• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[general]

1. Kiai time 不同 ~
   
   kiai time

   - [Easy] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:13:284
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:14:863 , ends on 00:16:837
   
   - [Normal] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:06:969
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:08:942 , ends on 00:13:284
   
   - [Hard] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:06:969
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:08:942 , ends on 00:13:284
   
   - [Insane] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:13:284
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:14:863 , ends on 00:16:837
   
   - [Lan] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:06:969
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:08:942 , ends on 00:13:284
   
   簡單來說就是Easy跟Insane少了一條 ends: 00:06:969 - 然後 starts: 00:14:863 -
2. 噴泉想辦法減少一些吧 :3, 玩最難難度, 有時因為噴泉,瞎了沒看到於是MISS了 ...

[Easy]

1. 無用的綠線:
   00:08:942 - 這條應該改成沒kiai time才對
   
   
   
2. 感覺AR有些慢, 試試+1
3. 00:42:100 (4) - NC, 因為01:13:679 (1) - 有NC
4. 00:56:311 (3) - re finish, 咱覺得這"咚!"有些多餘
5. 02:54:732 (1) - 這slider的形狀有點怪異.., 如果是咱 咱這邊就不會想要blanket

[Normal]

1. 02:56:311 (1,2,3) - 感覺這裡, overlap不太適合歌曲, 要有移動的感覺, 試試分開他們吧

[Hard]

1. 01:46:837 (1,1,1) - 試試看這個, 因為01:46:837 (1,1) - 在test play的時候, 容易照成100的產生, 原因咱想是因為, 01:46:837 (1) - 的緩速加01:46:837 (1,1) - 距離, flow角度
2. 02:20:784 (3,4) - 試試這樣, 有點前進又有點滯留, 也比較符合歌曲 lol?
3. 02:22:363 (3,4,5) - ^
4. 02:56:311 (4,5,6) - 同Normal

[Lan]

1. 00:42:495 (3) - 被那該死的噴泉擋住了...OTZ
2. 00:46:442 (5) - 這裡是否不應該用緩速, 感覺這緩速不適合歌曲, 外加 因為這緩速 突然來個00:46:442 (5,1) - 大跳加速, 很容易得出100,
3. 00:48:021 (5) - 這裡別用緩速吧~原因咱認為不適合歌曲
4. 01:18:021 (5,1) - 同00:46:442 (5,1) -
5. 01:18:613 (2) - 縮減一下距離吧, 太大以至於這邊很容易按不到..
6. 01:19:600 (5) - 同00:48:021 (5) -
7. 01:37:758 (3) - 試試縮減一些距離, 因為不是slider, 很容易按出100 ~
8. 01:23:548 - 試試20%音量, 30%的聲音有些吵雜..
9. 02:23:548 - ^
10. 02:16:442 (3) - NC, 比較容易讀圖, 如果想保持, 請讓slider方向轉一下, 包含02:16:639 (4) -
11. 02:37:758 (3,4) - 同01:37:758 (3) -

l1106188 wrote:

早灣 >w<
Request from PM.

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[general]

1. Kiai time 不同 ~其实就是少了这里一条线00:06:969 - 删绿线的时候不小心删掉了:c
   
   kiai time

   - [Easy] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:13:284
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:14:863 , ends on 00:16:837
   
   - [Normal] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:06:969
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:08:942 , ends on 00:13:284
   
   - [Hard] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:06:969
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:08:942 , ends on 00:13:284
   
   - [Insane] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:13:284
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:14:863 , ends on 00:16:837
   
   - [Lan] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:06:969
   Kiai #2: Starts on 00:08:942 , ends on 00:13:284
   
   簡單來說就是Easy跟Insane少了一條 ends: 00:06:969 - 然後 starts: 00:14:863 -
2. 噴泉想辦法減少一些吧 :3, 玩最難難度, 有時因為噴泉,瞎了沒看到於是MISS了 ...

[Easy]

1. 無用的綠線:
   00:08:942 - 這條應該改成沒kiai time才對 你看错了吧..
   
2. 感覺AR有些慢, 試試+1三围先不改``等多点意见
3. 00:42:100 (4) - NC, 因為01:13:679 (1) - 有NCFixed
4. 00:56:311 (3) - re finish, 咱覺得這"咚!"有些多餘Fixed
5. 02:54:732 (1) - 這slider的形狀有點怪異.., 如果是咱 咱這邊就不會想要blanket感觉是蠢了点``

[Normal]

1. 02:56:311 (1,2,3) - 感覺這裡, overlap不太適合歌曲, 要有移動的感覺, 試試分開他們吧曾经想过分开``但是想不到排列``所以就stack放着``现在随便摆了个看看行不行吧

[Hard]

1. 01:46:837 (1,1,1) - 試試看這個, 因為01:46:837 (1,1) - 在test play的時候, 容易照成100的產生, 原因咱想是因為, 01:46:837 (1) - 的緩速加01:46:837 (1,1) - 距離, flow角度 这里加减速的原因就是让人打的时候不会断,顶多就是出个100 所以先不改了
2. 02:20:784 (3,4) - 試試這樣, 有點前進又有點滯留, 也比較符合歌曲 lol?我主要怕anti jump 被人喷_(:3 」∠)_
3. 02:22:363 (3,4,5) - ^^
4. 02:56:311 (4,5,6) - 同Normal既然前面都用了anti jump这里也一起吧``

[Lan]

1. 00:42:495 (3) - 被那該死的噴泉擋住了...OTZ喷泉的事莫慌,暂时先不改
2. 00:46:442 (5) - 這裡是否不應該用緩速, 感覺這緩速不適合歌曲, 外加 因為這緩速 突然來個00:46:442 (5,1) - 大跳加速, 很容易得出100, 这里并没有缓速``只是相对于之前1.5慢点而已``这里的节奏本来就是销魂的拉一下然后又恢复正常的速度然后再销魂的拉一下,所以衍生到SV就是1.5--->1.0--->1.5
3. 00:48:021 (5) - 這裡別用緩速吧~原因咱認為不適合歌曲^
4. 01:18:021 (5,1) - 同00:46:442 (5,1) -^
5. 01:18:613 (2) - 縮減一下距離吧, 太大以至於這邊很容易按不到..我稍微拉近点吧
6. 01:19:600 (5) - 同00:48:021 (5) - ^
7. 01:37:758 (3) - 試試縮減一些距離, 因為不是slider, 很容易按出100 ~这里不是一样的距离的话我自己打会被坑(其实这里坑的是01:37:758 (3,4) - 这里的stack而不是第一个circle)
8. 01:23:548 - 試試20%音量, 30%的聲音有些吵雜..30不够小么_(:3 」∠)_
9. 02:23:548 - ^这里忘了调音量了_(:3 」∠)_
10. 02:16:442 (3) - NC, 比較容易讀圖, 如果想保持, 請讓slider方向轉一下, 包含02:16:639 (4) - fixed
11. 02:37:758 (3,4) - 同01:37:758 (3) - 这里不改.-.

就這些了~ 歌曲好聽, 音效選得不錯 只是Lan難度 ...嗯 咱無能為力 ~ star
咱mod到insane才發現原來這譜面還沒完成, 所以combo顏色還沒下定義沒錯吧?! 若真的要用這個顏色, 紅色要改一下~这图本身没有Insane的_(:3 」∠)_被人说Hard太简单了其实是I太鬼畜了所以后来补的``然后做了下发现还是略难``目前等小草莓的GD中
good luck 藍翼醬~ insane做好了~需要mod在跟咱說一次~

咱想說一個地方

Lan難度的
00:36:969 (7) - 雖然可能不會被接受, 不過咱還是說一下好了, 在test play的時候, 不知道為甚麼會把這個看成單一的circle, 但其實是slider, 咱在想可能是因為combo顏色(應該會改吧 combo顏色)跟被00:36:574 (5) - 的分數檔住了一些暂时先不动等combocolour选好后可能会搞成左边4个同一个颜色右边4个同一个颜色?

• --Common-- --Warning-- --Strongly recommendation-- --Emphasis--

1. everything looks fine, but the abusive kiai. they are really make me feel disappointed..
   
   such like these part

   00:38:942 ~ 00:51:574
   01:10:521 ~ 01:23:548
   02:07:363 ~ 02:23:548 .

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. strongly recommended CS 2 --> 3. too bored and seems really crowded(such as 00:40:521 (2,3)) even if it's a Easy. and the difficulty is also clearly imo. No need to use the lowest CS, so consider it?
   2. 01:48:811 (1) - let the blanket more perfect and true-up the slider to make it symmetrical with 01:47:626 (2)? such as
      Click

      
   3. 01:51:574 (1) - move the middle anchor of this slider to turn the curve slider upward so that it can has a better flow imo.
      Click

      
   4. 02:43:679 (1) - so crowded with (2). try to move the fourth anchor 1 grid down? sorry for nazi this. xp
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:19:995 (1) - i'd prefer to remove the whistle which on that tail..a bit noisy since the bgm is very quiet..
   2. 00:23:153 (1) - the whistle problem, same place as above.
   3. 01:06:574 (4) - same as above, sounds really useless whistle on that tail. there hasn't any beat to support it, so just wired.
   4. 02:42:100 (1) - lost a whistle on that whistle. it should be here from bgm and has consistency imo~.. :p

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:04:995 (2) - how about to move it 1 grid down for a perfect cover of (1)'s tail?~ :3
   2. 00:31:837 (4) - seems bad. move it 1 grid up for these overlapped slider.~
      
      some problem for the same reason..

      i point out here so that you can fix them easily. (if it's your style, just ignore them, awkward however.
      00:33:415 (2) - same reason as above, just move 1 grid down it.
      00:36:573 (2) - a grid right.
      00:38:152 (4) - a grid left and up.
      00:43:679 (3) - same as above.
      00:58:679 (2) - up 1 grid.
      01:00:258 (4) - up 1 grid
      01:15:258 (3) - 1 grid right and up, to make the same spacing by the slider body as between (1,2).
      01:18:021 (2) - 1 grid up or tinier moving without grid snap.
      01:19:600 (2) - as above, 1 grid right.
      01:21:179 (2) - a grid up.
      01:22:758 (2) - 1 grid right.
      02:18:416 (3) - 1 grid down.
      02:35:784 (1) - ^
      02:38:350 (2) - ^
      02:41:311 (4) - ^
      02:39:732 (2) - 1 grid down and right?
   3. 01:02:626 (3) - from some suggestion, i'd prefer to make the curve upward for a better flow.
      Click

      
   4. 02:26:311 (1) - upward curve as above?
   5. 02:56:705 (2,3) - nc here to make a burst? o.o..
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:20:784 (2) - remove the whistle on that head~ if you followed the same point in Easy diff. :3
   2. 00:23:942 (2) - same as above.

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:21:574 (1) - Ctrl+G to make a better flow? i feel the spacing with (2) is ok for the whole difficulty. anyway, it's up to you.
   2. 00:33:416 (3) - hmm..can't understand the nc. lonely and useless. o.o consistent with other place?
   3. 01:47:232 (1) - so hard for a easy Hard. try ctrl+g it?
   4. 01:47:626 (1) - if you followed above, change the nc color to light purple?
   5. 02:28:679 (3,4,5,6) - really confused for the whole difficulty imo.. the attack when i first try it's a triangle pattern, however they are repeats.. anyway, ctrl+g (5,6) can slove this problem i think.. if you think it's ok for now.. it's ok then. :d
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 02:55:916 (3) - maybe you lost a whistle on that tail. :3

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:05:982 (1) - bring forward 1/4 tick can catch the bgm imo..
   2. 00:10:521 (2) - no need to change the sv to x0.5, i mean that x0.75 is enough completely, really easy to make people break combo here because it has a distance with the previous slider..
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Clear.

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:21:179 (5) - ctrl+g is much more fun to play, whether with the last or the next note. :3
   2. 00:46:048 (1) - add a here here for the sv changed suddenly.
   3. 00:47:626 (4) - ^
   4. 02:19:403 (2) - i'd prefer to ctrl+g it to avoid the bit anti jump.. :d
   5. 02:19:600 (3) - 同上.
   6. 02:30:159 - add a circle between (2) and (3)? a bit confuse me for now..
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:13:284 (1) - the whistle which is put on that start noise me really, not fit the weak beat from bgm i feel.. remove it? :3
   2. 00:23:548 (2) - sounds wired.. just change the drum clap to soft whistle additions? :d
   3. 00:27:692 (4) - put a whistle on that sliderbody？~ it can make a chain so that the whistle is not very sudden.. anyway, pretty from my heard. xD
   4. 00:30:850 (8) - ^
   5. 00:34:009 (4) - same as above~. :3
   6. 00:37:167 (8) - ^
   7. 00:40:126 (5) - soft whistle additions here? sounds good for me.
   8. 01:00:061 (3) - same point as 00:27:692 (4).~ (omit the rest of same thing.

Strawberry wrote:

Modding here~
request from pm.

[ General]
　

1. everything looks fine, but the abusive kiai. they are really make me feel disappointed..等SB到再全部一起从新弄KIAI
   
   such like these part

   00:38:942 ~ 00:51:574
   01:10:521 ~ 01:23:548
   02:07:363 ~ 02:23:548 .

　
[ Easy]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. strongly recommended CS 2 --> 3. too bored and seems really crowded(such as 00:40:521 (2,3)) even if it's a Easy. and the difficulty is also clearly imo. No need to use the lowest CS, so consider it?
   2. 01:48:811 (1) - let the blanket more perfect and true-up the slider to make it symmetrical with 01:47:626 (2)? such asFixed
      Click

      
   3. 01:51:574 (1) - move the middle anchor of this slider to turn the curve slider upward so that it can has a better flow imo. Fixed
      Click

      
   4. 02:43:679 (1) - so crowded with (2). try to move the fourth anchor 1 grid down? sorry for nazi this. xp这里我已经重新拉过了``不过还没上传来着
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:19:995 (1) - i'd prefer to remove the whistle which on that tail..a bit noisy since the bgm is very quiet.. Fixed
   2. 00:23:153 (1) - the whistle problem, same place as above. Fixed
   3. 01:06:574 (4) - same as above, sounds really useless whistle on that tail. there hasn't any beat to support it, so just wired. 这里跟前面是完全不同的一种情况``00:19:995 (1,2,3,4) - 01:04:205 (1,2,3,4) - 要删也是删这里的01:04:205 (1) -
   4. 02:42:100 (1) - lost a whistle on that whistle. it should be here from bgm and has consistency imo~.. :p

　
[ Normal]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:04:995 (2) - how about to move it 1 grid down for a perfect cover of (1)'s tail?~ :3
   2. 00:31:837 (4) - seems bad. move it 1 grid up for these overlapped slider.~
      
      some problem for the same reason..

      i point out here so that you can fix them easily. (if it's your style, just ignore them, awkward however.
      00:33:415 (2) - same reason as above, just move 1 grid down it.
      00:36:573 (2) - a grid right.
      00:38:152 (4) - a grid left and up.
      00:43:679 (3) - same as above.
      00:58:679 (2) - up 1 grid.
      01:00:258 (4) - up 1 grid
      01:15:258 (3) - 1 grid right and up, to make the same spacing by the slider body as between (1,2).
      01:18:021 (2) - 1 grid up or tinier moving without grid snap.
      01:19:600 (2) - as above, 1 grid right.
      01:21:179 (2) - a grid up.
      01:22:758 (2) - 1 grid right.
      02:18:416 (3) - 1 grid down.
      02:35:784 (1) - ^
      02:38:350 (2) - ^
      02:41:311 (4) - ^
      02:39:732 (2) - 1 grid down and right?
   3. 01:02:626 (3) - from some suggestion, i'd prefer to make the curve upward for a better flow.
      Click

      
   4. 02:26:311 (1) - upward curve as above?
   5. 02:56:705 (2,3) - nc here to make a burst? o.o..
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:20:784 (2) - remove the whistle on that head~ if you followed the same point in Easy diff. :3
   2. 00:23:942 (2) - same as above.

　
[ Hard]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:21:574 (1) - Ctrl+G to make a better flow? i feel the spacing with (2) is ok for the whole difficulty. anyway, it's up to you.
   2. 00:33:416 (3) - hmm..can't understand the nc. lonely and useless. o.o consistent with other place?
   3. 01:47:232 (1) - so hard for a easy Hard. try ctrl+g it?
   4. 01:47:626 (1) - if you followed above, change the nc color to light purple?
   5. 02:28:679 (3,4,5,6) - really confused for the whole difficulty imo.. the attack when i first try it's a triangle pattern, however they are repeats.. anyway, ctrl+g (5,6) can slove this problem i think.. if you think it's ok for now.. it's ok then. :d
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 02:55:916 (3) - maybe you lost a whistle on that tail. :3

　
[ Insane]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:05:982 (1) - bring forward 1/4 tick can catch the bgm imo..
   2. 00:10:521 (2) - no need to change the sv to x0.5, i mean that x0.75 is enough completely, really easy to make people break combo here because it has a distance with the previous slider..
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Clear.

uncompleted o.o
Let's see Lan..

[ Lan]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:21:179 (5) - ctrl+g is much more fun to play, whether with the last or the next note. :3
   2. 00:46:048 (1) - add a here here for the sv changed suddenly.
   3. 00:47:626 (4) - ^
   4. 02:19:403 (2) - i'd prefer to ctrl+g it to avoid the bit anti jump.. :d
   5. 02:19:600 (3) - 同上.
   6. 02:30:159 - add a circle between (2) and (3)? a bit confuse me for now..
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:13:284 (1) - the whistle which is put on that start noise me really, not fit the weak beat from bgm i feel.. remove it? :3
   2. 00:23:548 (2) - sounds wired.. just change the drum clap to soft whistle additions? :d
   3. 00:27:692 (4) - put a whistle on that sliderbody？~ it can make a chain so that the whistle is not very sudden.. anyway, pretty from my heard. xD
   4. 00:30:850 (8) - ^
   5. 00:34:009 (4) - same as above~. :3
   6. 00:37:167 (8) - ^
   7. 00:40:126 (5) - soft whistle additions here? sounds good for me.
   8. 01:00:061 (3) - same point as 00:27:692 (4).~ (omit the rest of same thing.

love this style.
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Good luck then. lol

cmn_891127 wrote:

http://puu.sh/1RbN7

AngelHoney wrote:

先留名 差不多50%了

Ibuki Suika wrote:

ALDO?

MiddleIsland最喜欢的曲子,希望不要坑了;_;

Lan wings wrote:

Ibuki Suika wrote:

ALDO?

MiddleIsland最喜欢的曲子,希望不要坑了;_;

没留意还有这个BK_(:3」∠)_

ts8zs wrote:

[lan]
00:05:784 (1) - 下面不圆故意弄不圆的
00:26:311 (1,2,3,4) - now is →←→← change to →←←→ 看下面
00:27:100 (1,2,3,4) - now is →←→← change to →←←→你复读错了←→←→ change to →←→←
00:29:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - now is →←→←→←→← change to →→←←→→←←no change
00:32:626 (1,2,3,4) - now is ←→←→←→←→ change to ←←→→←←→→no change
00:33:416 (1,2,3,4) - now is →←→←→←→← change to →→←←→→←←no change
00:35:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - now is →←→←→←→← change to →→←←→→←←no change
总是用撕裂梗太没创意了._.
00:48:416 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928232 不好看 虽然我的也不好看
01:01:048 (1) - Ctrl+gno change
01:01:442 (3) - Ctrl+gno change
01:04:798 (4) - Ctrl+g 才对._.手误 Fixed
01:07:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - now is →←→←→←→← change to →→←←→→←←我不复读了 为何你总那么纠结方向
01:02:232 (3,4) - now is ←← change to →→
01:34:403 (2) - Ctrl+G
02:11:508 (2) - Ctrl+G 这个时候撕裂才对嘛._.
02:11:902 (4) - Ctrl+G
02:13:284 (3,4) - now is ←← change to →→
02:34:403 (2) - Ctrl+G
02:55:916 (6) - Ctrl+G
好图……感觉你蛮喜欢这种歌……锯子+锤子=拆钢琴._.
[Hard]
02:43:284 (1) - 加reverse 然后加个note这里跟的是小提琴
02:53:153 (4) - 放远一点Fixed
[Normal]
01:18:416 (1) - 和2不是很fit 01:16:837 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - 这段我想着remap的摆的太搓 然后忘了...
01:21:574 (1) - 和2不是很fit^
02:10:423 - 这绿线打酱油._.
02:13:580 - 这绿线打酱油._.
02:16:738 - 这绿线打酱油._.
[Easy]
好久没见到这么大圈了
00:40:521 (2,3) - 弧度稍微大点Fixed
02:10:423 - 这绿线打酱油._.
02:13:580 - 这绿线打酱油._.
02:16:738 - 这绿线打酱油._.
↓其实这些都有调音量↓

才不是AImod

Warning: [Easy] 01:16:837 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 01:18:317 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 01:45:751 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 01:46:146 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 02:12:051 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 02:12:150 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 02:15:209 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 02:15:307 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 02:18:367 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 02:18:465 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 02:20:982 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 01:16:837 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 01:18:317 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 01:33:120 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 01:33:515 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 01:45:751 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 02:12:150 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 02:15:307 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 02:18:465 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 02:34:353 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 02:34:748 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 00:06:969 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 01:18:317 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 01:33:120 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 01:33:515 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 01:45:751 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 02:12:150 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 02:15:307 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 02:18:465 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 02:34:353 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 02:34:748 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 02:38:942 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 01:16:837 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 01:18:317 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 01:33:120 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 01:33:515 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 01:45:751 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 01:46:146 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 02:12:051 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 02:12:150 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 02:15:209 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 02:15:307 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 02:18:367 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 02:18:465 有多余的timing线

Lan wings wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

[lan]
01:07:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - now is →←→←→←→← change to →→←←→→←←我不复读了 为何你总那么纠结方向 感觉蛮好玩的所以就……233 ._.
好图……感觉你蛮喜欢这种歌……锯子+锤子=拆钢琴._. 居然不吐槽
[Hard]
02:43:284 (1) - 加reverse 然后加个note这里跟的是小提琴 我也是根据小提琴改的啊._.
[Easy]
好久没见到这么大圈了
00:40:521 (2,3) - 弧度稍微大点Fixed
↓其实这些都有调音量↓调音量应该不会提示啊好奇怪是不是坏掉了啊._.

关于打酱油的绿线:没看到这是中断kiai的绿线么 kiai time全难度必须一致的 GD除外切换kiai和调过音量音效的都不应该提示才对……所以在我看的时候就没有kiai._.
另外 在你post之前我把这段的喷泉全删了 因为还是会挡note.... 被调戏了._.

Purple:Fixed
Pink:Ignore

BakaHuang wrote:

是不是这歌啊 我mark一下 过几天帮你看看啊 莫慌

BakaHuang wrote:

是不是这歌啊 我mark一下 过几天帮你看看啊 莫慌

Asphyxia wrote:

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

I didn't find anything, I'm so sorry!

take this star instead (:

judgment light wrote:

实在太赞 star送上

AngelHoney wrote:

02:54:633 (8,9) - 这是故意的还是>_>? (难道2013年的OSU已经这么鬼畜了么

Regou wrote:

hi~
[Lan]
01:06:969 (7,1) - 不要重疊吧/.\7都放到中间的位置了不stack你书书后面的1该放哪
01:18:021 (2) - 總是覺得完的太慢,可以在紅線停?後面同理前面不拖一下怎么显得出后面的急促感
01:37:363 (1,2) - 你真是鬼畜不能多說,好評
02:20:686 - add note?跟后面做对比02:22:166 (3,4,5) -
02:38:350 (1,2) - Ctrl+G?不懂你这啥flow

gl~

Nazalion wrote:

awesome map !!
<3 it

[Lan]
02:25:521 - make slider until 02:25:620 i think Ignore
02:45:061 - add just 1 beat Ignore
02:49:961 - http://puu.sh/4d0Q1.jpg => make like this Ignore
02:56:311 - make slider until 02:56:640 Ignore
02:56:705 - ^ until 02:57:034 Ignore
02:57:100 - ^ until 02:57:429 Ignore

done

hope your map got ranked

sheela901 wrote:

[Easy]
00:24:732 (3) - Curve it for a flow?Fixed
01:07:363 (1) - Ctrl+J for also a flow?Ignore
02:57:495 (1) - Remove NC?same another diff
[Normal]
02:43:679 (1) - Remove NC?Ignore
02:46:837 (1) - ^?Ignore

[Hard]
00:51:771 (1) - Start it at 00:51:673 ?Ignore
02:47:232 (1,1,1) - Put them more close to each other.Ignore

[Lan]
00:23:942 (3) - Ctrl+J so it could be closer to 00:24:238 (4) since they're a 1/4 beat.Here is intentional

Good Luck and star!

Strawberry wrote:

瞎了又神曲+神谱

1. 00:05:784 (3) 我真是神，沒有 就拉給你看看
   
   SPOILER

   
   00:46:837 (1) slider加個點，沒啥 跟後面 01:16:837 (1) 意思一樣
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 這難度的其中一個特色就是slider拉的很神
2. 00:07:758 (1) 這很明顯是跟小提琴，這麼直有點把感覺破壞掉了，而且你後面也都是原滑的奇葩型 嘛..你應該懂
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:45:258 (1,2) 這兩個的斜度不跟後面 00:46:837 (1,2) 一樣相反嗎?
4. 00:49:205 (2,3,4,5) 試試?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:27:495 (4) 試試看把他拉成一直線，然後兩個紅點交換順序，我覺得效果不錯 (不過我不知道這能不能rank)
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:40:126 (4) ^ 如果喜歡再改吧
7. 02:27:495 (4) ^
8. 02:40:126 (4) ^

Azure wrote:

Strawberry wrote:

瞎了又神曲+神谱

oh yeah MiddleIsland

[General]
skin的size好像有問題啊，打開Aimod看的到，我沒甚麼再弄這個，你再問問Queen或誰看有沒有問題吧这个嘛 皮皮的新皮肤就是这个尺寸 要找只能找皮皮

[Hard]

1. 00:05:784 (3) 我真是神，沒有 就拉給你看看雅达 我觉得我的好看多了Q.Q
   
   SPOILER

   
   00:46:837 (1) slider加個點，沒啥 跟後面 01:16:837 (1) 意思一樣Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

[Lan]

1. 這難度的其中一個特色就是slider拉的很神
2. 00:07:758 (1) 這很明顯是跟小提琴，這麼直有點把感覺破壞掉了，而且你後面也都是原滑的奇葩型 嘛..你應該懂 当时做的时候很自然的就拉了这个形状 想来是有理由的 不改=w=
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:45:258 (1,2) 這兩個的斜度不跟後面 00:46:837 (1,2) 一樣相反嗎?这个没记错的话我是-144°转的
4. 00:49:205 (2,3,4,5) 試試? 这样不行..5跟6的flow就断掉了
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:27:495 (4) 試試看把他拉成一直線，然後兩個紅點交換順序，我覺得效果不錯 (不過我不知道這能不能rank)
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:40:126 (4) ^ 如果喜歡再改吧我还是相信我的第一感觉sry
7. 02:27:495 (4) ^
8. 02:40:126 (4) ^

[AngelHoney]
沒問題，就combo數很大 (16

go go bubble <3

LKs wrote:

蓝翅膀现在就是一个字 浪

SPOILER

01:23 Lan wings: hi
01:23 Lan wings: need redl ._.
01:23 fartownik: yeah
01:23 fartownik: I see
01:23 fartownik:
01:34 fartownik: 00:53:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hey, this is wrongly snapped
01:34 Lan wings: this is 1/6
01:35 fartownik: yes I know
01:35 fartownik: but you have to move the entire stream
01:35 fartownik: 1/12 earlier
01:35 fartownik: listen in 25%
01:36 Lan wings: yes i know here is overmapping
01:36 fartownik: not overmapping
01:36 Lan wings: but 1/12 i can't map it
01:36 fartownik: it doesn't follow the music
01:36 fartownik: you don't have to use 1/12
01:37 fartownik: you just move the 1/6 stream 1/12 earlier
01:37 fartownik: http://puu.sh/4chTS.jpg
01:37 Lan wings: wait a minute ._.
01:37 *Lan wings is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/289256 MiddleIsland - Aldo [AngelHoney]] +DoubleTime
01:38 Lan wings: spec my friend playing
01:38 fartownik: right now you have http://puu.sh/4chVv.jpg
01:39 fartownik: you understand?
01:40 Lan wings: oh
01:40 Lan wings: i know
01:40 Lan wings: thx
01:40 fartownik: good
01:48 fartownik: both Insane diffs are awesome 8)
01:48 Lan wings: :3
01:49 Lan wings: There is a problem
01:49 fartownik: 02:03:416 (4) - new combo in hard
01:49 fartownik: wow I'm nazi
01:49 Lan wings: Lan diff
01:49 fartownik: what problem?
01:49 Lan wings: 01:23:153 (3,1) -
01:50 fartownik: yes?
01:50 Lan wings: http://puu.sh/4cir7.jpg
01:50 Lan wings: http://puu.sh/4cirX.jpg
01:50 Lan wings: now is this
01:51 fartownik: you must update the map
01:51 fartownik: sorry I can't really see the difference on the picture
01:51 Lan wings: ok
01:53 Lan wings: http://puu.sh/4cizm.rar
01:53 Lan wings: 01:23:153 (3,1) -
01:54 fartownik: so what's the problem?
01:55 Lan wings: 01:23:153 (3) - this slider end 01:23:548 - here or 01:23:482 - here ?
01:55 fartownik: oh
01:56 fartownik: have you tried 01:23:613 here?
01:56 fartownik: 01:23:613
01:56 fartownik: I know it might be a little weird
01:57 fartownik: but the piano starts from there
01:58 Lan wings: slider end not have hit feel _(:3」∠)_
01:59 Lan wings: I think I know how I do :3
01:59 fartownik: ok then 01:23:482 is fine, but the stream will be harder
02:00 Lan wings: thx
02:00 Lan wings: 01:23:613 - i think stream start on here is bad ;_;
02:01 fartownik: well, it's your decision
02:01 fartownik: I don't really know where it would be the best
02:02 Lan wings: haha
02:02 Lan wings: i will find more modder look this =w=
02:02 fartownik: yeah
02:03 fartownik: also I've got broken speakers
02:03 fartownik: and can't hear the music very well
02:03 fartownik: it'd be easier with working headphones
02:03 fartownik: also rest of the map is flawless
02:03 fartownik: besides 02:54:633 (8,9) -
02:04 Lan wings: buy a headset :3
02:04 fartownik: a lot of people might miss here by accident
02:04 fartownik: yeah, I bought one, it's already being shipped
02:05 Lan wings: http://puu.sh/4cj5a.jpg
02:05 Lan wings: try this?
02:05 fartownik: well it's not really about how much it's spaced
02:05 fartownik: it's just the fact that there is a jump there
02:05 fartownik: people will be really nervous at that moment
02:06 fartownik: and you haven't used a jump in this pattern ever before in the map
02:06 fartownik: so it will be a surprise
02:07 fartownik: it would be either
02:07 fartownik: 02:54:633 (8,9) - transform into a slider like before
02:07 fartownik: or
02:07 fartownik: 02:54:337 (5,6,7,8) - transform into 2 1/4 sliders
02:07 fartownik: it's just a suggestion
02:10 Lan wings: try 2 1/4 sliders
02:16 Lan wings: http://puu.sh/4cjFR.jpg
02:16 Lan wings: fixed
02:17 fartownik: good

Nymph wrote:

irc mod:
fix the size of the skin (approach circle, slider reserve arrow)

add sliderborder to all diffs

fix a pattern in lan diff

fix the leadin time

bubbled.

1. Lan : 01:48:811 (1) and 02:48:811 (1) - Would be best imo if you add a note here and start spinner 1/2 or 1/4 after - you had a circle here on Hard, though!
2. Lan : 02:20:686 (4) - You might want to add a circle here as well (the music goes triple here, actually)