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Lehon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on giovedì 25 aprile 2013 at 12.51.04

Artist: Kerli
Title: Zero Gravity
BPM: 128
Filesize: 7866kb
Play Time: 03:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,69 stars, 162 notes)
  2. Hard (4,57 stars, 260 notes)
  3. Insane (4,99 stars, 546 notes)
  4. Normal (3,28 stars, 220 notes)
Download: Kerli - Zero Gravity
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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IMPORTANT, UPDATE!
[last update 25th of april ~]
ready for mod! :3
Thanks to:
-SuperMoutarde
-RikiH_ x2
-Tony
-Cancel
-Ayu
-Nemis
-AlpacaCokelat
-Momochikun
for the mod :3
In 28th March upload:
~HARD DIFF in progress! (80%)
download please!
SuperMoutarde
Hi, mod req from my queue

[Easy]

01:08:028 (2,3,4,5) - could be aligned better. Try this:
SPOILER
324,104,68028,1,8,0:0:0
312,24,68497,2,0,P|184:24,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,104,69435,1,0,0:0:0
162,184,69903,1,8,0:0:0

02:22:560 (2,3,4,5) - ^ Code:
SPOILER
188,280,143028,1,8,0:0:0
200,360,143497,2,0,P|328:360,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
324,280,144435,1,0,0:0:0
336,200,144903,1,8,0:0:0
01:50:685 (3) - nazi, move middle point of slider to 88:224 for slightly better shape
03:26:778 (4) - looks odd, i would delete one of the middle points

[Normal]

01:28:185 (1) - finish
02:30:060 (1) - ^
02:58:185 (1) - ^

[Insane]

00:08:263 (2) - why is this so closed to 00:07:560 (1) ?
00:28:653 (5,6,7) - The placement of these doesn't look too good, try to do something more symetrical


Very nice maps, hope this will help, gl!
Topic Starter
Lehon

SuperMoutarde wrote:

Hi, mod req from my queue

[Easy]

01:08:028 (2,3,4,5) - could be aligned better. Try this:
SPOILER
324,104,68028,1,8,0:0:0
312,24,68497,2,0,P|184:24,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,104,69435,1,0,0:0:0
162,184,69903,1,8,0:0:0

02:22:560 (2,3,4,5) - ^ Code:
SPOILER
188,280,143028,1,8,0:0:0
200,360,143497,2,0,P|328:360,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
324,280,144435,1,0,0:0:0
336,200,144903,1,8,0:0:0
01:50:685 (3) - nazi, move middle point of slider to 88:224 for slightly better shape
03:26:778 (4) - looks odd, i would delete one of the middle points

[Normal]

01:28:185 (1) - finish
02:30:060 (1) - ^
02:58:185 (1) - ^

[Insane]

00:08:263 (2) - why is this so closed to 00:07:560 (1) ?
00:28:653 (5,6,7) - The placement of these doesn't look too good, try to do something more symetrical


Very nice maps, hope this will help, gl!
Sorry for the delay, my computer hasn't worked this week O:
Thank you for the mod, but I don't know how to fix the codes in the easy (sorry, but I'm quite newbie lol). Can you explain me, please?
Anyway, I fixed everything else. Your mod has been helpful, so I'll give you a kudosu :3
SuperMoutarde
To use the codes I gave you, open the .osu file with Notepad and replace the lines for those notes by mines.
To find the right lines, use the timestamps.

Example:
324,104,68028,1,8,0:0:0

the part in red is the placement in milliseconds in the song, so you just have to identify the notes I told you to change and replace the lines by what I proposed then you re-open the difficulty in the editor and it will be changed.
Tony
Hello. You posted in my modding queue.

[General]
Really catchy song

[Insane]
AR8 makes the map more fun to play. isn't it? :D
00:07:550 - snap to 00:07:560
00:15:050 - snap to 00:15:060
01:14:825 (11,1) - the flow isn't that great. 01:15:060 (1) - rotate this 90 degrees anticlockwise
01:20:685 (1) - I don't think the whistle on slider body fits here...
01:44:825 (4) - stack this with (2). would play better imo
01:53:966 (7,8,1) - the distances are pretty weird. I suggest moving the slider a bit more farther to (8)
01:58:185 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I love the flow of this pattern. plays awesome! :D
02:42:247 (5) - add a new combo. makes the pattern more readable
02:50:685 (1) - removing the whistle on slider body would fit better imo
03:05:450 (8) - maybe stack this with (5). it makes you go in a triangle, and it's awesome
03:04:747 (5) - add a new combo to make the pattern more readable.
03:13:419 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:12:013 (5) - let's add a new combo here to split the combo chain :P
00:23:497 (2) - move this 1 grid right to make the pattern (1,2,3) symmmetrically
01:05:685 (3) - make this an 1/1 slider like this: http://puu.sh/1U5IX
02:20:685 (3) - ^ copy pasta!!!
01:13:185 - what if you do something like this here : http://puu.sh/1U5L2 ?
02:28:185 - ^ copy pasta!!!
02:43:185 (5) - add new combo because you introduce a new spacing

[Easy]
00:11:310 (4) - new combo like in normal
00:18:341 (4) - move this 1 grid to right to make a blanket with slider 3
01:20:685 (1) - I don't think whistle on sliderbody works here. maybe remove it
01:44:591 (4) - move this 1 grid up to be in line with circle 3

pretty good mapset! I think you can rank it one day. I wish you good luck!
Topic Starter
Lehon

Tony wrote:

Hello. You posted in my modding queue.

[General]
Really catchy song

[Insane]
AR8 makes the map more fun to play. isn't it? :D
00:07:550 - snap to 00:07:560
00:15:050 - snap to 00:15:060
01:14:825 (11,1) - the flow isn't that great. 01:15:060 (1) - rotate this 90 degrees anticlockwise
01:20:685 (1) - I don't think the whistle on slider body fits here...
01:44:825 (4) - stack this with (2). would play better imo
01:53:966 (7,8,1) - the distances are pretty weird. I suggest moving the slider a bit more farther to (8)
01:58:185 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I love the flow of this pattern. plays awesome! :D
02:42:247 (5) - add a new combo. makes the pattern more readable
02:50:685 (1) - removing the whistle on slider body would fit better imo
03:05:450 (8) - maybe stack this with (5). it makes you go in a triangle, and it's awesome
03:04:747 (5) - add a new combo to make the pattern more readable.
03:13:419 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:12:013 (5) - let's add a new combo here to split the combo chain :P
00:23:497 (2) - move this 1 grid right to make the pattern (1,2,3) symmmetrically
01:05:685 (3) - make this an 1/1 slider like this: http://puu.sh/1U5IX
02:20:685 (3) - ^ copy pasta!!!
01:13:185 - what if you do something like this here : http://puu.sh/1U5L2 ?
02:28:185 - ^ copy pasta!!!
02:43:185 (5) - add new combo because you introduce a new spacing

[Easy]
00:11:310 (4) - new combo like in normal
00:18:341 (4) - move this 1 grid to right to make a blanket with slider 3
01:20:685 (1) - I don't think whistle on sliderbody works here. maybe remove it
01:44:591 (4) - move this 1 grid up to be in line with circle 3

pretty good mapset! I think you can rank it one day. I wish you good luck!
Thank you very much! fixed :D
I have given you a kudosu because the mod has been helpful :3
Topic Starter
Lehon

SuperMoutarde wrote:

To use the codes I gave you, open the .osu file with Notepad and replace the lines for those notes by mines.
To find the right lines, use the timestamps.

Example:
324,104,68028,1,8,0:0:0

the part in red is the placement in milliseconds in the song, so you just have to identify the notes I told you to change and replace the lines by what I proposed then you re-open the difficulty in the editor and it will be changed.
Thank you! fixed ~
Tony

Lehon wrote:

Thank you very much! fixed :D
I have given you a kudosu because the mod has been helpful :3
I'll give you a kd star to encourage you to rank this. It's an awsome song :)
Cancel
Hi. From my modding queue!

General

:arrow: Difficulty spread is not good. Please consider making a hard.
:arrow: Correctly snap the timing points please!

Easy

:arrow: 00:15:060 (1) - http://puu.sh/1UWS0
:arrow: 01:16:935 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1UWUX (these are all suggestions btw)
:arrow: 01:46:935 (3) - http://puu.sh/1UWWM

Normal

:arrow: 01:13:185 (1) - Remove that, because it's too fast after spinner.
:arrow: 02:28:185 (1) - ^
:arrow: 02:41:310 (1,2,3,4) - Remove these
:arrow: 02:43:185 (1,2,3,4) - Delete these and add spinner maybe?

Insane

:arrow: 00:11:310 (4) - NC

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Lehon

Cancel wrote:

Hi. From my modding queue!

General

:arrow: Difficulty spread is not good. Please consider making a hard.
:arrow: Correctly snap the timing points please!

Easy

:arrow: 00:15:060 (1) - http://puu.sh/1UWS0
:arrow: 01:16:935 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1UWUX (these are all suggestions btw)
:arrow: 01:46:935 (3) - http://puu.sh/1UWWM

Normal

:arrow: 01:13:185 (1) - Remove that, because it's too fast after spinner.
:arrow: 02:28:185 (1) - ^
:arrow: 02:41:310 (1,2,3,4) - Remove these
:arrow: 02:43:185 (1,2,3,4) - Delete these and add spinner maybe?

Insane

:arrow: 00:11:310 (4) - NC

Good Luck!
Thank you, fixed :D And I give you a kudosu !
Topic Starter
Lehon

Tony wrote:

Lehon wrote:

Thank you very much! fixed :D
I have given you a kudosu because the mod has been helpful :3
I'll give you a kd star to encourage you to rank this. It's an awsome song :)
Thank you so much! I'll try to do my best :D
Cancel
star !
Topic Starter
Lehon

Cancel wrote:

star !
Omg, thank you so much! :)
Ayu
[Easy]

General:
- I only modded a short part and couldn't be bothered modding the rest, because the map didn't interest me at all. Try to use more creativity and vary more with your patterns, don't keep everything so simple!

Placement:
00:07:560 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Little bit simple, maybe try to vary more?
00:15:060 (1) - Unsymmetrical
00:18:810 (1) - Unsymmetrical, also, you could try to make a blanket over the approach circle of (2)
00:20:685 (3) - Unsymmetrical

[Normal]

General:
- Use the information I gave with the first couple of mods for the rest of your map, since they are repeating mistakes.

Placement:
00:15:060 (1,2) - I wouldn't make any overlaps like that myself, because it is really uneccesary. The overlap is a couple of pixels, which makes it ugly and if you increase (or, decrease) the spacing, you'd get easily rid of it.
00:16:935 (4,5) -
00:21:622 (5) - Unsymmetrical
00:24:435 (4,5,1,2) - Ugly overlaps. Just go find all of them yourself, because it seems that there are way more.
Nazi: 00:43:185 (3) - Unsymmetrical
00:45:294 - Move your break to: 00:45:528
01:37:560 (1,2,3,4) - Shouldn't let the sliderborders overlap eachother like this.
01:45:060 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:45:060 (1,4) - I don't like these sliders, because I feel like the red anchor isn't used right. The angle of the corner feels way too tight.

[Hard]

General:
- Wait.. Wh-whaaaaat?! No Hard?! I recommend you to make one to keep a nice diffculty spread in your mapset.

[Insane]

General:
-

Placement:
00:07:560 (1,2) - Overlap (only one I'll mention here, find the others yourself).
00:35:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Feels really simple
01:13:185 (1,2) - incosistent spacing, just use the same spacing from the whole combo
RikiH_
Modding \:D/

General

Penso che ti serva una hard, se vuoi posso farla io D':

Easy

00:07:560 - Qua la section verde è snappata male, sposta l'offset da 7550 a 7560
00:08:263 (2) - Qua secondo me se facessi lo slider curvo con un blanket sarebbe più carino
00:12:013 (2) - Stessa cosa di prima
00:24:435 (3) - Spostalo in x:184 y:72 per evitare di avere tutte le note allineate, così migliora anche il flow
00:39:435 (2) - Spostalo in x:144 y:64 così è perfettamente simmetrico
Se hai fixato quello che ti ho scritto qui dovresti creare un quadrato in diagonale con le 4 note seguenti, per aggiustare lo spacing, quindi ti dico le coordinate lol:
(3) - 184,68
(4) - 200,280
(5) - 312,264
(6) - 296,152
01:05:685 (2) - x:336 y:264 Così il pattern è perfettamente simmetrico. Per lo spacing sposta la nota seguente una griglia a destra ma non dovrebbe manco essere necessario D:
01:31:935 (1,2) - Dovresti eliminare queste due note e mettere una pausa, sono difficili da leggere per un player nabbo xD
01:33:810 (1) - Non è simmetrico, prendi la coda dello slider e muovila di un grid verso l'alto
02:25:372 (6,7) - Dai, qua ci sta benissimo un bel blanket, magari non fatto a cazzo come ho fatto io ma ci può stare lol

Normal

Prova ad abbassare di 1 l'AR. Non sono molto sicuro però D:
00:07:560 - Stesso guaio della Easy, snappa bene la section verde
01:11:310 (1,1) - Troppo difficile per una Normal, fondili in uno spinner unico
01:41:075 (5) - x:232 y:72 così eviti di allineare tutto e flowwa meglio
02:26:310 (1,1) - Stessa cosa di prima sugli spinner
02:30:060 (1) - x:256 y:80 Ti dico di spostarlo perchè verrebbe coperto dal 300 dello spinner
02:41:310 (1,2,3,4) - Fallo più figo. Sposta l'(1) due grid a destra, il (2) due grid in giù, il (3) due grid a sinistra e il (4) due grid verso l'alto
03:14:591 (4) - Dovresti toglierlo e sostituirlo con una nota, per una normal è un po' difficile leggere slider così corti, magari mettici pure un finish xD
03:15:528 (2,1) - Occhio, sono stackate male
03:26:310 (1) - Ouch, il repeat è coperto dallo slider precedente, non so manco se sia rankabile sinceramente, meglio che chiedi a qualche MAT/BAT, loro sono più esperti
03:30:060 (1) - Avvicinalo un po', un jump del genere è troppo difficile xD

Insane

00:07:560 - Ormai sai a cosa mi riferisco xD
00:42:950 (4) - Spostarlo in x:432 y:344 per un jump più difficile?
01:13:653 (5,6,7,8,9) - Allora, per questa parte della song ho un'idea figa. Cancella queste 5 note. Ora metti due slider da 1/8 con tanti repeat. Il primo lo inizi in 01:13:653 e lo finisci in 01:14:063. Il secondo lo inizi in 01:14:122 e lo finisci in 01:14:532. Perfetto, ora cambia la velocità del secondo slider e mettila a 1.50x o a 2.00x. Quando hai fatto elimina le note (10) e (11). Così hai una breve pausa prima del kiai e da un bell'effetto. In questo modo dovrebbe venir fuori qualcosa di figo xD
01:24:903 (2) - Seleziona questo slider e fai CTRL + G per migliorare il flow
01:27:247 (3,4) - Scambiali di posizione sulla timeline, il 4 dovrebbe essere cliccato prima del 3, non so se hai capito D: E' per il flow
01:28:185 (1,1) - Sostituisci questa parte con uno stream da 8 note e poi due slider da 1/8 come hai fatto prima, metti 1.5 o 2 sul secondo slider, per capire meglio guarda lo screen. Le note le ho messe a cazzo, l'importante è il ritmo xD Poi mettile come vuoi
02:28:185 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Stessa cosa di prima, ormai avrai capito, però te lo dico lo stesso lol. Stream da 1/4 di otto note, i due slider da 1/8 di cui il secondo con 1.5 o 2 di velocità e poi elimina tutte le note dopo tranne quella a 02:30:060
02:44:591 (5) - I clap in questo slider uccidono, togline un po' :P
02:54:903 (2) - CTRL + G in questo slider
02:57:247 (3,4) - Esattamente come prima, il 3 e il 4 andrebbero scambiati di posizione xD
03:27:364 (10,11) - Non è molto semplice da fare ma prova a curvare un pochettino il 10 in modo da blankettarlo con l'11

Finito il modding. La mappa è figa e la DEVI far rankare. Appena ti fanno un po' di moddings richiamami che te la controllo di nuovo e ti dico cosa si può migliorare ancora :3
Topic Starter
Lehon

Ayu wrote:

[Easy]

General:
- I only modded a short part and couldn't be bothered modding the rest, because the map didn't interest me at all. Try to use more creativity and vary more with your patterns, don't keep everything so simple!

Placement:
00:07:560 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Little bit simple, maybe try to vary more?
00:15:060 (1) - Unsymmetrical
00:18:810 (1) - Unsymmetrical, also, you could try to make a blanket over the approach circle of (2)
00:20:685 (3) - Unsymmetrical

[Normal]

General:
- Use the information I gave with the first couple of mods for the rest of your map, since they are repeating mistakes.

Placement:
00:15:060 (1,2) - I wouldn't make any overlaps like that myself, because it is really uneccesary. The overlap is a couple of pixels, which makes it ugly and if you increase (or, decrease) the spacing, you'd get easily rid of it.
00:16:935 (4,5) -
00:21:622 (5) - Unsymmetrical
00:24:435 (4,5,1,2) - Ugly overlaps. Just go find all of them yourself, because it seems that there are way more.
Nazi: 00:43:185 (3) - Unsymmetrical
00:45:294 - Move your break to: 00:45:528
01:37:560 (1,2,3,4) - Shouldn't let the sliderborders overlap eachother like this.
01:45:060 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:45:060 (1,4) - I don't like these sliders, because I feel like the red anchor isn't used right. The angle of the corner feels way too tight.

[Hard]

General:
- Wait.. Wh-whaaaaat?! No Hard?! I recommend you to make one to keep a nice diffculty spread in your mapset.

[Insane]

General:
-

Placement:
00:07:560 (1,2) - Overlap (only one I'll mention here, find the others yourself).
00:35:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Feels really simple
01:13:185 (1,2) - incosistent spacing, just use the same spacing from the whole combo
Honestly I think your modding was quite useless, but I fixed something and I'll give you a kudosu because you used some of your time to mod this map :)
thank you anyway ~
Topic Starter
Lehon

RikiH_ wrote:

Modding \:D/

General

Penso che ti serva una hard, se vuoi posso farla io D':

Easy

00:07:560 - Qua la section verde è snappata male, sposta l'offset da 7550 a 7560
00:08:263 (2) - Qua secondo me se facessi lo slider curvo con un blanket sarebbe più carino
00:12:013 (2) - Stessa cosa di prima
00:24:435 (3) - Spostalo in x:184 y:72 per evitare di avere tutte le note allineate, così migliora anche il flow
00:39:435 (2) - Spostalo in x:144 y:64 così è perfettamente simmetrico
Se hai fixato quello che ti ho scritto qui dovresti creare un quadrato in diagonale con le 4 note seguenti, per aggiustare lo spacing, quindi ti dico le coordinate lol:
(3) - 184,68
(4) - 200,280
(5) - 312,264
(6) - 296,152
01:05:685 (2) - x:336 y:264 Così il pattern è perfettamente simmetrico. Per lo spacing sposta la nota seguente una griglia a destra ma non dovrebbe manco essere necessario D:
01:31:935 (1,2) - Dovresti eliminare queste due note e mettere una pausa, sono difficili da leggere per un player nabbo xD
01:33:810 (1) - Non è simmetrico, prendi la coda dello slider e muovila di un grid verso l'alto
02:25:372 (6,7) - Dai, qua ci sta benissimo un bel blanket, magari non fatto a cazzo come ho fatto io ma ci può stare lol

Normal

Prova ad abbassare di 1 l'AR. Non sono molto sicuro però D:
00:07:560 - Stesso guaio della Easy, snappa bene la section verde
01:11:310 (1,1) - Troppo difficile per una Normal, fondili in uno spinner unico
01:41:075 (5) - x:232 y:72 così eviti di allineare tutto e flowwa meglio
02:26:310 (1,1) - Stessa cosa di prima sugli spinner
02:30:060 (1) - x:256 y:80 Ti dico di spostarlo perchè verrebbe coperto dal 300 dello spinner
02:41:310 (1,2,3,4) - Fallo più figo. Sposta l'(1) due grid a destra, il (2) due grid in giù, il (3) due grid a sinistra e il (4) due grid verso l'alto
03:14:591 (4) - Dovresti toglierlo e sostituirlo con una nota, per una normal è un po' difficile leggere slider così corti, magari mettici pure un finish xD
03:15:528 (2,1) - Occhio, sono stackate male
03:26:310 (1) - Ouch, il repeat è coperto dallo slider precedente, non so manco se sia rankabile sinceramente, meglio che chiedi a qualche MAT/BAT, loro sono più esperti
03:30:060 (1) - Avvicinalo un po', un jump del genere è troppo difficile xD

Insane

00:07:560 - Ormai sai a cosa mi riferisco xD
00:42:950 (4) - Spostarlo in x:432 y:344 per un jump più difficile?
01:13:653 (5,6,7,8,9) - Allora, per questa parte della song ho un'idea figa. Cancella queste 5 note. Ora metti due slider da 1/8 con tanti repeat. Il primo lo inizi in 01:13:653 e lo finisci in 01:14:063. Il secondo lo inizi in 01:14:122 e lo finisci in 01:14:532. Perfetto, ora cambia la velocità del secondo slider e mettila a 1.50x o a 2.00x. Quando hai fatto elimina le note (10) e (11). Così hai una breve pausa prima del kiai e da un bell'effetto. In questo modo dovrebbe venir fuori qualcosa di figo xD
01:24:903 (2) - Seleziona questo slider e fai CTRL + G per migliorare il flow
01:27:247 (3,4) - Scambiali di posizione sulla timeline, il 4 dovrebbe essere cliccato prima del 3, non so se hai capito D: E' per il flow
01:28:185 (1,1) - Sostituisci questa parte con uno stream da 8 note e poi due slider da 1/8 come hai fatto prima, metti 1.5 o 2 sul secondo slider, per capire meglio guarda lo screen. Le note le ho messe a cazzo, l'importante è il ritmo xD Poi mettile come vuoi
02:28:185 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Stessa cosa di prima, ormai avrai capito, però te lo dico lo stesso lol. Stream da 1/4 di otto note, i due slider da 1/8 di cui il secondo con 1.5 o 2 di velocità e poi elimina tutte le note dopo tranne quella a 02:30:060
02:44:591 (5) - I clap in questo slider uccidono, togline un po' :P
02:54:903 (2) - CTRL + G in questo slider
02:57:247 (3,4) - Esattamente come prima, il 3 e il 4 andrebbero scambiati di posizione xD
03:27:364 (10,11) - Non è molto semplice da fare ma prova a curvare un pochettino il 10 in modo da blankettarlo con l'11

Finito il modding. La mappa è figa e la DEVI far rankare. Appena ti fanno un po' di moddings richiamami che te la controllo di nuovo e ti dico cosa si può migliorare ancora :3
Allora iniziamo ringraziandomi per la fatica che hai fatto e l'impegno che ci hai messo, dato che ti rompo sempre le scatole xD
La mod era completa e giustissima, molte cose non le avevo notate, altre me le hai fatte aggiungere migliorando nettamente. Quindi direi che ti meriti un altro kudosu, purtroppo se potessi dartene 1000 te ne darei xD
Per l'ultima cosa ok, quando riceverò altre mod ti ri-romperò le scatole lol
Grazie ancora ~
Ayu

Lehon wrote:

Honestly I think your modding was quite useless
This is the reason why some modders aren't nice.

Anyway, still thanks for the kudosu of course.
Nemis
[Insane]
00:15:763 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Così scorre molto di più http://puu.sh/20pPTN
00:19:981 (3,4,5) - Non lo trovo molto bello esteticamente (nemmeno da giocare)
00:21:388 (3,4,5) - Così è più giocabile (i due slider 1/4 che fan da doppia tripletta stanno parecchio male) http://puu.sh/20pRP
00:40:841 (7,8) - Spacing
01:11:310 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Mi inventerei un pattern più carino (per esempio http://puu.sh/20q1N)
01:15:528 (2) - CTRL + G
01:17:169 (2) - CTRL + G
01:17:638 (3) - CTRL + G
01:18:106 (4) - CTRL + G
01:18:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Davvero poco scorrevole
01:24:903 (2) - CTRL + G e fixa 01:25:372 (3,4,5,6,7) -
01:26:310 (1,2,3,4) - In questo ordine (1, 4, 3, 2) sono molto più scorrevoli
01:30:763 (2) - Nota o slider fino a 01:31:231 (3) -
01:31:231 (3) - Se prima hai messo una nota metti un'altra nota, se hai messo uno slider fallo finire quì
01:32:638 (4) - Nota
01:33:106 (6) - Nota anche se dopo c'è una doppietta, segue comunque la voce (esce quindi una tripletta 01:33:106 (6,1,2) - )
01:43:185 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Lo trovo poco giocabile (soprattutto per la poca scorrevolità, un jump quì ci starebbe pure)
01:46:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Poco giocabile, non trovo una logica in questi elementi in questa successione
01:49:278 (3) - Toglilo e metti un beat
01:49:864 (7) - Toglilo
01:58:653 (3,4) - Prova a sostituire questi beat con la copia di 01:58:185 (1,2) - ribaltati a 180°
01:59:591 (4,5,6) - Stessa cosa ma copiando e ribaltando 01:59:122 (1,2,3) -

Per l'altra metà le cose sono le stesse dato che hai solo copincollato e ruotato xD

03:02:872 (5,6) - CTRL + G
03:05:216 (3,4) - Aumenta un poco lo spacing
03:11:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Poco giocabile, non trovo una logica in questi elementi in questa successione come altri pattern
03:23:497 (5) - se lo fai verticale è molto più bello da vedere

[Normal]
00:31:935 (4) - 1 quadrato verso l'alto nella griglia
00:33:810 (3) - Stessa cosa
00:43:185 (3) - Non segue molto il ritmo
01:01:935 (2) - CTRL + G
01:04:747 (2) - CTRL + G
01:38:497 (2) - 2 quadrati verso sinistra nella griglia
01:40:372 (4) - 2 quadrati verso destra nella griglia e poi fixa il pattern successivo
01:45:997 (2) - 1 quadrato verso destra nella griglia per fixare lo spacing
01:46:935 (3) - 1 quadrato verso sinistra nella griglia per fixare lo spacing
02:30:060 (1) - Non lascerei il break

Da 02:15:060 (1) - i problemi sono gli stessi dato che hai ruotato tutto anche quì

03:29:591 (4) - 1 quadrato verso il basso nella griglia

[Easy]
00:41:310 (3,4,5,6) - Fallo simmetrico (un trapezio tipo 01:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - o un quadrato)
01:33:810 (1) - CTRL + G
02:30:060 (1) - Non lascerei il break
03:28:185 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sistema questa stella

Stessa cosa delle altre diff, ma questa diff è fatta decisamente meglio delle altre
Topic Starter
Lehon

Nemis wrote:

[Insane]
00:15:763 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Così scorre molto di più http://puu.sh/20pPTN
00:19:981 (3,4,5) - Non lo trovo molto bello esteticamente (nemmeno da giocare)
00:21:388 (3,4,5) - Così è più giocabile (i due slider 1/4 che fan da doppia tripletta stanno parecchio male) http://puu.sh/20pRP
00:40:841 (7,8) - Spacing
01:11:310 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Mi inventerei un pattern più carino (per esempio http://puu.sh/20q1N)
01:15:528 (2) - CTRL + G
01:17:169 (2) - CTRL + G
01:17:638 (3) - CTRL + G
01:18:106 (4) - CTRL + G
01:18:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Davvero poco scorrevole
01:24:903 (2) - CTRL + G e fixa 01:25:372 (3,4,5,6,7) -
01:26:310 (1,2,3,4) - In questo ordine (1, 4, 3, 2) sono molto più scorrevoli
01:30:763 (2) - Nota o slider fino a 01:31:231 (3) -
01:31:231 (3) - Se prima hai messo una nota metti un'altra nota, se hai messo uno slider fallo finire quì
01:32:638 (4) - Nota
01:33:106 (6) - Nota anche se dopo c'è una doppietta, segue comunque la voce (esce quindi una tripletta 01:33:106 (6,1,2) - )
01:43:185 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Lo trovo poco giocabile (soprattutto per la poca scorrevolità, un jump quì ci starebbe pure)
01:46:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Poco giocabile, non trovo una logica in questi elementi in questa successione
01:49:278 (3) - Toglilo e metti un beat
01:49:864 (7) - Toglilo
01:58:653 (3,4) - Prova a sostituire questi beat con la copia di 01:58:185 (1,2) - ribaltati a 180°
01:59:591 (4,5,6) - Stessa cosa ma copiando e ribaltando 01:59:122 (1,2,3) -

Per l'altra metà le cose sono le stesse dato che hai solo copincollato e ruotato xD

03:02:872 (5,6) - CTRL + G
03:05:216 (3,4) - Aumenta un poco lo spacing
03:11:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Poco giocabile, non trovo una logica in questi elementi in questa successione come altri pattern
03:23:497 (5) - se lo fai verticale è molto più bello da vedere

[Normal]
00:31:935 (4) - 1 quadrato verso l'alto nella griglia
00:33:810 (3) - Stessa cosa
00:43:185 (3) - Non segue molto il ritmo
01:01:935 (2) - CTRL + G
01:04:747 (2) - CTRL + G
01:38:497 (2) - 2 quadrati verso sinistra nella griglia
01:40:372 (4) - 2 quadrati verso destra nella griglia e poi fixa il pattern successivo
01:45:997 (2) - 1 quadrato verso destra nella griglia per fixare lo spacing
01:46:935 (3) - 1 quadrato verso sinistra nella griglia per fixare lo spacing
02:30:060 (1) - Non lascerei il break

Da 02:15:060 (1) - i problemi sono gli stessi dato che hai ruotato tutto anche quì

03:29:591 (4) - 1 quadrato verso il basso nella griglia

[Easy]
00:41:310 (3,4,5,6) - Fallo simmetrico (un trapezio tipo 01:56:310 (1,2,3,4) - o un quadrato)
01:33:810 (1) - CTRL + G
02:30:060 (1) - Non lascerei il break
03:28:185 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sistema questa stella

Stessa cosa delle altre diff, ma questa diff è fatta decisamente meglio delle altre
Per ora ho fixato le cose più veloci, in questi giorni con calma modifico tutti i pattern non giocabili ecc xD
Grazie comunque ~
jyu
M4M~ ^^ I'm sorry if it's a bit late, since i have school and chemistry test tomorrow D: (btw, nice song~)


Easy

00:37:560 (5) - add new combo, i think it fits
01:33:341 (2) - ^
02:46:935 (1) - remove nc
02:49:278 (6) - add nc
02:50:685 (1) - remove nc
02:56:778 (5) - add nc
03:08:028 (2,3) - i think these two circles are too close with the HP bar. Consider changing the position
i know nothing about storyboard, but i found it quite nice when the flashing end in here 03:00:060 - (because it's break time) and then it starts again at 03:07:560 - imo, though


Normal

00:10:606 (3) - add nc, maybe
03:26:778 (5,6) - these circles also too close with the HP bar. Consider changing the position, or not, it's up to you
ee for the storyboard suggestion, it's the same with the easy diff, although you're free to object ^^


Insane

according to the song, the new combo should start here 03:20:685 (2) - but you've already organized the map beautifully and it's too good to be changed ;w;
gaaahh i found nothing wrong with insane diff. i'm still not good enough with modding insane diff


Ayu wrote:

Wait.. Wh-whaaaaat?! No Hard?! I recommend you to make one to keep a nice diffculty spread in your mapset
I agree with Ayu. You can ask another people to make guest difficulty for your map ^^

And this map is really great, so kudosu star for you~!
Good luck~
Momochikun
Sorry for the delay.. M4m time ! :D

General
You must have hard.. or it'll be unrankable.

Easy
00:07:560 (1) - Fin here
00:11:310 (1) - Fin
00:15:060 (1) - Fin at the start of the slider, and look. those sliders are not symmetrical
00:23:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - Lost rhtym from before, maybe it's better if u remove reverse from this 00:20:685 (3) and add clap note or 1/1 slider at 00:22:091
01:28:185 (1) - This part doesn't fit the vocal at all,
01:33:341 (2) - Why no NC ?
01:40:841 - Miss rhtym, there are claps from the song, maybe u can use it for a 1/1 sliders -_-
01:48:810 (1) - ^


Normal
I recommend u to use consistency snap for this diff.
00:07:560 (1) - Fin
00:11:310 (4) - Fin
00:41:310 (1,2) - Fail slider, u have to end it at white ticks so u can follow the rhtym
01:45:060 (1) - ^ better for me, i don't really like the form


Insane
Don't over-use stream if there is no-needed stream :o
00:18:810 (1) - Miss rhtym slider
00:34:513 (4) - NC here, reverse from before
00:37:794 (1,2) - Reverse NC
01:14:591 (7) - This note is hard to hit in HD mode ._.

Well.. good luck~
Topic Starter
Lehon
Sorry for the huge delay but my computer was broken, now I'll fix all, promise :D
Topic Starter
Lehon

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

M4M~ ^^ I'm sorry if it's a bit late, since i have school and chemistry test tomorrow D: (btw, nice song~)


Easy

00:37:560 (5) - add new combo, i think it fits
01:33:341 (2) - ^
02:46:935 (1) - remove nc
02:49:278 (6) - add nc
02:50:685 (1) - remove nc
02:56:778 (5) - add nc
03:08:028 (2,3) - i think these two circles are too close with the HP bar. Consider changing the position
i know nothing about storyboard, but i found it quite nice when the flashing end in here 03:00:060 - (because it's break time) and then it starts again at 03:07:560 - imo, though


Normal

00:10:606 (3) - add nc, maybe
03:26:778 (5,6) - these circles also too close with the HP bar. Consider changing the position, or not, it's up to you
ee for the storyboard suggestion, it's the same with the easy diff, although you're free to object ^^


Insane

according to the song, the new combo should start here 03:20:685 (2) - but you've already organized the map beautifully and it's too good to be changed ;w;
gaaahh i found nothing wrong with insane diff. i'm still not good enough with modding insane diff


Ayu wrote:

Wait.. Wh-whaaaaat?! No Hard?! I recommend you to make one to keep a nice diffculty spread in your mapset
I agree with Ayu. You can ask another people to make guest difficulty for your map ^^

And this map is really great, so kudosu star for you~!
Good luck~
thank you! fixed ~ and thank you for the kudosu star! :)
I'm trying to do a hard since a lot of people think it's necessary xD
Topic Starter
Lehon

Momochikun wrote:

Sorry for the delay.. M4m time ! :D

General
You must have hard.. or it'll be unrankable.

Easy
00:07:560 (1) - Fin here
00:11:310 (1) - Fin
00:15:060 (1) - Fin at the start of the slider, and look. those sliders are not symmetrical
00:23:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - Lost rhtym from before, maybe it's better if u remove reverse from this 00:20:685 (3) and add clap note or 1/1 slider at 00:22:091
01:28:185 (1) - This part doesn't fit the vocal at all,
01:33:341 (2) - Why no NC ?
01:40:841 - Miss rhtym, there are claps from the song, maybe u can use it for a 1/1 sliders -_-
01:48:810 (1) - ^


Normal
I recommend u to use consistency snap for this diff.
00:07:560 (1) - Fin
00:11:310 (4) - Fin
00:41:310 (1,2) - Fail slider, u have to end it at white ticks so u can follow the rhtym
01:45:060 (1) - ^ better for me, i don't really like the form


Insane
Don't over-use stream if there is no-needed stream :o
00:18:810 (1) - Miss rhtym slider
00:34:513 (4) - NC here, reverse from before
00:37:794 (1,2) - Reverse NC
01:14:591 (7) - This note is hard to hit in HD mode ._.

Well.. good luck~
Thank you! fixed :)
Anyway I'm trying to do a hard xD
jyu
*bumps into my favourite map*

long time no see, beautiful map ;w;
Hard diff aren't done yet? I understand if you're busy. Maybe you can ask other people to make you a guest diff
Topic Starter
Lehon

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

*bumps into my favourite map*

long time no see, beautiful map ;w;
Hard diff aren't done yet? I understand if you're busy. Maybe you can ask other people to make you a guest diff
Aha thank you for the support :P but actually I forgot to do it. I'm so sorry, I'll try to repair in the next few days, promise. :o
jyu
don't neglect this please :'(
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