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Lindsey Stirling - Electric Daisy Violin

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My Name Is R
159 posts
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Topic Starter
My Name Is R
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 28 de septiembre de 2013 at 09:26:14 a.m.

Artist: Lindsey Stirling
Title: Electric Daisy Violin
Tags: Gero Classical Instrumental
BPM: 128
Filesize: 3786kb
Play Time: 01:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.85 stars, 57 notes)
  2. Gero's Normal (3.34 stars, 71 notes)
  3. Hard (4.84 stars, 162 notes)
Download: Lindsey Stirling - Electric Daisy Violin
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Last edited by My Name Is R , edited 49 times in total.
parceritha
4 posts
Joined October 2012
parceritha
me encantan estas canciones!!! ♥.♥
lo revise y pues:
1.-la imagen es puede considerar como.... unranked me parece... pero no es de la medida correcta... debe de ser de 1024 x 768 me parece, y no se ssi haya otra medida posible.
2.-note que es muy repetitivo.. copiaste lo mismo, pero solo lo cambiaste de posicion... recomiendo que lo hagas distinto para que sea mas divertido jugarlo.
3.-usar el distance snap ayuda, y te recomiendo usarlo.
4.-hay errores en la simetria de las notas, puede que las hayas colocado para marcar el ritmo, pero debes de acomodarlas de manera que no sean confusos.

perdon por especificar las partes, esque no se utilizar los codigos y esas cosas. X.X
y no soy muy buena modeando, asi que lo unico que espero es haberte ayudado...
cualquier cosa mandame un mp XD
My Name Is R
159 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
My Name Is R

parceritha wrote:

me encantan estas canciones!!! ♥.♥
lo revise y pues:
1.-la imagen es puede considerar como.... unranked me parece... pero no es de la medida correcta... debe de ser de 1024 x 768 me parece, y no se ssi haya otra medida posible.
2.-note que es muy repetitivo.. copiaste lo mismo, pero solo lo cambiaste de posicion... recomiendo que lo hagas distinto para que sea mas divertido jugarlo.
3.-usar el distance snap ayuda, y te recomiendo usarlo.
4.-hay errores en la simetria de las notas, puede que las hayas colocado para marcar el ritmo, pero debes de acomodarlas de manera que no sean confusos.

perdon por especificar las partes, esque no se utilizar los codigos y esas cosas. X.X
y no soy muy buena modeando, asi que lo unico que espero es haberte ayudado...
cualquier cosa mandame un mp XD

bueno... gracias por las observaciones, pensaba dejar morir este mapa.....
pero, lo continuare.... y la verdad si me gustariia ayuda X.X.... grax por todo
My Name Is R
159 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
My Name Is R
guest diffs are accepted XD
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
*-* Te hare una Hard si te parece ?
My Name Is R
159 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
My Name Is R

XinCrin wrote:

*-* Te hare una Hard si te parece ?
En serio!!!???
*-* ok gracias!!!! XD
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
GO GO ! sumaru :3 Esto va para ranked *-*
mancuso_JM_
osu! Alumni
4,615 posts
Joined October 2010
mancuso_JM_
Estaba aburrido, y vi este map en #modreqs. Y buee.. decidi ayudarte un poco :).

[General:]

• Offset: Ubicaste mal el offset, facilmente te das cuenta de esto ya que los claps deben ir ubicados en las lineas blancas (en el Timeline) 2 y 4 (contando como 1 la linea mas larga en el timeline). Para que te quede correctamente ubicado debes mover el offset a 4218ms. De todas maneras, no necesitas resnappear las notas.
• Los tags son inconsistentes en tus dificultades. En la dificultad de Gero Violin y Electric sobran ya que aparecen en el titulo de la cancion asi que elminalo. Plus, agrega en todas las dificultades Classical (en los tags obviamente), separa los tags solamente con espacion, NO con comas.
• Para completar el Skin de los HitObjects, necesitas agregar el reversearrow.png y el approachcircle.jpg. Debes agregarlos para que tu map sea rankeable
--> Con respecto a Skin, tambien debes usar un SliderBorder para que sea rankeable. Agrega el SliderBorder debajo de los Colores en el .osu notepad. Usa este codigo por favor:
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
• Ve a la seccion 'Storyboarding' y descactiva la opcion Letterbox During Breaks, es innecesaria esta opcion ya que no tienes ningun break en el map.
• Combo Colours: Veo que usaste diferentes colores de combo en las dificultades, lo cual no es coherente viendo que tienes el mismo bg en cada una de las dificultades (y ademas que existe el storyboard). Por eso, debes mantener el mismo color de combo en todas las dificultades

[Easy:]

• Settings:
--> Los settings en general estan bajos, yo aumentaria el HP Drain Rate y el Approach Rate en 1 Tick (HP, AR +1)

• Hay algunas cosas a remarcar en esta dificultad que deben mejorar para que el mapa sea acorde con la dificultad, actualmente tengo algunas sugerencias de cosas que no deberian aparecer en una Easy.

1) Los cambios de Spacing no son recomendados en una Easy. A esto me refiero que mantengas la misma distancia entre todos los objetos de esta dificultad. Ejemplo: 00:13:593 (5,6) - La distancia entre estas 2 Notas es 0.8x, mientras tanto en 00:15:468 (1,2,3,4,5) - La distancia entre los objetos es de 0.4x lo cual es totalmente innecesario. Usando el Distance Snap, la distancia de los objetos es acorde con la distancia de los objetos en el timeline, asi que es totalmente innecesario reducir el spacing manualmente, es mas, este tipo de cosas son complicadas para los Nuevos Jugadores.
Por ahora solo te menciono esos como ejemplo, pero tienes mas de esos en todo el map. Es mejor si arreglas todos y cada uno de ellos.

2) Intenta usar mayor cantidad de Slider y no tantas Notas. Con los Sliders puedes cubrir lugares que solo las Notas no lo pueden hacer y ademas le da un descanso extra a los Nuevos jugadores. Un pequeño ejemplo, el espacio que existe en el timeline entre 00:17:343 (5,6) es algo grande.. Me parece que puedes agregar un Slider acorde con la musica en este lugar, actualmente se siente bastante vacio. Vuelvo a repetir como en el punto anterior, tienes mas casos como estos, asi que es mejor si puedes agregar mas Sliders, cambiandolos por alguna Nota.

3) Duracion de Combos: Intenta que los combos no sean muy largos en esta dificultad, los cambios de combos le dan variacion al Score en esta clase de dificultades, por esto es mejor que uses combos cortos para que el score sea mayor. Te recomiendo usar combos entre 5-6 Notas COMO MAXIMO y un MINIMO DE 3 NOTAS en un mismo combo. En general los combos, se agregan cada 2 Downbeats (Lineas largas en el timeline), de todas maneras no veo muchos problemas en este ambito sin ser el ultimo combo del map que tiene 9 notas, pero aun asi esta bueno remarcar un poco esta idea.

• 00:40:312 (5,6) - Ahora con el Nuevo Skin de osu! esto es un poco mas facil de leer, pero de todas maneras deberias evitar usar notas apiladas (como en este caso) en las Easy.

- Basicamente fue un mod general, con cosas importantes en una Easy. Te sugiero que sigas estos puntos que te di para mejorar la dificultad en general, espero que te sirvan :)

[Gero's Normal:]

• Settings:
--> En esta diff. aumentaria en 1 Tick el HP Drain Rate y el Overall Difficulty (HP,OD +1)

• En esta dificultad, tienes 22 Notas fuera de lugar (Unsnapped), asegurate de resnapearlas a todas correctamente.

• 00:07:031 (4) - No me gusta mucho la transicion de (3,4,5), seria mejor y fluiria mejor si mueves (4) hacia x:256 y:12
• 00:15:468 (3) - En este caso no me gusta la transicion que existe entre (3,1), para una mejor fluidez intenta hacer algo mas o mneos asi en (3)
SPOILER
• 00:35:625 (2) - Un poco nazi, pero se ve mejor si haces este Slider mas curvo, se ve medio raro ahora xDD.
• 00:48:046 (3,4) - Viendo un poco los patrones que usaste en el map, no creo que sea necesario usar estos 2 Sliders en 1/2, me gustaria mas si sigues mejor el Violin correctamente. Te sugiero que elimines estos dos Sliders y en su lugar agregues un Slider que empiece en 00:48:046 y termine en 00:48:750
• 00:50:156 (2) - Para mejor fluidez, mueve esta Nota debajo de los Sliders, con esto me refiero a x:256 y:168

• Por Ultimo: Deberias agregar un Spinner al menos, para variar el Score en esta dificultad.

- Bien hecho Gero, esta diff. se ve correcta en general ;)

[Hard:]

• Settings:
--> Aumenta el HP Drain Rate en 1 Tick y el Approach Rate en 2 Ticks (HP+1, AR+2)

• Como hice en la Easy, algunos puntos que remarcare para que pueda mejorar el map en aspectos generales

1) No abuses el uso de los combos. Vi que en muchos casos usastes patrones agregando muchos combos, como por ejemplo 00:23:203 (1,1,1,1) - 00:41:718 (1,1,1,1,1) - entre otros casos similares. Intenta ver cual es la forma mas correcta de aplicar tus combos, pero esto de spammear combos esta tecnicamente mal.

2) No dejes espacios amplios (en el timeline). A la hora de jugar, esto se hace demasiado raro y no juega del todo bien viendo que es la dificultad mas dificil del mapset. Cuando hablo de esto hago referencia a partes como 00:28:242 - 00:28:710 donde no hay ningun objeto, realmente se hace raro a la hora de jugar el mapa.

• 00:45:468 (1,2,3,4) - Patrones como estos son muy dificiles de leer, uno no sabe a donde comienza el primer Slider, ni el siguiente, ni el siguiente. Intenta arreglar esto haciendo un patron como 00:55:546, donde los movimientos de los Sliders son constantes, otra buena opcion seria hacerlo como en 01:00:468 (1,2,3,4,5).

- Bueno eso seria lo principal, aunque necesitas mas trabajo en el posicionamiento de las Notas, algunas partes juegan raras en mi opinion, pero dejemos que los modders hagan su trabajo.

Bueno, eso es todo lo que tengo por ahora. Para entender un poco mas te recomiendo leer estas guias, son bastante utiles por cierto.
Tecnicas de Mapeo y Beatmapping
Espero que puedas aprender nuevas cosas con respecto al mapeo, consigas buenos modders y quien dice que algun dia en el futuro puedas rankear tu map :D. Cualquier duda que tengas sientete libre de preguntarme in-game
Buena Suerte con tu map, sumaru y espero que mi mod te sirva!! ;)
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

[Gero's Normal:]

• Settings:
--> En esta diff. aumentaria en 1 Tick el HP Drain Rate y el Overall Difficulty (HP,OD +1) Fixed

• En esta dificultad, tienes 22 Notas fuera de lugar (Unsnapped), asegurate de resnapearlas a todas correctamente. Fixed Creo X'D

• 00:07:031 (4) - No me gusta mucho la transicion de (3,4,5), seria mejor y fluiria mejor si mueves (4) hacia x:256 y:12 Fixed
• 00:15:468 (3) - En este caso no me gusta la transicion que existe entre (3,1), para una mejor fluidez intenta hacer algo mas o mneos asi en (3)
SPOILER
Fixed
• 00:35:625 (2) - Un poco nazi, pero se ve mejor si haces este Slider mas curvo, se ve medio raro ahora xDD. Fixed
• 00:48:046 (3,4) - Viendo un poco los patrones que usaste en el map, no creo que sea necesario usar estos 2 Sliders en 1/2, me gustaria mas si sigues mejor el Violin correctamente. Te sugiero que elimines estos dos Sliders y en su lugar agregues un Slider que empiece en 00:48:046 y termine en 00:48:750 Fixed
• 00:50:156 (2) - Para mejor fluidez, mueve esta Nota debajo de los Sliders, con esto me refiero a x:256 y:168 Fixed

• Por Ultimo: Deberias agregar un Spinner al menos, para variar el Score en esta dificultad. creo que esta bien asi, no encuentro donde poner un spin

- Bien hecho Gero, esta diff. se ve correcta en general ;)
Gracias mancu o3o

Mi Diff :3
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Lindsay Stirling-Electric Daisy Violin (promodj.com).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 26835
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Electric Daisy Violin
TitleUnicode:Electric Daisy Violin
Artist:Lindsey Stirling
ArtistUnicode:Lindsey Stirling
Creator:sumaru100
Version:Gero's Normal
Source:
Tags:Gero Classical
BeatmapID:221065
BeatmapSetID:71710

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.10000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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Sprite,Background,Centre,"amarillo.png",320,240
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Sprite,Background,Centre,"rojo.png",320,240
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Sprite,Background,Centre,"verde.png",320,240
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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34218,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
64218,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0


[Colours]
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Combo2 : 2,227,227
Combo3 : 23,206,115
Combo4 : 251,51,51
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

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My Name Is R
159 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
My Name Is R
ACTUALIZADO
AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
AnreFM
Hello, i'll try to mod this map :)
This is just a suggestion though, feel free to object :D

  • General
  1. Add also instrumental to tag, cause it is only the violin lol
  2. I think you need to use different SV (slider velocity) in every difficulty, i recommend 1.0 for easy, 1.25 for normal and 1.5 for hard
  3. Those SV differences should make you able to make longer slider and more nicer pattern on hard diff
  4. Nice skin, fit with your song lol
  • Easy
  1. It will be more nicer to make the end like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736932
  • GERO'S
  1. 00:11:718 (1,2,3) - different rhythm than the rest of the other, change this? I recommend this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736962
  • Hard
  1. 00:25:781 (1) - hmm not sure about this, big stream. maybe change it to sliders or more patternal circles?
  2. 00:31:640 (4,5) - I don't think about stacking this last two is good, maybe it's better to make another pattern?
  3. 00:16:171 (6) - lol didn't expect this to be 2x repeat slider, add another note?
Well i guess that's all, i hope it helped you :D
Sorry if it doesn't, and good luuckk :)
My Name Is R
159 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
My Name Is R

AnreFM wrote:

Hello, i'll try to mod this map :)
This is just a suggestion though, feel free to object :D

  • General
  1. Add also instrumental to tag, cause it is only the violin lol OK XD
  2. I think you need to use different SV (slider velocity) in every difficulty, i recommend 1.0 for easy, 1.25 for normal and 1.5 for hard I used different SV O.o
  3. Those SV differences should make you able to make longer slider and more nicer pattern on hard diff^
  4. Nice skin, fit with your song lol
Thanks :3

  • Easy
  1. It will be more nicer to make the end like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736932
O.o??

  • GERO'S
  1. 00:11:718 (1,2,3) - different rhythm than the rest of the other, change this? I recommend this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736962
  • Hard
  1. 00:25:781 (1) - hmm not sure about this, big stream. maybe change it to sliders or more patternal circles?Fixed
  2. 00:31:640 (4,5) - I don't think about stacking this last two is good, maybe it's better to make another pattern?Fixed
  3. 00:16:171 (6) - lol didn't expect this to be 2x repeat slider, add another note?
Fixed

Well i guess that's all, i hope it helped you :D
Sorry if it doesn't, and good luuckk :)
Thanks a lot *o* !!!!!!!!!! XD

Solo Aplique Cambios a Easy y Hard
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero

AnreFM wrote:

  • GERO'S
  1. 00:11:718 (1,2,3) - different rhythm than the rest of the other, change this? I recommend this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736962 Nope sorry!

Thanks for the mod :3
AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
AnreFM
helloooo
umm, hope this helps orz

  • EASY
  1. 00:39:843 (4) - NC here, divide the combos
  2. 00:09:843 (5) - You should start NC here instead of the later
  3. 00:49:218 (3) - NC here too
  4. 01:04:218 (1) - hmm i suggest not to stack this
  • GERO'S
  1. 00:29:530 (1) - Remove NC here, starts at 00:31:405 (3) - instead
  2. 00:54:843 (4) - NC here, divide the combos
  3. 00:56:718 (1) - same as above, remove NC here, starts at 00:57:186 (2) - instead
  4. 01:03:749 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736932 make it like this? this was gero's on last mod lol
  • HARD
  1. 00:11:483 - add a note here
  2. 00:16:171 (6) - i suggest to -2 repeat here
  3. 00:16:874 - and then add note here lol
  4. 00:20:390 (4) - +1 repeat on the slider
  5. 00:26:718 - add note here
  6. 00:39:609 (6) - NC
  7. 00:40:546 (1) - remove NC here, add here 00:39:843 (7) - instead
  8. 00:46:406 (1) - remove NC here
  9. 00:56:250 (1) - same as above, remove NC here, add here 00:57:187 (3) - instead
hope this help you :)
good luck!!!! love the song :D
My Name Is R
159 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
My Name Is R

AnreFM wrote:

helloooo
umm, hope this helps orz

  • EASY
  1. 00:39:843 (4) - NC here, divide the combos
  2. 00:09:843 (5) - You should start NC here instead of the later
  3. 00:49:218 (3) - NC here too
  4. 01:04:218 (1) - hmm i suggest not to stack this

  • HARD
  1. 00:11:483 - add a note here
  2. 00:16:171 (6) - i suggest to -2 repeat here
  3. 00:16:874 - and then add note here lol
  4. 00:20:390 (4) - +1 repeat on the slider I don´t like this... sorry x.x
  5. 00:26:718 - add note here
  6. 00:39:609 (6) - NC
  7. 00:40:546 (1) - remove NC here, add here 00:39:843 (7) - instead
  8. 00:46:406 (1) - remove NC here
  9. 00:56:250 (1) - same as above, remove NC here, add here 00:57:187 (3) - instead
hope this help you :)
good luck!!!! love the song :D
ALL FIXED ;)
LuPiiTa
371 posts
Joined June 2010
LuPiiTa
Hola, hola~ linda canción, me gustó mucho :)
Bueno la verdad yo veo este beatmap bastante bien, te daré solamente sugerencias... espero sirvan de algo D:

[Easy]
01:04:218 (1) Vi esta nota algo pegada a la anterior, y considerando que es la última pienso que se vería mejor más arriba (para que no se vea tan escondida)

[Hard]
00:28:593 (6) Siento que el Clap que le pusiste a esta nota está de más (porque antes, ya hay otros dos seguidos)
00:31:405 (2) Podrías agregar un Clap en la última nota del slider (en 00:31:874)
00:32:343 a 00:33:280 (1, 2, 3) Intenta agregar un Whistle solamente al inicio de cada uno de estos sliders, se escucharía mejor.
00:33:749 (4) Agrega un clap, pero justamente al inicio del slider.
(Disculpa por el mod de hitsounds @.@ )
00:34:218 (5) Nuevo Combo.

Y eso sería todo. ^^ Mucha suerte!! espero este beatmap esté Rankeado muy pronto. (;
My Name Is R
159 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
My Name Is R

LuPiiTa wrote:

Hola, hola~ linda canción, me gustó mucho :)
Bueno la verdad yo veo este beatmap bastante bien, te daré solamente sugerencias... espero sirvan de algo D:

[Easy]
01:04:218 (1) Vi esta nota algo pegada a la anterior, y considerando que es la última pienso que se vería mejor más arriba (para que no se vea tan escondida) Listo

[Hard]
00:28:593 (6) Siento que el Clap que le pusiste a esta nota está de más (porque antes, ya hay otros dos seguidos) Me gusta como suena, perdon, pero este no x.x
00:31:405 (2) Podrías agregar un Clap en la última nota del slider (en 00:31:874) Listo
00:32:343 a 00:33:280 (1, 2, 3) Intenta agregar un Whistle solamente al inicio de cada uno de estos sliders, se escucharía mejor. O.O OK
00:33:749 (4) Agrega un clap, pero justamente al inicio del slider. Listo
(Disculpa por el mod de hitsounds @.@ ) No te preocupes n.n
00:34:218 (5) Nuevo Combo. Listo

Y eso sería todo. ^^ Mucha suerte!! espero este beatmap esté Rankeado muy pronto. (;

*-* gracias *-*
AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
AnreFM
Glad to see you progressing :) The song is really good:D
Here, have a Star, keep going! :)

Actually, I've make a GD, It's only the notes and not done, If you like it, feel free to PM me and I'll continue it right away :D
Anyway, don't give up and keep going!

SPOILER
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DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Hola :v

Mod a peticion in-game.

[General]
Esto es mas como que un gusto personal, pero el approach circle se ve algo grueso, asi es el skin a proposito?

[Easy]
Todo esta bien hecho :3

[Gero's Normal]
00:44:061 (3,4) - Este blanket esta feo :v

[Hard]
Edit: Aumenta el OD por lo menos a 6, 5 es algo bajo considerando que usas 2 para Easy y 4 para Normal.
00:11:718 (1,2,3,4) - Este pattern es adorable <3
00:25:780 (2) - No estoy muy seguro, pero prueba haciendole reverse a este slider (Ctrl+G), el jump que tienes ahorita si queda bien, tal vez solo sea yo :p
00:39:609 (1) - Remueve el NC? No lo veo sentido a este circulo solito
00:52:500 (4) - Talvez mueve este para el otro lado del slider anterior? es algo confuso saber despues de todos los pequeños sliders con varias repeticiones

Bueno, mod pequeño pq este mapset es tan bueno <3
Toma una estrella, buena suerte o/ C:
My Name Is R
159 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
My Name Is R

AnreFM wrote:

Glad to see you progressing :) The song is really good:D
Here, have a Star, keep going! :)

Actually, I've make a GD, It's only the notes and not done, If you like it, feel free to PM me and I'll continue it right away :D
Anyway, don't give up and keep going!

SPOILER
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*-*thx*-*
My Name Is R
159 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
My Name Is R

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hola :v

Mod a peticion in-game.

[General]
Esto es mas como que un gusto personal, pero el approach circle se ve algo grueso, asi es el skin a proposito? Si.. asi es el skin u.u

[Easy]
Todo esta bien hecho :3 ~(*3*)~


[Hard]
Edit: Aumenta el OD por lo menos a 6, 5 es algo bajo considerando que usas 2 para Easy y 4 para Normal. No me habia dado cuenta O.O
00:11:718 (1,2,3,4) - Este pattern es adorable <3 :3
00:25:780 (2) - No estoy muy seguro, pero prueba haciendole reverse a este slider (Ctrl+G), el jump que tienes ahorita si queda bien, tal vez solo sea yo :p Siiiiii queda bonito ♥.♥
00:39:609 (1) - Remueve el NC? No lo veo sentido a este circulo solito Ok
00:52:500 (4) - Talvez mueve este para el otro lado del slider anterior? es algo confuso saber despues de todos los pequeños sliders con varias repeticiones Ok.. creo que si es muy confuso x.x

Bueno, mod pequeño pq este mapset es tan bueno <3
Toma una estrella, buena suerte o/ C:
GRACIAS POR EL MOD Y LA ESTRELLITA *-*
Easy y Hard ACTUALIZADAS n.n
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
AnreFM
  • GERO'S
  1. 00:29:530 (1) - Remove NC here, starts at 00:31:405 (3) - instead No changes o.o
  2. 00:54:843 (4) - NC here, divide the combos divide the combos ? what? I think it's okay
  3. 00:56:718 (1) - same as above, remove NC here, starts at 00:57:186 (2) - instead ^
  4. 01:03:749 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736932 make it like this? this was gero's on last mod lol nope i don't like :<
hope this help you :)
good luck!!!! love the song :D


Dake
[Gero's Normal]
00:44:061 (3,4) - Este blanket esta feo :v Fixed :<


Thanks for the mods :3


My Diff
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"azul.png",320,240
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  F,0,34218,36093,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"amarillo.png",320,240
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Sprite,Background,Centre,"rojo.png",320,240
 L,0,16
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Sprite,Background,Centre,"verde.png",320,240
 L,0,16
  F,0,35625,37500,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"color.png",320,240
 L,0,32
  F,0,4218,5156,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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34218,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
64218,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0


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Combo3 : 23,206,115
Combo4 : 251,51,51
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My Name Is R
159 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
My Name Is R
ACTUALIZADO!!!!!!!!
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
  1. The SB is overloaded a lot, especially in the kiai time. You should fix it somehow

Good Luck on there

no kd obviously
My Name Is R
159 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
My Name Is R

XinCrin wrote:

  1. The SB is overloaded a lot, especially in the kiai time. You should fix it somehow

Good Luck on there

no kd obviously
Really?? ;_;

i need help x.x
Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,408 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
The fact the mp3 got cut'd makes me sad.. this is an excellent music from Lindsey Stirling.

Anyways, good luck with your map, you have many things to do!
AruOtta
1,296 posts
Joined May 2012
AruOtta
Hi !

Here my mod :

[Easy]
00:30:468 maybe you can put the volume to 40%
00:32:343 so here volume = 50%
00:33:280 and here 60%
00:35:155 here a little finish hitsound

[Gero's Normal]
00:30:468 same volume in this part like in easy diff.

[Hard]
I think it's more like an Insane diff. , it's really hard for a Hard xD
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero

Kenterz9 wrote:

Hi !

[Gero's Normal]
00:30:468 same volume in this part like in easy diff. Sorry no changes i think is okay
My Name Is R
159 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
My Name Is R

Kenterz9 wrote:

Hi !

Here my mod :

[Easy]
00:30:468 maybe you can put the volume to 40% Ok
00:32:343 so here volume = 50%
00:33:280 and here 60%
00:35:155 here a little finish hitsound



[Hard]
I think it's more like an Insane diff. , it's really hard for a Hard xD
Ok, thanks :3
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
IRC MOD
2013-08-04 15:54 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/207878 Lindsey Stirling - Electric Daisy Violin [Easy]]
2013-08-04 15:54 sumaru100: ahorita?
2013-08-04 15:55 Gero: 00:18:280 (5) -  en mi opinion esto se ve un poco forzado que tal si intentas esto
2013-08-04 15:55 Gero: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908288
2013-08-04 15:55 Gero: si ahorita
2013-08-04 15:55 Gero: 00:21:562 (3,4) -  se me hace mejor si cambias estos circles por un slider
2013-08-04 15:56 Gero: 00:25:780 (4) -  agrega un finish aqui, imo suena muy bien
2013-08-04 15:56 Gero: el finish agregalo al final osea en este tiempo
2013-08-04 15:56 Gero: 00:26:718 - 
2013-08-04 15:56 Gero: 00:30:468 (5) -  este slider es confuso en una easy 
2013-08-04 15:56 Gero: reduce un reverse
2013-08-04 15:56 Gero: y agrega una nota aqui 00:31:874 - 
2013-08-04 15:56 Gero: con clap claro
2013-08-04 15:57 Gero: 00:35:624 -  agrega una nota aqui con clap
2013-08-04 15:57 Gero: 00:43:593 (3,4,1) -  se que estas haciendo un patron pero
2013-08-04 15:57 Gero: rompiste el distance snap creo que seria mejor que hagas ese blanket mejor
2013-08-04 15:58 Gero: no creo que importe mucho por romperlo un poco xD hay mapas que los rompen mas en dificultades menores
2013-08-04 15:58 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 15:59 Gero: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908294
2013-08-04 15:59 Gero: algo asi que se vea
2013-08-04 15:59 Gero: si quieres el codigo dime :P
2013-08-04 15:59 Gero: ah recuerda acomodar las siguentes notas con su distancia correspondiente
2013-08-04 15:59 sumaru100: okok
2013-08-04 16:00 sumaru100: procesando
2013-08-04 16:00 Gero: bien eso seria todo en easy 
2013-08-04 16:00 Gero: :P
2013-08-04 16:00 Gero: me gusto mucho
2013-08-04 16:00 sumaru100: espera espera
2013-08-04 16:00 sumaru100: tengo que comer
2013-08-04 16:00 sumaru100: plssss
2013-08-04 16:00 sumaru100: ;____;
2013-08-04 16:01 Gero: orz
2013-08-04 16:01 sumaru100: dejare esto abierto
2013-08-04 16:01 Gero: oki 
2013-08-04 16:01 Gero: xD
2013-08-04 16:01 sumaru100: grax
2013-08-04 16:01 sumaru100: XD
2013-08-04 16:01 sumaru100: bye
2013-08-04 16:01 Gero: ahorita me llamas para segur con la hard
2013-08-04 16:01 Gero: oki
2013-08-04 17:01 sumaru100: ya vine
2013-08-04 17:01 sumaru100: pero me quedo una duda
2013-08-04 17:01 Gero: bien sigamos con la hard
2013-08-04 17:01 sumaru100: en la easy
2013-08-04 17:01 Gero: aja?
2013-08-04 17:01 sumaru100: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908294
2013-08-04 17:02 sumaru100: como queda eso antes?
2013-08-04 17:02 Gero: osea?
2013-08-04 17:02 Gero: que solo lo arregles un poco
2013-08-04 17:02 sumaru100: me queda algo asi
2013-08-04 17:02 Gero: esta bien
2013-08-04 17:02 sumaru100: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908395
2013-08-04 17:02 Gero: :P
2013-08-04 17:02 Gero: ahber
2013-08-04 17:02 sumaru100: pegado con el slider anterior
2013-08-04 17:03 Gero: creo que si seria mejor re hacer ese patron
2013-08-04 17:03 sumaru100: ok...
2013-08-04 17:03 Gero: en vez de hacer el blanket
2013-08-04 17:03 Gero: porque si es cierto te molestara algun BATcon el distance snap
2013-08-04 17:04 Gero: cuando termines dime para seguir con la hard
2013-08-04 17:05 sumaru100: ok... recorri la nota anterior y cambie la forma del slider para que se pudiera acomodar como estaba
2013-08-04 17:05 sumaru100: x.x
2013-08-04 17:05 sumaru100: a ver
2013-08-04 17:05 sumaru100: jajaja
2013-08-04 17:05 Gero: ya?
2013-08-04 17:05 Gero: o3o
2013-08-04 17:05 sumaru100: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908400
2013-08-04 17:05 sumaru100: asi lo puse
2013-08-04 17:06 sumaru100: y ya no se ve mas acomodado lo demas
2013-08-04 17:06 Gero: pero quedo bien?
2013-08-04 17:06 sumaru100: pues se acomodo bien
2013-08-04 17:06 sumaru100: no se ve mal
2013-08-04 17:06 sumaru100: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908403
2013-08-04 17:06 Gero: oki
2013-08-04 17:06 Gero: :3
2013-08-04 17:08 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:08 sumaru100: si quieres ya puedo la hard
2013-08-04 17:08 Gero: oki
2013-08-04 17:08 Gero: dale
2013-08-04 17:08 Gero:  /np
2013-08-04 17:08 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/232770 Lindsey Stirling - Electric Daisy Violin [Hard]]
2013-08-04 17:08 Gero: 00:06:796 (2) -  Nazi* seria mejor que este slider sea un poco mas estetico
2013-08-04 17:08 Gero: esta figura se ve un poco forzada imo
2013-08-04 17:09 sumaru100: una curva seria mejor?
2013-08-04 17:09 Gero: si o si quieres solo arreglalo un poco
2013-08-04 17:09 Gero: si haces curva haslod e forma que tenga flow
2013-08-04 17:09 Gero: mira algo asi
2013-08-04 17:09 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:09 sumaru100: miro
2013-08-04 17:10 Gero: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908412
2013-08-04 17:12 sumaru100: aunque rompa distance snap con la anterior?
2013-08-04 17:13 sumaru100: olvidalo
2013-08-04 17:13 sumaru100: lo tenia al reves
2013-08-04 17:13 sumaru100: x.x
2013-08-04 17:13 Gero: ahi no lo estoy rompiendo
2013-08-04 17:13 Gero: xD
2013-08-04 17:13 sumaru100: esta bien
2013-08-04 17:13 Gero: espera un momento
2013-08-04 17:13 sumaru100: ok ntp
2013-08-04 17:13 Gero: es que un amigo
2013-08-04 17:13 Gero: hara test play
2013-08-04 17:14 sumaru100: *3*
2013-08-04 17:14 Gero: ACTION is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/265981 Owl City & Carly Rae Jepsen - Good Time [Hard]]
2013-08-04 17:14 Gero: mi nuevo mapa
2013-08-04 17:14 Gero: necesito mods u.u
2013-08-04 17:14 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:14 sumaru100: entonces seguimos despues?
2013-08-04 17:15 Gero: nope
2013-08-04 17:15 Gero: espera deja que termine
2013-08-04 17:15 Gero: de ver pls
2013-08-04 17:15 Gero: xD
2013-08-04 17:16 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:18 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/232770 Lindsey Stirling - Electric Daisy Violin [Hard]]
2013-08-04 17:18 Gero: oki siguamos
2013-08-04 17:18 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:19 Gero: 00:08:906 (2) -  este slider esta siendo cubierto por este
2013-08-04 17:19 Gero: 00:07:734 (4) - 
2013-08-04 17:19 Gero: muevelos un poco
2013-08-04 17:19 Gero: seria mejor
2013-08-04 17:20 Gero: 00:09:375 (4) -  nazi* mueve este slider a X:65 Y:265
2013-08-04 17:20 Gero: queda mejor apilada con 1
2013-08-04 17:20 Gero: 00:09:843 (3) -  nazi* mueve este a X:117 y:193
2013-08-04 17:20 Gero: MISMA RAZON XD
2013-08-04 17:21 Gero: 00:19:101 (6,7) -  apila bien estas notas
2013-08-04 17:21 Gero: con el slider anterior
2013-08-04 17:22 Gero: 00:21:093 -  agrega una nota en este tiempo
2013-08-04 17:22 Gero: 00:21:328 (1) -  apilandolo en este slider quedaria muy bien
2013-08-04 17:22 Gero: 00:22:968 -  lo mismo que aqui
2013-08-04 17:22 Gero: con el siguiente slider 1
2013-08-04 17:23 Gero: 00:30:936 -  igual^ pero agregando clap
2013-08-04 17:24 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:25 Gero: http://puu.sh/3TPl9.jpg
2013-08-04 17:25 Gero: esto dije despues pero me equivoque de ventana
2013-08-04 17:25 Gero: xD
2013-08-04 17:26 Gero: 00:49:218 (1) -  Super nazi haz mejor este slider es muy random
2013-08-04 17:26 Gero: xD
2013-08-04 17:28 Gero: 00:54:843 (7) - mueve este slider a X:358 Y:196
2013-08-04 17:28 Gero: fluye mejor
2013-08-04 17:28 Gero: 00:59:530 (5,7) -  stackea bien estas notas
2013-08-04 17:29 Gero: 01:01:875 (1,2,3,4,5) -  mmmm esto la primera vez que lo juge fue un poco confuso
2013-08-04 17:29 Gero: seria mejor colocar 
2013-08-04 17:29 Gero: la distanca que le corresponde
2013-08-04 17:30 sumaru100: espera
2013-08-04 17:30 sumaru100: este le pongo la coordenada
2013-08-04 17:31 sumaru100: y sale feo
2013-08-04 17:31 sumaru100: 00:54:843 (7) - 
2013-08-04 17:31 Gero: deberia de salir
2013-08-04 17:31 Gero: asi
2013-08-04 17:31 Gero: o.o
2013-08-04 17:31 Gero: mira
2013-08-04 17:31 Gero: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908434
2013-08-04 17:32 Gero: 00:56:250 (4) - otra cosa que se me paso porque este sider tiene diferente forma
2013-08-04 17:32 sumaru100: me sale asi
2013-08-04 17:32 Gero: que los anteriores
2013-08-04 17:32 Gero: mejor que sea recto
2013-08-04 17:32 Gero: como te sale?
2013-08-04 17:32 Gero: o:
2013-08-04 17:32 sumaru100: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908436
2013-08-04 17:33 Gero: orz
2013-08-04 17:33 Gero: bueno haslo como te enseñe en la imagen
2013-08-04 17:33 Gero: arriba ^
2013-08-04 17:33 Gero: talvez me equivoque de cordenada
2013-08-04 17:33 Gero: xD
2013-08-04 17:33 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:33 Gero: me avisas :P
2013-08-04 17:36 sumaru100: creo que ya
2013-08-04 17:36 Gero: oki
2013-08-04 17:36 Gero: eso seria todo
2013-08-04 17:36 Gero: el mapa esta muy bien
2013-08-04 17:36 Gero: <3
2013-08-04 17:37 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:37 Gero: bueno posteo 
2013-08-04 17:37 sumaru100: esto lo publicaras en el tema del mapa?
2013-08-04 17:37 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:37 sumaru100: XD
2013-08-04 17:37 Gero: see
2013-08-04 17:37 Gero: xD
2013-08-04 17:46 sumaru100: que una mierda ¬¬... se desacomodo una nota
2013-08-04 17:46 sumaru100: jajaja
2013-08-04 17:46 Gero: enseriO?
2013-08-04 17:46 Gero: yo sigo tratando de postear
2013-08-04 17:46 Gero: XD
2013-08-04 17:46 Gero: ando todo lag
2013-08-04 17:46 sumaru100: jajaja
2013-08-04 17:47 sumaru100: esque sin queres debi presionar
2013-08-04 17:47 sumaru100: ctrl y g
2013-08-04 17:47 sumaru100: o algo asi
2013-08-04 17:47 sumaru100: ya ando arreglando
My Name Is R
159 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
My Name Is R

Gero wrote:

IRC MOD
2013-08-04 15:54 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/207878 Lindsey Stirling - Electric Daisy Violin [Easy]]
2013-08-04 15:54 sumaru100: ahorita?
2013-08-04 15:55 Gero: 00:18:280 (5) -  en mi opinion esto se ve un poco forzado que tal si intentas esto
2013-08-04 15:55 Gero: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908288
2013-08-04 15:55 Gero: si ahorita
2013-08-04 15:55 Gero: 00:21:562 (3,4) -  se me hace mejor si cambias estos circles por un slider
2013-08-04 15:56 Gero: 00:25:780 (4) -  agrega un finish aqui, imo suena muy bien
2013-08-04 15:56 Gero: el finish agregalo al final osea en este tiempo
2013-08-04 15:56 Gero: 00:26:718 - 
2013-08-04 15:56 Gero: 00:30:468 (5) -  este slider es confuso en una easy 
2013-08-04 15:56 Gero: reduce un reverse
2013-08-04 15:56 Gero: y agrega una nota aqui 00:31:874 - 
2013-08-04 15:56 Gero: con clap claro
2013-08-04 15:57 Gero: 00:35:624 -  agrega una nota aqui con clap
2013-08-04 15:57 Gero: 00:43:593 (3,4,1) -  se que estas haciendo un patron pero
2013-08-04 15:57 Gero: rompiste el distance snap creo que seria mejor que hagas ese blanket mejor
2013-08-04 15:58 Gero: no creo que importe mucho por romperlo un poco xD hay mapas que los rompen mas en dificultades menores
2013-08-04 15:58 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 15:59 Gero: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908294
2013-08-04 15:59 Gero: algo asi que se vea
2013-08-04 15:59 Gero: si quieres el codigo dime :P
2013-08-04 15:59 Gero: ah recuerda acomodar las siguentes notas con su distancia correspondiente
2013-08-04 15:59 sumaru100: okok
2013-08-04 16:00 sumaru100: procesando
2013-08-04 16:00 Gero: bien eso seria todo en easy 
2013-08-04 16:00 Gero: :P
2013-08-04 16:00 Gero: me gusto mucho
2013-08-04 16:00 sumaru100: espera espera
2013-08-04 16:00 sumaru100: tengo que comer
2013-08-04 16:00 sumaru100: plssss
2013-08-04 16:00 sumaru100: ;____;
2013-08-04 16:01 Gero: orz
2013-08-04 16:01 sumaru100: dejare esto abierto
2013-08-04 16:01 Gero: oki 
2013-08-04 16:01 Gero: xD
2013-08-04 16:01 sumaru100: grax
2013-08-04 16:01 sumaru100: XD
2013-08-04 16:01 sumaru100: bye
2013-08-04 16:01 Gero: ahorita me llamas para segur con la hard
2013-08-04 16:01 Gero: oki
2013-08-04 17:01 sumaru100: ya vine
2013-08-04 17:01 sumaru100: pero me quedo una duda
2013-08-04 17:01 Gero: bien sigamos con la hard
2013-08-04 17:01 sumaru100: en la easy
2013-08-04 17:01 Gero: aja?
2013-08-04 17:01 sumaru100: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908294
2013-08-04 17:02 sumaru100: como queda eso antes?
2013-08-04 17:02 Gero: osea?
2013-08-04 17:02 Gero: que solo lo arregles un poco
2013-08-04 17:02 sumaru100: me queda algo asi
2013-08-04 17:02 Gero: esta bien
2013-08-04 17:02 sumaru100: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908395
2013-08-04 17:02 Gero: :P
2013-08-04 17:02 Gero: ahber
2013-08-04 17:02 sumaru100: pegado con el slider anterior
2013-08-04 17:03 Gero: creo que si seria mejor re hacer ese patron
2013-08-04 17:03 sumaru100: ok...
2013-08-04 17:03 Gero: en vez de hacer el blanket
2013-08-04 17:03 Gero: porque si es cierto te molestara algun BATcon el distance snap
2013-08-04 17:04 Gero: cuando termines dime para seguir con la hard
2013-08-04 17:05 sumaru100: ok... recorri la nota anterior y cambie la forma del slider para que se pudiera acomodar como estaba
2013-08-04 17:05 sumaru100: x.x
2013-08-04 17:05 sumaru100: a ver
2013-08-04 17:05 sumaru100: jajaja
2013-08-04 17:05 Gero: ya?
2013-08-04 17:05 Gero: o3o
2013-08-04 17:05 sumaru100: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908400
2013-08-04 17:05 sumaru100: asi lo puse
2013-08-04 17:06 sumaru100: y ya no se ve mas acomodado lo demas
2013-08-04 17:06 Gero: pero quedo bien?
2013-08-04 17:06 sumaru100: pues se acomodo bien
2013-08-04 17:06 sumaru100: no se ve mal
2013-08-04 17:06 sumaru100: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908403
2013-08-04 17:06 Gero: oki
2013-08-04 17:06 Gero: :3
2013-08-04 17:08 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:08 sumaru100: si quieres ya puedo la hard
2013-08-04 17:08 Gero: oki
2013-08-04 17:08 Gero: dale
2013-08-04 17:08 Gero:  /np
2013-08-04 17:08 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/232770 Lindsey Stirling - Electric Daisy Violin [Hard]]
2013-08-04 17:08 Gero: 00:06:796 (2) -  Nazi* seria mejor que este slider sea un poco mas estetico
2013-08-04 17:08 Gero: esta figura se ve un poco forzada imo
2013-08-04 17:09 sumaru100: una curva seria mejor?
2013-08-04 17:09 Gero: si o si quieres solo arreglalo un poco
2013-08-04 17:09 Gero: si haces curva haslod e forma que tenga flow
2013-08-04 17:09 Gero: mira algo asi
2013-08-04 17:09 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:09 sumaru100: miro
2013-08-04 17:10 Gero: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908412
2013-08-04 17:12 sumaru100: aunque rompa distance snap con la anterior?
2013-08-04 17:13 sumaru100: olvidalo
2013-08-04 17:13 sumaru100: lo tenia al reves
2013-08-04 17:13 sumaru100: x.x
2013-08-04 17:13 Gero: ahi no lo estoy rompiendo
2013-08-04 17:13 Gero: xD
2013-08-04 17:13 sumaru100: esta bien
2013-08-04 17:13 Gero: espera un momento
2013-08-04 17:13 sumaru100: ok ntp
2013-08-04 17:13 Gero: es que un amigo
2013-08-04 17:13 Gero: hara test play
2013-08-04 17:14 sumaru100: *3*
2013-08-04 17:14 Gero: ACTION is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/265981 Owl City & Carly Rae Jepsen - Good Time [Hard]]
2013-08-04 17:14 Gero: mi nuevo mapa
2013-08-04 17:14 Gero: necesito mods u.u
2013-08-04 17:14 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:14 sumaru100: entonces seguimos despues?
2013-08-04 17:15 Gero: nope
2013-08-04 17:15 Gero: espera deja que termine
2013-08-04 17:15 Gero: de ver pls
2013-08-04 17:15 Gero: xD
2013-08-04 17:16 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:18 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/232770 Lindsey Stirling - Electric Daisy Violin [Hard]]
2013-08-04 17:18 Gero: oki siguamos
2013-08-04 17:18 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:19 Gero: 00:08:906 (2) -  este slider esta siendo cubierto por este
2013-08-04 17:19 Gero: 00:07:734 (4) - 
2013-08-04 17:19 Gero: muevelos un poco
2013-08-04 17:19 Gero: seria mejor
2013-08-04 17:20 Gero: 00:09:375 (4) -  nazi* mueve este slider a X:65 Y:265
2013-08-04 17:20 Gero: queda mejor apilada con 1
2013-08-04 17:20 Gero: 00:09:843 (3) -  nazi* mueve este a X:117 y:193
2013-08-04 17:20 Gero: MISMA RAZON XD
2013-08-04 17:21 Gero: 00:19:101 (6,7) -  apila bien estas notas
2013-08-04 17:21 Gero: con el slider anterior
2013-08-04 17:22 Gero: 00:21:093 -  agrega una nota en este tiempo
2013-08-04 17:22 Gero: 00:21:328 (1) -  apilandolo en este slider quedaria muy bien
2013-08-04 17:22 Gero: 00:22:968 -  lo mismo que aqui
2013-08-04 17:22 Gero: con el siguiente slider 1
2013-08-04 17:23 Gero: 00:30:936 -  igual^ pero agregando clap
2013-08-04 17:24 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:25 Gero: http://puu.sh/3TPl9.jpg
2013-08-04 17:25 Gero: esto dije despues pero me equivoque de ventana
2013-08-04 17:25 Gero: xD
2013-08-04 17:26 Gero: 00:49:218 (1) -  Super nazi haz mejor este slider es muy random
2013-08-04 17:26 Gero: xD
2013-08-04 17:28 Gero: 00:54:843 (7) - mueve este slider a X:358 Y:196
2013-08-04 17:28 Gero: fluye mejor
2013-08-04 17:28 Gero: 00:59:530 (5,7) -  stackea bien estas notas
2013-08-04 17:29 Gero: 01:01:875 (1,2,3,4,5) -  mmmm esto la primera vez que lo juge fue un poco confuso
2013-08-04 17:29 Gero: seria mejor colocar 
2013-08-04 17:29 Gero: la distanca que le corresponde
2013-08-04 17:30 sumaru100: espera
2013-08-04 17:30 sumaru100: este le pongo la coordenada
2013-08-04 17:31 sumaru100: y sale feo
2013-08-04 17:31 sumaru100: 00:54:843 (7) - 
2013-08-04 17:31 Gero: deberia de salir
2013-08-04 17:31 Gero: asi
2013-08-04 17:31 Gero: o.o
2013-08-04 17:31 Gero: mira
2013-08-04 17:31 Gero: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908434
2013-08-04 17:32 Gero: 00:56:250 (4) - otra cosa que se me paso porque este sider tiene diferente forma
2013-08-04 17:32 sumaru100: me sale asi
2013-08-04 17:32 Gero: que los anteriores
2013-08-04 17:32 Gero: mejor que sea recto
2013-08-04 17:32 Gero: como te sale?
2013-08-04 17:32 Gero: o:
2013-08-04 17:32 sumaru100: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908436
2013-08-04 17:33 Gero: orz
2013-08-04 17:33 Gero: bueno haslo como te enseñe en la imagen
2013-08-04 17:33 Gero: arriba ^
2013-08-04 17:33 Gero: talvez me equivoque de cordenada
2013-08-04 17:33 Gero: xD
2013-08-04 17:33 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:33 Gero: me avisas :P
2013-08-04 17:36 sumaru100: creo que ya
2013-08-04 17:36 Gero: oki
2013-08-04 17:36 Gero: eso seria todo
2013-08-04 17:36 Gero: el mapa esta muy bien
2013-08-04 17:36 Gero: <3
2013-08-04 17:37 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:37 Gero: bueno posteo 
2013-08-04 17:37 sumaru100: esto lo publicaras en el tema del mapa?
2013-08-04 17:37 sumaru100: ok
2013-08-04 17:37 sumaru100: XD
2013-08-04 17:37 Gero: see
2013-08-04 17:37 Gero: xD
2013-08-04 17:46 sumaru100: que una mierda ¬¬... se desacomodo una nota
2013-08-04 17:46 sumaru100: jajaja
2013-08-04 17:46 Gero: enseriO?
2013-08-04 17:46 Gero: yo sigo tratando de postear
2013-08-04 17:46 Gero: XD
2013-08-04 17:46 Gero: ando todo lag
2013-08-04 17:46 sumaru100: jajaja
2013-08-04 17:47 sumaru100: esque sin queres debi presionar
2013-08-04 17:47 sumaru100: ctrl y g
2013-08-04 17:47 sumaru100: o algo asi
2013-08-04 17:47 sumaru100: ya ando arreglando
THANKS :3 *3*
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
Hi sumaru n.n!

[General]

  1. The SB is overloaded a lot as I said . If you want you can use this code done by me , replace all code in the .osb of your map . It's the same SB just I fixed that SBload
    SPOILER
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
    Sprite,Background,Centre,"Lindsey-Stirling-With-Violin-Wide-768x1024.jpg",320,240
    S,0,0,,0.625
    F,0,0,3983,1,0
    F,0,4218,32343,1
    F,0,32343,33866,1,0
    F,0,34218,64218,1
    F,0,64218,69843,1,0
    //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
    //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
    //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
    Sprite,Background,Centre,"color.png",320,240
    L,0,32
    F,0,4218,5156,1,0
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"azul.png",320,240
    L,0,16
    F,0,34218,34686,1,0
    F,0,34686,36093,0
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"verde.png",320,240
    L,0,16
    F,0,34686,35154,1,0
    F,0,35154,36561,0
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"amarillo.png",320,240
    L,0,16
    F,0,35155,35623,1,0
    F,0,35623,37030,0
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"rojo.png",320,240
    L,0,16
    F,0,35624,36092,1,0
    F,0,36092,37499,0
    //Storyboard Sound Samples
    Also , delete the SB from the .osu of all diffs and the black.png if you use my code
  2. Also , you should put a green sliderborder in the .osu of all diffs, since you are using a green custom hitcircle , it will be better imo
  • [Easy]

    Try using some Whistle in the diff, since it will emphasize the violin
  1. 00:18:280 (5) This slider looks so weird, since you used a lot of circular sliders , and this is straight. You should do it as a move slider, it will flows better imo
  2. 00:31:874 (6) Move this circle to x:268 y:140 for a better flow
  3. 00:43:593 (3,4,1) Why you increased the spacing in these notes? . This is unranked, you must maintain the same spacing in all the difficulty, since is a easy diff. Fix it please
  4. 01:04:218 (1) Move it to x:280 y:44
You need more work on the positioning of the Notes, some parts, plays weird in my opinion

  • [Gero's Normal]

    Try using some Whistle in the diff, since it will emphasize the violin
  1. 00:17:108 (x) Since you are following a lot 1/2 rhythm , you should put a circle here too for consistency
  2. 00:26:249 (4) Remove the Finish from the end of the slider , since sounds too strange in this soft place
  3. 00:54:843 (4,5) Spacing from these objects is too closed , since your consistent spacing is 0.90 y here the spacing it changed to 0.80 . Fix it please
  4. 00:31:405 (3) What about using a straight slider here ? . It will flows and looks better imo
    SPOILER

    Pretty nice diff ~
  • [Hard]

    Try using some Whistle in the diff, since it will emphasize the violin
  1. 00:08:906 (2) This slider flows totally bad imo , try using the same slider as 00:08:437 (1) / 00:09:375 (3) . It will be better
  2. 00:12:656 (3) CTRL + G in this slider please , since it's the diff more hardest , a jump could flows better
  3. 00:13:125 (4) Same as above
  4. 00:25:546 (1) This NC should be better in 00:25:780 (2) , since follow it better the music
  5. 00:28:358 (5,6) I would like you to remove the Clap of these objects, since they sound very strange with the music imo
  6. 00:33:750 (4) Use a Clap at the beginning of this slider , since follows totally better the music
  7. 00:34:452 (x) What about to put a note here ? Since that will be better imo . Also , you are forgetting that long violin sound . It's for consistency too
  8. 00:47:578 (3,4) This anitjump , it's not flowing very well imo . Try to unstack these note
  9. 01:03:749 (5) You are forgetting to put a Clap at the beginning of this slider , since it's for consistency :P
Well , Sincerely this map needs a lot of improvements but have potential
Good Luck :3!
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero

XinCrin wrote:

  • [Gero's Normal]

    Try using some Whistle in the diff, since it will emphasize the violin
  1. 00:17:108 (x) Since you are following a lot 1/2 rhythm , you should put a circle here too for consistencyFixed
  2. 00:26:249 (4) Remove the Finish from the end of the slider , since sounds too strange in this soft place mmmm no changes i like the finish here
  3. 00:54:843 (4,5) Spacing from these objects is too closed , since your consistent spacing is 0.90 y here the spacing it changed to 0.80 . Fix it please Fixed
  4. 00:31:405 (3) What about using a straight slider here ? . It will flows and looks better imo Fixed
    SPOILER

    Pretty nice diff ~
Well , Sincerely this map needs a lot of improvements but have potential
Good Luck :3!

My Updated~

G's Normal
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Lindsay Stirling-Electric Daisy Violin (promodj.com).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 26835
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Electric Daisy Violin
TitleUnicode:Electric Daisy Violin
Artist:Lindsey Stirling
ArtistUnicode:Lindsey Stirling
Creator:sumaru100
Version:Gero's Normal
Source:
Tags:Gero Classical Instrumental
BeatmapID:221065
BeatmapSetID:71710

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.10000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Lindsey-Stirling-With-Violin-Wide-768x1024.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"azul.png",320,240
L,0,17
F,0,34218,36093,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"amarillo.png",320,240
L,0,16
F,0,34687,36562,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"rojo.png",320,240
L,0,16
F,0,35156,37031,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"verde.png",320,240
L,0,16
F,0,35625,37500,1,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"color.png",320,240
L,0,32
F,0,4218,5156,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
4218,468.75,4,2,0,60,1,0
34218,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
64218,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0


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Combo3 : 23,206,115
Combo4 : 251,51,51
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54,197,32343,6,0,L|106:173,1,55.000000298023,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,169,32811,2,0,L|220:169,1,55.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,146,33280,2,0,L|314:146,1,55.000000298023,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,122,33749,2,0,L|413:122,1,55.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,160,34218,6,0,P|423:220|436:271,2,110.000000596046,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,67,35624,2,0,P|291:78|181:42,1,220.000001192092,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,32,36796,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,32,37030,2,0,P|55:82|39:142,1,110.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,192,37968,6,0,P|155:234|160:296,1,110.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,38905,1,2,0:0:0:0:
349,287,39374,2,0,P|355:233|390:191,1,110.000000596046,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,96,40311,2,0,B|309:113|258:83|258:83|206:111|149:92,1,220.000001192092,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,40,41718,6,0,P|52:92|66:149,1,110.000000596046,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,235,42655,2,0,P|115:288|99:340,2,110.000000596046,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,190,44061,2,0,L|296:136,1,110.000000596046,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,68,44999,2,0,B|408:119|376:188|376:188|394:277,1,220.000001192092,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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182,101,50624,2,0,P|140:71|84:68,1,110.000000596046,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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My Name Is R
159 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
My Name Is R

XinCrin wrote:

Hi sumaru n.n!

[General]

  1. The SB is overloaded a lot as I said . If you want you can use this code done by me , replace all code in the .osb of your map . It's the same SB just I fixed that SBload
    SPOILER
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
    Sprite,Background,Centre,"Lindsey-Stirling-With-Violin-Wide-768x1024.jpg",320,240
    S,0,0,,0.625
    F,0,0,3983,1,0
    F,0,4218,32343,1
    F,0,32343,33866,1,0
    F,0,34218,64218,1
    F,0,64218,69843,1,0
    //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
    //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
    //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
    Sprite,Background,Centre,"color.png",320,240
    L,0,32
    F,0,4218,5156,1,0
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"azul.png",320,240
    L,0,16
    F,0,34218,34686,1,0
    F,0,34686,36093,0
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"verde.png",320,240
    L,0,16
    F,0,34686,35154,1,0
    F,0,35154,36561,0
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"amarillo.png",320,240
    L,0,16
    F,0,35155,35623,1,0
    F,0,35623,37030,0
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"rojo.png",320,240
    L,0,16
    F,0,35624,36092,1,0
    F,0,36092,37499,0
    //Storyboard Sound Samples
    Also , delete the SB from the .osu of all diffs and the black.png if you use my code
  2. Also , you should put a green sliderborder in the .osu of all diffs, since you are using a green custom hitcircle , it will be better imo
  • [Easy]

    Try using some Whistle in the diff, since it will emphasize the violin
  1. 00:18:280 (5) This slider looks so weird, since you used a lot of circular sliders , and this is straight. You should do it as a move slider, it will flows better imo
  2. 00:31:874 (6) Move this circle to x:268 y:140 for a better flow
  3. 00:43:593 (3,4,1) Why you increased the spacing in these notes? . This is unranked, you must maintain the same spacing in all the difficulty, since is a easy diff. Fix it please
  4. 01:04:218 (1) Move it to x:280 y:44
You need more work on the positioning of the Notes, some parts, plays weird in my opinion


  • [Hard]

    Try using some Whistle in the diff, since it will emphasize the violin
  1. 00:08:906 (2) This slider flows totally bad imo , try using the same slider as 00:08:437 (1) / 00:09:375 (3) . It will be better
  2. 00:12:656 (3) CTRL + G in this slider please , since it's the diff more hardest , a jump could flows better
  3. 00:13:125 (4) Same as above
  4. 00:25:546 (1) This NC should be better in 00:25:780 (2) , since follow it better the music
  5. 00:28:358 (5,6) I would like you to remove the Clap of these objects, since they sound very strange with the music imo
  6. 00:33:750 (4) Use a Clap at the beginning of this slider , since follows totally better the music
  7. 00:34:452 (x) What about to put a note here ? Since that will be better imo . Also , you are forgetting that long violin sound . It's for consistency too
  8. 00:47:578 (3,4) This anitjump , it's not flowing very well imo . Try to unstack these note
  9. 01:03:749 (5) You are forgetting to put a Clap at the beginning of this slider , since it's for consistency :P
Well , Sincerely this map needs a lot of improvements but have potential
Good Luck :3!

Thank you Xin n.n
UPDATED
Tsukasalove
14 posts
Joined June 2012
Tsukasalove
Hola Sumaru100 ~ Aquí Tsukasalove haciendo su primer intento en Modear un mapa, así que no tengo nada de experiencia y puedo cometer muchos errores, pero esta es mi opinión personal, ok >.<

[Easy]

00:14:061 (3) Al final de este "slider" se ocupa un "clap".
00:15:936 (1) Al final de este "slider" se ocupa un "clap".
00:17:811 (4) Agrega a este "beat" un "clap".
00:21:561 (3) Este "slider" debe de ir acorde al ritmo, atrasarlo a 00:21:039 y de aquí en adelante varios sliders deben ser atrasados como en la siguiente lista:
00:22:968 (1) "Slider" atrasarlo a 00:22:499
00:23:905 (2) "Slider" atrasarlo a 00:23:436
00:24:843 (3) "Slider" atrasarlo a 00:24:374
00:25:780 (4) "Slider con Reverse" atrasarlo a 00:25:311
Serían todos los atrasos.
00:34:284 (x) Inicio del "Kiai Time", en mi opinión los colores muy brillantes y cambiantes pueden ser muy epilépticos para algunas personas sensibles. Poner :!: de advertencia de ataques epilépticos.
00:42:186 (1) Agrega a este "beat" un "clap".
00:44:061 (3) Agregar en este "Slider con Reverse" en el mismo "Reverse" un "clap".
00:51:561 (2) Al final de este "slider" se ocupa un "clap".
00:53:436 (2) Al principio de este "slider" se ocupa un "clap".
00:55:311 (4) Al final de este "slider" se ocupa un "clap.

Bueno, ese es mi intento "fallido" de modear, en este momento sólo lo hago en [Easy], si es que te gusta la manera en la que modeo, voy a continuar con las otras dos dificultades, tee hee~ :)
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