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Girls Dead Monster - 23:50

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Tachibana Kanade
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年11月20日 at 23:52:25

Artist: Girls Dead Monster
Title: 23:50
Source: Angel Beats!
Tags: Lisa Iwasawa Masami Yui Irie Miyuki Sekine Shiori Hisako Blackshane
BPM: 157.98
Filesize: 7219kb
Play Time: 04:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.8 stars, 275 notes)
  2. Hard (3.55 stars, 583 notes)
  3. Normal (2.32 stars, 458 notes)
Download: Girls Dead Monster - 23:50
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Girls Dead Monster&AB最高~
嗯很多年了...
Easy,Hard me

Normal Kayano
jesse7419
IRC timing check
03:49 Tachibana Kanade: 再有 放note的時候你是按照一百的速度來放嗎
03:49 Tachibana Kanade: 我感覺老放不准節奏。。
03:49 jesse7419: 可能offset bpm不對吧
03:49 jesse7419: 不然不會節奏不對
03:50 Tachibana Kanade: 能幫我看看11:50的bpm對不對麼..
03:51 jesse7419: 1. Offset: 1,747ms BPM: 158.00
03:52 Tachibana Kanade: 居然差得不太多
03:52 Tachibana Kanade: XD
03:52 Tachibana Kanade: 好了
03:52 jesse7419: BPM一定要對 多一點到最後會完全不對= =
03:53 Tachibana Kanade: thx
03:53 jesse7419: 不會

加油 :>
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

jesse7419 wrote:

IRC timing check
03:49 Tachibana Kanade: 再有 放note的時候你是按照一百的速度來放嗎
03:49 Tachibana Kanade: 我感覺老放不准節奏。。
03:49 jesse7419: 可能offset bpm不對吧
03:49 jesse7419: 不然不會節奏不對
03:50 Tachibana Kanade: 能幫我看看11:50的bpm對不對麼..
03:51 jesse7419: 1. Offset: 1,747ms BPM: 158.00
03:52 Tachibana Kanade: 居然差得不太多
03:52 Tachibana Kanade: XD
03:52 Tachibana Kanade: 好了
03:52 jesse7419: BPM一定要對 多一點到最後會完全不對= =
03:53 Tachibana Kanade: thx
03:53 jesse7419: 不會

加油 :>
我要一天搞定 -。-
Athena Tennos
我就说new mapper怎么把timing测的那么准的~>_>!!~ :) :D
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade
A little IRC mod

Athena Tennos wrote:

我就说new mapper怎么把timing测的那么准的~>_>!!~ :) :D
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade
Athena Tennos

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

把这个copy到第一个post上去把。。。
话说怎么把你的map信息也copy了一遍。。。orz
alacat
IRC mod ~

09:41 Tachibana Kanade: alacat> can u test play my map if u have time ? just for fun :p
09:41 *Tachibana Kanade is listening to Girls Dead Monster - 23:50
09:41 alacat: ok :D
09:41 Tachibana Kanade: arigato!
09:41 alacat: DLing ~
09:42 alacat: go :3
09:42 Tachibana Kanade: thank you
09:44 Tachibana Kanade: haha just created the map yesterday
09:46 Tachibana Kanade: thank you for playing XD
09:46 alacat: <- noob ;w;
09:46 Tachibana Kanade: im noob in map :p
09:46 Tachibana Kanade: i like this song
09:46 alacat: >.<
09:47 Tachibana Kanade: any suggestion? >
09:47 alacat: IRC ~ okey ?
09:47 Tachibana Kanade: okay~
09:47 alacat: offset , okey >w<
09:48 Tachibana Kanade: my friend helps me test offset haha
09:49 alacat: 00:16:557 (2)- add clap ? you should put hit sound imo >.<
09:49 alacat: 00:19:595 (1)- ^
09:49 Tachibana Kanade: only that note add clap?
09:50 alacat: 00:24:532 (1)- spinner's end ~ How about here ? 00:26:051-
09:50 Tachibana Kanade: already added
09:50 Tachibana Kanade: okay~
09:51 alacat: 00:27:380 (3,4)- perfect stack ? :3
09:51 alacat: 00:27:000 (2)- slider end >w<
09:52 alacat: 00:30:608 (10)- try to move y : 48
09:52 alacat: 00:35:164 (7)- add new combo ? :3
09:53 alacat: 00:38:202 (1)- add finish on slider head ?
09:54 alacat: 00:41:810 (1)- dont need new combo here imo :3
09:55 alacat: 00:58:519 (3,4,5)- try this ?
09:55 alacat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539116
09:56 alacat: 01:02:886 (9)- start new combo here ? start vocal here >.<
09:57 alacat: 01:13:424 (1)- start : 01:13:139-
09:57 alacat: ^ and add finish
09:58 Tachibana Kanade: so busy .. haha
09:58 Tachibana Kanade: thanks..
09:58 alacat: 01:27:190 (3,4,5)- perfect stack :3
09:58 Tachibana Kanade: still work on it
09:58 alacat: okey :D
09:58 alacat: should i wait ? :3
10:03 Tachibana Kanade: okay now..
10:03 alacat: :3
10:04 alacat: 01:32:126 (1,2)- add whistle ? same as here.01:30:418 (7,8)-
10:05 alacat: 01:33:835 (7,8,9)- m~ , it is better to put spacing around 1.10x >.<
10:06 alacat: 01:37:823 (1,1)- !?
10:06 alacat: 01:38:962- plz check this timing lol ww
10:08 Tachibana Kanade: done!
10:08 alacat: 02:05:639- same as above >.<
10:09 alacat: 02:09:152 (3)- want to put more spacing >< maybe ... confusing many players
10:10 alacat: 02:15:038 (3)- move to y:288 ?
10:10 alacat: 02:45:038- add note ? :3
10:11 Tachibana Kanade: 02:09:152 (3)- put more spacing ?
10:12 Tachibana Kanade: can u send a picture~~
10:12 Tachibana Kanade: >
10:12 alacat: kk
10:13 alacat: bad suggestions ;w;
10:13 alacat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539131
10:14 alacat: 02:50:449 (1)- start : 02:50:354-
10:15 alacat: ^ 02:56:620 (1)- start : 02:56:430-
10:17 alacat: 02:58:519 (2)- move to x:148 ?
10:17 alacat: I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical :3
10:17 Tachibana Kanade: yes~
10:17 alacat: 03:04:025- check this timing >.<
10:18 alacat: 03:07:443- ^
10:18 alacat: 03:07:823 (1)- try to remove one repeat ?
10:18 alacat: 03:10:101 (1)- add finish slider head
10:19 alacat: 03:12:949 (1)- remove new combo ~
10:19 alacat: 03:16:177- check ~
10:20 alacat: 03:28:329 (1)- add finish slider head ~
10:21 alacat: 03:48:835- try this ~ ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539144
10:23 alacat: 04:03:171- mm ~ it doesn't follow the music ;w; try this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539146
10:23 alacat: 04:06:114 (5)- add new combo ~
10:23 alacat: 04:13:709 (4,1)- perfect stack :3
10:24 alacat: 04:15:987 (3,1)- check >.<
10:27 alacat: finish my suggestion ~ ^^
10:27 Tachibana Kanade: thanks alacat.. still work on it..
10:27 Tachibana Kanade: u help me a lot ~
10:29 alacat: np ~ :3 good luck >w<
10:29 Tachibana Kanade: please reply in the post
10:30 Tachibana Kanade: must give alacat kd!!
10:30 alacat: ok xD

加油 :)
Hikaros
such a good map, tried it today again and it was perfect imo ><
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Hikaros wrote:

such a good map, tried it today again and it was perfect imo ><
ty
still work on it
btw I lost my 1st solo RANKED game lol
_nara_
[Hard]
00:20:164 (16) remove this? its better like this
00:32:316 (5) ^
01:07:253 (10) ^
01:12:000 till 01:12:949 are you keeping the hitsounds??
01:37:063 (3,4) change hitsounds to finish+whistle?
01:43:329 (6,7,8,9,10) finish?
01:56:051 (3,5) finish?
02:49:975 (3,4) change to finish + whistle?
02:59:088 (5) remove this?
03:05:924 (10,11,1,2,3) finish?
03:20:924 (1,2,3,4,5,1) ^
03:27:000 (2,3,4,5) ^
03:28:329 (1) remove all hitsounds?
03:52:633 (1,2,3,4) finish?
03:58:139 (6,7) ^
04:12:949 (4,5) ^
04:13:139 missing circle or what?
04:15:987 (3) finish?

so i think more good if u give more hitsounds that match with the song
remove Girls Dead Monster in Tags box bcs u write it already in Artist
overall is good
dont forget to set the preview point
and btw if u make the hitsounds u should rlly use it at all bcs i see u even not putting any hitsound u made,
if u dont rlly use it pls just remove it bcs it makes ur map more heavier. take a look at the folder.
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

_nara_ wrote:

[Hard]
00:20:164 (16) remove this? its better like this
00:32:316 (5) ^
01:07:253 (10) ^
01:12:000 till 01:12:949 are you keeping the hitsounds??
01:37:063 (3,4) change hitsounds to finish+whistle?
01:43:329 (6,7,8,9,10) finish?
01:56:051 (3,5) finish?
02:49:975 (3,4) change to finish + whistle?
02:59:088 (5) remove this?
03:05:924 (10,11,1,2,3) finish?
03:20:924 (1,2,3,4,5,1) ^
03:27:000 (2,3,4,5) ^
03:28:329 (1) remove all hitsounds?
03:52:633 (1,2,3,4) finish?
03:58:139 (6,7) ^
04:12:949 (4,5) ^
04:13:139 missing circle or what?
04:15:987 (3) finish?

so i think more good if u give more hitsounds that match with the song
remove Girls Dead Monster in Tags box bcs u write it already in Artist
overall is good
dont forget to set the preview point
and btw if u make the hitsounds u should rlly use it at all bcs i see u even not putting any hitsound u made,
if u dont rlly use it pls just remove it bcs it makes ur map more heavier. take a look at the folder.
thanks! it helps me a lot.
Still work on map itself
Will make hitsounds later
neurosis
kanade moe :3
Colined AFK
喵喵~从来没在这上面留过言额~~
快点rank来扛榜吧~
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade
later please test it <3 it is better now

emmy wrote:

kanade moe :3
Hikaros
i still find it perfect haha i didnt feel anything weird in any stream/beat/slider



no SS cuz i suck lol.

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

btw I lost my 1st solo RANKED game lol
i recomend you to duo queue instead hahaha
Lanchery
Yui

00:38:202 - slider
00:53:962 - slider
00:54:152 - 這邊兩個去掉看看
00:55:861 - finish
00:56:051 - finish
01:18:551 - 這邊沒對齊
01:18:930 - ^
01:26:905 - 到01:34:690 - 調整一下吧
01:58:044 - 這邊也是
02:10:196 - 到02:15:133 - 一樣調整
02:40:196 - 04:16:082 (13) - 到結束 把節奏往後移動到白線and紅線
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

ps3station44 wrote:

Yui

00:38:202 - slider
00:53:962 - slider
00:54:152 - 這邊兩個去掉看看
00:55:861 - finish
00:56:051 - finish
01:18:551 - 這邊沒對齊
01:18:930 - ^
01:26:905 - 到01:34:690 - 調整一下吧
01:58:044 - 這邊也是
02:10:196 - 到02:15:133 - 一樣調整
02:40:196 - 04:16:082 (13) - 到結束 把節奏往後移動到白線and紅線
我把這圖做成翔了
Kayano
[General]
这首歌的BPM是157.98
offset+40 第一根红线在1787ms处

以下mod是在还没有调整BPM和offset的情况下的mod

[Yui]
HDR+1 AR+1 OD+1(如果你想把它做成Normal难度的话可以不用变 这个diff现在更偏向于Hard)
00:24:911 (7) - NC
00:26:430 (11) - ^
00:28:899 (15) - ^
00:34:975 (7) - ^
00:53:392 (9) - ^
00:53:392 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 这部分感觉很难受 因为音乐在上面没有拍点 换成这样
00:58:946 (5,6,7) - 换成一个带回转的滑条
00:59:468 (7) - NC
01:05:354 (8) - ^
01:11:430 (7) - ^
01:16:082 (1) - NC应该在 01:17:506 (4) -
01:23:582 (7) - NC
01:38:962 (8) - NC kiai开始 预览点
01:41:240 (11) - NC
01:48:076 (8) - ^
01:54:152 (7) - ^
02:00:228 (6) - ^
02:03:645 (9) - ^
02:05:924 (13) - ^
02:15:418 - kiai结束
02:42:664 (8) - NC
02:48:740 (9) - ^
02:54:816 (5) - ^
02:56:905 (9) - ^?
03:00:892 (8) - ^
03:04:120 (15) - ^
03:08:677 (5) - ^?
03:10:196 (8) - ^
03:12:664 (1) - NC提前到 03:11:715 (11) - ?然后在03:13:994 (4) - NC
03:16:183 - 加绿线 kiai#2开始 (其实你到后面就已经开始用蓝线了 这就是offset没设置好 后面会有初步修改好的osb文件)
03:18:551 (6) - NC
03:20:829 (11) - ^
03:24:626 (5) - ^
03:26:145 (8) - ^
03:30:702 (6) - ^
03:32:981 (11) - ^
03:37:538 (7) - ^
03:40:481 - 加绿线 kiai#2结束
03:58:804 (7) - NC
04:03:361 (6) - ^
04:05:259 (1) - NC移到 04:04:880 (11) -
04:09:152 (1) - NC移到 04:07:823 (7) -
04:13:994 (8) - NC
04:16:082 (13) - NC 去掉结尾的finish音效

后面一个难度也有很多问题- -快到饭点了肚子饿了不想check了我会说么 :roll:
Yui难度稍稍修改了一下的osb http://puu.sh/1SPux

今晚我会在线 可以找我ircmod 这两个难度的问题还是蛮多的T T ircmod方便些0 0

亲测我上传的那个版本还有些不正确的地方等我吃完饭再说- -大概5点40分
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Blackshane wrote:

[General]
这首歌的BPM是157.98
offset+40 第一根红线在1787ms处

以下mod是在还没有调整BPM和offset的情况下的mod

[Yui]
HDR+1 AR+1 OD+1(如果你想把它做成Normal难度的话可以不用变 这个diff现在更偏向于Hard)
00:24:911 (7) - NC
00:26:430 (11) - ^
00:28:899 (15) - ^
00:34:975 (7) - ^
00:53:392 (9) - ^
00:53:392 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 这部分感觉很难受 因为音乐在上面没有拍点 换成这样
00:58:946 (5,6,7) - 换成一个带回转的滑条
00:59:468 (7) - NC
01:05:354 (8) - ^
01:11:430 (7) - ^
01:16:082 (1) - NC应该在 01:17:506 (4) -
01:23:582 (7) - NC
01:38:962 (8) - NC kiai开始 预览点
01:41:240 (11) - NC
01:48:076 (8) - ^
01:54:152 (7) - ^
02:00:228 (6) - ^
02:03:645 (9) - ^
02:05:924 (13) - ^
02:15:418 - kiai结束
02:42:664 (8) - NC
02:48:740 (9) - ^
02:54:816 (5) - ^
02:56:905 (9) - ^?
03:00:892 (8) - ^
03:04:120 (15) - ^
03:08:677 (5) - ^?
03:10:196 (8) - ^
03:12:664 (1) - NC提前到 03:11:715 (11) - ?然后在03:13:994 (4) - NC
03:16:183 - 加绿线 kiai#2开始 (其实你到后面就已经开始用蓝线了 这就是offset没设置好 后面会有初步修改好的osb文件)
03:18:551 (6) - NC
03:20:829 (11) - ^
03:24:626 (5) - ^
03:26:145 (8) - ^
03:30:702 (6) - ^
03:32:981 (11) - ^
03:37:538 (7) - ^
03:40:481 - 加绿线 kiai#2结束
03:58:804 (7) - NC
04:03:361 (6) - ^
04:05:259 (1) - NC移到 04:04:880 (11) -
04:09:152 (1) - NC移到 04:07:823 (7) -
04:13:994 (8) - NC
04:16:082 (13) - NC 去掉结尾的finish音效

后面一个难度也有很多问题- -快到饭点了肚子饿了不想check了我会说么 :roll:
Yui难度稍稍修改了一下的osb http://puu.sh/1SPux

今晚我会在线 可以找我ircmod 这两个难度的问题还是蛮多的T T ircmod方便些0 0
謝謝 晚上上线慢慢改
Kayano

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

謝謝 晚上上线慢慢改
好的
Kayano
挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Blackshane wrote:

挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
今晚能上线么..我复制错把改好的覆盖了 :cry:
jesse7419
好努力!!

看來真要踏上神mapper之路了 \:D/

加油!!

原來你有PM我MOD喔= =... 那這佔mod位
Kayano

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

Blackshane wrote:

挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
今晚能上线么..我复制错把改好的覆盖了 :cry:
抱歉今晚没法上电脑(其实昨晚也是因为断网才没有办法上,然后就去做GD了。。)
可能的话明晚应该能上。。。大概吧。。GD还得在等两天
还有可能的话吧Yui难度改简单点变成N难度因为要想rank一定要有一个E或者N的难度 而我的GD是Hard
还有Insane的难度名改成Kanade 比Tenshi好而且是你的ID的一部分(这和日卡的I难度叫Rika差不多)
其他问题等下次电脑上mod再说吧
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Blackshane wrote:

挺喜欢这首歌的 打算做一个Guestdiff 做好了发给你
今晚能上线么..我复制错把改好的覆盖了 :cry:[/quote]

抱歉今晚没法上电脑(其实昨晚也是因为断网才没有办法上,然后就去做GD了。。)
可能的话明晚应该能上。。。大概吧。。GD还得在等两天
还有可能的话吧Yui难度改简单点变成N难度因为要想rank一定要有一个E或者N的难度 而我的GD是Hard
还有Insane的难度名改成Kanade 比Tenshi好而且是你的ID的一部分(这和日卡的I难度叫Rika差不多)
其他问题等下次电脑上mod再说吧[/quote]

好的 謝謝
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

jesse7419 wrote:

好努力!!

看來真要踏上神mapper之路了 \:D/

加油!!

原來你有PM我MOD喔= =... 那這佔mod位
你先不要看 現在很爛
考完試過段時間我覺得大體可以了再給你 :roll:
Irie Miyuki
卧槽GDM 马一发 等我有空了来((
Topic Starter
Tachibana Kanade

Irie Miyuki wrote:

卧槽GDM 马一发 等我有空了来((
正需要mod 谢谢了
Melt
hi :3
mod as request

[General]
  1. PreviewTime不一致
  2. 如果走rank向的话还缺一个3.0星以下的diff
  3. 最好让的你每个diff在同一时间点结束
[Yui]
  1. normal难度的话(话说这是normal难度吧)还是建议大体上固定一个ds来做 像00:17:921(2,3)这一类的ds变化会让新手很不适应
  2. 00:21:719(2)换成普通的slider怎么样
  3. 00:55:141(2)滑条尾出界了
  4. 01:16:030(4)remove nc 然后在01:17:549(3)加上nc
  5. 02:04:454(3)出界了
  6. 02:06:353(1)这个spin可以延长到02:07:872 然后删掉02:08:062(1)
  7. 03:02:563(1)这个也出界了o.o
  8. 03:10:729(2)^ 还有这个slider在03:11:108结束好像更好
  9. 03:23:072(2)^
  10. 03:40:733(1)spin在03:40:543开始 03:42:821结束
  11. 03:48:898(1)这一类超出范围就不提了 自己再检查一下吧
[Shining]
  1. 00:16:402(4)这一段试试这个节奏呢
  2. 00:23:808(2)repeat两次就可以了
  3. 00:26:086(4)nc 删掉后面那一个
  4. 01:12:421(2)repeat两次就可以了
  5. 01:16:029(3)在01:16:409结束似乎更好
  6. 01:43:565(1)remove nc
  7. 01:50:021(1)^
  8. 02:05:972(1)在02:07:871结束
  9. 02:53:257(1)试试在02:53:637结束
  10. 03:43:200(1)在03:45:099结束
  11. 03:46:998(2,3,4)没叠好
  12. 03:49:656(1,2)^
[Kanade]
  1. 00:29:124(10)nc
  2. 00:38:809(3,4)没叠好
  3. 00:49:633(1,2)^
  4. 01:02:166(7)这个slider替换成circle
  5. 02:02:552(1)remove nc
  6. 03:20:028(1)^
  7. 03:21:927(1)^
还有就是音效的话很多地方也缺,有些地方听起来也不舒服(比如finish连用什么的)
建议多看看别人的图,或者咨询一下身边的神mapper什么的,我在线的时候也可以pm我
不过我音效也很烂就是了:P

差不多就这样了,加油 :3
Chairman Miao
加油加油 支持小奏大叔 :)
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