Very cool mapset
The preview point seems to start too early? It starts in the middle of a finishing word so you might want to check that out! 01:07:406 here maybe?
Try this offset: 5703. With the original offset I sensed that the notes in the end were a bit delayed from the beat and this feels more accurate.
Normal
01:32:165 would be nice to have the 3 here, but I'm not sure if that's hard to read for this skill level
01:57:495 end spinner here?
02:32:023 start spinner here instead
03:27:778 (3,4) coat these better
Mill's
00:44:193 (4,5) coat better
00:43:769 hmm, this section feels very off, how about slider #3 starting here 00:43:910 instead with a stack note here 00:43:769? it fits the music much better
01:00:608 NC
01:01:174 remove NC
01:48:721 very unsymmetrical, please fix!
02:06:835 this is supposed to end here right 02:07:684?
02:18:155 (1,2) the distance here seems a bit exaggerated imo, could tone it down a little!
03:59:901 (5,6) coat this overlap instead
Insane
00:18:161 (1,2,3,4) Why aren't these 1/2? I also find the overlaps a bit of a turnoff, but that's completely up to you!
00:36:981 (2,3,4) definately think these could be coated better, also avoiding the tiny overlap by combo 5
00:44:057 (4) Very nice pattern, but this annoyed me a little: how it is, and what I changed I just lifted the middle section by 1 grid lvl4
00:45:330 (1,2,3) the coating could use some refining
01:04:434 (1,2) coat better?
01:31:038 (2) Move 1x level 4 grid to the right
01:38:255 remove NC
01:38:963 NC
01:39:670 (9) not sure if poorly stacked or useful for hidden
02:01:038 (4,1) coat better pls
02:59:198 how about a 1/2 slider here instead of that silent combo 4? (same with the upcoming pattern like it)
That's all for me!
The preview point seems to start too early? It starts in the middle of a finishing word so you might want to check that out! 01:07:406 here maybe?
Try this offset: 5703. With the original offset I sensed that the notes in the end were a bit delayed from the beat and this feels more accurate.
Normal
01:32:165 would be nice to have the 3 here, but I'm not sure if that's hard to read for this skill level
01:57:495 end spinner here?
02:32:023 start spinner here instead
03:27:778 (3,4) coat these better
Mill's
00:44:193 (4,5) coat better
00:43:769 hmm, this section feels very off, how about slider #3 starting here 00:43:910 instead with a stack note here 00:43:769? it fits the music much better
01:00:608 NC
01:01:174 remove NC
01:48:721 very unsymmetrical, please fix!
02:06:835 this is supposed to end here right 02:07:684?
02:18:155 (1,2) the distance here seems a bit exaggerated imo, could tone it down a little!
03:59:901 (5,6) coat this overlap instead
Insane
00:18:161 (1,2,3,4) Why aren't these 1/2? I also find the overlaps a bit of a turnoff, but that's completely up to you!
00:36:981 (2,3,4) definately think these could be coated better, also avoiding the tiny overlap by combo 5
00:44:057 (4) Very nice pattern, but this annoyed me a little: how it is, and what I changed I just lifted the middle section by 1 grid lvl4
00:45:330 (1,2,3) the coating could use some refining
01:04:434 (1,2) coat better?
01:31:038 (2) Move 1x level 4 grid to the right
01:38:255 remove NC
01:38:963 NC
01:39:670 (9) not sure if poorly stacked or useful for hidden
02:01:038 (4,1) coat better pls
02:59:198 how about a 1/2 slider here instead of that silent combo 4? (same with the upcoming pattern like it)
That's all for me!