Hi =v=
General
Preview Time for Normal is currently 55496. Please change it to 55363 like the other diffs
Normal
- Try adding some whistles or another hitsound in the first half before the kiai. Sounds a bit empty atm.
00:10:653 (4,5) - Bring these two a little higher so (5) doesn't touch the tail of (3)
00:35:443 (5) - NC, new stanza
00:52:496 (6) - Curving downwards may be a nicer looking transition~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627015
00:57:075 (4) - Start this slider on the white tick behind it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627018, i understand you put this here for vocals, but the emphasis from the bg music and even the SB kinda dominates
01:15:864 (1) - End the spinner at 01:18:390, felt nicer when playing; also lower the volume of the spinner
01:20:917 (1) - Finish on head
Hard
00:44:285 (1) - Clap on head
01:15:864 (1) - Same as Normal; and add a breaktime after this spinner
01:20:917 (1) - this part would really be nice with hitsounds to emphasize the drums ;D maybe a custom clap like http://puu.sh/27kIS? same with Normal and Insane
01:50:285 (9) - Clap on end
01:52:022 - Add note and stack it on the head of (2)
01:55:022 (8) - Clap
Insane
00:53:127 (1) - Lower the volume
00:55:653 (1) - Finish on head would be stronger
00:56:601 (4) - Clap on end
01:01:969 (8) - i suggest extend this to the blue tick if you're focusing on vocals http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627106
01:04:496 (6) - Clap
01:15:864 (1) - again, lower volume, extend to white, and add break
01:29:917 (5) - Stack this on the head of (6) instead, it was awkward to stream with this at first
i really enjoyed this~ it was very sweet Good luck!!
General
Preview Time for Normal is currently 55496. Please change it to 55363 like the other diffs
Normal
- Try adding some whistles or another hitsound in the first half before the kiai. Sounds a bit empty atm.
00:10:653 (4,5) - Bring these two a little higher so (5) doesn't touch the tail of (3)
00:35:443 (5) - NC, new stanza
00:52:496 (6) - Curving downwards may be a nicer looking transition~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627015
00:57:075 (4) - Start this slider on the white tick behind it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627018, i understand you put this here for vocals, but the emphasis from the bg music and even the SB kinda dominates
01:15:864 (1) - End the spinner at 01:18:390, felt nicer when playing; also lower the volume of the spinner
01:20:917 (1) - Finish on head
Hard
00:44:285 (1) - Clap on head
01:15:864 (1) - Same as Normal; and add a breaktime after this spinner
01:20:917 (1) - this part would really be nice with hitsounds to emphasize the drums ;D maybe a custom clap like http://puu.sh/27kIS? same with Normal and Insane
01:50:285 (9) - Clap on end
01:52:022 - Add note and stack it on the head of (2)
01:55:022 (8) - Clap
Insane
00:53:127 (1) - Lower the volume
00:55:653 (1) - Finish on head would be stronger
00:56:601 (4) - Clap on end
01:01:969 (8) - i suggest extend this to the blue tick if you're focusing on vocals http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627106
01:04:496 (6) - Clap
01:15:864 (1) - again, lower volume, extend to white, and add break
01:29:917 (5) - Stack this on the head of (6) instead, it was awkward to stream with this at first
i really enjoyed this~ it was very sweet Good luck!!