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Girls Dead Monster - 23:50

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Tachibana Kanade
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Tachibana Kanade
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年11月20日 at 23:52:25

Artist: Girls Dead Monster
Title: 23:50
Source: Angel Beats!
Tags: Lisa Iwasawa Masami Yui Irie Miyuki Sekine Shiori Hisako Blackshane
BPM: 157.98
Filesize: 7219kb
Play Time: 04:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.8 stars, 275 notes)
  2. Hard (3.55 stars, 583 notes)
  3. Normal (2.32 stars, 458 notes)
Download: Girls Dead Monster - 23:50
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Girls Dead Monster&AB最高~
嗯很多年了...
Easy,Hard me
Normal Kayano
Last edited by Tachibana Kanade , edited 125 times in total.
jesse7419
405 posts
Joined March 2011
jesse7419
IRC timing check
03:49 Tachibana Kanade: 再有 放note的時候你是按照一百的速度來放嗎
03:49 Tachibana Kanade: 我感覺老放不准節奏。。
03:49 jesse7419: 可能offset bpm不對吧
03:49 jesse7419: 不然不會節奏不對
03:50 Tachibana Kanade: 能幫我看看11：50的bpm對不對麼..
03:51 jesse7419: 1. Offset: 1,747ms BPM: 158.00
03:52 Tachibana Kanade: 居然差得不太多
03:52 Tachibana Kanade: XD
03:52 Tachibana Kanade: 好了
03:52 jesse7419: BPM一定要對 多一點到最後會完全不對= =
03:53 Tachibana Kanade: thx
03:53 jesse7419: 不會

加油 :>
Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

jesse7419 wrote:

IRC timing check
03:49 Tachibana Kanade: 再有 放note的時候你是按照一百的速度來放嗎
03:49 Tachibana Kanade: 我感覺老放不准節奏。。
03:49 jesse7419: 可能offset bpm不對吧
03:49 jesse7419: 不然不會節奏不對
03:50 Tachibana Kanade: 能幫我看看11：50的bpm對不對麼..
03:51 jesse7419: 1. Offset: 1,747ms BPM: 158.00
03:52 Tachibana Kanade: 居然差得不太多
03:52 Tachibana Kanade: XD
03:52 Tachibana Kanade: 好了
03:52 jesse7419: BPM一定要對 多一點到最後會完全不對= =
03:53 Tachibana Kanade: thx
03:53 jesse7419: 不會

加油 :>
我要一天搞定 -。-
Athena Tennos
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Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos
我就说new mapper怎么把timing测的那么准的~>_>!!~ :) :D
Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade
A little IRC mod

Athena Tennos wrote:

我就说new mapper怎么把timing测的那么准的~>_>!!~ :) :D
Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

把这个copy到第一个post上去把。。。
话说怎么把你的map信息也copy了一遍。。。orz
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
IRC mod ~

09:41 Tachibana Kanade: alacat> can u test play my map if u have time ? just for fun :p
09:41 *Tachibana Kanade is listening to Girls Dead Monster - 23:50
09:41 alacat: ok :D
09:41 Tachibana Kanade: arigato!
09:41 alacat: DLing ~
09:42 alacat: go :3
09:42 Tachibana Kanade: thank you
09:44 Tachibana Kanade: haha just created the map yesterday
09:46 Tachibana Kanade: thank you for playing XD
09:46 alacat: <- noob ;w;
09:46 Tachibana Kanade: im noob in map :p
09:46 Tachibana Kanade: i like this song
09:46 alacat: >.<
09:47 Tachibana Kanade: any suggestion? >
09:47 alacat: IRC ~ okey ?
09:47 Tachibana Kanade: okay~
09:47 alacat: offset , okey >w<
09:48 Tachibana Kanade: my friend helps me test offset haha
09:49 alacat: 00:16:557 (2)- add clap ? you should put hit sound imo >.<
09:49 alacat: 00:19:595 (1)- ^
09:49 Tachibana Kanade: only that note add clap?
09:50 alacat: 00:24:532 (1)- spinner's end ~ How about here ? 00:26:051-
09:50 Tachibana Kanade: already added
09:50 Tachibana Kanade: okay~
09:51 alacat: 00:27:380 (3,4)- perfect stack ? :3
09:51 alacat: 00:27:000 (2)- slider end >w<
09:52 alacat: 00:30:608 (10)- try to move y : 48
09:52 alacat: 00:35:164 (7)- add new combo ? :3
09:53 alacat: 00:38:202 (1)- add finish on slider head ?
09:54 alacat: 00:41:810 (1)- dont need new combo here imo :3
09:55 alacat: 00:58:519 (3,4,5)- try this ?
09:55 alacat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539116
09:56 alacat: 01:02:886 (9)- start new combo here ? start vocal here >.<
09:57 alacat: 01:13:424 (1)- start : 01:13:139-
09:57 alacat: ^ and add finish
09:58 Tachibana Kanade: so busy .. haha
09:58 Tachibana Kanade: thanks..
09:58 alacat: 01:27:190 (3,4,5)- perfect stack :3
09:58 Tachibana Kanade: still work on it
09:58 alacat: okey :D
09:58 alacat: should i wait ? :3
10:03 Tachibana Kanade: okay now..
10:03 alacat: :3
10:04 alacat: 01:32:126 (1,2)- add whistle ? same as here.01:30:418 (7,8)-
10:05 alacat: 01:33:835 (7,8,9)- m~ , it is better to put spacing around 1.10x >.<
10:06 alacat: 01:37:823 (1,1)- !?
10:06 alacat: 01:38:962- plz check this timing lol ww
10:08 Tachibana Kanade: done!
10:08 alacat: 02:05:639- same as above >.<
10:09 alacat: 02:09:152 (3)- want to put more spacing >< maybe ... confusing many players
10:10 alacat: 02:15:038 (3)- move to y:288 ?
10:10 alacat: 02:45:038- add note ? :3
10:11 Tachibana Kanade: 02:09:152 (3)- put more spacing ?
10:12 Tachibana Kanade: can u send a picture~~
10:12 Tachibana Kanade: >
10:12 alacat: kk
10:13 alacat: bad suggestions ;w;
10:13 alacat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539131
10:14 alacat: 02:50:449 (1)- start : 02:50:354-
10:15 alacat: ^ 02:56:620 (1)- start : 02:56:430-
10:17 alacat: 02:58:519 (2)- move to x:148 ?
10:17 alacat: I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical :3
10:17 Tachibana Kanade: yes~
10:17 alacat: 03:04:025- check this timing >.<
10:18 alacat: 03:07:443- ^
10:18 alacat: 03:07:823 (1)- try to remove one repeat ?
10:18 alacat: 03:10:101 (1)- add finish slider head
10:19 alacat: 03:12:949 (1)- remove new combo ~
10:19 alacat: 03:16:177- check ~
10:20 alacat: 03:28:329 (1)- add finish slider head ~
10:21 alacat: 03:48:835- try this ~ ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539144
10:23 alacat: 04:03:171- mm ~ it doesn't follow the music ;w; try this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539146
10:23 alacat: 04:06:114 (5)- add new combo ~
10:23 alacat: 04:13:709 (4,1)- perfect stack :3
10:24 alacat: 04:15:987 (3,1)- check >.<
10:27 alacat: finish my suggestion ~ ^^
10:27 Tachibana Kanade: thanks alacat.. still work on it..
10:27 Tachibana Kanade: u help me a lot ~
10:29 alacat: np ~ :3 good luck >w<
10:29 Tachibana Kanade: please reply in the post
10:30 Tachibana Kanade: must give alacat kd!!
10:30 alacat: ok xD

加油 :)
Hikaros
197 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikaros
such a good map, tried it today again and it was perfect imo ><
Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Hikaros wrote:

such a good map, tried it today again and it was perfect imo ><
ty
still work on it
btw I lost my 1st solo RANKED game lol
_nara_
71 posts
Joined September 2011
_nara_
[Hard]
00:20:164 (16) remove this? its better like this
00:32:316 (5) ^
01:07:253 (10) ^
01:12:000 till 01:12:949 are you keeping the hitsounds??
01:37:063 (3,4) change hitsounds to finish+whistle?
01:43:329 (6,7,8,9,10) finish?
01:56:051 (3,5) finish?
02:49:975 (3,4) change to finish + whistle?
02:59:088 (5) remove this?
03:05:924 (10,11,1,2,3) finish?
03:20:924 (1,2,3,4,5,1) ^
03:27:000 (2,3,4,5) ^
03:28:329 (1) remove all hitsounds?
03:52:633 (1,2,3,4) finish?
03:58:139 (6,7) ^
04:12:949 (4,5) ^
04:13:139 missing circle or what?
04:15:987 (3) finish?

so i think more good if u give more hitsounds that match with the song
remove Girls Dead Monster in Tags box bcs u write it already in Artist
overall is good
dont forget to set the preview point
and btw if u make the hitsounds u should rlly use it at all bcs i see u even not putting any hitsound u made,
if u dont rlly use it pls just remove it bcs it makes ur map more heavier. take a look at the folder.
Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

_nara_ wrote:

[Hard]
00:20:164 (16) remove this? its better like this
00:32:316 (5) ^
01:07:253 (10) ^
01:12:000 till 01:12:949 are you keeping the hitsounds??
01:37:063 (3,4) change hitsounds to finish+whistle?
01:43:329 (6,7,8,9,10) finish?
01:56:051 (3,5) finish?
02:49:975 (3,4) change to finish + whistle?
02:59:088 (5) remove this?
03:05:924 (10,11,1,2,3) finish?
03:20:924 (1,2,3,4,5,1) ^
03:27:000 (2,3,4,5) ^
03:28:329 (1) remove all hitsounds?
03:52:633 (1,2,3,4) finish?
03:58:139 (6,7) ^
04:12:949 (4,5) ^
04:13:139 missing circle or what?
04:15:987 (3) finish?

so i think more good if u give more hitsounds that match with the song
remove Girls Dead Monster in Tags box bcs u write it already in Artist
overall is good
dont forget to set the preview point
and btw if u make the hitsounds u should rlly use it at all bcs i see u even not putting any hitsound u made,
if u dont rlly use it pls just remove it bcs it makes ur map more heavier. take a look at the folder.
thanks! it helps me a lot.
Still work on map itself
Will make hitsounds later
neurosis
508 posts
Joined March 2012
neurosis
kanade moe :3
Colined AFK
2 posts
Joined August 2012
Colined AFK
喵喵~从来没在这上面留过言额~~
快点rank来扛榜吧~
Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade
later please test it <3 it is better now

emmy wrote:

kanade moe :3
Hikaros
197 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikaros
i still find it perfect haha i didnt feel anything weird in any stream/beat/slider



no SS cuz i suck lol.

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

btw I lost my 1st solo RANKED game lol
i recomend you to duo queue instead hahaha
Lanchery
10 posts
Joined February 2011
Lanchery
Yui

00:38:202 - slider
00:53:962 - slider
00:54:152 - 這邊兩個去掉看看
00:55:861 - finish
00:56:051 - finish
01:18:551 - 這邊沒對齊
01:18:930 - ^
01:26:905 - 到01:34:690 - 調整一下吧
01:58:044 - 這邊也是
02:10:196 - 到02:15:133 - 一樣調整
02:40:196 - 04:16:082 (13) - 到結束 把節奏往後移動到白線and紅線
Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

ps3station44 wrote:

Yui

00:38:202 - slider
00:53:962 - slider
00:54:152 - 這邊兩個去掉看看
00:55:861 - finish
00:56:051 - finish
01:18:551 - 這邊沒對齊
01:18:930 - ^
01:26:905 - 到01:34:690 - 調整一下吧
01:58:044 - 這邊也是
02:10:196 - 到02:15:133 - 一樣調整
02:40:196 - 04:16:082 (13) - 到結束 把節奏往後移動到白線and紅線
我把這圖做成翔了
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Kayano
[General]
这首歌的BPM是157.98
offset+40 第一根红线在1787ms处

以下mod是在还没有调整BPM和offset的情况下的mod

[Yui]
HDR+1 AR+1 OD+1（如果你想把它做成Normal难度的话可以不用变 这个diff现在更偏向于Hard）
00:24:911 (7) - NC
00:26:430 (11) - ^
00:28:899 (15) - ^
00:34:975 (7) - ^
00:53:392 (9) - ^
00:53:392 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 这部分感觉很难受 因为音乐在上面没有拍点 换成这样
00:58:946 (5,6,7) - 换成一个带回转的滑条
00:59:468 (7) - NC
01:05:354 (8) - ^
01:11:430 (7) - ^
01:16:082 (1) - NC应该在 01:17:506 (4) -
01:23:582 (7) - NC
01:38:962 (8) - NC kiai开始 预览点
01:41:240 (11) - NC
01:48:076 (8) - ^
01:54:152 (7) - ^
02:00:228 (6) - ^
02:03:645 (9) - ^
02:05:924 (13) - ^
02:15:418 - kiai结束
02:42:664 (8) - NC
02:48:740 (9) - ^
02:54:816 (5) - ^
02:56:905 (9) - ^?
03:00:892 (8) - ^
03:04:120 (15) - ^
03:08:677 (5) - ^?
03:10:196 (8) - ^
03:12:664 (1) - NC提前到 03:11:715 (11) - ？然后在03:13:994 (4) - NC
03:16:183 - 加绿线 kiai#2开始 （其实你到后面就已经开始用蓝线了 这就是offset没设置好 后面会有初步修改好的osb文件）
03:18:551 (6) - NC
03:20:829 (11) - ^
03:24:626 (5) - ^
03:26:145 (8) - ^
03:30:702 (6) - ^
03:32:981 (11) - ^
03:37:538 (7) - ^
03:40:481 - 加绿线 kiai#2结束
03:58:804 (7) - NC
04:03:361 (6) - ^
04:05:259 (1) - NC移到 04:04:880 (11) -
04:09:152 (1) - NC移到 04:07:823 (7) -
04:13:994 (8) - NC
04:16:082 (13) - NC 去掉结尾的finish音效

后面一个难度也有很多问题- -快到饭点了肚子饿了不想check了我会说么 :roll:
Yui难度稍稍修改了一下的osb http://puu.sh/1SPux

今晚我会在线 可以找我ircmod 这两个难度的问题还是蛮多的T T ircmod方便些0 0

亲测我上传的那个版本还有些不正确的地方等我吃完饭再说- -大概5点40分
Last edited by Kayano , edited 1 time in total.
Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Blackshane wrote:

[General]
这首歌的BPM是157.98
offset+40 第一根红线在1787ms处

以下mod是在还没有调整BPM和offset的情况下的mod

[Yui]
HDR+1 AR+1 OD+1（如果你想把它做成Normal难度的话可以不用变 这个diff现在更偏向于Hard）
00:24:911 (7) - NC
00:26:430 (11) - ^
00:28:899 (15) - ^
00:34:975 (7) - ^
00:53:392 (9) - ^
00:53:392 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 这部分感觉很难受 因为音乐在上面没有拍点 换成这样
00:58:946 (5,6,7) - 换成一个带回转的滑条
00:59:468 (7) - NC
01:05:354 (8) - ^
01:11:430 (7) - ^
01:16:082 (1) - NC应该在 01:17:506 (4) -
01:23:582 (7) - NC
01:38:962 (8) - NC kiai开始 预览点
01:41:240 (11) - NC
01:48:076 (8) - ^
01:54:152 (7) - ^
02:00:228 (6) - ^
02:03:645 (9) - ^
02:05:924 (13) - ^
02:15:418 - kiai结束
02:42:664 (8) - NC
02:48:740 (9) - ^
02:54:816 (5) - ^
02:56:905 (9) - ^?
03:00:892 (8) - ^
03:04:120 (15) - ^
03:08:677 (5) - ^?
03:10:196 (8) - ^
03:12:664 (1) - NC提前到 03:11:715 (11) - ？然后在03:13:994 (4) - NC
03:16:183 - 加绿线 kiai#2开始 （其实你到后面就已经开始用蓝线了 这就是offset没设置好 后面会有初步修改好的osb文件）
03:18:551 (6) - NC
03:20:829 (11) - ^
03:24:626 (5) - ^
03:26:145 (8) - ^
03:30:702 (6) - ^
03:32:981 (11) - ^
03:37:538 (7) - ^
03:40:481 - 加绿线 kiai#2结束
03:58:804 (7) - NC
04:03:361 (6) - ^
04:05:259 (1) - NC移到 04:04:880 (11) -
04:09:152 (1) - NC移到 04:07:823 (7) -
04:13:994 (8) - NC
04:16:082 (13) - NC 去掉结尾的finish音效

后面一个难度也有很多问题- -快到饭点了肚子饿了不想check了我会说么 :roll:
Yui难度稍稍修改了一下的osb http://puu.sh/1SPux

今晚我会在线 可以找我ircmod 这两个难度的问题还是蛮多的T T ircmod方便些0 0
謝謝 晚上上线慢慢改
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Kayano

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

謝謝 晚上上线慢慢改
好的
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Kayano
挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Blackshane wrote:

挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
今晚能上线么..我复制错把改好的覆盖了 :cry:
jesse7419
405 posts
Joined March 2011
jesse7419
好努力!!

看來真要踏上神mapper之路了 \:D/

加油!!

原來你有PM我MOD喔= =... 那這佔mod位
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Kayano

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

Blackshane wrote:

挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
今晚能上线么..我复制错把改好的覆盖了 :cry:
抱歉今晚没法上电脑（其实昨晚也是因为断网才没有办法上，然后就去做GD了。。）
可能的话明晚应该能上。。。大概吧。。GD还得在等两天
还有可能的话吧Yui难度改简单点变成N难度因为要想rank一定要有一个E或者N的难度 而我的GD是Hard
还有Insane的难度名改成Kanade 比Tenshi好而且是你的ID的一部分（这和日卡的I难度叫Rika差不多）
其他问题等下次电脑上mod再说吧
Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Blackshane wrote:

挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
今晚能上线么..我复制错把改好的覆盖了 :cry:[/quote]

抱歉今晚没法上电脑（其实昨晚也是因为断网才没有办法上，然后就去做GD了。。）
可能的话明晚应该能上。。。大概吧。。GD还得在等两天
还有可能的话吧Yui难度改简单点变成N难度因为要想rank一定要有一个E或者N的难度 而我的GD是Hard
还有Insane的难度名改成Kanade 比Tenshi好而且是你的ID的一部分（这和日卡的I难度叫Rika差不多）
其他问题等下次电脑上mod再说吧[/quote]

好的 謝謝
Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

jesse7419 wrote:

好努力!!

看來真要踏上神mapper之路了 \:D/

加油!!

原來你有PM我MOD喔= =... 那這佔mod位
你先不要看 現在很爛
考完試過段時間我覺得大體可以了再給你 :roll:
Irie Miyuki
388 posts
Joined October 2010
Irie Miyuki
卧槽GDM 马一发 等我有空了来((
Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Irie Miyuki wrote:

卧槽GDM 马一发 等我有空了来((
正需要mod 谢谢了
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Melt
hi :3
mod as request

[General]
  1. PreviewTime不一致
  2. 如果走rank向的话还缺一个3.0星以下的diff
  3. 最好让的你每个diff在同一时间点结束
[Yui]
  1. normal难度的话(话说这是normal难度吧)还是建议大体上固定一个ds来做 像00:17:921(2,3)这一类的ds变化会让新手很不适应
  2. 00:21:719(2)换成普通的slider怎么样
  3. 00:55:141(2)滑条尾出界了
  4. 01:16:030(4)remove nc 然后在01:17:549(3)加上nc
  5. 02:04:454(3)出界了
  6. 02:06:353(1)这个spin可以延长到02:07:872 然后删掉02:08:062(1)
  7. 03:02:563(1)这个也出界了o.o
  8. 03:10:729(2)^ 还有这个slider在03:11:108结束好像更好
  9. 03:23:072(2)^
  10. 03:40:733(1)spin在03:40:543开始 03:42:821结束
  11. 03:48:898(1)这一类超出范围就不提了 自己再检查一下吧
[Shining]
  1. 00:16:402(4)这一段试试这个节奏呢
    SPOILER
  2. 00:23:808(2)repeat两次就可以了
  3. 00:26:086(4)nc 删掉后面那一个
  4. 01:12:421(2)repeat两次就可以了
  5. 01:16:029(3)在01:16:409结束似乎更好
  6. 01:43:565(1)remove nc
  7. 01:50:021(1)^
  8. 02:05:972(1)在02:07:871结束
  9. 02:53:257(1)试试在02:53:637结束
  10. 03:43:200(1)在03:45:099结束
  11. 03:46:998(2,3,4)没叠好
  12. 03:49:656(1,2)^
[Kanade]
  1. 00:29:124(10)nc
  2. 00:38:809(3,4)没叠好
  3. 00:49:633(1,2)^
  4. 01:02:166(7)这个slider替换成circle
  5. 02:02:552(1)remove nc
  6. 03:20:028(1)^
  7. 03:21:927(1)^
还有就是音效的话很多地方也缺,有些地方听起来也不舒服(比如finish连用什么的)
建议多看看别人的图,或者咨询一下身边的神mapper什么的,我在线的时候也可以pm我
不过我音效也很烂就是了:P

差不多就这样了,加油 :3
Chairman Miao
2 posts
Joined March 2012
Chairman Miao
加油加油 支持小奏大叔 :)
Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Melt wrote:

hi :3
mod as request

[General]
  1. PreviewTime不一致
  2. 如果走rank向的话还缺一个3.0星以下的diff
  3. 最好让的你每个diff在同一时间点结束
[Yui]
  1. normal难度的话(话说这是normal难度吧)还是建议大体上固定一个ds来做 像00:17:921(2,3)这一类的ds变化会让新手很不适应
  2. 00:21:719(2)换成普通的slider怎么样
  3. 00:55:141(2)滑条尾出界了
  4. 01:16:030(4)remove nc 然后在01:17:549(3)加上nc
  5. 02:04:454(3)出界了
  6. 02:06:353(1)这个spin可以延长到02:07:872 然后删掉02:08:062(1)
  7. 03:02:563(1)这个也出界了o.o
  8. 03:10:729(2)^ 还有这个slider在03:11:108结束好像更好
  9. 03:23:072(2)^
  10. 03:40:733(1)spin在03:40:543开始 03:42:821结束
  11. 03:48:898(1)这一类超出范围就不提了 自己再检查一下吧
[Shining]
  1. 00:16:402(4)这一段试试这个节奏呢
    SPOILER
  2. 00:23:808(2)repeat两次就可以了
  3. 00:26:086(4)nc 删掉后面那一个
  4. 01:12:421(2)repeat两次就可以了
  5. 01:16:029(3)在01:16:409结束似乎更好
  6. 01:43:565(1)remove nc
  7. 01:50:021(1)^
  8. 02:05:972(1)在02:07:871结束
  9. 02:53:257(1)试试在02:53:637结束
  10. 03:43:200(1)在03:45:099结束
  11. 03:46:998(2,3,4)没叠好
  12. 03:49:656(1,2)^
[Kanade]
  1. 00:29:124(10)nc
  2. 00:38:809(3,4)没叠好
  3. 00:49:633(1,2)^
  4. 01:02:166(7)这个slider替换成circle
  5. 02:02:552(1)remove nc
  6. 03:20:028(1)^
  7. 03:21:927(1)^
还有就是音效的话很多地方也缺,有些地方听起来也不舒服(比如finish连用什么的)
建议多看看别人的图,或者咨询一下身边的神mapper什么的,我在线的时候也可以pm我
不过我音效也很烂就是了:P

差不多就这样了,加油 :3
大体修好了
感谢
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Kayano

Melt wrote:

hi :3
mod as request

[Shining]
  1. 00:16:402(4)这一段试试这个节奏呢
    SPOILER
    已改 不过有些变化
  2. 00:23:808(2)repeat两次就可以了 未改 因为感觉三次repeat更合节拍
  3. 00:26:086(4)nc 删掉后面那一个 未改 因为这里是一个完整的正方形跳跃而且在下一个位置NC也并不是不合节拍
  4. 01:12:421(2)repeat两次就可以了 同前
  5. 01:16:029(3)在01:16:409结束似乎更好 未改 我觉得两种节奏差不多...
  6. 01:43:565(1)remove nc 未改
  7. 01:50:021(1)^ 未改 虽然比起上一处此处属于可改可不改- -不过由于我修改了节奏还是没有决定改
  8. 02:05:972(1)在02:07:871结束 未改 从结果上来看把两个转盘合并成一个转盘没有意义 因为人声出现了两次
  9. 02:53:257(1)试试在02:53:637结束 同前
  10. 03:43:200(1)在03:45:099结束 同前
  11. 03:46:998(2,3,4)没叠好 我确定我叠好了 这是因为Stack Leniency的缘故导致的
  12. 03:49:656(1,2)^ ^
新guestdiff：http://puu.sh/1WbCl
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki


Hi, Kanade :3

My mod from your request in my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. reversearrow-none.png file isn't necessary. Please remove it.
  2. BPM on all diff are different by Kanade diff is 157.983, Shining diff is 157.980, and Yui diff is 157.979. Please adjust BPM to equal which I suggest that adjust it to same as Shining diff (157.980). Then don't forget resnap all notes.
  3. PreviewTime on all diff are different. I suggest that put it on 01:39:007
  4. Kiai time on all diffs are different as well. You should adjust it by follow Shining diff.
    1. Kiai #1: Starts on 01:39:007, ends on 01:44:324
    2. Kiai #2: Starts on 01:45:084, ends on 01:50:401
    3. Kiai #3: Starts on 01:51:160, ends on 01:57:237
    4. Kiai #4: Starts on 03:16:234, ends on 03:21:552
    5. Kiai #5: Starts on 03:22:311, ends on 03:27:628
    6. Kiai #6: Starts on 03:28:388, ends on 03:34:465

Yui

  1. CS +1 (3)
  2. You should consider spacing on this diff all notes because spacing on this diff have 0.7x, 0.8x, 0.9x, and 1.6x. However, I suggest that you use spacing about 0.9x.
  3. 00:41:279 (1) - Try don't stack with (6).

    Comment: This diff should fix spacing almost, because some note llike 00:17:921 (2,3) is too far a lot. However, I'm tired. I was able to mod just this.

Shining

  1. CS +1 (4)
  2. 00:16:592 - I hear the rhythm here. You should consider adding a circle, but if you no fix it, you should increase spacing between (4,1).
  3. 00:17:731 (3) - Spacing between (2) and this is too close.
  4. 00:24:567 - add a circle?
  5. 00:26:086 (1) - From considering rhythm. You should use finish instead of clap.
  6. 00:50:393 (1) - Add finish in slider begin
  7. 00:56:470 (1) - ^
  8. 01:14:700 (1) - ^
  9. 01:16:599 - Same as 00:16:592.
  10. 01:26:854 (1) - Same as 00:50:393 (1).
  11. 01:38:437 - I think I hear the rhythm here. You can add a circle on this.
  12. 02:33:697 (1) - Add finish in slider begin?
  13. 02:36:736 (1) - ^
  14. 02:51:928 (1) - Add finish here.
  15. 04:16:242 (3) - Repeat slider one more time.

    Comment: Your mapping is good for me, but I think that you should add finish more than this. For example, somethings I said in modding.

Kanade

  1. 00:16:022 (1) - Remove NC here, but add it on 00:16:782 (2) instead.
  2. 00:16:592 - I hear the rhythm here. You should add a circle.
  3. 00:18:681 (9) - Add NC?
  4. 02:21:339 (5) - Spacing between (4) and this is too close. Please increase spacing.
  5. 00:44:317 (10) - You should add NC here. Then remove it on 00:45:266 (1).
  6. 00:46:976 (1) - Remove NC.
  7. 00:49:634 (1) - The rhythm of note is weird a lot. I suggest that slider (1) end at 00:49:824. Then add a circle on 00:49:919 or slider on 00:49:919 to 00:50:204, and you should remove NC on (1), but add it on 00:50:394 (3) instead.
  8. 00:51:913 (8) - Add NC here, but remove it on next NC.
  9. 00:53:432 (3) - ^
  10. 00:54:951 (3) - Add NC here.
  11. 01:02:547 - Add a circle?
  12. 01:18:878 (2,3,4) - Spacing is too far, and I think that these aren't suitable for using spacing more than 1.5x. Please reduce these.
  13. 03:40:448 (1) - Start spinner at 03:40:543.

    Comment: I will don't say hitsound on mod, but I will comment you can consider what Blackshane was doing in him/her diff, and you should consider NC that I said somethings in modding, too. Because putting NC have to associated with rhythm or vocals.

Hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~
Irie Miyuki
388 posts
Joined October 2010
Irie Miyuki
from queue :3

渣比mod请见谅

[General]
  1. tag: 岩沢麻美(いわさわ　まさみ)=Iwasawa Masami 另加上yui和gdm 其实我不知道tag里为啥有岩泽 如果是想写gdm团员的话还有入江美雪(irie miyuki)咦我在中枪 关根诗织(sekine shiori)和久子(hisako)
  2. Source: Angel Beats! 叹号别漏了
[Kanade]
  1. 00:16:022 (1,2) - switch NC
  2. 00:18:681 (9) - add NC
  3. 00:32:543 (5) - NC
  4. 00:44:317 (10) - NC
  5. 00:44:317 (10,1) - switch NC
  6. 00:46:976 (1) - remove NC
  7. 00:46:976 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing弄成一样吧
  8. 00:49:634 (1) - 这里是这样一个节奏。。
    SPOILER
  9. 00:50:394 (3) - NC
  10. 00:51:913 (10,1) - switch NC
  11. 00:53:432 (3) - NC
  12. 01:02:547 - add a circle
  13. 01:02:927 (1,2) - 这两个形状一样的话好看点
  14. 01:08:624 (4) - NC
  15. 01:09:953 (1) - remove NC
  16. 01:11:472 (5) - NC
  17. 01:15:840 (5) - 感觉这个节奏好点
    SPOILER
  18. 01:16:030 - ↑如果上边改了 在这个地方NC
  19. 01:17:549 (3) - NC
  20. 01:18:878 (2,3,4) - 往前移两条线 即2在红线上, 并且我觉得大跳很违和
  21. 01:21:917 (5,6,7) - 同 01:15:840 (5) -
  22. 01:22:676 (1,3) - switch NC
  23. 01:27:234 (3,4,5) - 1没摞在一起 2感觉跟后边三连会误读
  24. 01:29:513 (1,2) - switch NC
  25. 01:30:842 (1) - remove NC
  26. 01:32:931 (7) - NC
  27. 01:34:450 (1,4) - switch NC
  28. 01:39:008 (1,1,1) - ………………这个有点
  29. 01:54:200 (9,1) - switch NC
  30. 01:57:998 (1) - remove nc
  31. 02:01:036 (4,5,6) - 这个跳也有点违和
  32. 02:09:771 (1) - remove nc
  33. 02:40:535 (3,4,5) - spacing弄成一样好点
  34. 02:42:244 (1,2) - switch nc
  35. 02:43:573 (1,4) - switch nc
  36. 02:45:472 (1,2) - switch nc
  37. 02:46:801 (1) - remove nc
  38. 02:48:131 (1,4) - switch nc
  39. 02:49:650 (1) - remove nc
  40. 02:53:448 (1,1) - remove nc, 两个
  41. 02:54:777 (3) - nc
  42. 02:55:727 (1) - remove nc
  43. 02:59:335 (1,3) - switch nc
  44. 03:07:500 (1,1) - 两个nc没必要
  45. 03:10:729 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 觉得这梗不合适 建议换掉 另外03:12:058 可以考虑加个circle
  46. 03:14:337 (1) - remove nc
  47. 03:17:945 (2) - 和03:16:995 (1) - 叠起来吧
  48. 03:34:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 建议只保留前四个 然后后面继续滑条啥的 另外注意连打间的spacing
  49. 03:46:050 (1) - 偷工减料吗ww
  50. 04:01:811 (1,2,3,4) - 这个注意一下间距吧蛮重要的
  51. 04:06:179 (1) - 建议拉远点 但是别太远..- -
  52. 04:08:458 (1,2,3) - 太远
  53. 04:09:217 (1,2) - 太近
  54. 04:09:977 (1,2,3,4) - 太远
  55. 04:13:775 (7,1) - 叠起来?
  56. 04:16:054 (3) - 建议跟鼓点
这么多页mod没人管nc真服气 看的头疼 感觉nc两个键要被按炸

[Shining]

....点进来我就懒了 有点乱.. 开DS把除了jump的部分重新对一遍 然后再检查一下NC吧

[Yui]

如果。。这个是传说中的Normal 那么你还缺少一个Easy
要不把这个改成三星以下

!!! normal和easy一定要开DS做
Strawberry
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Strawberry
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Tachibana Kanade
64 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Nichiyouki wrote:



Hi, Kanade :3

My mod from your request in my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. reversearrow-none.png file isn't necessary. Please remove it.
  2. BPM on all diff are different by Kanade diff is 157.983, Shining diff is 157.980, and Yui diff is 157.979. Please adjust BPM to equal which I suggest that adjust it to same as Shining diff (157.980). Then don't forget resnap all notes.
  3. PreviewTime on all diff are different. I suggest that put it on 01:39:007
  4. Kiai time on all diffs are different as well. You should adjust it by follow Shining diff.
    1. Kiai #1: Starts on 01:39:007, ends on 01:44:324
    2. Kiai #2: Starts on 01:45:084, ends on 01:50:401
    3. Kiai #3: Starts on 01:51:160, ends on 01:57:237
    4. Kiai #4: Starts on 03:16:234, ends on 03:21:552
    5. Kiai #5: Starts on 03:22:311, ends on 03:27:628
    6. Kiai #6: Starts on 03:28:388, ends on 03:34:465

Yui

  1. CS +1 (3)
  2. You should consider spacing on this diff all notes because spacing on this diff have 0.7x, 0.8x, 0.9x, and 1.6x. However, I suggest that you use spacing about 0.9x.
  3. 00:41:279 (1) - Try don't stack with (6).

    Comment: This diff should fix spacing almost, because some note llike 00:17:921 (2,3) is too far a lot. However, I'm tired. I was able to mod just this.

Shining

  1. CS +1 (4)
  2. 00:16:592 - I hear the rhythm here. You should consider adding a circle, but if you no fix it, you should increase spacing between (4,1).
  3. 00:17:731 (3) - Spacing between (2) and this is too close.
  4. 00:24:567 - add a circle?
  5. 00:26:086 (1) - From considering rhythm. You should use finish instead of clap.
  6. 00:50:393 (1) - Add finish in slider begin
  7. 00:56:470 (1) - ^
  8. 01:14:700 (1) - ^
  9. 01:16:599 - Same as 00:16:592.
  10. 01:26:854 (1) - Same as 00:50:393 (1).
  11. 01:38:437 - I think I hear the rhythm here. You can add a circle on this.
  12. 02:33:697 (1) - Add finish in slider begin?
  13. 02:36:736 (1) - ^
  14. 02:51:928 (1) - Add finish here.
  15. 04:16:242 (3) - Repeat slider one more time.

    Comment: Your mapping is good for me, but I think that you should add finish more than this. For example, somethings I said in modding.

Kanade

  1. 00:16:022 (1) - Remove NC here, but add it on 00:16:782 (2) instead.
  2. 00:16:592 - I hear the rhythm here. You should add a circle.
  3. 00:18:681 (9) - Add NC?
  4. 02:21:339 (5) - Spacing between (4) and this is too close. Please increase spacing.
  5. 00:44:317 (10) - You should add NC here. Then remove it on 00:45:266 (1).
  6. 00:46:976 (1) - Remove NC.
  7. 00:49:634 (1) - The rhythm of note is weird a lot. I suggest that slider (1) end at 00:49:824. Then add a circle on 00:49:919 or slider on 00:49:919 to 00:50:204, and you should remove NC on (1), but add it on 00:50:394 (3) instead.
  8. 00:51:913 (8) - Add NC here, but remove it on next NC.
  9. 00:53:432 (3) - ^
  10. 00:54:951 (3) - Add NC here.
  11. 01:02:547 - Add a circle?
  12. 01:18:878 (2,3,4) - Spacing is too far, and I think that these aren't suitable for using spacing more than 1.5x. Please reduce these.
  13. 03:40:448 (1) - Start spinner at 03:40:543.

    Comment: I will don't say hitsound on mod, but I will comment you can consider what Blackshane was doing in him/her diff, and you should consider NC that I said somethings in modding, too. Because putting NC have to associated with rhythm or vocals.

Hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~
ty it helps a lot :lol:
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