1. Cataclysm (5 stars, 555 notes)
2. Darkness (3.61 stars, 169 notes)
3. Haruka's Oni (4.83 stars, 795 notes)
4. Makar's Muzukashii (4.72 stars, 696 notes)
5. Nightmare (4.97 stars, 282 notes)
6. Omen (1.7 stars, 120 notes)

PortalLife wrote:

Hello Meiii!~ I am here to mod. :3

Portal's Modding

Omen

Not much I can say. I think because its quite a fast map (200 BPM), you should higher the AR to 4-5. This won't break the Easy diff I think, and give it a faster feel to match the song? Dunno xD i think those ars are more suitable for normals

Darkness

00:09:730 - 00:12:130 Hmm, I think you should take the spinners from Omen and put them here, and in Omen make it so that there aren't spinners at these times. I think it'd be easier overall and more fitting for this map. i think spinners are easier lol, thats why i put that one in omen, so beginners won't have to catch that next note on time

Again i'll have to suggest higher AR for the fast paced nature of the song. AR6-7?


Nightmare

02:25:530 - I'd snap these two closer like this -

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lunar says not now

No AR suggestion this time

Cataclysm

00:10:030 - 00:12:130 break here? 00:12:130 - 00:14:445 break again? i think its fine for this diff lol

02:32:830 - new combo fixed


overall I <3 this map and want it ranked so bad ;w;

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jonathanlfj wrote:

mod \o/

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
what happened to "meiikyuu edits"? nvm found it >< LOL
add "lunarsakuya" to tags on Nightmare diff fixed

[Omen]
00:25:330 (2) - change this to a note should be easier to play and follow, since the violin(?) ends early compared to the slider end ok
00:36:130 (3) - use same setup as 00:26:530 (1,2) for consistency actually i might change the one at 26:530 to match this part. since theres already 01:24:130 (1) - as well
01:07:330 (1) - sliderrrr

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\o/ ty

124,119,67330,6,0,P|184:136|184:136|200:200|200:200|256:230|256:230|312:200|312:200|328:136|328:136|388:120,2,384,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:52:930 (1) - Take NC off ok
01:55:930 (3) - NC here instead of 01:57:730 (1) ^
02:21:730 (3) - add finish on slider head to keep consistency with what u did at 02:15:730 (2) ^
02:31:330 (3) - ^ ^
02:36:430 (1) - no finish? sounds like epic loud ending to me lol ^

[Darkness]
00:39:430 (3,4) - this one sounds quite awkward in game play...try this?

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i got rid of the tiny slider
01:12:130 (1) - add finish on slider head ok
01:13:330 (3) - that extra repeat maybe unexpected, perhaps change it to repeat slider + note ^
02:19:330 (1) - add finish on slider head, do the same for 02:20:530 (2) (end), 02:24:130 (1) (head), 02:25:930 (3) (middle), 02:30:130 (3) (end) ^
02:36:430 (1) - same as Omen ^

[Nightmare]
00:21:730 (1,2,3) - this

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ok

224,168,21730,6,0,P|254:262|236:321,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
320,340,22180,2,0,P|386:266|446:252,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,172,22630,2,0,P|331:155|282:106,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,60,23080,2,0,P|304:32,2,75

fixed spacing with next slider as well
Think i forgot to add the finish on head of 00:21:730 (1) when making this, add it if i did forget

00:27:955 (4) - opps, move it to 00:27:880, snapped on the blue line rite now :O
00:47:530 (5) - blanket could be improved to encircle the end of 00:47:080 (4) better uhh fine for now i guess
01:40:930 (1) - stack on the head of 01:39:730 (4) ^

[Cataclysm]
00:14:530 (1,2,3,4) - make it perfectly square? i don't mind doing this but if its a symmetrical rectangle already than its fine ~
00:25:630 (6,7) - flows better this way

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fine
00:57:730 (1) - yeahhhhhh \o/
01:19:030 (8) - reverse selection, get a nice oval flow that way no i like the intended pattern i have right now sry x.x
01:45:130 (8) - stream this instead? yep
02:04:330 (6,7,8,9,10) - make it curve smoother ok
02:11:680 (7) - This repeat slider is my enemy, everytime i get a fc this slider throws me off with 100 so i dont get perfect orz really nothing wrong with this slider, its my problem oh i kind of changed that b4 i read this lol
02:16:930 (1) - add finish to slider head, as well as 02:21:730 (1) and 02:31:330 (1) ok
02:36:430 (1) - same as Omen ^

Thats all, waiting patiently for rank...(i believe my top streaming speed is 200bpm now thanks to this map) <3

Natsu wrote:

Hi m4m

General:

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Unused Image Files
sb\black.jpg
sb\white.jpg
i might make an SB so ill keep for now..

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

Cataclysm :
Kiai 1: Starts on 00:19:330, ends on 00:19:405
Kiai 2: Starts on 00:38:530, ends on 00:57:730
Kiai 3: Starts on 01:55:330, ends on 02:14:530

Darkness :
Kiai 1: Starts on 00:19:330, ends on 00:19:405
Kiai 2: Starts on 00:38:530, ends on 00:52:930
Kiai 3: Starts on 01:55:330, ends on 02:14:530

Nightmare :
Kiai 1: Starts on 00:19:330, ends on 00:19:405
Kiai 2: Starts on 00:38:530, ends on 00:52:930
Kiai 3: Starts on 01:55:330, ends on 02:14:530

Omen :
Kiai 1: Starts on 00:19:330, ends on 00:19:405
Kiai 2: Starts on 00:38:530, ends on 00:52:930
Kiai 3: Starts on 01:55:330, ends on 02:14:530

fixed

Omen:

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00:09:730 add finish
00:16:930 (1,1) - I think this is unrankable on easy diff check the image:

k fixed

01:07:330 add finish in the head of slider fit better imo fixed
02:15:730 why finish? trying to be consistent? o_o..i don't think it sounds too off
02:17:530 add whistle ok
02:19:930 ^ ^
02:36:430 try to reduce volume to 15 % its a rather loud finish..so i don't want to make it that low ill lower a bit though

Darkness:

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00:09:730 finish fixed
00:49:030 weird pause add a circle? ill change if someone else mentions
01:18:730 make it symetrical with 01:17:530 k
01:25:480 move it to 01:25:330 and extend it to white tick i like it the way it is now.. ><
01:41:230 add circle? its fine ~
01:55:330 remove slider and add a circle since i feel better kiai start there imo ^
02:22:930 add whistle i think ill limit whistles to easy diff... not a big fan of whistles xD
02:36:430 try to reduce volume to 15 % same as above

Nightmare:

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00:36:130 stack it with the tail of previous slider i think its intentional
02:22:630 add circle change if someone else mentions
02:35:530 finish in the head ^
02:36:205 same in the others diff imo is bettr set volume in 15 %

Nice map that are just suggestions

Gero wrote:

Hi Hi M4M

[General]

Nice Song <3! thanks!

[Omen]

(*) 00:15:730 (2) - This note is not have the correct distance could you please check it well fixed
(*) 00:36:130 (3,4) - these notes do not have the same pace as you did before, as here 00:26:530 (1,2,3) this is inconsistent
I think you should do the same rhythms :3! ehhh ill change if one more mentions
(*) 01:43:930 (4) - I think here you should remove the NC fixed

[Darkness]

(*) 00:26:530 (4) - this slider to move it X: 304 Y:256 to form a beautiful diamond here:

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fixed
(*) 00:27:880 (5) - if you do the above, you put the correct distances to the following notes fixed
(*) 01:12:130 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could do this: to make it look more orderly uhh think im fine right now

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(*) 01:19:330 (1) - I feel that you could copy and paste in this slider 01:21:130 (3) - to make it more consistent this pattern fixed

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(*) 02:09:730 (1,1) - not this very well stacked you should move this slider to: X: 206 Y:131 ok
but to do this before you move this slider 02:11:230 (2) - A X: 336 Y: 300 not to break away distance from the notes
this:

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(*) 02:20:530 (2,4) - same ^ i think i leave here for now
Move this note a X: 268 Y: 288 perfect for a stacked

[Nightmare]

(*) Nice Diff, Good Job!

1. tag is not same as between diff. you must fix it. add "makar makar8000 haruka sweet_serenitee" to other than "Haruka's Oni" and "Makar's Muzukashii"
2. remove SB folder. the folder was not used. I guess you forgot to remove it.

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
found little issues. you must fix those.

[General]

1. tag is not same as between diff. you must fix it. add "makar makar8000 haruka sweet_serenitee" to other than "Haruka's Oni" and "Makar's Muzukashii"
2. remove SB folder. the folder was not used. I guess you forgot to remove it.

gl

R e d wrote:

hi :3
from my queue mod4mod

[Insane]

00:09:730 (1,1) - insert break time for insane diff. , i think players who are capable can manage
00:12:130 (1,1) - insert break time ^

i really think you shoud add claps on streams even if just 1 in the white tick


00:35:230 (6,7) - i think you should not jump here, because its a slider to a circle, no new combo and not much sense Imo i think i remapped that part xD

01:13:030 (4) - remove NC fixed
01:13:330 (1) - NC
01:13:930 (3) - remove NC
01:14:530 (1) - NC

02:35:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - so less spacing seems unexpected In my opinion hmm ok ill make stream a bit wider

[Hard]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/596966
00:56:230 (2) - is not perfect in the center, and 00:56:680 (3) - is not blacket with (4) fixed the centering, as for the blanket, leaving for now
01:07:330 (1) - to 01:12:130 (1) - - - more spacing in this part? maybe +0,1 or +0,2? ill talk to lunar~

[Normal]

00:09:730 (1,1) - insert break time fine
00:12:130 (1,1) - insert break time ^

00:45:430 (5) - humm sound much better if you try new combo in 00:45:730. looks weird the white big tick in reverse IMO
01:41:230 (1) - add circle with NC. helps rythme and flow
01:41:530 (2) - then remove NC
02:05:230 (1) - add circle with NC, remove NC next


[Easy]
00:12:430 - break time?




Hope i helped :3 Good luck

popner wrote:

Hi ~ M4M request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
You miss a blank in tags of [Cataclysm]. Between 'lunarsakuya' and 'haruka'. fixed
black.jpg is unnecessary because you can change color of white.jpg to black(by using 'C' code). Also, for pure color image, using png is better(smaller file size and better performance). ok

[Nightmare]
00:31:330 (1,2) - nazi - a little overlap. fixed
00:33:130 (5,6) - put them in a line or an arc? Current pattern looks weird. think its fine for now.. ~
00:56:680 (3,4) - make a better blanket? ok ~

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01:59:530 (4,5) - same as 00:33:130 (5,6) its ok imo

[Cataclysm]
吐槽：作为板子玩家感觉图的移动范围有些狭小，一直在中间转。。ok x.x
00:09:730 (1) - please add break at the blank after this slider: the HP drops during this period, and I don't see the necessary to leave it empty according to music and your patterns. Also the length is long enough for a break. fine
00:12:130 (1) - ^ ^
00:15:730 (1,2,3,4) - if this square have a different direction from the previous one (00:14:530 (1,2,3,4)), it will makes more sense imo. You can try ctrl+g to 00:16:030 (2,4). ok
00:23:230 (5,6) - feel uncomfortable playing this part. There is a crescendo here so I expect jump between this two sliders. I would like to arrange them in this way: fixed

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00:34:030 (2,3) - the overlap looks bad..Try to avoid it. You can move it to the right: fixed

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00:36:130 (1,2,3,4,5) - for the repeating rhythm, I think using same pattern is better. I'm really unexpected to see a pattern differs from the first reverse slider. keep for now
00:38:530 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing is strange..Try to keep the spacing before and after notes, like:

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The stack is meaningless under AR9.
00:40:630 (8,9) - same as above. I will not mention again for same issue.
00:51:730 (1,2,3) - If you follows the piano, the rhythm here will be more interesting to play:

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I just use circles to present the rhythm. They can be changed into sliders if necessary.
01:55:630 (2,3) - I think this rhythm fits the music better:

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02:32:980 (2,3,4) - putting them in this way can provide a better flow imo.

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[Darkness]
01:17:530 (1) - miss a NC here. fixed

[Omen]
00:20:530 (1) - miss a NC here. ^

Omen and Darkness seems fine. But I think the break at the beginning is necessary. idk all the other mods suggested the breaks lol

GL~