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Tachibana Kanade
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Tachibana Kanade wrote:

把这个copy到第一个post上去把。。。
话说怎么把你的map信息也copy了一遍。。。orz
alacat
IRC mod ~

09:41 Tachibana Kanade: alacat> can u test play my map if u have time ? just for fun :p
09:41 *Tachibana Kanade is listening to Girls Dead Monster - 23:50
09:41 alacat: ok :D
09:41 Tachibana Kanade: arigato!
09:41 alacat: DLing ~
09:42 alacat: go :3
09:42 Tachibana Kanade: thank you
09:44 Tachibana Kanade: haha just created the map yesterday
09:46 Tachibana Kanade: thank you for playing XD
09:46 alacat: <- noob ;w;
09:46 Tachibana Kanade: im noob in map :p
09:46 Tachibana Kanade: i like this song
09:46 alacat: >.<
09:47 Tachibana Kanade: any suggestion? >
09:47 alacat: IRC ~ okey ?
09:47 Tachibana Kanade: okay~
09:47 alacat: offset , okey >w<
09:48 Tachibana Kanade: my friend helps me test offset haha
09:49 alacat: 00:16:557 (2)- add clap ? you should put hit sound imo >.<
09:49 alacat: 00:19:595 (1)- ^
09:49 Tachibana Kanade: only that note add clap?
09:50 alacat: 00:24:532 (1)- spinner's end ~ How about here ? 00:26:051-
09:50 Tachibana Kanade: already added
09:50 Tachibana Kanade: okay~
09:51 alacat: 00:27:380 (3,4)- perfect stack ? :3
09:51 alacat: 00:27:000 (2)- slider end >w<
09:52 alacat: 00:30:608 (10)- try to move y : 48
09:52 alacat: 00:35:164 (7)- add new combo ? :3
09:53 alacat: 00:38:202 (1)- add finish on slider head ?
09:54 alacat: 00:41:810 (1)- dont need new combo here imo :3
09:55 alacat: 00:58:519 (3,4,5)- try this ?
09:55 alacat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539116
09:56 alacat: 01:02:886 (9)- start new combo here ? start vocal here >.<
09:57 alacat: 01:13:424 (1)- start : 01:13:139-
09:57 alacat: ^ and add finish
09:58 Tachibana Kanade: so busy .. haha
09:58 Tachibana Kanade: thanks..
09:58 alacat: 01:27:190 (3,4,5)- perfect stack :3
09:58 Tachibana Kanade: still work on it
09:58 alacat: okey :D
09:58 alacat: should i wait ? :3
10:03 Tachibana Kanade: okay now..
10:03 alacat: :3
10:04 alacat: 01:32:126 (1,2)- add whistle ? same as here.01:30:418 (7,8)-
10:05 alacat: 01:33:835 (7,8,9)- m~ , it is better to put spacing around 1.10x >.<
10:06 alacat: 01:37:823 (1,1)- !?
10:06 alacat: 01:38:962- plz check this timing lol ww
10:08 Tachibana Kanade: done!
10:08 alacat: 02:05:639- same as above >.<
10:09 alacat: 02:09:152 (3)- want to put more spacing >< maybe ... confusing many players
10:10 alacat: 02:15:038 (3)- move to y:288 ?
10:10 alacat: 02:45:038- add note ? :3
10:11 Tachibana Kanade: 02:09:152 (3)- put more spacing ?
10:12 Tachibana Kanade: can u send a picture~~
10:12 Tachibana Kanade: >
10:12 alacat: kk
10:13 alacat: bad suggestions ;w;
10:13 alacat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539131
10:14 alacat: 02:50:449 (1)- start : 02:50:354-
10:15 alacat: ^ 02:56:620 (1)- start : 02:56:430-
10:17 alacat: 02:58:519 (2)- move to x:148 ?
10:17 alacat: I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical :3
10:17 Tachibana Kanade: yes~
10:17 alacat: 03:04:025- check this timing >.<
10:18 alacat: 03:07:443- ^
10:18 alacat: 03:07:823 (1)- try to remove one repeat ?
10:18 alacat: 03:10:101 (1)- add finish slider head
10:19 alacat: 03:12:949 (1)- remove new combo ~
10:19 alacat: 03:16:177- check ~
10:20 alacat: 03:28:329 (1)- add finish slider head ~
10:21 alacat: 03:48:835- try this ~ ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539144
10:23 alacat: 04:03:171- mm ~ it doesn't follow the music ;w; try this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539146
10:23 alacat: 04:06:114 (5)- add new combo ~
10:23 alacat: 04:13:709 (4,1)- perfect stack :3
10:24 alacat: 04:15:987 (3,1)- check >.<
10:27 alacat: finish my suggestion ~ ^^
10:27 Tachibana Kanade: thanks alacat.. still work on it..
10:27 Tachibana Kanade: u help me a lot ~
10:29 alacat: np ~ :3 good luck >w<
10:29 Tachibana Kanade: please reply in the post
10:30 Tachibana Kanade: must give alacat kd!!
10:30 alacat: ok xD

加油 :)
Hikaros
such a good map, tried it today again and it was perfect imo ><
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Hikaros wrote:

such a good map, tried it today again and it was perfect imo ><
ty
still work on it
btw I lost my 1st solo RANKED game lol
_nara_
[Hard]
00:20:164 (16) remove this? its better like this
00:32:316 (5) ^
01:07:253 (10) ^
01:12:000 till 01:12:949 are you keeping the hitsounds??
01:37:063 (3,4) change hitsounds to finish+whistle?
01:43:329 (6,7,8,9,10) finish?
01:56:051 (3,5) finish?
02:49:975 (3,4) change to finish + whistle?
02:59:088 (5) remove this?
03:05:924 (10,11,1,2,3) finish?
03:20:924 (1,2,3,4,5,1) ^
03:27:000 (2,3,4,5) ^
03:28:329 (1) remove all hitsounds?
03:52:633 (1,2,3,4) finish?
03:58:139 (6,7) ^
04:12:949 (4,5) ^
04:13:139 missing circle or what?
04:15:987 (3) finish?

so i think more good if u give more hitsounds that match with the song
remove Girls Dead Monster in Tags box bcs u write it already in Artist
overall is good
dont forget to set the preview point
and btw if u make the hitsounds u should rlly use it at all bcs i see u even not putting any hitsound u made,
if u dont rlly use it pls just remove it bcs it makes ur map more heavier. take a look at the folder.
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

_nara_ wrote:

[Hard]
00:20:164 (16) remove this? its better like this
00:32:316 (5) ^
01:07:253 (10) ^
01:12:000 till 01:12:949 are you keeping the hitsounds??
01:37:063 (3,4) change hitsounds to finish+whistle?
01:43:329 (6,7,8,9,10) finish?
01:56:051 (3,5) finish?
02:49:975 (3,4) change to finish + whistle?
02:59:088 (5) remove this?
03:05:924 (10,11,1,2,3) finish?
03:20:924 (1,2,3,4,5,1) ^
03:27:000 (2,3,4,5) ^
03:28:329 (1) remove all hitsounds?
03:52:633 (1,2,3,4) finish?
03:58:139 (6,7) ^
04:12:949 (4,5) ^
04:13:139 missing circle or what?
04:15:987 (3) finish?

so i think more good if u give more hitsounds that match with the song
remove Girls Dead Monster in Tags box bcs u write it already in Artist
overall is good
dont forget to set the preview point
and btw if u make the hitsounds u should rlly use it at all bcs i see u even not putting any hitsound u made,
if u dont rlly use it pls just remove it bcs it makes ur map more heavier. take a look at the folder.
thanks! it helps me a lot.
Still work on map itself
Will make hitsounds later
neurosis
kanade moe :3
Colined AFK
喵喵~从来没在这上面留过言额~~
快点rank来扛榜吧~
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade
later please test it <3 it is better now

emmy wrote:

kanade moe :3
Hikaros
i still find it perfect haha i didnt feel anything weird in any stream/beat/slider



no SS cuz i suck lol.

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

btw I lost my 1st solo RANKED game lol
i recomend you to duo queue instead hahaha
Lanchery
Yui

00:38:202 - slider
00:53:962 - slider
00:54:152 - 這邊兩個去掉看看
00:55:861 - finish
00:56:051 - finish
01:18:551 - 這邊沒對齊
01:18:930 - ^
01:26:905 - 到01:34:690 - 調整一下吧
01:58:044 - 這邊也是
02:10:196 - 到02:15:133 - 一樣調整
02:40:196 - 04:16:082 (13) - 到結束 把節奏往後移動到白線and紅線
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

ps3station44 wrote:

Yui

00:38:202 - slider
00:53:962 - slider
00:54:152 - 這邊兩個去掉看看
00:55:861 - finish
00:56:051 - finish
01:18:551 - 這邊沒對齊
01:18:930 - ^
01:26:905 - 到01:34:690 - 調整一下吧
01:58:044 - 這邊也是
02:10:196 - 到02:15:133 - 一樣調整
02:40:196 - 04:16:082 (13) - 到結束 把節奏往後移動到白線and紅線
我把這圖做成翔了
Kayano
[General]
这首歌的BPM是157.98
offset+40 第一根红线在1787ms处

以下mod是在还没有调整BPM和offset的情况下的mod

[Yui]
HDR+1 AR+1 OD+1(如果你想把它做成Normal难度的话可以不用变 这个diff现在更偏向于Hard)
00:24:911 (7) - NC
00:26:430 (11) - ^
00:28:899 (15) - ^
00:34:975 (7) - ^
00:53:392 (9) - ^
00:53:392 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 这部分感觉很难受 因为音乐在上面没有拍点 换成这样
00:58:946 (5,6,7) - 换成一个带回转的滑条
00:59:468 (7) - NC
01:05:354 (8) - ^
01:11:430 (7) - ^
01:16:082 (1) - NC应该在 01:17:506 (4) -
01:23:582 (7) - NC
01:38:962 (8) - NC kiai开始 预览点
01:41:240 (11) - NC
01:48:076 (8) - ^
01:54:152 (7) - ^
02:00:228 (6) - ^
02:03:645 (9) - ^
02:05:924 (13) - ^
02:15:418 - kiai结束
02:42:664 (8) - NC
02:48:740 (9) - ^
02:54:816 (5) - ^
02:56:905 (9) - ^?
03:00:892 (8) - ^
03:04:120 (15) - ^
03:08:677 (5) - ^?
03:10:196 (8) - ^
03:12:664 (1) - NC提前到 03:11:715 (11) - ?然后在03:13:994 (4) - NC
03:16:183 - 加绿线 kiai#2开始 (其实你到后面就已经开始用蓝线了 这就是offset没设置好 后面会有初步修改好的osb文件)
03:18:551 (6) - NC
03:20:829 (11) - ^
03:24:626 (5) - ^
03:26:145 (8) - ^
03:30:702 (6) - ^
03:32:981 (11) - ^
03:37:538 (7) - ^
03:40:481 - 加绿线 kiai#2结束
03:58:804 (7) - NC
04:03:361 (6) - ^
04:05:259 (1) - NC移到 04:04:880 (11) -
04:09:152 (1) - NC移到 04:07:823 (7) -
04:13:994 (8) - NC
04:16:082 (13) - NC 去掉结尾的finish音效

后面一个难度也有很多问题- -快到饭点了肚子饿了不想check了我会说么 :roll:
Yui难度稍稍修改了一下的osb http://puu.sh/1SPux

今晚我会在线 可以找我ircmod 这两个难度的问题还是蛮多的T T ircmod方便些0 0

亲测我上传的那个版本还有些不正确的地方等我吃完饭再说- -大概5点40分
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Blackshane wrote:

[General]
这首歌的BPM是157.98
offset+40 第一根红线在1787ms处

以下mod是在还没有调整BPM和offset的情况下的mod

[Yui]
HDR+1 AR+1 OD+1(如果你想把它做成Normal难度的话可以不用变 这个diff现在更偏向于Hard)
00:24:911 (7) - NC
00:26:430 (11) - ^
00:28:899 (15) - ^
00:34:975 (7) - ^
00:53:392 (9) - ^
00:53:392 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 这部分感觉很难受 因为音乐在上面没有拍点 换成这样
00:58:946 (5,6,7) - 换成一个带回转的滑条
00:59:468 (7) - NC
01:05:354 (8) - ^
01:11:430 (7) - ^
01:16:082 (1) - NC应该在 01:17:506 (4) -
01:23:582 (7) - NC
01:38:962 (8) - NC kiai开始 预览点
01:41:240 (11) - NC
01:48:076 (8) - ^
01:54:152 (7) - ^
02:00:228 (6) - ^
02:03:645 (9) - ^
02:05:924 (13) - ^
02:15:418 - kiai结束
02:42:664 (8) - NC
02:48:740 (9) - ^
02:54:816 (5) - ^
02:56:905 (9) - ^?
03:00:892 (8) - ^
03:04:120 (15) - ^
03:08:677 (5) - ^?
03:10:196 (8) - ^
03:12:664 (1) - NC提前到 03:11:715 (11) - ?然后在03:13:994 (4) - NC
03:16:183 - 加绿线 kiai#2开始 (其实你到后面就已经开始用蓝线了 这就是offset没设置好 后面会有初步修改好的osb文件)
03:18:551 (6) - NC
03:20:829 (11) - ^
03:24:626 (5) - ^
03:26:145 (8) - ^
03:30:702 (6) - ^
03:32:981 (11) - ^
03:37:538 (7) - ^
03:40:481 - 加绿线 kiai#2结束
03:58:804 (7) - NC
04:03:361 (6) - ^
04:05:259 (1) - NC移到 04:04:880 (11) -
04:09:152 (1) - NC移到 04:07:823 (7) -
04:13:994 (8) - NC
04:16:082 (13) - NC 去掉结尾的finish音效

后面一个难度也有很多问题- -快到饭点了肚子饿了不想check了我会说么 :roll:
Yui难度稍稍修改了一下的osb http://puu.sh/1SPux

今晚我会在线 可以找我ircmod 这两个难度的问题还是蛮多的T T ircmod方便些0 0
謝謝 晚上上线慢慢改
Kayano

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

謝謝 晚上上线慢慢改
好的
Kayano
挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Blackshane wrote:

挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
今晚能上线么..我复制错把改好的覆盖了 :cry:
jesse7419
好努力!!

看來真要踏上神mapper之路了 \:D/

加油!!

原來你有PM我MOD喔= =... 那這佔mod位
Kayano

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

Blackshane wrote:

挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
今晚能上线么..我复制错把改好的覆盖了 :cry:
抱歉今晚没法上电脑(其实昨晚也是因为断网才没有办法上,然后就去做GD了。。)
可能的话明晚应该能上。。。大概吧。。GD还得在等两天
还有可能的话吧Yui难度改简单点变成N难度因为要想rank一定要有一个E或者N的难度 而我的GD是Hard
还有Insane的难度名改成Kanade 比Tenshi好而且是你的ID的一部分(这和日卡的I难度叫Rika差不多)
其他问题等下次电脑上mod再说吧
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Blackshane wrote:

挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
今晚能上线么..我复制错把改好的覆盖了 :cry:[/quote]

抱歉今晚没法上电脑(其实昨晚也是因为断网才没有办法上,然后就去做GD了。。)
可能的话明晚应该能上。。。大概吧。。GD还得在等两天
还有可能的话吧Yui难度改简单点变成N难度因为要想rank一定要有一个E或者N的难度 而我的GD是Hard
还有Insane的难度名改成Kanade 比Tenshi好而且是你的ID的一部分(这和日卡的I难度叫Rika差不多)
其他问题等下次电脑上mod再说吧[/quote]

好的 謝謝
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

jesse7419 wrote:

好努力!!

看來真要踏上神mapper之路了 \:D/

加油!!

原來你有PM我MOD喔= =... 那這佔mod位
你先不要看 現在很爛
考完試過段時間我覺得大體可以了再給你 :roll:
Irie Miyuki
卧槽GDM 马一发 等我有空了来((
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Irie Miyuki wrote:

卧槽GDM 马一发 等我有空了来((
正需要mod 谢谢了
Melt
hi :3
mod as request

[General]
  1. PreviewTime不一致
  2. 如果走rank向的话还缺一个3.0星以下的diff
  3. 最好让的你每个diff在同一时间点结束
[Yui]
  1. normal难度的话(话说这是normal难度吧)还是建议大体上固定一个ds来做 像00:17:921(2,3)这一类的ds变化会让新手很不适应
  2. 00:21:719(2)换成普通的slider怎么样
  3. 00:55:141(2)滑条尾出界了
  4. 01:16:030(4)remove nc 然后在01:17:549(3)加上nc
  5. 02:04:454(3)出界了
  6. 02:06:353(1)这个spin可以延长到02:07:872 然后删掉02:08:062(1)
  7. 03:02:563(1)这个也出界了o.o
  8. 03:10:729(2)^ 还有这个slider在03:11:108结束好像更好
  9. 03:23:072(2)^
  10. 03:40:733(1)spin在03:40:543开始 03:42:821结束
  11. 03:48:898(1)这一类超出范围就不提了 自己再检查一下吧
[Shining]
  1. 00:16:402(4)这一段试试这个节奏呢
  2. 00:23:808(2)repeat两次就可以了
  3. 00:26:086(4)nc 删掉后面那一个
  4. 01:12:421(2)repeat两次就可以了
  5. 01:16:029(3)在01:16:409结束似乎更好
  6. 01:43:565(1)remove nc
  7. 01:50:021(1)^
  8. 02:05:972(1)在02:07:871结束
  9. 02:53:257(1)试试在02:53:637结束
  10. 03:43:200(1)在03:45:099结束
  11. 03:46:998(2,3,4)没叠好
  12. 03:49:656(1,2)^
[Kanade]
  1. 00:29:124(10)nc
  2. 00:38:809(3,4)没叠好
  3. 00:49:633(1,2)^
  4. 01:02:166(7)这个slider替换成circle
  5. 02:02:552(1)remove nc
  6. 03:20:028(1)^
  7. 03:21:927(1)^
还有就是音效的话很多地方也缺,有些地方听起来也不舒服(比如finish连用什么的)
建议多看看别人的图,或者咨询一下身边的神mapper什么的,我在线的时候也可以pm我
不过我音效也很烂就是了:P

差不多就这样了,加油 :3
Chairman Miao
加油加油 支持小奏大叔 :)
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Melt wrote:

hi :3
mod as request

[General]
  1. PreviewTime不一致
  2. 如果走rank向的话还缺一个3.0星以下的diff
  3. 最好让的你每个diff在同一时间点结束
[Yui]
  1. normal难度的话(话说这是normal难度吧)还是建议大体上固定一个ds来做 像00:17:921(2,3)这一类的ds变化会让新手很不适应
  2. 00:21:719(2)换成普通的slider怎么样
  3. 00:55:141(2)滑条尾出界了
  4. 01:16:030(4)remove nc 然后在01:17:549(3)加上nc
  5. 02:04:454(3)出界了
  6. 02:06:353(1)这个spin可以延长到02:07:872 然后删掉02:08:062(1)
  7. 03:02:563(1)这个也出界了o.o
  8. 03:10:729(2)^ 还有这个slider在03:11:108结束好像更好
  9. 03:23:072(2)^
  10. 03:40:733(1)spin在03:40:543开始 03:42:821结束
  11. 03:48:898(1)这一类超出范围就不提了 自己再检查一下吧
[Shining]
  1. 00:16:402(4)这一段试试这个节奏呢
  2. 00:23:808(2)repeat两次就可以了
  3. 00:26:086(4)nc 删掉后面那一个
  4. 01:12:421(2)repeat两次就可以了
  5. 01:16:029(3)在01:16:409结束似乎更好
  6. 01:43:565(1)remove nc
  7. 01:50:021(1)^
  8. 02:05:972(1)在02:07:871结束
  9. 02:53:257(1)试试在02:53:637结束
  10. 03:43:200(1)在03:45:099结束
  11. 03:46:998(2,3,4)没叠好
  12. 03:49:656(1,2)^
[Kanade]
  1. 00:29:124(10)nc
  2. 00:38:809(3,4)没叠好
  3. 00:49:633(1,2)^
  4. 01:02:166(7)这个slider替换成circle
  5. 02:02:552(1)remove nc
  6. 03:20:028(1)^
  7. 03:21:927(1)^
还有就是音效的话很多地方也缺,有些地方听起来也不舒服(比如finish连用什么的)
建议多看看别人的图,或者咨询一下身边的神mapper什么的,我在线的时候也可以pm我
不过我音效也很烂就是了:P

差不多就这样了,加油 :3
大体修好了
感谢
Kayano

Melt wrote:

hi :3
mod as request

[Shining]
  1. 00:16:402(4)这一段试试这个节奏呢 已改 不过有些变化
  2. 00:23:808(2)repeat两次就可以了 未改 因为感觉三次repeat更合节拍
  3. 00:26:086(4)nc 删掉后面那一个 未改 因为这里是一个完整的正方形跳跃而且在下一个位置NC也并不是不合节拍
  4. 01:12:421(2)repeat两次就可以了 同前
  5. 01:16:029(3)在01:16:409结束似乎更好 未改 我觉得两种节奏差不多...
  6. 01:43:565(1)remove nc 未改
  7. 01:50:021(1)^ 未改 虽然比起上一处此处属于可改可不改- -不过由于我修改了节奏还是没有决定改
  8. 02:05:972(1)在02:07:871结束 未改 从结果上来看把两个转盘合并成一个转盘没有意义 因为人声出现了两次
  9. 02:53:257(1)试试在02:53:637结束 同前
  10. 03:43:200(1)在03:45:099结束 同前
  11. 03:46:998(2,3,4)没叠好 我确定我叠好了 这是因为Stack Leniency的缘故导致的
  12. 03:49:656(1,2)^ ^
新guestdiff:http://puu.sh/1WbCl
Nichiyouki


Hi, Kanade :3

My mod from your request in my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. reversearrow-none.png file isn't necessary. Please remove it.
  2. BPM on all diff are different by Kanade diff is 157.983, Shining diff is 157.980, and Yui diff is 157.979. Please adjust BPM to equal which I suggest that adjust it to same as Shining diff (157.980). Then don't forget resnap all notes.
  3. PreviewTime on all diff are different. I suggest that put it on 01:39:007
  4. Kiai time on all diffs are different as well. You should adjust it by follow Shining diff.
    1. Kiai #1: Starts on 01:39:007, ends on 01:44:324
    2. Kiai #2: Starts on 01:45:084, ends on 01:50:401
    3. Kiai #3: Starts on 01:51:160, ends on 01:57:237
    4. Kiai #4: Starts on 03:16:234, ends on 03:21:552
    5. Kiai #5: Starts on 03:22:311, ends on 03:27:628
    6. Kiai #6: Starts on 03:28:388, ends on 03:34:465

Yui

  1. CS +1 (3)
  2. You should consider spacing on this diff all notes because spacing on this diff have 0.7x, 0.8x, 0.9x, and 1.6x. However, I suggest that you use spacing about 0.9x.
  3. 00:41:279 (1) - Try don't stack with (6).

    Comment: This diff should fix spacing almost, because some note llike 00:17:921 (2,3) is too far a lot. However, I'm tired. I was able to mod just this.

Shining

  1. CS +1 (4)
  2. 00:16:592 - I hear the rhythm here. You should consider adding a circle, but if you no fix it, you should increase spacing between (4,1).
  3. 00:17:731 (3) - Spacing between (2) and this is too close.
  4. 00:24:567 - add a circle?
  5. 00:26:086 (1) - From considering rhythm. You should use finish instead of clap.
  6. 00:50:393 (1) - Add finish in slider begin
  7. 00:56:470 (1) - ^
  8. 01:14:700 (1) - ^
  9. 01:16:599 - Same as 00:16:592.
  10. 01:26:854 (1) - Same as 00:50:393 (1).
  11. 01:38:437 - I think I hear the rhythm here. You can add a circle on this.
  12. 02:33:697 (1) - Add finish in slider begin?
  13. 02:36:736 (1) - ^
  14. 02:51:928 (1) - Add finish here.
  15. 04:16:242 (3) - Repeat slider one more time.

    Comment: Your mapping is good for me, but I think that you should add finish more than this. For example, somethings I said in modding.

Kanade

  1. 00:16:022 (1) - Remove NC here, but add it on 00:16:782 (2) instead.
  2. 00:16:592 - I hear the rhythm here. You should add a circle.
  3. 00:18:681 (9) - Add NC?
  4. 02:21:339 (5) - Spacing between (4) and this is too close. Please increase spacing.
  5. 00:44:317 (10) - You should add NC here. Then remove it on 00:45:266 (1).
  6. 00:46:976 (1) - Remove NC.
  7. 00:49:634 (1) - The rhythm of note is weird a lot. I suggest that slider (1) end at 00:49:824. Then add a circle on 00:49:919 or slider on 00:49:919 to 00:50:204, and you should remove NC on (1), but add it on 00:50:394 (3) instead.
  8. 00:51:913 (8) - Add NC here, but remove it on next NC.
  9. 00:53:432 (3) - ^
  10. 00:54:951 (3) - Add NC here.
  11. 01:02:547 - Add a circle?
  12. 01:18:878 (2,3,4) - Spacing is too far, and I think that these aren't suitable for using spacing more than 1.5x. Please reduce these.
  13. 03:40:448 (1) - Start spinner at 03:40:543.

    Comment: I will don't say hitsound on mod, but I will comment you can consider what Blackshane was doing in him/her diff, and you should consider NC that I said somethings in modding, too. Because putting NC have to associated with rhythm or vocals.

Hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~
Irie Miyuki
from queue :3

渣比mod请见谅

[General]
  1. tag: 岩沢麻美(いわさわ まさみ)=Iwasawa Masami 另加上yui和gdm 其实我不知道tag里为啥有岩泽 如果是想写gdm团员的话还有入江美雪(irie miyuki)咦我在中枪 关根诗织(sekine shiori)和久子(hisako)
  2. Source: Angel Beats! 叹号别漏了
[Kanade]
  1. 00:16:022 (1,2) - switch NC
  2. 00:18:681 (9) - add NC
  3. 00:32:543 (5) - NC
  4. 00:44:317 (10) - NC
  5. 00:44:317 (10,1) - switch NC
  6. 00:46:976 (1) - remove NC
  7. 00:46:976 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing弄成一样吧
  8. 00:49:634 (1) - 这里是这样一个节奏。。
  9. 00:50:394 (3) - NC
  10. 00:51:913 (10,1) - switch NC
  11. 00:53:432 (3) - NC
  12. 01:02:547 - add a circle
  13. 01:02:927 (1,2) - 这两个形状一样的话好看点
  14. 01:08:624 (4) - NC
  15. 01:09:953 (1) - remove NC
  16. 01:11:472 (5) - NC
  17. 01:15:840 (5) - 感觉这个节奏好点
  18. 01:16:030 - ↑如果上边改了 在这个地方NC
  19. 01:17:549 (3) - NC
  20. 01:18:878 (2,3,4) - 往前移两条线 即2在红线上, 并且我觉得大跳很违和
  21. 01:21:917 (5,6,7) - 同 01:15:840 (5) -
  22. 01:22:676 (1,3) - switch NC
  23. 01:27:234 (3,4,5) - 1没摞在一起 2感觉跟后边三连会误读
  24. 01:29:513 (1,2) - switch NC
  25. 01:30:842 (1) - remove NC
  26. 01:32:931 (7) - NC
  27. 01:34:450 (1,4) - switch NC
  28. 01:39:008 (1,1,1) - ………………这个有点
  29. 01:54:200 (9,1) - switch NC
  30. 01:57:998 (1) - remove nc
  31. 02:01:036 (4,5,6) - 这个跳也有点违和
  32. 02:09:771 (1) - remove nc
  33. 02:40:535 (3,4,5) - spacing弄成一样好点
  34. 02:42:244 (1,2) - switch nc
  35. 02:43:573 (1,4) - switch nc
  36. 02:45:472 (1,2) - switch nc
  37. 02:46:801 (1) - remove nc
  38. 02:48:131 (1,4) - switch nc
  39. 02:49:650 (1) - remove nc
  40. 02:53:448 (1,1) - remove nc, 两个
  41. 02:54:777 (3) - nc
  42. 02:55:727 (1) - remove nc
  43. 02:59:335 (1,3) - switch nc
  44. 03:07:500 (1,1) - 两个nc没必要
  45. 03:10:729 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 觉得这梗不合适 建议换掉 另外03:12:058 可以考虑加个circle
  46. 03:14:337 (1) - remove nc
  47. 03:17:945 (2) - 和03:16:995 (1) - 叠起来吧
  48. 03:34:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 建议只保留前四个 然后后面继续滑条啥的 另外注意连打间的spacing
  49. 03:46:050 (1) - 偷工减料吗ww
  50. 04:01:811 (1,2,3,4) - 这个注意一下间距吧蛮重要的
  51. 04:06:179 (1) - 建议拉远点 但是别太远..- -
  52. 04:08:458 (1,2,3) - 太远
  53. 04:09:217 (1,2) - 太近
  54. 04:09:977 (1,2,3,4) - 太远
  55. 04:13:775 (7,1) - 叠起来?
  56. 04:16:054 (3) - 建议跟鼓点
这么多页mod没人管nc真服气 看的头疼 感觉nc两个键要被按炸

[Shining]

....点进来我就懒了 有点乱.. 开DS把除了jump的部分重新对一遍 然后再检查一下NC吧

[Yui]

如果。。这个是传说中的Normal 那么你还缺少一个Easy
要不把这个改成三星以下

!!! normal和easy一定要开DS做
Strawberry
o/
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Nichiyouki wrote:



Hi, Kanade :3

My mod from your request in my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. reversearrow-none.png file isn't necessary. Please remove it.
  2. BPM on all diff are different by Kanade diff is 157.983, Shining diff is 157.980, and Yui diff is 157.979. Please adjust BPM to equal which I suggest that adjust it to same as Shining diff (157.980). Then don't forget resnap all notes.
  3. PreviewTime on all diff are different. I suggest that put it on 01:39:007
  4. Kiai time on all diffs are different as well. You should adjust it by follow Shining diff.
    1. Kiai #1: Starts on 01:39:007, ends on 01:44:324
    2. Kiai #2: Starts on 01:45:084, ends on 01:50:401
    3. Kiai #3: Starts on 01:51:160, ends on 01:57:237
    4. Kiai #4: Starts on 03:16:234, ends on 03:21:552
    5. Kiai #5: Starts on 03:22:311, ends on 03:27:628
    6. Kiai #6: Starts on 03:28:388, ends on 03:34:465

Yui

  1. CS +1 (3)
  2. You should consider spacing on this diff all notes because spacing on this diff have 0.7x, 0.8x, 0.9x, and 1.6x. However, I suggest that you use spacing about 0.9x.
  3. 00:41:279 (1) - Try don't stack with (6).

    Comment: This diff should fix spacing almost, because some note llike 00:17:921 (2,3) is too far a lot. However, I'm tired. I was able to mod just this.

Shining

  1. CS +1 (4)
  2. 00:16:592 - I hear the rhythm here. You should consider adding a circle, but if you no fix it, you should increase spacing between (4,1).
  3. 00:17:731 (3) - Spacing between (2) and this is too close.
  4. 00:24:567 - add a circle?
  5. 00:26:086 (1) - From considering rhythm. You should use finish instead of clap.
  6. 00:50:393 (1) - Add finish in slider begin
  7. 00:56:470 (1) - ^
  8. 01:14:700 (1) - ^
  9. 01:16:599 - Same as 00:16:592.
  10. 01:26:854 (1) - Same as 00:50:393 (1).
  11. 01:38:437 - I think I hear the rhythm here. You can add a circle on this.
  12. 02:33:697 (1) - Add finish in slider begin?
  13. 02:36:736 (1) - ^
  14. 02:51:928 (1) - Add finish here.
  15. 04:16:242 (3) - Repeat slider one more time.

    Comment: Your mapping is good for me, but I think that you should add finish more than this. For example, somethings I said in modding.

Kanade

  1. 00:16:022 (1) - Remove NC here, but add it on 00:16:782 (2) instead.
  2. 00:16:592 - I hear the rhythm here. You should add a circle.
  3. 00:18:681 (9) - Add NC?
  4. 02:21:339 (5) - Spacing between (4) and this is too close. Please increase spacing.
  5. 00:44:317 (10) - You should add NC here. Then remove it on 00:45:266 (1).
  6. 00:46:976 (1) - Remove NC.
  7. 00:49:634 (1) - The rhythm of note is weird a lot. I suggest that slider (1) end at 00:49:824. Then add a circle on 00:49:919 or slider on 00:49:919 to 00:50:204, and you should remove NC on (1), but add it on 00:50:394 (3) instead.
  8. 00:51:913 (8) - Add NC here, but remove it on next NC.
  9. 00:53:432 (3) - ^
  10. 00:54:951 (3) - Add NC here.
  11. 01:02:547 - Add a circle?
  12. 01:18:878 (2,3,4) - Spacing is too far, and I think that these aren't suitable for using spacing more than 1.5x. Please reduce these.
  13. 03:40:448 (1) - Start spinner at 03:40:543.

    Comment: I will don't say hitsound on mod, but I will comment you can consider what Blackshane was doing in him/her diff, and you should consider NC that I said somethings in modding, too. Because putting NC have to associated with rhythm or vocals.

Hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~
ty it helps a lot :lol:
Kayano

Nichiyouki wrote:

Shining


Kanade你还没有把我的diff更新啊T T
I'm sorry that Kanade haven't downloaded my latest version of my diff...I have changed something at my last ver.
  1. CS +1 (4) I think CS3 is better...At my view...
  2. 00:16:592 - I hear the rhythm here. You should consider adding a circle, but if you no fix it, you should increase spacing between (4,1). Have changed at my last ver
  3. 00:17:731 (3) - Spacing between (2) and this is too close. ^
  4. 00:24:567 - add a circle? Fixed
  5. 00:26:086 (1) - From considering rhythm. You should use finish instead of clap. Nice idea, fixed
  6. 00:50:393 (1) - Add finish in slider begin fixed
  7. 00:56:470 (1) - ^ fixed
  8. 01:14:700 (1) - ^ have fixed at my last ver
  9. 01:16:599 - Same as 00:16:592. fixed
  10. 01:26:854 (1) - Same as 00:50:393 (1). have fixed at my last ver
  11. 01:38:437 - I think I hear the rhythm here. You can add a circle on this. fixed
  12. 02:33:697 (1) - Add finish in slider begin? fixed
  13. 02:36:736 (1) - ^ fixed
  14. 02:51:928 (1) - Add finish here. have fixed at my last ver
  15. 04:16:242 (3) - Repeat slider one more time. I think there is no rhythm at 04:17:002 - so I decide not to at a note here (I have changed slider to a 4-note stream)

    Comment: Your mapping is good for me, but I think that you should add finish more than this. For example, somethings I said in modding.
Thx for mod~It is a really useful mod to me and Kanade
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Irie Miyuki wrote:

from queue :3

渣比mod请见谅

[General]
  1. tag: 岩沢麻美(いわさわ まさみ)=Iwasawa Masami 另加上yui和gdm 其实我不知道tag里为啥有岩泽 如果是想写gdm团员的话还有入江美雪(irie miyuki)咦我在中枪 关根诗织(sekine shiori)和久子(hisako)
  2. Source: Angel Beats! 叹号别漏了
已修改 话说其实最早是因为我除了岩泽和yui其他人名字记不住... 没想到..

[Kanade]
  1. 00:16:022 (1,2) - switch NC
  2. 00:18:681 (9) - add NC
  3. 00:32:543 (5) - NC
  4. 00:44:317 (10) - NC
  5. 00:44:317 (10,1) - switch NC
  6. 00:46:976 (1) - remove NC
  7. 00:46:976 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing弄成一样吧
  8. 00:49:634 (1) - 这里是这样一个节奏。。
  9. 00:50:394 (3) - NC
  10. 00:51:913 (10,1) - switch NC
  11. 00:53:432 (3) - NC
  12. 01:02:547 - add a circle
  13. 01:02:927 (1,2) - 这两个形状一样的话好看点
  14. 01:08:624 (4) - NC
  15. 01:09:953 (1) - remove NC
  16. 01:11:472 (5) - NC
  17. 01:15:840 (5) - 感觉这个节奏好点
  18. 01:16:030 - ↑如果上边改了 在这个地方NC
  19. 01:17:549 (3) - NC
  20. 01:18:878 (2,3,4) - 往前移两条线 即2在红线上, 并且我觉得大跳很违和
  21. 01:21:917 (5,6,7) - 同 01:15:840 (5) - (之前1分15改了 这里没有改 我总感觉这样玩的时候和后面的连贯性好一点点
  22. 01:22:676 (1,3) - switch NC
  23. 01:27:234 (3,4,5) - 1没摞在一起 2感觉跟后边三连会误读 这地方暂时没修改
  24. 01:29:513 (1,2) - switch NC
  25. 01:30:842 (1) - remove NC
  26. 01:32:931 (7) - NC
  27. 01:34:450 (1,4) - switch NC
  28. 01:39:008 (1,1,1) - ………………这个有点
  29. 01:54:200 (9,1) - switch NC
  30. 01:57:998 (1) - remove nc
  31. 02:01:036 (4,5,6) - 这个跳也有点违和
  32. 02:09:771 (1) - remove nc
  33. 02:40:535 (3,4,5) - spacing弄成一样好点
  34. 02:42:244 (1,2) - switch nc
  35. 02:43:573 (1,4) - switch nc
  36. 02:45:472 (1,2) - switch nc
  37. 02:46:801 (1) - remove nc
  38. 02:48:131 (1,4) - switch nc
  39. 02:49:650 (1) - remove nc
  40. 02:53:448 (1,1) - remove nc, 两个
  41. 02:54:777 (3) - nc
  42. 02:55:727 (1) - remove nc
  43. 02:59:335 (1,3) - switch nc
  44. 03:07:500 (1,1) - 两个nc没必要
  45. 03:10:729 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 觉得这梗不合适 建议换掉 另外03:12:058 可以考虑加个circle circle加了 梗暂时还没换。。
  46. 03:14:337 (1) - remove nc
  47. 03:17:945 (2) - 和03:16:995 (1) - 叠起来吧
  48. 03:34:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 建议只保留前四个 然后后面继续滑条啥的 另外注意连打间的spacing 这里连打我保留了5个note
  49. 03:46:050 (1) - 偷工减料吗ww 虽然有人声..但是我觉得这样也行..(偷工减料.. 当时主要注重后面那个伴奏的节奏打击了
  50. 04:01:811 (1,2,3,4) - 这个注意一下间距吧蛮重要的
  51. 04:06:179 (1) - 建议拉远点 但是别太远..- -
  52. 04:08:458 (1,2,3) - 太远
  53. 04:09:217 (1,2) - 太近
  54. 04:09:977 (1,2,3,4) - 太远
  55. 04:13:775 (7,1) - 叠起来?
  56. 04:16:054 (3) - 建议跟鼓点

这么多页mod没人管nc真服气 看的头疼 感觉nc两个键要被按炸基本都按你说的改了 谢谢

!!! normal和easy一定要开DS做
我新手我不知道!!(现在知道了 :(

谢谢mod 帮助改进了很多 有空的话再稍微看下更新版本吧 :roll:
neurosis
mod
LunarSakuya
hi~

General
is nice

Yui
- You should probably try lowering the star rating to around 3 at least
- consider putting hitsounds on every downbeat, feels empty during the main parts =v=

00:15:262 (2) - Whistle like 00:21:339 (2) -
00:17:162 (1) - Place somewhere like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610774, better flow imo
00:17:731 (2) - Make this a single slider like 00:29:885 (3) - , and don't forget to extend to white tick if you do~
00:38:240 (1) - Finish at beginning
00:44:317 (1) - Move a little to the right so it's not touching another note
00:50:394 (1) - Finish at beginning
01:26:854 (1) - Finish
01:34:640 (5) - a little ugly
01:41:286 (1) - move this down more so it's not going through the hp bar
01:44:324 (5) - Finish at end
01:51:161 (1) - ^ at beginning
- there are lots of Finishes that can be added according to the bg music i believe, so I will stop mentioning them
02:01:796 (1) - messy slider points
02:15:468 - Extend the break line so it starts here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610781
02:44:333 (1) - Feels out of place? Maybe delete or map this part; same for the other spinner
02:56:485 (1) - if you keep this, add Finish
03:16:235 (2) - NC?
03:29:908 (4,1) - Spacing issue
04:16:054 (5) - Extend this to the next red tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610790

Shining
- also lots of Finishes missing here imo, add them to the beginnings of kiai time, etc~

01:12:421 (2) - Delete some reverses maybe, seems a bit confusing within the same combo
01:44:704 (5) - Finish, hear bg music
01:51:160 (1) - Finish at beginning
02:09:201 (1) - ^
02:11:100 - Add note, i think it makes rhythm more consistent
02:27:621 (2) - Finish at beginning

Kanade
00:16:972 - Add something here, the rhythm flow feels a bit broken now
00:50:394 (1) - Finish
00:52:673 (1) - ugly slider
00:53:622 - Add note
00:56:470 (1) - Finish at beginning
01:02:547 (8) - Finish
01:07:105 (8,1) - Increase distance between these, I don't think this is a nice place for anti-jump
01:16:599 - Stack a note under the end of (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610811, so it's not an awkward pause
01:19:638 (1) - Start this 1 white tick back at 01:19:258
01:26:474 (1) - Finish at end
01:39:387 (1,1,1,1) - Don't really see a need for so many NCs, maybe delete a couple
02:01:036 (4) - NC, or move further away from (3)
02:09:202 (1) - Finish at beginning
2:15:468 - same as Yui, extend break to here
02:49:650 (2) - Move further away from (1)
2:54:586 - Add note?
03:10:159 (1) - Finish at beginning
03:16:995 (1) - Delete NC, don't think you had it before
03:28:389 (1) - Finish at beginning
03:34:465 (5,6,7) - Make spacing more equal between these http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610817
03:55:735 (5,6) - Highlight and Ctrl + G, gives better spacing imo
04:04:850 (1) - Finish
04:11:686 (1) - Delete NC
04:16:812 - Add note with Finish

I feel like your hitsounds are incomplete in general, especially Finishes

Anyways, sweet map and song!! I love AB! :) Good luck!
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi~

General
is nice

Yui
- You should probably try lowering the star rating to around 3 at least
- consider putting hitsounds on every downbeat, feels empty during the main parts =v=

00:15:262 (2) - Whistle like 00:21:339 (2) -
00:17:162 (1) - Place somewhere like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610774, better flow imo
00:17:731 (2) - Make this a single slider like 00:29:885 (3) - , and don't forget to extend to white tick if you do~
00:38:240 (1) - Finish at beginning
00:44:317 (1) - Move a little to the right so it's not touching another note
00:50:394 (1) - Finish at beginning
01:26:854 (1) - Finish
01:34:640 (5) - a little ugly
01:41:286 (1) - move this down more so it's not going through the hp bar
01:44:324 (5) - Finish at end
01:51:161 (1) - ^ at beginning
- there are lots of Finishes that can be added according to the bg music i believe, so I will stop mentioning them
02:01:796 (1) - messy slider points
02:15:468 - Extend the break line so it starts here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610781
02:44:333 (1) - Feels out of place? Maybe delete or map this part; same for the other spinner
02:56:485 (1) - if you keep this, add Finish
03:16:235 (2) - NC?
03:29:908 (4,1) - Spacing issue
04:16:054 (5) - Extend this to the next red tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610790

Shining
- also lots of Finishes missing here imo, add them to the beginnings of kiai time, etc~

01:12:421 (2) - Delete some reverses maybe, seems a bit confusing within the same combo
01:44:704 (5) - Finish, hear bg music
01:51:160 (1) - Finish at beginning
02:09:201 (1) - ^
02:11:100 - Add note, i think it makes rhythm more consistent
02:27:621 (2) - Finish at beginning

Kanade
00:16:972 - Add something here, the rhythm flow feels a bit broken now
00:50:394 (1) - Finish
00:52:673 (1) - ugly slider
00:53:622 - Add note
00:56:470 (1) - Finish at beginning
01:02:547 (8) - Finish
01:07:105 (8,1) - Increase distance between these, I don't think this is a nice place for anti-jump
01:16:599 - Stack a note under the end of (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610811, so it's not an awkward pause
01:19:638 (1) - Start this 1 white tick back at 01:19:258
01:26:474 (1) - Finish at end
01:39:387 (1,1,1,1) - Don't really see a need for so many NCs, maybe delete a couple
02:01:036 (4) - NC, or move further away from (3)
02:09:202 (1) - Finish at beginning
2:15:468 - same as Yui, extend break to here
02:49:650 (2) - Move further away from (1)
2:54:586 - Add note?
03:10:159 (1) - Finish at beginning
03:16:995 (1) - Delete NC, don't think you had it before
03:28:389 (1) - Finish at beginning
03:34:465 (5,6,7) - Make spacing more equal between these http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/610817
03:55:735 (5,6) - Highlight and Ctrl + G, gives better spacing imo
04:04:850 (1) - Finish
04:11:686 (1) - Delete NC
04:16:812 - Add note with Finish

I feel like your hitsounds are incomplete in general, especially Finishes

Anyways, sweet map and song!! I love AB! :) Good luck!
Almost Fixed , TY ;)
Kayano

LunarSakuya wrote:

Shining
- also lots of Finishes missing here imo, add them to the beginnings of kiai time, etc~

01:12:421 (2) - Delete some reverses maybe, seems a bit confusing within the same combo fixed
01:44:704 (5) - Finish, hear bg music not fixed
01:51:160 (1) - Finish at beginning fixed
02:09:201 (1) - ^ fixed
02:11:100 - Add note, i think it makes rhythm more consistent not fixed
02:27:621 (2) - Finish at beginning not fixed, but i finish at beginning of #6 kiai
new diff: http://puu.sh/22lr9
Kayano
WTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF, I lost the modpost before I finish modding. I'm trying to bring up what I have written

  1. Red - Must fixed
  2. Purple - Should fixed
  3. Black - Just suggestion
General
  1. Map's skin has only score and score bar, it is quite weird. You'd better get skin of hitcircle and spinner. If you add hitcircle's skin then you should add "SliderBorder : 255,255,255" to all diffs
  2. You got the normal hitsounds while all diffs use soft hitsounds. Delete them
  3. You got countdown skin but countdown is not enable. Delete them or enable countdown (I prefer the first)
  4. All your diffs (except my guestdiff) got non-integer offset
    [TimingPoints]
    1780.25466530952,379.794910748196,4,2,0,100,1,0
    change to
    [TimingPoints]
    1780,379.794910748196,4,2,0,60,1,0
  5. Your volume is different at your diffs then you'd better change them into a same kind, you can get idea though my setting at my diff
  6. Personally I dislike your background but I'm just mention it and you don't need to change
  7. All your bookmarks can be deleted
Yuri
  1. All your sliders are broken! You must reupload this diff and check where is wrong.
    All I can tell you is your code in this .osu is wrong
    160,280,14313,2,0,P|40:192|176:88,2,NaN
    This NaN means your slider got 0 length
Yui
  1. Blanks like 00:18:871 - to 00:20:010 - and 00:31:024 - to 00:32:163 - are annoying me. There are still some parts in this diff. EDIT:I strongly suggest you to fill in those blanks because they are terrible and break the music uncomfortably
  2. 00:17:731 (2) - here you can use a 1/1 slider and a 1/2 slider. A whole 2/1 slider seem to strange here and you miss two rhythms
  3. 00:38:240 (1) - why finished here? delete it
  4. 00:46:785 (1) - seperate to a 3/2 slider and a 1/2
  5. 00:50:394 (1) - delete finish
  6. 00:50:394 (1,2) - put 00:51:153 (2) - at 00:50:963 - and add note at 00:51:533 -
  7. 00:51:913 (3,4) - ^
  8. 00:53:432 (5) - NC
  9. 00:53:812 - add note here
  10. 00:57:800 (3) - like 01:00:838 (4) - and delete 00:58:559 (4) - ?
  11. 01:07:484 - here you miss rhythm, you can put two 1/2 slider here to 01:08:244 - and add note at 01:08:624 -
  12. 01:26:474 - add note here
  13. 01:29:512 - ^
  14. 01:36:728 (1) - change to a 1/2 slider with 2 repeats to suit lyrics here
  15. 01:39:008 (1) - devide into two 1/1 slider is better
  16. 01:41:286 (1,2) - ^
  17. 01:44:324 (5) - delete finish
  18. 01:50:781 - note here
  19. 01:51:161 (1) - delete finish at end
  20. 01:53:060 - add note
  21. 01:56:858 - ^
  22. 01:57:237 (1) - delete finish, that sounds terrible
  23. 02:01:416 (6) - you can delete this note due to there is no special rthyme
  24. 02:03:694 (2,3,4,1) - I think you can put one spinner here or put two like my diff, that's better than yours
  25. 02:12:240 (1,2,3,4) - delete whistle
  26. 02:15:468 - add note
  27. 02:42:624 (1) - you may delete NC here
  28. 02:48:700 (4) - NC
  29. 02:50:410 (7) - ^
  30. 02:53:257 (2) - devide into two 1/1 sliders
  31. 03:03:702 - add note
  32. 03:04:082 (1) - I don't think this simple slider suit this rthyme, you can put a 1/1 slider at 03:04:081 - and a 3/2 at 03:04:651 - . Also you can do this from
    03:05:600 - to 03:06:740 -
  33. 03:07:121 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^, but you can have some changes on mapping such as put a 1/2 slider at 03:07:499 - and a note at 03:08:069 - , in one word, to suit song and rthyme better
  34. 03:13:956 (2) - a 1/2 slider with 2 repeats
  35. 03:15:476 (1) - delete finish, that is too loud
  36. 03:16:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too simple this part, I suggest you to use a 2/1 slider at 03:17:755 (3) - and a note at 03:18:893 - to make this part better to play. The same at 03:22:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
  37. 03:19:274 (5) - NC
  38. 03:21:172 - note
  39. 03:33:895 (6) - Here is no rthyme at 03:33:895 - so a note at 03:34:085 - is enough
  40. 03:35:985 (3,1,2) - maybe you can follow what you done at 01:57:237 (1,2,3,4,5) - ,that suits song better
  41. 03:49:277 (1) - NC move to 03:50:036 (2) -
  42. 03:54:785 (5) - a note at 03:54:784 - and a 1/2 at 03:55:164 -
  43. 03:55:733 (6) - NC
  44. 03:56:304 (7) - slider end at 03:56:873 -
  45. 03:57:823 (10) - a 1/1 + a note
  46. 04:02:950 (4) - too many repeats. You should devide them into a 1/2 + two 1/2 with 2 repeats
  47. 04:05:228 - note here
  48. 04:15:294 (3,4) - delete whistle
Shining
  1. I found some overlap error in my guestdiff, I'll send you a message about new link about my diff
Kanade
  1. I'm not good at Insane modding, I just took a look at this diff
  2. Generally speaking, I suggest you to jump more at this diff due to there seems to be no much stream in this song
  3. 00:21:339 (5) - This slider is touch bottom and seem to be agly
  4. 00:22:858 (1) - devide into a 1/1 + a note
  5. 00:33:113 (3) - a note here is enough
  6. 00:34:252 (6,7) - a 1/1 slider suits rthyme more
  7. 00:35:771 (3) - delete note
  8. 00:38:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I guess I have told you what to do with this part, you can check our chat record
  9. 00:42:608 (6) - don't use slider with too many repeats in Insane. And there are not repeats' rthyme
  10. 00:48:115 (1,2) - two 1/2 + a note is better
    EDIT: The following are added today
  11. 00:49:064 (3,4) - If I were you, I will change the place of this two note for a suitable play, btw, I don't support this jump
  12. 00:49:919 (7) - break into a 1/2 slider and a note is better?
  13. 00:52:672 (1,2) - a note first and a 1/1 slider followed sounds better
  14. 00:53:812 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This part is not suit the music, I suggest you to put like this
    btw, you can add note at 00:54:761 - ,that sound not bad too
  15. 00:56:470 (1) - delete finish
  16. 00:58:369 - you missed rthyme here
  17. 01:00:838 (6) - this part is out of rthyme. I heard rthyme at 01:01:028 - and 01:01:313 - .You'd better try to fix them
  18. 01:01:882 (2) - delete note
  19. 01:10:523 (6) - ^?
  20. 01:21:917 (5) - I didn't hear rthyme on the beginning of the slider... just a note at 01:22:106 - is ok
  21. 01:22:297 (6) - NC and delete clap
  22. 01:22:676 (8,9) - this part has rthyme just on the red line, not white line
  23. 01:25:525 (2,3,4,5,1) - I suggest you to add note at 01:25:335 - and 01:26:284 - then delete finish at 01:26:474 (1) - and add whistle
  24. 01:39:007 (1,2,3,4,1) - I was a little wonder what you want to do... Stream is not a good choice here in my view
  25. 01:43:565 (7) - NC
  26. 01:49:452 - add note
  27. 01:51:161 (1) - don't use slider like that in this diff because this is Insane diff and you have a lot of choices to make map more interesting to play
  28. 01:52:680 (3) - NC
  29. 01:56:099 (3,4,5) - delete finish at 3 and 5
  30. 02:06:543 (1) - put it forward to start at 02:06:352 -
  31. 02:09:202 (1) - delete finish at end
  32. 02:13:949 (2) - a note
  33. from 02:27:621 - to 02:40:154 - you can map here or it will be a 25-second break which is tooooo long. You'd better do like this at other diffs
  34. 02:42:054 (7) - delete note and 02:42:244 (7) - make it just as 02:41:484 (5,6) - ?
  35. 02:48:131 (5) - delete note
  36. 02:53:448 (4) - bad stream, find another way to place note
  37. 03:04:842 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  38. 03:10:159 (1) - delete finish at end
  39. 03:13:577 (4) - whistle
  40. 03:21:933 (6) - delete finish
  41. 03:43:391 (2) - ugly slider
  42. 03:46:050 (1) - ^
  43. 03:51:177 (5) - NC?
  44. 04:04:470 (5) - delete one repeat or put the following slider near to it
  45. I donno why u use so many spinner in this diff. I suggest you to change some of them.. Some part is more suitable to place notes than a simple spinner
  46. Hitsounds ought to be remade and you should just use finish in some long-white line
That's all
Gamu
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