Natsu wrote:

Mod Info:

1. Unrankable or very questionable stuff
2. Highly suggestion
3. Coment or opinions about some
4. nazi stuff or normal suggestions

General:

1. You have alot of unsnaped objects in both diffs
2. check your tags are not the same

Hard:

1. Since the spread with 2 diffs make a little big jump between then maybe lower the od to 6 to lower the gap a little // Umm yeah
2. 00:11:052 (1,2,3) - you can improve this blanket a little // Improved
3. 00:12:668 (4,5,1) - make them a little curved to improve the flow and make a natural movement with previous slider like: // Fixed
   
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4. 00:17:514 (3) - this slider its not rankable since it manipulate the slider velocity for more info you can check this thread: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2614121
5. 00:18:437 following your stanzas pattern this should be NC // I want to follow the lyric here.
6. 00:25:821 (1,2,3) - stack them properly // Umm fixed
7. 00:29:514 add NC remove it from 00:29:283 to keep consistent with you are doing for example in 00:27:437 (4,5,1) - , 00:16:360 (8,9,1) - // Good point.
8. 00:31:129 just wondering if this NC its really necesary since its perfectly readable without it // Wanted to emphasize among the end of the part.
9. 00:45:668 (1,2) - fix this blanket // Fixed
10. 00:47:744 (5) - x: 364 y:187 look better stacket for me the current one look kinda bad thought // Fix
11. 00:53:514 (1,2) - this jump its to much for a hard diff imo since you can easily Ctrl G 00:54:206 (2) - you will make a jump pattern but will less distance also flow better due to the slider shape // Fix
12. 00:57:206 (1,2,3) - stack them properly // Think it's fine enough,,
13. 01:04:586 add a circle and start the spinner in 01:04:701 this will follow the music alot better imo // Umm,, Want it current.
14. 01:13:360 (5) - stack this with 01:14:744 properly // Not necessary.
15. 01:19:355 (1,2) - eh in the actuall way this play really unconfortable since the transition between then its really bad try somethink like this instead: // Umm fixed
    
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16. 01:22:586 this part feel really empty since you can do a nice and fun rhythm here the music provide you a nice triplet here 01:22:355 (1) - 01:22:470 (2) - also the vocal do a hold feeling there so you can do an 1/2 slider 01:22:586 (3) - here this rhythm will improve this section like this: // Sure, but I want to emphasize the "HEY" by a single note.
    
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17. 01:33:206 rotate this on in 15 clockwise selection centre you will make a nice feelling with previous and next slider // Umm can't get the point
18. 01:36:783 kinda curious why you map it but you ignore the one in 01:37:239 them are the same sound in the music thought // The sound there wasn't strong enough.
19. 01:49:816 (3) - same as 00:17:514 - this slider its not rankable :/
20. 01:51:206 (2,3) - will be nice if you avoid the overlap here // Umm,, not necessary imo orz
21. 01:54:201 (4) - maybe move this to x: 33 y:160 will feel better since the distance 01:53:514 (3,4,1) - will be the same its better for the gameplay thought // fix
22. 01:58:129 (1,2,3) - stack this properly // fix
23. 02:03:437 same as 00:31:129 //
24. 02:23:975 (6,1) - swap NC for consistency with your patterns // Want to emphasize the lyric 02:24:201 (1).
25. 02:25:360 remove NC
26. 02:25:821 and add new combo just for keeping consistent in all the sections
27. 02:30:206 (2,1) - kinda hard but maybe you can avoid the overlap? dont look good :& // It won't cause many problem imo
28. 02:51:667 (1,2) - this is symilar to 01:19:355 hope you can improve the transition here //
29. 02:59:514 (2,3) - this 1/4 jump its not suitable for a hard diff // k
30. 02:54:898 symilar to 01:22:586
31. 03:05:970 you should not ignore the music here since its a really important part of the song // Added a note.
32. 03:11:052 remove NC its not necesary this break your pattern and also this part is perfectly readable without it // k
33. 03:20:283 stack this properly with previous 2 sliders
34. 03:28:591 I understand this spinner since I feel how the music change but 03:24:898 (1) - 03:26:744 (1) - them should be a single spinner since the vocals its the same // Want to keep.
    
    mmm the diff its fine so much copy past imo :/ but play nice

Normal:

1. HP4 OD4 AR 5 fit this diff better also it help alot for the spread making the gap with hard better // Fixed
2. 00:11:970 (4,5,6) - If you ask me this 3 circles are really hard to play for a new player maybe add 1 1/1 slider or a 1/2 repeat since this is the easy diff of the mapset if you dont want to apply my suggestion atleast fix the distance to 1.0 here // I think this diff need at least that kind of difficulty factor due to balance orz
3. 00:14:739 double repeats are really confuse to play maybe add 1 repeat and a circle will be more confortable to play
4. 00:17:509 (2,3,4) - the flow its kinda broked here the transition between the objects its pretty bad look: // Fixed
   
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   Its not better some like:
   
5. 00:19:355 (4,5) - also avoid the stacks on the easy diff of the set they are not playables for new players //
6. 00:21:201 (2,3,4) - same as 00:11:970
7. 00:23:970 (1,2) - same stacked cant be played for newbies use a properly distance instead
8. 00:29:509 same as 00:14:739 and also dont hidden objects under sliders in normal/easy diff 00:31:355 (4) -
9. 00:46:124 (1,2) - fix the distance also aybe you can improve the flow too
10. 00:49:124 (5,6) - fix the distance little but noticeable
11. 00:49:816 this have to be NC following your every 2 stanzas pattern
12. 00:50:739 (2,3,4) - same as 00:11:970
13. 00:51:663 same withs this double repeats slider they dont play good and are really hard to read for new players
14. 00:56:739 (5,6,7) - yeah dont use stacks on the easy diff of the set use a properly spacing instead 00:57:201 (7) - also avoid the double repeat same reason as the others
15. 00:57:201 also this have to be NC
16. 00:59:047 (2,3) - Fix the distance here
17. 01:00:893 (1) - this sound kinda weird with the music maybe try this one sound alot better:
    
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18. 01:04:586 (4) - this have to be NC following your patterns
19. 01:04:586 (4,5) - avoid the stack same reason as others
20. 01:05:509 (6,7) - same as above
21. 01:06:432 yeah same here dont use 2 repeats sliders are hardly played but newbies
22. 01:08:278 (1,2) - Fix the distance
23. 01:10:124 (3,4) - same as above
24. 01:11:970 this need to be NC
25. 01:11:970 (5) - Avoid the double repeat slider
26. 01:13:816 (6) - same as above
27. 01:15:663 (1,2) - you use the distance alot like this i really preffer if you keep the distance consistent in all the mapset since its the easy diff here
28. 01:19:355 this need to be NC
29. 01:20:278 (6,7,8) - Same as 00:11:970
30. 01:22:586 (6,1) - avoid the stack newbies cant play them
31. 01:23:970 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:11:970
32. 01:28:586 same as others sliders with 2 repeats
33. 01:31:355 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:11:970
34. 01:35:509 (2,3,4) - avoid the stacks also that repeats from the slider o.o
35. 01:44:278 (4,5,6) - Same as 00:11:970
36. 01:47:047 (3) - same with the repeats slider i will stop point them you can found and fix them for yourself :3
37. 01:51:663 (4,5) - avoid the stack here
38. 01:56:278 (1,2) - ^
39. 02:01:817 (3,4) - ^
40. 02:22:124 this need NC
41. 02:29:509 ^
42. 02:36:894 ^
43. 02:44:278 ^
44. 02:51:663 ^
45. 02:54:894 (10,1) - Avoid the stack
    
    mmm this need to much work specialy with stacks, slider with alot of repeats, combos and some distance imo owo the rhythm its fine just try to work with these things // Oh well mostly were similar suggestions. Fixed distances, but not repeat sliders and stack notes. True it can be a tough thing for beginners, but I don't think beginners who know how osu works will have terrible trouble on these.

GL :3

regenz wrote:

Hi
form my old map queue. t/167917/start=0

(sorry for late , not in a mood of moding.)

General

567 objects in hard diff didn't snap. << ( you can fix this later Check my hitsound mod first ( i use non snap object timing for mod ) )

Hard

Map is fine but something is not good.

1.some whistle hitsound is good in this part . 00:45:668 (1) - but it just sudden stop.
i want you to keep on whistle hitsound until the part is end.
This is my suggest.
00:45:668 (1) - remove whistle at end point of slider, add whistle at start point of slider.
00:46:821 (3) - start point ( add whistle at start point.)
00:48:668 (2) - Start point
00:49:129 (3) - Middle point
00:49:821 (1) - S (start point )
00:50:283 (2) - E ( end point )
00:50:744 (3) - E
00:51:668 (1) - S
00:52:591 (3) - S
00:53:514 (1) - S
00:54:206 (2) - S
00:54:898 (3) - S
00:55:360 (1,2,3) - S of each slider
00:57:206 (1) - S
00:57:898 (2) - S
00:58:591 (3,1,2,3) - S of each slider
01:00:432 (4) - S
01:00:898 (1) - S
01:01:591 (2) - S
01:02:047 (3) - S
01:02:744 (1) - S
01:03:437 (2) - S,E
01:04:360 (4) -

02:17:975 (1) - << this part also same as above

// Improved Whistle.

01:08:283 (1) - This Part you can use soft whistle hit sound to enhance the music.
Put soft whistle at 1st (Big white line )and 3rd beat of each measure.
example
01:08:283 (1) - start point (1st beat of measure )
01:09:206 (3) - whistle here ( 3rd beat of measure )
01:10:129 (1) - start point (1st beat of measure )
01:11:052 (3) - whistle here ( 3rd beat of measure )
01:11:975 (1) - start point (1st beat of measure )
01:12:898 (3) - whistle here ( 3rd beat of measure )
...
keep do until 01:35:052 (3) -
I've suggest to use 75 percent volume for this part ^ ( the soft sound).

02:40:590 (1) - this part is same as above until 03:07:360 (3) -

// Well, I want to keep the volume. Also, added whistle at the red tick instead your suggestion.

the last part ( kiai time )
03:10:129 (1) -
this part is easy Use normal - whistle at white tick of Each tick in this part.


some note is ... ( I think it's don't feel good whitle playing. and i'm think it's not suit to the whole difficult diff.)

01:37:360 (5,6) -

how to fix ?
01:37:591 (6) - just ctrl+g this note. // Umm, I want to keep this distance. Sorry

Normal

Ai mod said The unicode artist. is different form hard diff. // Fixed

But I check it. (it same)

I donno what's wrong. May be ask Bat

I hope you can rank this b4 Xmas. GL