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Hi ~ Mod as request.

Sorry for late.

Generally the mapset plays fine with good flow, so just some suggestions and feel free to ignore if you don't like them.

[General]

All fine.

[Easy]
00:18:547 - add a note here? I think the blank between 00:18:036 (2,3) is too big.
00:20:589 - 00:26:717 - 00:28:759 - same as above.
01:26:206 (4) - make this symmetric with the slider end of 01:23:653 (2)? Current pattern is not so neat:
01:26:717 (1) - Gradually decrease the volume of the spinner? The spinner is a little loud when nearly finished(the end sound is ok though)

[Normal]
00:18:547 - same as Easy
00:24:164 (4) - try to keep the spacing consistent before and after this note:
00:26:717 - same as Easy
00:37:440 - I think you empty here to decrease the difficulty, but it is not a good position since there is vocal at this point. Alternatively you can change 00:35:653 (5,6,7) into two notes, and add a note at 00:37:440.
00:53:015 (1) - Remove this NC? The combos is too short.
01:01:185 (1) - same as above
01:21:866 (2,3) - the overlap and flow change is difficult IMO. I have a simple solution: you can try to curve this slider in this way to make a blanket instead:
01:26:717 (1) - same as Easy

[Hard]
00:10:632 (6,7) - In my opinion, putting them in a line is not as good as making a wiggling movement in flowing, like:
00:53:526 (3,1) - ctrl+g to the two notes? The jump between 00:53:271 (2,3) have no support in music IMO.
00:57:611 (7) - stack this note under end of 00:57:228 (6)? I just feel that it is not good to use 1/2 stack and 1/1 stack at the same time. For AR7 map it is quite misleading.
01:05:525 - feel unexpected with the empty here. I can clearly hear a sound of drum here, so I think you need to change the patter to follow this drum or just to add a note.
01:26:717 (1) - same as Easy

[Insane]
00:18:929 (1) - The NC here seems not consistent with other NCs you used. All other NCs are on white tick except this. I think add NC on next slider(00:19:057 (2), where new vocal starts) makes more sense, especially if you follows my suggestion about 00:19:057 (2,3).
00:19:057 (2,3) - the rhythm here is a little weird: the main reason is that 00:19:057 (2) is a slider which end on big white tick. So I changed the rhythm a little:
It plays better for me. Moreover, you don't need to change the pattern, see:
00:27:100 (1,2) - same rhythm and NC suggestion as previous part, I think you know.
00:31:312 (1,2,3) - the pace change here is a little unexpected: there is a 0.83x distance with 1/1 beat before 00:31:312 (1), but 1/2 beat stacks after it. So please consider to change the two notes to a slider like this:
01:01:057 (10) - comparing with other combos, this combo is much longer. Maybe you can divide it into two combos?
01:02:461 (4,5) - a little confusing pattern(i think this pattern will reads better under AR10 lol). So I suggest you to manually stack them, just move 01:02:717 (5) 1 grid down and 1 grid left (use grid level 4) like this:
01:03:483 (3,4) - same as above
01:09:993 (1,2,3) - for flow I think arranging them like this is better, but it is just my opinion:
01:25:568 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - try to delete 01:26:206 (1) and move (4,5,6,7,8) 1/2 beat later, and the rhythm will be:
You can rotate the polygon to fix the spacing issue. It is so because a vocal start at 01:25:695, and if you start a new pattern here, the it will makes more sense.
01:26:717 (1) - same as Easy

That's all I can find. GL~

@popner. Thanks for modding! So long mod I'm lazy to quote your post xD
Some stuff I didn't change because I wasn't following vocals, or only following vocals, but changed a lot of other stuff~~

General:
Put the actual singers names in the title instead of the character names.
For the notes before the second red section, maybe start them softer, since there's no drums or anything. Especially in Easy and Normal where the parts are very uninspiring. It sounds too loud atm.
01:26:717 (1) - Make this fade out or add a soft (regular) whistle at the end


Insane:
00:03:993 (1) - Add clap on beginning of slider (I know it doesn't go with the music, but it can help create a bit of a build up.)
00:08:078 (1) - ^
00:28:887 (3) - Make this a curved slider that hugs (2) rather than overlapping?
01:02:717 (5) - If this is intentionally like this then don't make it intentionally like this. If you're trying to avoid stack leniancy stuff, then this still makes them different .
01:03:738 (4) - ^

Hurd:
00:12:675 (1) - Stack this with (3)?

Normal:
01:22:121 (3) - Flip this horizontally?

Easy:
00:32:334 (6) - Move this up to above the end of (5) to make it a more comfortable flow for easier players
01:03:227 (2) - Similar concept as above. It also avoids the slights overlap.
01:05:015 (2) - I'm always a fan of a good overlap but here it looks silly D:

CDFA wrote:

General:
Put the actual singers names in the title instead of the character names. - Check video.
For the notes before the second red section, maybe start them softer, since there's no drums or anything. Especially in Easy and Normal where the parts are very uninspiring. It sounds too loud atm. - Sure
01:26:717 (1) - Make this fade out or add a soft (regular) whistle at the end - But it sounds fine for me atm ;w;


Insane:
00:03:993 (1) - Add clap on beginning of slider (I know it doesn't go with the music, but it can help create a bit of a build up.) - Sounds weird. The whistles add the necessary buildup already imo.
00:08:078 (1) - ^
00:28:887 (3) - Make this a curved slider that hugs (2) rather than overlapping? - Idk, I like them overlaps.
01:02:717 (5) - If this is intentionally like this then don't make it intentionally like this. If you're trying to avoid stack leniancy stuff, then this still makes them different . - wat, but they're ok? ;w;
01:03:738 (4) - ^

Hurd:
00:12:675 (1) - Stack this with (3)? - Would make it impossibru to see the 2nd repeat (I think).

Normal:
01:22:121 (3) - Flip this horizontally? - Hurrkooloverlap.

Easy:
00:32:334 (6) - Move this up to above the end of (5) to make it a more comfortable flow for easier players - I don't really think this slight flow-change is going to affect much.
01:03:227 (2) - Similar concept as above. It also avoids the slights overlap. - Follows them sliders at 00:54:036 (1)
01:05:015 (2) - I'm always a fan of a good overlap but here it looks silly D: - Idk is this better?

Thanks for modding!

Oh, thanks for all the stars~~
I'm not changing anything though, I think the difficulty settings should be fine. And about the artist: look at the video.

Bubbled~

Anyway, if this is short version you need to add "(Short Ver.)"
If this is Anime then please add "(TV Size)" instead of "(Short Ver.)" :p

well if you fix, I'll fix the bubble too

This bubble is encouragement to fix the map's title, please don't mod(rank) this before the mapper's response

Added "(Short Ver.)", as Higurashi Kira was an OVA series, so TV Size doesn't really fit I guess :p

Was talking to Rika and checked other OVA OP/ED's. changed to TV Size xD

Did some mod via IRC ~

Awesome map >.<

ok bubbled fixed after Artist Changing lol

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