jomnhnk wrote:

Hi~Strawberry><!!!. I'm rooting for you.
(*´艸｀*)

wantuole wrote:

from my queue
[Gracy]
00:02:658 (1) - this spinner start is to hard for play umm.. why?
00:05:280 (4,1,2) - ctrl+>? um.. nope i'd prefer to keep my style. :p
00:14:163 (2,4) - more nearly with00:14:018 (1,3) umm.. not neccesary..
00:22:464 (4) -

SPOILER

fixed in another way.
00:34:989 (8,1) - (8)end at blue and (1)start at white nice catch. done

SPOILER

00:37:610 (1,2) - ctrl+g must be little friendly for play umm.. not such hard and also for the flow..
00:51:008 (8) - NC yep
01:27:707 (1) - remove NC right
01:20:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:19:551 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个已经很拥挤了在中下位子 后面的(1~9)不要再叠回去了英语无力 the melody is also whirly by a same point so i think it's fine for range.
01:34:260 (6,3) - x:268 y:200 nice

nice map
good luck

Kiiwa wrote:

:3

[Hardy]

1. 01:13:726 (1) - Better as a Finish instead of whistle. good one
2. 01:37:755 (9,10,11) - Don't agree with using this spacing here. Would be confused as a stream. Maybe just stack properly on 01:38:192 (1) - hmm keep that for now, looking for some more mods to decide. thanks for noticing
3. 01:57:124 (1,4) - Switch new combo between these two. ok
4. 02:09:648 (1) - Better as a Finish instead of whistle. got that

1. 請刪除以下finsh....
   00:07:318、00:08:192、00:09:648、00:10:813、00:12:561、00:13:726、00:20:134
   00:56:250、00:57:124、00:58:580、00:59:745、01:02:658、01:09:066、01:09:648
   01:09:940、01:43:435、01:59:163、02:00:910、02:02:658、02:06:153
2. 02:09:648 綠線聲音調成5% 刪除finish

1. 00:10:959 (1) 滑條紅點移到(x:180 y:360) 最後一個點移到 (x:312 y:352)
2. 00:13:726 (1) 移到 (x:4 y:52)
3. 00:14:309 (2) 重疊 00:12:561 (3)
4. 00:25:231 (1) -clap +finish
5. 01:50:425 (2) -whistle +clap

Azure wrote:

nazi desu
[Easy]

1. 請刪除以下finsh.... (removing these finished plz~
   00:07:318、00:08:192、00:09:648、00:10:813、00:12:561、00:13:726、00:20:134
   00:56:250、00:57:124、00:58:580、00:59:745、01:02:658、01:09:066、01:09:648
   01:09:940、01:43:435、01:59:163、02:00:910、02:02:658、02:06:153
2. 02:09:648 綠線聲音調成5% 刪除finish (decreasing the volume of hitsounds to 5% by inherited section~

__Ag wrote:

补充一下，不用kd了

Kaneko wrote:

[Hardy]

Hitsounds
00:09:648 (4) - Whistle
00:10:231 (7) - ^
00:20:134 (3) - ^
00:20:716 (6) - ^
00:55:376 (4) - ^
00:58:580 (3) - ^
00:59:163 (6) - ^
01:06:153 (7) - ^
01:09:066 (4) - ^
01:09:648 (7) - ^

^ I'm sure you should be getting the idea by now. yea i know,i will consider that and remake the hit sound sometime, i know its bad now

01:13:726 (1) - A finish here (Normal Sampleset) works nice. good

General
00:38:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - < This is more Insane then Hard. Maybe revisit it. gonna keep that for now, it is hard but still couldnt find a good way to place them

01:20:716 (1) - < Delete this, longer break time is good, gives more time to drink coffee and enjoy the music :3 i prefer they way it is now

__Ag wrote:

因为最近时间不是很多，只得粗略看了，其实这样的类型的歌我很不擅长呢Orzzz
---Hardy----
02:07:901 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 唯一就觉得这里排列欠缺flow感，要是我会排成flow感的钟摆跳或者五角对角跳，当然草莓这样排应该是给了player上DT的余地（难道我太没人性？QAQ 那样就有点太难了，我觉得现在这样就对于一个hard来说就挺难了。。。flow的话对我来说还好全是逆时针转圈圈> <

star之，大草莓的图就是做得好，神麻婆就是神麻婆啊Orzzz 恩恩我很赞同！
GL~

1. 00:12:415 - add note 加在(1)上面
2. 00:14:018 (1) - 拉远点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629015
3. 00:20:717 (1) - new combo here instead
4. 00:24:794 (1) - 可以分成三个音 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629021
5. 00:31:784 (1) - ^ 另外这个可以改下形状 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629025
6. 00:34:697 (5) - 远点? for 1/1
7. 00:36:736 (3) - reverse arrow挡住了
8. 00:57:124 (1) - 间距远点?
9. 01:07:901 (3) - 拉到和下面那个(2)平行比较好...
10. 01:13:143 (8) - 改成这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629035
11. 01:30:328 - 这段看不清, 建议5-6滑条
12. 然后我觉得ez/normal/hard的滑条比ins好看, 尝试修一下o.o?
13. #(手熊拍)

1. 00:39:648 (3,4,5,6) - 太突然了..
2. 00:40:595 (1) - 0.0?
3. 为什么前面都是1/1这里一大串1/2
4. 00:46:784 (4,5,6) - 0.0
5. 00:56:833 - 放个1/1的滑条可以
6. 01:07:318 - ^
7. 01:31:202 (1) - 往外弯两格
8. 01:37:755 (9,10,11) - 感觉容易和1/3弄混, 这样? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629049
9. 01:57:124 (1,2,3) - 往右上一格
10. 02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉insane了 然后@LKs
11. 不要突然来个很难的梗啊_(:3 」∠ )_

1. 00:23:046 (2) - ctrl+shift+r anti-clockwise selection-center 11
2. 00:31:784 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629055
3. 01:31:202 (1) - 太紧凑了放松点..
4. 01:37:609 (3) - o.o 1/1+reverse吧
5. 01:49:551 (1) - ^
6. 02:02:075 (3) - ^
7. 01:41:105 (1) - 为什么normal还变速.. 而且只有一个..
8. 02:06:153 (1) - 往外两格

1. nyan

Xinely wrote:

Order from popner's queque

[Gracy]
00:13:726 (3) - staked with 00:13:143 (2) - ? nah.. i make the place deliberately..
00:20:717 (8) - staked with 00:20:134 (7) - ? ^
01:13:726 (11) - NC? needless i feel..
01:44:600 (6) - ctrl+G? i prefer the present flow.
01:55:522 (1,2) - swap NC? sure~
02:09:648 (1) - finish? yep.

nice map (:
and Good Luck~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

好歌233


Gracy

1. 00:12:415 - add note 加在(1)上面 好
2. 00:14:018 (1) - 拉远点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629015 这里想要一个停顿的..
3. 00:20:717 (1) - new combo here instead 恩
4. 00:24:794 (1) - 可以分成三个音 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629021 还是保留现在的.. ;w;
5. 00:31:784 (1) - ^ 另外这个可以改下形状 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629025 好
6. 00:34:697 (5) - 远点? for 1/1 感觉这里近点没什么:P
7. 00:36:736 (3) - reverse arrow挡住了 恩，移到滑条中间了
8. 00:57:124 (1) - 间距远点? ~
9. 01:07:901 (3) - 拉到和下面那个(2)平行比较好... 好些了
10. 01:13:143 (8) - 改成这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629035 lol还是喜欢原来的><
11. 01:30:328 - 这段看不清, 建议5-6滑条 好
12. 然后我觉得ez/normal/hard的滑条比ins好看, 尝试修一下o.o?
13. #(手熊拍)

0,0

1. I love to whine about the BG's size, so... why 442 KB? Try to compress it to ~150-200 KB, since there's no need for the BG to be that large anyway?

1. 00:05:571 - Replace finish with whistle? Finish just breaks the calmness of this spot, IMO, and whistle only supports it even more.
2. 00:07:318 - Remove finish? The reason's same as above.
3. 00:09:648 - Replace finish with whistle?
4. 00:12:561 - Remove finish?
5. 00:13:726 - ^
6. 00:14:309 - Replace whistle with finish? Finish actually fits here.
7. 00:18:095 - Add finish?
8. 00:18:677 - Replace finish with whistle?
9. 00:20:134 - Remove finish?
10. 00:21:008 (5) - Remove whistle?
11. 00:21:299 - Replace finish with whistle?
12. 00:23:046 - ^
13. 00:26:833 - Remove clap? It just doesn't fit with the atmosphere of the song...
14. 00:27:124 - Replace clap with whistle?
15. 00:28:289 - Replace finish with whistle?
16. 00:30:328 (2) - Same as the suggestions on 00:26:833 (2).
17. 00:31:784 - Replace finish with whistle?
18. 00:33:823 (2,3) - Same as the suggestions on 00:26:833 (2).
19. 00:35:279 - Replace finish with whistle?
20. 00:37:318 (2) - Same as the suggestions on 00:26:833 (2).
21. 00:56:542 - Add whistle?
22. 01:02:075 - ^
23. 01:07:609 - Replace finish with whistle?
24. 01:09:066 (4) - ^
25. 01:09:648 - Remove finish?
26. 01:17:221 - Replace finish with whistle?
27. 01:24:211 - Remove finish? (So yeah, all these hitsound suggestions are purely because I think they don't fit with how calm the song is (or at times, just how calm it is on a part while it isn't supposed to be... I do realize that this song is 206 BPM though), so go ahead and feel free to think of what you want to do, but if you applied one of them, apply them on similar parts too.)
28. 01:51:008 (1,2,3) - Make them look like this, maybe?

1. 00:05:571 - Add whistle?
2. 00:21:299 (5,1) - Swap NC? I think it fits the song better, IMO.
3. 00:22:173 (1) - Maybe stack perfectly below 00:20:716 (4)'s tail?
4. 00:24:794 - Add whistle?
5. 00:46:930 - ^
6. 00:47:221 - Remove whistle?
7. 00:48:969 - Add whistle?
8. 00:53:338 - ^
9. 00:54:503 - ^
10. 01:13:726 (2) - Add finish?
11. 01:30:037 (2,1) - ...I don't really like how they touch each other slightly.
12. 01:31:202 - Add whistle?
13. 01:48:969 (4) - ^

1. 00:03:823 (1) - Add whistle?
2. 00:10:231 (7) - ^
3. 00:11:105 - ^
4. 00:20:716 (6) - ^
5. 00:39:211 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The star jumps are too small, IMO, making them really, really hard to play... Enlarge the spacing?
6. 01:50:862 (4) - NC since it's the beginning of a completely new pattern?
7. 01:56:105 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - The jumps here are so unexpected and unreadable... I'll probably let it slip if this is an Insane, but this is Hard...
8. 02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This rotating 1/2 stream is too hard for a Hard diff, especially considering this song is 206 BPM.

1. 00:36:736 (3) - The repeat is hidden by 00:36:154 (1)'s hitburst. Okay, not really hidden, but the repeat is only revealed once we hitted the slider, so yeah...
2. 00:56:542 (10,11) - Why is (11) only 3/4-beats long? There's no sound at the beginning of (11) anyway. Remove (10) and begin (11) on (10)'s place?
3. 01:10:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is flow-breaking, seriously. How about making the spacing bigger, at least?
4. 01:17:804 (7) - NC considering the distance between 01:17:221 (6,7)? Or maybe you can just stack the head below (6)...
5. 02:09:357 (1,2,3) - Move (2) to (3)'s place and stack (3) below (1)?

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. Trying to get stuff done from here.

2/4.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General

1. I love to whine about the BG's size, so... why 442 KB? Try to compress it to ~150-200 KB, since there's no need for the BG to be that large anyway? um~ it's fine for now. so i won't like to make that change.. people never mind the diffrence of 200kb i think

>Gracy

1. 00:36:736 (3) - The repeat is hidden by 00:36:154 (1)'s hitburst. Okay, not really hidden, but the repeat is only revealed once we hitted the slider, so yeah... idk.. the present one is fine imo.. ;w;
2. 00:56:542 (10,11) - Why is (11) only 3/4-beats long? There's no sound at the beginning of (11) anyway. Remove (10) and begin (11) on (10)'s place? yea it's fun to play and fit the song anyway, also i want to stress the beat here so~ no change for now. ><
3. 01:10:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is flow-breaking, seriously. How about making the spacing bigger, at least? nah.. flow is just a style and general trend, however it's not suitable everywhere since the little round-trip jump is better for that~
4. 01:17:804 (7) - NC considering the distance between 01:17:221 (6,7)? Or maybe you can just stack the head below (6)... sorry i'm not get it.. ;~;
5. 02:09:357 (1,2,3) - Move (2) to (3)'s place and stack (3) below (1)? um yea, i fixed the pattern here.. looks better for now.

That's all I guess.

Good luck on the way

Kaneko wrote:

[A32's Normal]

01:41:105 (1) - No, this shouldn't be allowed in a Normal diff. Please consider remapping this part. I'll consider about this but I'd like to keep this now :3(since it fits the music

Azure wrote:

[A32's Normal]

1. 00:10:959 (1) 滑條紅點移到(x:180 y:360) 最後一個點移到 (x:312 y:352)不想改orz
2. 00:13:726 (1) 移到 (x:4 y:52)done
3. 00:14:309 (2) 重疊 00:12:561 (3)^
4. 00:25:231 (1) -clap +finishsorry orz
5. 01:50:425 (2) -whistle +clap

no fix ;_;

Xinely wrote:

[A32's Normal]
00:09:066 (5) - NC for consistency?fixed
00:21:299 (5,1) - swap NC?ok
00:21:299 - finish?sorry no ww
00:48:677 (1) - anchor point (384,108)?done
01:01:493 (4) - x:52 y: 332?no
01:05:571 (4) - NC?sorry
01:11:105 (5,1) - swap NC?ok ww
01:42:270 (2) - move to x:228 y:44 for look better? if yes don't forget to arrange the spacingsorry the current one is nice enough imo~
02:09:066 (2) - reduce 1 repeat and add note in 02:09:648 - ?no this would prove to be too hard for normal.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

A32's Normal

1. 00:23:046 (2) - ctrl+shift+r anti-clockwise selection-center 11pro
2. 00:31:784 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629055done
3. 01:31:202 (1) - 太紧凑了放松点..还好啊233
4. 01:37:609 (3) - o.o 1/1+reverse吧暂时保留
5. 01:49:551 (1) - ^^
6. 02:02:075 (3) - ^^
7. 01:41:105 (1) - 为什么normal还变速.. 而且只有一个..很贴音乐啊ww 而且4.5星用个变速也未尝不可
8. 02:06:153 (1) - 往外两格不太好改 orz

lkx_Shore wrote:

[A32's Normal]
00:30:619 (3) - x264 y112 好看点好

Hinsvar wrote:

>A32's Normal

1. 00:05:571 - Add whistle?no,the music is quiet here.
2. 00:21:299 (5,1) - Swap NC? I think it fits the song better, IMO.yeah
3. 00:22:173 (1) - Maybe stack perfectly below 00:20:716 (4)'s tail?nice
4. 00:24:794 - Add whistle?no
5. 00:46:930 - ^ok
6. 00:47:221 - Remove whistle?yeah
7. 00:48:969 - Add whistle?ok
8. 00:53:338 - ^no
9. 00:54:503 - ^no
10. 01:13:726 (2) - Add finish?I must say it is noisy...
11. 01:30:037 (2,1) - ...I don't really like how they touch each other slightly.well hard to change orz
12. 01:31:202 - Add whistle?no
13. 01:48:969 (4) - ^no need here

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

[A32's Normal]
00:13:726 (1) - 移到x:64,y:40？感觉不太美观 orz
00:26:542 (3) - 再拉长点？结束在00:27:124 - 然后加个clap感觉现在这样还好啦...
00:28:289 (1) - 滑条头clap？ok
00:36:736 - add circle感觉不太必要...
00:51:008 (4) - 滑条头clap？不加 orz
00:54:503 (5) - 滑条头whistle？加了
01:32:367 (2) - 滑条头clap？done
01:34:697 (1) - 则不呢没有clap？把whistle去掉这里感觉还是whistle比较好啦...
01:41:105 (1) - 这里别突然减SV。。。很容易出100继续保留
01:42:852 (4) - 尾巴clap改了
01:56:833 (3) - 滑条尾clap^
02:03:823 (4) - ^^

Xinely wrote:

Order from popner's queque

[Hardy]
OD+1? lets keep it 6
00:13:726 (2,1) - the normal spacing is 0,8 right? if yes please fix this (0,70) not a big deal
00:39:648 (3,4,5,6) - i think it's so hard so make just ordinal like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/628979 ? nice
00:50:716 (5) - ctrl+G? k
00:57:124 (2,3) - it's like trap imo. so put 00:57:124 (2) - in x:224 y:84 and 00:57:707 (3) - stacked with 00:57:124 (2) - ? i do like what it is now..
01:13:143 (3) - ctrl+G better imo i would keep that
01:36:444 (7) - NC? k
02:08:046 (2,3) - spacing (1,12) i have changed this pattern...
02:09:648 (1) - finish and remove whistle? already

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

好歌233

Hardy

1. 00:39:648 (3,4,5,6) - 太突然了.. 恩已经改掉了
2. 00:40:595 (1) - 0.0?
3. 为什么前面都是1/1这里一大串1/2 我没太明白。。
4. 00:46:784 (4,5,6) - 0.0
5. 00:56:833 - 放个1/1的滑条可以 我还是觉得小停顿蛮好的啊。。
6. 01:07:318 - ^
7. 01:31:202 (1) - 往外弯两格 k
8. 01:37:755 (9,10,11) - 感觉容易和1/3弄混, 这样? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629049 不好看了，我只能把间距拉大点
9. 01:57:124 (1,2,3) - 往右上一格 我就向上了1个，右面不用动的吧
10. 02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉insane了 然后@LKs
11. 不要突然来个很难的梗啊_(:3 」∠ )_

凑合凑合改了，简单不少但是感觉别扭orz（之前那个实在是太难了。。。。。）

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Hardy]
AR+1好嘛...最后那一串真是不加hr不敢打 那一部分我改掉了，ar+1更没法打了。。。。

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. Trying to get stuff done from here.

>Hardy

1. 00:03:823 (1) - Add whistle? not feeling good when adding...
2. 00:10:231 (7) - ^ sounds better
3. 00:11:105 - ^
4. 00:20:716 (6) - ^
5. 00:39:211 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The star jumps are too small, IMO, making them really, really hard to play... Enlarge the spacing? i changed the pattern
6. 01:50:862 (4) - NC since it's the beginning of a completely new pattern? keep that for now.
7. 01:56:105 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - The jumps here are so unexpected and unreadable... I'll probably let it slip if this is an Insane, but this is Hard... i think thats the precious version, i did change that pattern
8. 02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This rotating 1/2 stream is too hard for a Hard diff, especially considering this song is 206 BPM.

yea i changed this too

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

[Hardy]
01:36:444 (7) - NC 恩改掉了
02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这段对hard难度来说是不是太难了，我个人理解你02:00:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 这一段是摆的方便玩家DT的，但是最后弄成这样。。。 我自己打不来的，还是简单点好吧，改掉了:D

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Hardy]

OD +1? not really wanna do that

00:40:959 (3) stack? to which one?

00:44:600 (2,3) hmm... Numbers become obscured seems to be bad

00:53:046 (2) Ctrl+G? nah...

01:28:872 (3,4,5,6) 1/2 slider repeat change? Seems difficult to have a large number of players. nah..

01:32:367 (3,4,5,6) ^ too

01:35:862 (3,4,5,6) ^

01:39:357 (3,4,5,6) ^

1491625364981 wrote:

Hardy

AR調8 AR7感覺有點擁擠 ar8一般都是insane啊，hard ar8高了吧

00:46:639 (3,4,5,6,7) - 建議改成M形排列 現在這樣會有點混淆@A@ 有必要的话我会改，现在的话还是先这样吧

01:04:988 (1) - 這點會不會擺太下面了 别处也没地方摆呀

01:20:716 (1) - 加點的目的是? 这个地方有个比较明显的音效啊，我觉得蛮好的

02:02:221 (10) - NC 不了吧。。。

02:02:658 (1) - 不要NC

Gloria Guard wrote:

[A32's Normal]

OD +1?can't decide yet

00:30:474 (2) x:308 y:132 ?no sorry ww

00:36:881 add note? 00:35:716 (2,3) equally?not necessary ww

01:06:590 (6) remove note, Doesn't fit the beatok

01:48:815 (4) x:308 y:28done

1491625364981 wrote:

A32's normal

AR up to 5 难以决定orz 先摆着