[Collab Taiko Oni]
Timing Points
00:38:620 - Remove the timing point at this time, and make the timing point at 00:33:103 - be 0.75x to get rid of the overlap on 00:35:517 (9) -
Remove all of the listed timing points below, as they don't do anything, and some are overlapped.
140689,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
140689,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
140689,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
141034,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
141379,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
141724,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
142068,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
142413,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
142758,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
General stuff
Fix the first kiai so that it runs from 00:55:172 to 01:17:241 like the first one does.
HP5 -> HP6 imo. 5 is too easy for this map.
Comments
No real complaints here. Good showing of two different styles of mapping that ends up blending together well.
[inaba's Taiko Muzu]
Consider changing the title to "inaba's Taiko Muzukashii"
00:51:724 (39,40,41) - Change this to ddk so that you keep consistent patterning through the buildup
01:03:448 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - This is getting to be a bit around Oni level, but we can easily fix that by changing up a few small things. For example, remove 01:03:706 (45) - , 01:04:913 (55) - and 01:05:258 (58) - and change 01:05:517 (60,61,62,63,64) - to be an easier pattern of ddddk.
01:14:654 (106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) - Apply the same changes here that you applied to the section at 01:03:448 (minus the ddddk change as that isn't in this section)
01:19:655 - and 01:19:827 - both work quite well with dons added in and don't add too much difficulty.
The part you're mapping to for 01:26:379 (157,158,159,160) - actually starts at 01:26:206, so add a note there.
01:36:551 (200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216) - Same idea as 01:14:654
01:47:586 (262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283) - Same idea as 01:03:448
01:58:620 (327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343) - Same idea as 01:14:654
Comments
Other than the parts that are too difficult for Muzu, there's no issues here.