9) - finish
  12. 01:59:135 (10) - NC?
  13. 02:06:843 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/3wpw9.jpg
  14. 02:40:176 (1,2) - 不要overlap會好看一點w
  15. 02:48:301 (1,2) - ^
  16. 02:53:927 (2) - 尾巴finish
  17. 02:53:927 (2) - 感覺這個折返點被擋住有點難讀
  18. 03:35:801 (5) - http://puu.sh/3wpCP.jpg
  19. 03:38:718 (6) - http://puu.sh/3wpDl.jpg
  20. 03:39:760 (1) - 被03:39:135 (8) 擋住不夠好看;w;
先這樣~Good Luck :D
smallboat
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Topic Starter
smallboat

happy623 wrote:

巨遲到對不起;w;/
好吧我承認我懶了;w; 我mod最低跟最高難度吧

呵呵 我也遲到了 最近在忙一點事 現在才要開始改 哈哈 :D
Koa_old_1
30 posts
Joined August 2012
Koa_old_1
第一次帮别人MODDING 别嫌弃>.<
Generale
BG分辨率什么的楼上好像已经说过了,还有就是音质好像不太给力
Normal+的OD改成4或者5吧
Normal
首先是整个曲子的hitsound都没做.....相比insane难度无数的绿线,这个大概还是未完成的吧:D
00:35:385 (2) - 从这里开始应该要适当的加些24clap
00:47:468 (1) - 加入whistle 后面一个NOTE也一样
00:55:593 (3) - 个人觉得再往右边放一点更好
01:31:010 (2) - 这个slider长了半拍
01:42:677 (1) - 后面半拍处补一个NOTE比较好
02:00:802 (1) - 同 00:47:468 (1) -
02:05:593 (3) - 唔 我知道这里你是想按vocal来,但是后面2个NOTE又是按伴奏来的....如果不统一一下会很奇怪
02:52:885 (4) - 这里应该去掉clap或者改成finish
Hard
我觉得HARD难度是做的最好的~
01:42:051 (4) -这里改成一个slider自然点
01:50:593 (8) - 同上
02:06:843 (1) - slider意义不明
02:55:385 (1) - 这里大概在前面加2个NOTE改成3连比较好?或者改成一个带reverse的slider?
insane
太晚了没时间仔细看了T.T
HP改成7吧~
打了一遍,觉得主要是排列有些不自然
00:55:385 (9) - 感觉很棒,可以借着这个normal hit从00:53:510 (9) - 开始做一个音量的渐强,一直到kiai部分
03:04:968 (6) - 类似这种stream的DS可以放大一些
jump的距离可以加大一点比如 02:13:510 (2) - 03:27:468 (5) -
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Koa_old_1
30 posts
Joined August 2012
Koa_old_1
顺便求mutual交流mapping心得 ^>^
smallboat
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Topic Starter
smallboat

Koaxx wrote:

顺便求mutual交流mapping心得 ^>^
嗯嗯 已加 多指教嚕!
smallboat
1,687 posts
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Topic Starter
smallboat

happy623 wrote:

巨遲到對不起;w;/
好吧我承認我懶了;w; 我mod最低跟最高難度吧

[General]
  1. 個人覺得bg1,bg3,bg4這3個背景圖的質素有點低, 有點朦朦的, 強烈建議更換ww'' 嗯嗯 還在找說 你那圖我下次更新再更換 8-)
  2. Artist 加一下日文吧0 0 fixed
  3. tags裡的song, Mirai, Nikki可以刪去 fixed
  4. 整張圖多加些音效owo, 可以讓圖的完成度高點, 可參考這個 http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory
勉強看得懂一些英文..

[Normal]
  1. OD-1?
  2. 00:29:552 (1) - 消去NC (感覺沒有需要 fixed
  3. 00:31:218 (1) - ^ fixed
  4. 00:36:218 (1) - ^ fixed
  5. 00:37:885 (1) - ^ fixed
  6. 00:42:052 (2,3,4) - 個人覺得有點太難了, 換成折返slider? fixed
  7. 00:42:885 (1) - remove NC fixed
  8. 00:50:802 (1) - 要是前面stack的話, 這個不妨也stack一下? :D fixed 話說stack是什麼意思(搔頭
  9. 00:55:593 (3) - 這個短的slider折返有點太多, 保持1次折返就好 fixed
  10. 00:58:718 (1) - 刪去NC fixed
  11. 00:59:968 (1) - ^ fixed
  12. 01:00:802 (2) - 這裡NC fixed
  13. 01:02:052 (1) - 刪走NC fixed
  14. 01:09:552 (1) - ^ fixed
  15. 01:19:135 (3) - 這裡的slider扭成跟01:18:302 (2) 一樣會美觀一點, 可以用copy 0 0 fixed
  16. 01:29:760 (1) - remove NC fixed
  17. 01:34:135 (4) - 這裡NC, 刪去01:34:552 (1) 的NC fixed
  18. 01:36:010 (1) - 刪去NC, 一般來說都是白線NC fixed
  19. 01:37:885 (1) - ^ fixed
  20. 01:47:468 (6) - NC, 消走01:47:885 (1) 的NC fixed
  21. 01:49:552 (1) - 刪去NC (以下不看nc了,跟著大白線試試放;w;) fixed
  22. 02:06:635 - 這個break有點突然;w; 不建議這裡起break fixed
  23. 02:12:260 (2) - 這個slider折返位不對音;w; fixed
  24. 02:51:635 (2,3,4) - note與slider overlap不太好, 建議把滑條拖開一點
fixed

[1 Week Yuno's Insane]
  1. 00:09:343 (5) - 放在這裡有點怪怪的;w; 可以試一下放在00:08:718 (4) 的中間把它包住, 像這樣 http://puu.sh/3wp7g.jpg fixed
  2. 00:10:802 (1,2) - 可以把它們包好 http://puu.sh/3wp9B.jpg fixed
  3. 00:12:468 (7) - 多了紅點在尾巴;w; , 還有NC? 感覺combo數有點多ww fixed 紅點是指?
  4. 00:18:510 (5) - 放在這? http://puu.sh/3wpdu.jpg 然後NC~ fixed
  5. 00:26:010 (6) - 放高一點不要跟00:26:218 (7) overlap較好0 0 fixed
  6. 00:31:635 (1) - 跟前面的distance spacing(ds)一樣放較好 例如這樣 http://puu.sh/3wpmA.jpg , 改的話00:32:052 (2,3) 也要一起走~ fixed
  7. 00:33:927 (2) - http://puu.sh/3wpoC.jpg fixed
  8. 00:56:010 (10) - 跟ds? fixed
  9. 01:14:135 (1) - copy 01:13:510 (6) ? fixed
  10. 01:47:468 (9) - finish fixed
  11. 01:59:135 (10) - NC? fixed
  12. 02:06:843 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/3wpw9.jpg fixed
  13. 02:40:176 (1,2) - 不要overlap會好看一點w fixed
  14. 02:48:301 (1,2) - ^ fixed
  15. 02:53:927 (2) - 尾巴finish fixed
  16. 02:53:927 (2) - 感覺這個折返點被擋住 有點難讀 fixed
  17. 03:35:801 (5) - http://puu.sh/3wpCP.jpg fixed
  18. 03:38:718 (6) - http://puu.sh/3wpDl.jpg fixed
  19. 03:39:760 (1) - 被03:39:135 (8) 擋住不夠好看;w;
fixed

先這樣~Good Luck :D
tks mod!
Fycho
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Fycho
stack是重叠的意思，过两天来看~
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Xinchii
[Easy]
  1. 00:07:468 - 這邊應該還可以做,不需要Break吧?
[2 W]
  1. 00:07:468 - 同Easy
  2. 00:50:802(2) - 避開覆蓋note
  3. 01:40:177(6) - ^
  4. 01:48:093 - 加個note?
  5. 02:18:510 - ^
[Hard]
  • 00:09:343(1,2,3,4) - 距離一樣比較好
  1. 00:11:635(1) - 太近了::><::
  2. 00:29:343 - 加一個note
  3. 01:10:802(4) - 這邊的距離也調整一下吧 , 跟(3)黏在一起了
  4. 02:13:302(1,2,3,4,5) - 建議整理一下 , 其他也有許多地方的note滿亂的 , 也建議檢察之後整理一下
    SPOILER

    PS.整理之後會比較整齊 , 不過不用改成圖的樣子 , 只是做個示意
  5. 02:19:135(3) - 間距問題
  6. 02:34:135(3,4,1,2) - ^
  7. 02:35:177(2,3) - 這個梗不太適合這邊 , 02:35:385(3)開頭沒有高潮點 , 這邊換間距頗突然
  8. 02:38:093(3,4,5) - 間距
  9. 03:00:385(1,2,3) - ^
  10. 03:08:822(2,3,4,5) - ^ , (3,4,5)跟(5,6)的拍子是一樣的 , 可是(2,3)間距長,(3,4)的間距短,(4,5,6)又變回(2,3)的間距 , 有點擾人
[1 W]
  1. 00:08:093(2) - Remove slider尾的Whistle , 或換成clap?
  2. 00:50:593(2) - 試試這個?
    SPOILER

    也許這裡可以順著歌聲起伏加個變距?

    純屬參考
  3. 01:14:135(1) - 距離01:13:510(6)- 有點近 , 可以拉遠一點
    考慮轉一下slider的方向? 這flow感覺不是很舒服
  4. 03:15:593(7) - x:272 Y:232 跟(6)做個包覆
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
smallboat

Koaxx wrote:

第一次帮别人MODDING 别嫌弃>.< 不會 很歡迎你!
Generale
BG分辨率什么的楼上好像已经说过了,还有就是音质好像不太给力 還在尋找..
Normal+的OD改成4或者5吧fixed
Normal
首先是整个曲子的hitsound都没做.....相比insane难度无数的绿线,这个大概还是未完成的吧:D
00:35:385 (2) - 从这里开始应该要适当的加些24clap fixed
00:47:468 (1) - 加入whistle 后面一个NOTE也一样 fixed
00:55:593 (3) - 个人觉得再往右边放一点更好 fixed
01:31:010 (2) - 这个slider长了半拍 fixed
01:42:677 (1) - 后面半拍处补一个NOTE比较好 fixed
02:00:802 (1) - 同 00:47:468 (1) - fixed
02:05:593 (3) - 唔 我知道这里你是想按vocal来,但是后面2个NOTE又是按伴奏来的....如果不统一一下会很奇怪 fixed
02:52:885 (4) - 这里应该去掉clap或者改成finishfixed
Hard
我觉得HARD难度是做的最好的~
01:42:051 (4) -这里改成一个slider自然点 fixed
01:50:593 (8) - 同上 fixed
02:06:843 (1) - slider意义不明 fixed
02:55:385 (1) - 这里大概在前面加2个NOTE改成3连比较好?或者改成一个带reverse的slider? fixed 改成折返

insane
太晚了没时间仔细看了T.T
HP改成7吧~ fixed
打了一遍,觉得主要是排列有些不自然
00:55:385 (9) - 感觉很棒,可以借着这个normal hit从00:53:510 (9) - 开始做一个音量的渐强,一直到kiai部分 fixed
03:04:968 (6) - 类似这种stream的DS可以放大一些 fixed
jump的距离可以加大一点比如 02:13:510 (2) - 03:27:468 (5) -
tks~! 我的reply要晚幾天才會回復 ~sor唷!
smallboat
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Topic Starter
smallboat

leon1341414 wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:07:468 - 這邊應該還可以做,不需要Break吧? fixed 已去除 做了一些
[2 W]
  1. 00:07:468 - 同Easy fixed 已去除 做了一些
  2. 00:50:802(2) - 避開覆蓋note fixed
  3. 01:40:177(6) - ^ fixed
  4. 01:48:093 - 加個note? fixed
  5. 02:18:510 - ^ fixed
[Hard]
  • 00:09:343(1,2,3,4) - 距離一樣比較好 fixed 有空幫看一下
  1. 00:11:635(1) - 太近了::><:: fixed
  2. 00:29:343 - 加一個note fixed
  3. 01:10:802(4) - 這邊的距離也調整一下吧 , 跟(3)黏在一起了 fixed
  4. 02:13:302(1,2,3,4,5) - 建議整理一下 , 其他也有許多地方的note滿亂的 , 也建議檢察之後整理一下 好 會注意
    SPOILER

    PS.整理之後會比較整齊 , 不過不用改成圖的樣子 , 只是做個示意
  5. 02:19:135(3) - 間距問題 fixed
  6. 02:34:135(3,4,1,2) - ^ fixed
  7. 02:35:177(2,3) - 這個梗不太適合這邊 , 02:35:385(3)開頭沒有高潮點 , 這邊換間距頗突然 fixed 已換近
  8. 02:38:093(3,4,5) - 間距 fixed
  9. 03:00:385(1,2,3) - ^ fixed
  10. 03:08:822(2,3,4,5) - ^ , (3,4,5)跟(5,6)的拍子是一樣的 , 可是(2,3)間距長,(3,4)的間距短,(4,5,6)又變回(2,3)的間距 , 有點擾人 fixed 換了
[1 W]
  1. 00:08:093(2) - Remove slider尾的Whistle , 或換成clap? fixed
  2. 00:50:593(2) - 試試這個? fixed
    SPOILER

    也許這裡可以順著歌聲起伏加個變距? fixed

    純屬參考
  3. 01:14:135(1) - 距離01:13:510(6)- 有點近 , 可以拉遠一點 fixed
    考慮轉一下slider的方向? 這flow感覺不是很舒服
  4. 03:15:593(7) - x:272 Y:232 跟(6)做個包覆 fixed
謝謝~ 目前這幾天只回文還沒要上傳最新的 所以要看還要等幾天唷
Tsumetaku
732 posts
Joined May 2012
Tsumetaku
As said~

佔位 更新好喵我w
:D

某日本凜再次路過 驚覺完全忘了要幫看=3=
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smallboat
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Topic Starter
smallboat

Tsumetaku wrote:

As said~

佔位 更新好喵我w
:D
OK 我現在才看到 SOR :o

剛剛還擔心說你是來幫我mod的還是無聊晃的哈 :lol:
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