Deni wrote:

General

normal : should fix
italic : suggestion
red: unrankable, have to fix

Hi, Modding this because I want to ! (＾∇＾)
helo :-)

As I said in private chat, imo the sliderslide should be silent for this map.

Folder seems to be fine.

Ambient

00:05:298 (3) - I think the repeat of this slider doesn't follow the rhythm well, repeat should be at 00:05:957. - no I don't think so :-(
00:53:430 (4) - This slider didn't overlap perfect like you wanted to do, here I fixed it so that it looks perfect! :-) - Not sure how to use this code, but fixed in my own way :-)

240,116,53430,2,8,P|316:176|452:124,1,240

01:09:254 (4) - The "clap" on the head of this slider is still a bit too loud imo, reduce volume! :-) - ok :-)
01:15:188 (5) - This slider looks a bit weird, maybe try to make a more beautiful one or a symmetrical? - I guess I did something :-)

Overall good diff for beginners!

Lounge

Sorry, I didn't find anything to improve!

Collab

00:23:759 (1) - If you use a finish here you should use it always at this point in the music like 00:13:210 (1) - or 00:34:309 (1) - to keep it consistent. - removed :-)

Great map.

(ノ・ω・)ノ

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  Increase AR by 1 makes reading notes easier, I think.

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  Good.

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  I considered why I felt weird when playing, then I saw that's because of the inconsistent patterns.
  For example, refer to 00:02:661 (1,2,3,4,5,6), and 00:05:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10).
  They both have the same sounds in back. Then there's not a note at 00:03:869 but there's a note at 00:06:507.
  It's okay to use a different patten on the same sounds, but in this map, the beatsnap is 1/6 and it's kinda difficult to read the timing from distance overall.
  So I think it'd be better to use the same patten on the same sound in this map.
  
  Well, this is almost my preference, perhaps.
  If you want to keep them, I won't prevent.
  If you have some reasonable reason to keep them, I'll respect it.
  
  //
  // Belows are other story.
  //

1. 00:27:386 (4) - I felt it doesn't follow the music well and it's kind of unexpectable.
2. 00:39:254 (7) - Should be further from (6). Player misunderstands the timing.
3. 01:02:001 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - They can be expected from the previous patterns, but spacings are too random and they're confusing. I recommend you to rearrange them a bit.

Gabe wrote:

I would like to point out something on Collab; 00:38:814 (6,7) - The spacing here is very confusing, while playing it at first, I thought the objects were consistent on the timeline by viewing the spacing. But then, I clicked it too early. I would like you to make some changes here so it won't be confusing. I mostly suggest you to make Ctrl+G with the slider (7), which will make an higher spacing, so we could know that it's not placed consistently with the three previous sliders.

So, it will do this;

Or even, if you want the next slider to make a flow with the slider (7), also do Ctrl+G to make this:

Nice map to be honest :3

Stefan wrote:

You care about the Rating after one hour?

MoodyRPG wrote:

Spanish in the end of the song o/

Static Noise Bird wrote:

...that being said, why is this "Other" instead of "Hiphop"? If any redname sees this, please change.