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xxhckxyz
I am a beginner in modding. hope my suggestion can help you.


easy
SPOILER
01:30:833 easy is for beginning and i think this may make them confusing....

other is okay for me...


normal
SPOILER
maybe this is similar to a hard map ...i think....too difficult for new player.

00:46:297 i think this will not exist in normal map ...umm...i am not sure~~just a suggestion.

01:18:152 same....i think normal maps are provided for beginner...this may make them confusing...

if u think the idea is useless, please just ignore it....i don't have any good suggestion :(
Teru21

Light Usagi wrote:

don't kd this post orz KDS THIS PLEASE

Not sure if the BG quality is actually ugly, or you've resized the BG without caring the aspect ratio. You might want to try this one!

[Oni]
00:10:214 - k okeiii :D
buang finish dari double note ? (misalnya seperti 01:38:255 ), menurut gua agak susah mencetnya (kalo pake key setting kddk), tapi gatau lagi sih bakal ubah kalo ada yang protes lagi :D

I can't find anything wrong on the taiko, everything is good already
and besides that, I never liked this song :C WUUUUUUUUUUUUUT NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! i love this song so much




I've got satisfied with my extremely awesome rabbit life already, I don't need a better cat life! B-but i need 'em >__<
thanksss XD

I gave you the update via in-game XD
Topic Starter
blackabyss

xxhckxyz wrote:

I am a beginner in modding. hope my suggestion can help you.


easy
SPOILER
01:30:833 easy is for beginning and i think this may make them confusing....

other is okay for me... it isn't stack btw. so, it won't be hard to read :3


normal
SPOILER
maybe this is similar to a hard map ...i think....too difficult for new player.

00:46:297 i think this will not exist in normal map ...umm...i am not sure~~just a suggestion. sorry no. hehe, i just want to make it harder then the easy one btw

01:18:152 same....i think normal maps are provided for beginner...this may make them confusing... ^

if u think the idea is useless, please just ignore it....i don't have any good suggestion :(
thanks for your effort to mod o//
xxhckxyz

blackabyss wrote:

xxhckxyz wrote:

I am a beginner in modding. hope my suggestion can help you.


easy
SPOILER
01:30:833 easy is for beginning and i think this may make them confusing....

other is okay for me... it isn't stack btw. so, it won't be hard to read :3


normal
SPOILER
maybe this is similar to a hard map ...i think....too difficult for new player.

00:46:297 i think this will not exist in normal map ...umm...i am not sure~~just a suggestion. sorry no. hehe, i just want to make it harder then the easy one btw

01:18:152 same....i think normal maps are provided for beginner...this may make them confusing... ^

if u think the idea is useless, please just ignore it....i don't have any good suggestion :(
thanks for your effort to mod o//


give you a referce :)
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/52000
This is a ranked map
normal 01:08:595....it has a set of circle and slider like you. So I think it is okay but not too much...
Decipher

blackabyss wrote:

Light Usagi wrote:

I've got satisfied with my extremely awesome rabbit life already, I don't need a better cat life! but rabbit can't said nyaan nyaan >:3

Teru21 wrote:

Light Usagi wrote:

I've got satisfied with my extremely awesome rabbit life already, I don't need a better cat life! B-but i need 'em >__<
but saying にゃん doesn't makes you looks better or anything (ノ)=×=(ヾ) haha
forgot my dekil star ★ ヽ( · × · ヽ)
Yuki-kun
Hi~ :D
From my queue

> General:
* Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Teru's Muzunyan] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga
- [Teru's Oninyan] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21

* Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Teru's Muzunyan] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:348, ends on 01:02:998
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750
- [Teru's Oninyan] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:01:761, ends on 01:02:998
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750

You can ignore about Kiai Times if you want, because i don't know much about taiko mapset ^^"

> Normal
- AR + 1
- I think you should change the diff name to Normal+ or Hard, since the average star is 4.36, it's not compatible with Normal diff.
01:32:688 (6) - NC here?

> Easy
01:28:358 (5) - NC here
01:59:905 (1) - May be end this spinner at 02:01:761 better?
03:11:967 (1) - Move to 03:12:276 and finish at 03:17:750. I think that will fit with vocal and music than :D


That's all i can do. Hope this mod can help you. :D
Nice map. Good luck :p
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Light Usagi wrote:

but saying にゃん doesn't makes you looks better or anything (ノ)=×=(ヾ) haha
forgot my dekil star ★ ヽ( · × · ヽ)
lol. it just what i think. thanks for the stars o//

xxhckxyz wrote:

give you a referce :)
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/52000
This is a ranked map
normal 01:08:595....it has a set of circle and slider like you. So I think it is okay but not too much...
hm, i'll considering about this if other mod complain about this again. sry.
thanks for the reference


Yuki-kun Mods

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~ :D hi, thanks for coming o//
From my queue

> General:
* Inconsistency in Tags: fix
- [Teru's Muzunyan] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga
- [Teru's Oninyan] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21

* Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Teru's Muzunyan] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:348, ends on 01:02:998
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750
- [Teru's Oninyan] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:01:761, ends on 01:02:998
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750
^i've check this for teru21 and the Kiai are consistent :?

You can ignore about Kiai Times if you want, because i don't know much about taiko mapset ^^" thanks for try to mod it btw o//

> Normal
- AR + 1 lol no. over all this is normal.
- I think you should change the diff name to Normal+ or Hard, since the average star is 4.36, it's not compatible with Normal diff. i'll think again about this. but i prefer this is normal diff. after all
01:32:688 (6) - NC here? fix

> Easy
01:28:358 (5) - NC here fix
01:59:905 (1) - May be end this spinner at 02:01:761 better? no, i prefer this the end now
03:11:967 (1) - Move to 03:12:276 and finish at 03:17:750. I think that will fit with vocal and music than :D no, there's no vocal there. so i don't agree


That's all i can do. Hope this mod can help you. :D
Nice map. Good luck :p
thanks for your mod yuki-kun. it's help me xD
CPLs
just suggest
from queue
3mins? fine

[Easy]
The diff setting is kinda low

00:24:029 why not change to something else? (I don't know the "something",just add something that you think correct)
00:28:977 ^
01:17:224 ugly slider
01:37:018 change to repeat slider?
01:43:204 ^ (same as next one)
03:06:090 add note?

[Normal]

00:14:286 move to white tick
00:20:626 normal slider
00:25:730 delete this or move to white tick (some pattern like this maybe you should change)

thats all I can help
thankss,,
Topic Starter
blackabyss

copolah123 wrote:

just suggest
from queue
3mins? fine lol, actually draining time is > 2 mins

[Easy]
The diff setting is kinda low because it is easy btw

00:24:029 why not change to something else? (I don't know the "something",just add something that you think correct) no, because it isn't ugly imo. you should gave me more clue like what i should change it :<
00:28:977 ^ ^
01:17:224 ugly slider nope, i think not. this is mainly sliders.
01:37:018 change to repeat slider? okay, fix
01:43:204 ^ (same as next one) no, i will keep this one since it no problem i think
03:06:090 add note? no, i follow the vocal and there's no vocal at that place

[Normal]

00:14:286 move to white tick fix
00:20:626 normal slider nope, i like this repeat sliders. and it's sounds good btw.
00:25:730 delete this or move to white tick (some pattern like this maybe you should change) no, i guess it's fine. cause i follow the trumpet (?)

thats all I can help
thankss,,
thanks for your mod. i'm the one who should said thanks xD
creampuff
finally done, nya~
take my hard difficulty
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Tsusuko wrote:

finally done, nya~
take my hard difficulty
thanks nyaaan~
Update btw, and please re-dowload this :3
Saten
Timing check~
Offset 1771 (+10ms) works best for me
Test and see if it works for you as well

Good luck with this nyan

Another thing..

01:40:430 - The preview fits better here imo (right before the chorus)
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Saten wrote:

Timing check~
Offset 1771 (+10ms) works best for me
Test and see if it works for you as well

Good luck with this nyan

Another thing..

01:40:430 - The preview fits better here imo (right before the chorus)
thanks for the timing check nyaten :3
but i think the offset is fine now. lol.
and about the preview points, i don't want to change it because i feel it fits and can draws the atmosfere before chorus time lol.
787B
Hi ♫
Sorry for keep you waiting
From my Modding Queue

General
How about slider tick 1 on all diffs? I think they are "overmapped" the way it is, I think they would sound better with just one.

Easy
This diff is very clear.
00:15:368 (3,4) - Try to avoid placing objects under the lifebar. How about making (4) into a curved slider to improve that? Or maybe you can just move them a bit down on the grid.
01:48:152 (1) - Could have reshape this for a "big" blanket with 01:47:533 (4) - http://puu.sh/1SzdK
03:11:967 (1) - Spin should start at 03:12:276 - It sounds better imo.

Normal
00:20:626 (4) - This slider is very weird, it doesn't match with the song at all imo, especially because of tick rate 2 like I wrote. Consider changing patterns, something like this.
00:22:791 (3) - Manual stack this to a grid up. It's not perfectly aligned with 00:21:554 (1) - You can clearly see when (1) fades. http://puu.sh/1Szz8 Note that I've used grid level 4.
00:25:781 (6) - I'd put this circle stacked with 00:25:575 (5) - This is a Normal after all, that kind of beat they are currently placed is mostly used in hard/insane.
00:30:730 (3) - ^
00:35:678 (6) - ^
02:00:214 (1) - Spin should've started at 02:00:523 - So basically you'll need to keep mapping for just a bit. Here's a pattern you could use: http://puu.sh/1SzHl
02:59:905 (2,3) - Doesn't play nice, try a pattern like this instead.

Tsusuko's Hard
The song is in 1/3, not 1/4.
00:12:585 (2) - Circle should be moved to 00:12:508 -
00:28:513 (4,5,6) - Totally off with the beat, consider deleting them and using a different pattern.
03:05:626 (3) - Not perfectly stacked with 03:05:163 (2) -
03:11:657 (1,2) - Stack them?

Good luck!
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Wolf wrote:

Hi ♫ hi~
Sorry for keep you waiting no prob btw www
From my Modding Queue

General
How about slider tick 1 on all diffs? I think they are "overmapped" the way it is, I think they would sound better with just one. okay, agree

Easy
This diff is very clear. lol
00:15:368 (3,4) - Try to avoid placing objects under the lifebar. How about making (4) into a curved slider to improve that? Or maybe you can just move them a bit down on the grid. moved
01:48:152 (1) - Could have reshape this for a "big" blanket with 01:47:533 (4) - http://puu.sh/1SzdK i try
03:11:967 (1) - Spin should start at 03:12:276 - It sounds better imo. 2 mods complain about this, so i'll change it. lol

Normal
00:20:626 (4) - This slider is very weird, it doesn't match with the song at all imo, especially because of tick rate 2 like I wrote. Consider changing patterns, something like this. i think i doesn't matter because i change the slider tick rate to 1. so i keep this
00:22:791 (3) - Manual stack this to a grid up. It's not perfectly aligned with 00:21:554 (1) - You can clearly see when (1) fades. http://puu.sh/1Szz8 Note that I've used grid level 4. fix
00:25:781 (6) - I'd put this circle stacked with 00:25:575 (5) - This is a Normal after all, that kind of beat they are currently placed is mostly used in hard/insane. moved, but i don't want to stack it. i'll change the pattern, if other's mod complain about this too :oops:
00:30:730 (3) - ^ ^
00:35:678 (6) - ^ ^
02:00:214 (1) - Spin should've started at 02:00:523 - So basically you'll need to keep mapping for just a bit. Here's a pattern you could use: http://puu.sh/1SzHl this too. lol. fix
02:59:905 (2,3) - Doesn't play nice, try a pattern like this instead. fix

Good luck! thanks for your mods~
creampuff
gah, sorry for the delay ;w;
i was sick
but here it is
btw gave you a star~
Tari
Modding time from queue~

[General]

  1. Please take off a color and add orange combo color to this set. It fit with song overall and with the bg and video very nicely, but if you want you can just add orange and not remove any combo color. I think the most appropriate combo color to remove is white? Green yellow and blue seem to go well with this. Make sure if you add the orange combo color you do it for all diffs.
  2. You miss Tsusuko in the tags. should really fix this since tsusuko do hard diff for you, and its obvious he should get credit for making a diff.
[Easy]

Rhythm is alright, map could be cleaner overall, some slider shapes need to be changed, placement is cool as well :P

  1. 00:21:554 (1) - Slider look really funky to me, I think you should make a new shape or make the curves curve less. If you wonder what slider I would make, here a little picture for you : http://puu.sh/1SjxK I kinda re positioned the slider, but change the slider whatever way you want really. this is just an example!
  2. 00:26:502 (1,2) - Small thing I noticed, but those aren't perfectly alligned you can fix it by moving the second note 2 grids down.
  3. 00:57:430 (2,3,4,5) - This seem like an awful a lot of clicking for me, I think its a bit too much for an easy diff, maybe turn it into simplify rhythm, like separating it into 2 sliders?
  4. 00:58:667 (6) - This slider has potential, but you should tidied it up and make the curl prettier~. I think there a guide around here to make good slider shapes :P
  5. 01:23:410 (4) - Using same slider shapes over and over again can get really boring. You should try out new shapes and see what you can come up with because there a lot of variety in slider shape.
  6. 01:33:307 (5) - Please reposition slider :<, This note : 01:31:451 (2) - seem to be squished with it when I look in editor and it doesn't look nice in its current location.
  7. 01:55:575 (1) - Finish instead of whistle, Obviously because It has a stronger beat / boom than the other notes and it feels nice imo if you add it here. adjust the volume of the finish here if you want.
  8. 01:58:049 (4,5,6) - Rhythm suggestion, It follows the vocals more so I'll let you decide if you want to keep it or not. http://puu.sh/1TABB
  9. 01:59:905 (1) - Spinner start a bit too early, It starts around the places you can add notes and stuff. You should start the spinner 2 ticks forward and add notes here : 01:59:905 and here : 02:00:214 , Do this only if you follow the above suggestion.
  10. 02:20:317 (1) - Finish should definetely be here, this is the part where Len and Rin transition in singing , Adding a finish here will really signal that very well.
  11. 02:25:265 (1) - Add finish here too, Just for consistency.
  12. 02:41:657 (3,4) - Since there already really close to lining, you should line note 3 and 4 perfectly in the y-axis
  13. 02:52:482 (1) - Again, there a transition in Rin and Len singing, thus you should add a finish. Try to find these transitions and add them accordingly please.
  14. 03:02:379 (1) - ^
  15. 02:57:431 (1) - As stated above, this slider look funky try some new shapes and see what you can come up with.
  16. 02:58:668 (2,3,4) - Note 3 is like 1 grid off, really nazi but you should anyways because it's best to keep this map clean as possible.
  17. 01:58:049 (4) - The last note in the last kiai has a finish, For sake of consistency, you should add a finish here as well.
  18. 00:58:667 (6) - ^
[Normal]

Note seem clammed up in this diff :( Try to use your mapping area wisely, and I think HP Drain 5 is harsh :< should reduce by 1 tick

  1. 00:16:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pentagon shape can be improved, don't worry so much about the blanket in note 6, do blankets only if you can, worry about shape and patterns first.
  2. 00:11:657 (1) - Yes , first note should have finish, do for all diffs, its just common sense to have them in the first note.
  3. 00:22:791 (3) - Symmetry error obviously, the slider end position isn't perfectly stacked with slider note : 00:21:554 (1) - start position, fix this or try something else.
  4. 00:25:575 (5,6) - Strange rhythm, the note 6 is pretty hard to predict, suggest you convert this into sliders and please don't let notes overlap sliders it looks really bad ><
  5. 00:30:523 (2,3) - If you do the above you must change this too.
  6. ^
  7. 00:27:431 (3,4,5,6) - Perfect square here please, It look better overall when playing.
  8. 00:36:709 (2) - change the position, try this : http://puu.sh/1TCxb
  9. 01:11:039 (1) - Please add finish here, I explained this already in easy.
  10. 01:20:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Readjust pattern and put it in center to make it symmetrical.
  11. 01:28:358 (7) - Please add new combo here, because you add it to similar parts like 01:23:410 (1) - , break nc consistency if you don't. please check some of your combo's xP
  12. 01:32:688 (1) - Remove new combo here please, next combo should be close.
  13. 01:33:307 (3) - New combo here Dx, Reason mentioned above,
  14. 01:30:523 - Maybe add a note here?
  15. 01:58:049 (8) - Try new shape, here a shape you could do, http://puu.sh/1TCL2
  16. 02:14:286 - ? Why no note here, in the previous combo you did rhythm way different even though it should be the same?
  17. 02:11:348 (2) - If you don't do above, please extend 1 tick above and remove this note 02:11:657 (3) -
  18. 02:20:317 (1) - Finish here, for same reason.
  19. 02:50:008 (1) - Maybe add finish here?
[Tsusuko]

Good job Tsu, this diff is the best in the mapset :P

  1. 00:37:946 (5,6,7) - Anti-jump breaks flow a little here, maybe you should remove it and form a triangle like this : http://puu.sh/1TD4m?
  2. 00:45:678 (7) - Ctrl+G for better flow?
  3. 01:56:503 (4) - ^
  4. 00:54:802 (6) - I think for symmetrical patterns, you should make the sliders identical, so please Ctrl+G this as well.
  5. 01:38:255 (8,9) - For both sliders reverses, add finish because were reaching the climax of the song.
  6. 02:19:699 (5) - Finish end maybe?
  7. 02:27:740 (1) - o.O Spinner is quite long, Should split into two sliders and possible add some notes in between the two spinners.
  8. 02:33:925 (5,6,7) - Same reason above. but if you don't remove the jumps, please put new combo signaling it.
  9. 02:35:472 (4) - Well, I think to be consistent on your jumps, you should also Ctrl+G this.
Easy and Normal need more work, Hard is awesome :)

Good luck and I hope my mod help you~
Carlos
sorri for late :P im pretty bussy right now but here is your taiko mod :D

teru's muzunyan (loved that name ewe) :

its very cool, its doesn't really need a real mod ewe

teru's oninyan :

mmm you know its good but it can be better in many ways

first: try not to repeat too much the paterns because after play it 2 or 3 times is kinda boring, nothing new for say smething.

second: i think that it could be better if you put more patterns instead of big notes, just that (i love hard patterns :D )

everything on taiko maps are fine, thay can be better tough... good luck and sorry for the mod it a week late :P
Teru21

Rock Forever wrote:

sorri for late :P im pretty bussy right now but here is your taiko mod :D

teru's muzunyan (loved that name ewe) kyaha~! sasuga ore >w<)bbb /plak :

its very cool, its doesn't really need a real mod ewe really? thanks :D

teru's oninyan :

mmm you know its good but it can be better in many ways

first: try not to repeat too much the paterns because after play it 2 or 3 times is kinda boring, nothing new for say smething. hmm? so what pattern would be good in this map? XD tell me o3o

second: i think that it could be better if you put more patterns instead of big notes, just that (i love hard patterns :D ) but I love big notes *slapped*

everything on taiko maps are fine, thay can be better t'h'ough... good luck and sorry for the mod it a week late :P
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Taris wrote:

Modding time from queue~

[General]

  1. Please take off a color and add orange combo color to this set. It fit with song overall and with the bg and video very nicely, but if you want you can just add orange and not remove any combo color. I think the most appropriate combo color to remove is white? Green yellow and blue seem to go well with this. Make sure if you add the orange combo color you do it for all diffs. change the white combo colours
  2. You miss Tsusuko in the tags. should really fix this since tsusuko do hard diff for you, and its obvious he should get credit for making a diff. i had done it D: http://puu.sh/1TUBQ GMT+7
    you should re-download it =w=
[Easy]

Rhythm is alright, map could be cleaner overall, some slider shapes need to be changed, placement is cool as well :P

  1. 00:21:554 (1) - Slider look really funky to me, I think you should make a new shape or make the curves curve less. If you wonder what slider I would make, here a little picture for you : http://puu.sh/1SjxK I kinda re positioned the slider, but change the slider whatever way you want really. this is just an example! changed, but different
  2. 00:26:502 (1,2) - Small thing I noticed, but those aren't perfectly alligned you can fix it by moving the second note 2 grids down. okay
  3. 00:57:430 (2,3,4,5) - This seem like an awful a lot of clicking for me, I think its a bit too much for an easy diff, maybe turn it into simplify rhythm, like separating it into 2 sliders? no, i'll keep this. it maybe isn't too difficult imo.
  4. 00:58:667 (6) - This slider has potential, but you should tidied it up and make the curl prettier~. I think there a guide around here to make good slider shapes :P changed
  5. 01:23:410 (4) - Using same slider shapes over and over again can get really boring. You should try out new shapes and see what you can come up with because there a lot of variety in slider shape. no, i'll keep this. this sliders is just a few at this diff.
  6. 01:33:307 (5) - Please reposition slider :<, This note : 01:31:451 (2) - seem to be squished with it when I look in editor and it doesn't look nice in its current location. fix
  7. 01:55:575 (1) - Finish instead of whistle, Obviously because It has a stronger beat / boom than the other notes and it feels nice imo if you add it here. adjust the volume of the finish here if you want. no, i don't think it's fits. sorry
  8. 01:58:049 (4,5,6) - Rhythm suggestion, It follows the vocals more so I'll let you decide if you want to keep it or not. http://puu.sh/1TABB no, it'll messed up the pattern
  9. 01:59:905 (1) - Spinner start a bit too early, It starts around the places you can add notes and stuff. You should start the spinner 2 ticks forward and add notes here : 01:59:905 and here : 02:00:214 , Do this only if you follow the above suggestion. no, the sliders will become short and it'll be hard for easy
  10. 02:20:317 (1) - Finish should definetely be here, this is the part where Len and Rin transition in singing , Adding a finish here will really signal that very well. no, i have put one or much at this 02:19:080 (3,4,5). and btw, this is len gumi song. lol :P
  11. 02:25:265 (1) - Add finish here too, Just for consistency. no, i have put clap there
  12. 02:41:657 (3,4) - Since there already really close to lining, you should line note 3 and 4 perfectly in the y-axis fix
  13. 02:52:482 (1) - Again, there a transition in Rin and Len singing, thus you should add a finish. Try to find these transitions and add them accordingly please. no, and this is not rin len songs :I
  14. 03:02:379 (1) - ^ ^
  15. 02:57:431 (1) - As stated above, this slider look funky try some new shapes and see what you can come up with. changed
  16. 02:58:668 (2,3,4) - Note 3 is like 1 grid off, really nazi but you should anyways because it's best to keep this map clean as possible. fix
  17. 01:58:049 (4) - The last note in the last kiai has a finish, For sake of consistency, you should add a finish here as well. no, i have put finish here 01:59:286 (5,6)
  18. 00:58:667 (6) - ^ added
[Normal]

Note seem clammed up in this diff :( Try to use your mapping area wisely, and I think HP Drain 5 is harsh :< should reduce by 1 tick
^ yeah, i have thingking about this. changed

  1. 00:16:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pentagon shape can be improved, don't worry so much about the blanket in note 6, do blankets only if you can, worry about shape and patterns first. hm... changed a bit
  2. 00:11:657 (1) - Yes , first note should have finish, do for all diffs, its just common sense to have them in the first note. hey, i have added clap D:
  3. 00:22:791 (3) - Symmetry error obviously, the slider end position isn't perfectly stacked with slider note : 00:21:554 (1) - start position, fix this or try something else. please re-download, i had fixed it
  4. 00:25:575 (5,6) - Strange rhythm, the note 6 is pretty hard to predict, suggest you convert this into sliders and please don't let notes overlap sliders it looks really bad >< changed
  5. 00:30:523 (2,3) - If you do the above you must change this too. ^
  6. 00:27:431 (3,4,5,6) - Perfect square here please, It look better overall when playing. fix
  7. 00:36:709 (2) - change the position, try this : http://puu.sh/1TCxb okay
  8. 01:11:039 (1) - Please add finish here, I explained this already in easy. nope
  9. 01:20:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Readjust pattern and put it in center to make it symmetrical. no, it'll messed up with other pattern
  10. 01:28:358 (7) - Please add new combo here, because you add it to similar parts like 01:23:410 (1) - , break nc consistency if you don't. please check some of your combo's xP okay
  11. 01:32:688 (1) - Remove new combo here please, next combo should be close.okay
  12. 01:33:307 (3) - New combo here Dx, Reason mentioned above, ^
  13. 01:30:523 - Maybe add a note here? no, i think it's not perfect with the trumpet
  14. 01:58:049 (8) - Try new shape, here a shape you could do, http://puu.sh/1TCL2 no, no. i'll keep that.
  15. 02:14:286 - ? Why no note here, in the previous combo you did rhythm way different even though it should be the same? just changed the previous pattern
  16. 02:11:348 (2) - If you don't do above, please extend 1 tick above and remove this note 02:11:657 (3) - ^
  17. 02:20:317 (1) - Finish here, for same reason. no, i don't really like it
  18. 02:50:008 (1) - Maybe add finish here? ^
Easy and Normal need more work, Hard is awesome :) yep, thanks for your mod :3//
the hard diff is use 1/4 btw, it should use 1/3 lol

Good luck and I hope my mod help you~ thanks o//
thanks for your taiko mod too Rock Forever :>
indyinyou
hi

[Easy]
00:16:606 : fin
00:21:554 : add fin remove whistle
00:26:503 : ^
00:31:451 : ^
00:36:400 : ^
00:46:297 : ^
00:51:245 : ^
00:56:193 : ^

[Normal]
02:00:523 : this spin it too short / use slider better ?
02:13:822 : remove this note
02:16:297 : ^
02:18:771 : ^
02:25:266 : fin

[Hinely s Nyaaan]
02:31:761 : make like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593569

sry my poor english

i m not good in fast bpm
Topic Starter
blackabyss

indyinyou wrote:

hi oh hi o/

[Easy]
00:16:606 : fin okay
00:21:554 : add fin remove whistle no, i don't think it's fit with the music
00:26:503 : ^ ^
00:31:451 : ^ ^
00:36:400 : ^ ^
00:46:297 : ^ i don't want it. it feels kind strange, imo
00:51:245 : ^ no i don't want it
00:56:193 : ^ ^
too much finish, it isn't good btw :/

[Normal]
02:00:523 : this spin it too short / use slider better ? use sliders instead
02:13:822 : remove this note no. a bit, i mixed up vocal with rhythm
02:16:297 : ^ ^
02:18:771 : ^ ^
02:25:266 : fin i don't think it needed

sry my poor english

i m not good in fast bpm but you give your effort to try to mod this, aren't you? thanks btw o//
EDIT: btw, as xinely said, the hinely diff. didn't change any thing.
creampuff
Taris's mod

Taris wrote:

[Tsusuko]

Good job Tsu, this diff is the best in the mapset :P You think so? ;w;

  1. 00:37:946 (5,6,7) - Anti-jump breaks flow a little here, maybe you should remove it and form a triangle like this : http://puu.sh/1TD4m?
    I suppose I could remove it. Changed.
  2. 00:45:678 (7) - Ctrl+G for better flow? No, I'm keeping it this way. No change
  3. 01:56:503 (4) - ^ ^
  4. 00:54:802 (6) - I think for symmetrical patterns, you should make the sliders identical, so please Ctrl+G this as well. Ok. Fixed.
  5. 01:38:255 (8,9) - For both sliders reverses, add finish because were reaching the climax of the song. Those sliders are no longer there.
  6. 02:19:699 (5) - Finish end maybe? A finish does seem more fitting, yes. Changed.
  7. 02:27:740 (1) - o.O Spinner is quite long, Should split into two sliders and possible add some notes in between the two spinners. I'm not sure how I could do that, so I'll keep this as it is.
  8. 02:33:925 (5,6,7) - Same reason above. but if you don't remove the jumps, please put new combo signaling it. Added NC.
  9. 02:35:472 (4) - Well, I think to be consistent on your jumps, you should also Ctrl+G this. There's no jump here o.o

late uguu
http://puu.sh/1WT24
SPOILER
One thing about the 1/3;
If I put the beatmap to 1/3, it means I would have to re-map my entire difficulty. I want to keep it at 1/4, but if that's considered unrankable, then I'll change it to 1/3. Sorry for troubling you.
Lochinvar
Make this ranked plox :I #ifyoudontiwillhuntallofyoudown :D
SkyDevil
nyanyanyan
Sonnyc
Easy:

-- Some notes are unsnapped by 1ms. (e.g. 00:41:966 (2,3))

00:16:606 (1) - Is the Finish here a mistake? If then, delete plz.
00:41:966 (2,3) - I think the whistle should be at the end of (2), not (3).
00:58:358 (5) - Delete this. I don't think 5 clicks fit in Easy, even the rhythm is 1/1.
02:19:080 (3,4) - Imo to emphasize Finish in (5), I suggest to delete Finishes in these notes.
02:39:531 (4) - Why did you placed at 1/8?
02:42:005 (4) - ^
02:50:008 (1) - Delete Finish? Sounds noisy.
03:06:400 (4) - I think hit sound with Whistle-Clap is better.

Normal:

00:52:173 (3) - I can't agree with a long slider in this kind of part. Instead, place a note at 00:52:173 and make a slider in "Nyan nyan nyan"
00:58:668 (7) - NC?
01:47:843 (1) - The linear here wasn't completely straight. Was that your intention?
02:29:905 (1) - Delete this note. A note right after a spinner will be hard, considering this diff is Normal.
02:29:905 (1,1,1,1) - Combos were too short, and imo starting NCs in downbeat would be better.
03:08:874 (4,5,6) - Make a better triangle.

Tsusoko's Hard:

00:14:132 (4) - Suggest NC. The term is too long to be in one combo.
00:26:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I hope you can place this more far from the previous note. Jumps with 00:26:039 (8,9) will lead to confusion in playing.
01:00:523 (1) - Delete Whistle at the end?
01:59:905 (1) - ^
01:12:276 (3) - Place at (336,280)? I think this kind of way will be better than a stack.
01:21:477 (3) - Delete please. 1/4 doesn't fit imo.
01:40:884 - Add a note as well as 00:41:503 (1)
01:47:843 (1) - Consider a shape like this. This will be better with flow, and also can avoid contacting with (5).
02:23:410 (4,5,6) - Instead of a rhythm like this, two 1/2 sliders will fit the song better.
02:27:740 (1) - This spin is too long. Divide into 2 spins. Suggesting to end the first spin at 02:29:596, and the second spinner 02:30:214 - 02:32:688.
02:33:925 (1,2,3) - Actually, not a bad idea to anti-jump. But, since this is the only one, I didn't think it's nice in the map.
03:11:967 (2) - Delete Whistle?

Hinely's Nyaaan:

-- Volume sounded loud in some parts.

00:38:152 (2) - Instead stacking, place at (112,96)?
01:01:039 (1,2) - I expect these notes somewhere right of the screen.
01:01:168 (1) - Umm...... Starting at 01:01:245 will be better ;_;
01:15:884 (10) - Delete this note? I can't hear anything from the song.
01:33:307 (1) - End at 01:35:059
02:00:111 (2) - I don't think this is a nice spacing.
02:00:420 (4) - Also here.. ^
02:50:034 (1) - Starting at 02:50:111 will be better..
02:56:503 (3) - Place at (304,72)?
03:12:379 (1) - Add Whistle?
Hinsvar

Sonnyc wrote:

Hinely's Nyaaan:

-- Volume sounded loud in some parts. Don't think so, actually...

00:38:152 (2) - Instead stacking, place at (112,96)? Done.
01:01:039 (1,2) - I expect these notes somewhere right of the screen. But I think this is better, though.
01:01:168 (1) - Umm...... Starting at 01:01:245 will be better ;_; I want this to start as fast as possible ;_;
02:50:034 (1) - Starting at 02:50:111 will be better.. Same as 01:01:168 (1).
Thanks for the mod~

http://puu.sh/23q1l
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Lochinvar wrote:

Make this ranked plox :I #ifyoudontiwillhuntallofyoudown :D
D:

SkyDevil wrote:

nyanyanyan
~>:3

Sonnyc wrote:

Easy:

-- Some notes are unsnapped by 1ms. (e.g. 00:41:966 (2,3)) fix

00:16:606 (1) - Is the Finish here a mistake? If then, delete plz. eh yes, thanks.
00:41:966 (2,3) - I think the whistle should be at the end of (2), not (3). put in the end of two, but i keep the whistle on the three
00:58:358 (5) - Delete this. I don't think 5 clicks fit in Easy, even the rhythm is 1/1. lol, okay
02:19:080 (3,4) - Imo to emphasize Finish in (5), I suggest to delete Finishes in these notes. maybe yes, but i think it feels better this way :"
02:39:531 (4) - Why did you placed at 1/8? moved
02:42:005 (4) - ^ but i think this one is fits enough, so i put note here 02:43:513
02:50:008 (1) - Delete Finish? Sounds noisy. i just delete whistle
03:06:400 (4) - I think hit sound with Whistle-Clap is better. lol, me too.

Normal:

00:52:173 (3) - I can't agree with a long slider in this kind of part. Instead, place a note at 00:52:173 and make a slider in "Nyan nyan nyan" fix
00:58:668 (7) - NC? okay
01:47:843 (1) - The linear here wasn't completely straight. Was that your intention? oh well, fix to straight
02:29:905 (1) - Delete this note. A note right after a spinner will be hard, considering this diff is Normal. deleted
02:29:905 (1,1,1,1) - Combos were too short, and imo starting NCs in downbeat would be better. fix
03:08:874 (4,5,6) - Make a better triangle. ^
thanks for mod o//
Shohei Ohtani
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/53833

:(.

I'll get to this hopefully soon.

The map I linked above is like, my pride and joy.

Prepare yourself <3~.
Topic Starter
blackabyss

CDFA wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/53833

:(.

I'll get to this hopefully soon.

The map I linked above is like, my pride and joy.

Prepare yourself <3~.
owo that one the original version <3
why it graveyard now? D:

//prepare my self ;; //hides
Shohei Ohtani

blackabyss wrote:

CDFA wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/53833

:(.

I'll get to this hopefully soon.

The map I linked above is like, my pride and joy.

Prepare yourself <3~.
owo that one the original version <3
why it graveyard now? D:

//prepare my self ;; //hides
Dude do you know how hard it is to make easier diffs for this like omg like I tried making a hard and I was just like "no" and then finding guest differs is just like "ew 1/3 no"

But actually, I might have to hold off on this since there's no hard diff, and there's a message asking for a hard diff, implying that the map isn't complete, which breaks one of the rules. However, I srs want to mod this so if you plan on getting a hard diff, message me when you get one. If you're not going to have one (which I'm not sure if you're allowed to do that), then I'll mod it soon.

Kawaii nyan.

and I don't think I'll be able to make a hard diff (as much as I want to.).

I kind of srs just want to give you my diff from the map I linked above, but that'd totally make 2 insanes and then the butthurt

<3~.
kurohana


General

  1. From AiBat:
    Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
    - [Easy] : 0
    - [Hinely's Nyaaan] : 0
    - [Normal] : 0
    - [Teru's Muzunyan] : 500
    - [Teru's Oninyan] : 500
    - [Tsusuko's Hard] : 0

    Inconsistency in Tags:
    - [Easy] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab
    - [Hinely's Nyaaan] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21
    - [Normal] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab
    - [Teru's Muzunyan] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab
    - [Teru's Oninyan] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab
    - [Tsusuko's Hard] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab

    Kiai Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
    - [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:348, ends on 01:02:998
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750
    - [Hinely's Nyaaan] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:348, ends on 01:02:998
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750
    - [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:348, ends on 01:02:998
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750
    - [Teru's Muzunyan] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:348, ends on 01:02:998
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750
    - [Teru's Oninyan] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:01:761, ends on 01:02:998
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750
    - [Tsusuko's Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:348, ends on 01:02:998
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750

Normal

  1. 02:30:214 (1) - Add New Combo, because this spinner follows a note

Hinely's Nyan

  1. 00:58:693 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
  2. 01:01:168 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
  3. 02:32:379 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  4. 02:50:034 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
  5. 01:25:472 (1) - Add New Combo because this spinner follows a note
  6. 03:11:554 (1) - ^

This is only a quick mod, because i really have no time at the moment >.< I'm away next week, so i will do a re-check in two weeks. Please PM me ^^ Re-check might be a bit longer :)
Shohei Ohtani
did you srs just copy everything from AIBat.
Hinsvar

kurohana wrote:



General

  • Inconsistency in Tags:
    - [Easy] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab
    - [Hinely's Nyaaan] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21
    - [Normal] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab
    - [Teru's Muzunyan] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab
    - [Teru's Oninyan] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab
    - [Tsusuko's Hard] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab

    Tag fixed.

Hinely's Nyan

  1. 00:58:693 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start). Intentional.
  2. 01:01:168 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start). ^
  3. 02:50:034 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start). ^
Well, okay... Thanks... I guess?

http://puu.sh/25wMF
Topic Starter
blackabyss

CDFA wrote:

Dude do you know how hard it is to make easier diffs for this like omg like I tried making a hard and I was just like "no" and then finding guest differs is just like "ew 1/3 no"

But actually, I might have to hold off on this since there's no hard diff, and there's a message asking for a hard diff, implying that the map isn't complete, which breaks one of the rules. However, I srs want to mod this so if you plan on getting a hard diff, message me when you get one. If you're not going to have one (which I'm not sure if you're allowed to do that), then I'll mod it soon.

Kawaii nyan.

and I don't think I'll be able to make a hard diff (as much as I want to.).

I kind of srs just want to give you my diff from the map I linked above, but that'd totally make 2 insanes and then the butthurt

<3~.
i've asked my friend and she said yes. lol. but maybe it'll need much time to make one ;;

if got one, and i'll tell ya after it finish. thanks for waiting.

as the title said, a wonderful cat's life xD
maybe all about nyaaaaan <3

rofl. maybe i just want to have one insane diff. now xD don't know later
thanks for offering owo//

CDFA wrote:

did you srs just copy everything from AIBat.
wwww lol

kurohana wrote:



General

  1. From AiBat:
    Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
    - [Easy] : 0
    - [Hinely's Nyaaan] : 0
    - [Normal] : 0
    - [Teru's Muzunyan] : 500
    - [Teru's Oninyan] : 500
    - [Tsusuko's Hard] : 0
    Options such as letterboxing, countdown, and audio lead-in should be consistent between difficulties. Having cohesive settings throughout your mapset will look much more professional, although there are always scenarios where this is impossible. One difficulty might start at the beginning of the mp3, where a countdown is impossible but an audio lead-in is absolutely necessary; while another difficulty may start a few seconds in, where a countdown is usable but an audio lead-in is senseless.
    ^from osu!wiki guidelines

    Inconsistency in Tags:
    - [Easy] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab
    - [Hinely's Nyaaan] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21
    - [Normal] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab
    - [Teru's Muzunyan] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab
    - [Teru's Oninyan] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab
    - [Tsusuko's Hard] : Ah, A Wonderful Cat's Life utaite utaittemita HaNaPoKoLabo Vocaloid Kagamine Len Megpoid GUMI Nico Nico Douga Teru21 Tsusuko Hinsvar Xinely Hinely collab fix

    Kiai Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
    - [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:348, ends on 01:02:998
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750
    - [Hinely's Nyaaan] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:348, ends on 01:02:998
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750
    - [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:348, ends on 01:02:998
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750
    - [Teru's Muzunyan] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:348, ends on 01:02:998
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750
    - [Teru's Oninyan] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:01:761, ends on 01:02:998
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750
    - [Tsusuko's Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:41:348, ends on 01:02:998
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:40:730, ends on 02:01:451
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:32:688, ends on 03:14:750
^it's quite all right, btw Teru's Oninyan first kiai start at the same time as other :?


Normal

  1. 02:30:214 (1) - Add New Combo, because this spinner follows a note lol bug, thx

This is only a quick mod, because i really have no time at the moment >.< I'm away next week, so i will do a re-check in two weeks. Please PM me ^^ Re-check might be a bit longer :)
okay, but i should send it next week or two week later? eue
thanks for quickmod
Kuro
You requested a taiko mod from my queue but Teru's Taiko diffs. are already great and I don't see any problems.
Anything I'd offer would just be suggestions
I apologize for not being able to mod it, though =.=
Topic Starter
blackabyss

Kuro wrote:

You requested a taiko mod from my queue but Teru's Taiko diffs. are already great and I don't see any problems.
Anything I'd offer would just be suggestions
I apologize for not being able to mod it, though =.=
ugh okay ;u;
Teru21

Kuro wrote:

You requested a taiko mod from my queue but Teru's Taiko diffs. are already great and I don't see any problems.
Anything I'd offer would just be suggestions
I apologize for not being able to mod it, though =.=
hueee ;A; thanks (/>w<)/
LunarSakuya
i love these singers omg

General
looks fine

Easy
00:11:657 (1) - Finish, hear bg music
00:21:554 (1) - ^ on head
00:41:348 (1) - Finish
00:51:245 (1) - ^ on head
I feel like there were a lot of potential Finishes like the ones above that match the bg music =v= Same with Normal.

01:40:730 (1,2,3,4) - why not use a rhythm like 00:41:348 (1,2) -
03:09:802 (5) - Center this on y-axis http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/628432

Normal
00:28:668 (1) - This should start on the next red tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/628436
00:33:616 (3) - ^ similar rhythm problem
00:52:482 (5) - Curve the other way http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/628438, looks like a nicer contrast with the orange (4)
01:13:513 (1,2,3) - it'd be cool if you could center such a nice pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/628442
02:00:523 (4,5) - Felt incomplete, i think you should end with a single note at 02:00:523 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/628445
02:31:142 (1) - Delete NC, NC on next note

Hinely's Nyaaan
00:34:750 (3) - NC, delete NC from 00:35:163 (1) -
00:47:224 (4) - Clap on head instead of whistle
00:54:338 (1,2) - Bring this out a little to the right so the head is not completely covered by the hitburst and slider body http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/628482
00:58:693 (1) - resnap, i understand this was intentional but 1/12 is not recommended at all, at least snap it to 1/6
01:01:168 (1) - ^
01:15:369 (9) - why not bring this out like the couplet just before?
01:22:482 (6) - Bring it down somewhere like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/628495 so it's not covered as much
01:27:946 - Add note, i hear the drum in the bg music
01:57:121 (2,3,4) - Line these up on the axis https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/628499
02:00:111 (2,3,4) - Spacing issue
02:50:034 (1) - resnap
03:07:018 - Add note, the hesitation felt a bit awkward while playing
Really fun!! xD

Loved this map :P Good luck!
Hinsvar

LunarSakuya wrote:

Hinely's Nyaaan
00:34:750 (3) - NC, delete NC from 00:35:163 (1) - I'm following the stanza here, so no.
00:47:224 (4) - Clap on head instead of whistle Added the clap, but kept the whistle.
00:54:338 (1,2) - Bring this out a little to the right so the head is not completely covered by the hitburst and slider body http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/628482 Done.
00:58:693 (1) - resnap, i understand this was intentional but 1/12 is not recommended at all, at least snap it to 1/6 ^
01:01:168 (1) - ^ ^
02:50:034 (1) - resnap ^
Really fun!! xD Good to hear that~

Loved this map :P Good luck!
Thanks for modding~ Now get your twin sister to mod this too www *runs*
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