1. Finish (4.9 stars, 571 notes)
2. Middle (4.89 stars, 355 notes)
3. Start (3.21 stars, 183 notes)

Check out SionKotori's START, it's also a fun map and vocal

Haikizoku wrote:

Alrighty, don't think it's too much actually, but I'll try.
Everything are just opinions, keep it the way it is if you like how it is. =)

[Finish]
00:26:621 (1,2,3) - The spacing between 1-2 is nearly the exact same as 2-3, while the time between them isn't the same. changed this a little bit, not sure if i like it though
00:28:721 (6,7,1,2) - Very difficult part to read. Think it would be better if the star points were completely visible. (The sliders crossing is fine. a bit like you did on 01:33:671 (1,2,3,4) - which reads a lot better) fixed
00:40:121 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again Spacing being rather small while there's quite a "wait" in between notes. (3-4 & 5-6) remapped this part a bit
01:06:821 (4) - sampleset is on "drum" again. hehe. woops aha
02:15:671 (1,1) - Add a bit more time between the spinner and the slider. Right now it's so close after each other that you have to stop spinning before the end anyways to hit the slider. (and it's not like the spinner ends on a specific note anyways. Just make the spinner end silent.) fixed
02:22:871 (1,1) - Make the spinner end on that note which you now placed right after it. i think the jump from the spinner makes it more epic aha

These are just some things which "bothered" me a bit.
Again, if everything are just suggestions.

Mythol wrote:

[Start]
00:03:371 (4) - You should keep x1.0 spacing for easier diffs. Add a repeat to 00:02:771 (3) for easy fix fixed ^^
00:05:171 (3) - Repeat ok
00:10:871 (1) - Find a way to move this down, its touching HP bar but you should find a way to make symmetry with 00:11:921 (2) it would look nicer reworked this section a bit
00:51:371 (1) - Touching HP bar, I won't mention these anymore plz find them yourself indeed
01:08:471 (1,2) - Spacing fixed
01:48:971 (1,2,3) - ^ orz i dunno how i missed this
01:51:071 (4,1) - ^ gonna stop mentioning spacing issues too fixed
01:57:371 (3) - Repeat on this is nice i agree
02:06:971 (2) - This should start 02:07:121 fixed
02:27:071 (1) - Avoid using blue ticks on Easy diffs, also you should remove this SV change... changed this to something different, the blue tick was mostly to make the sv change jump into the next slider
02:52:571 (2) - Add repeat and start the spinner on 02:54:071 ok

[Middle]
00:03:671 (5) - NC ok
00:44:321 - The triplet should start here, prob stacked on 00:44:471 (1) mhm
01:02:471 (1) - Repeat? ill try it but i think the repeat sounds a little weird. ill have to play with it some more
01:39:446 (5) - Remove this note it doesn't fit ok
01:51:596 - There should be a note here, but a 5 note stream would be too much so try a 2 repeat slider I prob missed more of these before so make sure you check aa that looks cool ok
02:35:771 (3,4) - Change this plz ok ^^
02:46:571 (4,5,6) - Same with the repeat slider suggestion.. yup

[Finish]
Circle Size -1 cs5 is cute ^^ i will try and keep it for now lol
HP -1 ok
Why OD 8 ;_; i dunno \:D/
00:03:071 (2) - Use consistent spacing fixed
00:12:296 (3) - Remove this note and rearrange, 5 note stream isn't good here honestly i like the way this looks and plays so i will try and keep for now ><
00:45:596 (2) - Remove this and rearrange
00:45:821 (5) - End this slider at 00:45:971 changed this part a little bit. lets see..
01:58:046 (2,3,4) - These notes are too much, the song is only vocal here its complete overmap ok
02:07:571 (5) - There should be another slider here ok
02:07:871 (1,2,3,4) - plz no hmm.. made this part a little less mean
02:15:521 (7) - You should move this to the next white tick with a finish and start the spinner right after it ok
02:21:671 (4) - This is unrankable, the start of the slider should be completely visible fixed /o/
02:25:271 (1) - Just have spinner end here :/ ok><
Not sure why you suddenly started using so many stacks near the end, HD players will hate you for it Its because of the many vocal lines sung at the same pitch in this verse, i dunno i thought the repeated stacks kinda fit. i feel like i could of used lots of stacks or lots of quick 1.0x spacing but i think this is more interesting ..

Nice map
I'm surprised you don't have any ranked ones yet o:
gl~
hopefully i can get good on this one /o/ thanks a ton for mod !!!

• 
  I think the hit sounds for the chorus are a bit odd. Its weird how in the beginning there's whistles, and then they just disappear.

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  * 01:06:071 (1) Is this supposed to be an Easy? If it is, with the high BPM, an Easy or even an average Normal player wouldn't have enough time to react to this.
  01:42:071 (1) Very nazi-ish, but this isn't distance snapped properly.
  02:27:071 (1) Doesn't look too pretty, just saying. Also, this is the only place I've seen (this and the next 1) where its a 1/2 beat away, just for trivia.
  * 02:54:071 (1) Why does it end at such an odd beat? You should just end it a beat earlier. It would sound and feel better.

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  00:26:621 (1,2) Just a thought, why don't you just stack these over 3?
  * 01:37:271 (1) This sounds like a very odd slider. You could just make a circle at the start point, since the end point is really unnecessary rhythmically.

• 
  01:23:621 (4,5) This looks odd to me when stacked.
  Not sure why the Timing Section (01:49:571) needs to have a X1.50 Slider Multiplier. First of all, its just apart of the chorus and nothing really speeds up. Second of all, you should have kept it consistent and put it in all the other choruses (except for the first).

CrestRising wrote:

From my queue.
* = A bit more suggested.

[General:]

• 
  I think the hit sounds for the chorus are a bit odd. Its weird how in the beginning there's whistles, and then they just disappear. i did it that way because i feel like there is more energy at the start of the chorus where there are whistles... ill take a look at it again though

[Start:]

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  * 01:06:071 (1) Is this supposed to be an Easy? If it is, with the high BPM, an Easy or even an average Normal player wouldn't have enough time to react to this. im not sure how i could map it any differently.. ill play with it a bit
  01:42:071 (1) Very nazi-ish, but this isn't distance snapped properly. woops xD
  02:27:071 (1) Doesn't look too pretty, just saying. Also, this is the only place I've seen (this and the next 1) where its a 1/2 beat away, just for trivia. your right XD but i dont think if the 1/2 beat would be too challenging for new player..
  * 02:54:071 (1) Why does it end at such an odd beat? You should just end it a beat earlier. It would sound and feel better. woops lol

[Middle:]

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  00:26:621 (1,2) Just a thought, why don't you just stack these over 3? that works
  * 01:37:271 (1) This sounds like a very odd slider. You could just make a circle at the start point, since the end point is really unnecessary rhythmically. ohh good catch, i just decided to copy the one from the first verse after all though

[Finish:]

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  01:23:621 (4,5) This looks odd to me when stacked. i dont see it xD
  Not sure why the Timing Section (01:49:571) needs to have a X1.50 Slider Multiplier. First of all, its just apart of the chorus and nothing really speeds up. Second of all, you should have kept it consistent and put it in all the other choruses (except for the first). the sliders are still functionally the same speed, 1.5x is just for the aesthetic and because im an unoriginal sob

Sorry for the small mod, I couldn't find too much. Good luck with mapping.

Marcin wrote:

[Start]
Change AR to 4
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy
Or is it supposed to be Normal ?

00:18:071 (1) - Remove that spinner. Why? Because there is some vocal on it, and I think it'll be better to make bigger breaks on Easy. i really like spinners that play into a break, hm. Ill look at it but i think i will probably keep this.
01:13:271 (1) - ^
02:06:071 (1) - I was excepting this to be in lower right corner because that 3 repeat-sliders were like (Left upper, right upper, left lower... and should be right lower ) ohhh good point, changed these
[Middle]
00:18:071 (1) - The same reason as above, vocal is main part here, not guitar.
01:13:271 (1) - ^
00:56:246 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:12:671 (5) - I don't know why, but I feel like it'd be better to move it down (like up, down, up). ok
[Finish]
00:18:071 (1) - The same reason as above, vocal is main part here, not guitar.
01:13:271 (1) - ^ (i'm so sorry ;_;)
01:31:721 (5,6,7,8) - It's hard to play after triplets, and jumps, i'd recommend making it that way

It will flow better, and after changing this, you'll need to move those 2 hits and slider.01:32:321 (1,2,3) - yeah i agree this part is really awkward, I changed it a bit differently though because I really like back and forth spacing into a quieter part of the song
02:07:871 (1,2,3,4) - This would be better to move from down to up instead of up to down... (It'd flow with slider before) ill try it !

Great map, kudosu for you Wow, thank you so much !! Im honored

sionKotori wrote:

I love this song too~ <3

Natsu wrote:

General:

Remove circles from blue ticks
Fix combos


Finish:

SPOILER

00:02:471 add a circle (just suggestion)
00:04:871 add a circle (just suggestion)
00:07:338 Insert a break
00:10:871 NC
00:11:921 remove NC
00:12:221 NC
00:14:621 NC
00:15:596 (2) - Remove it cuz is snaped in blue tick never snap there
00:17:396 ^
00:37:196 ^
00:45:671 NC
00:55:271 NC
00:55:946 Remove it cuz is snaped in blue tick never snap there
00:56:096 ^
00:56:246 ^
00:56:396 ^
00:57:821 NC
01:00:071 NC
01:01:646 Remove it cuz is snaped in blue tick never snap there
01:01:796 ^
01:02:471 NC
01:07:571 NC
01:08:471 NC
01:10:796 Again snapped on blue tick remove it
01:55:946 ^
01:56:096 ^
01:57:596 ^
02:07:871 (1,2,3,4) - slider should not end in blue tick fix it
02:13:196 snapped on blue tick remove it
02:15:746 blue tic again resnap it on 02:15:821
02:36:146 snapped on blue tick remove it
02:36:446 ^
02:36:746 ^
02:36:896 ^
02:41:846 ^
02:41:996 ^
02:44:396 ^
02:44:996 ^
02:45:596 ^
02:46:646 ^
02:46:796 ^
02:51:596 ^

Middle:

SPOILER

Fix combos and blue ticks
00:36:296 snapped on blue tick remove it
00:44:396 ^
00:56:246 ^
02:44:396 ^
02:45:146 ^
02:46:571 this slider should not end in blue tick
(I love this diff just fix it)

Start:

Just fix combos really great job

Some sugestions

SPOILER

http://s2.subirimagenes.com/imagen/previo/thump_8202806sin-ttulo.png

SPOILER

http://s2.subirimagenes.com/imagen/previo/thump_8202808sin-ttulo2.png

Marcin wrote:

Natsu - There is no rule that circles cannot be on blue ticks, it's even better on insane, the only thing that must be followed - it must fit to the music.

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there, from my queue.

[General]
- I'm not sure if the previous mods told you this, but your mp3's bit rate is 320 kbps. Please change this to 192 kbps. I recommend using Audacity for this. fixed
- These three short breaks from 01:59:546 onwards in all three maps/diffs are not necessary. Remove them if possible. Without the breaks on insane missing even a single note means the song will fail, and since breaks must be consistent across difficulties i think i will keep them for now.

[Start]
OD +1 ok
00:08:471 (1) Not a pleasant start. The reverse point doesn't make any sense. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/1FPzK fixed
00:13:271 (1) ^ fixed
00:15:671 (1) ^ fixed
00:28:871 (2) Put the co-ordinates of this slider at 269,302 to have equal spacing between the gaps in this combo. fixed
00:33:671 (1,2,1) Aren't these sliders too close to each other? You should widen the gaps between the sliders and note. fixed
00:36:671 (2) Stack this on top of 00:36:071 (1). hm ok
01:06:071 (1) Same issue with 00:08:471 (1) above. fixed
01:10:871 (1) ^ fixed
01:13:271 (1) Replace this spinner with a circle instead. i dont see why, i think the spinner plays into the break quite nicely atm.
01:54:071 (1,3) Bad overlap. Suggestion: Move 3 a bit higher. fixed

[Middle]
00:30:521 (1,2,3) 1 and 2 are not in a straight line. In addition, the gap is too close between these two notes and 3. fixed
01:13:271 (1) Same deal from Start.
01:51:371 (5) Add clap hitsound to entire slider. ok
02:07:571 (5,6) The gap between these two sliders is x0.94. Increase this. fixed
02:27:596 Move this Inherited Point to 02:27:671. fixed

[Finish]
00:17:471 (5,6,7,8) Make the jumps between these notes larger. This IS an Insane map/diff, right? wow insane but i dont see how it makes sense to put big jumps when the song is calming down

01:13:271 (1) Um, yeah. Just like the other maps/diffs.


That's about it. I hope this helps! Good luck!

1. From Wiki Rangking Criteria wrote:

   The song's audio file must be of reasonable quality. Try and source mp3 files yourself; ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps.

   You must fix the mp3 bit rate. your mp3 is 320kbps. so, here your new one. http://puu.sh/1Gcd2 .: how to download it? click the right mouse on the playbutton, and save video as... > save
2. Timing issue: your offset IS wrong. so i can't mod your map, if you didn't fix the offset quickly. and badly, your bpm a bit wrong too.
3. offset : 1245
   bpm: 200.135
   are more better
4. first kiai should start at: 00:46:814 and end at: 01:05:701
   second Kiai start at: 01:41:977 and end at: 01:59:665
   third Kiai: 02:27:546 and end at: 02:56:327
   00:08:471 remove Kiai at this part
5. Preview time should be:

   PreviewTime: 101471

   .:how to add the code? open file>open .osu in notepad>replace preview time old with this^ code
6. use 1 tick rate, it's more better

blackabyss wrote:

hello from my queue /o/

[General]

1. From Wiki Rangking Criteria wrote:

   The song's audio file must be of reasonable quality. Try and source mp3 files yourself; ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps.

   You must fix the mp3 bit rate. your mp3 is 320kbps. so, here your new one. http://puu.sh/1Gcd2 .: how to download it? click the right mouse on the playbutton, and save video as... > save
2. Timing issue: your offset IS wrong. so i can't mod your map, if you didn't fix the offset quickly. and badly, your bpm a bit wrong too.
3. offset : 1245 [color=#BFFF00]changed offset otherwise
   bpm: 200.135 bpm is 200 positive, according to song creator
   are more better[/color]
4. first kiai should start at: 00:46:814 and end at: 01:05:701
   second Kiai start at: 01:41:977 and end at: 01:59:665
   third Kiai: 02:27:546 and end at: 02:56:327
   00:08:471 remove Kiai at this part fixed all kiais
5. Preview time should be:

   PreviewTime: 101471

   .:how to add the code? open file>open .osu in notepad>replace preview time old with this^ code i like the current preview better
6. use 1 tick rate, it's more better

tick rate 2 is necessary for now i think

[Start]

HP+1
AR-3 too hard to read ><
use beat snap 1/2
keep Distance Snap 1.00
Slider Velocity 0.92

[Middle]

Distance Snap 1.20
Slider Velocity 1.24

[Finish]

HP+1 :D i like 8 better too
Distance Snap 1.30 or any.
Slider Velocity 1.50[/color] thats no fun

So many unrankable issue
but i think, your pattern are really nice :3
so, i just mod in general. good luck.