gideon5504 wrote:

My 9th mod

Normal:
~01:11:730 - NC
~Nothing more 0.0

Hard:
~00:27:841 - Put circle closer to end of slider.
~00:28:372 - ^
~00:31:441 - Too many circles.Hard to read.

Insane:
~00:18:374 - Place circle under the head of slider 5.
~00:43:508 - Hard to read the jumps.
~00:46:374 - NC to emphasis 1/1 beat note.
~01:15:841 - 1/2 beat unnecessary in build up section.
~01:36:108 - NC
~01:48:241 - Hard to read.Try something new.

gideon5504 wrote:

My 9th mod

Easy:
~As speechless as AiMod...... 0.o

Normal:
~01:11:730 - NC
~Nothing more 0.0

Hard:
~00:27:841 - Put circle closer to end of slider.
~00:28:372 - ^
~00:31:441 - Too many circles.Hard to read.

Insane:
~00:18:374 - Place circle under the head of slider 5.
~00:43:508 - Hard to read the jumps.
~00:46:374 - NC to emphasis 1/1 beat note.
~01:15:841 - 1/2 beat unnecessary in build up section.
~01:36:108 - NC
~01:48:241 - Hard to read.Try something new.

0180 (I thought only Val0180 maps have that name since he made it 0.0):
~00:11:308 - Can't read your jumps.
~00:12:774 - ^
~00:16:241 (1) - ^
~00:27:441 - ^
~00:30:641 - ^
~This diff is too hard to read >< (There are way more jump mistakes I didn't put down,but u noe wat I mean )
~00:15:708 (8) - NC
~00:27:841 - ^
~Your combos are too inconsistent,watch out for that.
~THERE ARE MANY JUMPS FROM THIS DIFF I COULDN'T READ T.T
Consider re-making this map
and take it easy on the jumps,srsly

The first few diffs were awesome,but watch out for jumps and sliders being too hard to read in 0180,that's all from me and good luck~

CDFA wrote:

Your avatar doesn't look very happy to be there.

Insane:
00:01:308 (1,1,2,1,2) - Like you could do so much more here rather than place these on the strong downbeats.
00:08:774 (3) - Lower the redticks down the slider. Right now it's too much to the top and looks silly.
00:31:708 (2) - Nazi stacking fixing and all.
01:05:041 (5) - Right now, these don't seem to be connected at all. Either make it look like one big curve or make them parallel to each other or something.

Thanks for making this insane like not retarded jumpy like omg I had a pretty bad day today like I went to the dentist and you know the dentist that be scary and like I was bumpin up on CtB but like seeing this was like "sweet'

Hard:
00:01:308 (1,2,3,4) - At least a LITTLE bit more :3. Also, (2) and (3) can be re-made to have more of a curve rather than a weird kinda curve kinda straight thing.
00:29:974 (4) - This should be more congruent to (3), like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835010 (Ignore (6), I did something silly with it, lol o//o)
00:41:841 (1) - Do something with this so it doesn't overlap with the previous sliders.
01:41:574 (1,2,3) - Make it something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835016

Normal:
00:08:774 (2) - Add finishes
00:38:108 (2) - Add clap on end of slider
01:10:374 (2) - Move this slider to the left of the previous sliderend. I know it seems weird but like it flows a lot better rather than having to go slightly right to go left again ouo.
01:23:174 (2) - Instead of this, take (1), copy-paste it, CTRL + G and CTRL + H it, and make it good :3

1. 00:01:308 (1) - Why is it a slider? Shouldn't it be just a note following the logic of the others sliders 00:01:308 (1,2,3,4).
2. 00:31:707 (1,2) - In order to avoid a lot of straight line in a row why not making a parallelogram with 00:32:774 (3,4). You just have to move 00:32:241 (2) to x=428 y=348 and ajust the rest.
3. 00:43:441 (5) - You have a lot of horizontal slider. Why not slope/inlcine it? (I don't know the right wird sorry)
4. 01:13:841 (1,1) - It would be more aesthetic if you could stach their end.

1. 01:30:908 (1) - Move it to x=380 y=240 if you want the symmetry with 01:28:774 (1). (Since 01:29:574 (2,4) are already symmetrical relative to
2. 01:29:841 (3))

1. 00:32:774 (7,2) - It's nazi but they overlap a little.
2. 00:33:708 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:41:308 (6,1) - I don't find this overlap really good imo. Maybe you could try this:
   
   
4. 00:47:041 (3,4,6) - Move 4 futher from 3 and try to avoid the overlaps.
5. 01:06:908 (6,7,1) - Same as 00:41:308.
6. 01:36:108 (4,5,6,7) - I think it doesn't look good imo. Maybe you could do a better pattern like 01:29:708 (4,5,6,7) or 01:40:774 (5,6,7,1).
   
   
7. 01:37:708 (2,3) - They touch. Move it one gid away from 2.
8. 01:38:241 (4,5,6,7) - They aren't exactly symmetrical. (You know you can stretch the DS in difficulty hard)
9. 01:47:974 (1,2,1,2) - Make them symmetrical?

1. 00:15:041 (6) - Move it one grid left for a perfect square with 00:14:641 (3,4,5,6).
2. 00:23:441 (5,7) - They overlap but they shouldn't. They should be like 00:23:308 (4,6).
3. 00:29:574 (5) - Move it to x=404 y=276 for a perfect rectangle with 00:29:174 (2,3,4,5).
4. 01:09:041 (5) - Bend it a little bit more in order to avoid the overlapping with 01:08:641 (4).
5. 01:10:774 (4) - Following 01:09:574 (1,2,3) - it should be at x=220 y=288.
6. 01:11:708 (1,2,3,4) - ^
7. 01:35:708 (3,5) - Nazier than anything before: It overlaps a little bit....

1. 00:40:641 (5) - NC following the same logic as 00:31:574 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5).
2. 01:01:441 (4) - One grid down for a perfect paralellogram.

rezoons wrote:

Hi , hi~ o3o/

Mod from my queue:

[Normal]

1. 01:30:908 (1) - Move it to x=380 y=240 if you want the symmetry with 01:28:774 (1). (Since 01:29:574 (2,4) are already symmetrical relative to
2. 01:29:841 (3))

[Hard]

1. 00:32:774 (7,2) - It's nazi but they overlap a little.
2. 00:33:708 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:41:308 (6,1) - I don't find this overlap really good imo. Maybe you could try this:
   
   
4. 00:47:041 (3,4,6) - Move 4 futher from 3 and try to avoid the overlaps.
5. 01:06:908 (6,7,1) - Same as 00:41:308.
6. 01:36:108 (4,5,6,7) - I think it doesn't look good imo. Maybe you could do a better pattern like 01:29:708 (4,5,6,7) or 01:40:774 (5,6,7,1).
   
   
7. 01:37:708 (2,3) - They touch. Move it one gid away from 2.
8. 01:38:241 (4,5,6,7) - They aren't exactly symmetrical. (You know you can stretch the DS in difficulty hard)
9. 01:47:974 (1,2,1,2) - Make them symmetrical?

[Insane]

1. 00:40:641 (5) - NC following the same logic as 00:31:574 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5).
2. 01:01:441 (4) - One grid down for a perfect paralellogram.

Very good mapset ^^ You earn a ~star~
Godd luck.

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Taiko mod requested by Quilt :3
and yuikonnu is moe ><

MOD

[ReySHeL's Muzu]

HP and OD 4?

00:11:574 (2) - delete?
00:15:841 (2) - ^
00:20:108 (2) - ^
00:24:374 (2) - ^
00:32:641 (2,1,2,1,1,1) - like this? http://puu.sh/3nae0.jpg
00:41:174 (3,1,2,1,1,1) - ^
01:21:841 (2) - move it to 01:21:974
01:29:841 (2) - delete?
01:47:441 (2) - k?

[ReySHeL's Oni]

00:29:374 (2) - delete?
00:32:774 (2) - k?
00:37:774 (2) - move this to 00:38:041
00:54:974 (2) - delete?
01:03:508 (2) - ^
01:11:308 (2,1) - d k? plays better
01:15:574 (2,1) - ^
01:25:174 (1) - delete?
01:25:579 (2) - K?

that's all from me :3
gogo rank~

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Taiko mod requested by Quilt :3
and yuikonnu is moe ><

[Ogre's Ura]

01:16:241 (2,1,1) - k d k? ✔
01:18:508 (3) - k? ✔
01:19:041 (2,3) - dd? ✔
01:20:641 (3) - k? ✔
01:22:774 (3) - ^ ✔

great diff ww[/list][/box]

that's all from me :3
gogo rank~

Callum Melville wrote:

very fun map!

Quilt wrote:

rankまだ？

Quilt wrote:

rankまだ？

Satellite wrote:

Quilt wrote:

rankまだ？

mekase wrote:

Nice map, get this ranked already!