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Raito - Troublesome Visitor

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Melt
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Melt
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年3月20日 at 23:47:23

Artist: Raito
Title: Troublesome Visitor
Source: Melty Blood
Tags: tsukihime Tohno Akiha Vermilion Akiha Actress Again TYPE MOON
BPM: 165
Filesize: 4395kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.09 stars, 79 notes)
  2. Hard (4.8 stars, 227 notes)
  3. Insane (0 stars, 0 notes)
  4. Normal (3.39 stars, 140 notes)
Download: Raito - Troublesome Visitor
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Troublesome visitor

Easy - done
Normal - done
Hard - done
Insane - remapping

Redownload if you download before 2013/2/22
SPOILER
Last edited by Melt , edited 64 times in total.
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry
xx3
dete_lynn
21 posts
Joined October 2011
dete_lynn
Insane 无能为力……

Hard

00:16:833 - NC
00:18:106 - 少一个
00:29:742 - 少一个
01:12:106 - 这个挡得略不爽
其他挺喜欢还不错

Easy
Circle size改大
00:51:924 - 这个好像不该挡
00:57:956 - 改成一个短往返条
下面3处同
01:35:742 - 这个也是好像不让挡
01:41:560 - 同上
01:52:833 - 同上，如果要这么做就NC
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

dete_lynn wrote:

Insane 无能为力……

Hard

00:16:833 - NC
00:18:106 - 少一个
00:29:742 - 少一个 这个两个的话是故意的
01:12:106 - 这个挡得略不爽 修改了一下
其他挺喜欢还不错

Easy
Circle size改大 暂时就先这样吧
00:51:924 - 这个好像不该挡 fixed
00:57:956 - 改成一个短往返条
下面3处同 试了试改成滑条总觉得违和 先放着orz
01:35:742 - 这个也是好像不让挡 fixed
01:41:560 - 同上
01:52:833 - 同上，如果要这么做就NC 这个好像没什么问题
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry
log
19:50 Strawberry: mod in-game 可？
19:51 Melt: 诶 行
19:52 Melt: 先normal么o.o
19:52 Strawberry: normal
19:53 Strawberry: 超3星了啊
19:53 Strawberry: 做个easy或者改简单点
19:53 Strawberry: 个人建议做个easy
19:53 Melt: 嗯 3.0以上就算超么
19:53 Strawberry: 最低难度不能高于3.0
19:54 Melt: o.o那回头再弄个easy好了
19:55 Strawberry: 00:19:015 (2) -
19:55 Strawberry: 这个blanket没做好
19:55 Strawberry: http://puu.sh/1TTvl
19:56 Melt: 嗯 稍微改下
19:56 Strawberry: 00:37:924 (1) - 结尾和前面的滑条有点overlap..也调下。。
19:57 Strawberry: 而且我觉得这俩可以拉开点放啊
19:57 Strawberry: 离太近了
19:57 Strawberry: 感觉好违和
19:57 Strawberry: 00:46:651 (1,2) - 同上
19:57 Melt: 因为没想到怎么个摆法orz
19:58 Strawberry: 上下拉开点就行o.o
19:59 Melt: 好的
19:59 Strawberry: 00:52:469 (1) -
19:59 Strawberry: 加一个repeat
19:59 Strawberry: 然后后面的spinner后移然后缩短1/4
20:00 Strawberry: 01:00:469 (4) - 一开始加个whistle
20:00 Strawberry: 后面的同样。就不说了
20:00 Strawberry: 01:09:924 (1) - 这个blanket也修好点
20:01 Melt: 嗯
20:01 Strawberry: 01:24:651 (2) -
20:01 Strawberry: 这里
20:01 Strawberry: 我觉得应该是这里nc吧
20:01 Strawberry: 而不是前面
20:01 Strawberry: 你看这里01:27:378 (1) -
20:02 Strawberry: 应该是背景一个单独的音出来再nc我觉得
20:02 Melt: 两端节奏有点不一样
20:02 Strawberry: 因为节奏不一样所以nc理当有区别
20:02 Strawberry: 等下
20:02 Melt: 最开始我也是那里nc的 后面改了 再弄回来吧
20:03 Strawberry: o.o好像有点难读
20:03 Strawberry: 别改了
20:03 Strawberry: orz
20:03 Melt: 0 0
20:03 Strawberry: 01:56:469 - 这里有个finish的音
20:03 Strawberry: 所以spinner后移1/4
20:04 Strawberry: 然后加个circle在这里with finish
20:04 Strawberry: 这diff就这样了..
20:04 Melt: 嗯好 话说最后那里每个diff我都是这么处理的orz
20:05 Strawberry: 如果这里改了就都改下吧
20:05 Melt: 先留着 我再看看
20:05 Strawberry: 00:35:015 (1) - nc
20:06 Strawberry: 因为slider变速
20:06 Strawberry: 00:36:469 (2,3) - nc
20:06 Melt: 嗯 漏了
20:06 Strawberry: 00:40:833 (5) - 同normal，加一个repeat
20:06 Strawberry: 00:46:652 (2,3,4) - nc
20:06 Strawberry: 00:52:469 (5) - 同上..
20:07 Melt: fixed
20:07 Strawberry: 00:57:924 (1,2,3,4,1) - 全加whistle吵了
20:07 Strawberry: 去掉(2,4)上的
20:07 Strawberry: 好很多
20:07 Strawberry: 01:00:469 (5) - repeat处whistle?
20:07 Strawberry: 后面的同样处理
20:07 Strawberry: 比如01:06:288 (9) -
20:08 Strawberry: 01:09:560 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里同上
20:08 Strawberry: um..
20:09 Strawberry: 01:09:924 (5) - 这里如果决定不加nc的话。。想想怎么和00:58:288 (1) - 弄一致吧
20:09 Strawberry: 个人建议去掉00:58:288 (1) - 上的nc
20:09 Melt: 感觉repeat那里whistle不太喜欢o.o
20:09 Strawberry: k
20:09 Melt: 删掉58:288那个nc了
20:10 Strawberry: 01:15:742 (5,6,7,8,1) -
20:10 Strawberry: 不能换个梗么orz
20:10 Strawberry: 略2
20:10 Strawberry: 打起来也不舒服
20:10 Melt: 诶不对orz 我在看看 毕竟是kiai刚开始
20:10 Melt: 我拉开点吧
20:10 Strawberry: 哦 没注意
20:11 Strawberry: 哦，行，那nc不用改
20:11 Strawberry: 01:09:924 (5) - 这个也不用改
20:11 Melt: 嗯
20:11 Strawberry: 同样的 01:15:469 (2,4) - 去掉whistle
20:11 Melt: 嗯
20:12 Strawberry: 01:42:652 (3,4) - 压太低了而且有overlap啊…………
20:12 Strawberry: 01:38:652 (6) - 从这里开始后面整体抬高点？
20:12 Strawberry: 这个spacing可以灵活点
20:13 Strawberry: 一直到这里01:44:833 (1) -
20:13 Melt: 诶好 这里纠结了半天啊 没位置放orz
20:13 Strawberry: 改下slider形状调整spacing就好了
20:13 Melt: 行
20:13 Strawberry: 01:56:106 (8,9) - 这里你要anti一下的话
20:14 Strawberry: 直线排列根本读不懂
20:14 Strawberry: 错开 http://puu.sh/1TTJv
20:14 Melt: 错开斜着摆巴阿
20:15 Strawberry: insane
20:16 Strawberry: 01:19:197 (4,5,6) - overlap到
20:16 Strawberry: 三角形拉开点o.o
20:16 Strawberry: 01:23:742 (1,2,3,4) -
20:16 Strawberry: 改成2开始,1结束..
20:17 Melt: nc么._.
20:17 Strawberry: 位置
20:17 Strawberry: 四方跳的位置
20:17 Strawberry: 2那里开始
20:17 Strawberry: 1开始太2了
20:17 Melt: 嗯
20:17 Strawberry: flow好点
20:17 Strawberry: 没了
20:17 Melt: 这段准备remap一下o.o
20:18 Strawberry: 好(鬼畜的)图啊 坐等rank
20:18 Melt: 诶 麻烦了0 0
20:19 Strawberry: 哦不等等
20:19 Melt: 0 0
20:19 Strawberry: 我再check一遍啊
20:19 Melt: 嗯好的
20:20 Strawberry: hard
20:20 Strawberry: 00:46:106 (2) nc
20:21 Strawberry: 01:21:560 (2) nc
20:21 Strawberry: 因为是跟在spinner后面的
20:21 Strawberry: 好了.这回真没了 :p
indyinyou
887 posts
Joined June 2009
indyinyou
hi

[Normal]

00:59:378 : try hitclap SC 2
01:00:833 : use sildertick SC3
01:02:288 : ^
01:05:197 : hitclap SC 2
01:06:651 : sildertick SC3
01:08:106 : ^
01:11:015 : hitclap SC 2
01:12:469 : sildertick SC3
01:13:924 : ^
01:16:833 : hitclap SC 2
01:18:288 : sildertick SC3
01:24:651 : add fin volume 55 %
01:30:469 : ^
01:36:288 : ^
01:42:106 : ^

[Hard]

01:23:924 : add note ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/588859 under silder in 01:23:197

they're just suggestions

sry i can t mod insane diff it to hard for me
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

indyinyou wrote:

hi

[Normal]

00:59:378 : try hitclap SC 2
01:00:833 : use sildertick SC3
01:02:288 : ^
01:05:197 : hitclap SC 2
01:06:651 : sildertick SC3
01:08:106 : ^
01:11:015 : hitclap SC 2
01:12:469 : sildertick SC3
01:13:924 : ^
01:16:833 : hitclap SC 2
01:18:288 : sildertick SC3 fixed

01:24:651 : add fin volume 55 %
01:30:469 : ^
01:36:288 : ^
01:42:106 : ^ fin here might be a little noisy

[Hard]

01:23:924 : add note ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/588859 under silder in 01:23:197 no changes

they're just suggestions

sry i can t mod insane diff it to hard for me
thx for your help :3
Pink Agate
497 posts
Joined September 2011
Pink Agate
全图slider tick -1？目前看起来好多有点让人眼花

Easy

00:17:560 (1) - 这里只flish好点，因为你的黄线设在这里
01:21:560 (1) - finsh?
01:21:560 - 我觉得kiai应该从这里开始，，这里才是高潮啊不对吗？然后从这里开始后面很多silder的头可以加finish
如果你不喜欢这种很强烈的音效可以不加

Normal

00:11:742 (1) - 真心不推荐用这种回转2次的slider，即使是normal里，新手还是习惯一次折返
00:14:651 (1) - 尤其是这种带了遮挡的^
00:34:469 (6) - 换个note这里不推荐这样，尤其是后面还带了遮挡和减速的slider
00:35:015 (1) - 其实我感觉你这图不该放这种减速，完全可以拉长的各种形状的silder代替空缺拍，在normal放这么慢的减速真是虐人
00:40:288 (1) - 这里也是
00:51:924 (1) - 你真喜欢用减速的话这里就不要用带回转的Slider了直接用普通slidr好打一些
01:26:651 (4) - 这里你不改估计XAT们也会让你换的，去掉回转换普通的slider
01:35:378 (3) - 这里这样放担心unrank,因为这样接01:36:106 (1) - 太快了
01:38:288 (4) - 同样的，2次回转slider的替换普通的
01:38:288 (4) - ^

Hard

00:25:015 (5) - NC,容易让人误判
01:40:651 (4) - ctrl+g?
01:50:651 (1) - 我感觉crtl+g更顺
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
hi
change offset 10305 Would you like to see?

sorry, this map is too hard :o
Ranger
939 posts
Joined June 2011
Ranger
As from my modding queue

[Easy]
Don`t use change speed silders. it`s easy diff.so it`s hard to beginner :?
add finish same insane diff

00:52:469 (1) - spacing error

[Normal]
add finish same insane diff

01:01:924 (3) - i think this silder is too hard to beginner.how about change other?
01:07:560 (2) - ^
01:13:560 (2) - ^

[Hard]
add finish same insane diff

00:13:197 (4) - this silder maybe confuing a little.consider reduce 1 repeat
00:28:469 (6,7,8,9) - how about make this part like square?
01:19:197 (1) - how about this silder put on 01:19:015?


[Insane]
00:17:560 (1) - how about add finish here?because this part sounds this
00:23:379 (1) - ^ and many this part

well,that`s all to me
good luck with Rank
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

Pink Agate wrote:

全图slider tick -1？目前看起来好多有点让人眼花 感觉tick2还将就orz

Easy

00:17:560 (1) - 这里只flish好点，因为你的黄线设在这里 感觉这里finish不好
01:21:560 (1) - finsh?
01:21:560 - 我觉得kiai应该从这里开始，，这里才是高潮啊不对吗？然后从这里开始后面很多silder的头可以加finish
如果你不喜欢这种很强烈的音效可以不加 后面这一段因为音乐的原因都不太想加fin

Normal

00:11:742 (1) - 真心不推荐用这种回转2次的slider，即使是normal里，新手还是习惯一次折返
00:14:651 (1) - 尤其是这种带了遮挡的^
00:34:469 (6) - 换个note这里不推荐这样，尤其是后面还带了遮挡和减速的slider 因为2次repeat的slider都是在节奏固定位置 我再想想 先保留着
00:35:015 (1) - 其实我感觉你这图不该放这种减速，完全可以拉长的各种形状的silder代替空缺拍，在normal放这么慢的减速真是虐人 fixed
00:40:288 (1) - 这里也是 fixed 这一段整体都改了
00:51:924 (1) - 你真喜欢用减速的话这里就不要用带回转的Slider了直接用普通slidr好打一些
01:26:651 (4) - 这里你不改估计XAT们也会让你换的，去掉回转换普通的slider fixed 后面一段的折返条都删掉了
01:35:378 (3) - 这里这样放担心unrank,因为这样接01:36:106 (1) - 太快了 fixed
01:38:288 (4) - 同样的，2次回转slider的替换普通的 fixed
01:38:288 (4) - ^ fixed

Hard

00:25:015 (5) - NC,容易让人误判 这里nc感觉不太好
01:40:651 (4) - ctrl+g? 好
01:50:651 (1) - 我感觉crtl+g更顺 还行吧感觉


-Kirito wrote:

hi
change offset 10305 Would you like to see?

sorry, this map is too hard :o

thx for timing check something changed
thx for modding :3
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

[Ranger] wrote:

As from my modding queue

[Easy]
Don`t use change speed silders. it`s easy diff.so it`s hard to beginner :? fixed
add finish same insane diff fixed

00:52:469 (1) - spacing error fixed

[Normal]
add finish same insane diff fixed

01:01:924 (3) - i think this silder is too hard to beginner.how about change other?
01:07:560 (2) - ^
01:13:560 (2) - ^ Maybe, but i think it's ok for this music

[Hard]
add finish same insane diff fixed

00:13:197 (4) - this silder maybe confuing a little.consider reduce 1 repeat ok
00:28:469 (6,7,8,9) - how about make this part like square? i don't like square here
01:19:197 (1) - how about this silder put on 01:19:015? i make it start at 01:18:650


[Insane]
00:17:560 (1) - how about add finish here?because this part sounds this i already use clap here
00:23:379 (1) - ^ and many this part ^

well,that`s all to me
good luck with Rank
thanks :3
Faust
osu! Alumni
4,783 posts
Joined January 2009
Faust
Artist: Raito
Source: Melty Blood

'TYPE MOON' & 'Actress Again' can go into the tags.
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

Faust wrote:

Artist: Raito
Source: Melty Blood

'TYPE MOON' & 'Actress Again' can go into the tags.
fixed, thx for help :3
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
wantuole
[General]
月姬好评
note颜色 红色调亮点
01:21:560 长 kiai end 最好在长白
[easy]
00:36:469 (2) - 推荐ctrl+h 再ds回来 三个叠一起拥挤了
01:24:469 (1,2) - 这种最好还是免了 这个1只会拉下尾巴给人抓
[Normal]
00:29:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 挤挤都是水 换点摆设节奏什么的
00:34:469 (6) - 前后ds
00:37:924 (3) - 不推荐叠在1上 拉去出 不要在右下角了
01:07:560 (2) - 这kick白点真的很难看 safe
01:53:560 (1) - 叠的多了 这个拉出来
[Hard]
00:25:197 (6,7) - ctrl+g？会好点
前后梗差的大 后面觉醒了左右对称梗
就这些 :)
Hsiao-Chai
119 posts
Joined January 2012
Hsiao-Chai
SPOILER
required mod from HsiaoChai XD

[general]
add your previous name into tags which is NeGai
总觉的offset是1558、要是感觉不到明显差别的话就别管了，反正现在绿线能一起移了好方便


[easy]
01:24:469 (1,2) - 在easy不建议叠圈的原因是新手们其实不明白这种东西，所以还是摊开吧
01:30:288 (1,2) - ^
01:36:106 (1,2) - ^
01:41:924 (1,2) -
01:56:469 (1) - 换个无声/0kb的spinnerbouns，要么渐进的压低音量

[normal]
AR-1
00:33:560 (5) - 收在00:34:105也挺好
00:34:469 (6) - 注意DS
01:07:560 (2) - 为什么这个滑条这么难看，明明前面几个都好好的
实在不行就关掉GS改动一下嘛
01:13:560 (2) - ^
01:27:015 (5) - ->01:26:832
01:29:924 (4) - ->01:29:741
01:32:832 (5) - ->01:32:832
01:35:741 (4) - ->01:35:560
01:38:651 (5) - ^
01:41:560 (4) - ^

[hard]
柑橘缩手缩脚的，SV和SP都要加，可以用EDIT的SCALE BY直接改大、然后算好倍率+SV
00:18:288 (2) - 00:18:105
00:23:378 (1) - 注意DS
00:24:833 (4) - NC
00:25:197 (6,7) - 调了下都是这间距不太好，坚持用这个梗的话就NC掉，并NC 00:25:560 (8) -
00:29:923 (2) - 注意DS，要么放00:29:741 换成红线梗
00:31:378 (7) - ^
00:31:742 (8) - 这个好像ctrl+g了都不对啊，动一下位置吧
00:34:469 (1) - 后面的DS就不和你计较了但是这个前后不行
01:30:288 (1,2) - DS
01:32:832 (6) - ->01:32:650
01:35:379 (5) - ->01:35:560
01:38:652 (6) - ->01:38:469
01:38:832 +note
01:41:196 (5) - ->01:41:378

[insane]
00:22:288 (2,3) - 这两个为什么远很多啊
00:28:470 (1,2,3,4) - 衔接乐句、排列的不算太好
00:34:470 (2,3,4) - 往前放到蓝线估计能变神梗（醒醒好多年没看到这样的梗啦能见证它rank该多好（你快醒醒
00:38:651 (1,2,3,4,5) - 根据bpm估计这个间距还是大了
00:50:287 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:06:287 (1,2,3,4) - DS不好排列不好
01:12:106 (1,2,3,4) - DS不好
/me 还挺喜欢这个难度的XD
加油~
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

wantuole wrote:

[General]
月姬好评
note颜色 红色调亮点 之后要换bg 所以暂时没动
01:21:560 长 kiai end 最好在长白
[easy]
00:36:469 (2) - 推荐ctrl+h 再ds回来 三个叠一起拥挤了 感觉现在这个还行
01:24:469 (1,2) - 这种最好还是免了 这个1只会拉下尾巴给人抓 fixed
[Normal]
00:29:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 挤挤都是水 换点摆设节奏什么的 这都看出来了 换了个排法
00:34:469 (6) - 前后ds fixed
00:37:924 (3) - 不推荐叠在1上 拉去出 不要在右下角了 感觉还好
01:07:560 (2) - 这kick白点真的很难看 safe 修改了一些
01:53:560 (1) - 叠的多了 这个拉出来

Hsiao-Chai wrote:

required mod from HsiaoChai XD

[general]
add your previous name into tags which is NeGai 话说这个是必须的吗 不太想加
总觉的offset是1558、要是感觉不到明显差别的话就别管了，反正现在绿线能一起移了好方便 暂时没动


[easy]
01:24:469 (1,2) - 在easy不建议叠圈的原因是新手们其实不明白这种东西，所以还是摊开吧 fixed
01:30:288 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:36:106 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:41:924 (1,2) - fixed
01:56:469 (1) - 换个无声/0kb的spinnerbouns，要么渐进的压低音量 fixed

[normal]
AR-1 fixed
00:33:560 (5) - 收在00:34:105也挺好 没改
00:34:469 (6) - 注意DS fixed
01:07:560 (2) - 为什么这个滑条这么难看，明明前面几个都好好的 后面两个是故意这么弄的orz
实在不行就关掉GS改动一下嘛
01:13:560 (2) - ^
01:27:015 (5) - ->01:26:832
01:29:924 (4) - ->01:29:741
01:32:832 (5) - ->01:32:832
01:35:741 (4) - ->01:35:560
01:38:651 (5) - ^
01:41:560 (4) - ^
[Hard]

  • Hsiao-Chai wrote:

    柑橘缩手缩脚的，SV和SP都要加，可以用EDIT的SCALE BY直接改大、然后算好倍率+SV
    remapping
[Insane]
  • remapping
thanks for modding :3
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt
updated
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
[General]

All the diffs have unsnapped objects. Open AIMod (ctrl+shift+a) to see them.

[Easy]

00:46:651 (1) - NC (White)

[Hard]
01:46:288 (3,4) - only real issue I found here is this overlap, it makes it hard to see if its a slider or hitnote.

[Insane]
General
00:34:470 (2,3,4) - These play awkwardly, a long slider fits a lot better IMO, even a stream fits better, please consider it. :)
00:40:288 (1,2,3) - ^
00:46:106 (1,2,3) - ^
00:51:924 (1,2,3) - ^

Combo Colors
00:57:924 (1) - Make the starting combo Black (see SS)
00:58:288 (1) - Make the starting combo Red (see SS)

The reason for this is to make the jumps easier to see.

SPOILER
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

Kaneko wrote:

[General]

All the diffs have unsnapped objects. Open AIMod (ctrl+shift+a) to see them. fixed =P

[Easy]

00:46:651 (1) - NC (White) fixed

[Hard]
01:46:288 (3,4) - only real issue I found here is this overlap, it makes it hard to see if its a slider or hitnote. fixed

[Insane]
General
00:34:470 (2,3,4) - These play awkwardly, a long slider fits a lot better IMO, even a stream fits better, please consider it. :)
00:40:288 (1,2,3) - ^
00:46:106 (1,2,3) - ^
00:51:924 (1,2,3) - ^ changed into a slider

Combo Colors
00:57:924 (1) - Make the starting combo Black (see SS) fixed
00:58:288 (1) - Make the starting combo Red (see SS) fixed

The reason for this is to make the jumps easier to see.


SPOILER

thanks for modding :3
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib
[General]

感觉差不多了就快去找MAT吧233

[Easy]

00:20:468 (1) - (184, 72)
00:40:833 (1) - 这个尾巴没用clap, 而后面00:52:469 (1) - 的尾巴用了。在hard难度里又都没用clap，建议统一

[Normal]

00:14:286 (3,1) - 这个blanket没包好
01:07:559 (2) - 这个slider是从红线起的，所以在01:08:105处没有tick,也就没有clap音效，那根绿线也白加了。建议slider改从白线起，红线处加一个note。或者slider tick rate 用2

[Hard]

00:16:105 (3,4) - 这两个whistle被你加到滑条上了，应该只加滑条头
00:17:195 (7) - 间距略大orz
01:50:286 (9) - ^

[Insane]

Insane没啥好挑的随便写一点233
00:31:377 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这梗和前面的对应不上，观赏性也不好。跟音程关系也不符合，觉得(2,4,1,3)或(1,2,4,3)比较对或者直接就(1,2,3,4)地排比较好。
00:45:195 (1,1) - 这里或者把折返slider拉到蓝线，或者两个滑条不要stack比较好
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

Zweib wrote:

[General]

感觉差不多了就快去找MAT吧233 想找也找不到啊喂

[Easy]

00:20:468 (1) - (184, 72) 移动到另一个点去了
00:40:833 (1) - 这个尾巴没用clap, 而后面00:52:469 (1) - 的尾巴用了。在hard难度里又都没用clap，建议统一 fixed

[Normal]

00:14:286 (3,1) - 这个blanket没包好 fixed
01:07:559 (2) - 这个slider是从红线起的，所以在01:08:105处没有tick,也就没有clap音效，那根绿线也白加了。建议slider改从白线起，红线处加一个note。或者slider tick rate 用2 因为以前tick rate是2调成1以后没注意，加了个note

[Hard]

00:16:105 (3,4) - 这两个whistle被你加到滑条上了，应该只加滑条头 fixed
00:17:195 (7) - 间距略大orz
01:50:286 (9) - ^ 没减，跟我想要的间距差不多orz 把中间有两个相似的地方调整了一下

[Insane]

Insane没啥好挑的随便写一点233
00:31:377 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这梗和前面的对应不上，观赏性也不好。跟音程关系也不符合，觉得(2,4,1,3)或(1,2,4,3)比较对或者直接就(1,2,3,4)地排比较好。
00:45:195 (1,1) - 这里或者把折返slider拉到蓝线，或者两个滑条不要stack比较好
这两个先留着，感觉还行orz
thanks for modding
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
看了一下insane..這SB+map太酷了233

先射個星占位子>A<
K i A i
662 posts
Joined March 2011
K i A i
[normal]
00:46:104 (4) - add clap sound at middle point
00:51:923 (1) - ^

[insane]
00:34:468 (1) - make this slider's bending to offside?
01:27:377 (1) - mistake?

wow.. + 1 + 2(easy, hard)
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
Hi~ Mod via my modding queue :3

Nice map!
[Insane]
00:31:377 (1,2,3,4) - 全排一直線有點不好移動..3跟4稍微往上移點?
00:33:377 (8) - 跟6對稱?(x368/y40)
00:38:650 (1,2,3,4) - 這真是233...前面全單指已經夠難的了欸欸OAQ
00:40:832 (1,2) - 前面是1.0X這裡用0.5有點太慢><
00:50:286 (1,2,3,4) - 同前面 233333
00:52:469 (1,2) - 0.75x?
01:00:468 (1,2) - 跟前面的01:00:286 (3) - flow不順 (x376/y164?
01:03:377 (1,2) - 同flow..這樣如何><? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631496
01:04:286 (2) - 稍微有點角度可以提示後面的 放x276/y148?
01:06:650 (3,4) - ctrl+G
01:09:014 (3) - NC
01:12:468 (3,4) - Ctrl+G
01:19:195 (4) - NC?
01:38:468 (6) - 這個擋得很不好讀..

[Hard]
00:25:923 (8,9) - ctrl+g? 跳得有點大..
00:26:650 (2,3) - 換一下位置..我覺得這邊不需要跳><
00:28:468 (6,7,8,9) - 尤其combo是黑的背景是暗的...會有點不好讀圖(?
00:40:832 (5) - 在Insane這裡是慢的呢OAO..
00:52:468 (5) - ^
01:24:468 (1,2) - 交換NC
01:26:286 (4) - 我覺得這裡應該NC提示一下/:
01:30:286 (1,2) - 交換NC(同前面)
01:36:104 (1,2) - ^
01:37:923 (4) - NC(同01:26:286 - )
01:41:923 (1,2) - 交換NC
01:44:286 (5) - NC
01:52:832 (8) - NC
01:56:104 (8,9) - Ctrl+G?

Normal跟Easy我想應該沒問題~
rank加油 快去找MAT吧>w</
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

K i A i wrote:

[normal]
00:46:104 (4) - add clap sound at middle point
00:51:923 (1) - ^ i used whistle here same as other diffs

[insane]
00:34:468 (1) - make this slider's bending to offside? fixed
01:27:377 (1) - mistake? lol,fixed

wow.. + 1 + 2(easy, hard)o.o？

yanlu wrote:

Hi~ Mod via my modding queue :3

Nice map! thanks >_<
[Insane]
00:31:377 (1,2,3,4) - 全排一直線有點不好移動..3跟4稍微往上移點? 感觉就这个间距还好
00:33:377 (8) - 跟6對稱?(x368/y40) good idea
00:38:650 (1,2,3,4) - 這真是233...前面全單指已經夠難的了欸欸OAQ 其实我想要的效果就是节奏越来越快那种，先留着没改orz
00:40:832 (1,2) - 前面是1.0X這裡用0.5有點太慢>< 窝也不知道为什么，但感觉还不错的样子orz
00:50:286 (1,2,3,4) - 同前面 233333
00:52:469 (1,2) - 0.75x?
01:00:468 (1,2) - 跟前面的01:00:286 (3) - flow不順 (x376/y164? 调整了一下
01:03:377 (1,2) - 同flow..這樣如何><? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631496 感觉还行，暂时没动
01:04:286 (2) - 稍微有點角度可以提示後面的 放x276/y148? 好
01:06:650 (3,4) - ctrl+G 现在就不错，而且改了ds不好弄
01:09:014 (3) - NC 总觉得没必要= =
01:12:468 (3,4) - Ctrl+G
01:19:195 (4) - NC? 科学
01:38:468 (6) - 這個擋得很不好讀.. 换了个摆法:3

[Hard]
00:25:923 (8,9) - ctrl+g? 跳得有點大.. 还行吧
00:26:650 (2,3) - 換一下位置..我覺得這邊不需要跳><
00:28:468 (6,7,8,9) - 尤其combo是黑的背景是暗的...會有點不好讀圖(? 改掉了
00:40:832 (5) - 在Insane這裡是慢的呢OAO.. 暂时没动，因为hard和insane风格不一样什么的orz
00:52:468 (5) - ^
01:24:468 (1,2) - 交換NC 这段开始跟其他diff nc下的地方是一样的
01:26:286 (4) - 我覺得這裡應該NC提示一下/:
01:30:286 (1,2) - 交換NC(同前面)
01:36:104 (1,2) - ^
01:37:923 (4) - NC(同01:26:286 - )
01:41:923 (1,2) - 交換NC
01:44:286 (5) - NC 好
01:52:832 (8) - NC 这里没必要吧=_=
01:56:104 (8,9) - Ctrl+G? 都要完了再让我坑下人吧233

Normal跟Easy我想應該沒問題~
rank加油 快去找MAT吧>w</
thanks for modding and stars！
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
MineC24
Modding queue~~

Easy
01:24:469 (1) - remove note
01:24:651 (2) - add NC
01:30:286 (1) - remove note
01:30:469 (2) - add NC
01:41:924 (1) - remove note
01:42:106 (2) - add NC

Normal
00:39:377 (4) - No stack here.. (Normal diff)
00:51:014 (4) - ^
01:01:923 (3) - This slider is hard, insane diff pattern....
01:07:741 (3) - ^
01:13:559 (2) - ^

Hard
OD +1

00:26:650 (2,3,4) - umm... very confuse....

Insane
HP Drain... -1
imo OD +1

Beautiful pattern :)

GL :)
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt

jaehn215 wrote:

Modding queue~~

Easy
01:24:469 (1) - remove note
01:24:651 (2) - add NC
01:30:286 (1) - remove note
01:30:469 (2) - add NC
01:41:924 (1) - remove note
01:42:106 (2) - add NC i think it may too boring if i delete those note

Normal
00:39:377 (4) - No stack here.. (Normal diff)
00:51:014 (4) - ^
01:01:923 (3) - This slider is hard, insane diff pattern....
01:07:741 (3) - ^
01:13:559 (2) - ^maybe,waiting for other people's opinion

Hard
OD +1

00:26:650 (2,3,4) - umm... very confuse.... fixed

Insane
HP Drain... -1
imo OD +1 fixed HP,actually i prefer low od with high hp in a jumpy map =P

Beautiful pattern :)

GL :)
thanks for modding :3
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
Awah, I checked all three diffs (easy norm and hard) but nothing came to my attention ^^")7 sry dun giv me kudosu for this. Gomen
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Melt
thanks for star >.<
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