HabiHolic wrote:

안녕하세요^^
#modreqs 에서 보고 왔습니다

[Zej's Normal]
클락사이즈는 아래사진처럼 해주시길 바랍니다 | 나는 작은 원. 노래는 매우 부드러운되기 때문에


00:05:791 (1) - 이거그냥 직선으로 하세요 (사진) | 당신은 원하는대로


00:08:261 (2) - ^ | 당신은 원하는대로
00:17:791 (2) - 사진보고 그대로 따라할것 | 이 이전을 연결하는 선입니다 .....


00:22:026 (4) - 이상해보이는데 그냥 직선으로 | 이 이전을 연결하는 선입니다 .....
00:29:085 (2) - 사진보고 그대로 | 이 이전을 연결하는 선입니다 .....


00:39:673 (1) - 지우시고 사진처럼 고쳐보시는걸 권잘합니다 | 그것은 좋은 생각입니다



아.. 엄마가 그만하고 끄래요..
ㄷㄷ
남은거 내일 해드릴게요.. ㅠㅠ

Akashi_S wrote:

Mod request from Forum PM

Hi, Gloria Guard, nice to meet you ^_^ I'm pretty new to osu! so x(

저같은 뉴비+무명+랭크곡하나 없는 맵퍼/모더에게 부탁하시다니 -_-;

하드는 한국말로 모딩할게요

RED: Must Fix/ Really Important
BLUE: Strong Suggestion
Black: Mild Suggestion + Comments

[General]
제목이 원래 영어인가요? 네이버에 검색해봤는데 向日葵のように 라고 나오는 것도 있더군요 흠... Gloria Guard님께서 더 찾아보시구 일본어로 되어있는 노래제목이 발견되면 그것을 Title에 넣어주세요, 그걸 로마자로 바꿔서도 Romanised Title에 넣어주시구요

[Zej's Normal]

How about Approaching rate +1 or +2 from now?

This is more like 'Easy' even though patterns are 'Hard' since the song is R E A L L Y slow < I love slow song btw >

00:39:673 (1) - How about making this a slider that ends at 00:40:026 ?
00:42:144 - Add note here. Following the instrumental, and it IS not difficult since it's labeled as Normal with 85 BPM song.
00:42:849 - ^
02:20:614 (1) - RNC

Add more notes in this diff where they are appropriate to put there..

[Hard]

으아.. 딱히 집을데가 없네요 ㅠㅠ
00:40:379 (3) - 가운데 포인트를 정중앙으로~ 그리고 슬라이더를 가장 작은 그리드로 1칸 위로

02:33:320 (3,4,1) - 이런식의 대칭은 어떤가요?

SPOILER

02:11:438 (4,5,6,7) - ^

SPOILER

하드는 한국말로 모딩할게요 < 별로 한것도 없는 1ㅅ 별 쏘고갑니다 xD G o o d L u c k !

Dark Fang wrote:

Zejky ;w;

Akashi_S wrote:

Mod request from Forum PM

Hi, Gloria Guard, nice to meet you ^_^ I'm pretty new to osu! so x(

저같은 뉴비+무명+랭크곡하나 없는 맵퍼/모더에게 부탁하시다니 -_-;

하드는 한국말로 모딩할게요

RED: Must Fix/ Really Important
BLUE: Strong Suggestion
Black: Mild Suggestion + Comments

[Zej's Normal]

How about Approaching rate +1 or +2 from now? | I really just want it to be a "easy" as you see, but, I do not understand why it is 2 star..... should me must put name is "normal" !!!

This is more like 'Easy' even though patterns are 'Hard' since the song is R E A L L Y slow < I love slow song btw >

00:39:673 (1) - How about making this a slider that ends at 00:40:026 ? | here is a previous request to change, but, I'll do it to like elsewhere

00:42:144 - Add note here. Following the instrumental, and it IS not difficult since it's labeled as Normal with 85 BPM song. | as I said, I want it to be is " difficulty easy "
00:42:849 - ^ | ^
02:20:614 (1) - RNC[/color] | this is a fixed NC kiai

Add more notes in this diff where they are appropriate to put there..


하드는 한국말로 모딩할게요 < 별로 한것도 없는 1ㅅ 별 쏘고갑니다 xD G o o d L u c k !

Dark Fang wrote:

Zejky ;w;

1. Either make your finish louder, or your claps lower. Right now they're really different, and feels weird. I'd suggest making the volume on your finish a bit higher, since all your other hitsounds are at around the same volume.

1. 00:23:085 - Add a note here? Since it's a build-up from the part without drums to the part with drums, I think fits pretty well, and shouldn't make your diff too hard.
2. 00:30:497 (1) - Remove NC.
3. 00:36:144 (1) - ^ Both of these so that you're consistently making new combos.
4. 01:01:908 (1,2) - Swap new combo here, and remove from 01:04:379 (1)
5. 01:21:673 (2) - clap?
6. 01:24:497 (3) - ^
7. 01:56:614 (1) - Remove NC.
8. 02:00:497 (2) - This is really close to the hp bar. Are you able to put it a bit more down?
9. 02:07:908 (1) - ^
10. 02:20:614 (1) - ^
11. 02:24:850 (1) - ^
12. 02:31:908 (1) - ^
13. 02:43:202 (1) - ^
14. 02:47:438 (1) - ^
15. 02:54:497 (1) - ^
16. 02:58:732 (1) - ^
17. 03:03:535 - Spinner till 03:06:335?
    Sorry for the New combo things. They're to kind of keep consistency with earlier parts and/or itself.

1. You should map the beginning like Normal. The harder diff being shorter than the easier one is weird, and the map is short enough that mapping it shouldn't be a problem.
2. 00:37:555 (7) - Blanket a bit better
   

   472,148,37555,2,0,P|468:208|412:228|412:228|432:268,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:41:791 (1) - Remove NC.
4. 00:47:085 (3) - Clap?
5. 00:49:555 (2) - ^ on sliderend.
6. 00:53:085 (3,4) - This looks better imo: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/582534
7. 01:00:849 (2,3) - Swap the order of these two. Note then slider feels and sounds much better.
8. 01:07:908 (7) - Copy 01:07:202 (5), then ctrl+g+h+j?
9. 01:15:673 (3,4) - This jump is the biggest one in your entire map, and it's the only one too. I don't think such a big jump fits in a part of the song like this, so you should at least reduce the spacing a bit.
10. 01:49:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just for consistency, you could copy-paste 01:48:144 (1,2,3,4,5), then ctrl+shift+r and -160
11. 01:53:261 - I want a note here
12. 02:21:320 (1) - Move the not-red anchor point to 304;256
13. 02:29:085 (4,5) - Move the endpoints down 2 gridlvl4 for both sliders, so there isn't a tiny overlap.
14. 02:58:379 (4) - Move to 188;216
15. 03:01:935 (2,3) - The slower bpm makes these a bit confusing I think a slider would fit better tbh.

• --Common-- --Warning-- --Strongly recommendation-- --Emphasis--

1. Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn: - [Hard] : 2500 - [Zej's Normal] : 2496
2. tag Palette Sena Airi Sakuno Sakura and some stuff more what is about the song. so that more people can searched your map. :3

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 03:03:135 - strongly reconmmend that to set a spinner after this beat, since we can also heard there has a prolonged sound clearly, it's resonable you set a spinner here. and just end it at 03:06:335 .
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:02:967 (2) - there should not be a clap on that start from my heard. it is too strong and not fit the song i feel. maybe just remove it or decrease the volume of this hitsound?
   2. 01:04:379 (1) - sounds much better if you change the clap on that head to whistle, the clap make me feel over the music as above i have said..
   3. 01:05:791 (3) - same as above, also consistent with 01:02:967
   4. 02:26:614 (3) - the clap which on that tail sounds not very suitable for the beat.. i recommend that change the clap to a whistle. sounds good for me.
   5. 02:36:144 (4) - should be a finish with whistle or finish only.
   6. 02:49:202 (3) - oh. same as 02:26:614 here.

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:26:261 (1,2,3) - umm.. plays wired since the flow is a bit awkward.. try to ctrl+g (1) and then do the same thing on (2,3)? will have a jume but the flows are much better, also funnier to play imo.~
   2. 00:31:908 (5) - the shape is so hard for this soft bgm..i suggest to make the slider like this.
      picture

      
   3. 00:47:438 (5) - same as above, not fit the emotion of the song.
   4. 01:49:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad shape of curve. makke them more perfectly?
      picture

      
   5. 01:52:379 (5) - 1 grid left to make the flow more fluency.
   6. 02:08:967 (6) - stack it better plz~. i prefer x:335 y:168.
   7. 02:10:732 (3) - change the curve of slider to downward is more suitable for the whole flow and artistic imo.~
   8. 02:11:438 (4) - after above, the spacing of this circle is wrong, balance it.
   9. 02:44:967 (4) - you should move it to x:113 y:336, make the arc-shaped looks better.
   10. 02:54:497 (4) - why not add a repeat here.? you missed a downbeat at 02:54:849 obviously.. i can understand that you want to express the sound of piano, but sounds really wired for me.. or you can just add a circle after the slider at 02:54:849. either is better for now.
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:04:908 (2) - since you have used a new rhythm which is diffrent with other part, howabout to add whistles on that slider's head and tail? sounds empty for now because there has no space to set clap, so i think whistle is much more suitable~.
   2. 01:20:791 (3) - same thing as above, can ornament the music.
   3. 01:23:614 (3) - ^
   4. 01:35:438 (1,2) - sounds pretty if you add whistles on these two circles.
   5. 01:41:085 (1,2,7) - same as above, but also set one on 7 for the rise of the melody from piano.
   6. 01:48:144 (1) - same place suit a whistle here.~
   7. 01:49:908 (3) - ^
   8. 02:40:202 (5) - there has a light beat from piano, why not set a whistle here? so bored in refrain without whistle also xDD(just my opinion.`[/color]
   9. 02:42:144 (3) - if you followed above, also set whistle here.
   10. 02:44:967 (4) - ^
   11. 02:43:202 (6) - and that head.
   12. 02:48:850 (6) - whistle on that start also.~

CXu wrote:

Randomly modding from here.

My god, this song is gorgeous ;w;

Please take anything I say as a suggestion, and feel free to ignore my mod post~
[Zej's Normal]

1. 00:23:085 - Add a note here? Since it's a build-up from the part without drums to the part with drums, I think fits pretty well, and shouldn't make your diff too hard. | i just want it easy
2. 00:30:497 (1) - Remove NC.
3. 00:36:144 (1) - ^ Both of these so that you're consistently making new combos.
4. 01:01:908 (1,2) - Swap new combo here, and remove from 01:04:379 (1)
5. 01:21:673 (2) - clap?
6. 01:24:497 (3) - ^
7. 01:56:614 (1) - Remove NC.
8. 02:00:497 (2) - This is really close to the hp bar. Are you able to put it a bit more down?
9. 02:07:908 (1) - ^
10. 02:20:614 (1) - ^
11. 02:24:850 (1) - ^
12. 02:31:908 (1) - ^
13. 02:43:202 (1) - ^
14. 02:47:438 (1) - ^
15. 02:54:497 (1) - ^
16. 02:58:732 (1) - ^
17. 03:03:535 - Spinner till 03:06:335? | 03:03:135 - start and end 03:06:335 -
    Sorry for the New combo things. They're to kind of keep consistency with earlier parts and/or itself.
    I understand you, but NC i using same like easy, because diffculty too easy
    

Strawberry wrote:

amazing song..
modding here.~

• --Common-- --Warning-- --Strongly recommendation-- --Emphasis--

[ Normal]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 03:03:135 - strongly reconmmend that to set a spinner after this beat, since we can also heard there has a prolonged sound clearly, it's resonable you set a spinner here. and just end it at 03:06:335 .| ok. i will add
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:02:967 (2) - there should not be a clap on that start from my heard. it is too strong and not fit the song i feel. maybe just remove it or decrease the volume of this hitsound? | but. 01:02:967 - to 01:08:614 - it is emphasized, to changer tone
   2. 01:04:379 (1) - sounds much better if you change the clap on that head to whistle, the clap make me feel over the music as above i have said.. | because behind the is tone piano of music, should i add clap to harmonize the melody
   3. 01:05:791 (3) - same as above, also consistent with 01:02:967 | same ^
   4. 02:26:614 (3) - the clap which on that tail sounds not very suitable for the beat.. i recommend that change the clap to a whistle. sounds good for me. | yes, maybe, should i intentionally did it to get a tune in the space empty
   5. 02:36:144 (4) - should be a finish with whistle or finish only. | it is not an end or a start, or a tunes follow music
   6. 02:49:202 (3) - oh. same as 02:26:614 here.| same 02:26:614 -

Fix audio leadin
Well, that's it, GL!

Faust wrote:

Hi.

Now, I'm liking this piece of music a lot here.
But as much as I would like to give a straight okay to this, there are some silly glaring issues that have to be addressed.

To start with, please remember to ensure that your tags are consistent on both difficulties.

Zej's Normal:

This difficulty in it's entirety is basically unsnapped altogether. Resnap what needs to be resnapped.

Hard:

- 03:02:358 - Mind adding a note to complete the drumming? Although it's good as it is.

- 03:03:135 (1) - Unsnapped spinner.

- 03:06:335 - Unsnapped inherited timing section

Get to fixing these and call me back.

EDIT:

Re-checked. Adjusted artist to "BURTON" and removed commas from the tags.

Good to go.

Niva wrote:

...title should be Himawari no Youni (向日葵のように)? Like a Sunflower should be in tags I think...

Mapping overall looks fine though, feel free to call me back after the fix :3