把这个copy到第一个post上去把。。。Tachibana Kanade wrote:
tyHikaros wrote:
such a good map, tried it today again and it was perfect imo ><
thanks! it helps me a lot._nara_ wrote:
[Hard]
00:20:164 (16) remove this? its better like this
00:32:316 (5) ^
01:07:253 (10) ^
01:12:000 till 01:12:949 are you keeping the hitsounds??
01:37:063 (3,4) change hitsounds to finish+whistle?
01:43:329 (6,7,8,9,10) finish?
01:56:051 (3,5) finish?
02:49:975 (3,4) change to finish + whistle?
02:59:088 (5) remove this?
03:05:924 (10,11,1,2,3) finish?
03:20:924 (1,2,3,4,5,1) ^
03:27:000 (2,3,4,5) ^
03:28:329 (1) remove all hitsounds?
03:52:633 (1,2,3,4) finish?
03:58:139 (6,7) ^
04:12:949 (4,5) ^
04:13:139 missing circle or what?
04:15:987 (3) finish?
so i think more good if u give more hitsounds that match with the song
remove Girls Dead Monster in Tags box bcs u write it already in Artist
overall is good
dont forget to set the preview point
and btw if u make the hitsounds u should rlly use it at all bcs i see u even not putting any hitsound u made,
if u dont rlly use it pls just remove it bcs it makes ur map more heavier. take a look at the folder.
emmy wrote:
kanade moe :3
i recomend you to duo queue instead hahahaTachibana Kanade wrote:
btw I lost my 1st solo RANKED game lol
我把這圖做成翔了ps3station44 wrote:
Yui
00:38:202 - slider
00:53:962 - slider
00:54:152 - 這邊兩個去掉看看
00:55:861 - finish
00:56:051 - finish
01:18:551 - 這邊沒對齊
01:18:930 - ^
01:26:905 - 到01:34:690 - 調整一下吧
01:58:044 - 這邊也是
02:10:196 - 到02:15:133 - 一樣調整
02:40:196 - 04:16:082 (13) - 到結束 把節奏往後移動到白線and紅線
謝謝 晚上上线慢慢改Blackshane wrote:
[General]
这首歌的BPM是157.98
offset+40 第一根红线在1787ms处
以下mod是在还没有调整BPM和offset的情况下的mod
[Yui]
HDR+1 AR+1 OD+1(如果你想把它做成Normal难度的话可以不用变 这个diff现在更偏向于Hard)
00:24:911 (7) - NC
00:26:430 (11) - ^
00:28:899 (15) - ^
00:34:975 (7) - ^
00:53:392 (9) - ^
00:53:392 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 这部分感觉很难受 因为音乐在上面没有拍点 换成这样
00:58:946 (5,6,7) - 换成一个带回转的滑条
00:59:468 (7) - NC
01:05:354 (8) - ^
01:11:430 (7) - ^
01:16:082 (1) - NC应该在 01:17:506 (4) -
01:23:582 (7) - NC
01:38:962 (8) - NC kiai开始 预览点
01:41:240 (11) - NC
01:48:076 (8) - ^
01:54:152 (7) - ^
02:00:228 (6) - ^
02:03:645 (9) - ^
02:05:924 (13) - ^
02:15:418 - kiai结束
02:42:664 (8) - NC
02:48:740 (9) - ^
02:54:816 (5) - ^
02:56:905 (9) - ^?
03:00:892 (8) - ^
03:04:120 (15) - ^
03:08:677 (5) - ^?
03:10:196 (8) - ^
03:12:664 (1) - NC提前到 03:11:715 (11) - ?然后在03:13:994 (4) - NC
03:16:183 - 加绿线 kiai#2开始 (其实你到后面就已经开始用蓝线了 这就是offset没设置好 后面会有初步修改好的osb文件)
03:18:551 (6) - NC
03:20:829 (11) - ^
03:24:626 (5) - ^
03:26:145 (8) - ^
03:30:702 (6) - ^
03:32:981 (11) - ^
03:37:538 (7) - ^
03:40:481 - 加绿线 kiai#2结束
03:58:804 (7) - NC
04:03:361 (6) - ^
04:05:259 (1) - NC移到 04:04:880 (11) -
04:09:152 (1) - NC移到 04:07:823 (7) -
04:13:994 (8) - NC
04:16:082 (13) - NC 去掉结尾的finish音效
后面一个难度也有很多问题- -快到饭点了肚子饿了不想check了我会说么
Yui难度稍稍修改了一下的osb http://puu.sh/1SPux
今晚我会在线 可以找我ircmod 这两个难度的问题还是蛮多的T T ircmod方便些0 0
好的Tachibana Kanade wrote:
謝謝 晚上上线慢慢改
今晚能上线么..我复制错把改好的覆盖了Blackshane wrote:
挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
抱歉今晚没法上电脑(其实昨晚也是因为断网才没有办法上,然后就去做GD了。。)Tachibana Kanade wrote:
今晚能上线么..我复制错把改好的覆盖了Blackshane wrote:
挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
今晚能上线么..我复制错把改好的覆盖了 [/quote]Blackshane wrote:
挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
你先不要看 現在很爛jesse7419 wrote:
好努力!!
看來真要踏上神mapper之路了 \:D/
加油!!原來你有PM我MOD喔= =... 那這佔mod位
正需要mod 谢谢了Irie Miyuki wrote:
卧槽GDM 马一发 等我有空了来((
大体修好了Melt wrote:
hi :3
mod as request
[General][Yui]
- PreviewTime不一致
- 如果走rank向的话还缺一个3.0星以下的diff
- 最好让的你每个diff在同一时间点结束
[Shining]
- normal难度的话(话说这是normal难度吧)还是建议大体上固定一个ds来做 像00:17:921(2,3)这一类的ds变化会让新手很不适应
- 00:21:719(2)换成普通的slider怎么样
- 00:55:141(2)滑条尾出界了
- 01:16:030(4)remove nc 然后在01:17:549(3)加上nc
- 02:04:454(3)出界了
- 02:06:353(1)这个spin可以延长到02:07:872 然后删掉02:08:062(1)
- 03:02:563(1)这个也出界了o.o
- 03:10:729(2)^ 还有这个slider在03:11:108结束好像更好
- 03:23:072(2)^
- 03:40:733(1)spin在03:40:543开始 03:42:821结束
- 03:48:898(1)这一类超出范围就不提了 自己再检查一下吧
[Kanade]
- 00:16:402(4)这一段试试这个节奏呢
- 00:23:808(2)repeat两次就可以了
- 00:26:086(4)nc 删掉后面那一个
- 01:12:421(2)repeat两次就可以了
- 01:16:029(3)在01:16:409结束似乎更好
- 01:43:565(1)remove nc
- 01:50:021(1)^
- 02:05:972(1)在02:07:871结束
- 02:53:257(1)试试在02:53:637结束
- 03:43:200(1)在03:45:099结束
- 03:46:998(2,3,4)没叠好
- 03:49:656(1,2)^
还有就是音效的话很多地方也缺,有些地方听起来也不舒服(比如finish连用什么的)
- 00:29:124(10)nc
- 00:38:809(3,4)没叠好
- 00:49:633(1,2)^
- 01:02:166(7)这个slider替换成circle
- 02:02:552(1)remove nc
- 03:20:028(1)^
- 03:21:927(1)^
建议多看看别人的图,或者咨询一下身边的神mapper什么的,我在线的时候也可以pm我
不过我音效也很烂就是了:P
差不多就这样了,加油 :3
新guestdiff:http://puu.sh/1WbClMelt wrote:
hi :3
mod as request
[Shining]
- 00:16:402(4)这一段试试这个节奏呢 已改 不过有些变化
- 00:23:808(2)repeat两次就可以了 未改 因为感觉三次repeat更合节拍
- 00:26:086(4)nc 删掉后面那一个 未改 因为这里是一个完整的正方形跳跃而且在下一个位置NC也并不是不合节拍
- 01:12:421(2)repeat两次就可以了 同前
- 01:16:029(3)在01:16:409结束似乎更好 未改 我觉得两种节奏差不多...
- 01:43:565(1)remove nc 未改
- 01:50:021(1)^ 未改 虽然比起上一处此处属于可改可不改- -不过由于我修改了节奏还是没有决定改
- 02:05:972(1)在02:07:871结束 未改 从结果上来看把两个转盘合并成一个转盘没有意义 因为人声出现了两次
- 02:53:257(1)试试在02:53:637结束 同前
- 03:43:200(1)在03:45:099结束 同前
- 03:46:998(2,3,4)没叠好 我确定我叠好了 这是因为Stack Leniency的缘故导致的
- 03:49:656(1,2)^ ^
ty it helps a lotNichiyouki wrote:
Hi, Kanade :3
My mod from your request in my modding queueRed = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestionGeneral
- reversearrow-none.png file isn't necessary. Please remove it.
- BPM on all diff are different by Kanade diff is 157.983, Shining diff is 157.980, and Yui diff is 157.979. Please adjust BPM to equal which I suggest that adjust it to same as Shining diff (157.980). Then don't forget resnap all notes.
- PreviewTime on all diff are different. I suggest that put it on 01:39:007
- Kiai time on all diffs are different as well. You should adjust it by follow Shining diff.
- Kiai #1: Starts on 01:39:007, ends on 01:44:324
- Kiai #2: Starts on 01:45:084, ends on 01:50:401
- Kiai #3: Starts on 01:51:160, ends on 01:57:237
- Kiai #4: Starts on 03:16:234, ends on 03:21:552
- Kiai #5: Starts on 03:22:311, ends on 03:27:628
- Kiai #6: Starts on 03:28:388, ends on 03:34:465
Yui
- CS +1 (3)
- You should consider spacing on this diff all notes because spacing on this diff have 0.7x, 0.8x, 0.9x, and 1.6x. However, I suggest that you use spacing about 0.9x.
- 00:41:279 (1) - Try don't stack with (6).
Comment: This diff should fix spacing almost, because some note llike 00:17:921 (2,3) is too far a lot. However, I'm tired. I was able to mod just this.Shining
- CS +1 (4)
- 00:16:592 - I hear the rhythm here. You should consider adding a circle, but if you no fix it, you should increase spacing between (4,1).
- 00:17:731 (3) - Spacing between (2) and this is too close.
- 00:24:567 - add a circle?
- 00:26:086 (1) - From considering rhythm. You should use finish instead of clap.
- 00:50:393 (1) - Add finish in slider begin
- 00:56:470 (1) - ^
- 01:14:700 (1) - ^
- 01:16:599 - Same as 00:16:592.
- 01:26:854 (1) - Same as 00:50:393 (1).
- 01:38:437 - I think I hear the rhythm here. You can add a circle on this.
- 02:33:697 (1) - Add finish in slider begin?
- 02:36:736 (1) - ^
- 02:51:928 (1) - Add finish here.
- 04:16:242 (3) - Repeat slider one more time.
Comment: Your mapping is good for me, but I think that you should add finish more than this. For example, somethings I said in modding.Kanade
- 00:16:022 (1) - Remove NC here, but add it on 00:16:782 (2) instead.
- 00:16:592 - I hear the rhythm here. You should add a circle.
- 00:18:681 (9) - Add NC?
- 02:21:339 (5) - Spacing between (4) and this is too close. Please increase spacing.
- 00:44:317 (10) - You should add NC here. Then remove it on 00:45:266 (1).
- 00:46:976 (1) - Remove NC.
- 00:49:634 (1) - The rhythm of note is weird a lot. I suggest that slider (1) end at 00:49:824. Then add a circle on 00:49:919 or slider on 00:49:919 to 00:50:204, and you should remove NC on (1), but add it on 00:50:394 (3) instead.
- 00:51:913 (8) - Add NC here, but remove it on next NC.
- 00:53:432 (3) - ^
- 00:54:951 (3) - Add NC here.
- 01:02:547 - Add a circle?
- 01:18:878 (2,3,4) - Spacing is too far, and I think that these aren't suitable for using spacing more than 1.5x. Please reduce these.
- 03:40:448 (1) - Start spinner at 03:40:543.
Comment: I will don't say hitsound on mod, but I will comment you can consider what Blackshane was doing in him/her diff, and you should consider NC that I said somethings in modding, too. Because putting NC have to associated with rhythm or vocals.
Hope that my mod will be useful for you.
Good luck~
Thx for mod~It is a really useful mod to me and KanadeNichiyouki wrote:
Shining
Kanade你还没有把我的diff更新啊T T
I'm sorry that Kanade haven't downloaded my latest version of my diff...I have changed something at my last ver.
- CS +1 (4) I think CS3 is better...At my view...
- 00:16:592 - I hear the rhythm here. You should consider adding a circle, but if you no fix it, you should increase spacing between (4,1). Have changed at my last ver
- 00:17:731 (3) - Spacing between (2) and this is too close. ^
- 00:24:567 - add a circle? Fixed
- 00:26:086 (1) - From considering rhythm. You should use finish instead of clap. Nice idea, fixed
- 00:50:393 (1) - Add finish in slider begin fixed
- 00:56:470 (1) - ^ fixed
- 01:14:700 (1) - ^ have fixed at my last ver
- 01:16:599 - Same as 00:16:592. fixed
- 01:26:854 (1) - Same as 00:50:393 (1). have fixed at my last ver
- 01:38:437 - I think I hear the rhythm here. You can add a circle on this. fixed
- 02:33:697 (1) - Add finish in slider begin? fixed
- 02:36:736 (1) - ^ fixed
- 02:51:928 (1) - Add finish here. have fixed at my last ver
- 04:16:242 (3) - Repeat slider one more time. I think there is no rhythm at 04:17:002 - so I decide not to at a note here (I have changed slider to a 4-note stream)
Comment: Your mapping is good for me, but I think that you should add finish more than this. For example, somethings I said in modding.
我新手我不知道!!(现在知道了Irie Miyuki wrote:
from queue :3
渣比mod请见谅
[General]已修改 话说其实最早是因为我除了岩泽和yui其他人名字记不住... 没想到..
- tag: 岩沢麻美(いわさわ まさみ)=Iwasawa Masami 另加上yui和gdm
其实我不知道tag里为啥有岩泽如果是想写gdm团员的话还有入江美雪(irie miyuki)咦我在中枪 关根诗织(sekine shiori)和久子(hisako)- Source: Angel Beats! 叹号别漏了
[Kanade]
- 00:16:022 (1,2) - switch NC
- 00:18:681 (9) - add NC
- 00:32:543 (5) - NC
- 00:44:317 (10) - NC
- 00:44:317 (10,1) - switch NC
- 00:46:976 (1) - remove NC
- 00:46:976 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing弄成一样吧
- 00:49:634 (1) - 这里是这样一个节奏。。
- 00:50:394 (3) - NC
- 00:51:913 (10,1) - switch NC
- 00:53:432 (3) - NC
- 01:02:547 - add a circle
- 01:02:927 (1,2) - 这两个形状一样的话好看点
- 01:08:624 (4) - NC
- 01:09:953 (1) - remove NC
- 01:11:472 (5) - NC
- 01:15:840 (5) - 感觉这个节奏好点
- 01:16:030 - ↑如果上边改了 在这个地方NC
- 01:17:549 (3) - NC
- 01:18:878 (2,3,4) - 往前移两条线 即2在红线上, 并且我觉得大跳很违和
- 01:21:917 (5,6,7) - 同 01:15:840 (5) - (之前1分15改了 这里没有改 我总感觉这样玩的时候和后面的连贯性好一点点
- 01:22:676 (1,3) - switch NC
- 01:27:234 (3,4,5) - 1没摞在一起 2感觉跟后边三连会误读 这地方暂时没修改
- 01:29:513 (1,2) - switch NC
- 01:30:842 (1) - remove NC
- 01:32:931 (7) - NC
- 01:34:450 (1,4) - switch NC
- 01:39:008 (1,1,1) - ………………这个有点
- 01:54:200 (9,1) - switch NC
- 01:57:998 (1) - remove nc
- 02:01:036 (4,5,6) - 这个跳也有点违和
- 02:09:771 (1) - remove nc
- 02:40:535 (3,4,5) - spacing弄成一样好点
- 02:42:244 (1,2) - switch nc
- 02:43:573 (1,4) - switch nc
- 02:45:472 (1,2) - switch nc
- 02:46:801 (1) - remove nc
- 02:48:131 (1,4) - switch nc
- 02:49:650 (1) - remove nc
- 02:53:448 (1,1) - remove nc, 两个
- 02:54:777 (3) - nc
- 02:55:727 (1) - remove nc
- 02:59:335 (1,3) - switch nc
- 03:07:500 (1,1) - 两个nc没必要
- 03:10:729 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 觉得这梗不合适 建议换掉 另外03:12:058 可以考虑加个circle circle加了 梗暂时还没换。。
- 03:14:337 (1) - remove nc
- 03:17:945 (2) - 和03:16:995 (1) - 叠起来吧
- 03:34:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 建议只保留前四个 然后后面继续滑条啥的 另外注意连打间的spacing 这里连打我保留了5个note
- 03:46:050 (1) - 偷工减料吗ww 虽然有人声..但是我觉得这样也行..(偷工减料.. 当时主要注重后面那个伴奏的节奏打击了
- 04:01:811 (1,2,3,4) - 这个注意一下间距吧蛮重要的
- 04:06:179 (1) - 建议拉远点 但是别太远..- -
- 04:08:458 (1,2,3) - 太远
- 04:09:217 (1,2) - 太近
- 04:09:977 (1,2,3,4) - 太远
- 04:13:775 (7,1) - 叠起来?
- 04:16:054 (3) - 建议跟鼓点
这么多页mod没人管nc真服气 看的头疼 感觉nc两个键要被按炸基本都按你说的改了 谢谢
!!! normal和easy一定要开DS做
Almost Fixed , TYLunarSakuya wrote:
hi~
General
is nice
Yui
- You should probably try lowering the star rating to around 3 at least
- consider putting hitsounds on every downbeat, feels empty during the main parts =v=
00:15:262 (2) - Whistle like 00:21:339 (2) -
00:17:162 (1) - Place somewhere like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610774, better flow imo
00:17:731 (2) - Make this a single slider like 00:29:885 (3) - , and don't forget to extend to white tick if you do~
00:38:240 (1) - Finish at beginning
00:44:317 (1) - Move a little to the right so it's not touching another note
00:50:394 (1) - Finish at beginning
01:26:854 (1) - Finish
01:34:640 (5) - a little ugly
01:41:286 (1) - move this down more so it's not going through the hp bar
01:44:324 (5) - Finish at end
01:51:161 (1) - ^ at beginning
- there are lots of Finishes that can be added according to the bg music i believe, so I will stop mentioning them
02:01:796 (1) - messy slider points
02:15:468 - Extend the break line so it starts here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610781
02:44:333 (1) - Feels out of place? Maybe delete or map this part; same for the other spinner
02:56:485 (1) - if you keep this, add Finish
03:16:235 (2) - NC?
03:29:908 (4,1) - Spacing issue
04:16:054 (5) - Extend this to the next red tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610790
Shining
- also lots of Finishes missing here imo, add them to the beginnings of kiai time, etc~
01:12:421 (2) - Delete some reverses maybe, seems a bit confusing within the same combo
01:44:704 (5) - Finish, hear bg music
01:51:160 (1) - Finish at beginning
02:09:201 (1) - ^
02:11:100 - Add note, i think it makes rhythm more consistent
02:27:621 (2) - Finish at beginning
Kanade
00:16:972 - Add something here, the rhythm flow feels a bit broken now
00:50:394 (1) - Finish
00:52:673 (1) - ugly slider
00:53:622 - Add note
00:56:470 (1) - Finish at beginning
01:02:547 (8) - Finish
01:07:105 (8,1) - Increase distance between these, I don't think this is a nice place for anti-jump
01:16:599 - Stack a note under the end of (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610811, so it's not an awkward pause
01:19:638 (1) - Start this 1 white tick back at 01:19:258
01:26:474 (1) - Finish at end
01:39:387 (1,1,1,1) - Don't really see a need for so many NCs, maybe delete a couple
02:01:036 (4) - NC, or move further away from (3)
02:09:202 (1) - Finish at beginning
2:15:468 - same as Yui, extend break to here
02:49:650 (2) - Move further away from (1)
2:54:586 - Add note?
03:10:159 (1) - Finish at beginning
03:16:995 (1) - Delete NC, don't think you had it before
03:28:389 (1) - Finish at beginning
03:34:465 (5,6,7) - Make spacing more equal between these http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610817
03:55:735 (5,6) - Highlight and Ctrl + G, gives better spacing imo
04:04:850 (1) - Finish
04:11:686 (1) - Delete NC
04:16:812 - Add note with Finish
I feel like your hitsounds are incomplete in general, especially Finishes
Anyways, sweet map and song!! I love AB! Good luck!
new diff: http://puu.sh/22lr9LunarSakuya wrote:
Shining
- also lots of Finishes missing here imo, add them to the beginnings of kiai time, etc~
01:12:421 (2) - Delete some reverses maybe, seems a bit confusing within the same combo fixed
01:44:704 (5) - Finish, hear bg music not fixed
01:51:160 (1) - Finish at beginning fixed
02:09:201 (1) - ^ fixed
02:11:100 - Add note, i think it makes rhythm more consistent not fixed
02:27:621 (2) - Finish at beginning not fixed, but i finish at beginning of #6 kiai
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1780,379.794910748196,4,2,0,60,1,0
160,280,14313,2,0,P|40:192|176:88,2,NaNThis NaN means your slider got 0 length