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Karen Paola - Ven Ven Ven

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Revengexsoyah
652 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Revengexsoyah
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 01 de marzo de 2014 at 4:32:12

Artist: Karen Paola
Title: Ven Ven Ven
Tags: xincrin
BPM: 134
Filesize: 4070kb
Play Time: 02:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0,47 stars, 66 notes)
  2. Insane (4,94 stars, 313 notes)
  3. Normal (2,43 stars, 137 notes)
  4. Xin's Hard (4,72 stars, 243 notes)
Download: Karen Paola - Ven Ven Ven
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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best song ever.
25/01 : New mp3 (Thanks XinCrin)

Easy 100%
Normal 100%
Hard 100% (by XinCrin)
Insane 100%
Last edited by Revengexsoyah , edited 10 times in total.
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
La calidad del audio es muy baja y ademas unrankeable . Aqui te dejo un mejor audio con 192 kbps

http://puu.sh/1SfLj

El timing seria :

1. Offset: 1,035ms BPM: 134.01

Avisame cuando hagas esto , para modear tu mapa ;)
Cobra
352 posts
Joined June 2012
Cobra
You should lower the hitsound volume a bit... (from when the volume is at 100%)

And also... change BPM to 134, not 134.01. I don't think the extra 0.1 is needed. :)
Revengexsoyah
652 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Revengexsoyah

uscobra wrote:

You should lower the hitsound volume a bit... (from when the volume is at 100%)

And also... change BPM to 134, not 134.01. I don't think the extra 0.1 is needed. :)
I put volume hitsound in 80 % , sounds good i think
and i delete 0.1, thanks
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
General:

SPOILER
Background
a_more_abstract_flower_by_tchaikovskycf.jpg is 650x401, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768. u should resize it


Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:135, ends on 01:05:507
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:298, ends on 01:14:462
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:59:235, ends on 02:04:600
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:06:398, ends on 02:13:562

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:135, ends on 01:05:507
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:298, ends on 01:14:462
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:59:235, ends on 02:04:607
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:06:398, ends on 02:13:562

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:135, ends on 01:05:507
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:298, ends on 01:14:462
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:59:235, ends on 02:04:600
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:06:398, ends on 02:13:562

- [Xin's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:139, ends on 01:05:512
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:303, ends on 01:14:467
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:59:243, ends on 02:04:617
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:06:408, ends on 02:13:572

alot of not snaped notes in normal and insane

Insane:

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timing > resnap all notes

Normal:

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same resnap all notes
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
Oh where is the mod ? . Just i see the spoilerbox and many AiBat :roll:
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
  • Oah :3

    General
  1. Due to the change of BPM. The offset was altered slightly, so in conclusion the correct timing is:

    1. Offset: 1.062 ms BPM: 134,00
    .
  2. Unsnnaped inherited point

    Easy
  3. 00:01:062 (1) Put a Finish to start of the slider, is the beginning of the map and gives better sound
  4. 00:08:226 (1) ^
  5. 00:11:136 (4) This slider of 1/2 is totally unnecessary, because not follow the music or the voice . In my opinion you should delete the slider and put a circle in 00:11:360 (x) , is better for me
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  6. 00:13:151 These ignoring this place where the voice sounds clearly. Consider adding a circle here, to not feel so empty this place
  7. 00:13:599 (1) The music starts with more energy at the end of the spinner, so you should put a Finish in this spinner , sounds very good
  8. 00:29:718 (1) A slider here with many reverse, plays very bad . You should remove the slider, and put a spinner in place , plays better
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  9. 00:31:509 (1) Put a Finish in the beginning of the slider
  10. 00:35:091 (5) Move this slider to x:136 y:112 , because it is very high. Nearby to scorebar. And this could be unranked . And do not forget to fix the spacing of the next notes
  11. 00:47:181 (2,3) This blanket looks very bad, and a little uncomfortable to play. I have a better idea, because we do a semi curved linear with one slider curved , flows better imo
    SPOILER
  12. 01:00:614 From this place, your hitsounds patterns, are incorrectly bads . I leave a list, with the correct position of the claps.
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  13. 01:00:614 (1) Clap in the beginning of the slider
  14. 01:01:509 (2) Clap here
  15. 01:01:957 (3) Clap just in the second reverse and in the end of the slider
  16. 01:04:196 (5) Clap
  17. 01:05:091 (7) Clap in the beginning of the slider
  18. 01:05:987 (8) ^ in the beginning of the slider
  19. 01:06:882 (1) Clap
  20. 01:07:330 (2) ^ in the reverse
  21. 01:08:673 (3) ^ in the beginning of the slider
  22. 01:09:569 (4) Clap
  23. 01:10:464 (6) Clap
  24. 01:10:912 (7) ^ in the end of the slider
  25. 01:12:703 (1) Put a finish in this spinner , really sounds better
  26. 01:28:823 (1) Same as 00:29:718 (1)
  27. 01:40:241 (5) Put a Clap in the end of the slider. To continue with your hitsounds patterns . From here, your hitsounds patterns are bad :(
  28. 01:47:629 (5) You used constant curved sliders, why is right here? , Plays and looks bad. This should also be curved slider ^^
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  29. 02:06:435 (2) Maybe you did not notice, but here's a little bad spacing . Please fix it
  30. 02:24:345 (6) This slider is colliding with the numbers of the score, this is unranked. Move this slider, some grids
    below to fix the problem
Insane
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
orz , lo siento soyah . No tengo idea , pero no puedo editar mi mod de arriba . Eso es todo por ahora supongo . Volvere a rechekear tu mapa luego ;)
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,528 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Easy

All the Kiai times are not snapped
00:13:572 (1) - maybe end this with more impact with a finish
00:29:691 (1) - finish on end of slider
00:37:751 (6) - ^
00:45:811 (1) - finish too
00:51:184 (5) - finish on end of slider, these parts all have cymbal sounds
00:58:348 (1) - finish because of the impact when chorus starts
01:07:303 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:12:676 (1) - finish
01:28:796 (1) - finish on end of slider
01:44:020 (4) - ^
01:57:452 (1) - finish
02:17:154 (3) - clap at start of slider

It's a pretty simple rhythm, so honestly there is nothing much that go wrong with this rhythm. Just that at some parts, the objects do look they were randomly placed, possibly due to the shape and where they flow.

Normal

Check your AiMod, Your objects aren't snapped, and so are you kiai times
00:13:571 (1) - finish
try and implement the finishes I suggested in Easy for the cymbals
00:47:150 (2,3) - same thing about positioning making it look random, try not to overlap them, or least have them this close to each other, almost touching
01:47:594 (5,6) - another example, try not to touch
Rhythm is still fine, but the way it looks, it could be more stylish and not look so out of place (they look like objects that are just placed there, for the sake of being there)

Xin's Hard

00:44:915 (1) - finish at the end of this slider
00:50:288 (3,4) - could this be blanketed better?
00:51:632 (1) - maybe if you ctrl-J this slider and make it such that it blankets the end of 00:50:960 (4) too it would look nicer
01:54:542 (3,4) - curve around it better?

Insane

AiMod again for the unsnapped issues
I think work on this before anything else, sorry, I don't think I will look further into Insane :X

Good luck
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