kajiyatta wrote:

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General
delete "ed" in the tag, less than 2 words doesn't hit in search. Ok. Fixed
please put hit sound more consistence, heard randomly so I don't follow your pattern. I'm putting a whistle on the first and the third little with tick. After that, if there is a moment which accelerate, i'm putting whistle where it's needed ^^
Easy
I feel OD & HP 2 better because this diff seems easier. In my opinion, this is good like that because the song is already veryyyy slow so i'm trying to boost the difficulty with that.
Placement
00:01:767(3) x:80 better in consistence up. Well, ok!
00:18:434(3) y:144 with same height (1) 144? I think there is a problem here ^^ I have changed a little
00:37:767(1) make blanket like this? Fixed
00:51:100(2) wrong dspacing, please use ×0.8 distance. If i'm using x0.8 here, it will be weird. If you have an other option, I'll take it ^^
01:03:767(3)^ Damn, right ^^ Fixed (ty)
Hit Sound
00:37:767(1) add finish at head like other diffs. Right, i forget it ^^ fixed!

Normal
same as Easy, OD.HP 4 better ^
Placement
00:02:767(4,1) it's a minor thing, but maybe this flow seem nice if accepted. Yeah the flow is better so it's ok. Fixed
00:07:100(2,3,4,5) a bit weird, please make smoother Fixed
00:10:434(4) sudden jump... you should set same spacing in Normal diff for newbie.
00:29:767(1) umm, I don't suppose this stack seems nice since the rhythm changed. so maybe you can move away better.Mhmm here I think it's ok because it's always on the beat so it's not so disturbing
00:51:100(1,2,3) make beaustiful triangle? Now this is beaustiful ! :3 Fixed
00:56:534(1,2,3)umm, maybe like this? Yeah good idea! Fixed

SPOILER

00:59:100(1,2,3,4) a bit crowded... you can put away better.
Hit Sonud
00:32:434(1,2,3,4) delete whistle at (2) and (4), add whistle at (1) and (3) 's end Yeah totally true, that's my bad. Fixed

Hard
Placement
00:23:767(4,5,6,7,8) why changed spacing? If i kept 0.8, the pattern looked really weird
Rhythm
01:15:100 unnecessary green line It's necessary for my SV
00:00:767(2,3,4) not feel better imo. replace like this? I don't really know how to put this slider to fit with what i've done.
01:05:600 add a note to follow the musi. Fixed
Hit Sonud
00:37:767(1) delete finish at end Fixed
01:11:100(3) delete finish at head. I suppose whistle better No I think it fit with the song actually.
01:16:434(1)^ Yeah here ok but i don't put whistle.

needs some works I suppose, but overall fine. so take my star~

Frostmourne wrote:

Hey ! Hello<3 ^^

General
- Your video still has audio in itself which is unrankable so please remove its audio Fixed
- Artist can be whether Team.Nekokan[Neko] feat.Lia or Team Nekokan feat.Lia Ok.
- Change the song's name to "I Scream Chocolatl (TV Size)" since

Reiji-RJ wrote:

The title should be 'I scream Chocolatl', right? click here

zrhnozrbn xD I'm mad ^^ Mhmm that was what I thought at the beginning so yeah! let's change it again :3

and seeing this , you can add both tag : nyanyannya sham Ok

Easy
All HP Drain,Approach Rate,Overall difficulty set to 2, I do believe that AR2 fits this song the best because the song isn't giving that kind of fast Owkay.
00:13:767 (4) - NC here will fit since you started NCing at the downbeat on such point 00:08:434 (1) - ,00:19:100 (1) - Fixed
00:17:100 (1) - you can remove NC here according to the above ^ Fixed
00:27:767 (5) - NC Fixed
00:36:434 (2,3) - as I see you used some sort of this rhythm 00:20:434 (2,3,4) -
I would say that this point is a bit empty comparing to the rest of the map, I think you can add a note on 00:36:767 , which will fill the blank here a bit better Yeah I like, fixed.
00:40:100 (x) - ^ same reason, it's not hard because it's the part before the kiai, a bit exciting will be great for playing here ! ok
00:45:767 (3) - NC because 00:45:767 (1,2,1) - 01:00:434 (2,1) - , seeing this part, they are NCed frequently so it should be balance in this case Ok, i understand. Done!
00:51:100 (2,3) - move these 2 notes right 1 grid because 00:52:434 (3) - will be the same axis with 00:53:767 (1) - and the gap between 00:48:434 (1,2) - will look more proper Fixed
01:19:100 (3,4) - better align them with 01:17:767 (1,2) - by moving down 1 grid for both note , so that it will be more neat (y:288) Oh damn, I didn't notice here ^^ Fixed

Normal
HP and AR -1 , it will fit this song better and spread with the Easy one Mhmm Ok for AR but I want to keep HP if it's possible ^^ I'll ask you later
00:17:600 (x) - as the music presents, adding a note here will fit the vocal really well as in before 00:15:434 (2,3,4) - , you seemed to follow it much more precisely on vocal so that's why adding here will fit better Fixed
00:49:434 (2) - I think additional and sampleset drum on the head doesn't fit the smoothness of this song much , as it can fit a bit with the instrument but I guess it will be a bit contradicted with the vocal so I suggest you use default set instead of these Ok. Fixed
00:53:434 (6) - move to x:436 y:130 so that it will look really much proper (the current's inclined to the upper side) Done
00:59:100 (1,2,3,4) - just in my opinion , but to arrange in this way looks better to me Actually, I don't like the rythm so I have changed it. I think you can recheck but for me, this is better :p
01:10:434 (5) - NC? it's too long imo and since 01:09:767 (4) - is finish, so it will fit because it's like after the ending of previous phrase True and fixed!
01:24:434 (3) - if you don't mind, to make it consistent with 00:49:434 (2) - (in case you removed) I suggest you use this as default set too so that the sound won't stand out too much (a bit obvious and that is a bit strange) Fixed

Hard
AR and OD 6 are pretty better(-1 both) , the current is quite unfitting with the spread and the song itself Fixed.
00:10:767 (6,7,1) - these 3 notes are placed strangely because you have used with larger spacing on these points 00:09:434 (3,4,5) -
and the direction of these 3 notes are in the same way and under this slider 00:09:434 (3) - so it's quite hard to read in some way
what I suggest is you can move 00:10:434 (5) - to x:404 y:268 and move these 3 notes in a time to x:496 y:128
also move 00:11:434 (2) - to x:348 y:64 (it isn't included in this picture yet) so adjust the spacing better Fixed imo
00:25:267 (3,4) - overlapping in this way doesn't look good imo, thing is it looks more proper to read since a bit overlapping with 00:24:767 (2) - will indicate 1/4 beat and it will also indicate 1 beat between 00:25:434 (4,5) - as well like this (x:140 y:296) Fixed
00:27:600 (2) - this spacing and slider is a bit confusing, with its spacing and rhythm, I suggest you shorten this slider 1/4 beat back (will end at 00:27:767)
and it will fit with the vocal accordingly Fixed
00:39:767 (1) - remove NC? I think leaving the follow point to guide the player that this note is on the top left side (which is really obviously opposite of the previous one) will make it read better Yeah, that's totally true! Fixed
01:03:434 (6) - add NC and remove 01:03:767 (1) - , because it doesn't fit with the new phrase here imo Fixed
like this one 01:02:934 (5) - follows the chorus before and then 01:03:434 (6) - suddenly changes the tone of volume
01:10:767 (2,3) - better move this out of 01:09:101 (3,4,5,6) - these lines because some hitburst might interfere a bit while playing Done

Call me back for a recheck once you are done fixing here Thank you Frostmourne :3