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Qrispy Joybox - snow prism [Taiko]

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年2月25日 at 17:51:18

Artist: Qrispy Joybox
Title: snow prism
Source: REFLEC BEAT colette
Tags: bemani konami Lundlerol Qrispy Joybox REFLEC BEAT colette pop'n music DDR poptune
BPM: 196
Filesize: 2994kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (4.24 stars, 284 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (4.83 stars, 771 notes)
  3. Kantan (2.59 stars, 185 notes)
  4. Lundle's Oni (4.83 stars, 668 notes)
  5. Muzukashii (4.83 stars, 476 notes)
  6. Oni (4.83 stars, 590 notes)
Download: Qrispy Joybox - snow prism
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st Ranked map
thanks all modders!!


[Kantan] ... 100%
[Futsuu] ... 100%
[Muzukashii] ... 100%
[Oni] ... 100%
[Inner Oni] ... 100%

[Lundle's Oni] ... 100% by Lundlerol
Lundlerol
shoot a star☆
Topic Starter
TKS

Lundlerol wrote:

shoot a star☆
ty for star _(:3 」∠)_ -・・*'``*:.。. .。.:*・゜゚・*☆
Naryuga
from #modreqs

[General]
  1. 音量 一律65~70%に? KIAI Timeじゃないときの音量が50%で、少し小さく感じました。特に00:14:039 - からのKIAI partと00:48:325 - からの部分は音楽のほうの音量も変わっておらず、ここで音量の差があるのが気になりました
[Kantan]
  1. 00:03:321 (4) - これをここではなく 00:03:933 - に置くとドンドンドンが合うと思います
  2. 00:08:219 (4) - ^と同じ
  3. 01:36:689 (1) - K(big k)?
[Futsuu]
  1. 特にnotesの多い譜面というわけではないので HP drain+1 (HP4)?
  2. 00:03:627 (1,2) - 両方BGMは同じ感じの音なのに(2)だけ大音符なのが少し違和感をかんじました。両方につけるか、(2)のfinishをはずして 00:04:240 (1) - を大音符にするか、どちらかにしてみるとよくなるとおもいます。
  3. 00:08:525 (1,2) - ^と同じ
  4. 00:47:709 (1) - new combo削除(ここから色が反転してしまっているので) --> 01:07:913 (2) - にnew combo
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:27:199 (4) - 削除? 01:26:587 (2,3) - の間と同じようにしたほうがいい感じにきこえました
[Oni]
  1. 01:36:459 - せっかくなのでここにもk入れてみてはどうですか .w.
[Inner Oni]
  1. HP+1 OD+1?
  2. 00:06:230 (1) - ここで一回切る感じで これを削除してもいいかもです
  3. 00:49:776 (1) - ここから 00:51:230 (2) - まで色が反転してます
  4. 00:52:301 (1,2,1,1) - 色反転
  5. 00:57:657 (1) - ^
[Lundle's]

  • 4つとも好みの問題._.
  1. 00:20:009 (3,4,5) - kkd?
  2. 00:29:805 (3,4,5) - ^
  3. 01:15:876 (3,4,5) - kdk?
  4. 01:16:642 (2) - D?
PRO diffs 'o')b
がんばって! :)
Topic Starter
TKS

Naryuga wrote:

from #modreqs

[General]
  1. 音量 一律65~70%に? KIAI Timeじゃないときの音量が50%で、少し小さく感じました。特に00:14:039 - からのKIAI partと00:48:325 - からの部分は音楽のほうの音量も変わっておらず、ここで音量の差があるのが気になりました
- 一律65%に変更しました


[Kantan]
  1. 00:03:321 (4) - これをここではなく 00:03:933 - に置くとドンドンドンが合うと思います
  2. 00:08:219 (4) - ^と同じ
  3. 01:36:689 (1) - K(big k)?
- fix all.

[Futsuu]
  1. 特にnotesの多い譜面というわけではないので HP drain+1 (HP4)?
  2. 00:03:627 (1,2) - 両方BGMは同じ感じの音なのに(2)だけ大音符なのが少し違和感をかんじました。両方につけるか、(2)のfinishをはずして 00:04:240 (1) - を大音符にするか、どちらかにしてみるとよくなるとおもいます。
  3. 00:08:525 (1,2) - ^と同じ
  4. 00:47:709 (1) - new combo削除(ここから色が反転してしまっているので) --> 01:07:913 (2) - にnew combo
- fix all.

[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:27:199 (4) - 削除? 01:26:587 (2,3) - の間と同じようにしたほうがいい感じにきこえました
- fix.

[Oni]
  1. 01:36:459 - せっかくなのでここにもk入れてみてはどうですか .w.
- fix.

[Inner Oni]
  1. HP+1 OD+1? HP+1. ODは触りたくないですごめんなさい_(:3」∠)_
  2. 00:06:230 (1) - ここで一回切る感じで これを削除してもいいかもです
  3. 00:49:776 (1) - ここから 00:51:230 (2) - まで色が反転してます
  4. 00:52:301 (1,2,1,1) - 色反転
  5. 00:57:657 (1) - ^
- コンボカラーミス多くてごめんなさい;;;;

PRO diffs 'o')b
がんばって! :)
PRO Modありがとうございます˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)​◜✧˖
がんばります!0~(,'3 j )っ
karterfreak
Mod from request in #modreqs

[Kantan]

00:29:954 (1,2,1) - The first beat of this is incorrect. Place a triple k k k pattern like you had been previously, starting at 00:29:801, and change the don at 00:31:179 to a slider that extends to 00:32:250. This picture shows how it should look:



01:04:239 (1,2,1) - Use the same pattern as the example above.

01:11:893 (2) - Should consider removing this. 5 note patterns are rather difficult for kantan.

01:21:689 (2) - Same as above.

01:41:280 (9) - Remove this and put a kat at 01:41:893 instead? I think it sounds a little bit better.

[Futsuu]

00:03:321 (1) - Consider removing. This is a little too streamy for futsuu, even if it's in 1/2

00:05:770 (1) - Consider removing as well. Not as streamy, but it fits the part a bit better in my opinion.

00:08:219 (1) - Same deal as 00:03:321. Remove the note here.

00:15:719 (3) - Note pitch goes lower here, so a don would fit rather well.

00:20:617 (3) - Same as above.

00:25:515 (3) - Same as above.

00:31:025 (1) - Should consider making this a slider like I showed in the kantan difficulty. See below for reference picture:



00:48:321 to 01:05:311 - Apply any pattern changes that you applied from 00:15:719 - 00:31:025 to here as well to keep consistency.

01:09:444 (2) - Consider moving this to 01:09:597, Changing 01:10:209 (2) to a don, and deleting 01:10:362 (1). It looks like this when you've done so:



01:14:342 (2) - Move this to 01:14:495.

01:19:240 (2) - Move this to 01:19:393.

01:21:689 (6) - Move this to 01:21:842.

01:24:137 (2) - Move this to 01:24:291.

01:38:831 to outro - Remove any notes that you removed in the beginning section here. Make sure you're consistent.


[Muzukashii]

While this plays great, its too hard / streamy for a Muzukashii. Try and remove some of the density from the 1/2 streams.

Some ways you can remove some density from the Muzukashii:

Remove the second last note in any of the patterns similar to 00:02:556 (4,1,1,1,2,1,2,1)

Remove the fourth note in any patterns similar to 00:14:036 (1,2,1,1,1,2,1,2)

Break sections like 01:07:913 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) into smaller patterns. As an example for this one, you could try dkk dkk dkkd

[Oni]

00:14:954 (1,1) - You're kinda ignoring the main melody / beat of the song between the two notes here. Why not use a similar pattern like the one you use at 00:17:556 (2,3,4)? This goes for all the spots that you do this in the song after this part as well. This is my only major concern for this difficulty, so if you can fix this, then everything seems good.

[Inner Oni]

00:08:985 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,1) - Pretty much every place you have a stream like this, you're overmapping (or if not overmapping, making the stream much more difficult than it needs to be). I realize its an Inner Oni, but you're drowning out the music. Try something like the picture below in places like this. It keeps the difficulty without the stream (Example picture is the stream starting at 01:44:495 cut up into something less streamy):



Other than some sections being a bit too overmapped for my taste, it's not bad. Just please consider what I'm mentioning here.

[Lundle's Oni]

00:43:274 (1) - Just a suggestion, try a kat here.

01:46:029 (3) - Remove this, not even sure why it's there to begin with, there's no beat at that location.

This was surprisingly good. Couldn't find a whole lot wrong with it, and the streams were kept appropriate in difficulty with how the music sounds. (Still not a huge fan of long don streams, but I digress).
ANGELMYU
Oni
00:12:505 d
00:12:581 d
00:12:658 d
00:12:810 K
00:13:270 K
00:42:046 d
00:42:199 k
00:42:352 k
00:42:505 d
00:42:964 d
00:43:117 k
00:43:576 k
00:46:791 d
00:46:867 d
00:46:944 d
00:47:097 K
00:47:556 K

Inner Oni
00:12:505 d
00:12:581 d
00:12:658 d
00:12:734 d
00:12:811 k
00:13:270 k
00:17:709 d
00:18:015 削除
00:27:505 d
00:27:811 削除
00:46:791 d
00:46:867 d
00:46:944 d
00:47:020 d
00:47:097 k
00:47:556 K
00:52:301 削除
01:01:791 d
01:02:097 削除

初心者の意見なので試して変になったらごめんなさい><
大文字 - 大音符
Topic Starter
TKS

Tasha wrote:

Mod from request in #modreqs

[Kantan]

00:29:954 (1,2,1) - The first beat of this is incorrect. Place a triple k k k pattern like you had been previously, starting at 00:29:801, and change the don at 00:31:179 to a slider that extends to 00:32:250. - fix.

01:04:239 (1,2,1) - Use the same pattern as the example above. - fix.

01:11:893 (2) - Should consider removing this. 5 note patterns are rather difficult for kantan. - fix.

01:21:689 (2) - Same as above. - fix.

01:41:280 (9) - Remove this and put a kat at 01:41:893 instead? I think it sounds a little bit better. - fix.

[Futsuu]

00:03:321 (1) - Consider removing. This is a little too streamy for futsuu, even if it's in 1/2 - fix.

00:05:770 (1) - Consider removing as well. Not as streamy, but it fits the part a bit better in my opinion. - fix.

00:08:219 (1) - Same deal as 00:03:321. Remove the note here. - fix.

00:15:719 (3) - Note pitch goes lower here, so a don would fit rather well. - fix.

00:20:617 (3) - Same as above. - fix.

00:25:515 (3) - Same as above. - fix.

00:31:025 (1) - Should consider making this a slider like I showed in the kantan difficulty. - i tried several times. but its a little funny rhythm..

00:48:321 to 01:05:311 - Apply any pattern changes that you applied from 00:15:719 - 00:31:025 to here as well to keep consistency. - fix.

01:09:444 (2) - Consider moving this to 01:09:597, Changing 01:10:209 (2) to a don, and deleting 01:10:362 (1). - fix.

01:14:342 (2) - Move this to 01:14:495. - fix.

01:19:240 (2) - Move this to 01:19:393. - fix.

01:21:689 (6) - Move this to 01:21:842. - fix.

01:24:137 (2) - Move this to 01:24:291. - fix.

01:38:831 to outro - Remove any notes that you removed in the beginning section here. Make sure you're consistent. - fix.


[Muzukashii]

While this plays great, its too hard / streamy for a Muzukashii. Try and remove some of the density from the 1/2 streams.

Some ways you can remove some density from the Muzukashii:

Remove the second last note in any of the patterns similar to 00:02:556 (4,1,1,1,2,1,2,1)

Remove the fourth note in any patterns similar to 00:14:036 (1,2,1,1,1,2,1,2)

Break sections like 01:07:913 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) into smaller patterns. As an example for this one, you could try dkk dkk dkkd

- i think not want to change the state of the now. but, reviewed the notes a little.

[Oni]

00:14:954 (1,1) - You're kinda ignoring the main melody / beat of the song between the two notes here. Why not use a similar pattern like the one you use at 00:17:556 (2,3,4)? This goes for all the spots that you do this in the song after this part as well. This is my only major concern for this difficulty, so if you can fix this, then everything seems good.

- fix.

[Inner Oni]

00:08:985 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,1) - Pretty much every place you have a stream like this, you're overmapping (or if not overmapping, making the stream much more difficult than it needs to be). I realize its an Inner Oni, but you're drowning out the music. Try something like the picture below in places like this. It keeps the difficulty without the stream (Example picture is the stream starting at 01:44:495 cut up into something less streamy):



Other than some sections being a bit too overmapped for my taste, it's not bad. Just please consider what I'm mentioning here.

- change to a little simple streams.

[Lundle's Oni]

00:43:274 (1) - Just a suggestion, try a kat here.

01:46:029 (3) - Remove this, not even sure why it's there to begin with, there's no beat at that location.

This was surprisingly good. Couldn't find a whole lot wrong with it, and the streams were kept appropriate in difficulty with how the music sounds. (Still not a huge fan of long don streams, but I digress).
your mod is very informative.
thanks \( 'ω')/
Topic Starter
TKS

ANGELMYU wrote:

Oni
00:12:505 d
00:12:581 d
00:12:658 d
00:12:810 K
00:13:270 K
00:42:046 d
00:42:199 k
00:42:352 k
00:42:505 d
00:42:964 d
00:43:117 k
00:43:576 k
00:46:791 d
00:46:867 d
00:46:944 d
00:47:097 K
00:47:556 K

Inner Oni
00:12:505 d
00:12:581 d
00:12:658 d
00:12:734 d
00:12:811 k
00:13:270 k
00:17:709 d
00:18:015 削除
00:27:505 d
00:27:811 削除
00:46:791 d
00:46:867 d
00:46:944 d
00:47:020 d
00:47:097 k
00:47:556 K
00:52:301 削除
01:01:791 d
01:02:097 削除

初心者の意見なので試して変になったらごめんなさい><
大文字 - 大音符
thanks!!
しかし時間が全てズレている…?_(:3」∠)_
Lundlerol

Tasha wrote:

Mod from request in #modreqs

[Lundle's Oni]

00:43:274 (1) - Just a suggestion, try a kat here. fix

01:46:029 (3) - Remove this, not even sure why it's there to begin with, there's no beat at that location. remove

This was surprisingly good. Couldn't find a whole lot wrong with it, and the streams were kept appropriate in difficulty with how the music sounds. (Still not a huge fan of long don streams, but I digress). thx^^ I'm so glad_(:3 」∠)_
thx mod~
All doone.

and update
Lundle's Oni .osufile
AzuSHeL
こにゃにゃちわ Modの押し売りですヾ(◉ฺ∀◉ฺ。ฺ)
自分ならこうするってとこを上げてくので
all no changeで構いませんヾ(:3ノシヾ)ノ"

[Muzukashii]
  • 00:05:770 (2,3) - この2つd
    00:06:077 (1) - これKでも(:3[___]
    01:06:995 - add k
    01:37:607 (2) - d
    01:40:056 (2) - d
    01:42:505 (2) - d
    01:45:643 (2) - Del
    01:45:720 (1) - K
    OMAKE
    [list:97693]00:02:097 (2,3) - 00:04:546 (2,3) - 00:06:995 (2,3) - 01:27:811 (1,2) - 01:30:260 (10,11) -
    kkもいいかもですが dkのがいいかなーって思いました
    [Oni]
    • 00:09:750 (1) - d
      00:09:903 (1) - k
      00:14:954 (1) - d
      00:15:107 (1) - k
      00:15:413 (2) - k
      00:19:852 (1) - d
      00:20:005 (1) - k
      01:07:403 (6,7,8,9,10) -
      [list:97693]6から10までDelで01:07:454 (6) - ここを始点にddkkkkなどどうでしょう
      1/4で置いてみましょ(:3[___]
      Inner Oniも見ましたが リズムはいいと思いました!
      気付くとこはOniと一緒かな?

      以上です(:3[___]

      頑張ってください ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) :lol: ;) ;) ;)
Topic Starter
TKS

azunyan556 wrote:

こにゃにゃちわ Modの押し売りですヾ(◉ฺ∀◉ฺ。ฺ)
自分ならこうするってとこを上げてくので
all no changeで構いませんヾ(:3ノシヾ)ノ"

[Muzukashii]
  • 00:05:770 (2,3) - この2つd
    00:06:077 (1) - これKでも(:3[___]
    01:06:995 - add k - そこに置くとその後のリズムが?????になったので色々置き直しました!(:3[___]
    01:37:607 (2) - d
    01:40:056 (2) - d
    01:42:505 (2) - d
    01:45:643 (2) - Del
    01:45:720 (1) - K
    OMAKE
    [list:2c680]00:02:097 (2,3) - 00:04:546 (2,3) - 00:06:995 (2,3) - 01:27:811 (1,2) - 01:30:260 (10,11) -
    kkもいいかもですが dkのがいいかなーって思いました
    [Oni]
    • 00:09:750 (1) - d
      00:09:903 (1) - k
      00:14:954 (1) - d
      00:15:107 (1) - k
      00:15:413 (2) - k
      00:19:852 (1) - d
      00:20:005 (1) - k
      01:07:403 (6,7,8,9,10) -
      [list:2c680]6から10までDelで01:07:454 (6) - ここを始点にddkkkkなどどうでしょう
      1/4で置いてみましょ(:3[___]
      Inner Oniも見ましたが リズムはいいと思いました!
      気付くとこはOniと一緒かな?

      以上です(:3[___]

      頑張ってください ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) :lol: ;) ;) ;)
多分ほぼ修正して色々と見直しました!
pro modありがとうごじますがんばります! ٩( 'ω' )و
Lundlerol
modderが少ないようなので助太刀来ました_(:3 」∠)_

[Inner Oni]
00:03:780 -  音がないのでdelete
00:08:678 - ^
01:10:132 - add notes
01:11:586 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - ここは別の部分の音を取っているようですがそのまま周りと一緒のBGMに沿ったほうが統一感があると思います。
なので 01:11:434 (2) -  ここを始点にkkkkdddの連打はどうですか?
01:11:969 -  ここ消えてるか覚えてないのでここにノーツがあればdeleteで。
01:12:046 -  add k notes
01:37:530 - add d
01:38:143 (3) - add k
01:38:755 - ^
01:39:291 - delete
01:39:826 - add k
01:39:979 - add d
01:40:592 - add k
01:41:204 - ^
01:41:586 (1) - remove F
01:41:586 (1) -  ここから連打とかアリなんじゃないですか?(e.g kkkkd 等)
01:42:275 -  add k
01:42:428 - add d
01:43:041 - add k
01:43:653 - ^

以上です~。
Inner Oniのみのmodとなりましたがご了承くださいまし_(:3 」∠)_

あ、それと僕の譜面のあぷでお願いしますね~
Lundle's Oni

あ、あとANGELMYUさんにもkudosu上げないとこの譜面自体のstarが増えないのでプレゼントしてあげると両者が得しますよ~_(:3 」∠)_
Topic Starter
TKS

Lundlerol wrote:

modderが少ないようなので助太刀来ました_(:3 」∠)_

[Inner Oni]
00:03:780 -  音がないのでdelete
00:08:678 - ^
01:10:132 - add notes
01:11:586 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - ここは別の部分の音を取っているようですがそのまま周りと一緒のBGMに沿ったほうが統一感があると思います。
なので 01:11:434 (2) -  ここを始点にkkkkdddの連打はどうですか?
01:11:969 -  ここ消えてるか覚えてないのでここにノーツがあればdeleteで。
01:12:046 -  add k notes
01:37:530 - add d
01:38:143 (3) - add k
01:38:755 - ^
01:39:291 - delete
01:39:826 - add k
01:39:979 - add d
01:40:592 - add k
01:41:204 - ^
01:41:586 (1) - remove F
01:41:586 (1) -  ここから連打とかアリなんじゃないですか?(e.g kkkkd 等)
01:42:275 -  add k
01:42:428 - add d
01:43:041 - add k
01:43:653 - ^

以上です~。
Inner Oniのみのmodとなりましたがご了承くださいまし_(:3 」∠)_

あ、それと僕の譜面のあぷでお願いしますね~
Lundle's Oni

あ、あとANGELMYUさんにもkudosu上げないとこの譜面自体のstarが増えないのでプレゼントしてあげると両者が得しますよ~_(:3 」∠)_
thanks for mod!! and updated!! ˖◝(⁰▿⁰)​◜˖
7割以上くらい採用しました!arigatougozaimasu( ‘-^ )b
Cuvelia
H i , from my queue . ( requested by TKSalt )
 
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These are all suggestion. If you don't like them , you could ignore .
(今から言うのは全て提案です、貴方が気に入らなければ全て拒否することも出来ます)
 
| d = don | k = kat | D = BIG DON | K = BIG KAT | re = remove |
 
[ General ]
  1. Source: REFLEC BEAT colette
    他のRanked曲を参考にして colette 部分は削除して colette はTagのほうに入れましょう。
     
  2. Tags : REFLEC BEAT Qrispy Joybox
    これらはアーティスト、ソースに入っているのでTagに入れても不要です、削除しましょう。
     
  3. Tags : に pop'n music のバナー表記名である SNOWY CORE の追加。
     
  4. 01:27:581 - 緑線が1/4のズレがあります 01:27:505 - ここに修正しましょう。
[ Kantan]
  1. 簡単は初心者がやる難易度なので1/2リズムを入れると
    初心者がリズムが分からなくなり叩けないということも考えられます。
    それに1/1の連打が簡単にしてはとても多く見られます。
    簡単ですのでもう少し連打等のノートを減らして初心者向けにしたほうがいいと思います。
     
  2. 先ほども言わせていただいた通り 00:15:107 (1,2,1) - のように1/2のリズムに
    音を置くのは簡単としてはあまり好ましくないと思います。
    このパターンでしたら00:15:260 (1,2,1) - のように1/2後にずらして
    1/1のリズムに置いても曲調的にも叩きやすさ的にも問題無いかと思います。
     
  3. SV:1.0 はいかがでしょうか、0.7だと非常に遅い気がします。
    (本家では簡単でも鬼でも同じスピードが大半なので簡単でもSV1.4で作っている人もいます、そこは貴方の判断に任せます)
[ Futsuu]
  1. もし簡単のSVを1.0に変えるのでしたら難しいと間を取って SV:1.2 はどうでしょうか
     
  2. 00:42:964 - add d
  3. 00:45:566 (1,2) - k
  4. 01:06:688 - add k
  5. 01:07:301 - add k
  6. 01:15:107 (2) - d
  7. 01:40:974 (3) - k
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:18:934 (1,1,1,1) - d d k k
  2. 00:28:730 (1,1,1,1) - d d k k
  3. 00:44:036 (2) - like this?
  4. 00:53:210 (1,1,1,1) - d d k k
  5. 01:03:016 (1,1,1,1) - d d k k
 
[ Oni]
  1. 00:18:933 (1,1,2,1) - d d k k
  2. 00:21:689 (3) - k
  3. 00:28:729 (1,1,2,1) - d d k k
  4. 00:37:913 (1) - k
  5. 00:45:872 (11) - d
  6. 00:53:219 (1,1,2,1) - d d k k
  7. 00:55:974 (3) - k
  8. 01:03:015 (1,1,2,1) - d d k k
 
good luck .
Topic Starter
TKS

Cuvelia wrote:

H i , from my queue . ( requested by TKSalt )
 
こちらのModding Queueのルール通り合計時間8分以内まで見ます。
 
These are all suggestion. If you don't like them , you could ignore .
(今から言うのは全て提案です、貴方が気に入らなければ全て拒否することも出来ます)
 
| d = don | k = kat | D = BIG DON | K = BIG KAT | re = remove |
 
[ General ]
  1. Source: REFLEC BEAT colette
    他のRanked曲を参考にして colette 部分は削除して colette はTagのほうに入れましょう。
     
  2. Tags : REFLEC BEAT Qrispy Joybox
    これらはアーティスト、ソースに入っているのでTagに入れても不要です、削除しましょう。
     
  3. Tags : に pop'n music のバナー表記名である SNOWY CORE の追加。
     
  4. 01:27:581 - 緑線が1/4のズレがあります 01:27:505 - ここに修正しましょう。
[ Kantan]
  1. 簡単は初心者がやる難易度なので1/2リズムを入れると
    初心者がリズムが分からなくなり叩けないということも考えられます。
    それに1/1の連打が簡単にしてはとても多く見られます。
    簡単ですのでもう少し連打等のノートを減らして初心者向けにしたほうがいいと思います。
     
  2. 先ほども言わせていただいた通り 00:15:107 (1,2,1) - のように1/2のリズムに
    音を置くのは簡単としてはあまり好ましくないと思います。
    このパターンでしたら00:15:260 (1,2,1) - のように1/2後にずらして
    1/1のリズムに置いても曲調的にも叩きやすさ的にも問題無いかと思います。

    - Kantanについては指摘を参考に全体を見直しましたがまだ詰めが甘いような気がします…
     徐々に煮詰めていきたいです…
    KantanなのにMuzukashii…
     
  3. SV:1.0 はいかがでしょうか、0.7だと非常に遅い気がします。
    (本家では簡単でも鬼でも同じスピードが大半なので簡単でもSV1.4で作っている人もいます、そこは貴方の判断に任せます)
[ Futsuu]
  1. もし簡単のSVを1.0に変えるのでしたら難しいと間を取って SV:1.2 はどうでしょうか
     
  2. 00:42:964 - add d
  3. 00:45:566 (1,2) - k
  4. 01:06:688 - add k
  5. 01:07:301 - add k
  6. 01:15:107 (2) - d
  7. 01:40:974 (3) - k
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:18:934 (1,1,1,1) - d d k k
  2. 00:28:730 (1,1,1,1) - d d k k
  3. 00:44:036 (2) - like this?
  4. 00:53:210 (1,1,1,1) - d d k k
  5. 01:03:016 (1,1,1,1) - d d k k
 
[ Oni]
  1. 00:18:933 (1,1,2,1) - d d k k
  2. 00:21:689 (3) - k
  3. 00:28:729 (1,1,2,1) - d d k k
  4. 00:37:913 (1) - k
  5. 00:45:872 (11) - d
  6. 00:53:219 (1,1,2,1) - d d k k
  7. 00:55:974 (3) - k
  8. 01:03:015 (1,1,2,1) - d d k k
 
good luck .
fixed almost all.
thanks for mod!!
Loctav
Hi - IRC mod:

Log
19:58 Loctav: hi
20:00 TKSalt: hi
20:00 *Loctav is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/224097 Qrispy Joybox - snow prism [Kantan]]
20:00 Loctav: having some seconds?
20:00 Loctav: or busy with multiplayer?
20:00 TKSalt: wait :
20:00 TKSalt: 3
20:01 TKSalt: kk quit multi :3/
20:01 Loctav: [Futsuu]
20:01 Loctav: 00:13:423 (1,2) - this sounds strange
20:01 Loctav: consider removing it?
20:01 TKSalt: ok
20:02 Loctav: 00:14:648 (2) - this should be a kat, if you want to stay consistent with 00:17:097 (1) -
20:02 TKSalt: ah;w; its true ;w;
20:02 Loctav: 00:19:240 (5,1) - same here, d k? (maybe it returns the variety you wanted to create)
20:02 Loctav: *removes
20:03 Loctav: but well. the altering of patterns dont fit imo :C
20:03 Loctav: 00:24:444 (2) - kat here 00:29:036 (5,1) - d k (tell me when I am too fast or if you want to say no to something)
20:04 TKSalt: ok :3
20:04 TKSalt: a little wait. booting IRC
20:04 Loctav: uh, alright
20:05 TKSalt: sry;w; fixed
20:05 Loctav: No need to say sorry. lol
20:05 TKSalt: ;w;b
20:05 Loctav: 00:31:331 - this should also have drumroll till 00:32:250 (like in Kantan)
20:06 TKSalt: kk
20:07 Loctav: let's continue
20:07 Loctav: 00:47:709 (4,5) - remove this ,too? like at beginning?
20:08 TKSalt: ok, del
20:09 Loctav: 01:29:954 - add don?
20:10 TKSalt: ok added
20:11 Loctav: fine
20:11 Loctav: lets move to [Muzukashii]
20:11 TKSalt: ok
20:13 Loctav: 01:34:852 (8) - maybe let it end on 01:36:382 and add a kat at 01:36:688 -
20:13 Loctav: stupid time stamps
20:13 Loctav: 01:34:852 (8) - maybe let it end on 01:36:382 - and add a kat at 01:36:688 -
20:14 TKSalt: big kat?
20:14 Loctav: could work, too
20:14 Loctav: yes
20:15 TKSalt: kk fixed
20:15 Loctav: that's all for Muzu
20:15 Loctav: [Oni]
20:16 TKSalt: k
20:17 Loctav: 01:07:301 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is clearly not 1/3 but 1/4
20:18 TKSalt: ok. kkkkkkkkd streams fixed
20:18 Loctav: you probably needed to add a kat or something to make it 1/4? ;:D
20:20 TKSalt: humm...english so hard ;w;
20:20 Loctav: sorry
20:20 Loctav: made it 1/4?
20:20 TKSalt: nope!!
20:20 Loctav: 01:07:301 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - should be 1/4
20:20 Loctav: :C
20:20 TKSalt: this? http://puu.sh/2nfmr
20:21 Loctav: thats okay
20:21 Loctav: excellent
20:21 Loctav: lets move to inner oi
20:21 Loctav: *oni
20:21 TKSalt: ok!! sorry for my poor eng skill ;w;
20:23 Loctav: [Inner Oni] 01:07:301 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - should be http://puu.sh/2nftj
20:23 TKSalt: change 1/4? :3
20:23 Loctav: yes
20:23 Loctav: :3
20:24 TKSalt: fixed :3/
20:24 Loctav: maybe OD6 on Inner Oni? just suggestion
20:25 TKSalt: sorry... i dislike OD6~ ;w;
20:25 Loctav: alright
20:25 Loctav: no problem
20:26 TKSalt: ty ;w;
20:27 Loctav: okay, let me check some general stuff.
20:28 TKSalt: kk
20:28 Loctav: Remove letterboxing in all diffs.
20:28 Loctav: your kiai-beginning and kiai-endings are unsnapped. Resnap green lines in all diffs
20:29 Loctav: *resnap only in Lundle's Oni
20:29 TKSalt: ah ok
20:32 Loctav: fixed letterboxing and unsnapped kiai?
20:32 Loctav: also Lundle's Oni has the old offset of 1796ms
20:33 Loctav: fix offset on Lundle's Oni please
20:33 TKSalt: ok. all fixed
20:34 Loctav: okay, go update
20:34 Loctav: tell me when finished
20:34 TKSalt: completed~ :3/
20:34 Loctav: let me recheck
20:36 TKSalt: arigatou ;w;/
20:38 Loctav: last fix
20:38 Loctav: [Lundle's Oni] 00:01:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - unsnapped
20:38 Loctav: resnap them
20:39 TKSalt: ok, fixed.
20:39 Loctav: I just noticed, that you only have +9 SP ;_;
20:39 Loctav: update it
20:40 TKSalt: ok ;_;
20:40 TKSalt: i few friends...orz
20:41 Loctav: alright

Edit: bubbled.
Topic Starter
TKS

Loctav wrote:

Hi - IRC mod:

Log
19:58 Loctav: hi
20:00 TKSalt: hi
20:00 *Loctav is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/224097 Qrispy Joybox - snow prism [Kantan]]
20:00 Loctav: having some seconds?
20:00 Loctav: or busy with multiplayer?
20:00 TKSalt: wait :
20:00 TKSalt: 3
20:01 TKSalt: kk quit multi :3/
20:01 Loctav: [Futsuu]
20:01 Loctav: 00:13:423 (1,2) - this sounds strange
20:01 Loctav: consider removing it?
20:01 TKSalt: ok
20:02 Loctav: 00:14:648 (2) - this should be a kat, if you want to stay consistent with 00:17:097 (1) -
20:02 TKSalt: ah;w; its true ;w;
20:02 Loctav: 00:19:240 (5,1) - same here, d k? (maybe it returns the variety you wanted to create)
20:02 Loctav: *removes
20:03 Loctav: but well. the altering of patterns dont fit imo :C
20:03 Loctav: 00:24:444 (2) - kat here 00:29:036 (5,1) - d k (tell me when I am too fast or if you want to say no to something)
20:04 TKSalt: ok :3
20:04 TKSalt: a little wait. booting IRC
20:04 Loctav: uh, alright
20:05 TKSalt: sry;w; fixed
20:05 Loctav: No need to say sorry. lol
20:05 TKSalt: ;w;b
20:05 Loctav: 00:31:331 - this should also have drumroll till 00:32:250 (like in Kantan)
20:06 TKSalt: kk
20:07 Loctav: let's continue
20:07 Loctav: 00:47:709 (4,5) - remove this ,too? like at beginning?
20:08 TKSalt: ok, del
20:09 Loctav: 01:29:954 - add don?
20:10 TKSalt: ok added
20:11 Loctav: fine
20:11 Loctav: lets move to [Muzukashii]
20:11 TKSalt: ok
20:13 Loctav: 01:34:852 (8) - maybe let it end on 01:36:382 and add a kat at 01:36:688 -
20:13 Loctav: stupid time stamps
20:13 Loctav: 01:34:852 (8) - maybe let it end on 01:36:382 - and add a kat at 01:36:688 -
20:14 TKSalt: big kat?
20:14 Loctav: could work, too
20:14 Loctav: yes
20:15 TKSalt: kk fixed
20:15 Loctav: that's all for Muzu
20:15 Loctav: [Oni]
20:16 TKSalt: k
20:17 Loctav: 01:07:301 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is clearly not 1/3 but 1/4
20:18 TKSalt: ok. kkkkkkkkd streams fixed
20:18 Loctav: you probably needed to add a kat or something to make it 1/4? ;:D
20:20 TKSalt: humm...english so hard ;w;
20:20 Loctav: sorry
20:20 Loctav: made it 1/4?
20:20 TKSalt: nope!!
20:20 Loctav: 01:07:301 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - should be 1/4
20:20 Loctav: :C
20:20 TKSalt: this? http://puu.sh/2nfmr
20:21 Loctav: thats okay
20:21 Loctav: excellent
20:21 Loctav: lets move to inner oi
20:21 Loctav: *oni
20:21 TKSalt: ok!! sorry for my poor eng skill ;w;
20:23 Loctav: [Inner Oni] 01:07:301 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - should be http://puu.sh/2nftj
20:23 TKSalt: change 1/4? :3
20:23 Loctav: yes
20:23 Loctav: :3
20:24 TKSalt: fixed :3/
20:24 Loctav: maybe OD6 on Inner Oni? just suggestion
20:25 TKSalt: sorry... i dislike OD6~ ;w;
20:25 Loctav: alright
20:25 Loctav: no problem
20:26 TKSalt: ty ;w;
20:27 Loctav: okay, let me check some general stuff.
20:28 TKSalt: kk
20:28 Loctav: Remove letterboxing in all diffs.
20:28 Loctav: your kiai-beginning and kiai-endings are unsnapped. Resnap green lines in all diffs
20:29 Loctav: *resnap only in Lundle's Oni
20:29 TKSalt: ah ok
20:32 Loctav: fixed letterboxing and unsnapped kiai?
20:32 Loctav: also Lundle's Oni has the old offset of 1796ms
20:33 Loctav: fix offset on Lundle's Oni please
20:33 TKSalt: ok. all fixed
20:34 Loctav: okay, go update
20:34 Loctav: tell me when finished
20:34 TKSalt: completed~ :3/
20:34 Loctav: let me recheck
20:36 TKSalt: arigatou ;w;/
20:38 Loctav: last fix
20:38 Loctav: [Lundle's Oni] 00:01:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - unsnapped
20:38 Loctav: resnap them
20:39 TKSalt: ok, fixed.
20:39 Loctav: I just noticed, that you only have +9 SP ;_;
20:39 Loctav: update it
20:40 TKSalt: ok ;_;
20:40 TKSalt: i few friends...orz
20:41 Loctav: alright

Edit: bubbled.
it was so helpful :3
and thanks for give bubble ;w;/
Backfire
I know you asked for a mod, but it is hard to mod a perfect map ;3

I'd give a star but it looks like it'll be ranked.
Topic Starter
TKS

Backfire wrote:

I know you asked for a mod, but it is hard to mod a perfect map ;3

I'd give a star but it looks like it'll be ranked.
thanks Moefire-chan :D//
today is a so happy >///<
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