1. Insane (5 stars, 337 notes)
2. Laurier's Hard (4.92 stars, 213 notes)

MrAwesomenism wrote:

Hi o3o

a little mod

00:05:071 (3,4) - Too far from each otherfixed!
00:27:571 (4) - ^

i don't know if this is called a mod :/

alacat wrote:

すこし、moddingです。お役に立てたらうれしいです

[General]
●Stylips → StylipS 最後は大文字だと思います。　StylipS

●BGの容量が少し大きいので、減らしましょう！→BG

●TV Sizeということで、可能であればVideoが欲しいです。

●Tagのanimeは不要です。また、openingであればTagに"opening"を追加してください。


[Insane]
●00:00:786 - 最初のパートは少し静かめなので、50%くらいの音量に。00:02:928 - このあたりから70%を使用するといいと思います。
●00:03:643 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加。00:05:071 (3,4) - ここや、00:06:321 (1) - ここの始点などfinishの音をfollowしていると思うので追加しましょう
●00:09:625 - ここにも音が欲しいです。間が抜けてるように思えました。
●00:13:732 (1) - finishを追加。
●00:15:428 - 一定の間隔でclapを追加しましょう。そうすることでリズムが取りやすくなります。

ここのパートの場合だと、(1),(4)の始点,(5)の終点,(7)のようなかんじで追加していってみてください。
●00:35:071 (7) - 始点にfinishを追加。New comboもここから開始の方がいいと思います。
●00:35:428 (1) - 折り返しにfinishを追加。ここも同じです。00:36:857 (6) - 後の同じ音にも追加してみてください
●00:45:071 (1) - もう少し下に配置してみてください。00:44:535 (3) - ここによって折り返しの部分が隠れてしまいます。

●00:49:357 - kiai timeの開始はここからのうほうがいいと思います。大きい音がここから始まっています。また、New comboもそれにあわせるとより良いです。
●00:53:464 (8) - 00:54:000 (2) - の終点にのせちゃいましょう。
●01:02:571 (7) - すこし流れが悪いです。この用に延長線上に移動してみてください。

●01:22:928 (1,2) - 前の２つとならべると綺麗に見えると思います。

●01:23:553 (1) - だんだん音が小さくなっているので、音量を徐々に下げて、最後は5%にしてみてはどうでしょうか？

以上です。日本語があまり上手ではないので、何かわからないところがありましたらチャットやPMを送ってください

ファイトですヽ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ

Laurier wrote:

http://puu.sh/1JurM
↑hit sound

SPOILER

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: TSU.BA.SA.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 47928
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:TSU·BA·SA (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:TSU·BA·SA (TV Size)
Artist:StylipS
ArtistUnicode:StylipS
Creator:kaCha
Version:Hard
Source:Saki: Achiga-hen - episode of side-A
Tags:tsubasa opening
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,0,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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8,136,82928,1,4,0:0:0
8,136,83107,1,4,0:0:0
256,192,83464,12,0,89357,0:0:0

一応完成ですよろしくお願いします