Athena Tennos wrote:

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1. 00:11:687 (2) - ↑↑→→感觉还好233
2. 01:48:969 (4) - ???yi yi he zai?bai zhe geng hao

popner wrote:

12:22 popner: ----------------------------------A32----------------------------------------
12:22 popner: 00:22:173 (2,3) - overlap
12:23 popner: 00:31:202 (1) - remove NC
12:23 popner: 00:47:512 (1) - ^
12:24 popner: 01:37:609 (3) - N里最好不要用多次折返的kick slider
12:24 popner: 01:41:105 (1) - 和变速滑条
12:25 popner: 01:49:551 (1) - 多次折返
All done 233

Moway wrote:

[A32's Normal]

01:41:105 (1,1) - This transition timing is awkward. Maybe have the first slider end on 01:41:396, and make the SV decrease only 0.75deleted the whole speed changing lol
01:55:522 (4) - remove this circle, I think it plays fine without it and it'll make this a bit easierI think it could make a better effect

popner wrote:

12:27 popner: 01:19:551 (2) - a little hard for new player to read

Moway wrote:

Hi, from popner's queue.

[General]

Not sure if it matters much, but I think the real bpm of the song is 103. nah, the present bpm is following the drum and piano sound.

[Hardy]
00:38:192 (5) - NC to note slider velocity change nah it's longer than the previous slider and is obvious enough imo.. nc here would make a combo burst at previous slider (4), and that looks bad.
00:40:595 (1) - remove NC, doesn't make sense to have it here since these notes are really quick after this object same reason as the nc at here 00:42:270.
00:40:959 (3) - put the NC here instead

[Gracy]
00:11:978 (6,7,8) - This jump doesn't really make sense to me jump follow the music better.
00:57:998 (3) - maybe NC here to make the rest of the section easier to read umm needless for me.. it's such a short combo and not very helpful..
01:48:386 (1) - remove NC nah it's a new chapter by piano.
01:48:677 (3) - add NC

That's all, good luck!

1. 感覺可以拿兔子那套skin來用
2. Tag "Sounds of colour"
   
   
3. 其實我感覺可以拿掉letterbox during breaks 因為留著也不太好看233
4. 加個soft-sliderslide 然後都調成S:C1

1. HP+1~2 at least, since your distance spacing isn't really big, it'll be extremely messy with AR1 ;n;!
2. I saw you add many finished in this diff. That's cool, but if you can low down the volume by 10%~15%, it won't be that loud!
3. 00:03:823 - Why you don't add a finish here ;n; It sounds really fit since there's a strong finish sound at the music. Consider to add it!
4. 00:08:775 (2,3) - If I were you, I'll add a finish at 00:08:775 (2) -'s sliderend, then use a whistle instead of a finish at 00:09:357 (3) -'s sliderend. I saw you add some finishes at the downbeat in former patterns, so the finishes-rules should be consistent here. That would make me feel more comfortable while playing. :3
5. 00:19:260 (2,3) - ^
6. 00:57:707 (2,3) - ^
7. 00:14:309 - Finish here would be fit. You can hear an strong finish sound in the music, right?
8. 00:16:347 (3) - I can hear a sound in the music, so why you've added nothing here? Add whistle at sliderbegin/sliderend would be fit more.
9. 00:17:804 - I prefer a note here, I can here a sound in the music. Also, a note can connect the pattern between 00:14:600 - ~ 00:17:512 - and 00:18:095 (1,2,3) -, so the players won't think the hit-rhythm are always 2/1.
10. 00:26:833 (2,2,2,3,2) - I prefer use S:C1 section and then add finish instead these claps. Well it's awesome, right? (:
11. 00:36:153 (1,2,3,1) - Well, I'm not really into those 1/1s, since it would be surprised to the beginners a bit. Try to connect same musics in this part by using sliders! Here's an example:
    
12. 00:50:134 (1) - Here too, use a reserve slider to cross some strong music here may be weird. Try some not-really-hard rhyth, like example.jpg will be great imo.
    
13. 00:56:542 - At least a whistle here. You know that, right? >:
14. 01:02:075 - Yeah whistle again.
15. 01:03:241 (1,2,3) - Actually I'm not a big fan for this kind of rhythm: long slider reserve and then an alone-note. Seems pretty hard for Easy difficulty, and it isn't consistent with your former/following patterns. So try something like example.jpg will be more easier and more consistent imo.
    
16. 01:16:347 - Yeah so here should be a finish or whistle idk it's so empty.
17. 01:17:512 (3) - Remove whistle from here? Sounds really annoying when 1/1 whistle appears. Also, you didn't add a whistle at 01:22:755 - , and I think that's better if you can leave nothing there.
18. 01:21:299 - Add a note here? First, I've heard a sound in the music, well you shouldn't leave a break when there's a sound. Second, place a note here would be fine as well as that will continue the 2/1 hit-rhythm, since your rhythm pattern are like 2/1s.
19. 01:23:338 (1) - Meh, why you place the slider here? The music starts 1/1 later, and then you should place this slider there (01:23:629 - ). Perhaps you'll think the hit-rhythm is more important, but it would be extremely WEIRD.
20. 01:34:697 - Seems you forget a finish.
21. 01:40:813 - W-why you add a clap here? It's really unfit, weird, and inconsistent! Please listen the music carefully, the music doesn't contain any clap-sound here. Remove it please.
22. 01:44:600 - k whistle here.
23. 01:49:551 - ^
24. 01:51:008 (1) - nazi a bit but symmetrical slider would be better imo...

1. 感覺AR可以+1 因為SV有點快
2. 有些我覺得可以加whistle的地方先放在盒子裡 你改完全部在下去看吧 >:
3. 00:10:813 (1) - 第二個彎可以在curve點
4. 00:12:561 (3,1) - 我感覺分開沒意思...反正這中間空拍也有點怪 刪掉(1)然後折返(3)可能會好點
5. 00:21:299 - 這finish? 或者whistle
6. 00:27:707 (5) - 其實可以curve然後作個blanket
7. 00:34:114 (2,3) - 這裡有點亂 而且00:32:949 (3,2,3) - 都是彎的多無聊
   
   
   

   488,200,34114,2,0,L|440:312,1,110
   360,324,34697,2,0,P|300:316|268:260,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   212,216,35279,5,8,0:0:0:0:

8. 00:36:736 - 沒啥理由空著吧。。音樂有個響音的說
9. 00:48:677 (1,2) - 感覺可以swap NC
10. 00:44:600 - 不是應該要finish嗎
11. 01:00:619 (3,4) - 平行比較美觀
12. 01:10:231 (4,1) - 嗯一樣swap
13. 01:13:726 (3) - 應該能finish
14. 01:31:202 - ...clap? 有點空
15. 01:32:367 - 應該是whistle
16. 01:49:551 (1,2) - 不是很好看 而且壓到折返..
17. 02:02:075 (3) - 這裡突然來個3折返實在不太安全
18. 02:04:406 (1) - 第四個錨點往下個五六格 *nazi*
    
    就是那啥whistle

    1. 00:04:114 - 其實我覺得這裡可以remove 因為在finish後面接whistle有點吵 另外可以作個層次感
    2. 00:05:571 - 這邊上whistle你懂
    3. 00:09:648 - ^
    4. 00:10:522 - ^
    5. 00:12:561 - ^
    6. 00:15:474 - ^
    7. 00:19:551 - ^
    8. 00:23:046 - ^
    9. 00:24:211 - ^
    10. 00:57:124 - ^
    11. 01:04:697 - ^
    12. 01:11:978 - ^
        後面hitsound下法變了就不吐槽了 lol

1. 00:03:823 (1) - 好空 /_\
2. 00:11:978 (3) - 其實我覺得沒必要留這顆..不過硬要塞的話就讓00:12:270 - 也有東西 在打圖的時候比較有節奏。。可以把這顆換成1/1滑條
3. 00:31:784 (1) - whistle你懂
4. 00:38:192 (5,6) - ...spacing跟SV突然變小還是NC下吧
5. 00:46:639 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不要跳嘛 這BPM很高的..
6. 01:08:483 (1,2) - 我感覺(1)沒太大的NC理由...我還以為節奏變了還是啥的 反而(2)來了一堆1/2才需要NC隔開才對
7. 01:29:745 (2) - whistle在sliderbody的意義何在
8. 01:45:619 (1) - 這個spinner來的有點莫名...明明就是同屬性的音樂前面有map這裡卻用轉盤帶過不是很奇怪嗎
9. 01:56:542 (3,4,5,6,7) - 我覺得十分違和 (3,4,5,6)是小spacing (7)卻作了大反差 但rhythm是一樣的 這樣再Hard裡有可能會造成誤讀圖或啥你懂的。。建議把(3,4,5,6)拆成兩個slider然後spacing最好分開點
   x3 nice diff!

1. 00:05:280 (4,1) - 我覺得沒必要作大跳 放個1.52x spacing就夠了(跟00:05:571 (1,2,3) - 等距)
2. 00:09:940 (1,3) - swap NC, 跟音樂吧
3. 00:34:697 (5,6,7) - 為啥要anti-jump ;v;?!! 我會建議移開一點 不然就是NC提示 orz
4. 00:41:978 (6) - 這個應該在(4)的左邊比較坑 (?) 打起來比較爽-w-
5. 00:50:134 (4,5) - 應該可以跟(3)的sliderend作個三角型的跳 這裡都按0.9x排太無趣
6. 01:07:318 - finish你懂的
7. 01:09:503 (4,5,6,7) - 正方形 這樣好丑
8. 01:17:512 - ..為啥要空著啊 這裡音樂沒有明顯停下來 什麼東西都沒放覺得好...違和嗎?
9. 01:52:318 (1,2,3) - 等距 沒必要不等距啊

Flask wrote:

草莓姥爺~~

[General]

1. 感覺可以拿兔子那套skin來用 nah it's not fit the song ._.
2. Tag "Sounds of colour" since the Sounds of colour is just the omnibus' name, not the original album, i'm not mind to tag it. thank you Flask.
   
   
3. 其實我感覺可以拿掉letterbox during breaks 因為留著也不太好看233 nah. it's wired moving it.
4. 加個soft-sliderslide 然後都調成S:C1 it's wired to sound. really. orz

[Gracy]

1. 00:05:280 (4,1) - 我覺得沒必要作大跳 放個1.52x spacing就夠了(跟00:05:571 (1,2,3) - 等距) since it's the insane diff and i don't want to make too many regular things because the song is independent and fluent. btw the jump is not large at all.. plays fine for me.. keep for now.
2. 00:09:940 (1,3) - swap NC, 跟音樂吧 indeed, from the piano of the song, the NC should be placed on the present position.. ;w;
3. 00:34:697 (5,6,7) - 為啥要anti-jump ;v;?!! 我會建議移開一點 不然就是NC提示 orz same. it's fun to play. and i don't want to make the map seems like be limitted by something for the song.. (sorry for my poor ability of expression00
4. 00:41:978 (6) - 這個應該在(4)的左邊比較坑 (?) 打起來比較爽-w- um i tried but it is not very comfortable to play and also not really fit the song~
5. 00:50:134 (4,5) - 應該可以跟(3)的sliderend作個三角型的跳 這裡都按0.9x排太無趣 the calm before the storm. (maybe? lol
6. 01:07:318 - finish你懂的 you are right.
7. 01:09:503 (4,5,6,7) - 正方形 這樣好丑 the fact turn out the square would break the pattern and it looks fine for me. so..
8. 01:17:512 - ..為啥要空著啊 這裡音樂沒有明顯停下來 什麼東西都沒放覺得好...違和嗎? nope. just following keynotes.
9. 01:52:318 (1,2,3) - 等距 沒必要不等距啊 for the rising scale. idk. it fit the song for me.

又要泡了TAT

Flask wrote:

[A32's Normal]
[list][*]
[*]00:44:600 - 不是應該要finish嗎柑橘加了略违和
[*]01:00:619 (3,4) - 平行比較美觀太对称感觉不太自然 orz
[*]01:13:726 (3) - 應該能finish这边音乐突然静下来了我觉得whistle更加suitable
[*]02:02:075 (3) - 這裡突然來個3折返實在不太安全 少量的大概允许吧...
那啥whistle全改了

popner wrote:

Re-checked and made some small change in [Gracy] and fix some improperly used patterns in Normal.

Flask wrote:

恩

1. 103 bpm, 3/4 time signature.

1. 00:34:989 (8) - Ending evident at 00:35:134 - .
2. 00:43:289 (5,6,7) - Not so good beat placement, sliders are offset by 1/2. Compare to 00:41:105 (3,4,5,6) - which are done better. Otherwise, great map.

Flask wrote:

lol 還以為又要開主號來rank了 xD

Moway wrote:

Hi, from popner's queue.

[Hardy]
00:38:192 (5) - NC to note slider velocity change could be one, but not really necessary at this at imo..
00:40:595 (1) - remove NC, doesn't make sense to have it here since these notes are really quick after this object
00:40:959 (3) - put the NC here instead that would be nice



That's all, good luck!

Flask wrote:

草莓姥爺~~

[Hardy]

1. 00:03:823 (1) - 好空 /_\ 我我我。。。
2. 00:11:978 (3) - 其實我覺得沒必要留這顆..不過硬要塞的話就讓00:12:270 - 也有東西 在打圖的時候比較有節奏。。可以把這顆換成1/1滑條 我觉得现在蛮好的。。。
3. 00:31:784 (1) - whistle你懂 嗯
4. 00:38:192 (5,6) - ...spacing跟SV突然變小還是NC下吧 这个可以有，但是我觉得并不是很必要。。
5. 00:46:639 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不要跳嘛 這BPM很高的.. 我觉得还不算难的。。。
6. 01:08:483 (1,2) - 我感覺(1)沒太大的NC理由...我還以為節奏變了還是啥的 反而(2)來了一堆1/2才需要NC隔開才對这个是因为跳了一下，spacing跟之前不一样了
7. 01:29:745 (2) - whistle在sliderbody的意義何在 没有吧。。。可能是草莓姥姥帮我改掉了。。。
8. 01:45:619 (1) - 這個spinner來的有點莫名...明明就是同屬性的音樂前面有map這裡卻用轉盤帶過不是很奇怪嗎 这个是因为我实在不知道怎么map这一块，然后就spinner一笔带过。。。其实也不算很奇怪吧。。。
9. 01:56:542 (3,4,5,6,7) - 我覺得十分違和 (3,4,5,6)是小spacing (7)卻作了大反差 但rhythm是一樣的 這樣再Hard裡有可能會造成誤讀圖或啥你懂的。。建議把(3,4,5,6)拆成兩個slider然後spacing最好分開點
   x3 nice diff!

Strawberry wrote:

thanks for rebub!!~ Frostmourne><

1. The second combo colour blends with the bottom of the background, you should make it darker in my opinion, quite hard to read at the moment.
2. Why do the intro spinners don't start at the same spot in Hardy and Gracy ? Make them consitent please :/